[ ure mum gey]
Not really much to point out since the song's repetitive and your style is smooth already
Good luck!
- I think you should remove 00:19:642 (2) - and extend 00:18:785 (1) - cause there isn't any new syllabus to ask for something clickable. Yes, the background sound is still there, but it is apparent that on this section you're following the vocals whenever they are.
- 00:26:714 (1,2,3) - idk the triple feels kind of vague cause there isn't anything clear in the vocals to compensate for its use. I'd just remove 00:26:714 (1,2) - completely.
- 00:39:817 (1,2) - Like I've told you before, these two sliders feel out of place in contrast to the others. I would rotate them by around -15 degrees.
- Your use of NCs, generally in all the wub section, is pretty questionable. Example: 00:42:259 (1) - This is NCed, but then 00:42:259 (1,2,3,4) - all these are on the same combo, and then 00:43:306 (1,1) - followed by two consecutive NCs. And that while there's an SV change in every single slider. Feels needlessly inconsistent, I would suggest to go around the wub sections again and make them more consistent, except if you have a specific reasoning to leave them as they are.
- 00:42:521 (2) - 00:53:684 (3) - Why are those two different :thinking:
00:45:311 (2) - 00:56:474 (2) - ^
00:48:102 (2) - 00:59:265 (2) - ^
01:29:963 (3) - 01:38:335 (3) - ^
And then, out of sudden 01:38:335 (3) - 01:41:125 (2) - are the same. consistencyvro,,,,,,,
Etc. I think I made my point clear; be consistent with your rhythms when they're literally the same sounds! - 01:10:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't really like how you suddenly change to following vocals here. It's the only spot where you focus on vocals and it feels pretty disorientating in contrast to everything else.
- 04:10:503 (1) - Feels pretty empty. I'd replace it with a circle at the front, and followed with a slider so it transitions better to 04:10:932 (1) - .
- 04:24:218 (1) - ^
Not really much to point out since the song's repetitive and your style is smooth already
Good luck!