forum

S3RL - Candy (feat. Sara)

posted
Total Posts
47
show more
Icekalt
hey ~

Axon wrote:

02:05:482 (6) remember that new players playing easies are just learning how sliders word and weird shapes like these can be confusing.made this easier to see
03:09:939 (3,4) here as well you can clearly see the ahape what you should follow
thanks for small mod ~
hergtwgb
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 188482
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11653,22624,25367,28110,30853,55539,66510,77482,88453,99424,115882,121367,124110,126853,129596,133710,135082,137824,140567,144682,155653,166624,177596,188567,199539
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Candy (feat. Sara)
TitleUnicode:Candy (feat. Sara)
Artist:S3RL
ArtistUnicode:S3RL
Creator:Sakurauchi Riko
Version:Icekalt's Easy
Source:
Tags:phyloukz akitoshi icekalt
BeatmapID:1364698
BeatmapSetID:643185

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2.5
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"richtiges bild.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,34967,42956
2,110252,119927
2,144682,154042
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
682,342.857142857143,4,2,1,50,1,0
88453,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
98053,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
99424,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
109024,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
166624,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
176224,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
177596,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
185824,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
188567,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
199539,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
200224,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
207767,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 237,197,245
Combo2 : 194,162,131
Combo3 : 173,86,160
Combo4 : 151,131,231

[HitObjects]
313,207,11653,6,0,P|260:157|252:65,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,12,12682,1,2,0:0:0:0:
399,5,13024,2,0,P|452:55|460:147,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,310,14396,2,0,P|347:357|265:338,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,269,15424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
175,201,15767,2,0,P|97:191|33:236,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,322,17139,6,0,B|262:235|262:235|262:177,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,102,18167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
193,47,18510,2,0,P|126:74|88:154,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,189,19882,2,0,B|335:181|335:181|362:190|362:190|426:148,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,70,20910,1,2,0:0:0:0:
341,16,21253,2,0,B|268:24|268:24|241:15|241:15|177:57,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,222,22624,6,0,P|236:285|325:300,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,237,23653,1,0,1:0:0:0:
349,152,23996,2,0,P|310:169|284:210,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,60,25367,2,0,P|120:38|39:79,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
42,156,26396,1,0,1:0:0:0:
106,217,26739,2,0,P|127:180|124:132,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,336,28110,6,0,L|398:330,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,254,29139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
369,201,29482,2,0,L|289:198,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,82,30853,2,0,L|75:88,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,164,31882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
104,217,32225,2,0,L|184:220,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44396,12,0,49710,1:0:0:0:
256,192,50053,12,0,54167,3:0:0:0:
210,252,55539,6,0,L|30:214,2,160,0|2|2,1:0|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
297,260,57253,1,2,1:2:0:0:
384,247,57596,2,0,L|479:213,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
455,131,58282,2,0,P|414:91|297:54,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
459,221,59996,1,2,1:2:0:0:
456,308,60339,2,0,P|424:336|374:349,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
305,318,61024,6,0,B|228:281|228:281|220:246|195:213,2,160,0|2|2,1:0|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
377,264,62739,1,2,1:2:0:0:
409,182,63082,2,0,L|410:87,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
340,47,63767,2,0,B|301:10|301:10|181:17,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
328,134,65482,1,2,0:2:0:0:
256,185,65824,2,0,L|161:174,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,197,66510,6,0,P|52:240|69:337,2,160,0|2|2,1:0|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
152,258,68224,1,2,1:2:0:0:
230,298,68567,2,0,P|268:306|307:297,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
352,221,69253,2,0,P|395:284|372:358,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
264,211,70967,1,2,1:2:0:0:
176,232,71310,2,0,P|175:193|192:157,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
273,122,71996,6,0,L|366:107,1,80,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
349,21,72682,2,0,L|256:6,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
186,34,73367,2,0,P|122:80|112:191,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
82,241,74396,1,2,1:2:0:0:
146,300,74739,6,0,B|174:347|174:347|201:350|201:350|234:375|288:369,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
170,215,76453,1,2,0:2:0:0:
227,148,76796,2,0,L|311:115,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,110,77482,6,0,L|434:276,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
343,274,78510,1,0,1:0:0:0:
257,254,78853,2,0,L|215:99,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
389,110,80224,6,0,P|470:161|492:236,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
433,285,81253,1,0,1:0:0:0:
359,236,81596,2,0,P|285:215|200:238,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82967,12,2,87082,3:2:0:0:
214,68,88453,6,0,P|168:195|207:302,1,240,4|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
269,342,89824,2,0,L|378:368,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
354,272,90510,2,0,L|436:250,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
485,181,91196,2,0,B|469:134|497:88|497:88|413:121|350:76,1,240,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
278,45,92567,2,0,P|224:39|184:52,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
199,133,93253,2,0,P|149:154|121:186,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
94,252,93939,6,0,B|137:323|137:323|218:297|303:323,1,240,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
377,339,95310,2,0,L|470:336,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
428,252,95996,2,0,L|348:254,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
282,195,96682,2,0,P|246:155|235:110,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
280,54,97367,2,0,P|316:94|327:139,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
372,192,98053,2,0,P|305:279|234:270,1,160,8|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
115,178,99424,6,0,B|137:143|181:137|181:137|231:172|291:160|324:117,1,240,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
349,33,100796,2,0,P|401:25|451:34,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
440,115,101482,2,0,P|479:149|504:193,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
504,259,102167,2,0,B|424:266|424:266|362:308|362:308|259:316,1,240,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
255,229,103539,2,0,L|346:223,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
414,177,104224,2,0,L|505:171,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
504,259,104910,6,0,P|464:323|303:358,1,240,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
246,301,106282,2,0,P|192:292|151:304,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
96,347,106967,2,0,P|56:352|17:342,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
1,255,107653,2,0,L|28:166,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
104,141,108339,2,0,L|127:217,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
167,295,109024,6,0,P|217:316|194:198,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,323,121367,6,0,P|132:352|222:315,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,247,122396,1,0,1:0:0:0:
305,173,122739,2,0,P|375:145|462:159,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,332,124110,2,0,P|385:343|310:320,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,247,125138,1,0,1:0:0:0:
237,160,125482,2,0,B|228:125|208:110|208:110|252:83|323:89,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
467,20,126853,6,0,B|503:59|503:59|495:168,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,235,127882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
477,314,128224,2,0,P|421:320|352:239,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,88,129596,2,0,P|202:62|123:93,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,163,130624,1,0,1:0:0:0:
101,250,130967,2,0,B|127:275|167:271|167:271|163:294|163:294|207:290|234:311,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,35,133710,6,0,L|217:38,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,130,135082,2,0,P|383:189|358:295,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,338,136110,1,0,1:0:0:0:
215,369,136453,2,0,P|193:310|218:204,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,130,137824,6,0,B|394:97|445:95|445:95|480:63|480:27,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,4,138853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,39,139196,2,0,B|272:54|248:100|248:100|204:118|172:103,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,198,140567,6,0,P|32:268|101:338,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,308,141596,1,0,1:0:0:0:
254,270,141939,2,0,P|224:235|110:247,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,155482,12,0,160796,1:0:0:0:
256,192,161139,12,0,165253,3:0:0:0:
406,32,166624,6,0,L|521:49,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
453,125,167310,2,0,L|338:142,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,184,167996,2,0,P|323:241|370:257,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
295,96,169024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,17,169367,2,0,L|158:34,1,80,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
133,109,170053,2,0,L|211:122,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,96,170739,2,0,P|327:69|342:9,2,80,0|0|2,1:0|1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
146,190,172110,6,0,L|173:285,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
254,285,172796,2,0,L|275:208,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,135,173482,2,0,P|185:107|169:67,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
313,131,174510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,106,174853,6,0,P|421:168|389:273,1,160,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
343,324,175882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
258,347,176224,6,0,P|234:285|266:180,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
313,131,177253,1,0,1:0:0:0:
251,68,177596,6,0,L|168:52,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
153,139,178282,2,0,L|75:154,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,234,178967,2,0,P|37:280|55:327,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
126,232,179996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,269,180339,2,0,L|302:279,1,80,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
325,199,181024,2,0,L|405:190,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,240,181710,6,0,P|487:303|470:343,2,80,0|0|2,1:0|1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
365,102,183082,6,0,L|267:93,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,35,183767,2,0,L|122:44,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,103,184453,2,0,P|36:139|19:182,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
160,127,185482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,185824,12,8,187196,3:0:0:0:
114,358,188567,6,0,P|81:292|96:203,1,160,6|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
176,179,189596,1,0,1:0:0:0:
261,158,189939,2,0,B|293:138|293:138|285:89|285:89|296:47|269:8,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
106,63,191310,2,0,B|88:103|88:103|146:140|179:183,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
231,246,192339,1,0,1:0:0:0:
311,281,192682,2,0,P|257:330|170:307,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
143,139,194053,6,0,P|71:171|-5:131,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
72,85,195082,1,0,1:0:0:0:
155,53,195424,2,0,P|213:91|216:184,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
109,312,196796,2,0,L|288:261,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
300,188,197824,1,0,1:0:0:0:
339,109,198167,2,0,L|492:152,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
166,20,200224,6,0,L|245:9,1,80,6|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
330,32,200910,2,0,P|312:83|323:127,2,80,2|0|2,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
483,118,202282,2,0,P|460:193|387:236,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
313,198,203310,1,0,1:0:0:0:
254,132,203653,2,0,P|292:111|331:112,2,80,2|0|2,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
177,290,205024,6,0,P|259:316|339:280,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
393,235,206053,1,0,1:0:0:0:
472,199,206396,2,0,P|475:264|463:291,2,80,2|0|2,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,207767,12,2,208796,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Sakurauchi Riko

Axon wrote:

neat map

but in order for it to be rankable you need to recompress the mp3 down to 192kbps at most. yes im aware of that, still dunno how to make smaller or where to find lower quality ver of the mp3 - and lazyyy ><


Extra
00:10:453 (1) - This spinner isn't following any distinct sounds. well i do hear a fading sound start at 00:10:453 - and theres also a vocal - so imo it is appropriate spinner. will see what other say
01:00:339 (7) messy overlaps with 00:59:653 (1,2,3,4,5) and is hard to read they are intended overlaps, i dont think it is really hard to read, but if then i can nerf the overlaps. for now i overlapped 01:00:167 (6,8) - aswell to fit to the pattern. i tihnk that already improves the pattern itself and so the readability
01:00:682 (9) you use an extended slider here to represent the vocal (i assume), but you use a 1/2 slider to represent the same sound 01:03:424 (9) here true
01:49:710 (7,8) hard to read because it over laps with the stream yeah maybe .. but idk how to make this pattern else - i wanna keep the sharp angle short jumps and the DS's i chose here
01:57:939 (4,5) this sharp flow is extremely uncomfortable from what ive experienced and from what i saw in testplays this spot doesnt make any issues, in fact you usually follow the reverse slider with the whole circle that leads right to the next object. i will keep this in mind for future opinions for sure
02:01:110 (4) this slider is literally following the singer taking a breath. it really makes no sense rhythm-wise. but vocals are part of the song, and keeping this blank feels really weird imo. the breath starts clearly at the blue tick without being offbeat - so i see no reason not to use this as an advantage
02:24:682 (1,2) the rhythm here is 1/2 not 1/1 i rather wanna map the vocal here and keep the rhythm very simple because the sounds are soooooo quiet. i tihnk mapping this quiet sections itself is questionable, ill see

Akitoshi's Insane
dude nice

no issues other than what aimod pointed out. i fix that for aki since its only snap issue. dont kill me aki plz

Hard
00:22:110 (1,2) I suggest making these two stack to fit the rhythm better for a hard difficulty. generally i'd agree but i already use a stacking pattern in 02:02:396 (4,5) - this section with 1/1 rhythm. i tihnk using stacks with different rhythm is awkward
02:47:567 (1,2) these types of rhythms in a hard difficulty can be extremely confusing for newer players. yes true, but i dont see why this should not work even if its a hard. maybe i do a slider instead but i will gain more opinions before change

Normal
nothing

really love this set, good luck on rank. and have a star :3
thank you for modding !! and thank you for your support :) much appreciated w
Axon
i could edit the kbps in audacity if you'd like :)
Topic Starter
Sakurauchi Riko
ah audacity is what its called ! i changed it by myself, i just hadn't a program to do so yet
thank you for the offer :D mp3 is now rankable (should be)
blobdash
From my queue!

NSFW Lyrics Kappa

[General]

Hmmm... wtf

[Icekalt's Easy]

You should NC on the downbeat and not every 2 downbeats.
01:28:453 (1) - Make that a better shape.
02:46:624 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Where are the NCs DansGame
03:20:910 (2,5) - Stack them.

[Normal]

Same for the NCs, NC on every downbeat instead of every 2 downbeats.
00:44:567 (1,2) - Avoid overlaps when you only overlap once.

[Hard]

02:47:567 (1,2) - The doubles on this kiai are really hard to sightread for this level of difficulty. Use a 1/4 slider instead.

[Akitoshi's Insane]

03:27:767 (1) - You could map the vocal at the end.

[Extra]

Slow sliders like those at the beginning should be signalized by something different than usual : a combo color, a special shape / always the same shape, etc
00:26:396 (2,4) - (for example these two does not have anything in common except for their rythm)
00:28:110 (1) - These are already signalized, so why not doing it for the other less slow sliders?

Take a mod or two and call BNs.

Axon wrote:

i could edit the kbps in audacity if you'd like :)
EDIT.
No, this is not how it's called, editing is changing portion of a file. Changing the bitrate of an mp3 file is reencoding using a LOWER bitrate.
sorry i couldn't hold myself, i encode a lot of things xd

also, talking about that, send me the high quality mp3 in pm and i'll do it properly because it seems you did it wrong from the screen i linked in general section
Icekalt

FruityEnLoops wrote:

[Icekalt's Easy]

You should NC on the downbeat and not every 2 downbeats. i thinink riko will tell you~ ^^
01:28:453 (1) - Make that a better shape. did
02:46:624 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Where are the NCs DansGame oups
03:20:910 (2,5) - Stack them. fixed
Thanks for your mod ^^

ik,ujmnhgbtfv
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 188482
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11653,22624,25367,28110,30853,55539,66510,77482,88453,99424,115882,121367,124110,126853,129596,133710,135082,137824,140567,144682,155653,166624,177596,188567,199539
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Candy (feat. Sara)
TitleUnicode:Candy (feat. Sara)
Artist:S3RL
ArtistUnicode:S3RL
Creator:Sakurauchi Riko
Version:Icekalt's Easy
Source:
Tags:phyloukz akitoshi icekalt
BeatmapID:1364698
BeatmapSetID:643185

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2.5
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"richtiges bild.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,34967,42956
2,110252,119927
2,144682,154042
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
682,342.857142857143,4,2,1,50,1,0
88453,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
98053,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
99424,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
109024,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
166624,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
176224,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
177596,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
185824,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
188567,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
199539,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
200224,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
207767,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 237,197,245
Combo2 : 194,162,131
Combo3 : 173,86,160
Combo4 : 151,131,231

[HitObjects]
313,207,11653,6,0,P|260:157|252:65,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,12,12682,1,2,0:0:0:0:
399,5,13024,2,0,P|452:55|460:147,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,310,14396,2,0,P|347:357|265:338,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,269,15424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
175,201,15767,2,0,P|97:191|33:236,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,322,17139,6,0,B|262:235|262:235|262:177,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,102,18167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
193,47,18510,2,0,P|126:74|88:154,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,189,19882,2,0,B|335:181|335:181|362:190|362:190|426:148,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,70,20910,1,2,0:0:0:0:
341,16,21253,2,0,B|268:24|268:24|241:15|241:15|177:57,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,222,22624,6,0,P|236:285|325:300,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,237,23653,1,0,1:0:0:0:
349,152,23996,2,0,P|310:169|284:210,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,60,25367,2,0,P|120:38|39:79,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
42,156,26396,1,0,1:0:0:0:
106,217,26739,2,0,P|127:180|124:132,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,336,28110,6,0,L|398:330,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,254,29139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
369,201,29482,2,0,L|289:198,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,82,30853,2,0,L|75:88,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,164,31882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
104,217,32225,2,0,L|184:220,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44396,12,0,49710,1:0:0:0:
256,192,50053,12,0,54167,3:0:0:0:
210,252,55539,6,0,L|30:214,2,160,0|2|2,1:0|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
297,260,57253,1,2,1:2:0:0:
384,247,57596,2,0,L|479:213,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
455,131,58282,2,0,P|414:91|297:54,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
459,221,59996,1,2,1:2:0:0:
456,308,60339,2,0,P|424:336|374:349,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
305,318,61024,6,0,B|228:281|228:281|220:246|195:213,2,160,0|2|2,1:0|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
377,264,62739,1,2,1:2:0:0:
409,182,63082,2,0,L|410:87,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
340,47,63767,2,0,B|301:10|301:10|181:17,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
328,134,65482,1,2,0:2:0:0:
256,185,65824,2,0,L|161:174,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,197,66510,6,0,P|52:240|69:337,2,160,0|2|2,1:0|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
152,258,68224,1,2,1:2:0:0:
230,298,68567,2,0,P|268:306|307:297,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
352,221,69253,2,0,P|395:284|372:358,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
264,211,70967,1,2,1:2:0:0:
176,232,71310,2,0,P|175:193|192:157,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
273,122,71996,6,0,L|366:107,1,80,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
349,21,72682,2,0,L|256:6,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
186,34,73367,2,0,P|122:80|112:191,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
82,241,74396,1,2,1:2:0:0:
146,300,74739,6,0,B|174:347|174:347|201:350|201:350|234:375|288:369,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
170,215,76453,1,2,0:2:0:0:
227,148,76796,2,0,L|311:115,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,110,77482,6,0,L|434:276,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
343,274,78510,1,0,1:0:0:0:
257,254,78853,2,0,L|215:99,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
389,110,80224,6,0,P|470:161|492:236,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
433,285,81253,1,0,1:0:0:0:
359,236,81596,2,0,P|285:215|200:238,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82967,12,2,87082,3:2:0:0:
201,52,88453,6,0,B|179:113|206:168|206:168|184:217|184:217|221:230|237:268,1,240,4|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
268,340,89824,2,0,L|377:366,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
356,270,90510,2,0,L|438:248,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
487,179,91196,2,0,B|471:132|499:86|499:86|415:119|352:74,1,240,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
280,45,92567,2,0,P|226:39|186:52,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
197,133,93253,2,0,P|147:154|119:186,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
93,252,93939,6,0,B|136:323|136:323|217:297|302:323,1,240,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
376,339,95310,2,0,L|469:336,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
431,251,95996,2,0,L|351:253,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
284,195,96682,2,0,P|248:155|237:110,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
282,54,97367,2,0,P|318:94|329:139,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
373,192,98053,2,0,P|306:279|235:270,1,160,8|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
115,178,99424,6,0,B|137:143|181:137|181:137|231:172|291:160|324:117,1,240,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
349,33,100796,2,0,P|401:25|451:34,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
440,115,101482,2,0,P|479:149|504:193,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
504,259,102167,2,0,B|424:266|424:266|362:308|362:308|259:316,1,240,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
255,229,103539,2,0,L|346:223,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
414,177,104224,2,0,L|505:171,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
504,259,104910,6,0,P|464:323|303:358,1,240,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
246,301,106282,2,0,P|192:292|151:304,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
96,347,106967,2,0,P|56:352|17:342,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
1,255,107653,2,0,L|28:166,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
104,141,108339,2,0,L|127:217,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
167,295,109024,6,0,P|217:316|194:198,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,323,121367,6,0,P|132:352|222:315,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,247,122396,1,0,1:0:0:0:
305,173,122739,2,0,P|375:145|462:159,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,332,124110,2,0,P|385:343|310:320,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,247,125138,1,0,1:0:0:0:
237,160,125482,2,0,B|228:125|208:110|208:110|252:83|323:89,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
467,20,126853,6,0,B|503:59|503:59|495:168,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,235,127882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
477,314,128224,2,0,P|421:320|352:239,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,88,129596,2,0,P|202:62|123:93,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,163,130624,1,0,1:0:0:0:
101,250,130967,2,0,B|127:275|167:271|167:271|163:294|163:294|207:290|234:311,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,35,133710,6,0,L|217:38,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,130,135082,2,0,P|383:189|358:295,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,338,136110,1,0,1:0:0:0:
215,369,136453,2,0,P|193:310|218:204,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,130,137824,6,0,B|394:97|445:95|445:95|480:63|480:27,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,4,138853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,39,139196,2,0,B|272:54|248:100|248:100|204:118|172:103,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,198,140567,6,0,P|32:268|101:338,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,308,141596,1,0,1:0:0:0:
254,270,141939,2,0,P|224:235|110:247,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,155482,12,0,160796,1:0:0:0:
256,192,161139,12,0,165253,3:0:0:0:
406,32,166624,6,0,L|521:49,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
453,125,167310,2,0,L|338:142,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,184,167996,2,0,P|323:241|370:257,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
295,96,169024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,17,169367,6,0,L|158:34,1,80,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
133,109,170053,2,0,L|211:122,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,96,170739,2,0,P|327:69|342:9,2,80,0|0|2,1:0|1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
146,190,172110,6,0,L|173:285,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
254,285,172796,2,0,L|275:208,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,135,173482,2,0,P|185:107|169:67,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
313,131,174510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,106,174853,6,0,P|421:168|389:273,1,160,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
343,324,175882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
258,347,176224,2,0,P|234:285|266:180,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
313,131,177253,1,0,1:0:0:0:
251,68,177596,6,0,L|168:52,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
153,139,178282,2,0,L|75:154,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,234,178967,2,0,P|37:280|55:327,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
126,232,179996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,269,180339,6,0,L|302:279,1,80,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
325,199,181024,2,0,L|405:190,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,240,181710,2,0,P|487:303|470:343,2,80,0|0|2,1:0|1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
365,102,183082,6,0,L|267:93,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,35,183767,2,0,L|122:44,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,103,184453,2,0,P|36:139|19:182,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
160,127,185482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,185824,12,8,187196,3:0:0:0:
114,358,188567,6,0,P|81:292|96:203,1,160,6|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
176,179,189596,1,0,1:0:0:0:
261,158,189939,2,0,B|293:138|293:138|285:89|285:89|296:47|269:8,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
106,63,191310,2,0,B|88:103|88:103|146:140|179:183,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
231,246,192339,1,0,1:0:0:0:
311,281,192682,2,0,P|257:330|170:307,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
143,139,194053,6,0,P|71:171|-5:131,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
72,85,195082,1,0,1:0:0:0:
155,53,195424,2,0,P|213:91|216:184,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
109,312,196796,2,0,L|288:261,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
300,188,197824,1,0,1:0:0:0:
339,109,198167,2,0,L|492:152,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
175,23,200224,6,0,L|254:12,1,80,6|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,36,200910,2,0,P|318:87|326:122,2,80,2|0|2,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
481,134,202282,2,0,P|454:207|380:246,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
309,199,203310,1,0,1:0:0:0:
249,133,203653,2,0,P|287:112|326:113,2,80,2|0|2,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
177,290,205024,6,0,P|259:316|339:280,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
393,235,206053,1,0,1:0:0:0:
472,199,206396,2,0,P|475:264|463:291,2,80,2|0|2,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,207767,12,2,208796,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Sakurauchi Riko

FruityEnLoops wrote:

From my queue!

NSFW Lyrics Kappa

[General]

Hmmm... wtf i dont really know what to do with this xD


[Normal]

Same for the NCs, NC on every downbeat instead of every 2 downbeats. every 2nd downbeat in normal is very common. also larger combo up to 10 is easier for the player than combos to 3. same goes for the Easy, in easy's it is common to youse NC's even every 4th downbeat. short combos in low diffs are not straightforward
00:44:567 (1,2) - Avoid overlaps when you only overlap once. true i guess

[Hard]

02:47:567 (1,2) - The doubles on this kiai are really hard to sightread for this level of difficulty. Use a 1/4 slider instead. the player should get familiar with 1/4 rhythm, yes this is hard rhythm but i dont think it is inappropriate for hard. will most likely see what experienced modder/mapper will say


[Extra]

Slow sliders like those at the beginning should be signalized by something different than usual : a combo color, a special shape / always the same shape, etc
00:26:396 (2,4) - (for example these two does not have anything in common except for their rythm) since this section starts with an indicated slow slider the player can expect sv changes in this section
00:28:110 (1) - These are already signalized, so why not doing it for the other less slow sliders? i really dont wanna have a NC on every note, that also has a bad aesthetic imo. i think the less slow sliders are expectable, even if it may needs one retry.

Take a mod or two and call BNs.

Axon wrote:

i could edit the kbps in audacity if you'd like :)
EDIT.
No, this is not how it's called, editing is changing portion of a file. Changing the bitrate of an mp3 file is reencoding using a LOWER bitrate.
sorry i couldn't hold myself, i encode a lot of things xd

also, talking about that, send me the high quality mp3 in pm and i'll do it properly because it seems you did it wrong from the screen i linked in general section oki sounds cool
thanks for the mod ! :)
RikiH_
yo, m4m

General

  1. 00:54:167 - This would be a nice place to add a 1/4 kiai fountain. Also 02:45:253 - works just fine
Extra

  1. 01:16:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uhm, the sound here is weird. I think a "mixed" stream ( like 00:53:824 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) would express the music in a better way, instead of a curved one
  2. 01:18:167 (4,5) - I think this is a mistake and these notes are meant to be stacked
  3. 01:23:139 (1,2) - Uh, Idk about these sliders honestly... After these you completely ignored the 1/8 sounds, which is really weird in my opinion. It's kinda like expecting a big drop in the song, and then nothing happens. I would just map this section normally :)
  4. 01:30:853 (9) - I think it's much better if this slider ends 1/4 later 01:33:596 (9) - like this
    Same goes for 01:41:824 (9) - and the following ones in these 2 kiai sections. Somewhere you used 1/2, while somewhere else you used 3/4, why? I can't comprehend your pattern, really
  5. 02:01:110 (4) - I think you should try to move this slider far away, near the following one (look at the screen, I put it randomly, it's just an idea). This will improve readibility imo, since this starts on a blue tick
  6. 02:35:482 (1,2) - I think the NC should be on 2. It's better to leave that drum out and have consistency with the following patterns imo
  7. 03:17:482 (4,5) - Fix stack :p
Akitoshi's Insane

  1. 02:00:853 (6,1) - This stack is broken, is it intentional? If not, just fix it :)
  2. 02:23:310 - Choose one of the following: 1) Add a note here 2) Make the slider finish here (see Extra diff) 3) Let the break start here
  3. 02:35:482 - Such a strong drum here, maybe add a note?
  4. 03:04:282 (1,2) - Not sure about these sliders that start on the red ticks honestly. They just sound weird because they are the only ones in the entire map... If I were you I'd just use note+1/2 slider+note here
Hard

  1. 03:30:167 - Silence slidertail
  2. I just can't find anything wrong here, sorry. Player are just going to hate you for those doublets lol
Normal

  1. 00:22:110 - I feel like this strong drum should be clickable
  2. 02:08:910 (6,1) - Fix blanket? /runs
Icekalt's Easy

  1. 01:48:682 - You can create a better triangle here, see the screenshot
  2. 01:50:396 - Start the break here?
  3. 03:09:939 (3,4) - Uh, I just don't like these two sliders honestly :) they look a bit ugly and messy, but it's just a personal thing
  4. 03:27:767 (1) - Not entirely sure but this spinner may be too short for an easy diff, consider replacing it with a slider
____

This map is really good, hope you guys the best ;)
I can't shoot a star because I have like 3 kds left and I'd like to have some more, sorry!
Icekalt

RikiH_ wrote:

Icekalt's Easy

01:48:682 - You can create a better triangle here, see the screenshot oups
www
01:50:396 - Start the break here? yea
03:09:939 (3,4) - Uh, I just don't like these two sliders honestly :) they look a bit ugly and messy, but it's just a personal thing did the m a bit "unmessier"
03:27:767 (1) - Not entirely sure but this spinner may be too short for an easy diff, consider replacing it with a slider the bot can spin 4k there so i guess its ok :ok_hand:
Thanks for the mod^^
gsdf
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 188482
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11653,22624,25367,28110,30853,55539,66510,77482,88453,99424,115882,121367,124110,126853,129596,133710,135082,137824,140567,144682,155653,166624,177596,188567,199539
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Candy (feat. Sara)
TitleUnicode:Candy (feat. Sara)
Artist:S3RL
ArtistUnicode:S3RL
Creator:Sakurauchi Riko
Version:Icekalt's Easy
Source:
Tags:phyloukz akitoshi icekalt
BeatmapID:1364698
BeatmapSetID:643185

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2.5
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"richtiges bild.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,34967,42956
2,110396,119927
2,144682,154042
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
682,342.857142857143,4,2,1,50,1,0
88453,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
98053,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
99424,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
109024,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
166624,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
176224,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
177596,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
185824,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
188567,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
199539,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
200224,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
207767,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 237,197,245
Combo2 : 194,162,131
Combo3 : 173,86,160
Combo4 : 151,131,231

[HitObjects]
313,207,11653,6,0,P|260:157|252:65,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,12,12682,1,2,0:0:0:0:
399,5,13024,2,0,P|452:55|460:147,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,310,14396,2,0,P|347:357|265:338,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,269,15424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
175,201,15767,2,0,P|97:191|33:236,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,322,17139,6,0,B|262:235|262:235|262:177,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,102,18167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
193,47,18510,2,0,P|126:74|88:154,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,189,19882,2,0,B|335:181|335:181|362:190|362:190|426:148,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,70,20910,1,2,0:0:0:0:
341,16,21253,2,0,B|268:24|268:24|241:15|241:15|177:57,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,222,22624,6,0,P|236:285|325:300,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,237,23653,1,0,1:0:0:0:
349,152,23996,2,0,P|310:169|284:210,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,60,25367,2,0,P|120:38|39:79,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
42,156,26396,1,0,1:0:0:0:
106,217,26739,2,0,P|127:180|124:132,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,336,28110,6,0,L|398:330,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,254,29139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
369,201,29482,2,0,L|289:198,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,82,30853,2,0,L|75:88,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,164,31882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
104,217,32225,2,0,L|184:220,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44396,12,0,49710,1:0:0:0:
256,192,50053,12,0,54167,3:0:0:0:
210,252,55539,6,0,L|30:214,2,160,0|2|2,1:0|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
297,260,57253,1,2,1:2:0:0:
384,247,57596,2,0,L|479:213,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
455,131,58282,2,0,P|414:91|297:54,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
459,221,59996,1,2,1:2:0:0:
456,308,60339,2,0,P|424:336|374:349,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
305,318,61024,6,0,B|228:281|228:281|220:246|195:213,2,160,0|2|2,1:0|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
377,264,62739,1,2,1:2:0:0:
409,182,63082,2,0,L|410:87,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
340,47,63767,2,0,B|301:10|301:10|181:17,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
328,134,65482,1,2,0:2:0:0:
256,185,65824,2,0,L|161:174,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,197,66510,6,0,P|52:240|69:337,2,160,0|2|2,1:0|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
152,258,68224,1,2,1:2:0:0:
230,298,68567,2,0,P|268:306|307:297,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
352,221,69253,2,0,P|395:284|372:358,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
264,211,70967,1,2,1:2:0:0:
176,232,71310,2,0,P|175:193|192:157,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
273,122,71996,6,0,L|366:107,1,80,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
349,21,72682,2,0,L|256:6,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
186,34,73367,2,0,P|122:80|112:191,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
82,241,74396,1,2,1:2:0:0:
146,300,74739,6,0,B|174:347|174:347|201:350|201:350|234:375|288:369,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
170,215,76453,1,2,0:2:0:0:
227,148,76796,2,0,L|311:115,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,110,77482,6,0,L|434:276,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
343,274,78510,1,0,1:0:0:0:
257,254,78853,2,0,L|215:99,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
389,110,80224,6,0,P|470:161|492:236,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
433,285,81253,1,0,1:0:0:0:
359,236,81596,2,0,P|285:215|200:238,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82967,12,2,87082,3:2:0:0:
201,52,88453,6,0,B|179:113|206:168|206:168|184:217|184:217|221:230|237:268,1,240,4|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
268,340,89824,2,0,L|377:366,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
356,270,90510,2,0,L|438:248,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
487,179,91196,2,0,B|471:132|499:86|499:86|415:119|352:74,1,240,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
280,45,92567,2,0,P|226:39|186:52,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
197,133,93253,2,0,P|147:154|119:186,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
93,252,93939,6,0,B|136:323|136:323|217:297|302:323,1,240,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
376,339,95310,2,0,L|469:336,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
431,251,95996,2,0,L|351:253,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
284,195,96682,2,0,P|248:155|237:110,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
282,54,97367,2,0,P|318:94|329:139,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
373,192,98053,2,0,P|306:279|235:270,1,160,8|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
115,178,99424,6,0,B|137:143|181:137|181:137|231:172|291:160|324:117,1,240,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
349,33,100796,2,0,P|401:25|451:34,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
440,115,101482,2,0,P|479:149|504:193,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
504,259,102167,2,0,B|424:266|424:266|362:308|362:308|259:316,1,240,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
255,229,103539,2,0,L|346:223,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
414,177,104224,2,0,L|505:171,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
504,259,104910,6,0,P|464:323|303:358,1,240,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
246,301,106282,2,0,P|192:292|151:304,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
96,347,106967,2,0,P|56:352|17:342,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
1,255,107653,2,0,L|28:166,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
104,141,108339,2,0,L|127:217,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
163,297,109024,6,0,P|213:318|190:200,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,323,121367,6,0,P|132:352|222:315,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,247,122396,1,0,1:0:0:0:
305,173,122739,2,0,P|375:145|462:159,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,332,124110,2,0,P|385:343|310:320,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,247,125138,1,0,1:0:0:0:
237,160,125482,2,0,B|228:125|208:110|208:110|252:83|323:89,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
467,20,126853,6,0,B|503:59|503:59|495:168,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,235,127882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
477,314,128224,2,0,P|421:320|352:239,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,88,129596,2,0,P|202:62|123:93,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,163,130624,1,0,1:0:0:0:
101,250,130967,2,0,B|127:275|167:271|167:271|163:294|163:294|207:290|234:311,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,35,133710,6,0,L|217:38,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,130,135082,2,0,P|383:189|358:295,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,338,136110,1,0,1:0:0:0:
215,369,136453,2,0,P|193:310|218:204,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,130,137824,6,0,B|394:97|445:95|445:95|480:63|480:27,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,4,138853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,39,139196,2,0,B|272:54|248:100|248:100|204:118|172:103,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,198,140567,6,0,P|32:268|101:338,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,308,141596,1,0,1:0:0:0:
254,270,141939,2,0,P|224:235|110:247,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,155482,12,0,160796,1:0:0:0:
256,192,161139,12,0,165253,3:0:0:0:
406,32,166624,6,0,L|521:49,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
453,125,167310,2,0,L|338:142,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,184,167996,2,0,P|323:241|370:257,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
295,96,169024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,17,169367,6,0,L|158:34,1,80,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
133,109,170053,2,0,L|211:122,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,96,170739,2,0,P|327:69|342:9,2,80,0|0|2,1:0|1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
146,190,172110,6,0,L|173:285,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
254,285,172796,2,0,L|275:208,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,135,173482,2,0,P|185:107|169:67,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
313,131,174510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,106,174853,6,0,P|421:168|389:273,1,160,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
343,324,175882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
258,347,176224,2,0,P|234:285|266:180,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
313,131,177253,1,0,1:0:0:0:
251,68,177596,6,0,L|168:52,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
153,139,178282,2,0,L|75:154,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,234,178967,2,0,P|37:280|55:327,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
126,232,179996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,269,180339,6,0,L|302:279,1,80,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
325,199,181024,2,0,L|405:190,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,240,181710,2,0,P|487:303|470:343,2,80,0|0|2,1:0|1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
365,102,183082,6,0,L|267:93,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,35,183767,2,0,L|122:44,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,103,184453,2,0,P|36:139|19:182,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
160,127,185482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,185824,12,8,187196,3:0:0:0:
114,358,188567,6,0,P|81:292|96:203,1,160,6|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
176,179,189596,1,0,1:0:0:0:
261,158,189939,2,0,B|293:138|293:138|296:47|269:8,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
104,60,191310,2,0,B|86:100|86:100|144:137|177:180,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
231,246,192339,1,0,1:0:0:0:
312,280,192682,2,0,P|258:329|171:306,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
143,140,194053,6,0,P|71:172|-5:132,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
73,86,195082,1,0,1:0:0:0:
156,54,195424,2,0,P|214:92|217:185,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
108,312,196796,2,0,L|287:261,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
300,188,197824,1,0,1:0:0:0:
338,109,198167,2,0,L|491:152,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
175,23,200224,6,0,L|254:12,1,80,6|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,36,200910,2,0,P|318:87|326:122,2,80,2|0|2,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
481,134,202282,2,0,P|454:207|380:246,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
309,199,203310,1,0,1:0:0:0:
249,133,203653,2,0,P|287:112|326:113,2,80,2|0|2,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
177,290,205024,6,0,P|259:316|339:280,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
393,235,206053,1,0,1:0:0:0:
472,199,206396,2,0,P|475:264|463:291,2,80,2|0|2,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,207767,12,2,208796,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Sakurauchi Riko

RikiH_ wrote:

yo, m4m

General

  1. 00:54:167 - This would be a nice place to add a 1/4 kiai fountain. Also 02:45:253 - works just fine i dont know, not a huge fan of that >< will see maybe others will like it too
Extra

  1. 01:16:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uhm, the sound here is weird. I think a "mixed" stream ( like 00:53:824 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) would express the music in a better way, instead of a curved one i do this "mixed" stream only if there are clear indications, so specific important sounds that needs to be emphasized. this probably needs to mapped differently anyways since the 1/4 circles dont have a clear sound
  2. 01:18:167 (4,5) - I think this is a mistake and these notes are meant to be stacked yes
  3. 01:23:139 (1,2) - Uh, Idk about these sliders honestly... After these you completely ignored the 1/8 sounds, which is really weird in my opinion. It's kinda like expecting a big drop in the song, and then nothing happens. I would just map this section normally :) yes treu, but i dont want to ignore it completely too .. i will see what i do with this section, maybe someone has a suggestion
  4. 01:30:853 (9) - I think it's much better if this slider ends 1/4 later 01:33:596 (9) - like this
    Same goes for 01:41:824 (9) - and the following ones in these 2 kiai sections. Somewhere you used 1/2, while somewhere else you used 3/4, why? I can't comprehend your pattern, really ok consistent now, removed all extended slider in first 2 sections, in kiai consistent at 2 similar spots - other removed
  5. 02:01:110 (4) - I think you should try to move this slider far away, near the following one (look at the screen, I put it randomly, it's just an idea). This will improve readibility imo, since this starts on a blue tick the super slow slider would lose A LOT of emphasis
  6. 02:35:482 (1,2) - I think the NC should be on 2. It's better to leave that drum out and have consistency with the following patterns imo ok, i dont knwo anything about nc's
  7. 03:17:482 (4,5) - Fix stack :p did

Hard

  1. 03:30:167 - Silence slidertail did
  2. I just can't find anything wrong here, sorry. Player are just going to hate you for those doublets lol that's okay lul
Normal

  1. 00:22:110 - I feel like this strong drum should be clickable focus is on vocals in section before, would be really weird to skip the vocal for making a drum sound clickable
  2. 02:08:910 (6,1) - Fix blanket? /runs did
____

This map is really good, hope you guys the best ;)
I can't shoot a star because I have like 3 kds left and I'd like to have some more, sorry!
Thank you for the mod ! :)
Seijiro
FA queue

General:
- the most fitting BG here is the one on the Easy. The others feel too innocent considered the lyrics. I'm not saying to use nsfw material, but something a bit less innocent would do the song justice (or just use the Easy's BG)

Aki:
  1. 00:16:453 (3) - this note would feel way better if emphasized differently, for how strange that sound stands out in the song. x336 y0 ?
  2. 00:23:996 (1) - with default hitsounds the tail is not audible, but I can ensure you it gives me goose bumps when trying to play this stuff with ping pong sounds. If they are not used as a beat, why not silencing them?
  3. 00:46:282 (2,3) - 00:46:967 (5,6) - these stacks kinda break the movement created through 00:44:567 (1,2,3,4) - . Since the song doesn't seem to warrant them in any specific way, it would probably fit better if they were unstacked
  4. 00:48:339 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - kinda similar here, but I might be taking it too specific and you might not care that much (and I don't either, but heh... for the sake of song expression)
  5. 00:49:710 (6) - personal, but higher SV and extended to 3/4 to catch better that unusual sound would feel nice
  6. 01:01:024 (1,2) - Unlike 01:00:339 (6,7) - 00:58:967 (3,4) - , these guys don't have a strong vocal on them both. Stacking 2 under 1 might be good, but you might have other options too, just don't make them similar. Contrast helps define what you follow, so make sure to use different patterns for different rhythms
  7. 01:06:510 (1) - again, the spacing on this note feels so similar to everything else even tho it stands out... what about increasing spacing on it?
  8. is it just me or the kiai feels kinda bland in comparison to the rest?
    I mean, take 01:28:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and compare it with 01:03:767 (1,2,3,4,5) - which feels kinda similar (probably because of the patterns being similar, idk), or like 01:29:824 (1,2,3,4,5) - compared with 01:13:367 (1,2,3,4,5) - (this one is clearer I guess, since spacing is identical. And it shouldn't, since the kiai is more intense)
    Ok, the first comparison might just be my impression, since spacing is definitely larger. Streams are similar tho, so maybe try spacing them a tad bit more
  9. 01:38:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - an even slower SV would fit greatly here. The current pattern is again too similar to the rest in regards of how fast the cursor moves on the field.
  10. 02:12:339 (1,2,3,4) - kinda same here, less rhythm or less SV would fit better with the total lack of accompanying instruments on vocals
  11. 02:37:024 (1,2) - needless to mention consistency with the other pattern I pointed out above // 02:39:767 (1,2,3,4) - same
  12. 02:54:853 - ending kiai here seems a better idea, since the song changes already from here. On same note, 02:54:853 - 02:57:596 - less spacing/rhythm/SV would work better
  13. 03:03:767 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - I honestly lost track of what you did here. Seeing 03:03:082 (1,2) - you can guess what the player would expect, I think, so you should stick to that instrument imo
  14. 03:19:196 (6,7) - seeing the song is calming a bit, smaller spacing would work. This is more for the effect on 03:19:539 (1) - , since it is really slow, yet the jump right before it feels kinda lul
Extra:
  1. 00:17:824 (4,5) - umh.. seeing stuff like 00:17:139 (1,2) - being visually the same, I would rather avoid using same distance on it too. Maybe reduce the jump? It's also the only 1/4 jump after a slider like that so I wonder a bit about its necessity
  2. 00:22:624 (1) - this is not really a suggestion, but more of a note: it's cool how you used this slow slider on that sound. Same goes for the following ones,
    but it feels kinda strange when that thing become a bit ambiguous.
    This first slider is denoted by a NC, but the others are not and the overall shapes of these slow sliders change overtime, so it's kinda meh structure-wise.
    That being said tho, I don't really mind it, I am all for a bit of strange stuff which works on map. Just keep it in mind for the future
  3. 00:34:967 - 00:44:567 - it would have been cool if you managed to express the volume increase used in the song with an increasing spacing in your map.
    Right now it's kinda plain in that regard, so there is no much distinction on that aspect
  4. 01:06:339 (1,2) - the second object here has a really strong emphasis which the stack is missing right now. It would fit better to put a jump imo.
    Try with 01:06:510 (2) - x429 y265 ? // 01:39:253 (1,2) - same
  5. 01:22:796 - the switch you do here from vocals to the buzz sound in background feels kinda random. I would either stick to vocals and increase spacing overtime or managing a better switch over the stream. The actual issue is just 01:22:796 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - since later on you go back on vocals, so I wonder why, since the buzz sound doesn't end there for sure. Again, sticking to vocals would be better.
  6. 02:01:110 (4) - this felt kinda unwarranted in gameplay. The combo is focused on 02:00:167 (1,2,3) - that strange sound. Adding something else into the combo makes it a mess imo. I personally find no advantage in adding that inhalation from the singer tbh (that's not even a beat...)
  7. 02:12:339 (1,2,3,4,5) - fast SV with the vocals only part feels totally off tbh. You should keep a slow SV due to lack of instruments and pacing in the song.
    At least for the first slider, the rest can be slightly more spaced/intense I guess
  8. 02:24:682 - mentioned once already, but the gradual volume increase would be better expressed through gradual spacing increase too
  9. 02:54:853 - kiai would better end here imo
  10. 02:54:853 - 02:57:596 - changing a bit how patterns and rhythms work in this section would better fit with the different and more calm feeling in this part of the song too
  11. 03:05:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - unused slider ends would sound better silenced. All of them, not just these, since I'm pretty sure I skipped some before these
Hard:
  1. 02:47:567 (1,2) - ye.... too hard for this diff. Use just a note or a 1/4 slider, but I suggest just a note. I won't point the others: playing a triplet is hard because of the fast movement, but a double is even harder because it requires more finger control than a triplet.
    Keep clickable doubles for Insane+ diffs...
  2. spacing in some sections looks kinda small, like 00:55:539 - and so on. You are using the same spacing as from the intro there.
    In this cases, you should increase slightly spacing and reduce the rhythm were possible (I saw a bunch of 1/2 which are not so great on a Hard. Add some more 1/1 please). Too cramped and fast rhythms are hell. Too cramped but moderate rhythms work well.
    With the current density, I would suggest increasing AR to 8, but you should keep AR as is and actually make some rhythms less intense (00:55:539 - 01:17:139 - hardly saw any 1/1 gaps to take a breather in there and it's not the only part)
  3. in kiai times I noticed some rather spaced patterns, like 01:31:881 (3,4,5) - , and I've been wondering what's up with them... I personally can't distinguish those in any particular way, or at least not so much as to create a difference between 01:30:167 (6,7,8) - 01:31:881 (3,4,5) -
    Also, rhythm in kiai times feels the same as outside kiai times, which is kinda meh overall imo. Compare 01:31:881 (3,4,5) - 01:49:024 - with 00:55:539 - 01:17:139 -
Normal:
  1. As for the Hard, the Normal presents kinda similar, if not identical, rhythms across the map.
    The intro has literally the same amount of beats, one more one less, while parts like 00:55:539 - are exactly identical to the kiai time. Considering nothing else varies (spacing, SV, etc..) at least rhythm should express the song's pace and increase/reduce based on how the song's intensity changes.
    My suggestion would be to focus on 00:22:624 (2) - this sound in the intro. By that I mean that you should be mapping ONLY that instrument and nothing else, that way you create contrast with the other parts which are more intense overall
IceKalt:
  1. 00:32:224 (6) - it would be cool to remove a repeat and add a circle to create contrast with the rest. This is technically the last part after entering a break so it would feel nice imo
  2. 01:05:482 (5,6) - since this part is calmer than the rest, what do you think of just a circle on 01:05:824 - ? (delete the rest, basically)
  3. 01:16:453 (2,3) - same ^
  4. 03:27:767 (1) - considering how short this is, a slider might be better

Nice, but Normal and Hard can be improved (and some details on the other diffs would add a nice touch too if you want)
Icekalt

MrSergio wrote:

IceKalt:

00:32:224 (6) - it would be cool to remove a repeat and add a circle to create contrast with the rest. This is technically the last part after entering a break so it would feel nice imo making the last object clickable before the break seems guud (but i feel the "unconsistend!!!!!" shout from modders now ~ ) idc
01:05:482 (5,6) - since this part is calmer than the rest, what do you think of just a circle on 01:05:824 - ? (delete the rest, basically) i like the idea but i let the (5) as it is and placed the circle instead on the slider
01:16:453 (2,3) - same ^ ^
03:27:767 (1) - considering how short this is, a slider might be better ill try this - spinner seems really short
Btw dont forget this time to turn my BG phyl ~

Thanks for the mod ~

gvvdv
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 188482
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11653,22624,25367,28110,30853,55539,66510,77482,88453,99424,115882,121367,124110,126853,129596,133710,135082,137824,140567,144682,155653,166624,177596,188567,199539
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Candy (feat. Sara)
TitleUnicode:Candy (feat. Sara)
Artist:S3RL
ArtistUnicode:S3RL
Creator:Sakurauchi Riko
Version:Icekalt's Easy
Source:
Tags:phyloukz akitoshi icekalt
BeatmapID:1364698
BeatmapSetID:643185

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2.5
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"das andere bild.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,34967,42956
2,110396,119927
2,144682,154042
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
682,342.857142857143,4,2,1,50,1,0
88453,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
98053,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
99424,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
109024,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
166624,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
176224,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
177596,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
185824,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
188567,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
199539,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
200224,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
207767,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 237,197,245
Combo2 : 194,162,131
Combo3 : 173,86,160
Combo4 : 151,131,231

[HitObjects]
313,207,11653,6,0,P|260:157|252:65,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,12,12682,1,2,0:0:0:0:
399,5,13024,2,0,P|452:55|460:147,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,310,14396,2,0,P|347:357|265:338,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,269,15424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
175,201,15767,2,0,P|97:191|33:236,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,322,17139,6,0,B|262:235|262:235|262:177,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,102,18167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
193,47,18510,2,0,P|126:74|88:154,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,189,19882,2,0,B|335:181|335:181|362:190|362:190|426:148,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,70,20910,1,2,0:0:0:0:
341,16,21253,2,0,B|268:24|268:24|241:15|241:15|177:57,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,222,22624,6,0,P|236:285|325:300,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,237,23653,1,0,1:0:0:0:
349,152,23996,2,0,P|310:169|284:210,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,60,25367,2,0,P|120:38|39:79,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
42,156,26396,1,0,1:0:0:0:
106,217,26739,2,0,P|127:180|124:132,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,336,28110,6,0,L|398:330,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,254,29139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
369,201,29482,2,0,L|289:198,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,82,30853,2,0,L|75:88,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,164,31882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
104,217,32224,2,0,L|184:220,1,80,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
252,276,32910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44396,12,0,49710,1:0:0:0:
256,192,50053,12,0,54167,3:0:0:0:
210,252,55539,6,0,L|30:214,2,160,0|2|2,1:0|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
297,260,57253,1,2,1:2:0:0:
384,247,57596,2,0,L|479:213,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
455,131,58282,2,0,P|414:91|297:54,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
459,221,59996,1,2,1:2:0:0:
456,308,60339,2,0,P|424:336|374:349,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
305,318,61024,6,0,B|228:281|228:281|220:246|195:213,2,160,0|2|2,1:0|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
377,264,62739,1,2,1:2:0:0:
409,182,63082,2,0,L|410:87,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
340,47,63767,2,0,B|301:10|301:10|181:17,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
328,134,65482,1,2,0:2:0:0:
256,185,65824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
90,197,66510,6,0,P|52:240|69:337,2,160,0|2|2,1:0|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
152,258,68224,1,2,1:2:0:0:
230,298,68567,2,0,P|268:306|307:297,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
352,221,69253,2,0,P|395:284|372:358,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
264,211,70967,1,2,1:2:0:0:
176,232,71310,2,0,P|175:193|192:157,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
273,122,71996,6,0,L|366:107,1,80,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
349,21,72682,2,0,L|256:6,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
186,34,73367,2,0,P|122:80|112:191,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
82,241,74396,1,2,1:2:0:0:
146,300,74739,6,0,B|174:347|174:347|201:350|201:350|234:375|288:369,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
170,215,76453,1,2,0:2:0:0:
227,148,76796,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,110,77482,6,0,L|434:276,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
343,274,78510,1,0,1:0:0:0:
257,254,78853,2,0,L|215:99,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
389,110,80224,6,0,P|470:161|492:236,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
433,285,81253,1,0,1:0:0:0:
359,236,81596,2,0,P|285:215|200:238,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82967,12,2,87082,3:2:0:0:
201,52,88453,6,0,B|179:113|206:168|206:168|184:217|184:217|221:230|237:268,1,240,4|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
268,340,89824,2,0,L|377:366,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
356,270,90510,2,0,L|438:248,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
487,179,91196,2,0,B|471:132|499:86|499:86|415:119|352:74,1,240,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
280,45,92567,2,0,P|226:39|186:52,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
197,133,93253,2,0,P|147:154|119:186,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
93,252,93939,6,0,B|136:323|136:323|217:297|302:323,1,240,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
376,339,95310,2,0,L|469:336,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
431,251,95996,2,0,L|351:253,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
284,195,96682,2,0,P|248:155|237:110,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
282,54,97367,2,0,P|318:94|329:139,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
373,192,98053,2,0,P|306:279|235:270,1,160,8|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
115,178,99424,6,0,B|137:143|181:137|181:137|231:172|291:160|324:117,1,240,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
349,33,100796,2,0,P|401:25|451:34,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
440,115,101482,2,0,P|479:149|504:193,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
504,259,102167,2,0,B|424:266|424:266|362:308|362:308|259:316,1,240,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
255,229,103539,2,0,L|346:223,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
414,177,104224,2,0,L|505:171,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
504,259,104910,6,0,P|464:323|303:358,1,240,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
246,301,106282,2,0,P|192:292|151:304,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
96,347,106967,2,0,P|56:352|17:342,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
1,255,107653,2,0,L|28:166,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
104,141,108339,2,0,L|127:217,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
163,297,109024,6,0,P|213:318|190:200,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,323,121367,6,0,P|132:352|222:315,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,247,122396,1,0,1:0:0:0:
305,173,122739,2,0,P|375:145|462:159,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,332,124110,2,0,P|385:343|310:320,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,247,125138,1,0,1:0:0:0:
237,160,125482,2,0,B|228:125|208:110|208:110|252:83|323:89,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
467,20,126853,6,0,B|503:59|503:59|495:168,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,235,127882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
477,314,128224,2,0,P|421:320|352:239,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,88,129596,2,0,P|202:62|123:93,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,163,130624,1,0,1:0:0:0:
101,250,130967,2,0,B|127:275|167:271|167:271|163:294|163:294|207:290|234:311,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,35,133710,6,0,L|217:38,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,130,135082,2,0,P|383:189|358:295,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,338,136110,1,0,1:0:0:0:
215,369,136453,2,0,P|193:310|218:204,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,130,137824,6,0,B|394:97|445:95|445:95|480:63|480:27,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,4,138853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,39,139196,2,0,B|272:54|248:100|248:100|204:118|172:103,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,198,140567,6,0,P|32:268|101:338,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,308,141596,1,0,1:0:0:0:
254,270,141939,2,0,P|224:235|110:247,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,155482,12,0,160796,1:0:0:0:
256,192,161139,12,0,165253,3:0:0:0:
406,32,166624,6,0,L|521:49,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
453,125,167310,2,0,L|338:142,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,184,167996,2,0,P|323:241|370:257,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
295,96,169024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,17,169367,6,0,L|158:34,1,80,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
133,109,170053,2,0,L|211:122,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,96,170739,2,0,P|327:69|342:9,2,80,0|0|2,1:0|1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
146,190,172110,6,0,L|173:285,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
254,285,172796,2,0,L|275:208,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,135,173482,2,0,P|185:107|169:67,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
313,131,174510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,106,174853,6,0,P|421:168|389:273,1,160,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
343,324,175882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
258,347,176224,2,0,P|234:285|266:180,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
313,131,177253,1,0,1:0:0:0:
251,68,177596,6,0,L|168:52,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
153,139,178282,2,0,L|75:154,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,234,178967,2,0,P|37:280|55:327,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
126,232,179996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,269,180339,6,0,L|302:279,1,80,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
325,199,181024,2,0,L|405:190,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,240,181710,2,0,P|487:303|470:343,2,80,0|0|2,1:0|1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
365,102,183082,6,0,L|267:93,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,35,183767,2,0,L|122:44,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,103,184453,2,0,P|36:139|19:182,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
160,127,185482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,185824,12,8,187196,3:0:0:0:
114,358,188567,6,0,P|81:292|96:203,1,160,6|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
176,179,189596,1,0,1:0:0:0:
261,158,189939,2,0,B|293:138|293:138|296:47|269:8,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
104,60,191310,2,0,B|86:100|86:100|144:137|177:180,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
231,246,192339,1,0,1:0:0:0:
312,280,192682,2,0,P|258:329|171:306,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
143,140,194053,6,0,P|71:172|-5:132,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
73,86,195082,1,0,1:0:0:0:
156,54,195424,2,0,P|214:92|217:185,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
108,312,196796,2,0,L|287:261,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
300,188,197824,1,0,1:0:0:0:
338,109,198167,2,0,L|491:152,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
175,23,200224,6,0,L|254:12,1,80,6|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,36,200910,2,0,P|318:87|326:122,2,80,2|0|2,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
481,134,202282,2,0,P|454:207|380:246,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
309,199,203310,1,0,1:0:0:0:
249,133,203653,2,0,P|287:112|326:113,2,80,2|0|2,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
177,290,205024,6,0,P|259:316|339:280,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
393,235,206053,1,0,1:0:0:0:
472,199,206396,2,0,P|475:264|463:291,2,80,2|0|2,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
340,82,207767,6,0,B|288:68|288:68|265:94|265:94|184:64|103:113,1,240
Topic Starter
Sakurauchi Riko

MrSergio wrote:

FA queue

General:
- the most fitting BG here is the one on the Easy. The others feel too innocent considered the lyrics. I'm not saying to use nsfw material, but something a bit less innocent would do the song justice (or just use the Easy's BG) i dont like the easy bg personally .. i dont think an innocent bg is much worse than a bg that is a little bit lewd. i will keep my eyes open for potentially better bgs, but i have a hard time to find any that isnt related to anything inappropriate. so yea i consider other bgs if i find any more

Extra:
  1. 00:17:824 (4,5) - umh.. seeing stuff like 00:17:139 (1,2) - being visually the same, I would rather avoid using same distance on it too. Maybe reduce the jump? It's also the only 1/4 jump after a slider like that so I wonder a bit about its necessity i see, I did a bit larger spacing for the 1/2 gap you pointed out, that was the only 1/2 that is visually the same as the 1/4. i think now you can identify the 1/4 gap better, i wanna keep the 1/4th too because the singer kinda holds the lyric longer than just to the next 1/2 tick
  2. 00:22:624 (1) - this is not really a suggestion, but more of a note: it's cool how you used this slow slider on that sound. Same goes for the following ones,
    but it feels kinda strange when that thing become a bit ambiguous.
    This first slider is denoted by a NC, but the others are not and the overall shapes of these slow sliders change overtime, so it's kinda meh structure-wise.
    That being said tho, I don't really mind it, I am all for a bit of strange stuff which works on map. Just keep it in mind for the future yes, i noticed that too - wasnt really smart of me to not use a clear slidershape concept. though i marked every slowest slider with a warning combo color to at least make it somewhat understandable
  3. 00:34:967 - 00:44:567 - it would have been cool if you managed to express the volume increase used in the song with an increasing spacing in your map.
    Right now it's kinda plain in that regard, so there is no much distinction on that aspect i tried to adjust the current patterns a bit to that idea because i find it a really neat intention.. though im not sure if i might have to rework patterns to clarify this spacing increase.. i will see over time if i find something better, too.
  4. 01:06:339 (1,2) - the second object here has a really strong emphasis which the stack is missing right now. It would fit better to put a jump imo.
    Try with 01:06:510 (2) - x429 y265 ? // 01:39:253 (1,2) - same i dont agree with spacing these two sounds. for me those two sounds sound VERY similar to each other and thats why i want to express that with being stacked "on the same position". the 2nd sound might be slightly stronger, yes i can hear that, but in gameplay especially you consider these two as the same, at least i do while playing - thats why i think stacking works here perfectly. additionally i have just the feeling that this is right, because when i space it like you suggested it plays very differently from being stacked, and thats.. yeah kinda not right for me >< hope you understand what im trying to say
  5. 01:22:796 - the switch you do here from vocals to the buzz sound in background feels kinda random. I would either stick to vocals and increase spacing overtime or managing a better switch over the stream. The actual issue is just 01:22:796 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - since later on you go back on vocals, so I wonder why, since the buzz sound doesn't end there for sure. Again, sticking to vocals would be better. sticked to vocals, much better now
  6. 02:01:110 (4) - this felt kinda unwarranted in gameplay. The combo is focused on 02:00:167 (1,2,3) - that strange sound. Adding something else into the combo makes it a mess imo. I personally find no advantage in adding that inhalation from the singer tbh (that's not even a beat...) i agree, its kinda unexpectable too
  7. 02:12:339 (1,2,3,4,5) - fast SV with the vocals only part feels totally off tbh. You should keep a slow SV due to lack of instruments and pacing in the song.
    At least for the first slider, the rest can be slightly more spaced/intense I guess true
  8. 02:24:682 - mentioned once already, but the gradual volume increase would be better expressed through gradual spacing increase too
  9. 02:54:853 - kiai would better end here imo
  10. 02:54:853 - 02:57:596 - changing a bit how patterns and rhythms work in this section would better fit with the different and more calm feeling in this part of the song too i think the intensity gets lower at 02:56:224 - that point, thats why i used a slightly slower sv here (idk the instruments are not as strong i guess?). now that i changed the kiai too i think there is no need to make it much more calmer, i stacked the 1/2 circles that way i already create a calmer section, at least thats what i thought by mapping those
  11. 03:05:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - unused slider ends would sound better silenced. All of them, not just these, since I'm pretty sure I skipped some before these i hope i got all of them
Hard:
  1. 02:47:567 (1,2) - ye.... too hard for this diff. Use just a note or a 1/4 slider, but I suggest just a note. I won't point the others: playing a triplet is hard because of the fast movement, but a double is even harder because it requires more finger control than a triplet.
    Keep clickable doubles for Insane+ diffs... i guess ... changed it
  2. spacing in some sections looks kinda small, like 00:55:539 - and so on. You are using the same spacing as from the intro there.
    In this cases, you should increase slightly spacing and reduce the rhythm were possible (I saw a bunch of 1/2 which are not so great on a Hard. Add some more 1/1 please). Too cramped and fast rhythms are hell. Too cramped but moderate rhythms work well.
    With the current density, I would suggest increasing AR to 8, but you should keep AR as is and actually make some rhythms less intense (00:55:539 - 01:17:139 - hardly saw any 1/1 gaps to take a breather in there and it's not the only part) i added 1/1 gaps consistently in the whole first half of the song, its much better now and the player can actually take short breaks in the train of 1/2 objects
  3. in kiai times I noticed some rather spaced patterns, like 01:31:881 (3,4,5) - , and I've been wondering what's up with them... I personally can't distinguish those in any particular way, or at least not so much as to create a difference between 01:30:167 (6,7,8) - 01:31:881 (3,4,5) - i increased the difficulty, just like in the expert with spacing and sv, along to the song to show progression in the map. since the rhythm is always the same i wanted to make it a tiny bit different in intensity. thats why in the kiai is a bit of ds emphasis
    Also, rhythm in kiai times feels the same as outside kiai times, which is kinda meh overall imo. Compare 01:31:881 (3,4,5) - 01:49:024 - with 00:55:539 - 01:17:139 - yes, thats what i meant with above. i dont think other very different rhythms fit very well (at least i cant think of other rhythms, though i think if i use different rhythm people will just call it inconsistent), so i tried to increase the difficulty for the more intense kiai part
Normal:
  1. As for the Hard, the Normal presents kinda similar, if not identical, rhythms across the map.
    The intro has literally the same amount of beats, one more one less, while parts like 00:55:539 - are exactly identical to the kiai time. Considering nothing else varies (spacing, SV, etc..) at least rhythm should express the song's pace and increase/reduce based on how the song's intensity changes.
    My suggestion would be to focus on 00:22:624 (2) - this sound in the intro. By that I mean that you should be mapping ONLY that instrument and nothing else, that way you create contrast with the other parts which are more intense overall i did that suggestion on both sections in the song ( i hope i did it correctly but i think so).


Nice, but Normal and Hard can be improved (and some details on the other diffs would add a nice touch too if you want)
thank you sooo much for the huge mod! it helped out a ton - most of the things i have changed, much appreciated :)
Akitoshi
reply box
@Axon seems riko fixd for me, thanks!

FruityEnLoops wrote:

[Akitoshi's Insane]

03:27:767 (1) - You could map the vocal at the end. following background music, sorry bro

RikiH_ wrote:

Akitoshi's Insane

  1. 02:00:853 (6,1) - This stack is broken, is it intentional? If not, just fix it :) moved 1 to somewhere else w
  2. 02:23:310 - Choose one of the following: 1) Add a note here 2) Make the slider finish here (see Extra diff) 3) Let the break start here i'll take the 2 since i can't put break there manually w
  3. 02:35:482 - Such a strong drum here, maybe add a note? okay
  4. 03:04:282 (1,2) - Not sure about these sliders that start on the red ticks honestly. They just sound weird because they are the only ones in the entire map... If I were you I'd just use note+1/2 slider+note here ye

MrSergio wrote:

General:
- the most fitting BG here is the one on the Easy. The others feel too innocent considered the lyrics. I'm not saying to use nsfw material, but something a bit less innocent would do the song justice (or just use the Easy's BG) i love lolis

Aki:
  1. 00:16:453 (3) - this note would feel way better if emphasized differently, for how strange that sound stands out in the song. x336 y0 ? not that far, but fixed
  2. 00:23:996 (1) - with default hitsounds the tail is not audible, but I can ensure you it gives me goose bumps when trying to play this stuff with ping pong sounds. If they are not used as a beat, why not silencing them? oka
  3. 00:46:282 (2,3) - 00:46:967 (5,6) - these stacks kinda break the movement created through 00:44:567 (1,2,3,4) - . Since the song doesn't seem to warrant them in any specific way, it would probably fit better if they were unstacked ok
  4. 00:48:339 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - kinda similar here, but I might be taking it too specific and you might not care that much (and I don't either, but heh... for the sake of song expression) fixed the 56, but not 00:48:682 (1,2,3,4) - as ye background sound is going to intense
  5. 00:49:710 (6) - personal, but higher SV and extended to 3/4 to catch better that unusual sound would feel nice increased the sv but i hate extended sliders if there's a stream on next part so uwu
  6. 01:01:024 (1,2) - Unlike 01:00:339 (6,7) - 00:58:967 (3,4) - , these guys don't have a strong vocal on them both. Stacking 2 under 1 might be good, but you might have other options too, just don't make them similar. Contrast helps define what you follow, so make sure to use different patterns for different rhythms ye
  7. 01:06:510 (1) - again, the spacing on this note feels so similar to everything else even tho it stands out... what about increasing spacing on it? 01:06:339 (8,1) - has same strength i believe
  8. is it just me or the kiai feels kinda bland in comparison to the rest?
    I mean, take 01:28:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and compare it with 01:03:767 (1,2,3,4,5) - which feels kinda similar (probably because of the patterns being similar, idk), or like 01:29:824 (1,2,3,4,5) - compared with 01:13:367 (1,2,3,4,5) - (this one is clearer I guess, since spacing is identical. And it shouldn't, since the kiai is more intense)
    Ok, the first comparison might just be my impression, since spacing is definitely larger. Streams are similar tho, so maybe try spacing them a tad bit more ye i boosted the streams on kiai
  9. 01:38:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - an even slower SV would fit greatly here. The current pattern is again too similar to the rest in regards of how fast the cursor moves on the field. 0.8
  10. 02:12:339 (1,2,3,4) - kinda same here, less rhythm or less SV would fit better with the total lack of accompanying instruments on vocals 0.5 is enough for me though owo
  11. 02:37:024 (1,2) - needless to mention consistency with the other pattern I pointed out above // 02:39:767 (1,2,3,4) - same yes and same for 1234
  12. 02:54:853 - ending kiai here seems a better idea, since the song changes already from here. On same note, 02:54:853 - 02:57:596 - less spacing/rhythm/SV would work better yup
  13. 03:03:767 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - I honestly lost track of what you did here. Seeing 03:03:082 (1,2) - you can guess what the player would expect, I think, so you should stick to that instrument imo fixed from rikih's mod
  14. 03:19:196 (6,7) - seeing the song is calming a bit, smaller spacing would work. This is more for the effect on 03:19:539 (1) - , since it is really slow, yet the jump right before it feels kinda lul ok then lul

thanks a lot guys :D

code
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 188482
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 33596,44567,143310,155653
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Candy (feat. Sara)
TitleUnicode:Candy (feat. Sara)
Artist:S3RL
ArtistUnicode:S3RL
Creator:Sakurauchi Riko
Version:Akitoshi's Insane
Source:
Tags:phyloukz akitoshi icekalt
BeatmapID:1371460
BeatmapSetID:643185

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"lolih1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,33596,43967
2,143510,154882
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
682,342.857142857143,4,2,1,50,1,0
11653,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,50,0,0
22624,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
24253,-125,4,2,1,5,0,0
24339,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
44567,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
49710,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,50,0,0
50053,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,50,0,0
52796,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,50,0,0
54167,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
55539,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
66510,-95.2380952380952,4,2,1,50,0,0
77482,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
82967,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
88453,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,80,0,1
98053,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
99424,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,80,0,1
109024,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
110396,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
111767,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,50,0,0
112110,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
115196,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,50,0,0
115539,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
115882,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,50,0,0
121367,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
132339,-200,4,2,1,50,0,0
133710,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
155653,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
160796,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,50,0,0
161139,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,50,0,0
166624,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,80,0,1
174853,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
176224,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
177596,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,80,0,1
185824,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
188567,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,100,0,1
199539,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
200224,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,100,0,1
207767,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 237,197,245
Combo2 : 194,162,131
Combo3 : 173,86,160
Combo4 : 151,131,231

[HitObjects]
126,192,11653,6,0,B|214:177|214:177|265:190,1,134.999995880127,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,220,12339,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,220,12682,1,2,0:0:0:0:
481,55,13024,6,0,B|416:39|414:79|340:61,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,28,13710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
250,28,14053,1,2,0:0:0:0:
75,140,14396,6,0,L|82:250,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,319,14910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,272,15082,1,8,0:0:0:0:
178,272,15424,2,0,P|208:268|235:270,1,44.999998626709,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,316,15767,6,0,P|325:268|311:218,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,158,16282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,58,16453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
263,56,16624,2,0,B|227:63|227:63|170:59,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,19,17139,6,0,B|49:76|99:104|67:161,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
25,242,17824,1,8,0:0:0:0:
25,242,18167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
217,319,18510,6,0,P|259:301|355:318,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,371,19196,1,8,0:0:0:0:
431,371,19539,1,2,0:0:0:0:
487,171,19882,6,0,L|477:65,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,7,20396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,83,20567,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,83,20910,2,0,P|311:76|263:85,1,89.9999972534181,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,83,22110,5,0,1:0:0:0:
237,182,22282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
166,106,22453,1,0,1:0:0:0:
344,155,22624,6,0,B|390:147|390:147|495:172|495:172|472:127,1,180,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,257,23310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
387,257,23653,2,0,P|382:292|389:328,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,351,23996,6,0,P|241:338|185:345,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,351,24339,2,0,L|158:272,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,173,24682,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,173,25024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
283,351,25367,6,0,P|325:377|407:364,1,120,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,283,25882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,255,26053,2,0,L|174:266,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,351,26396,1,0,1:0:0:0:
468,198,26739,6,0,L|479:64,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
477,78,27424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
370,134,27596,2,0,B|325:117|325:117|238:129,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,183,28110,6,0,B|107:279|182:257|142:360,1,180,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,377,28796,1,8,0:0:0:0:
261,377,29139,2,0,P|267:343|284:311,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,270,29482,6,0,L|370:123,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
380,54,29996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,80,30167,1,8,0:0:0:0:
263,80,30510,2,0,L|187:73,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,39,30853,6,0,B|36:67|22:103|22:103|22:143|63:203,1,180,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,286,31539,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,286,31882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
323,167,32224,6,0,L|401:159,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
441,76,32567,2,0,L|363:68,1,60,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
512,147,32910,1,8,0:0:0:0:
185,230,44567,6,0,L|80:243,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,133,44910,2,0,L|133:67,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,90,45253,2,0,L|295:-15,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,118,45596,2,0,L|473:34,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
509,198,45939,6,0,P|509:240|498:278,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,351,46282,1,0,1:0:0:0:
392,224,46453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,312,46624,2,0,P|276:279|265:228,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,119,46967,1,0,1:0:0:0:
167,178,47139,1,2,0:0:0:0:
89,77,47310,6,0,L|78:-10,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,102,47653,1,0,1:0:0:0:
80,200,47824,1,2,0:0:0:0:
185,126,47996,2,0,L|198:45,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,65,48339,1,0,1:0:0:0:
201,139,48510,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,254,48682,5,0,1:0:0:0:
335,65,48853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
269,248,49024,1,0,1:0:0:0:
431,138,49196,1,2,0:0:0:0:
234,133,49367,2,0,L|143:149,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,254,49710,2,0,B|442:276|442:276|502:247,1,112.500004291535,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
511,80,50053,5,0,3:0:0:0:
482,63,50139,1,0,3:0:0:0:
450,55,50224,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,57,50310,1,0,3:0:0:0:
387,73,50396,2,0,L|323:68,3,41.2500012588501,0|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
278,117,50739,5,0,3:0:0:0:
249,134,50825,1,0,3:0:0:0:
217,142,50910,1,0,3:0:0:0:
183,140,50996,1,0,3:0:0:0:
154,124,51082,2,0,L|90:129,3,41.2500012588501,0|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
51,181,51424,5,0,3:0:0:0:
33,209,51510,1,0,3:0:0:0:
31,242,51596,1,0,3:0:0:0:
37,274,51682,1,0,3:0:0:0:
55,300,51767,2,0,L|114:292,3,41.2500012588501,0|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
162,245,52110,5,0,3:0:0:0:
193,233,52196,1,0,3:0:0:0:
226,234,52282,1,0,3:0:0:0:
257,244,52367,1,0,3:0:0:0:
281,265,52453,2,0,L|292:319,3,41.2500012588501,0|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
362,357,52796,6,0,B|408:347|408:347|468:360,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
509,288,53053,2,0,B|499:242|499:242|512:182,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
435,147,53310,2,0,B|389:157|389:157|329:144,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
288,217,53567,2,0,B|298:263|298:263|285:323,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
208,345,53824,2,0,L|156:341,1,44.999998626709,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
95,279,53996,2,0,L|43:283,1,44.999998626709,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
168,198,54167,5,4,3:0:0:0:
393,309,54510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
455,234,54682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,151,54853,2,0,L|400:108,3,37.5,2|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
367,88,55196,2,0,L|363:45,3,37.5,2|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
336,19,55539,6,0,P|281:28|244:23,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,108,55882,2,0,P|191:107|227:115,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,215,56224,1,2,1:2:0:0:
404,151,56396,1,2,0:0:0:0:
457,274,56567,2,0,L|452:360,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,371,56910,5,2,1:2:0:0:
289,366,56996,1,2,0:2:0:0:
260,355,57082,1,2,0:2:0:0:
238,334,57167,1,2,0:2:0:0:
224,306,57253,2,0,L|135:313,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,203,57596,1,2,1:2:0:0:
148,192,57767,1,2,0:0:0:0:
59,297,57939,2,0,P|60:336|80:374,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,199,58282,6,0,L|159:112,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,170,58624,2,0,L|296:244,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,378,58967,1,2,1:2:0:0:
169,281,59139,1,2,0:0:0:0:
309,332,59310,2,0,L|403:323,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,220,59653,5,2,1:2:0:0:
499,190,59739,1,2,0:2:0:0:
499,160,59824,1,2,0:2:0:0:
491,130,59910,1,2,0:2:0:0:
473,105,59996,2,0,L|382:99,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,86,60339,1,2,1:2:0:0:
330,9,60510,1,2,0:0:0:0:
315,158,60682,2,0,L|324:257,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,356,61024,5,0,1:0:0:0:
375,356,61196,1,2,0:0:0:0:
253,308,61367,2,0,L|159:300,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,282,61710,1,2,1:2:0:0:
98,370,61882,1,2,0:0:0:0:
101,220,62053,2,0,L|93:133,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,46,62396,5,2,1:2:0:0:
236,38,62482,1,2,0:2:0:0:
265,38,62567,1,2,0:2:0:0:
293,47,62653,1,2,0:2:0:0:
319,62,62739,2,0,P|333:101|324:158,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,268,63082,1,2,1:2:0:0:
372,236,63253,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,172,63424,2,0,L|150:177,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,112,63767,6,0,P|14:68|13:35,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,177,64110,2,0,P|136:214|127:250,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
25,361,64453,1,2,1:2:0:0:
0,251,64624,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,352,64796,2,0,L|242:342,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,323,65139,5,2,0:2:0:0:
389,308,65224,1,2,0:2:0:0:
406,283,65310,1,2,0:2:0:0:
417,255,65396,1,2,0:2:0:0:
424,225,65482,2,0,L|414:140,1,75,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,68,65824,2,0,L|289:153,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,254,66167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,155,66339,1,0,1:0:0:0:
132,309,66510,5,0,1:0:0:0:
256,258,66682,1,2,0:0:0:0:
142,149,66853,2,0,L|135:54,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,16,67196,1,2,1:2:0:0:
257,130,67367,1,2,0:0:0:0:
397,57,67539,2,0,P|435:50|483:61,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,211,67882,5,2,1:2:0:0:
503,241,67967,1,2,0:2:0:0:
500,272,68053,1,2,0:2:0:0:
496,303,68139,1,2,0:2:0:0:
492,334,68224,2,0,P|454:341|406:330,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,255,68567,1,2,1:2:0:0:
316,368,68739,1,2,0:2:0:0:
388,228,68910,2,0,L|377:133,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,53,69253,6,0,B|214:44|214:44|164:55,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,208,69596,2,0,B|193:217|193:217|243:206,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,150,69939,1,2,1:2:0:0:
335,259,70110,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,96,70282,2,0,L|277:0,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,131,70624,5,2,1:2:0:0:
149,162,70709,1,2,0:2:0:0:
152,193,70795,1,2,0:2:0:0:
155,225,70881,1,2,0:2:0:0:
158,256,70967,2,0,L|151:344,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
51,212,71310,1,2,1:2:0:0:
146,131,71482,1,2,0:0:0:0:
258,187,71653,2,0,L|350:178,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,51,71996,5,0,1:0:0:0:
146,131,72167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
217,272,72339,2,0,L|209:354,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,275,72682,1,2,1:2:0:0:
258,187,72853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,130,73024,2,0,L|494:141,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,15,73367,5,2,1:2:0:0:
318,23,73453,1,2,0:2:0:0:
287,31,73539,1,2,0:2:0:0:
257,40,73624,1,2,0:2:0:0:
228,53,73710,2,0,L|138:64,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,174,74053,1,2,1:2:0:0:
163,174,74224,1,2,0:0:0:0:
37,78,74396,2,0,P|36:38|50:2,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,174,74739,6,0,L|152:284,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,325,75082,2,0,L|287:246,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,129,75424,1,2,1:2:0:0:
408,254,75596,1,2,0:0:0:0:
287,152,75767,2,0,L|200:140,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,120,76110,5,2,0:2:0:0:
26,129,76196,1,2,0:2:0:0:
26,156,76282,1,2,0:2:0:0:
52,165,76367,1,2,0:2:0:0:
68,142,76453,2,0,L|72:50,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,10,76796,1,2,0:0:0:0:
242,29,76967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
282,114,77139,2,0,P|320:107|369:112,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,241,77482,5,2,1:2:0:0:
197,274,77824,1,0,1:0:0:0:
151,147,78167,1,2,1:2:0:0:
282,114,78509,1,0,1:0:0:0:
328,241,78853,5,2,1:2:0:0:
459,208,79195,1,0,1:0:0:0:
505,335,79538,1,2,1:2:0:0:
374,368,79882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,241,80224,5,2,1:2:0:0:
197,274,80566,1,0,1:0:0:0:
151,147,80909,1,2,1:2:0:0:
282,114,81253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,147,81596,5,2,1:2:0:0:
197,274,81938,1,0,1:0:0:0:
73,331,82281,1,2,1:2:0:0:
29,204,82623,1,0,1:0:0:0:
115,258,82796,1,0,3:0:0:0:
115,258,82882,1,0,3:0:0:0:
115,258,82967,5,2,3:2:0:0:
256,192,83053,12,0,87082,3:0:0:0:
256,192,87767,5,2,3:0:0:0:
230,197,87853,1,0,3:0:0:0:
204,202,87939,1,0,3:0:0:0:
178,206,88024,1,0,3:0:0:0:
147,184,88110,5,2,3:0:0:0:
121,189,88196,1,0,3:0:0:0:
95,194,88282,1,0,3:0:0:0:
69,198,88367,1,0,3:0:0:0:
36,180,88453,5,4,1:0:0:0:
103,302,88624,1,2,0:0:0:0:
230,197,88796,2,0,L|227:96,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,229,89139,1,2,1:2:0:0:
227,290,89310,1,2,0:0:0:0:
385,338,89482,2,0,L|473:323,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,165,89824,5,2,1:2:0:0:
488,128,89910,1,2,0:2:0:0:
451,108,89996,1,2,0:2:0:0:
410,99,90082,1,2,0:2:0:0:
369,105,90167,2,0,L|363:9,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,153,90510,1,2,1:2:0:0:
405,215,90682,1,2,0:0:0:0:
257,142,90853,2,0,P|204:155|124:141,1,123.75000377655,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,103,91196,6,0,L|71:20,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,60,91539,2,0,L|257:142,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,306,91882,1,2,1:2:0:0:
357,201,92053,1,2,0:0:0:0:
195,232,92224,2,0,P|153:244|100:243,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
2,122,92567,5,2,1:2:0:0:
9,81,92653,1,2,0:2:0:0:
31,46,92739,1,2,0:2:0:0:
67,27,92824,1,2,0:2:0:0:
107,20,92910,2,0,P|145:38|192:37,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,35,93253,1,2,1:2:0:0:
219,135,93424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,127,93596,2,0,P|434:134|494:178,1,123.75000377655,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
506,257,93939,5,0,1:0:0:0:
393,377,94110,1,2,0:0:0:0:
257,281,94282,2,0,L|153:287,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,167,94624,1,2,1:2:0:0:
361,277,94796,1,2,0:0:0:0:
445,135,94967,2,0,L|437:35,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,20,95310,5,2,1:2:0:0:
241,43,95396,1,2,0:2:0:0:
199,46,95482,1,2,0:2:0:0:
159,36,95567,1,2,0:2:0:0:
122,15,95653,2,0,L|121:113,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,302,95996,1,2,1:2:0:0:
20,170,96167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
210,204,96339,2,0,P|271:187|351:194,1,123.75000377655,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
405,224,96682,6,0,L|394:341,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,301,97024,2,0,L|221:418,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
59,378,97367,2,0,L|70:261,1,82.5000025177003,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,301,97710,2,0,L|243:184,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,106,98053,6,0,B|376:99|344:148|440:135,1,120,8|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
495,199,98567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
446,289,98739,2,0,L|362:299,1,60,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,310,99082,1,8,3:0:0:0:
330,183,99253,1,0,1:0:0:0:
169,219,99424,6,0,P|123:206|64:204,1,82.5000025177003,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
9,57,99767,2,0,P|55:44|114:42,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,122,100110,1,2,1:2:0:0:
323,25,100282,1,2,0:0:0:0:
398,171,100453,2,0,L|380:269,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,344,100796,5,2,1:2:0:0:
207,361,100882,1,2,0:2:0:0:
166,358,100967,1,2,0:2:0:0:
127,343,101053,1,2,0:2:0:0:
96,314,101139,2,0,L|-1:323,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,227,101482,1,2,1:2:0:0:
245,344,101653,1,2,0:0:0:0:
323,199,101824,2,0,B|350:136|301:132|329:68,1,123.75000377655,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,24,102167,6,0,P|220:45|162:49,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,166,102510,2,0,L|159:159,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,291,102853,1,2,1:2:0:0:
126,258,103024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,135,103196,2,0,P|293:144|345:140,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
487,93,103539,5,2,1:2:0:0:
503,130,103624,1,2,0:2:0:0:
501,171,103710,1,2,0:2:0:0:
488,210,103796,1,2,0:2:0:0:
464,244,103882,2,0,L|471:333,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,237,104224,1,2,1:2:0:0:
391,123,104396,1,2,0:0:0:0:
219,181,104567,2,0,P|205:243|228:312,1,123.75000377655,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,351,104910,5,0,1:0:0:0:
455,275,105082,1,2,0:0:0:0:
375,130,105253,2,0,L|381:22,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
477,181,105596,1,2,1:2:0:0:
353,246,105767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,356,105939,2,0,P|439:369|382:368,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,292,106282,5,2,1:2:0:0:
211,282,106367,1,2,0:2:0:0:
169,284,106453,1,2,0:2:0:0:
131,302,106539,1,2,0:2:0:0:
102,330,106624,2,0,L|102:233,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,70,106967,1,2,1:2:0:0:
26,175,107139,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,148,107310,2,0,P|247:135|323:143,1,123.75000377655,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,130,107653,6,0,P|418:96|435:54,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,207,107996,2,0,P|373:247|401:283,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
511,158,108339,1,2,1:2:0:0:
433,60,108510,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,30,108682,2,0,L|216:39,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,127,109024,5,2,0:0:0:0:
115,153,109110,1,2,0:0:0:0:
129,180,109196,1,2,0:0:0:0:
115,207,109282,1,2,0:0:0:0:
129,232,109367,2,0,L|121:321,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,366,109710,1,2,0:0:0:0:
311,346,109882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,261,110053,2,0,P|369:207|319:155,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,158,110396,6,0,L|314:96,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,190,110739,2,0,L|192:143,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,266,111082,2,0,L|143:262,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,346,111424,2,0,L|184:387,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
49,365,111767,6,0,B|50:350|50:350|42:341|42:341|47:332|47:332|38:325|38:325|44:319|44:319|35:311|35:311|40:300|40:300|32:292|32:292|36:281|36:281|26:269|26:269|30:249,1,112.500004291535,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
31,160,112110,2,0,P|40:129|42:102,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,149,112453,2,0,P|155:133|175:115,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,211,112796,2,0,P|229:219|256:221,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,192,113139,6,0,L|346:133,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,85,113482,1,0,1:0:0:0:
423,85,113653,1,0,0:0:0:0:
479,160,113824,2,0,L|472:219,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,267,114167,1,0,1:0:0:0:
396,267,114339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,192,114510,6,0,P|300:192|265:201,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,255,114853,2,0,P|188:251|161:252,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
61,271,115196,2,0,B|62:256|62:256|54:247|54:247|59:238|59:238|50:231|50:231|56:225|56:225|47:217|47:217|52:206|52:206|44:198|44:198|48:187|48:187|38:175|38:175|42:155,1,112.500004291535,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
82,37,115539,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,159,115710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,59,115882,6,0,P|296:79|384:56,1,134.999995880127,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,9,116567,1,2,0:0:0:0:
495,178,116910,2,0,B|509:245|458:243|479:327,1,134.999995880127,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,374,117596,1,0,1:0:0:0:
240,320,117939,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,320,118110,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,320,118282,2,0,L|198:325,3,22.4999993133545,2|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,342,118624,6,0,P|192:302|136:211,1,134.999995880127,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
61,206,119310,1,2,0:0:0:0:
177,68,119653,2,0,B|258:59|224:108|312:96,1,134.999995880127,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,83,120339,2,0,L|404:143,1,44.999998626709,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,220,120682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,220,120853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
278,87,121367,6,0,P|225:136|253:226,1,157.499995193482,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,303,122053,2,0,L|109:298,1,52.4999983978272,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,241,122396,1,0,1:0:0:0:
45,241,122739,6,0,B|24:185|66:187|33:121,1,104.999996795654,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
78,57,123253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
163,117,123424,2,0,L|218:113,1,52.4999983978272,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,107,123767,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,107,124110,6,0,P|320:156|311:213,1,104.999996795654,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,279,124624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,354,124796,2,0,L|402:347,1,52.4999983978272,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
487,330,125139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
487,330,125482,6,0,L|495:211,1,104.999996795654,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
494,225,126167,1,8,0:0:0:0:
406,166,126339,2,0,B|360:192|360:192|290:181,1,104.999996795654,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,109,126853,6,0,B|157:94|166:145|77:123,1,157.499995193482,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,32,127539,1,8,0:0:0:0:
28,32,127882,2,0,L|88:23,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,66,128224,6,0,P|184:117|171:170,1,104.999996795654,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
115,238,128739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,309,128910,1,8,0:0:0:0:
191,309,129253,2,0,L|255:303,1,52.4999983978272,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,296,129596,6,0,B|359:239|359:239|342:196|342:196|358:135,1,157.499995193482,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,43,130282,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,43,130624,1,0,1:0:0:0:
193,132,130967,6,0,L|119:139,1,52.4999983978272,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,213,131310,2,0,L|168:220,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,229,131653,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,141,131824,2,0,B|306:107|306:107|291:23,1,104.999996795654,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,49,132339,6,0,P|139:61|74:38,1,112.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
9,97,133024,2,0,L|14:139,1,37.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
23,223,133367,1,0,1:0:0:0:
98,172,133539,1,8,0:0:0:0:
119,289,133710,6,0,B|237:303|237:303|298:274,1,180,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,211,134396,1,8,0:0:0:0:
393,211,134739,1,2,0:0:0:0:
177,104,135082,6,0,P|131:136|44:123,1,120,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,37,135596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,6,135767,2,0,L|277:14,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,98,136110,2,0,L|267:106,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
223,196,136453,6,0,P|217:251|250:312,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
245,307,137139,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,348,137310,2,0,B|67:330|75:371|4:352,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,235,137824,6,0,B|60:191|60:191|42:41,1,180,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,6,138510,1,8,0:0:0:0:
150,6,138853,2,0,L|160:81,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,172,139196,6,0,P|267:180|328:159,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
390,79,139710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,164,139882,1,8,0:0:0:0:
475,164,140224,2,0,L|469:231,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,324,140567,6,0,B|347:312|347:312|264:332|264:332|296:286,1,180,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,201,141253,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,201,141596,2,0,L|343:139,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,30,141939,6,0,P|265:25|227:30,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,90,142282,2,0,P|125:95|87:90,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
13,34,142624,1,8,0:0:0:0:
2,153,142796,2,0,B|13:270|13:270|80:216,1,180,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
89,205,155482,5,8,0:0:0:0:
89,205,155653,2,0,P|53:183|-2:176,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,136,155996,2,0,P|159:93|137:42,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,165,156339,2,0,P|286:144|319:100,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,257,156682,2,0,P|304:268|359:261,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,237,157024,5,0,1:0:0:0:
511,127,157196,1,2,0:0:0:0:
378,76,157367,2,0,L|384:-19,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,118,157710,1,0,1:0:0:0:
402,166,157882,1,2,0:0:0:0:
343,295,158053,2,0,L|254:290,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,227,158396,5,0,1:0:0:0:
239,139,158567,1,2,0:0:0:0:
237,289,158739,2,0,L|228:373,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,321,159082,1,0,1:0:0:0:
157,227,159253,1,2,0:0:0:0:
12,188,159424,2,0,L|26:93,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,44,159767,5,0,1:0:0:0:
157,227,159938,1,2,0:0:0:0:
322,123,160109,1,0,1:0:0:0:
126,111,160281,1,2,0:0:0:0:
278,236,160452,2,0,L|358:226,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,44,160796,2,0,B|179:19|179:19|109:36,1,112.500004291535,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
18,146,161139,5,0,3:0:0:0:
10,177,161224,1,0,3:0:0:0:
10,210,161310,1,0,3:0:0:0:
20,241,161396,1,0,3:0:0:0:
40,266,161482,2,0,L|103:261,3,41.2500012588501,0|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
152,221,161824,5,0,3:0:0:0:
184,229,161910,1,0,3:0:0:0:
212,246,161996,1,0,3:0:0:0:
232,271,162082,1,0,3:0:0:0:
244,301,162167,2,0,L|298:296,3,41.2500012588501,0|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
347,242,162510,5,0,3:0:0:0:
363,213,162596,1,0,3:0:0:0:
367,180,162682,1,0,3:0:0:0:
357,148,162767,1,0,3:0:0:0:
340,119,162853,2,0,L|343:57,3,41.2500012588501,0|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
411,32,163196,5,0,3:0:0:0:
442,40,163282,1,0,3:0:0:0:
468,58,163367,1,0,3:0:0:0:
486,85,163453,1,0,3:0:0:0:
500,114,163539,2,0,L|497:176,3,41.2500012588501,0|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
481,236,163882,6,0,P|427:249|378:241,1,82.5000025177003,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
347,183,164139,2,0,P|293:196|244:188,1,82.5000025177003,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
185,179,164396,2,0,L|174:288,1,82.5000025177003,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
93,261,164653,2,0,L|82:152,1,82.5000025177003,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
40,108,164910,2,0,L|53:59,1,41.2500012588501,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
134,63,165082,2,0,L|182:49,1,41.2500012588501,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
230,113,165253,6,0,L|328:127,1,82.5000025177003,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,238,165596,2,0,L|426:293,3,41.2500012588501,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,330,165939,5,2,3:0:0:0:
333,334,166024,1,0,3:0:0:0:
304,339,166110,1,0,3:0:0:0:
275,342,166196,1,0,3:0:0:0:
237,324,166282,5,2,3:0:0:0:
208,328,166367,1,0,3:0:0:0:
179,333,166453,1,0,3:0:0:0:
150,336,166539,1,0,3:0:0:0:
115,313,166624,6,0,P|100:272|105:211,1,82.5000025177003,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,113,166967,2,0,P|245:154|240:215,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,365,167310,2,0,L|324:369,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,381,167567,2,0,L|432:377,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
441,364,167824,1,2,1:2:0:0:
505,211,167996,5,2,1:2:0:0:
381,256,168167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,96,168339,2,0,L|414:6,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,60,168682,2,0,P|237:98|247:157,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,158,168939,2,0,P|276:196|266:255,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,260,169196,1,0,1:0:0:0:
142,374,169367,6,0,L|44:367,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
3,212,169710,2,0,L|101:205,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,81,170053,2,0,P|225:65|297:68,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,79,170310,2,0,P|325:95|397:92,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,87,170567,1,0,1:0:0:0:
264,186,170739,5,0,1:0:0:0:
193,81,170910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,226,171082,2,0,B|111:258|111:258|121:282|121:282|115:311|115:311|127:348,1,123.75000377655,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,356,171424,5,2,3:0:0:0:
186,368,171510,1,0,3:0:0:0:
219,365,171596,1,0,3:0:0:0:
250,355,171682,1,0,3:0:0:0:
273,321,171767,5,2,3:0:0:0:
303,309,171853,1,0,3:0:0:0:
336,312,171939,1,0,3:0:0:0:
367,322,172025,1,0,3:0:0:0:
398,348,172110,6,0,L|407:252,1,82.5000025177003,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,141,172453,2,0,L|281:237,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,172796,2,0,P|302:30|247:28,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,40,173053,2,0,P|200:62|145:64,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,60,173310,1,2,1:2:0:0:
39,194,173482,5,2,1:2:0:0:
166,162,173653,1,2,0:0:0:0:
9,85,173824,2,0,L|15:2,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,157,174167,2,0,L|192:239,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,266,174424,2,0,P|252:275|303:262,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,258,174682,1,0,1:0:0:0:
378,136,174853,6,0,L|459:128,1,67.4999979400635,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,83,175196,1,2,1:2:0:0:
322,208,175367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,177,175539,1,2,1:2:0:0:
222,302,175710,2,0,L|299:293,2,67.4999979400635,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,167,176224,6,0,P|96:131|101:94,1,60,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,121,176567,2,0,P|245:104|275:82,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,190,176910,2,0,P|343:203|380:208,1,60,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,311,177253,2,0,P|349:345|371:375,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
491,261,177596,6,0,L|496:151,1,82.5000025177003,4|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,120,177939,2,0,L|344:230,1,82.5000025177003,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,54,178282,2,0,P|376:25|324:19,1,82.5000025177003,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,18,178539,2,0,P|275:47|223:53,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,49,178796,1,2,1:2:0:0:
29,13,178967,5,2,1:2:0:0:
78,179,179139,1,2,0:0:0:0:
215,49,179310,2,0,L|231:148,1,82.5000025177003,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,241,179653,2,0,L|363:159,1,82.5000025177003,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,134,179910,2,0,P|419:134|457:150,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
471,172,180167,1,2,1:2:0:0:
333,264,180339,6,0,P|290:264|252:248,1,82.5000025177003,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,307,180682,2,0,P|111:269|144:244,1,82.5000025177003,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,76,181024,2,0,P|195:113|200:154,1,82.5000025177003,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,174,181282,2,0,L|316:156,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,153,181539,1,2,1:2:0:0:
426,283,181710,5,0,1:0:0:0:
508,158,181882,1,2,0:0:0:0:
351,237,182053,2,0,B|328:281|350:326|350:326|303:306,1,123.75000377655,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,301,182396,5,2,3:0:0:0:
257,293,182482,1,0,3:0:0:0:
224,297,182567,1,0,3:0:0:0:
196,315,182653,1,0,3:0:0:0:
160,336,182739,5,2,3:0:0:0:
127,344,182825,1,0,3:0:0:0:
94,340,182910,1,0,3:0:0:0:
66,322,182996,1,0,3:0:0:0:
37,292,183082,6,0,L|46:191,1,82.5000025177003,4|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,82,183424,2,0,L|158:183,1,82.5000025177003,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,276,183767,1,0,1:0:0:0:
277,122,183939,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,266,184110,2,0,L|214:360,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,372,184453,6,0,L|412:278,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,115,184796,1,0,1:0:0:0:
509,234,184967,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,177,185139,2,0,P|299:190|234:187,1,82.5000025177003,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,168,185482,2,0,L|106:17,1,123.75000377655,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,63,185824,5,8,3:0:0:0:
256,192,185910,12,0,188224,0:0:0:0:
194,192,188567,6,0,L|66:200,1,89.9999972534181,6|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,94,188910,1,0,1:0:0:0:
298,249,189082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
430,128,189253,2,0,P|436:89|420:35,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,249,189596,2,0,P|292:288|308:342,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,322,189939,6,0,P|446:328|399:284,1,134.999995880127,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,251,190282,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,336,190453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,161,190624,2,0,L|274:61,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,242,190967,2,0,L|152:342,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,175,191310,6,0,P|287:158|234:170,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,292,191653,1,0,1:0:0:0:
445,129,191824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,272,191996,2,0,L|186:268,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,135,192339,2,0,L|148:131,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,62,192682,6,0,B|331:100|331:100|306:209,1,134.999995880127,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,272,193024,1,0,1:0:0:0:
221,123,193196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,129,193367,2,0,L|393:239,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,360,193710,2,0,L|281:250,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,194,194053,6,0,P|61:194|23:216,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,298,194396,1,0,1:0:0:0:
222,130,194567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
91,289,194739,2,0,L|106:382,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,220,195082,1,0,1:0:0:0:
76,190,195253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,99,195424,6,0,P|347:97|418:156,1,134.999995880127,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,176,195767,2,0,L|498:73,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,280,196110,2,0,L|400:383,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,188,196453,2,0,L|284:85,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,245,196796,6,0,P|116:257|58:203,1,134.999995880127,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
21,140,197139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
0,329,197310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,176,197482,2,0,L|143:81,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,18,197824,2,0,L|315:113,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,286,198167,6,0,P|387:288|437:267,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,193,198510,1,0,1:0:0:0:
290,371,198682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,181,198853,1,2,1:2:0:0:
236,293,199024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,112,199196,1,0,1:0:0:0:
177,199,199367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
89,188,199539,6,0,B|64:255|110:244|84:316,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,280,200053,1,0,1:0:0:0:
177,360,200224,6,0,L|289:366,1,89.9999972534181,6|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,223,200567,2,0,L|294:229,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,251,200910,2,0,P|507:206|479:152,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,104,201253,1,0,1:0:0:0:
406,223,201424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
391,14,201596,2,0,L|277:3,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,102,201939,2,0,P|148:120|206:119,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,200,202282,6,0,P|404:263|360:354,1,134.999995880127,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,371,202624,1,0,1:0:0:0:
481,354,202796,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,247,202967,2,0,L|166:238,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,72,203310,2,0,L|144:63,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,49,203653,6,0,P|369:90|376:159,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,159,203996,1,0,1:0:0:0:
276,247,204167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
123,64,204339,2,0,L|16:55,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,140,204682,2,0,L|394:131,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
494,318,205024,6,0,P|449:334|396:334,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,238,205367,1,0,1:0:0:0:
281,384,205539,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,191,205710,2,0,L|331:73,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,238,206053,1,0,1:0:0:0:
340,282,206224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
113,342,206396,6,0,L|2:333,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,132,206739,1,0,1:0:0:0:
260,290,206910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,97,207082,2,0,L|350:-14,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,132,207424,2,0,L|134:243,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,207767,12,2,208796,0:0:0:0:
Chewin
Hello Sakurauchi Riko! Your map has been chosen from my Queue.

General

  1. I guess there is something wrong with your folder because everytime I try to open it with Aibat I get 2398472389472893478923 error pages: https://puu.sh/xolDn.png Try to make a full submit again :\ Maybe something went wrong with the last one. It works on all folders except yours xD
IceKalt's Easy

  1. 00:44:396 (1) - If I was you I would start this spinner 1/2 later because the highest pitch is actually on that downbeat and it would even be consistent with next one: 00:50:053 (1) - and 01:22:967 (1) - that doesn't start on the red tick (because the red tick has the same intensity of the first one). This applies to the next 02:35:482 (1) for the same reason
  2. 01:20:224 (1) - This NC should be removed for consistency
  3. 03:12:682 (6) - (very nazi) Try to improve this blanket
  4. 03:29:139 - What about adding a repeating 1/1 slider here? It would close the map better
Normal

  1. 00:22:453 (1) - What about removing this circle for consistency? You didn't use it on next parts, like at 00:25:196
  2. 00:48:682 (4) - (Just a personal taste) This slider is cool but it touches accuracy bar actually (you can check it while testing). Try to fix this?
  3. 01:22:796 (1) - Start this spinner 1/2 later like Easy diff and for the same reason I said above about 00:44:396 (1)
  4. 03:14:053 (1) - Same of 00:48:682 (4) - :'C
  5. 03:20:053 (1) - Same of 00:22:453 (1) -
Hard

  1. 00:14:396 (1) - (nazi) Try to stack this better
  2. 00:59:653 (6) - I would set NC here to avoid this long combo. If you accept don't forget to apply this to 01:05:139 (6) - as well and on next ones
  3. 01:13:025 (4,6) - Accuracy bar :''(
Akitoshi's Insane

  1. This BG is cute but doesn't totally fit with others xD
  2. 01:17:482 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Is it my impression or these squares are not perfect? xD Can you make them with "Create polygon circle" option maybe? They don't look perfect to me idk
  3. 03:03:767 (3,4,5) - Why this sudden rhythm change? I do not understand why you decided to not use the 1/4 sliders here anymore like you did for the previous part: 02:58:282 (3,4,5) - and so on. Expecially here: 03:05:139 (4,5) - the rhythm looks so random imo, those sliders were cool
Extra

  1. 00:17:824 (4,5) - Why this sudden and unnecessary spacing? I would fix it tbh I see no reason to make it like that. Also, I would reduce the (4) by 1/4 instead to keep this snap
  2. 00:54:167 (5) - What about adding NC on this? It looks cool xD Same for 02:45:253 (5)
  3. 01:13:367 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this linear, the (5) is placed a bit below for mistake i guess
  4. 01:39:596 (3) - Move this a little further below because it's covered with hp bar
  5. 02:13:710 (1,1) - Everyslider with this SV are linear why are these curved like that? I would make it linear for consistency D;
  6. 03:01:539 (5) - Shouldn't a NC be set here for consistency?
  7. 03:25:024 (5) - NC? Check more carefully this last kiai part because NCs are kinda fked :\
Welp interesting mapset. Mine are just small suggestions, I hope they will help you.
Good luck!
Icekalt
hey ~

Chewin wrote:

IceKalt's Easy

00:44:396 (1) - If I was you I would start this spinner 1/2 later because the highest pitch is actually on that downbeat and it would even be consistent with next one: 00:50:053 (1) - and 01:22:967 (1) - that doesn't start on the red tick (because the red tick has the same intensity of the first one). This applies to the next 02:35:482 (1) for the same reason at 00:44:396 (1) - there is a kick where i started that spinner but that isnt the case for the other 2 spinners so i wouldnt speak here for consistency problems ~
01:20:224 (1) - This NC should be removed for consistency oups
03:12:682 (6) - (very nazi) Try to improve this blanket did see more nazi things than that ~
03:29:139 - What about adding a repeating 1/1 slider here? It would close the map better nah i want to have consistency with the noraml diff^^
Thanks for the mod ~ :)

rgftrngtr
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 188482
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11653,22624,25367,28110,30853,55539,66510,77482,88453,99424,115882,121367,124110,126853,129596,133710,135082,137824,140567,144682,155653,166624,177596,188567,199539
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Candy (feat. Sara)
TitleUnicode:Candy (feat. Sara)
Artist:S3RL
ArtistUnicode:S3RL
Creator:Sakurauchi Riko
Version:Icekalt's Easy
Source:
Tags:phyloukz akitoshi icekalt
BeatmapID:1364698
BeatmapSetID:643185

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2.5
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"das andere bild.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,34967,42956
2,110396,119927
2,144682,154042
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
682,342.857142857143,4,2,1,50,1,0
88453,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
98053,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
99424,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
109024,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
166624,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
176224,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
177596,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
185824,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
188567,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
199539,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
200224,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
207767,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 237,197,245
Combo2 : 194,162,131
Combo3 : 173,86,160
Combo4 : 151,131,231

[HitObjects]
313,207,11653,6,0,P|260:157|252:65,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,12,12682,1,2,0:0:0:0:
399,5,13024,2,0,P|452:55|460:147,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,310,14396,2,0,P|347:357|265:338,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,269,15424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
175,201,15767,2,0,P|97:191|33:236,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,322,17139,6,0,B|262:235|262:235|262:177,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,102,18167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
193,47,18510,2,0,P|126:74|88:154,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,189,19882,2,0,B|335:181|335:181|362:190|362:190|426:148,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,70,20910,1,2,0:0:0:0:
341,16,21253,2,0,B|268:24|268:24|241:15|241:15|177:57,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,222,22624,6,0,P|236:285|325:300,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,237,23653,1,0,1:0:0:0:
349,152,23996,2,0,P|310:169|284:210,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,60,25367,2,0,P|120:38|39:79,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
42,156,26396,1,0,1:0:0:0:
106,217,26739,2,0,P|127:180|124:132,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,336,28110,6,0,L|398:330,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,254,29139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
369,201,29482,2,0,L|289:198,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,82,30853,2,0,L|75:88,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,164,31882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
104,217,32224,2,0,L|184:220,1,80,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
252,276,32910,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44396,12,0,49710,1:0:0:0:
256,192,50053,12,2,54167,3:0:0:0:
210,252,55539,6,0,L|30:214,2,160,0|2|2,1:0|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
297,260,57253,1,2,1:2:0:0:
384,247,57596,2,0,L|479:213,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
455,131,58282,2,0,P|414:91|297:54,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
459,221,59996,1,2,1:2:0:0:
456,308,60339,2,0,P|424:336|374:349,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
305,318,61024,6,0,B|228:281|228:281|220:246|195:213,2,160,0|2|2,1:0|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
377,264,62739,1,2,1:2:0:0:
409,182,63082,2,0,L|410:87,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
340,47,63767,2,0,B|301:10|301:10|181:17,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
328,134,65482,1,2,0:2:0:0:
256,185,65824,1,2,0:0:0:0:
90,197,66510,6,0,P|52:240|69:337,2,160,0|2|2,1:0|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
152,258,68224,1,2,1:2:0:0:
230,298,68567,2,0,P|268:306|307:297,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
352,221,69253,2,0,P|395:284|372:358,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
264,211,70967,1,2,1:2:0:0:
176,232,71310,2,0,P|175:193|192:157,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
273,122,71996,6,0,L|366:107,1,80,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
349,21,72682,2,0,L|256:6,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
186,34,73367,2,0,P|122:80|112:191,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
82,241,74396,1,2,1:2:0:0:
146,300,74739,6,0,B|174:347|174:347|201:350|201:350|234:375|288:369,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,215,76453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
227,148,76796,1,2,0:0:0:0:
389,110,77482,6,0,L|434:276,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
343,274,78510,1,0,1:0:0:0:
257,254,78853,2,0,L|215:99,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
389,110,80224,2,0,P|470:161|492:236,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
433,285,81253,1,0,1:0:0:0:
359,236,81596,2,0,P|285:215|200:238,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82967,12,2,87082,1:2:0:0:
201,52,88453,6,0,B|179:113|206:168|206:168|184:217|184:217|221:230|237:268,1,240,4|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
268,340,89824,2,0,L|377:366,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
356,270,90510,2,0,L|438:248,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
487,179,91196,2,0,B|471:132|499:86|499:86|415:119|352:74,1,240,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
280,45,92567,2,0,P|226:39|186:52,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
197,133,93253,2,0,P|147:154|119:186,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
93,252,93939,6,0,B|136:323|136:323|217:297|302:323,1,240,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
376,339,95310,2,0,L|469:336,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
431,251,95996,2,0,L|351:253,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
284,195,96682,2,0,P|248:155|237:110,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
282,54,97367,2,0,P|318:94|329:139,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
373,192,98053,2,0,P|306:279|235:270,1,160,8|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
115,178,99424,6,0,B|137:143|181:137|181:137|231:172|291:160|324:117,1,240,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
349,33,100796,2,0,P|401:25|451:34,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
440,115,101482,2,0,P|479:149|504:193,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
504,259,102167,2,0,B|424:266|424:266|362:308|362:308|259:316,1,240,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
255,229,103539,2,0,L|346:223,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
414,177,104224,2,0,L|505:171,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
504,259,104910,6,0,P|464:323|303:358,1,240,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
246,301,106282,2,0,P|192:292|151:304,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
96,347,106967,2,0,P|56:352|17:342,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
1,255,107653,2,0,L|28:166,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
104,141,108339,2,0,L|127:217,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
163,297,109024,6,0,P|213:318|190:200,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,323,121367,6,0,P|132:352|222:315,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,247,122396,1,0,1:0:0:0:
305,173,122739,2,0,P|375:145|462:159,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,332,124110,2,0,P|385:343|310:320,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,247,125138,1,0,1:0:0:0:
237,160,125482,2,0,B|228:125|208:110|208:110|252:83|323:89,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
467,20,126853,6,0,B|503:59|503:59|495:168,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,235,127882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
477,314,128224,2,0,P|421:320|352:239,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,88,129596,2,0,P|202:62|123:93,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,163,130624,1,0,1:0:0:0:
101,250,130967,2,0,B|127:275|167:271|167:271|163:294|163:294|207:290|234:311,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,35,133710,6,0,L|217:38,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,130,135082,2,0,P|383:189|358:295,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,338,136110,1,0,1:0:0:0:
215,369,136453,2,0,P|193:310|218:204,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,130,137824,6,0,B|394:97|445:95|445:95|480:63|480:27,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,4,138853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,39,139196,2,0,B|272:54|248:100|248:100|204:118|172:103,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,198,140567,2,0,P|32:268|101:338,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,308,141596,1,0,1:0:0:0:
254,270,141939,2,0,P|224:235|110:247,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,155482,12,0,160796,1:0:0:0:
256,192,161139,12,2,165253,3:0:0:0:
406,32,166624,6,0,L|521:49,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
453,125,167310,2,0,L|338:142,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,184,167996,2,0,P|323:241|370:257,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
295,96,169024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,17,169367,6,0,L|158:34,1,80,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
133,109,170053,2,0,L|211:122,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,96,170739,2,0,P|327:69|342:9,2,80,0|0|2,1:0|1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
146,190,172110,6,0,L|173:285,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
254,285,172796,2,0,L|275:208,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,135,173482,2,0,P|185:107|169:67,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
313,131,174510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,106,174853,6,0,P|421:168|389:273,1,160,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
343,324,175882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
258,347,176224,2,0,P|234:285|266:180,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
313,131,177253,1,0,1:0:0:0:
251,68,177596,6,0,L|168:52,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
153,139,178282,2,0,L|75:154,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,234,178967,2,0,P|37:280|55:327,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
126,232,179996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,269,180339,6,0,L|302:279,1,80,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
325,199,181024,2,0,L|405:190,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,240,181710,2,0,P|487:303|470:343,2,80,0|0|2,1:0|1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
365,102,183082,6,0,L|267:93,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,35,183767,2,0,L|122:44,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,103,184453,2,0,P|36:139|19:182,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
160,127,185482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,185824,12,8,187196,3:0:0:0:
114,358,188567,6,0,P|81:292|96:203,1,160,6|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
176,179,189596,1,0,1:0:0:0:
261,158,189939,2,0,B|293:138|293:138|296:47|269:8,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
104,60,191310,2,0,B|86:100|86:100|144:137|177:180,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
231,246,192339,1,0,1:0:0:0:
312,280,192682,2,0,P|258:329|166:305,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
144,142,194053,6,0,P|72:174|-4:134,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
74,88,195082,1,0,1:0:0:0:
157,56,195424,2,0,P|215:94|218:187,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
108,312,196796,2,0,L|287:261,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
304,191,197824,1,0,1:0:0:0:
345,113,198167,2,0,L|498:156,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
175,23,200224,6,0,L|254:12,1,80,6|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,36,200910,2,0,P|318:87|326:122,2,80,2|0|2,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
481,134,202282,2,0,P|454:207|380:246,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
309,199,203310,1,0,1:0:0:0:
249,133,203653,2,0,P|287:112|326:113,2,80,2|0|2,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
177,290,205024,6,0,P|259:316|339:280,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
393,235,206053,1,0,1:0:0:0:
472,199,206396,2,0,P|475:264|463:291,2,80,2|0|2,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
340,82,207767,6,0,B|288:68|288:68|265:94|265:94|184:64|103:113,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Sakurauchi Riko

Chewin wrote:

Hello Sakurauchi Riko! Your map has been chosen from my Queue.

General

  1. I guess there is something wrong with your folder because everytime I try to open it with Aibat I get 2398472389472893478923 error pages: https://puu.sh/xolDn.png Try to make a full submit again :\ Maybe something went wrong with the last one. It works on all folders except yours xD uhm.. i dont even know this program you tried to use >< i guess i make full submit again when more issues happen. thats really weird, never had issues before with this
Normal

  1. 00:22:453 (1) - What about removing this circle for consistency? You didn't use it on next parts, like at 00:25:196 but the sound here is much stronger than on the 2nd link of yours
  2. 00:48:682 (4) - (Just a personal taste) This slider is cool but it touches accuracy bar actually (you can check it while testing). Try to fix this? yes this sucks, fixed it
  3. 01:22:796 (1) - Start this spinner 1/2 later like Easy diff and for the same reason I said above about 00:44:396 (1) i represent the weird bass noise in the background with this spinner, and this noise actually starts on the red tick so idk... will keep for now and see what others say
  4. 03:14:053 (1) - Same of 00:48:682 (4) - :'C
  5. 03:20:053 (1) - Same of 00:22:453 (1) - this is also stornger sound than the one i didnt map
Hard

  1. 00:14:396 (1) - (nazi) Try to stack this better did
  2. 00:59:653 (6) - I would set NC here to avoid this long combo. If you accept don't forget to apply this to 01:05:139 (6) - as well and on next ones yes sure
  3. 01:13:025 (4,6) - Accuracy bar :''( fix

Extra

  1. 00:17:824 (4,5) - Why this sudden and unnecessary spacing? I would fix it tbh I see no reason to make it like that. Also, I would reduce the (4) by 1/4 instead to keep this snap alright removed the 1/4 snap
  2. 00:54:167 (5) - What about adding NC on this? It looks cool xD Same for 02:45:253 (5) i dont think it sounds that different to deserve a NC, imo
  3. 01:13:367 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this linear, the (5) is placed a bit below for mistake i guess oh yes, fix
  4. 01:39:596 (3) - Move this a little further below because it's covered with hp bar yes
  5. 02:13:710 (1,1) - Everyslider with this SV are linear why are these curved like that? I would make it linear for consistency D; this is only time where 2 very slow sv slider are very close to each other in timeline, so i make it special with different shape and symmetry
  6. 03:01:539 (5) - Shouldn't a NC be set here for consistency? i dont think so D: looks all consistent here to me
  7. 03:25:024 (5) - NC? Check more carefully this last kiai part because NCs are kinda fked :\ oh yes, its consistent now xD
Welp interesting mapset. Mine are just small suggestions, I hope they will help you.
Good luck!
Thank you for the mod! :) much appreciated!!
Kotori-Chan
For the freaking love of S3RL ~

Normal

00:14:396 (1,2,3) - would make this a 1/1 reverse slider instead and add a circle here 00:15:424 (8) - for whatever reason this suits so much better imo :?
00:17:139 (1,2,3) - same on this one
01:04:795 (2) - i think a circle is alot better, slider isnt really needed^, circle is totally enough !
01:10:282 (2) - ^^^^
01:15:767 (2) - ^^^^^^

man this song is giving me a hard time modding or probably because i havent modded something since quite awhile

Hard

00:16:796 (4,1) - you know ~ on the patterns earlier that overlaps you did arent really a problem but on this one it felt so freaking weird
but i think it is because of this very very very very very very little jump you gotta do onto the next note 00:16:453 (3,4) -
i think unstacking them 00:16:796 (4,1) - would fix it but then it wouldnt really suit to the patterns earlier....so idk man~ maybe you know something ;w;

00:21:253 (5,1) - also really really wonder what your explanation is why this one is so far away because i think that totally isnt necessary ~
00:22:110 (1,2) - here ~ how about stacking these ? imo it kinda plays better than having that spacing maybe create something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9001411 i think having that would actually be pretty cool :3

01:31:538 (2,3,4) - would you mind explaining why these are so spaced and on the following stuff too ? i really tried understanding whai that is so but seriously couldnt understand ;w;

Since you said only normal and hard i guess thats it ~
The lack of custom hitsounds kinda hurt me as a person who puts alot effort into custom hitsounds, it could be so beautiful ;w; !!!
But yeah ~ Sry for small mod but this thing really gave me a hard time ;;;;;; still wanted to try helping somehow
Good luck with this thingy ! hope mod was atleast somewhat helpful :3
02:54:853 - seriously...last diff name should be its gonna get messy

Edit: I didnt even notice, 444th post \:3/
Topic Starter
Sakurauchi Riko

Kotori-Chan wrote:

For the freaking love of S3RL ~

Normal

00:14:396 (1,2,3) - would make this a 1/1 reverse slider instead and add a circle here 00:15:424 (8) - for whatever reason this suits so much better imo :?
00:17:139 (1,2,3) - same on this one
01:04:795 (2) - i think a circle is alot better, slider isnt really needed^, circle is totally enough !
01:10:282 (2) - ^^^^
01:15:767 (2) - ^^^^^^ changed all of those, nice idea

man this song is giving me a hard time modding or probably because i havent modded something since quite awhile

Hard

00:16:796 (4,1) - you know ~ on the patterns earlier that overlaps you did arent really a problem but on this one it felt so freaking weird
but i think it is because of this very very very very very very little jump you gotta do onto the next note 00:16:453 (3,4) -
i think unstacking them 00:16:796 (4,1) - would fix it but then it wouldnt really suit to the patterns earlier....so idk man~ maybe you know something ;w; i stack everything in this section that has 1/1 gap, so i think this is no problem

00:21:253 (5,1) - also really really wonder what your explanation is why this one is so far away because i think that totally isnt necessary ~ but this is spaced with my default ds? >< idk what problem that is D:
00:22:110 (1,2) - here ~ how about stacking these ? imo it kinda plays better than having that spacing maybe create something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9001411 i think having that would actually be pretty cool :3 stzacked it

01:31:538 (2,3,4) - would you mind explaining why these are so spaced and on the following stuff too ? i really tried understanding whai that is so but seriously couldnt understand ;w; since this is the kiai and the music is a lot intenser i'd like to have some difficult spike here, just for the sake of shopwing progression in the map

Since you said only normal and hard i guess thats it ~
The lack of custom hitsounds kinda hurt me as a person who puts alot effort into custom hitsounds, it could be so beautiful ;w; !!!
But yeah ~ Sry for small mod but this thing really gave me a hard time ;;;;;; still wanted to try helping somehow
Good luck with this thingy ! hope mod was atleast somewhat helpful :3
02:54:853 - seriously...last diff name should be its gonna get messy
still thinking about a nice diff name >< maybe idk XD

thanks for the mod!! really appreciated
Ametrin
nm here

normal and hard as you wish

[Normal]

00:22:453 (1) - i don't think this is strong enough to put a note here
00:33:082 (4) - this slider is not proper imo since i can barely here no sound at 00:33:082 - ... maybe just put a spinner here
the rhythm you put at 00:55:539 - 01:06:510 and 01:06:510 - 01:17:482 - is almost the same (or actually they are the same?), but you can feel the latter part is more intense right? so maybe you can just ignore all the drums at 00:55:539 - 01:06:510 imo

[Hard]
I'm ok with how you put all the objects, but same as normal, some part are mapped mostly the same :?


[Extra]
Diff name? i 'll say try something like candy rush xd

short mod ends here (run
Topic Starter
Sakurauchi Riko

Ametrin wrote:

nm here

normal and hard as you wish

[Normal]

00:22:453 (1) - i don't think this is strong enough to put a note here alright
00:33:082 (4) - this slider is not proper imo since i can barely here no sound at 00:33:082 - ... maybe just put a spinner here spinner is too short, and removing would feel weird since so much time until break begins, soo. the slider represents the background soudn there so it is ok i guess
the rhythm you put at 00:55:539 - 01:06:510 and 01:06:510 - 01:17:482 - is almost the same (or actually they are the same?), but you can feel the latter part is more intense right? so maybe you can just ignore all the drums at 00:55:539 - 01:06:510 imo neat suggestion, changed

[Hard]
I'm ok with how you put all the objects, but same as normal, some part are mapped mostly the same :? cuz the music is all the same xD


[Extra]
Diff name? i 'll say try something like candy rush xd idk.. i have so much trouble finding good name

short mod ends here (run
thanks for short mod! improcved the normal quite well :3
MaridiuS
Quick feedback. I won't be properly modding that since i'm really picky with aesthetics, and I'll have to get a lot picky, and I don't like expending my time on that. I just have some high standards for that idk, literally wrote a rant about aesthetics on my userpage. Not that I feel like they're terrible here, they're decent at least.

Other than aesthetics, stuff that I've noticed is that the Kiai sections are not special at all compared to the rest of the map. Just some jumps and simple rhythm. That is excluding 02:46:624 - and 02:57:596 - of course. Especially the last two having very low rhythm density and just too easy to play. And I already did a mod on some of your maps not too long ago (think it was hero yea), with you disagreeing with my emphasis suggestions, so I'm not sure if you'd agree with them here.

Basically I feel like the map in some sections is lacking contrast, since its not utilizing spacing emphasis.
  1. 00:56:224 (4,5,6) - (5) is given the biggest spacing even though it is the weakest, the other two notes have prominent vocals and also a drum hit on them.
  2. 01:29:139 (4,5,6) - Simple example is this, where (6) is much noticeable and stronger than the previous two notes, yet it is a triangular pattern meaning same spacing on all.
  3. 01:31:882 (3,4,5) - Same for (5) here, the pitch just seems louder and more prominent than others, it forms a nice melody with that pitch change in the song, while in the map it rarely represents that.
  4. 01:43:024 (4,5) - I mean you sometimes give it, but not too often.
There are countless example mostly on kiais and sections that sound similar to kiais like 00:55:539 - . But I like your technical mapping and gimmicks though.

name the diff diabetes xdd
Topic Starter
Sakurauchi Riko

MaridiuS wrote:

Quick feedback. I won't be properly modding that since i'm really picky with aesthetics, and I'll have to get a lot picky, and I don't like expending my time on that. I just have some high standards for that idk, literally wrote a rant about aesthetics on my userpage. Not that I feel like they're terrible here, they're decent at least. you know that aesthetic is like 90% subjective, and 10% objective - there is no correct and false, only a basic understanding what aesthetic is about

Other than aesthetics, stuff that I've noticed is that the Kiai sections are not special at all compared to the rest of the map. Just some jumps and simple rhythm. That is excluding 02:46:624 - and 02:57:596 - of course. Especially the last two having very low rhythm density and just too easy to play. but dont you think that the first and last 2 kiai's are really simple in rhythm and emphasis? I really cant find any spots in the music where i could diverse the rhythm or make some crazy DS emphasis structures and I already tried to increase the overall spacing for easy repeated section which fits very well imo. And the last kiai is basically dedicated to the vocal (only vocal in intense parts) so i tried to do heavy DS empahsis for example 03:09:253 (4,5,6) - this where (5) is really weak without vocal and (6) heavily emphasized because of the stack of (5) under the slidertail... if thats not spacing empahsis then i dont know :(And I already did a mod on some of your maps not too long ago (think it was hero yea), with you disagreeing with my emphasis suggestions, so I'm not sure if you'd agree with them here. i dont disagree with them, i just dont think it improves the map in its current state, I 100% get your point and agree with your point of view as i also mentioned below

Basically I feel like the map in some sections is lacking contrast, since its not utilizing spacing emphasis.
  1. 00:56:224 (4,5,6) - (5) is given the biggest spacing even though it is the weakest, the other two notes have prominent vocals and also a drum hit on them.
  2. 01:29:139 (4,5,6) - Simple example is this, where (6) is much noticeable and stronger than the previous two notes, yet it is a triangular pattern meaning same spacing on all.
  3. 01:31:882 (3,4,5) - Same for (5) here, the pitch just seems louder and more prominent than others, it forms a nice melody with that pitch change in the song, while in the map it rarely represents that.
  4. 01:43:024 (4,5) - I mean you sometimes give it, but not too often. i mean for all of them... : I feel like you pick individual spots which DS emphasis is sacrificed for a neat and organized pattern, but along with these there are so many things DS emphasized. I see a lot of maps where the DS for each indivusal sound through the WHOLE song isnt 100% correctly DS emphasized, its basically impossible. But I get your point, for me its just less important to have everything 100% accurately DS snapped although I have to say that I care much more about DS than some other maps. So yeah, i understand that this is really important for you and my mapping doesnt offer it as much as you would want to
There are countless example mostly on kiais and sections that sound similar to kiais like 00:55:539 - . But I like your technical mapping and gimmicks though.

name the diff diabetes xdd
Still, thank you for taking a look, I really appreciated it!
CircleChu
hi! yeah, right, m4m thing

add some tags i guess

Switch me!
  1. 00:15:767 (5) - considering two previous combos, you forgot one here
  2. 00:16:796 - sounds like you missed a sound here
  3. 00:20:910 (1,2) - combo says - Switch me! 8-)
  4. 00:22:282 - you can actually map this sound too
  5. 00:39:082 (5,1) - switching combos here will help reading and makes more sense to me
  6. 00:52:453 (1) - why combo here? nothing really changed that much, there is no need
  7. 01:13:024 (6) - ctrl+g flow feels better
  8. 01:32:224 (5) - same as above
  9. 02:43:540 (1) - no need to combo again
  10. 03:15:424 (1) - considering two previous combos, you don't need one here
Akitoshi's Insane
  1. 00:16:624 (4) - so here, you can basically make this slider extended and put a stacked circle on it (somehow like this :arrow: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9448808) don't forget to mute it tho :D
  2. 01:13:367 (1,2,3,4,5) - polish this stream please
  3. 01:30:853 (8) - 01:33:596 (8) - 01:33:596 (8) - 01:36:339 (8) - mute ends?
  4. 01:37:024 (2,3) - ctrl+g 2 then 3 to make flow better
  5. 01:37:710 (4,4) - just a nazi stack, nevermind
  6. 01:44:396 (7,3) - yes, i am very nazi
  7. 01:41:824 (8) - 01:44:567 (8) - 01:47:310 (8) - 01:50:053 (8) - mute pls
  8. 01:52:110 (2) - add combo here
  9. 01:55:196 (3) - 01:55:539 (4) - and here too
  10. 01:58:282 (7) - this is very confusing, you can't clearly see the "back-arrow", unstack it or move it down so it becomes more visible
  11. 03:15:424 (1) - 03:16:796 (1) - and so on, pls)
  12. 03:29:139 - i just feel like placing a last circle here somewhere in the center would be epic
Topic Starter
Sakurauchi Riko

CircleChu wrote:

hi! yeah, right, m4m thing

add some tags i guess idk what to put there except my old name and gd'ers

Switch me!
  1. 00:15:767 (5) - considering two previous combos, you forgot one here
  2. 00:16:796 - sounds like you missed a sound here its not a sound I follow and its very quiet. i want to focus on the most important sounds
  3. 00:20:910 (1,2) - combo says - Switch me! 8-)
  4. 00:22:282 - you can actually map this sound too but then the red tick sounds would lose so much emphasis
  5. 00:39:082 (5,1) - switching combos here will help reading and makes more sense to me
  6. 00:52:453 (1) - why combo here? nothing really changed that much, there is no need
  7. 01:13:024 (6) - ctrl+g flow feels better i dont like wider angled jumps
  8. 01:32:224 (5) - same as above
  9. 02:43:540 (1) - no need to combo again
  10. 03:15:424 (1) - considering two previous combos, you don't need one here
unmentioned changed, thank you :)
Reddit
Hey there, I've really enjoyed your map so far, however, i think the quality of the Extra diff would be perfect if the AR was changed from:
9.2 --> 9.3/9.4

Personally IMO, this map plays a lot smother with a slightly higher AR.

Other than that, fantastic map Riko, Keep up the good work!
Topic Starter
Sakurauchi Riko

Reddit wrote:

Hey there, I've really enjoyed your map so far, however, i think the quality of the Extra diff would be perfect if the AR was changed from:
9.2 --> 9.3/9.4

Personally IMO, this map plays a lot smother with a slightly higher AR.

Other than that, fantastic map Riko, Keep up the good work!

I agree with the higher AR, 9.3 looks appropriate to me.
And thank you for your kind words!:)
DeRandom Otaku
Add 'happy hardcore emfa music' to tags also add 'serl' because most people don't search with proper artist name with a '3' in it
Edit also add corinn (maybe) because thats aki's other name he used in osu. you can ask him if he wants it tho
[Easy]
  1. 00:21:253 (6) - Dont really need to put a 2/1 slider here like others because the emphasis is really weak here in the song. The bassline totally faints here so ya only a circle at 00:21:253 - would be better for emphasis
  2. 02:12:339 - A circle here would be cool because the vocal is pretty strong and having 6 full beats without any note feels kinda empty because the song starts building up again on 02:12:853 -
    Kinda ok but rhythm is extremely repetitive lol its basically 1/1 and 2/1 throughout the difficulty. Spots like 01:01:024 - could have a slider starting from 01:01:196 - instead to emphasize the melody at its best and stuff like that but yea thats just my opinion
[Normal]
  1. 00:19:196 (5,1,2) - DS
  2. 00:21:939 (6,7) - Don't think its ok to use custom DS here because the gap isn't really that big between them. 00:22:624 (7) - appears fully before 00:21:939 (6) - ends so yea consistent DS is more preferred
  3. 00:22:624 (7) - NC
  4. 00:55:539 - Circle. Its the start of the chorus (Kind of a chorus). Even though the melody doesn't start here, The kick at this beat is really really strong and skipping it is just unfair since you had a circle at 01:01:024 - same thing for 01:06:510 -
  5. 00:59:310 (2) - Kind of misleading rhythm here. The slider emphasizes sound at 00:59:482 - while the song emphasizes sound 00:59:139 -
  6. 01:05:139 (3,4,5) - Let's use a simpler rhythm here than 00:59:653 (3,4,5) - ? song's intensity is much faint at 01:05:139 - this point
  7. 01:38:739 (5) - How about ending this on 01:39:253 - instead, That makes rhythm a bit more dense but you shouldn't ignore the sound at 01:39:253 - because ,well, its atleast much strong than the sound at 01:39:082 - so lets emphasize stronger sounds
[Hard]
  1. 00:53:567 (2) - The repeat lands on a wrong beat actually. The drums you are following is at 00:53:996 - not on the blue tick. You can simply remove the repeat from 00:53:567 (2) - and put a circle at red tick and it will play like average 1/2 rhythm on the difficulty
  2. 01:34:624 (3,4) - Try changing 3 into two circle, You mostly emphasized the melody sounds in the chorus (in a proper way) but yeah in this case 3 has sounds on both head and tail while 4 has sound on head only. stuff like 01:31:881 (3,4,5) - goes perfect in this case too
  3. 01:45:596 (3,4) - Same thing
  4. 02:44:653 (2,3) - same thing as 00:53:567 (2) -
  5. 03:20:224 (1,2,3) - Thats a pretty huge buff in spacing out the blue ,you don't really need such high spacing though since song isn't trying to emphasize anything. Prolly nerf spacing a bit, u can still keep it a bigger than rest if u want
  6. 03:23:653 (6,8) - The visuals kinda look random here. How about copying 03:23:653 (6) - and pasting at 03:23:653 (6) - and making them symmetry. will looks a lot cuter
  7. 03:29:139 (1,2,3) - How about decreasing DS here. The song goes totally faint here. Having DS and SV similar to the rest of the stuff won't make everything else in difficulty feel drastic and will emphasize the 3 notes here the most. You get the point
    Also try reducing volume here because those whistles sound pretty loud
[Insane]
  1. 00:26:396 (4) - Dont make this a circle while you made 00:23:653 (3) - a slider. They are same things. emphasize them equally. You have 1/2 slider on other spots as well such as 00:29:139 (3) -
  2. 00:23:996 (1,2) - The only case out of all others in this section where you had a 3/4 slider. Why not make it 1/1 like all others ,for consistency and emphasis stuff
  3. 00:55:539 (1) - Highly recommend placing two circles instead of circles instead because both sounds are emphasized equally but differently. Both are prominent. Other patterns like 01:01:024 (1,2) - 01:06:510 (1,2) - etc got two circles as well and they fit really well
  4. 01:17:482 - Stop being lazy lol (you don't simply map a buildup with 1/1 circle spam. come on)
  5. 03:03:767 (3,4,5) - 03:05:139 (4,5) - What happened to your rhythm suddenly. its like a different person came up and mapped these. Do use 1/2 sliders with 1/4 gaps , They FIT
  6. 03:26:396 (1,2,3,4,5) - Gradually decreasing DS is gonna be great here because song is fainting but it actually seems like you increased DS a bit here instead lol
[Extra]
  1. 00:40:110 (5) - kinda weird how in previous parts like 00:38:739 (4) - this you went for a 1/2 slider instead to represent the sound at 00:38:910 - but you ignored it at 00:40:282 - even though the song intensity is greater
  2. 00:41:824 (1) - To be honest the way you executed these sounds at 00:36:339 (1,2) - is better and since the song is stronger at 00:41:824 - i really suggest you change 00:41:824 (1,2) - this rhythm into two 1/2 sliders because both sounds (sound on slider head and end) the slider at 00:41:824 (1) - supports are equally emphasized in the song. They both stand out equally. And since the song is building up at this moment the beat at 00:42:167 - feels a tiny bit more drastic so yea. In summary just try making 00:42:167 - clickable for emphasis
  3. 00:49:710 (1) - The similar kick sounds that the stream afterwards supports ,such as circles like 00:50:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - etc etc also exist on 00:49:882 - 00:49:967 - these two beats so having a contrast between the 1/8 sounds at 00:49:710 - and 1/4 sounds at 00:49:882 - would be nice.
lost my wip gd or else i would still have finished it at some point in the past but well
Best of luck!
Topic Starter
Sakurauchi Riko

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Add 'happy hardcore emfa music' to tags also add 'serl' because most people don't search with proper artist name with a '3' in it
Edit also add corinn (maybe) because thats aki's other name he used in osu. you can ask him if he wants it tho

[Normal]
  1. 00:19:196 (5,1,2) - DS
  2. 00:21:939 (6,7) - Don't think its ok to use custom DS here because the gap isn't really that big between them. 00:22:624 (7) - appears fully before 00:21:939 (6) - ends so yea consistent DS is more preferred
  3. 00:22:624 (7) - NC
  4. 00:55:539 - Circle. Its the start of the chorus (Kind of a chorus). Even though the melody doesn't start here, The kick at this beat is really really strong and skipping it is just unfair since you had a circle at 01:01:024 - same thing for 01:06:510 -
  5. 00:59:310 (2) - Kind of misleading rhythm here. The slider emphasizes sound at 00:59:482 - while the song emphasizes sound 00:59:139 - i think 00:59:310 - is more emphasized since the vocal has a higher pitch. 00:59:139 - this sound just feels like a slight repeated one of 00:58:967 - this one so i dont think it is that important
  6. 01:05:139 (3,4,5) - Let's use a simpler rhythm here than 00:59:653 (3,4,5) - ? song's intensity is much faint at 01:05:139 - this point
  7. 01:38:739 (5) - How about ending this on 01:39:253 - instead, That makes rhythm a bit more dense but you shouldn't ignore the sound at 01:39:253 - because ,well, its atleast much strong than the sound at 01:39:082 - so lets emphasize stronger sounds
[Hard]
  1. 00:53:567 (2) - The repeat lands on a wrong beat actually. The drums you are following is at 00:53:996 - not on the blue tick. You can simply remove the repeat from 00:53:567 (2) - and put a circle at red tick and it will play like average 1/2 rhythm on the difficulty
  2. 01:34:624 (3,4) - Try changing 3 into two circle, You mostly emphasized the melody sounds in the chorus (in a proper way) but yeah in this case 3 has sounds on both head and tail while 4 has sound on head only. stuff like 01:31:881 (3,4,5) - goes perfect in this case too
  3. 01:45:596 (3,4) - Same thing
  4. 02:44:653 (2,3) - same thing as 00:53:567 (2) -
  5. 03:20:224 (1,2,3) - Thats a pretty huge buff in spacing out the blue ,you don't really need such high spacing though since song isn't trying to emphasize anything. Prolly nerf spacing a bit, u can still keep it a bigger than rest if u want
  6. 03:23:653 (6,8) - The visuals kinda look random here. How about copying 03:23:653 (6) - and pasting at 03:23:653 (6) - and making them symmetry. will looks a lot cuter
  7. 03:29:139 (1,2,3) - How about decreasing DS here. The song goes totally faint here. Having DS and SV similar to the rest of the stuff won't make everything else in difficulty feel drastic and will emphasize the 3 notes here the most. You get the point
    Also try reducing volume here because those whistles sound pretty loud
[Extra]
  1. 00:40:110 (5) - kinda weird how in previous parts like 00:38:739 (4) - this you went for a 1/2 slider instead to represent the sound at 00:38:910 - but you ignored it at 00:40:282 - even though the song intensity is greater
  2. 00:41:824 (1) - To be honest the way you executed these sounds at 00:36:339 (1,2) - is better and since the song is stronger at 00:41:824 - i really suggest you change 00:41:824 (1,2) - this rhythm into two 1/2 sliders because both sounds (sound on slider head and end) the slider at 00:41:824 (1) - supports are equally emphasized in the song. They both stand out equally. And since the song is building up at this moment the beat at 00:42:167 - feels a tiny bit more drastic so yea. In summary just try making 00:42:167 - clickable for emphasis
  3. 00:49:710 (1) - The similar kick sounds that the stream afterwards supports ,such as circles like 00:50:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - etc etc also exist on 00:49:882 - 00:49:967 - these two beats so having a contrast between the 1/8 sounds at 00:49:710 - and 1/4 sounds at 00:49:882 - would be nice. i get what you mean by that, but I dont see a solution to keep the 1/8's including representing the 1/4 sounds.
lost my wip gd or else i would still have finished it at some point in the past but well
Best of luck!
unmentioned is fixed, Thank you very much!:)
Icekalt
o/

[Easy]
  1. 00:21:253 (6) - Dont really need to put a 2/1 slider here like others because the emphasis is really weak here in the song. The bassline totally faints here so ya only a circle at 00:21:253 - would be better for emphasis agreed
  2. 02:12:339 - A circle here would be cool because the vocal is pretty strong and having 6 full beats without any note feels kinda empty because the song starts building up again on 02:12:853 - i do this then but im not 100% satisfied
    Kinda ok but rhythm is extremely repetitive lol its basically 1/1 and 2/1 throughout the difficulty. Spots like 01:01:024 - could have a slider starting from 01:01:196 - instead to emphasize the melody at its best and stuff like that but yea thats just my opinion i mean in an easy i wanna have it the most simple mapping possible (exspecially when you have normal+easy)
Thanks for mod ^^

fgredthfzjmzk,
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 188482
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11653,22624,25367,28110,30853,55539,66510,77482,88453,99424,115882,121367,124110,126853,129596,133710,135082,137824,140567,144682,155653,166624,177596,188567,199539
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Candy (feat. Sara)
TitleUnicode:Candy (feat. Sara)
Artist:S3RL
ArtistUnicode:S3RL
Creator:Sakurauchi Riko
Version:Icekalt's Easy
Source:
Tags:phyloukz akitoshi icekalt
BeatmapID:1364698
BeatmapSetID:643185

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2.5
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"das andere bild.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,34967,42956
2,110396,119927
2,144682,154042
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
682,342.857142857143,4,2,1,50,1,0
88453,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
98053,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
99424,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
109024,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
166624,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
176224,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
177596,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
185824,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
188567,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
199539,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
200224,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
207767,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 237,197,245
Combo2 : 194,162,131
Combo3 : 173,86,160
Combo4 : 151,131,231

[HitObjects]
313,207,11653,6,0,P|260:157|252:65,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,12,12682,1,2,0:0:0:0:
399,5,13024,2,0,P|452:55|460:147,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,310,14396,2,0,P|347:357|265:338,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,269,15424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
175,201,15767,2,0,P|97:191|33:236,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,322,17139,6,0,B|262:235|262:235|262:177,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,102,18167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
193,47,18510,2,0,P|126:74|88:154,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,189,19882,2,0,B|335:181|335:181|362:190|362:190|426:148,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,70,20910,1,2,0:0:0:0:
329,33,21253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
186,222,22624,6,0,P|236:285|325:300,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,237,23653,1,0,1:0:0:0:
349,152,23996,2,0,P|310:169|284:210,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,60,25367,2,0,P|120:38|39:79,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
42,156,26396,1,0,1:0:0:0:
106,217,26739,2,0,P|127:180|124:132,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,336,28110,6,0,L|398:330,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,254,29139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
369,201,29482,2,0,L|289:198,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,82,30853,2,0,L|75:88,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,164,31882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
104,217,32224,2,0,L|184:220,1,80,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
252,276,32910,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44396,12,0,49710,1:0:0:0:
256,192,50053,12,2,54167,3:0:0:0:
210,252,55539,6,0,L|30:214,2,160,0|2|2,1:0|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
297,260,57253,1,2,1:2:0:0:
384,247,57596,2,0,L|479:213,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
455,131,58282,2,0,P|414:91|297:54,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
459,221,59996,1,2,1:2:0:0:
456,308,60339,2,0,P|424:336|374:349,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
305,318,61024,6,0,B|228:281|228:281|220:246|195:213,2,160,0|2|2,1:0|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
377,264,62739,1,2,1:2:0:0:
409,182,63082,2,0,L|410:87,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
340,47,63767,2,0,B|301:10|301:10|181:17,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
328,134,65482,1,2,0:2:0:0:
256,185,65824,1,2,0:0:0:0:
90,197,66510,6,0,P|52:240|69:337,2,160,0|2|2,1:0|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
152,258,68224,1,2,1:2:0:0:
230,298,68567,2,0,P|268:306|307:297,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
352,221,69253,2,0,P|395:284|372:358,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
264,211,70967,1,2,1:2:0:0:
176,232,71310,2,0,P|175:193|192:157,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
273,122,71996,6,0,L|366:107,1,80,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
349,21,72682,2,0,L|256:6,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
186,34,73367,2,0,P|122:80|112:191,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
82,241,74396,1,2,1:2:0:0:
146,300,74739,6,0,B|174:347|174:347|201:350|201:350|234:375|288:369,2,160,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,215,76453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
227,148,76796,1,2,0:0:0:0:
389,110,77482,6,0,L|434:276,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
343,274,78510,1,0,1:0:0:0:
257,254,78853,2,0,L|215:99,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
389,110,80224,2,0,P|470:161|492:236,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
433,285,81253,1,0,1:0:0:0:
359,236,81596,2,0,P|285:215|200:238,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82967,12,2,87082,1:2:0:0:
201,52,88453,6,0,B|179:113|206:168|206:168|184:217|184:217|221:230|237:268,1,240,4|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
268,340,89824,2,0,L|377:366,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
356,270,90510,2,0,L|438:248,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
487,179,91196,2,0,B|471:132|499:86|499:86|415:119|352:74,1,240,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
280,45,92567,2,0,P|226:39|186:52,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
197,133,93253,2,0,P|147:154|119:186,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
93,252,93939,6,0,B|136:323|136:323|217:297|302:323,1,240,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
376,339,95310,2,0,L|469:336,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
431,251,95996,2,0,L|351:253,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
284,195,96682,2,0,P|248:155|237:110,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
282,54,97367,2,0,P|318:94|329:139,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
373,192,98053,2,0,P|306:279|235:270,1,160,8|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
115,178,99424,6,0,B|137:143|181:137|181:137|231:172|291:160|324:117,1,240,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
349,33,100796,2,0,P|401:25|451:34,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
440,115,101482,2,0,P|479:149|504:193,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
504,259,102167,2,0,B|424:266|424:266|362:308|362:308|259:316,1,240,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
255,229,103539,2,0,L|346:223,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
414,177,104224,2,0,L|505:171,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
504,259,104910,6,0,P|464:323|303:358,1,240,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
246,301,106282,2,0,P|192:292|151:304,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
96,347,106967,2,0,P|56:352|17:342,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
1,255,107653,2,0,L|28:166,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
104,141,108339,2,0,L|127:217,1,80,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
163,297,109024,6,0,P|213:318|190:200,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,323,121367,6,0,P|132:352|222:315,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,247,122396,1,0,1:0:0:0:
305,173,122739,2,0,P|375:145|462:159,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,332,124110,2,0,P|385:343|310:320,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,247,125138,1,0,1:0:0:0:
237,160,125482,2,0,B|228:125|208:110|208:110|252:83|323:89,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
467,20,126853,6,0,B|503:59|503:59|495:168,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,235,127882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
477,314,128224,2,0,P|421:320|352:239,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,88,129596,2,0,P|202:62|123:93,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,163,130624,1,0,1:0:0:0:
101,250,130967,2,0,B|127:275|167:271|167:271|163:294|163:294|207:290|234:311,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,131,132339,5,0,0:0:0:0:
52,35,133710,6,0,L|217:38,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,130,135082,2,0,P|383:189|358:295,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,338,136110,1,0,1:0:0:0:
215,369,136453,2,0,P|193:310|218:204,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,130,137824,6,0,B|394:97|445:95|445:95|480:63|480:27,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,4,138853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,39,139196,2,0,B|272:54|248:100|248:100|204:118|172:103,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,198,140567,2,0,P|32:268|101:338,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,308,141596,1,0,1:0:0:0:
254,270,141939,2,0,P|224:235|110:247,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,155482,12,0,160796,1:0:0:0:
256,192,161139,12,2,165253,3:0:0:0:
406,32,166624,6,0,L|521:49,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
453,125,167310,2,0,L|338:142,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,184,167996,2,0,P|323:241|370:257,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
295,96,169024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,17,169367,6,0,L|158:34,1,80,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
133,109,170053,2,0,L|211:122,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,96,170739,2,0,P|327:69|342:9,2,80,0|0|2,1:0|1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
146,190,172110,6,0,L|173:285,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
254,285,172796,2,0,L|275:208,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,135,173482,2,0,P|185:107|169:67,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
313,131,174510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,106,174853,6,0,P|421:168|389:273,1,160,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
343,324,175882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
258,347,176224,2,0,P|234:285|266:180,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
313,131,177253,1,0,1:0:0:0:
251,68,177596,6,0,L|168:52,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
153,139,178282,2,0,L|75:154,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,234,178967,2,0,P|37:280|55:327,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
126,232,179996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,269,180339,6,0,L|302:279,1,80,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
325,199,181024,2,0,L|405:190,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,240,181710,2,0,P|487:303|470:343,2,80,0|0|2,1:0|1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
365,102,183082,6,0,L|267:93,1,80,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,35,183767,2,0,L|122:44,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,103,184453,2,0,P|36:139|19:182,2,80,2|2|0,1:2|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
160,127,185482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,185824,12,8,187196,3:0:0:0:
114,358,188567,6,0,P|81:292|96:203,1,160,6|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
176,179,189596,1,0,1:0:0:0:
261,158,189939,2,0,B|293:138|293:138|296:47|269:8,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
104,60,191310,2,0,B|86:100|86:100|144:137|177:180,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
231,246,192339,1,0,1:0:0:0:
312,280,192682,2,0,P|258:329|166:305,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
144,142,194053,6,0,P|72:174|-4:134,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
74,88,195082,1,0,1:0:0:0:
157,56,195424,2,0,P|215:94|218:187,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
108,312,196796,2,0,L|287:261,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
304,191,197824,1,0,1:0:0:0:
345,113,198167,2,0,L|498:156,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
175,23,200224,6,0,L|254:12,1,80,6|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,36,200910,2,0,P|318:87|326:122,2,80,2|0|2,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
481,134,202282,2,0,P|454:207|380:246,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
309,199,203310,1,0,1:0:0:0:
249,133,203653,2,0,P|287:112|326:113,2,80,2|0|2,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
177,290,205024,6,0,P|259:316|339:280,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
393,235,206053,1,0,1:0:0:0:
472,199,206396,2,0,P|475:264|463:291,2,80,2|0|2,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
340,82,207767,6,0,B|288:68|288:68|265:94|265:94|184:64|103:113,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Akitoshi
reply

Chewin wrote:

Akitoshi's Insane

  1. This BG is cute but doesn't totally fit with others xD
  2. 01:17:482 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Is it my impression or these squares are not perfect? xD Can you make them with "Create polygon circle" option maybe? They don't look perfect to me idk it was from create polygon circle method though w i rotated like some degree i forgot
  3. 03:03:767 (3,4,5) - Why this sudden rhythm change? I do not understand why you decided to not use the 1/4 sliders here anymore like you did for the previous part: 02:58:282 (3,4,5) - and so on. Expecially here: 03:05:139 (4,5) - the rhythm looks so random imo, those sliders were cool it's variation from previous part : from the music, vocals joining at 03:03:424 - and mapping here as blue ticks feels really weird D:

CircleChu wrote:

Akitoshi's Insane
  1. 00:16:624 (4) - so here, you can basically make this slider extended and put a stacked circle on it (somehow like this :arrow: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9448808&#41; don't forget to mute it tho :D i dont want to use extended slider on calm intro ;3
  2. 01:13:367 (1,2,3,4,5) - polish this stream please ye
  3. 01:30:853 (8) - 01:33:596 (8) - 01:33:596 (8) - 01:36:339 (8) - mute ends? ok
  4. 01:37:024 (2,3) - ctrl+g 2 then 3 to make flow better fxd
  5. 01:37:710 (4,4) - just a nazi stack, nevermind w
  6. 01:44:396 (7,3) - yes, i am very nazi actually they're kinda intentional
  7. 01:41:824 (8) - 01:44:567 (8) - 01:47:310 (8) - 01:50:053 (8) - mute pls ye
  8. 01:52:110 (2) - add combo here ok
  9. 01:55:196 (3) - 01:55:539 (4) - and here too ok
  10. 01:58:282 (7) - this is very confusing, you can't clearly see the "back-arrow", unstack it or move it down so it becomes more visible looks fine tho ;d
  11. 03:15:424 (1) - 03:16:796 (1) - and so on, pls) ya
  12. 03:29:139 - i just feel like placing a last circle here somewhere in the center would be epic not my fetish ewe

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:26:396 (4) - Dont make this a circle while you made 00:23:653 (3) - a slider. They are same things. emphasize them equally. You have 1/2 slider on other spots as well such as 00:29:139 (3) - fxd
  2. 00:23:996 (1,2) - The only case out of all others in this section where you had a 3/4 slider. Why not make it 1/1 like all others ,for consistency and emphasis stuff ok then
  3. 00:55:539 (1) - Highly recommend placing two circles instead of circles instead because both sounds are emphasized equally but differently. Both are prominent. Other patterns like 01:01:024 (1,2) - 01:06:510 (1,2) - etc got two circles as well and they fit really well fxd
  4. 01:17:482 - Stop being lazy lol (you don't simply map a buildup with 1/1 circle spam. come on) i don't finish this map at all if im lazy tho LUL anyway it still fits as this part is p calm
  5. 03:03:767 (3,4,5) - 03:05:139 (4,5) - What happened to your rhythm suddenly. its like a different person came up and mapped these. Do use 1/2 sliders with 1/4 gaps , They FIT i changed rhythm cuz vocals ruined instruments
  6. 03:26:396 (1,2,3,4,5) - Gradually decreasing DS is gonna be great here because song is fainting but it actually seems like you increased DS a bit here instead lol ez

thanks!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 188482
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 33596,44567,143310,155653
DistanceSpacing: 1.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:Candy (feat. Sara)
TitleUnicode:Candy (feat. Sara)
Artist:S3RL
ArtistUnicode:S3RL
Creator:Sakurauchi Riko
Version:Akitoshi's Insane
Source:
Tags:phyloukz akitoshi icekalt happy hardcore emfa music serl
BeatmapID:1371460
BeatmapSetID:643185

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"lolih1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,33596,43967
2,143510,154882
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
682,342.857142857143,4,2,1,50,1,0
11653,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,50,0,0
22624,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
24253,-125,4,2,1,5,0,0
24339,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
44567,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
49710,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,50,0,0
50053,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,50,0,0
52796,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,50,0,0
54167,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
55539,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
66510,-95.2380952380952,4,2,1,50,0,0
77482,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
82967,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
88453,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,80,0,1
91110,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,5,0,1
91196,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,80,0,1
93853,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,5,0,1
93939,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,80,0,1
96596,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,5,0,1
96682,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,80,0,1
98053,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
99424,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,80,0,1
102082,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,5,0,1
102167,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,80,0,1
104824,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,5,0,1
104910,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,80,0,1
107567,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,5,0,1
107653,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,80,0,1
109024,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
110310,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
110396,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
111767,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,50,0,0
112110,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
115196,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,50,0,0
115539,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
115882,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,50,0,0
121367,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
132339,-200,4,2,1,50,0,0
133710,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
155653,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
160796,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,50,0,0
161139,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,50,0,0
166624,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,80,0,1
174853,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
176224,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
177596,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,80,0,1
185824,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
188567,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
195682,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,5,0,1
195767,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
197053,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,5,0,1
197139,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
199539,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
200224,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
202539,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,5,0,1
202624,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
207767,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 237,197,245
Combo2 : 194,162,131
Combo3 : 173,86,160
Combo4 : 151,131,231

[HitObjects]
126,192,11653,6,0,B|214:177|214:177|265:190,1,134.999995880127,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,220,12339,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,220,12682,1,2,0:0:0:0:
481,55,13024,6,0,B|416:39|414:79|340:61,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,28,13710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
250,28,14053,1,2,0:0:0:0:
75,140,14396,6,0,L|82:250,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,319,14910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,272,15082,1,8,0:0:0:0:
178,272,15424,2,0,P|208:268|235:270,1,44.999998626709,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,316,15767,6,0,P|325:268|311:218,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,158,16282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,58,16453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
263,56,16624,2,0,B|227:63|227:63|170:59,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,19,17139,6,0,B|49:76|99:104|67:161,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
25,242,17824,1,8,0:0:0:0:
25,242,18167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
217,319,18510,6,0,P|259:301|355:318,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,371,19196,1,8,0:0:0:0:
431,371,19539,1,2,0:0:0:0:
487,171,19882,6,0,L|477:65,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,7,20396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,83,20567,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,83,20910,2,0,P|311:76|263:85,1,89.9999972534181,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,83,22110,5,0,1:0:0:0:
237,182,22282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
166,106,22453,1,0,1:0:0:0:
344,155,22624,6,0,B|390:147|390:147|495:172|495:172|472:127,1,180,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,257,23310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
387,257,23653,2,0,P|382:292|389:328,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,351,23996,6,0,P|241:338|158:357,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
136,173,24682,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,173,25024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
283,351,25367,6,0,P|325:377|407:364,1,120,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,283,25882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,255,26053,2,0,L|174:266,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,182,26396,2,0,L|360:193,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,198,26739,6,0,L|479:64,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
477,78,27424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
357,114,27596,2,0,B|312:97|312:97|225:109,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,183,28110,6,0,B|107:279|182:257|142:360,1,180,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,377,28796,1,8,0:0:0:0:
261,377,29139,2,0,P|267:343|284:311,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,270,29482,6,0,L|370:123,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
380,54,29996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,80,30167,1,8,0:0:0:0:
263,80,30510,2,0,L|187:73,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,39,30853,6,0,B|36:67|22:103|22:103|22:143|63:203,1,180,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,286,31539,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,286,31882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
323,167,32224,6,0,L|401:159,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
441,76,32567,2,0,L|363:68,1,60,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
512,147,32910,1,8,0:0:0:0:
185,230,44567,6,0,L|80:243,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,133,44910,2,0,L|133:67,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,90,45253,2,0,L|295:-15,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,118,45596,2,0,L|473:34,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
509,198,45939,6,0,P|509:240|498:278,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,351,46282,1,0,1:0:0:0:
392,224,46453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,312,46624,2,0,P|276:279|265:228,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,119,46967,1,0,1:0:0:0:
167,178,47139,1,2,0:0:0:0:
89,77,47310,6,0,L|78:-10,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,102,47653,1,0,1:0:0:0:
80,200,47824,1,2,0:0:0:0:
185,126,47996,2,0,L|198:45,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,65,48339,1,0,1:0:0:0:
201,139,48510,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,254,48682,5,0,1:0:0:0:
335,65,48853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
269,248,49024,1,0,1:0:0:0:
431,138,49196,1,2,0:0:0:0:
234,133,49367,2,0,L|143:149,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,254,49710,2,0,B|442:276|442:276|502:247,1,112.500004291535,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
511,80,50053,5,0,3:0:0:0:
482,63,50139,1,0,3:0:0:0:
450,55,50224,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,57,50310,1,0,3:0:0:0:
387,73,50396,2,0,L|323:68,3,41.2500012588501,0|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
278,117,50739,5,0,3:0:0:0:
249,134,50825,1,0,3:0:0:0:
217,142,50910,1,0,3:0:0:0:
183,140,50996,1,0,3:0:0:0:
154,124,51082,2,0,L|90:129,3,41.2500012588501,0|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
51,181,51424,5,0,3:0:0:0:
33,209,51510,1,0,3:0:0:0:
31,242,51596,1,0,3:0:0:0:
37,274,51682,1,0,3:0:0:0:
55,300,51767,2,0,L|114:292,3,41.2500012588501,0|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
162,245,52110,5,0,3:0:0:0:
193,233,52196,1,0,3:0:0:0:
226,234,52282,1,0,3:0:0:0:
257,244,52367,1,0,3:0:0:0:
281,265,52453,2,0,L|292:319,3,41.2500012588501,0|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
362,357,52796,6,0,B|408:347|408:347|468:360,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
509,288,53053,2,0,B|499:242|499:242|512:182,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
435,147,53310,2,0,B|389:157|389:157|329:144,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
288,217,53567,2,0,B|298:263|298:263|285:323,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
208,345,53824,2,0,L|156:341,1,44.999998626709,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
95,279,53996,2,0,L|43:283,1,44.999998626709,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
168,198,54167,5,4,3:0:0:0:
393,309,54510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
455,234,54682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,151,54853,2,0,L|400:108,3,37.5,2|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
367,88,55196,2,0,L|363:45,3,37.5,2|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
336,19,55539,5,0,1:0:0:0:
223,18,55710,1,2,0:0:0:0:
158,136,55882,2,0,P|195:135|231:143,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,215,56224,1,2,1:2:0:0:
404,151,56396,1,2,0:0:0:0:
457,274,56567,2,0,L|452:360,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,371,56910,5,2,1:2:0:0:
289,366,56996,1,2,0:2:0:0:
260,355,57082,1,2,0:2:0:0:
238,334,57167,1,2,0:2:0:0:
224,306,57253,2,0,L|135:313,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,203,57596,1,2,1:2:0:0:
148,192,57767,1,2,0:0:0:0:
59,297,57939,2,0,P|60:336|80:374,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,199,58282,6,0,L|159:112,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,170,58624,2,0,L|296:244,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,378,58967,1,2,1:2:0:0:
169,281,59139,1,2,0:0:0:0:
309,332,59310,2,0,L|403:323,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,220,59653,5,2,1:2:0:0:
499,190,59739,1,2,0:2:0:0:
499,160,59824,1,2,0:2:0:0:
491,130,59910,1,2,0:2:0:0:
473,105,59996,2,0,L|382:99,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,86,60339,1,2,1:2:0:0:
330,9,60510,1,2,0:0:0:0:
315,158,60682,2,0,L|324:257,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,356,61024,5,0,1:0:0:0:
375,356,61196,1,2,0:0:0:0:
253,308,61367,2,0,L|159:300,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,282,61710,1,2,1:2:0:0:
98,370,61882,1,2,0:0:0:0:
101,220,62053,2,0,L|93:133,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,46,62396,5,2,1:2:0:0:
236,38,62482,1,2,0:2:0:0:
265,38,62567,1,2,0:2:0:0:
293,47,62653,1,2,0:2:0:0:
319,62,62739,2,0,P|333:101|324:158,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,268,63082,1,2,1:2:0:0:
372,236,63253,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,172,63424,2,0,L|150:177,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,112,63767,6,0,P|14:68|13:35,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,177,64110,2,0,P|136:214|127:250,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
25,361,64453,1,2,1:2:0:0:
0,251,64624,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,352,64796,2,0,L|242:342,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,323,65139,5,2,0:2:0:0:
389,308,65224,1,2,0:2:0:0:
406,283,65310,1,2,0:2:0:0:
417,255,65396,1,2,0:2:0:0:
424,225,65482,2,0,L|414:140,1,75,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,68,65824,2,0,L|289:153,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,254,66167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,155,66339,1,0,1:0:0:0:
132,309,66510,5,0,1:0:0:0:
256,258,66682,1,2,0:0:0:0:
142,149,66853,2,0,L|135:54,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,16,67196,1,2,1:2:0:0:
257,130,67367,1,2,0:0:0:0:
397,57,67539,2,0,P|435:50|483:61,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,211,67882,5,2,1:2:0:0:
503,241,67967,1,2,0:2:0:0:
500,272,68053,1,2,0:2:0:0:
496,303,68139,1,2,0:2:0:0:
492,334,68224,2,0,P|454:341|406:330,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,255,68567,1,2,1:2:0:0:
316,368,68739,1,2,0:2:0:0:
388,228,68910,2,0,L|377:133,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,53,69253,6,0,B|214:44|214:44|164:55,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,208,69596,2,0,B|193:217|193:217|243:206,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,150,69939,1,2,1:2:0:0:
335,259,70110,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,96,70282,2,0,L|277:0,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,131,70624,5,2,1:2:0:0:
149,162,70709,1,2,0:2:0:0:
152,193,70795,1,2,0:2:0:0:
155,225,70881,1,2,0:2:0:0:
158,256,70967,2,0,L|151:344,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
51,212,71310,1,2,1:2:0:0:
146,131,71482,1,2,0:0:0:0:
258,187,71653,2,0,L|350:178,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,51,71996,5,0,1:0:0:0:
146,131,72167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
217,272,72339,2,0,L|209:354,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,275,72682,1,2,1:2:0:0:
258,187,72853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,130,73024,2,0,L|494:141,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,15,73367,5,2,1:2:0:0:
318,23,73453,1,2,0:2:0:0:
287,31,73539,1,2,0:2:0:0:
257,40,73624,1,2,0:2:0:0:
227,50,73710,2,0,L|137:61,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,174,74053,1,2,1:2:0:0:
163,174,74224,1,2,0:0:0:0:
37,78,74396,2,0,P|36:38|50:2,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,174,74739,6,0,L|152:284,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,325,75082,2,0,L|287:246,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,129,75424,1,2,1:2:0:0:
408,254,75596,1,2,0:0:0:0:
287,152,75767,2,0,L|200:140,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,120,76110,5,2,0:2:0:0:
26,129,76196,1,2,0:2:0:0:
26,156,76282,1,2,0:2:0:0:
52,165,76367,1,2,0:2:0:0:
68,142,76453,2,0,L|72:50,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,10,76796,1,2,0:0:0:0:
242,29,76967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
282,114,77139,2,0,P|320:107|369:112,1,78.7499975967408,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,241,77482,5,2,1:2:0:0:
197,274,77824,1,0,1:0:0:0:
151,147,78167,1,2,1:2:0:0:
282,114,78509,1,0,1:0:0:0:
328,241,78853,5,2,1:2:0:0:
459,208,79195,1,0,1:0:0:0:
505,335,79538,1,2,1:2:0:0:
374,368,79882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
328,241,80224,5,2,1:2:0:0:
197,274,80566,1,0,1:0:0:0:
151,147,80909,1,2,1:2:0:0:
282,114,81253,1,0,1:0:0:0:
151,147,81596,5,2,1:2:0:0:
197,274,81938,1,0,1:0:0:0:
73,331,82281,1,2,1:2:0:0:
29,204,82623,1,0,1:0:0:0:
115,258,82796,1,0,3:0:0:0:
115,258,82882,1,0,3:0:0:0:
115,258,82967,5,2,3:2:0:0:
256,192,83053,12,0,87082,3:0:0:0:
256,192,87767,5,2,3:0:0:0:
230,197,87853,1,0,3:0:0:0:
204,202,87939,1,0,3:0:0:0:
178,206,88024,1,0,3:0:0:0:
147,184,88110,5,2,3:0:0:0:
121,189,88196,1,0,3:0:0:0:
95,194,88282,1,0,3:0:0:0:
69,198,88367,1,0,3:0:0:0:
36,180,88453,5,4,1:0:0:0:
103,302,88624,1,2,0:0:0:0:
230,197,88796,2,0,L|227:96,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,229,89139,1,2,1:2:0:0:
227,290,89310,1,2,0:0:0:0:
385,338,89482,2,0,L|473:323,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,165,89824,5,2,1:2:0:0:
488,128,89910,1,2,0:2:0:0:
451,108,89996,1,2,0:2:0:0:
410,99,90082,1,2,0:2:0:0:
369,105,90167,2,0,L|363:9,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,153,90510,1,2,1:2:0:0:
405,215,90682,1,2,0:0:0:0:
257,142,90853,2,0,P|204:155|124:141,1,123.75000377655,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,103,91196,6,0,L|71:20,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,60,91539,2,0,L|257:142,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,306,91882,1,2,1:2:0:0:
357,201,92053,1,2,0:0:0:0:
195,232,92224,2,0,P|153:244|100:243,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
2,122,92567,5,2,1:2:0:0:
9,81,92653,1,2,0:2:0:0:
31,46,92739,1,2,0:2:0:0:
67,27,92824,1,2,0:2:0:0:
107,20,92910,2,0,P|145:38|192:37,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,35,93253,1,2,1:2:0:0:
219,135,93424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,127,93596,2,0,P|434:134|494:178,1,123.75000377655,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
506,257,93939,5,0,1:0:0:0:
393,377,94110,1,2,0:0:0:0:
257,281,94282,2,0,L|153:287,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,167,94624,1,2,1:2:0:0:
361,277,94796,1,2,0:0:0:0:
445,135,94967,2,0,L|437:35,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,20,95310,5,2,1:2:0:0:
241,43,95396,1,2,0:2:0:0:
199,46,95482,1,2,0:2:0:0:
159,36,95567,1,2,0:2:0:0:
122,15,95653,2,0,L|121:113,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,302,95996,1,2,1:2:0:0:
20,170,96167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
210,204,96339,2,0,P|271:187|351:194,1,123.75000377655,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
405,224,96682,6,0,L|394:341,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,383,97024,2,0,L|232:301,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
73,251,97367,2,0,L|65:333,1,82.5000025177003,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,301,97710,2,0,L|243:184,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,106,98053,6,0,B|376:99|344:148|440:135,1,120,8|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
495,199,98567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
446,289,98739,2,0,L|362:299,1,60,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,310,99082,1,8,3:0:0:0:
330,183,99253,1,0,1:0:0:0:
169,219,99424,6,0,P|123:206|64:204,1,82.5000025177003,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
9,57,99767,2,0,P|55:44|114:42,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,122,100110,1,2,1:2:0:0:
323,25,100282,1,2,0:0:0:0:
398,171,100453,2,0,L|380:269,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,344,100796,5,2,1:2:0:0:
207,361,100882,1,2,0:2:0:0:
166,358,100967,1,2,0:2:0:0:
127,343,101053,1,2,0:2:0:0:
96,314,101139,2,0,L|-1:323,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,227,101482,1,2,1:2:0:0:
245,344,101653,1,2,0:0:0:0:
323,199,101824,2,0,B|350:136|301:132|329:68,1,123.75000377655,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,24,102167,6,0,P|220:45|162:49,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,166,102510,2,0,L|159:159,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,291,102853,1,2,1:2:0:0:
126,258,103024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,135,103196,2,0,P|293:144|345:140,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
487,93,103539,5,2,1:2:0:0:
503,130,103624,1,2,0:2:0:0:
501,171,103710,1,2,0:2:0:0:
488,210,103796,1,2,0:2:0:0:
464,244,103882,2,0,L|471:333,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,237,104224,1,2,1:2:0:0:
391,123,104396,1,2,0:0:0:0:
219,181,104567,2,0,P|205:243|228:312,1,123.75000377655,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,351,104910,5,0,1:0:0:0:
455,275,105082,1,2,0:0:0:0:
375,130,105253,2,0,L|381:22,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
477,181,105596,1,2,1:2:0:0:
353,246,105767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,356,105939,2,0,P|439:369|382:368,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,292,106282,5,2,1:2:0:0:
211,282,106367,1,2,0:2:0:0:
169,284,106453,1,2,0:2:0:0:
131,302,106539,1,2,0:2:0:0:
102,330,106624,2,0,L|102:233,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,70,106967,1,2,1:2:0:0:
26,175,107139,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,148,107310,2,0,P|247:135|323:143,1,123.75000377655,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,130,107653,6,0,P|418:96|435:54,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,207,107996,2,0,P|373:247|401:283,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
511,158,108339,1,2,1:2:0:0:
433,60,108510,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,30,108682,2,0,L|216:39,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,127,109024,5,2,0:0:0:0:
115,153,109110,1,2,0:0:0:0:
129,180,109196,1,2,0:0:0:0:
115,207,109282,1,2,0:0:0:0:
129,232,109367,2,0,L|121:321,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,366,109710,1,2,0:0:0:0:
311,346,109882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,261,110053,2,0,P|369:207|319:155,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,158,110396,6,0,L|314:96,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,190,110739,2,0,L|192:143,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,266,111082,2,0,L|143:262,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,346,111424,2,0,L|184:387,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
49,365,111767,6,0,B|50:350|50:350|42:341|42:341|47:332|47:332|38:325|38:325|44:319|44:319|35:311|35:311|40:300|40:300|32:292|32:292|36:281|36:281|26:269|26:269|30:249,1,112.500004291535,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
31,160,112110,6,0,P|40:129|42:102,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,149,112453,2,0,P|155:133|175:115,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,211,112796,2,0,P|229:219|256:221,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,192,113139,6,0,L|346:133,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,85,113482,1,0,1:0:0:0:
423,85,113653,1,0,0:0:0:0:
479,160,113824,2,0,L|472:219,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,267,114167,1,0,1:0:0:0:
396,267,114339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,192,114510,6,0,P|300:192|265:201,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,255,114853,2,0,P|188:251|161:252,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
61,271,115196,6,0,B|62:256|62:256|54:247|54:247|59:238|59:238|50:231|50:231|56:225|56:225|47:217|47:217|52:206|52:206|44:198|44:198|48:187|48:187|38:175|38:175|42:155,1,112.500004291535,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
82,37,115539,5,0,1:0:0:0:
168,159,115710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,59,115882,6,0,P|296:79|384:56,1,134.999995880127,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,9,116567,1,2,0:0:0:0:
495,178,116910,2,0,B|509:245|458:243|479:327,1,134.999995880127,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,374,117596,1,0,1:0:0:0:
240,320,117939,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,320,118110,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,320,118282,2,0,L|198:325,3,22.4999993133545,2|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,342,118624,6,0,P|192:302|136:211,1,134.999995880127,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
61,206,119310,1,2,0:0:0:0:
177,68,119653,2,0,B|258:59|224:108|312:96,1,134.999995880127,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,83,120339,2,0,L|404:143,1,44.999998626709,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,220,120682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,220,120853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
278,87,121367,6,0,P|225:136|253:226,1,157.499995193482,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,303,122053,2,0,L|109:298,1,52.4999983978272,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,241,122396,1,0,1:0:0:0:
45,241,122739,6,0,B|24:185|66:187|33:121,1,104.999996795654,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
78,57,123253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
163,117,123424,2,0,L|218:113,1,52.4999983978272,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,107,123767,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,107,124110,6,0,P|320:156|311:213,1,104.999996795654,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,279,124624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,354,124796,2,0,L|402:347,1,52.4999983978272,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
487,330,125139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
487,330,125482,6,0,L|495:211,1,104.999996795654,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
494,225,126167,1,8,0:0:0:0:
406,166,126339,2,0,B|360:192|360:192|290:181,1,104.999996795654,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,109,126853,6,0,B|157:94|166:145|77:123,1,157.499995193482,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,32,127539,1,8,0:0:0:0:
28,32,127882,2,0,L|88:23,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,66,128224,6,0,P|184:117|171:170,1,104.999996795654,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
115,238,128739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,309,128910,1,8,0:0:0:0:
191,309,129253,2,0,L|255:303,1,52.4999983978272,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,296,129596,6,0,B|359:239|359:239|342:196|342:196|358:135,1,157.499995193482,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,43,130282,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,43,130624,1,0,1:0:0:0:
193,132,130967,6,0,L|119:139,1,52.4999983978272,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,213,131310,2,0,L|168:220,1,52.4999983978272,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,229,131653,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,141,131824,2,0,B|306:107|306:107|291:23,1,104.999996795654,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,49,132339,6,0,P|139:61|74:38,1,112.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
9,97,133024,2,0,L|14:139,1,37.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
23,223,133367,1,0,1:0:0:0:
98,172,133539,1,8,0:0:0:0:
119,289,133710,6,0,B|237:303|237:303|298:274,1,180,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,211,134396,1,8,0:0:0:0:
393,211,134739,1,2,0:0:0:0:
177,104,135082,6,0,P|131:136|44:123,1,120,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,37,135596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,6,135767,2,0,L|277:14,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,98,136110,2,0,L|267:106,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
223,196,136453,6,0,P|217:251|250:312,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
245,307,137139,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,348,137310,2,0,B|67:330|75:371|4:352,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,235,137824,6,0,B|60:191|60:191|42:41,1,180,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,6,138510,1,8,0:0:0:0:
150,6,138853,2,0,L|160:81,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,172,139196,6,0,P|267:180|328:159,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
390,79,139710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,164,139882,1,8,0:0:0:0:
475,164,140224,2,0,L|469:231,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,324,140567,6,0,B|347:312|347:312|264:332|264:332|296:286,1,180,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,201,141253,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,201,141596,2,0,L|343:139,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,30,141939,6,0,P|265:25|227:30,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,90,142282,2,0,P|125:95|87:90,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
13,34,142624,1,8,0:0:0:0:
2,153,142796,2,0,B|13:270|13:270|80:216,1,180,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
89,205,155482,5,8,0:0:0:0:
89,205,155653,2,0,P|53:183|-2:176,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,136,155996,2,0,P|159:93|137:42,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,165,156339,2,0,P|286:144|319:100,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,257,156682,2,0,P|304:268|359:261,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,237,157024,5,0,1:0:0:0:
511,127,157196,1,2,0:0:0:0:
378,76,157367,2,0,L|384:-19,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,118,157710,1,0,1:0:0:0:
402,166,157882,1,2,0:0:0:0:
343,295,158053,2,0,L|254:290,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,227,158396,5,0,1:0:0:0:
239,139,158567,1,2,0:0:0:0:
237,289,158739,2,0,L|228:373,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,321,159082,1,0,1:0:0:0:
157,227,159253,1,2,0:0:0:0:
12,188,159424,2,0,L|26:93,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,44,159767,5,0,1:0:0:0:
157,227,159938,1,2,0:0:0:0:
322,123,160109,1,0,1:0:0:0:
126,111,160281,1,2,0:0:0:0:
278,236,160452,2,0,L|358:226,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,44,160796,2,0,B|179:19|179:19|109:36,1,112.500004291535,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
18,146,161139,5,0,3:0:0:0:
10,177,161224,1,0,3:0:0:0:
10,210,161310,1,0,3:0:0:0:
20,241,161396,1,0,3:0:0:0:
40,266,161482,2,0,L|103:261,3,41.2500012588501,0|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
152,221,161824,5,0,3:0:0:0:
184,229,161910,1,0,3:0:0:0:
212,246,161996,1,0,3:0:0:0:
232,271,162082,1,0,3:0:0:0:
244,301,162167,2,0,L|298:296,3,41.2500012588501,0|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
347,242,162510,5,0,3:0:0:0:
363,213,162596,1,0,3:0:0:0:
367,180,162682,1,0,3:0:0:0:
357,148,162767,1,0,3:0:0:0:
340,119,162853,2,0,L|343:57,3,41.2500012588501,0|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
411,32,163196,5,0,3:0:0:0:
442,40,163282,1,0,3:0:0:0:
468,58,163367,1,0,3:0:0:0:
486,85,163453,1,0,3:0:0:0:
500,114,163539,2,0,L|497:176,3,41.2500012588501,0|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
481,236,163882,6,0,P|427:249|378:241,1,82.5000025177003,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
347,183,164139,2,0,P|293:196|244:188,1,82.5000025177003,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
185,179,164396,2,0,L|174:288,1,82.5000025177003,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
93,261,164653,2,0,L|82:152,1,82.5000025177003,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
40,108,164910,2,0,L|53:59,1,41.2500012588501,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
134,63,165082,2,0,L|182:49,1,41.2500012588501,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
230,113,165253,6,0,L|328:127,1,82.5000025177003,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,238,165596,2,0,L|426:293,3,41.2500012588501,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,330,165939,5,2,3:0:0:0:
333,334,166024,1,0,3:0:0:0:
304,339,166110,1,0,3:0:0:0:
275,342,166196,1,0,3:0:0:0:
237,324,166282,5,2,3:0:0:0:
208,328,166367,1,0,3:0:0:0:
179,333,166453,1,0,3:0:0:0:
150,336,166539,1,0,3:0:0:0:
115,313,166624,6,0,P|100:272|105:211,1,82.5000025177003,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,113,166967,2,0,P|245:154|240:215,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,365,167310,2,0,L|324:369,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,381,167567,2,0,L|432:377,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
441,364,167824,1,2,1:2:0:0:
505,211,167996,5,2,1:2:0:0:
381,256,168167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,96,168339,2,0,L|414:6,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,60,168682,2,0,P|237:98|247:157,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,158,168939,2,0,P|276:196|266:255,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,260,169196,1,0,1:0:0:0:
142,374,169367,6,0,L|44:367,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
3,212,169710,2,0,L|101:205,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,81,170053,2,0,P|225:65|297:68,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,79,170310,2,0,P|325:95|397:92,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,87,170567,1,0,1:0:0:0:
264,186,170739,5,0,1:0:0:0:
193,81,170910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,226,171082,2,0,B|111:258|111:258|121:282|121:282|115:311|115:311|127:348,1,123.75000377655,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,356,171424,5,2,3:0:0:0:
186,368,171510,1,0,3:0:0:0:
219,365,171596,1,0,3:0:0:0:
250,355,171682,1,0,3:0:0:0:
273,321,171767,5,2,3:0:0:0:
303,309,171853,1,0,3:0:0:0:
336,312,171939,1,0,3:0:0:0:
367,322,172025,1,0,3:0:0:0:
398,348,172110,6,0,L|407:252,1,82.5000025177003,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,141,172453,2,0,L|281:237,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,172796,2,0,P|302:30|247:28,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,40,173053,2,0,P|200:62|145:64,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,60,173310,1,2,1:2:0:0:
39,194,173482,5,2,1:2:0:0:
166,162,173653,1,2,0:0:0:0:
9,85,173824,2,0,L|15:2,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,157,174167,2,0,L|192:239,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,266,174424,2,0,P|252:275|303:262,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,258,174682,1,0,1:0:0:0:
378,136,174853,6,0,L|459:128,1,67.4999979400635,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,83,175196,1,2,1:2:0:0:
322,208,175367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,177,175539,1,2,1:2:0:0:
222,302,175710,2,0,L|299:293,2,67.4999979400635,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,167,176224,6,0,P|96:131|101:94,1,60,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,121,176567,2,0,P|245:104|275:82,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,190,176910,2,0,P|343:203|380:208,1,60,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,311,177253,2,0,P|349:345|371:375,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
491,261,177596,6,0,L|496:151,1,82.5000025177003,4|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,120,177939,2,0,L|344:230,1,82.5000025177003,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,54,178282,2,0,P|376:25|324:19,1,82.5000025177003,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,18,178539,2,0,P|275:47|223:53,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,49,178796,1,2,1:2:0:0:
29,13,178967,5,2,1:2:0:0:
78,179,179139,1,2,0:0:0:0:
215,49,179310,2,0,L|231:148,1,82.5000025177003,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,241,179653,2,0,L|363:159,1,82.5000025177003,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,134,179910,2,0,P|419:134|457:150,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
471,172,180167,1,2,1:2:0:0:
333,264,180339,6,0,P|290:264|252:248,1,82.5000025177003,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,307,180682,2,0,P|111:269|144:244,1,82.5000025177003,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,76,181024,2,0,P|195:113|200:154,1,82.5000025177003,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,174,181282,2,0,L|316:156,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,153,181539,1,2,1:2:0:0:
426,283,181710,5,0,1:0:0:0:
508,158,181882,1,2,0:0:0:0:
351,237,182053,2,0,B|328:281|350:326|350:326|303:306,1,123.75000377655,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,301,182396,5,2,3:0:0:0:
257,293,182482,1,0,3:0:0:0:
224,297,182567,1,0,3:0:0:0:
196,315,182653,1,0,3:0:0:0:
160,336,182739,5,2,3:0:0:0:
127,344,182825,1,0,3:0:0:0:
94,340,182910,1,0,3:0:0:0:
66,322,182996,1,0,3:0:0:0:
37,292,183082,6,0,L|46:191,1,82.5000025177003,4|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,82,183424,2,0,L|158:183,1,82.5000025177003,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,276,183767,1,0,1:0:0:0:
277,122,183939,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,266,184110,2,0,L|214:360,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,372,184453,6,0,L|412:278,1,82.5000025177003,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,115,184796,1,0,1:0:0:0:
509,234,184967,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,177,185139,2,0,P|299:190|234:187,1,82.5000025177003,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,168,185482,2,0,L|106:17,1,123.75000377655,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,63,185824,5,8,3:0:0:0:
256,192,185910,12,0,188224,0:0:0:0:
194,192,188567,6,0,L|66:200,1,89.9999972534181,6|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,94,188910,1,0,1:0:0:0:
298,249,189082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
430,128,189253,2,0,P|436:89|420:35,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,249,189596,2,0,P|292:288|308:342,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,322,189939,6,0,P|446:328|399:284,1,134.999995880127,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,251,190282,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,336,190453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,161,190624,2,0,L|274:61,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,242,190967,2,0,L|152:342,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,175,191310,6,0,P|287:158|234:170,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,292,191653,1,0,1:0:0:0:
445,129,191824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,272,191996,2,0,L|186:268,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,135,192339,2,0,L|148:131,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,62,192682,6,0,B|331:100|331:100|306:209,1,134.999995880127,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,272,193024,1,0,1:0:0:0:
221,123,193196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,129,193367,2,0,L|393:239,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,360,193710,2,0,L|281:250,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,194,194053,6,0,P|61:194|23:216,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,298,194396,1,0,1:0:0:0:
222,130,194567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
91,289,194739,2,0,L|106:382,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,220,195082,1,0,1:0:0:0:
76,190,195253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,99,195424,6,0,P|347:97|418:156,1,134.999995880127,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,176,195767,2,0,L|498:73,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,280,196110,2,0,L|400:383,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,188,196453,2,0,L|284:85,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,245,196796,6,0,P|116:257|58:203,1,134.999995880127,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
21,140,197139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
0,329,197310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,176,197482,2,0,L|143:81,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,18,197824,2,0,L|315:113,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,286,198167,6,0,P|387:288|437:267,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,193,198510,1,0,1:0:0:0:
290,371,198682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,181,198853,1,2,1:2:0:0:
236,293,199024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,112,199196,1,0,1:0:0:0:
177,199,199367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
89,188,199539,6,0,B|64:255|110:244|84:316,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,280,200053,1,0,1:0:0:0:
177,360,200224,6,0,L|289:366,1,89.9999972534181,6|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,223,200567,2,0,L|294:229,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,251,200910,2,0,P|507:206|479:152,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,104,201253,1,0,1:0:0:0:
406,223,201424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
391,14,201596,2,0,L|277:3,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,102,201939,2,0,P|148:120|206:119,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,200,202282,6,0,P|404:263|360:354,1,134.999995880127,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,371,202624,1,0,1:0:0:0:
481,354,202796,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,247,202967,2,0,L|166:238,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,72,203310,2,0,L|144:63,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,49,203653,6,0,P|369:90|376:159,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,159,203996,1,0,1:0:0:0:
276,247,204167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
123,64,204339,2,0,L|16:55,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,140,204682,2,0,L|394:131,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
494,318,205024,6,0,P|449:334|396:334,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,238,205367,1,0,1:0:0:0:
281,384,205539,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,191,205710,2,0,L|331:73,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,238,206053,1,0,1:0:0:0:
340,282,206224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
113,342,206396,6,0,L|2:333,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,132,206739,1,0,1:0:0:0:
249,253,206910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,145,207082,2,0,L|325:34,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,132,207424,2,0,L|134:243,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,207767,12,2,208796,0:0:0:0:
pishifat
Subjectivity Incoming

top
00:10:453 (1) - would end on the breath instead of nothing. sounds less out of place that way
00:11:653 - would chill on spacing for this entire section tbh. like not everything needs to be a jump in a section that's supposed to be this calm. would experiment with more linear low spacing patterns so there's some difference between calm bits and mlg bits of the map
00:22:624 - this section is Cool. would
00:34:967 (1) - what i said about 11seconds but about rhythm density too lol. would undermap instead of trying to cover all beats cuz song is super quiet at first
00:45:939 (1) - starting smaller with your jump spam shows buildup so much better than consistent similarly spaced jumps:((( also applies to 02:37:024 (1) - i guess
01:38:053 (1,2,3) - silenced 2and 3 but not 1 uhhhhwhy tho
01:57:939 (4,5) - should really have clicking for 5 start on the white tick. current layout makes it seem like you're emphasizing blue tick but blue tick has nothing important so a a aa
01:58:367 (5) - also it hsould be 1/4 not 1/8 like
01:59:824 (5) - 1/4 starts from the big white tick, not before it :( could just do a triple fromslider http://puu.sh/A7xkP/f561c128e4.jpg
02:01:367 (1) - the cool section returns...but the song's most intense instrument was dropped so it feels way more calm... but also the map is the exact same
you see where im going with this. should account for the variation. 02:13:710 (1) - this section can return to the Cool
02:15:082 (1) - not sure why this is a yellow boy when it's a copy of 00:26:396 (2,3) -
02:32:224 (3,4) - ssame as 1:59
02:47:567 (4) - replacing hitnormal bass with softwhistle is so much more appealing. current hitsounding makes it sound like you're mapping the bass sound, but also skipping over the bass sound on the white tick, which is super awk

overall i think u should consider more babyish mapping for calm sections to show more clear musical changeeeee 01:16:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:26:053 (3,4,5,6,7) - like these sections could easily use nonjump mapping and be sick
aki's diff at 1:16 or the intro show what i mean

ak
00:32:224 (1,2) - wouldnt use symmetry for sounds that aren't reflective of each other. 2 being circles instead o fslider works
00:50:396 (5) - 00:51:082 (5) - get this slidey in line with the stream
01:01:196 (2) - would stack on 3 cuz 23 same sound. weird to put different things on same position
03:05:482 (5) - silence

hard
u need some spacing/sv variation like badly. feels pretty gross when map is same sv throughout and song is as variable in intensity as it is. spacing increase for kiais is ok, but like movement being so much faster between objects than slider movement is prettygross. would boost sv in those spacing increase sections to make it notgross
00:55:539 - would also have svspacing stuff apply here
in sections iwth 3/4 jumps like 02:46:967 (4,5,1,2) - gotta make difference between 1/2 and 3/4 clear through spacing. right now they're visually thes ame
Topic Starter
Sakurauchi Riko

pishifat wrote:

Subjectivity Incoming

top
00:10:453 (1) - would end on the breath instead of nothing. sounds less out of place that way true
00:11:653 - would chill on spacing for this entire section tbh. like not everything needs to be a jump in a section that's supposed to be this calm. would experiment with more linear low spacing patterns so there's some difference between calm bits and mlg bits of the map i 100% agree here, i used linear flow and slight spacing emphasis for stronger sounds but very very minor
00:22:624 - this section is Cool. would
00:34:967 (1) - what i said about 11seconds but about rhythm density too lol. would undermap instead of trying to cover all beats cuz song is super quiet at first i think the seperation of clickable and unclickable 1/4 sounds (which is the case here for low intensity part) is already a huge undermap, isnt it? i definetely keep the passive 1/4 rhythms but probably gonna apply some of the linear patterns and less spacing idea like in the intro.
00:45:939 (1) - starting smaller with your jump spam shows buildup so much better than consistent similarly spaced jumps:((( also applies to 02:37:024 (1) - i guess i was thinking too, but honestly... the actual sounds which get represented by the jumps and circles keep being the same the whole time, there isnt really a build-up part in the music except the slight volume change of the background music (which is heavily covered by the sounds so not emphasized at all in the map). So yeah i think keeping relatively equal spacing fits better to the sounds the circles are actually representing
01:38:053 (1,2,3) - silenced 2and 3 but not 1 uhhhhwhy tho both on the red and blue tick covered by unsilenced slider are sounds if i listen closely.. so i thought i keep it audible for at least the blue tick. maybe its better to simplify so it fits better to the pattern idk yet
01:57:939 (4,5) - should really have clicking for 5 start on the white tick. current layout makes it seem like you're emphasizing blue tick but blue tick has nothing important so a a aa woops, yes
01:58:367 (5) - also it hsould be 1/4 not 1/8 like i assume you mean the reverse slider not the one you linked, yes chnaged
01:59:824 (5) - 1/4 starts from the big white tick, not before it :( could just do a triple fromslider http://puu.sh/A7xkP/f561c128e4.jpg oki did
02:01:367 (1) - the cool section returns...but the song's most intense instrument was dropped so it feels way more calm... but also the map is the exact same
you see where im going with this. should account for the variation. 02:13:710 (1) - this section can return to the Cool the only thing changed in the music is the background sound which takes a lot of intensity indeed... but the actual sounds the slow slider representing stay the same imo. so i just reduce spacing for non bg sound drastically so the seperation gets present
02:15:082 (1) - not sure why this is a yellow boy when it's a copy of 00:26:396 (2,3) - are you sure? Because 02:15:082 (1) - this one is a longer sound than 00:26:396 (2) - . So both of the circle sliders have the same sound, i think its different here than in the first section
02:32:224 (3,4) - ssame as 1:59
02:47:567 (4) - replacing hitnormal bass with softwhistle is so much more appealing. current hitsounding makes it sound like you're mapping the bass sound, but also skipping over the bass sound on the white tick, which is super awk yes

overall i think u should consider more babyish mapping for calm sections to show more clear musical changeeeee 01:16:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:26:053 (3,4,5,6,7) - like these sections could easily use nonjump mapping and be sick yeah i really agree, i redid these sections so it gets from liined up patterns into bit more spaced lined up and few angles, fits a lot better now!!
aki's diff at 1:16 or the intro show what i mean

ak
00:32:224 (1,2) - wouldnt use symmetry for sounds that aren't reflective of each other. 2 being circles instead o fslider works
00:50:396 (5) - 00:51:082 (5) - get this slidey in line with the stream
01:01:196 (2) - would stack on 3 cuz 23 same sound. weird to put different things on same position
03:05:482 (5) - silence

hard
u need some spacing/sv variation like badly. feels pretty gross when map is same sv throughout and song is as variable in intensity as it is. spacing increase for kiais is ok, but like movement being so much faster between objects than slider movement is prettygross. would boost sv in those spacing increase sections to make it notgross yes i didnt even take care of that back then when i made that diff. basically its only the kiai and section before where you want me to do spacing thing I have to put higher sv, right? for the neutral sections 1.00x and spacing feels fine. apart from these first 2 kiais idk how to put higher sv's appropriately. so yes, changed that surely
00:55:539 - would also have svspacing stuff apply here okay
in sections iwth 3/4 jumps like 02:46:967 (4,5,1,2) - gotta make difference between 1/2 and 3/4 clear through spacing. right now they're visually thes ame i think this is the only spot where it was wrong, wasnt it? spacing between sliders... i think the player can expect the sliders being 1/2 because the spacing increase for these sliders were introduced earlier, so only 3/4 rhythms with circles have that kind of spacing now
basically changed everything but the jump "build-up" part, updated but i probably try to improve the low intensity sections to make transition clearer
that was an awesome mod, i feel like map (especially top diff) improved by a ton. thank you! :)
BanchoBot
This modding thread has been migrated to the new "modding discussions" system. Please make sure to re-post any existing (and unresolved) efforts to the new system as required.
Please sign in to reply.

New reply