lilligantEX wrote:

from queue

d = small red
k = small blue
D = big red
K = big blue

[general]
set a preview point for the map

[kantan]
slider velocity should be 1.40Fixed

00:32:955 (37,1) - two notes on same tick LOL, I didn't pay attention to this, Fixed
01:05:870 (1) - green timing point isn't snappedFixed
01:16:842 (1) - green timing point isn't snappedFixed
01:38:784 (1) - green timing point isn't snappedFixed

[futsuu]
00:21:984 (52) - green timing point isn't snappedFixed
01:05:870 (1) - green timing point isn't snapped
01:14:442 (22,25) - change from ddd ddd to ddk ddkFixed
01:38:784 (76) - green timing point isn't snappedFixed

[muzukashii]
00:01:413 (6) - should be d instead of D] It doesn't change
00:04:156 (15) - change from d to kFixed
00:04:499 (16) - add d 00:04:670
00:19:242 (48,49,50,51) - instead of k d k d, should be d k d k or k D k DNah, I think it's suitable
00:20:784 (53,54) - add k between these at 00:20:870Nope
00:21:984 (59) - green timing point isn't snappedAlready
01:05:870 (1) - green timing point isn't snappedSame
01:37:842 (145) - remove note [color=#BFFF00For singing[/color]
01:38:784 (149) - green timing point isn't snappedAlready
01:39:984 (155) - change from k to dWould prefer change to k at 01:40:670
01:41:356 (162,163) - switch from k d to d kFixed
01:42:042 (166,167) - switch d to kFixed
01:42:899 (170) - switch d to kFixed

[oni]
make sure notes and timing points are properly snapped

JarHed wrote:

:lol: Hi, JarHed's Here my Queue

Muzukashii :

00:00:384 (2) - Change to a Kat Same sounds going on with the 3rd note in the song.

00:00:899 (4,5) - Change (4) to a Don and (5) to a Kat Followup to the previous ^ and it sounds a whole lot better in the song.

00:01:755 (7,8,9,10) - Repeat all of this at these notes as well it s the same thing ^^^

00:41:184 (157,158,159,160,161,162,163) - Snapping points are not correct with the song here, Change it to the picture below (Notes not changed just where they are placed)

Cursor at 00:41:870 --->

01:57:984 (246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253) - Snapping points also incorrect here change to this. (Notes not changed just where they are placed)

Cursor at 01:58:670 --->

Delete 01:59:870 (253) - Change to this pattern here sounds way better and is a better finish up for the map.

Cursor at: 02:00:42
Pattern Here:

Good Muzu just things here and there need to be fixed

Oni:

- Its well mapped however add new patterns everywhere where there is 1/4, To be more specific its all DDD or KKK or DDDDK Try to add some patterns in that contribute more technical patterns such as DKD KDDKD\

Im not gonna change much with the Oni simply because the only issue is lack of patterns its well mapped i like it a lot i just think it seems bland ADD MORE PATTERNS

_yu68 wrote:

Hello. mod via PM :3

mod

[General]

1. Please add tag '東方Project'.

[Kantan]

1. 00:02:784 (3,4) - change to k? I think that be able to represent differences of pitch.
2. 00:08:270 (7,8) - ^
3. 00:26:613 (30) - move to 00:26:784 - ? I suggest reduce complex rhythm for beginner.
4. 00:37:584 (41) - move to 00:37:756 - ? ^
5. 00:34:842 - add k? This is same as 00:23:870 -
6. 00:48:384 (10,11) - delete? I think it need to make 4/1 break for beginner.
7. 00:54:213 (20) - ^

[Futsuu]

1. Please fix SV to 1.40.
2. 00:20:956 (35) - move to 00:20:613 - ? I think that flow becomes natural by fiting to vocal.
3. 00:22:327 (38) - move to 00:22:499 - ? I suggest fit to vocals just like Kantan.
4. 00:23:699 (41) - move to 00:23:870 - ? ^
5. 00:25:070 (44) - move to 00:25:242 - ? ^
6. 00:27:813 (50) - move to 00:27:984 - ? ^
7. 00:29:184 (53) - move to 00:29:356 - ? ^
8. 00:30:556 (56) - move to 00:30:727 - ? ^
9. 00:34:670 (65) - move to 00:34:842 - ? ^
10. 00:38:784 (74) - move to 00:38:956 - ? ^
11. 00:40:156 (77) - move to 00:40:327 - ? ^
12. 01:39:127 (59) - move to 01:39:299 - ? ^
13. 01:40:499 (62) - move to 01:40:670 - ? ^
14. 01:47:356 (78) - move to 01:47:527 - ? ^
15. 01:50:099 (82) - move to 01:50:270 - ? ^
16. 01:51:470 (85) - move to 01:51:642 - ? ^
17. 01:55:584 (94) - move to 01:55:756 - ? ^
18. 01:56:956 (97) - move to 01:57:127 - ? ^
19. 01:15:470 (20) - Slider is unsnapped. Please fix.
20. 01:37:413 (56) - remove finisher? Because sound is weak.

[Muzukashii]

1. change SV to 1.40? 1.40 is used in many ranked maps so it is better.
2. 00:12:213 (10) - delete? I think that pattern is too long for Muzukashii.
3. 00:14:956 (25) - ^
4. 00:17:699 (38) - ^
5. 00:27:299 (88) - ^
6. 00:32:784 (116) - ^
7. 01:34:499 (124) - ^
8. 01:35:870 (132) - ^
9. 01:37:242 (140) - ^
10. 01:49:584 (205) - ^
11. 00:28:499 - 00:28:670 - add notes? It is same as 00:23:013 - 00:23:184 -
12. 00:33:984 - 00:34:156 - ^
13. 01:45:299 - 01:45:470 - ^
14. 01:50:784 - 01:50:956 - ^
15. 01:22:756 (68) - delete? I feel this will make complex for Muzukashii players.
16. 01:28:070 (95) - ^
17. 01:37:842 (145) - delete? I think that be able to emphasize rhythm of vocal.

[Oni]

1. change SV to 1.40? Same reason as Muzukashii.
2. 00:03:813 (21,22) - change to dd? I think that be able to represent difference of pitch between 00:03:984 - and 00:04:156 -
3. 00:55:927 - add k? There is same sound as 00:57:299 -
4. 01:14:099 - ~ 01:16:156 - I think the overall balance is bad because this part is too hard. I suggest to change to 1/4s.

I think that this mapset needs more advice from skilled mappers.
Good luck!

FastBoy wrote:

[Oni]
i don't know why so many notes are not snapped onto the timeline
plz solve this serious problem
btw the pattern in this diff. is not bad

those are my advice
hope that they are helpful to u
enjoy mapping~

lilligantEX wrote:

[oni]
make sure notes and timing points are properly snapped

JarHed wrote:

Oni:

- Its well mapped however add new patterns everywhere where there is 1/4, To be more specific its all DDD or KKK or DDDDK Try to add some patterns in that contribute more technical patterns such as DKD KDDKD\

Im not gonna change much with the Oni simply because the only issue is lack of patterns its well mapped i like it a lot i just think it seems bland ADD MORE PATTERNS

_yu68 wrote:

I think that this mapset needs more advice from skilled mappers.
Good luck!

1. tag : Project' ...delete ' ?

1. 00:06:899 (37) - change k ( high pitch sound. )
   
2. 00:20:442 (120) - delete Finish
   
   
3. 00:17:699 (103,104) - swap. ( follow bass drum sound 00:17:184 (100) - 00:18:556 (110) - )
   or
   00:17:013 (99,100,101,102) - swap ( if you want follow Vocal pitch. )
   
   
4. 00:23:870 (144) - delete Finish or 00:24:727 (150) - delete finish and 00:25:242 (153) - add finish. ( Unity is lacking )
   
   
5. 00:32:099 (199,200) - or 00:31:927 (197,198,199,200) - change d. ( Emphasis 00:32:270 (201) - note. & 00:32:184 (200) - 00:32:270 (201) - is different sound. )
   
   
6. 00:27:984 (172) - 00:28:842 (177) - 00:29:355 (180) - 00:30:213 (185) - 00:30:727 (188) - 00:33:470 (209) - 00:34:327 (214) - 00:34:842 (217) - 00:35:699 (222) - 00:36:213 (225) -00:38:956 (244) - ( some 00:23:870 (144) -)
   
   
7. 00:45:299 (280) - 00:46:671 (287) - 00:48:041 (294) - 00:51:470 (313) - 00:55:584 (334) - 00:56:956 (341) - 00:57:299 (342) - 00:58:327 (348) - 00:59:013 (350) - 01:07:413 (416) - 01:09:984 (426) - delete finish. ( noizy )
   
   
8. 01:16:842 (471) - ADD FINISH
   
   
9. 01:24:384 (519) - delete finish & 01:25:070 - add Finish.
   
   
10. 01:29:870 (553) - 01:34:499 (577) - delete finish.

toara_fict wrote:

M4M

FastBoy wrote:

[Oni]
i don't know why so many notes are not snapped onto the timeline
plz solve this serious problem
btw the pattern in this diff. is not bad

those are my advice
hope that they are helpful to u
enjoy mapping~

lilligantEX wrote:

[oni]
make sure notes and timing points are properly snapped

JarHed wrote:

Oni:

- Its well mapped however add new patterns everywhere where there is 1/4, To be more specific its all DDD or KKK or DDDDK Try to add some patterns in that contribute more technical patterns such as DKD KDDKD\

Im not gonna change much with the Oni simply because the only issue is lack of patterns its well mapped i like it a lot i just think it seems bland ADD MORE PATTERNS

_yu68 wrote:

I think that this mapset needs more advice from skilled mappers.
Good luck!

ok. i check Oni


[ General]

1. tag : Project' ...delete ' ?

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

[ Oni]

1. 00:06:899 (37) - change k ( high pitch sound. )Fixed
   
2. 00:20:442 (120) - delete FinishFixed
   
   
3. 00:17:699 (103,104) - swap. ( follow bass drum sound 00:17:184 (100) - 00:18:556 (110) - )Fixed
   or
   00:17:013 (99,100,101,102) - swap ( if you want follow Vocal pitch. )No, it doesn't fit the vocal either the pitch (slow down the song and you will get it
   
   
4. 00:23:870 (144) - delete Finish or 00:24:727 (150) - delete finish and 00:25:242 (153) - add finish. ( Unity is lacking ) Yeah, I should fix all the Drum sound
   
   
5. 00:32:099 (199,200) - or 00:31:927 (197,198,199,200) - change d. ( Emphasis 00:32:270 (201) - note. & 00:32:184 (200) - 00:32:270 (201) - is different sound. ) Fixed
   
   
6. 00:27:984 (172) - 00:28:842 (177) - 00:29:355 (180) - 00:30:213 (185) - 00:30:727 (188) - 00:33:470 (209) - 00:34:327 (214) - 00:34:842 (217) - 00:35:699 (222) - 00:36:213 (225) -00:38:956 (244) - ( some 00:23:870 (144) -)You mean emphasis
   
   
7. 00:45:299 (280) - 00:46:671 (287) - 00:48:041 (294) - 00:51:470 (313) - 00:55:584 (334) - 00:56:956 (341) - 00:57:299 (342) - 00:58:327 (348) - 00:59:013 (350) - 01:07:413 (416) - 01:09:984 (426) - delete finish. ( noizy )Fixed
   
   
8. 01:16:842 (471) - ADD FINISHFixed
   
   
9. 01:24:384 (519) - delete finish & 01:25:070 - add Finish.Fixed
   
   
10. 01:29:870 (553) - 01:34:499 (577) - delete finish.

Fixed
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

I think unity of placement is very lacking.
It seems that Finish is also arranged at random.
Oni remapped you to recreate it once or ask GD. recommend it.

Good Luck

Namki wrote:

Actually, source must be "東方Project".
Also, it's better to use actual game name as "東方紅魔郷 〜 the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil.", but Cirno appears in a half of Touhou games so idk.

davidminh0111 wrote:

I cant take that metadata because i love this metadata more, Shortthu.
☺

Shortthu wrote:

davidminh0111 wrote:

I cant take that metadata because i love this metadata more, Shortthu.
☺

so, you can't rank this mapset

kvgyubh wrote:

hi,let's mod
☆general
　・from 01:57:984 (819) - --->sv up is too fast.make it more smooth and slower sv up It should be in Inner Oni
☆Inner Oni
　・00:00:042 (1,2,3,4) - --->dddk change to ddkk(?) No, because there is a high pitch at that point
　・00:01:242 (7) - --->change to k(?)Ok
　・00:01:756 (10) - --->change to k(?)Same as 1st one
　・00:03:127 (17,18,19,20) - --->change to kkdd(?) ^
　・00:04:156 (23,24,25,26) - --->change to kkdk(?)^
　・00:05:013 (27,28,29) - --->change to kkk(?)Yeah, there's a high pitch there
　・00:07:242 (39) - --->change to d(?) Still not,high pitch
　・00:07:927 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - --->change to ddkkkdkkk(?)No, the pitch.

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"moe 942041 cirno.jpg",0,00

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"moe 942041 cirno.jpg",0,80

Preview aftrer change

[R] wrote:

yo


[General]
- for better appearance BG, open file in notepad and find :

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"moe 942041 cirno.jpg",0,00

Change to :

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"moe 942041 cirno.jpg",0,80

Preview aftrer change

- consider to remove some finisher while the part is calm I don't know how to do the BG help O_o (now I know)

[Kantan]

00:31:584 - change kat for variety with 00:34:327 - since pitch in here high Ok
00:37:070 - same ^Fixed
00:43:584 - delete No, because there's a vocal here. Not really hard for beginners
01:03:470 - delete ?? it feels no break while there has 2 spinere Yeah, I would agree with that
01:11:013 - guess finishere more work in 01:11:356 - to give emphasize Ok
01:35:013 (1) - spinner should start in 01:35:013 (1) - and the rest 01:35:527 - can add note At 01:36:042 , spinner here
01:54:384 - delete ??Wait, why?? O_o

[Futsuu]
00:17:870 - change kat ti give an emphasize Fixed
00:26:442 - delete ?? density in here high Fixed
00:31:070 - move 00:31:242 - and delete 00:31:413 - No, because there's a vocal there. No change
00:31:584 - instead slider, maybe just put note like kantan thing Still not, because there's a long vocal of the music here.
00:36:042 - add note ?? Ok
00:36:213 - remove finishere, no reasonable to put in hereYeah
00:48:042 (12,13,14) - no need finisher, still calm here, put note in 00:48:213 - instead Only remove finish at 12. add note
00:58:842 - add note ??

[Muzukashii]
00:08:099 - delete Why???? OwO???
00:09:470 - delete ^
00:11:356 - | 00:11:870 - delete for better flow Not better flow
00:14:613 - delete ^ ^
00:47:184 - change kat ?? for variety Sure
00:48:213 - change don ^ Fixed
01:12:042 - delete, it's to long for muzukashi Deleted a note at 01:12:042

[Oni]
00:13:156 - | 00:13:327 - delete, guess stream stop here No, vocal of music... O_o
00:21:042 - delete to match with vocal Fixed
00:26:870 - delete?? Same reason as 1st one
00:32:784 - change kat to emphasize 00:32:956 - Fixed

[Inner]
00:19:584 - an average for increasing SV is around 1-5 | 10 is to far so maybe you can reduce it Fixed

that's all from me
good luck

_yu68 wrote:

I think that this mapset needs more advice from skilled mappers.

Voyage wrote:

SΞCTOR #712

NM Request | ✶ | Taiko

Metadata Check

• Song Title

1. Change the current Song Title to "Cirno no Perfect Sansuu Kyoushitsu", this is the modified Romanisation with correct English for it.
   Source
2. Add "東方紅魔郷　～ the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil." to Source, since this is how the official game title is shown. (The weird hypen spacing is intentional.) I think is Okay to do 東方Project as source
   Tags
3. Change 東方 Project' to 東方Project in tags, there should be no spacing since that's how the official name is shown and also there's no apostrophe after Project.
4. Change Touhou to Touhou Koumakyou in tags, this is the romanised translation of 東方紅魔郷.
5. Add 東方氷雪歌集 in tags, this is the name of the album in Japanese, the song starred in.
6. Add Cirno's Math Class in tags, this would be the song title in full English.
7. Add ARM in tags, he arranged the song.
8. Add 夕野ヨシミ in tags, lyrics were written by them.
9. Add Yuuno Yoshimi in tags, this is the romanised name of 夕野ヨシミ in English.
10. Add miko in tags, since she sang as the vocalist.
11. Add Alternative ending in tags, part of the alias of miko.
12. Add quim in tags, since he was part of the vocals as the chorus.
13. Add Team Shanghai Alice in tags, this is the circle that ZUN releases Doujin games/music under.
14. Add 上海アリス幻樂団 or 上海アリス幻楽団 in tags, Japanese name of Team Shanghai Alice.
15. Add Otenba Koimusume in tags, romanised translation of the original theme this song was rearranged for.
16. Add おてんば恋娘 in tags, Japanese name of Otenba Koimusume.
17. Add Stage 2 Boss Theme in tags, the arrangement of this song was based on this original boss theme for Cirno created by ZUN.
18. Add IO-0147 in tags, this is the catalog number of the album. (Optional)
19. Add IO-0191 in tags, catalog number of the album "Grimoire of IOSYS – Touhou BEST ALBUM vol.1", which the song also starred in. (Optional)

Sources used: 東方Project第６弾, 東方氷雪歌集, Touhou Anthology of Ice and Snow, Grimoire of IOSYS – 東方BEST ALBUM vol.1, IOSYS's Discography, the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil, Team Shanghai Alice, Lyrics: チルノのパーフェクトさんすう教室, VGMdb, SoundCloud.

General Suggestions

• Audio

1. I'd suggest you get a 192kbps MP3 version of this song since the MP3 you use currently in the Song Folder is 160kbps and the higher bitrate would make the audio experience better. changed
   Unused Hitsounds
2. You have unused custom Hitsounds in your Song Folder, delete the following: taiko-normal-hitclap.wav, taiko-normal-hitfinish.wav, taiko-normal-hitnormal.wav, taiko-normal-hitwhistle.wav. These custom Hitsounds aren't used since you only used the soft sampleset of the custom Hitsounds you applied for the Inherited Timing Points.
   Inconsistent Values
3. All of your tags from other difficulties conflict with Muzukashii's tags, make sure to have the same tags for all of the difficulties to keep consistency.
4. Your Muzukashii difficulty has a different Source compared to the rest of the mapset, make sure the source is "東方紅魔郷　～ the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil." for all of the difficulties.
5. Make sure to turn off Widescreen support for all difficulties except Oni, since that difficulty has it unchecked already. Your map doesn't have a storyboard currently so you don't need this option on. You can find it by going to Song Setup > Design > Misc. Toggles > Widescreen Support and toggling that option off for all difficulties except Oni since Oni has it unchecked already.
6. All difficulties except Kantan and Muzukashii don't actually have the correct 1.40x base SV. You can fix this by going into File > Open osu. in Notepad > Difficulty > Slider Multiplier and changing that decimal number to 1.40x for the base SV. Do this for all difficulties except Kantan and Muzukashii since both of them are correct already.
   Difficulty Settings
7. Not sure why you have the same difficulty settings for all of the mapset so here's some suggestions: Kantan - OD3 and HP7, Futsuu - OD4 and HP6, Muzukashii - OD5 and HP5, Oni - OD5.5 and HP5, Inner Oni - OD6 and HP6. You can adjust these settings under Song Setup > Difficulty, hold shift for the decimal settings.
   Hitsound Volume
8. While 100% is applicable as the Hitsound volume for all of your Inherited/Timing Points, I still feel that you can tone it down 95% or 90% even and it still have the same effect since 100% is a bit loud considering it's used throughout the entire song; especially with the custom Hitsounds. Make sure to apply these changes for all of the mapset if you choose to change this.

It's good for 100% custom hitsounds because this sounds are too small [Kantan]

1. 00:19:927 (22) - Change to D finisher, you used a Don finisher for the same sound earlier at 00:19:242 (20), would keep consistency.
2. 00:45:984 (6) - Change to k, The vocalist sounds different here and you can emphasize that since these two notes earlier at 00:45:299 (4,5) are similar.
3. 00:51:470 (14) - ^, same reasoning as above.
4. 00:55:585 (19) - ^, same as the reason stated above.
5. 00:56:956 (22) - ^, same like the reasons shown above.
6. 00:57:984 (24) - Change to k, it would contrast the two notes at 00:57:642 (23,25) and emphasize the vocals a bit better than regular 1/2 (d,d,d).
7. 01:05:989 - Inherited Timing Point here is unsnapped, make sure to snap this to 01:05:956, if you're using the 1/4 Beat Snap.
8. Change to d finisher, the vocalist is loud here and so is the bass here as well.
9. 01:13:413 (10) - Change to k, it would represent the louder vocals here and the snare drums here as well.
10. 01:16:842 (1) - Change to K finisher, not sure why you missed this but, you can emphasize the start of the Kiai section and the loud crash sound here.
11. 01:23:527 (11) - Move this note back to 01:23:356, sound much better here since we're going off of the vocals here and the rhythm kinda abruptly stops here. Nah, it sounds much better in red tick

[Futsuu]

1. 01:07:584 (5) - Change to k, sounds better than a regular Don and plus, plays well as it's the opposite of this pattern earlier at 01:05:870 (1,2,3).
2. 01:16:842 (21) - Change to K finisher, start of the Kiai section and you can show that with a finisher and there's also a loud crash sound here that can be represented.

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:07:756 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - This little section right here uses Kats way too much and it's a bit boring to play, just adding Dons into this section would make it more fun in variation and as well as sound rhythmically better.
2. 00:37:584 (138) - Change to d, this would contrast and emphasize the Kats at 00:37:756 (139,140,141) much more and also prevent the overusage of Kats here.
3. 00:40:670 (154) - ^, same as the reasoning above, just in a different place for the pattern but it still offers variation and sounds better as well.
4. 01:00:384 (229,230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252) - This section here is just constant 1/2 notes, why not break them up in smaller parts since it's a bit hard to play these patterns at Muzukashii level?
5. 01:15:470 (41) - This slider end here is unsnapped, make sure to snap the slider end to 01:16:242 if you're using 1/4 Beat Snap.
6. 01:16:842 (42) - Change to K finisher, emphasizes the start of Kiai section and the synthetic sounds here.
7. 01:46:499 (182,183,184,185,186,187,188) - Any justification for using all Kats here? I feel like you could of change some of these into Dons and it would sound better and be more fun to play.
8. 01:54:213 (222) - Change to d, would emphasize the bass here a lot better and add variation into this pattern here.

[Oni]

1. 01:00:384 (359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383) - Stream is a bit too long for an Oni difficulty, breaking the stream into smaller parts would suffice.
2. 01:04:499 (394,395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402,403,404,405,406,407,408,409,410) - ^, same as the reason shown above.
3. 01:05:989 - Inherited Timing Point here is unsnapped, make sure to snap this to 01:05:956, if you're using the 1/4 Beat Snap.

Overall Summary

1. Quite a lot of inconsistencies and simple mistakes that make executing the mapset's concept a bit hard to show, but with some more mods; this mapset can be better.

Best of endeavors with this mapset.
Thanks for requesting from SΞCTOR #712.

Ellyu wrote:

From my q.
Mainly focus on Oni since there are lots of things need to be done.

[Oni]
00:13:156 (75) - delete this since the downbeat is at 00:13:070 (74) - so if you delete it it can emphaszie it better.
00:15:813 (95) - should be k cuz the pitch enhanced on the last note.
00:16:156 (97,98) - add finish to emphasize it better.
00:21:299 (126) - change it to d. a switch of d/k can emphsize the special sounds on 00:21:470 (127,128) -
00:22:756 (133,134,135,136) - 4 circle stream should be used very carefully cuz it is always hard. at here i think dd d or a triplet here better. and you better keep consistence at this portion. most of the time u use triplet so why don't you keep it here.
00:24:128 (143,144,145,146) - same as^
00:23:184 (137,138,139) - dkk is kinda uncommon cuz it always emphasize the first k at it. so ddk better. It's not about uncommon, it's about how the notes fit the pitch. Btw, fixed that
00:29:699 (179,180,181) - same as^
00:32:184 (198) - delete this to break the long combo. this stream is almost a inner oni pattern.
00:37:757 (233,234,235,236,237) - kkkkd to emphasize 00:38:099 - better,
00:53:870 - add a circle here. 3/2 gap is to large here. No, it's okay
01:00:384 (358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382) - break it. too long for a oni. and they are extremely hard for a kddk player. it require good balance to hit them.
01:04:499 (393,394,395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402,403,404,405,406,407,408,409) - this one too.
01:18:213 (478,479,480,481,482) - kdd d to emphasize 01:18:556 - better
01:38:099 (599) - this slider too short. and that is very uncommon to see in taikoStill not uncommon, not about it but have a long vocal here.

_yu68 wrote:

I think that this mapset needs more advice from skilled mappers.

I am sorry to say: yes I totally agree on this. though I am not a very good taiko modder or mapper. the general quality can be polished a lot. especially on higher diffs.
GL

strickluke wrote:

From my queue t/594747

Kantan

1. 00:03:470 (4) - You could get away with adding a k here to make this part less boring
2. 00:08:956 (9) - ^
3. 00:11:699 (10,11,12,13,14,15) - Get rid of all finish hitsounds on these notes, as there is not a sound to make it a big D or K
4. 00:19:927 (22) - Get rid of the finish hitsound here
5. 00:21:642 (24,25) - Make this pattern into k D since there is a strong emphasis at
   and calm part at d so I'm not gonna change it
6. 00:35:013 (39) - Move this note to here for consistency in patterns 00:34:842 (39) - I know is consistency but like _yu68 said is don't put like that, too complex for beginners
7. 00:43:927 (2) - Make this a D Not a strong emphasis so no.
8. 00:52:156 (15) - Make this a k for some varation
9. 00:54:899 (18) - You could get away with making this a D if you want -_.- no thanks
10. 00:57:984 (24) - Move this note to 00:59:356 (27) -
11. If you accepted the previous suggestion, get rid of this finish hitsound 00:59:013 (26) -
12. 01:00:384 (1) - Have this spinner end here so that there is a 2/1 space between spinner end and a note 01:02:442 (1) -
13. 01:03:127 (1,2) - I would personally make this pattern like this http://puu.sh/vWIKT/68fe9390e7.jpg
14. 01:08:099 (3) - Move this note to 01:07:756 (3) - , as it is a rhythm that the player is used to from earlier patterns
15. 01:11:013 (6) - Move this note to 01:10:499 (6) - for the reasons above, and change this note to k
16. 01:13:756 (11) - Delete this note No because there's a vocal there
17. 01:11:356 (7,8,9,10) - Have all of these notes be on the white ticks and are evenly spaced (ex: http://puu.sh/vWIUn/a51ed9137f.jpg)) Hmm.. I should ignore this because there's something that should be follow the vocal/color]
18. 01:22:327 (9,10,11,12) - Weird rhythms like these are not good in Kantan diffs. I would recommend changing this to use more white ticks in the pattern
19. 01:29:184 (20,21) - Get rid of these finish hitsounds, as you just did a bunch before this part of the song
20. 01:34:670 (27) - The music does not really call for a finish hitsound right here
21. 01:36:042 (1) - Have this spinner end on the white tick before where it currently ends so that there is a 2/1 space
22. 01:42:898 (4) - Make this for some variation
23. 01:48:384 (8) - ^
24. 01:53:870 (15) - ^

I am looking at the rest of the difficulties and I have noticed that, unfortunately, a lot of the diffs have very similar problems to the Kantan difficulty. I would suggest applying a lot of the same mistakes to your other difficulties.

One of the main problems that I see a problem in is a bunch of D's and K's in weird spots.

Another main problem is general inconsistency in patterns.

Good luck on this mapset!

Diva Days wrote:

[ Futsuu]

00:12:384 (19) - don't understand why u add finish here. Fixed
00:15:127 (23) - ^ Fixed
00:17:870 (29) - u added finish on (25), so why not here? Ok
00:20:270 (34) - ^ as (32) Calm part here, no change
00:20:613 (35) - better change to k Slow down the song and you will get why did i choose d not k. No change
00:21:642 (36) - (37) have finish sound but why add finish here? This part is quite calm here so... No change
00:24:727 - Fixed lul
00:28:842 (51) - this ain't jumpscare game. .....
00:30:213 (54) - ^ ^ I get it, the Finish here is too close to the normal note. But I think these parts have a high pitch I think. I will think about that later.
00:54:042 (27) - want to keep finish on (28), change it to d High pitch and easier for Futsuu players
01:14:099 (18),(19) - no finish? what's that you want to add finish lol I don't want to add finish all the places. At first I wasn't a skilled mapper here so I add Drum randomly. But this is a calm part so no change, Diva
01:16:842 - kiai time is easier than 00:21:984 this part.. and next part Ughhh... what do you mean ?
01:18:213 - 01:29:184 (44) isn't K but why here is K? I will remove the K here since there isn't a very high pitch. : )
01:31:927 (48) - :/ :/
01:57:984 (98) - huge break, so why not slider or spin here? Added

[Muzukashii]

i just opened, there's not much 1/2 breaks... what? At first, this is a high BPM music so there isn't much 1/2 breaks you know. I will think about it later Why is osu! so complicated lul

https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Muzukashii

no kds to me, i just skipped mod to Muzu.I don't care. You deserve it.Don't tell the BN to deny it jk lul

Kith190 wrote:

Hi NM as asked here

General

In taiko mapping you have to deselect "Enable countdown" and "Widescreen support" in Song Setup > Design

Kantan

why don't you put a k here 00:22:499 - and here 00:25:242 - as you have done here 00:23:870 - ? Added
same thing in those places :
00:27:984 - Added
00:27:984 - Added
00:33:470 - Added
00:36:213 - Added
00:38:956 - Added
than moving this one 00:35:013 - to here 00:34:842 - Fixed
this one 01:00:727 - starts here 01:00:384 - Fixed
to be coherent you should put a d here 01:09:127 - OR remove this one 01:11:870 -Removed the second one

Futsuu

what about putting a k here 00:10:156 - ? Added
from here 00:21:642 - to here 00:25:584 - i don't get the melody... I think you should do sometehing like:
from this

to this

or something similar Fixed
same thing here 00:27:470 - and here 00:32:956 - cause those parts have the same melody but are mapped in different way.. It could be me but I think this part needs a little rework; a newbie blayer wouldn't be able to get the rythm in this way I suppose Fixed
01:11:699 - change to k (?) Added

Muzukashii

this diff is already ok ;D, maybe some more pauses

Oni

00:11:870 - change to k Fixed
00:12:214 (66,67) - control + g It seems there is a high pitch in 00:12:384 and calm part at 00:12:213 . So I'm not gonna change them
00:27:470 - change to k Fixed
00:32:784 - change to d Fixed
00:39:642 - change to d Fixed
why this note 00:40:413 - is not here 00:40:327 - ? Oops, made a mistake when mapping. Fixed (SORRY!)/color]
01:08:613 - control + g
01:25:413 - change to k (not sure) Ok not sure no change lul (because low pitch here)
01:34:670 (564,565,566,567,568,569,570) - from kkkkkkk to kkddkkd Ok
01:43:670 - change to k (?)Fixed

Inner Oni

00:03:127 - change to k Calm part here so no change
00:38:099 - change to d (?) the sound is right with k but I think that d would be cooler to play, so you chose
for the rest I think it's quite ok k will be better

SUMMIT
- Futsuu needs to be fixed a lot
- Muzu and Inner are ok
- For a better star gap you should make kantan a little easier
- "Widescreen support" has to be deselected in all diffs
- I suggest you not to waste kudosu, you can get a map ranked even with few kudosu, you need mods. Okey

Maybe this mapset will need some more mods. Anyway Good Luck for ranking!!!

1. 00:01:413 (6) - This finisher seems very misplaced, so please remove it.
2. 00:05:870 (18,19,20,21) - Why is this different from the doubles before (00:00:384 (2,3,4,5) - 00:01:755 (7,8,9,10) -)? There is no need to change them since the song is the same here.
3. 00:09:471 (33) - Change to d so it can follow the pitch of the melody better.
4. 00:11:356 (5,6,7,8,9) - Since you are mapping mostly to voice and melody, this pattern doesn't fit very well in here imo. Either ctrl+g 00:11:356 (5,6) - or move 00:11:356 (5) - to 00:11:527 - and delete 00:11:527 (6) - , but there may still be better options than that I'd say.
5. 00:13:756 (19) - Again, no reason yet to put a finisher here already.
6. 00:15:127 (24) - Same as before.
7. 00:16:499 (31) - Now it's even indicated in the song. so why doesn't this note have a finish hitsound?
8. 00:19:070 (44) - Change to d so the next note has more impact.
9. 00:21:642 (55) - I wouldn't put a finisher here yet, although maybe I get why you did it. Either switch it with 00:21:984 (56) - or remove the finish sound completly (better), so the voice is not overaccentuated.
10. Green line at 00:22:005 - needs to be changed to 00:21:984 - so this note 00:21:984 (56) - is snapped to the barline.
11. 00:27:470 (85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95) - I don't get why this is different from 00:21:984 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66) -, please unify them.
12. 00:31:413 (105) - d because melody with high notes only starts at the next note.
13. 00:33:813 (118,119,120,121,122,123,124) - Again, unify this as before please.
14. 00:39:642 (148) - Change to k so it matches previous patterns.
15. 00:40:670 (153,154) - Ctrl+g, the pitch of the melody is going the other way.
16. 00:47:184 (180,181) - Ctrl+g so you mirror 00:45:299 (172,173,174,175,176) - and follow the pitch of the voice again.
17. 00:47:699 (182) - d bc of voice pitch.
18. 00:49:584 - You could put a d here, since you used triplets before. It would help with the flow of the voice again.
19. 00:50:784 (192,193,194,195,196) - Change this so it matches with previous patterns. I suggest a k here 00:51:042 -, change 00:51:127 (194) - to k and ctrl+g 00:51:299 (195,196) -.
20. 01:09:984 (16) - This is a very calm part so no finisher here please, even if the song indicates it.
21. Green line at 01:16:842 - needs to be changed to 01:16:841 - so the note is snapped onto the barline again.
22. 01:17:184 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - Change that section to be exactly as 01:28:327 (93,94,95,96,97,98) -, there is no difference between them.
23. 01:18:213 (49) - No finisher needed here.
24. 01:30:042 (101) - Move to 01:29:699 - and change to k so it matches the pattern of the first half in the Kiai.
25. 01:31:413 (107,108) - Ctrl+g to match voice pitch and patterning as before.
26. Unify 01:21:299 (62,63,64) - and 01:32:270 (111,112,113,114) - because there is no difference again.
27. Unify 01:21:984 (65,66) - and 01:32:956 (115,116) - for the same reason.
28. 01:34:242 (120) - This triplet makes no sense, remove it or change 01:33:813 (117,118,119,120,121) - to this.
29. 01:38:784 (143) - Recolor to match 00:21:984 (56,57,58,59) - and so on.
30. 01:44:099 (171,172) - Ctrl+g and 01:44:613 (174) - to d so the pattern fits again (like in 00:21:984 (56,57,58,59) - )
31. 01:45:127 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - Change both to match 00:22:842 (60,61,62,63,64,65,66) - OR only change 01:45:127 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182) - to match 01:46:499 (183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - for consistency.
32. 01:49:756 (201,202,203) - Change to match 00:21:984 (56,57,58,59) - again.
33. 01:59:184 (246) - and 00:42:384 (160) - need to be same color, what you choose is up to you.

1. 00:01:242 (7,14) - Melody is the same here, so I'd suggest you unify these notes.
2. 00:13:756 (79) - No finisher needed here yet.
3. Place green line at 00:17:013 - to 00:16:499 - since that is the point where your next bar begins; mid-bar SV changes are very inconvenient.
4. 00:19:070 (114) - Change to d again so the note after it gets more impact.
5. 00:19:242 - 00:21:984 - This speedup section needs a complete rework, you have to make it smoother and more consistent overall. Also make sure it doesn't change too abruptly from 2.0x to 1.1x, try 1.5x to 1.1x instead.
6. 00:21:299 (127) - Change to d to match voice pitch.
7. 00:21:642 (129) - Same reason I gave you in Muzukashii.
   
   1. 00:21:984 - 00:26:099 - I recommend to rework this part to make it consistent in itself, there are three quarters that sound exactly the same where it seems you put notes almost indiscriminately.
   2. 00:27:470 - 00:31:584 - If compared to the last section you can see more clearly what was mapped to. I would still remove the 1/6 since they don't fit in the song at all and adjust the previous section to this one.
   3. 00:32:956 - 00:37:070 - Again, please unify this section with the previous ones so it is more intuitive to play.
8. 00:59:870 (395,396,397,398,399) - Instead of having a 1/4 stream here I would accentuate this part with finishers as you did in 00:55:927 (366) - and 00:57:127 (375,376) - .
9. 01:02:699 - Add k and change 01:02:784 (427) - to d to make the stream flow better.
10. 01:04:499 - 01:05:870 - Add some more SV changes to make the slowdown more smooth, so the note at 01:05:870 (455) - doesn't seem invisible until the last moment.
11. 01:12:384 - Really unnecessary speedup, remove it please.
12. 01:14:099 - 01:16:327 - Those 1/6ths are not fun to play as they don't fit in the song at all. Smooth them out to be 1/4ths please.
13. 01:18:213 (544) - No finisher hitsound needed here.
14. 01:19:584 (557) - Same here...
15. 01:23:356 (580) - here...
16. 01:27:127 (601) - and here.
17. 01:35:184 (659,661) - Ctrl+g to smooth out the stream, since the current pattern doesn't fit the song.
18. 01:36:042 - 01:37:413 - If you want a speedup at this part just put a green line a the beginning of it. No need for multiple changes here.
19. I also recommend to check out the next parts and compare them to 00:21:984 - 00:37:070 - since most of it is identical.
    
    1. 01:38:784 - 01:42:899 -
    2. 01:44:270 - 01:48:384 -
    3. 01:49:756 - 01:53:870 -

Ak1o wrote:

Hi! Here from mod queue!
Going to mod Muzukashii and Inner Oni as requested.

[Muzukashii]

I found this diff mostly inconsistent with many misplaced finishers that doesn't seem to fit the song. I haven't looked in the other diffs yet, but I guess you need still quite a bit of mods if you want to get this mapset ranked.

1. 00:01:413 (6) - This finisher seems very misplaced, so please remove it.
2. 00:05:870 (18,19,20,21) - Why is this different from the doubles before (00:00:384 (2,3,4,5) - 00:01:755 (7,8,9,10) -)? There is no need to change them since the song is the same here.
3. 00:09:471 (33) - Change to d so it can follow the pitch of the melody better.
4. 00:11:356 (5,6,7,8,9) - Since you are mapping mostly to voice and melody, this pattern doesn't fit very well in here imo. Either ctrl+g 00:11:356 (5,6) - or move 00:11:356 (5) - to 00:11:527 - and delete 00:11:527 (6) - , but there may still be better options than that I'd say.I got your idea but this vocal an melody here is fit the pitch and flow better Imo. No change
5. 00:13:756 (19) - Again, no reason yet to put a finisher here already.
6. 00:15:127 (24) - Same as before.
7. 00:16:499 (31) - Now it's even indicated in the song. so why doesn't this note have a finish hitsound?
8. 00:19:070 (44) - Change to d so the next note has more impact.
9. 00:21:642 (55) - I wouldn't put a finisher here yet, although maybe I get why you did it. Either switch it with 00:21:984 (56) - or remove the finish sound completly (better), so the voice is not overaccentuated.
10. Green line at 00:22:005 - needs to be changed to 00:21:984 - so this note 00:21:984 (56) - is snapped to the barline.
11. 00:27:470 (85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95) - I don't get why this is different from 00:21:984 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66) -, please unify them.
12. 00:31:413 (105) - d because melody with high notes only starts at the next note.
13. 00:33:813 (118,119,120,121,122,123,124) - Again, unify this as before please.
14. 00:39:642 (148) - Change to k so it matches previous patterns.
15. 00:40:670 (153,154) - Ctrl+g, the pitch of the melody is going the other way.
16. 00:47:184 (180,181) - Ctrl+g so you mirror 00:45:299 (172,173,174,175,176) - and follow the pitch of the voice again.
17. 00:47:699 (182) - d bc of voice pitch.
18. 00:49:584 - You could put a d here, since you used triplets before. It would help with the flow of the voice again.
19. 00:50:784 (192,193,194,195,196) - Change this so it matches with previous patterns. I suggest a k here 00:51:042 -, change 00:51:127 (194) - to k and ctrl+g 00:51:299 (195,196) -.
20. 01:09:984 (16) - This is a very calm part so no finisher here please, even if the song indicates it.
21. Green line at 01:16:842 - needs to be changed to 01:16:841 - so the note is snapped onto the barline again.
22. 01:17:184 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - Change that section to be exactly as 01:28:327 (93,94,95,96,97,98) -, there is no difference between them.errr, The previous part of the music seems to be flow better. No change
23. 01:18:213 (49) - No finisher needed here.
24. 01:30:042 (101) - Move to 01:29:699 - and change to k so it matches the pattern of the first half in the Kiai.
25. 01:31:413 (107,108) - Ctrl+g to match voice pitch and patterning as before.
26. Unify 01:21:299 (62,63,64) - and 01:32:270 (111,112,113,114) - because there is no difference again.
27. Unify 01:21:984 (65,66) - and 01:32:956 (115,116) - for the same reason.
28. 01:34:242 (120) - This triplet makes no sense, remove it or change 01:33:813 (117,118,119,120,121) - to this.
29. 01:38:784 (143) - Recolor to match 00:21:984 (56,57,58,59) - and so on.
30. 01:44:099 (171,172) - Ctrl+g and 01:44:613 (174) - to d so the pattern fits again (like in 00:21:984 (56,57,58,59) - )
31. 01:45:127 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - Change both to match 00:22:842 (60,61,62,63,64,65,66) - OR only change 01:45:127 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182) - to match 01:46:499 (183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - for consistency.
32. 01:49:756 (201,202,203) - Change to match 00:21:984 (56,57,58,59) - again.
33. 01:59:184 (246) - and 00:42:384 (160) - need to be same color, what you choose is up to you.

If this seems too destructive to you I am very sorry, but I wanted to change your diff to be more intuitive for most players that aren't that good yet.


[Inner Oni]

Most speedups seem inconsistent and sloppy, many issues I found were also in the previous diff I modded.

1. 00:01:242 (7,14) - Melody is the same here, so I'd suggest you unify these notes.
2. 00:13:756 (79) - No finisher needed here yet.
3. Place green line at 00:17:013 - to 00:16:499 - since that is the point where your next bar begins; mid-bar SV changes are very inconvenient.
4. 00:19:070 (114) - Change to d again so the note after it gets more impact.
5. 00:19:242 - 00:21:984 - This speedup section needs a complete rework, you have to make it smoother and more consistent overall. Also make sure it doesn't change too abruptly from 2.0x to 1.1x, try 1.5x to 1.1x instead.
6. 00:21:299 (127) - Change to d to match voice pitch.
7. 00:21:642 (129) - Same reason I gave you in Muzukashii.
   
   1. 00:21:984 - 00:26:099 - I recommend to rework this part to make it consistent in itself, there are three quarters that sound exactly the same where it seems you put notes almost indiscriminately.
   2. 00:27:470 - 00:31:584 - If compared to the last section you can see more clearly what was mapped to. I would still remove the 1/6 since they don't fit in the song at all and adjust the previous section to this one.
   3. 00:32:956 - 00:37:070 - Again, please unify this section with the previous ones so it is more intuitive to play.
8. 00:59:870 (395,396,397,398,399) - Instead of having a 1/4 stream here I would accentuate this part with finishers as you did in 00:55:927 (366) - and 00:57:127 (375,376) - . It'd be rough for the advanced Players. No change
9. 01:02:699 - Add k and change 01:02:784 (427) - to d to make the stream flow better.
10. 01:04:499 - 01:05:870 - Add some more SV changes to make the slowdown more smooth, so the note at 01:05:870 (455) - doesn't seem invisible until the last moment.
11. 01:12:384 - Really unnecessary speedup, remove it please.
12. 01:14:099 - 01:16:327 - Those 1/6ths are not fun to play as they don't fit in the song at all. Smooth them out to be 1/4ths please.
13. 01:18:213 (544) - No finisher hitsound needed here.
14. 01:19:584 (557) - Same here...
15. 01:23:356 (580) - here...
16. 01:27:127 (601) - and here.
17. 01:35:184 (659,661) - Ctrl+g to smooth out the stream, since the current pattern doesn't fit the song.
18. 01:36:042 - 01:37:413 - If you want a speedup at this part just put a green line a the beginning of it. No need for multiple changes here.
19. I also recommend to check out the next parts and compare them to 00:21:984 - 00:37:070 - since most of it is identical.
    
    1. 01:38:784 - 01:42:899 -
    2. 01:44:270 - 01:48:384 -
    3. 01:49:756 - 01:53:870 -

I really hope you don't start hating me for this, since this is just an opinion of how I see how to make your maps better. I say so because I addressed many points here, some of which you maybe chose for a good reason, yet I found it difficult to follow some of your patterns throughout their (in)consistency. Be sure to find more people looking at this mapset, since this would improve it overall and make it better.

I still hope I could help you with this mod, and wish you good luck with ranking it!

Nifty wrote:

Oh man here we go

- Oni -

00:02:784 (15) - I'm gonna fix up this beginning little area. Change this to k, and 00:03:642 (20) - this to d. Work better with what's you're mapping (I assume is the piano thing) I think it's flow better

00:05:184 (29) - change to k to stay consistent with Inner and cause it makes sense. Ok

00:10:156 (55) - remove finisher, this isn't an accented note. Removed

00:11:356 (60) - remove, the only sound here is a tiny blip in my right ear. It connects to the next vocal of the music so it's okay

00:14:099 (79) - remove again, no sound^

00:15:213 (85) - I don't like this whole stream as I don't think it should be in an Oni, but if you're gonna do anything remove this note because there's no sound. Removed a note at 00:15:384

00:16:327 - add k because... there's a sound here, and you're mapping vocals kinda. What? I don't hear anything (maybe I'm deaf)

00:17:699 (100,101) - ctrl-g, pitch makes more sense that way. Fixed

00:19:756 (113) - change to d for pitch. Fixed

00:24:299 (143) - delete this and make 00:24:214 (142) - a k so it actually fits the music Removed a note at 00:24:127 and changed to k

Ok so if I keep going this mod is going to be 3 forum pages long, so I'll just say this: Just listen closely. Your biggest mistakes so far are mapping things that aren't there and mapping pitches that conflict with what you put for the the same pitches later on. Be mindful of what notes you're putting down and remember that you map is played as an entire thing, not just small parts than can be maneuvered and conflict with each other however they would like.

Stay away from repeated notes like you have at the beginning, since usually the map doesn't demand those to be there and you can be flexible on what pitches are put. You want to create a rhythm in your map, so in everything you put down, there has to be a pattern of some sort. Preferably mimicking the pattern of the music, but sometimes you can get away with improvisation.

If you combine follow those rules - listening closer and creating a rhythm - you should be able to make a map that I can write less than what I just wrote here on. When you're putting these things into action, it's kinda like following a strict rhythm, but manipulating it to fit the music's attributes and such with filler notes, emphasis spaces, and other types of modifications that are used to make good maps. Ok

- Kantan -

Apply the paragraphs above to this, but a lot simpler.

I would recommend the "baka baka" to be mapped alternating k_k and d_d, so that the first baka baka is k_k, the second is d_d and the third is k_k, and so on. Well, maybe I'll follow my idea is better.

Make 00:41:184 (1) - this spinner into a slider that ends at 00:42:556 - because beginners get confused with spinners. Ok

00:59:699 (27) - no finisher, not an accented note.Removed

01:00:384 (1) - same as before, but end it at 01:02:442 - . Fixed but end in 01:02:784

01:04:499 (1) - same, but end it at 01:05:184 - . ^ End at 01:05:527

01:23:699 (12) - delet dis and make 01:23:699 (12) - a k so it fits. Okey

Add d 01:24:042 - here and 01:24:642 - here and 01:25:756 - here Added

Fix the rest of the spinners, see what I'm getting at with my changes and listen to the music.

Hope I could help ^^ You helped meh.

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Hello, M4M request throught your queue.

[Inner Oni]

There is some kind of bug occured on your diff. Please fix it as 1.40.



Before I say anything about this difficulty, I'd like to specify some general points. The SV changes are not smooth, sometimes it overlaps with measure bar etc... I'm gonna speak about SV changes on this diff now.

00:19:584 (116,117,118,119) - For these 4 notes, on first 2 the SV increase is 0.20x, and on the other 2 it's 0.10x, so I recommend moving the inherited points 1/4 snap further, for example 00:19:756 (117) - move this one to 00:19:927 - here, 00:20:099 (119) - this one to 00:20:270 - here, remove 00:21:127 - this one, 00:21:470 (128) - use 1.80x here and remove 00:21:642 (129) - this one. If you really need to use a SV change here, my way is better because it looks too weird right now, it's not smooth.Ehh, I think it's smooth

00:21:984 - I have no reason to use 1.10x here, the notes are coming too fast and on gameplay 00:21:642 (129,130) - these two are too hard to read. Please change it to 1.00x, it'll look better this way. Strong vocal here.

01:04:499 - Remove this SV change, it also overlaps too much with the previous note.

01:05:870 - Change the SV 01:06:042 - here instead. Changing SV on 1/4 snapping looks too weird if it's not smooth. In this case, it's not so I believe you should give a 1/2 break by moving the point to 01:06:042.

01:16:670 (521) - Again, this note overlaps with 01:16:842 (522) - this one and the bar line is not coming on the note, so add 01:16:756 - 1.00x inherited point here with no kiai, and delete 01:16:670 (521) - this note.

01:36:042 - Move this inherited point 1/4 snap back and 01:37:413 - change this one to 1.00x.

01:59:870 - These two are totally unexpected and coming too fast. Instead, move this point to 02:00:384 - here and change it's value to 1.60x.

Now, for the structure part.

There are no difference on your kat finisher special sounds and normal kat sounds. Remember fixing it.

I didn't understand your mapping style. 00:07:756 - For example, you've skipped all of the drum sounds on this pattern and yet 00:11:699 - overmapped this one. Don't know how to fix it, so figure something out about it. Don't understand what you mean

00:13:156 (75) - Delete this note, the keyboard sounds end on 00:13:070 (74) - this.

00:15:213 (86) - Delete this one and 00:15:299 (87,90) - change these ones to kat. It will emphasize the keyboards better.I think it won't emphasize better.

00:26:699 (164) - Change this one to kat and 00:26:784 (165) - move this one to 00:26:870 - here.No, because there's no reason to put the double notes.

00:29:699 (183,184,185,186) - There are literally no reason to put 1/6 here.

00:30:470 (191,192) - Swap these two and 00:30:384 (190) - delete this one. Better emphasize on keyboard-ish sound.Considering because not about keyboard thingy

00:32:956 - This part is mostly the same due to the sounds with 00:21:984 - this part and yet you mapped them completely different. Consider changing one to other, otherwise your diff will not be consistent.

00:45:299 (291,292,293,294,295,296,297) - 7-plet pattern for this calm part is way too long. Try using 1-3-1 by deleting 00:45:384 (292,296) - these two. Why? It will be complicated for Inner players.

00:49:413 (321,322,323,324,325,326) - I recommend kdkkd k here. Fits vocal better.

00:50:956 (330,331,332) - kkk, 00:51:213 (333,335) - remove these two and 00:51:299 (334) - change to don. Same reason as above.

00:53:870 (347,348) - Make them dons, 00:54:213 (349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357) - kddkddkdk. Follows keyboard in best way.

00:58:156 (378,379) - No reason for keeping them 1/2, add a don 00:58:242 - here to fit the vocals since you are following them.

00:59:613 (390) - kat, 00:59:699 (391) - move 1/4 snap further ( 00:59:784 - ) to fit the drums.

01:04:927 (442,443) - Ctrl + g, 01:05:613 (450,452) - make them kats. The first one will support the keyboards and 2nd one follows drums better.

01:06:213 (455,456,457) - Too many for calm part. Don't use triplets here, 01:06:299 (456) - delete this one. This comment applies for others as well.

01:13:499 (495,497) - Delete, 01:13:584 (496,499) - make them kats. Your pattern does not following anything correctly, so if you apply it it'll follow the drums a bit.

01:15:470 (510,511,512,513,514,515,516,517,518) - kdkkkdkkk, better with keyboard sounds.

01:17:442 (527) - Pattern is too long, delete this one to create a better flow.

01:18:984 (542) - ^

01:21:127 (557,558,559,560,561,562,563) - kdkkddk, as mentioned earlier for the same sound.

01:22:670 - Snare sound, add a kat here.

01:25:327 - Add a kat here and make 01:25:584 (584) - this kat to fit the vocals better.

01:26:013 - Same applies for this spot and 588.

01:27:127 (591,592,593,594) - Instead of k d k d, I recommend kdd kdd. Fits drums better.

01:29:956 (615) - Same suggestion mentioned before, delete.

01:32:099 (629,630,631,632,633,634,635) - Mentioned before.

01:33:642 - Snare sound, add a kat.

01:37:413 - Don't know why you skipped this sound but it's very prominent. Add a don here.

01:46:499 (729,730,731,732) - No need for 1/6 here. Change it to 1/4 kkd.

Well, what I can say for this diff, I simply didn't understand what you've followed and did my suggestions based on the sounds of the music. Overmapping is maybe good, but not following sounds on any place is not. If your other difficulties are like this, you need to change the prominent ones as well to keep the difficulty spread better. I don't have any further suggestions for this map, and I'm guessing you have same issues on your other diffs so I'm gonna skip modding them. The SV changes maybe applies Oni and Muzukashii, i don't know but if it does, change them on these too. I will understand if you don't want to give me kudosu, because I modded only one diff. But, as I said, I think your other diffs have same issues so you can manage them by referencing Inner Oni after you fix it. Good luck on the ranking way, I hope my mod helped.

東方 Project

東方Project

Stefan wrote:

[General]
-) Source needs to be 東方紅魔郷　～ the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil. since the exact game for touhou songs are used now. Unless I've screwed up something with the versions that game should be the right one.

[Inner Oni]
00:04:327 (24) - It sounds strange to me to use kddd here, the pattern just doesn't sound well imo. Use kkdd here instead. Ok
00:06:727 (36,38) - switch them. To have a consistent pattern with 00:00:899 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - but still emphasizing the bigger amount of kat notes.Ok
00:09:984 (54) - to make 00:10:156 (55) - stronger I suggest to go with don here. What? I hear high pitch
00:11:699 (61,62,63,64,65) - I don't know. The stream feels overdone due of the setup you've mapped here. I suggest removing 00:11:784 (62) - at least, it makes it actually okay then. Ok, fixed as kkd
00:12:556 (68,69,70,71,72,73,74) - Also here, 00:12:642 (69) - and 00:12:813 (71) - should be removed and 00:12:899 (72) - changed to don. I don't think so because there's a vocal here. I used 25% speed to hear so no change
00:13:584 (77) - similar reason like 00:09:984 (54) - .Same as first becaus to fit the pitch, d doesn't
00:16:327 - I suggest using a 1.15x line here to make the transistion between 00:16:156 (95,96,97) - smoother. Agere, fixed
00:17:870 (104) - I don't see the usage of kat here, use don instead. Having the dull sound mapped by don like 00:17:184 (99) - looks appropriate and should be consistent. Good, does fit the pitch and flow better
00:19:584 - 00:21:642 - I don't really get behind the structure of the SV usage here. v: I see some ideas behind but they sorta doesn't work imo. Try this instead: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/9CukJeij.png Just do this from the said time above. Fixed by my opinion, check my
00:19:584 (115,116,117,118,119) - either make it to kdkdk or ddkkd, the current pattern just look not structured at all. Ok
00:20:442 (120) - should be don for similar reasons above. Ok
00:43:584 - 00:44:099 - Change the line of 00:43:584 - to 1.75x, add one for 00:44:099 - and stay at 1.00x, for 00:43:927 - you change it to 1.15x. Currently 00:43:584 (281,282) - overlaps ugly and this can be avoided over this way. Fixed
00:45:299 (289,290,291,292,293,294,295) - at least 00:45:384 (290) - should be considered to be removed, the stream itself doesn't suit well. Removed
00:47:699 (305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312) - remove 00:47:784 (306) - , 00:47:870 (307) - and 00:48:127 (309) - . The break before makes the sudden triplet and five-let usage on a pretty constant song very weird.Removed some , 00:48:127 (309) could be harder for Inner players
01:05:870 - add a line with 0.95x, so it works better with the one at 01:06:042 - .
01:16:499 - due a weird barline bug you should move the green line back for one ms, so it should stay at 01:16:498 - . While one ms is not noticeable in-game, especially when it's before the circle it fixed a really stupid rounding bug. Not sure what you mean this, I don't understand
01:36:042 - same applies here too. and for 01:36:727 - . ^
01:37:413 - however should be moved to 01:37:583 - and changed to 1.15x Ok

A lot of weird rhythm decisions imo, as well the impact looks weirdly spreaded for the louder and calmer parts.

[Oni]
00:03:470 (19,20) - wouldn't it sound more impactful if you switched here between don and kat? change 00:03:470 (19,20) - to don notes. Only fixed at 00:03:470
00:12:556 (68,69,70,71,72,73,74) - had to complain on the same stream pattern like Inner Oni, I'd change the part to a simple d k d k d. Same reason as Inner Oni
00:14:956 (85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93) - make this to ddk ddkkd k, it rather catches the sounds in a more organized way. Doesn't fit the pitch
00:22:005 - move the line back to 00:21:984 - where it actually belongs. Ok
00:22:756 (132) - comparing this with the rest of the kiai this falls off from being inconsistent, and honestly I don't see to keep that note at all. You gotta remove that. Removed,.
00:26:784 (159) - What about using kk dddk instead? It'd emphasize the louder sounds in the song better and makes the kk usage at the begin cooler imo.There's vocal on the 00:26:784, no change
00:37:585 (229,230,231,232,233,234) - What about kkkkk k? the music sounds to me it's actually 1/2 earlier for the kat five-let. Nice, fixed
00:43:584 - 00:44:099 - same case that Inner Oni had. Yea
01:00:384 - I find the idea actually okay but we could extend that thought. What about this?: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/ocEv5FEV.png I like that, fixed
01:05:956 - do the same suggestion for a smoother transistion like I said for the previous difficulty. Ok
01:16:842 - again, move the line for one ms back. Still don't get it, explain to me please
01:40:927 (601) - similar to 00:22:756 (132) - this barely makes sense to keep it and suggest to remove instead. Ok
01:54:384 (690,691,692,693,694,695) - like 00:37:585 (229,230,231,232,233,234) - .

Worked better than Inner Oni but also has some consistency problems, difficulty itself is.. okay but really not special at all. It's simple made but feels too simple for my taste, but don't pay too much attention for that opinion.

[Muzukashii]

Gonna be back later again, it's quite late already.. Will wait you someday :3

davidminh0111 wrote:

Stefan wrote:

01:16:499 - due a weird barline bug you should move the green line back for one ms, so it should stay at 01:16:498 - . While one ms is not noticeable in-game, especially when it's before the circle it fixed a really stupid rounding bug. Not sure what you mean this, I don't understand

Stefan wrote:

Stefan wrote:

01:16:499 - due a weird barline bug you should move the green line back for one ms, so it should stay at 01:16:498 - . While one ms is not noticeable in-game, especially when it's before the circle it fixed a really stupid rounding bug. Not sure what you mean this, I don't understand

Ah, I probably got the wrong timestamp. The green line at 01:16:842 - , that one should be moved to 01:16:841 - , so 1ms earlier. The white barline while playing is "wandering around" and it looks messy: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/N11JlXmB.png Removed all, I don't think it necessary to put the SV in.

And the correct source is 東方紅魔郷　～ the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil., that also include the 　～ the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil. part. Just copy the complete bold part in my first mod post. Anyway, let's finish this (please do not give another kudosu for this):

[Muzukashii]
00:11:356 (5) - Move the note to 00:12:213 - or what's even better: Just remove it. The longer break works better with the song. I removed that note because if I put that note in
00:14:784 (23) - What about having the note as kat note? It sounds neater with the vocals. Yep, fixed
00:21:984 - I am unsure if we really need the SV increase but if you prefer that, then this is your decision. Just giving my opinion to that. Removed, unnecessary ;w;
00:21:984 - 00:25:242 - I'd suggest to have that part not so note-heavy. Use less notes to emphasize the most important things, like the vocal's rhythm. https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/obEv9Aef.png You can repeat this step for the similar parts in the kiai. for that case I tried to emphasize the "BAKA BAKA" sounds with kat sounds since they appear to be more noticeable. Ok
00:43:584 - that SV usage is a total no-go for Muzukashii difficulties. Barely anyone at this level will react fast enough and it result in having a miss.Made it lower to 1.20
00:54:899 - 00:58:327 - I'd actually expect some triplets here too but uh.. I will leave you the decision if you want to add some of them or not. Added some
01:08:442 (11) - personally I wouldn't suggest to make "longer" combos here and to keep them short, I'd remove the note. Vocal here,
not very long. no change
01:16:842 - 01:38:442 - similar to 00:21:984 - 00:25:242 - you shouldn't use that many notes, instead you could shortend the combos for certain parts so it comes more forward what you intend to emphasize. For 01:16:842 - 01:22:327 - you can try this: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/rIc2BtFu.png shorter combos, more emphasizing notes and also add some breaks for worse players. The triplet change at the end is optional, I found it better imo. Combos like 01:25:070 (79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - can be kept because they're the "end" of a part and from the situation they fit to be longer.Removed some by my opinion
01:38:784 - 01:57:984 - Just follow what I've mentioned about 00:21:984 - 00:25:242 - . Ok

Kiai part should be nerfed accordingly I've mentioned, so the spread is more stable. Generally, the difficulty needs some fine-tuning but it's prolly okay.

[Futsuu]
Like before, you should not use SV changes. For Futsuu and Kantan they're widely avoided unless it's really necessary, like for BPM changes, etc. Please keep the entire difficulty at 1.00x.

00:00:042 - 00:11:013 - compared to Muzukashii this looks sorta empty. Try to include some more notes, it's not too much but still necessary. Add for example on 00:01:070 - or 00:02:442 - . Added
00:25:584 (44) - for the part of 00:21:984 - 00:26:784 - I'd suggest to be consistent with the 1/2 rhythm and to move the note to 00:25:756 - . Ok
00:29:184 (52,53) - similar, they should be consistent and move to 00:29:356 - (52) and 00:29:699 - (53).
00:31:413 (57) - I'd prefer not to have something that close to the sliderdrum and to remove (57). Ok
00:32:956 - 00:43:070 - follow the previous points above. Yea
01:11:699 (10) - move the note to 01:11:870 - and add a note at 01:12:384 - , I think it connects much better since you used that 1/2 rhythm previously. Ok
01:19:070 - and 01:19:242 - the break looks sorta unnecessary long, what about adding don notes at these timespots? Repeat it for 01:30:042 - 01:30:213 - .Ok
01:19:927 (24) - move the note at 01:20:099 - and add a note to 01:20:613 - , it looks more structured imo and makes it a bit more spicier but not too hard. Fixed
01:38:784 - 01:57:642 - do the same for this section of the map accordingly to the points above. Ok

My problem is that the difficulty gap feels uneven, mostly because Muzukashii is too hard and Futsuu too easy for some parts. However, the main concerns lay in the Muzukashii difficulty.

[Kantan]
00:32:270 (41) - I find it better to have a break between 00:31:584 (40,42) - . Move (41) to 00:30:727 - . Done
01:38:784 - 01:49:756 - That is actually... really weird how low you've mapped this part. I neither see why would you do that, it's even for newer players boring. Added a lot of notes

Actually pretty okay except that part of 01:38:784 - 01:49:756 - . Thanks ( ◕‿◕✿)

Alwaysyukaz wrote:

Hey! NM Modding req from my queue

[General]

consider to reduce volume from 100% to about 80 - 75%. its too loud Reduced to 90%, I used custom hitsound it's too quiet

00:31:584 (67) - Check your Aimod in Futsuu here, its not Unsnapped and here too 01:15:470 (18) - Ok

[Kantan]

1/4 snap lul **jk

00:06:898 (7) - change this to kat? i think its more consistant when i compare with 00:02:784 (3,4,5) - Yea

00:11:012 (11) - i think it would be better to use Finisher here Yea, strong part here

00:19:242 (22) - change to kat? *still confuse @@ Added a note in 00:20:270 and changed to k

00:26:870 (34) - move this to white tick right here 00:26:784 - its not fit when i try it Don't understand what u mean here

00:50:784 (12,13,14) - dkk? its more better when i try to compare with 00:49:413 (10,11) - Doesn't fit the pitch

01:07:756 (3) - remove? it think the vocal sound isnt really needed here imoNo, it will make a 4/1 space a lot

01:14:099 (1) - change the spinner to here 01:15:470 (1) - and add note in 01:14:099 (11) - and 01:14:784 (12) - seems more better and fit Nah, the spinner is for beginners

01:36:384 (1) - better to change it in several note than use one spinner here ^

01:57:984 - until 02:00:042 - ah this,why you dont put the note until the end of the song? lul AH, I FORGOT

[Futsuu]

1/4 snap again lul *runs

00:04:499 (12) - move this to red tick here 00:04:670 - Ok

00:17:184 (36) - why dont u put finisher here? I think this part is calm part, not really strong to me

00:21:642 (45) - change this to don and remove the finisher, then use the finisher in 00:21:984 (46) - *seems you take the wrong place lul you can compare with this 00:20:270 (43,44) - Yea but, I didn't change it to don because it doesn't fit the pitch

00:29:184 (62) - move this to 00:29:356 - Fixed and changed to k as well

00:48:384 (13,14) - i think the finisher isnt really needed here since the sound isnt pretty loud Only removed at 00:48:384

01:45:984 (84) - move this to 01:46:156 - :ok_hand:

Good Luck! ///

Chocola_2287 wrote:

idk, I got this map from whoever he/she is. Moreover, despite being modded by BN, spread issues and pattern issues still exists, especially Inner Oni. I have to address some major issues in Inner oni. Trying to fix that

00:15:899 (92,93,94,95) - the percussion ended here, why do you continue using stream? Ah, I think I haven't listen to the music vocal,
thanks for noticing that, fixed

00:19:242 (113,116) - identical parts, but you are using different patterns. Overall consistency and structure are not good here Ok, fixed

00:21:984 (128,169) - the density of these 2 similar parts are very different, considering the no. of breaks. you should make their density more or less the same. :ok_hand:

01:03:727 (427) - this could be deleted to make a better structure here. Sure, nice either

01:16:842 (510) - why is this part not identical to 01:27:813 (584) - ? These 2 parts are literally the same song fragments, imo you should unite these 2 parts. At most you can have d/k changes only. Agreed with your opinion, and changed to k/d some

01:38:784 (663) - same as previous part (00:21:984) Saem

I am not going to point out specific awkward mapping here (would cause essay modding which I don't prefer), but I do see this map has a lot of work to do before it gets bubble/qualified.

Good Luck! Thanks, idk who request you this map but thanks for your mod, Chocola

Edit: Look at the note gap between futsuu and muzukashii, I am sure that you need to nerf muzu and buff futsuu. Fixing...

BC Yume wrote:

A Taiko BN asks me my opinion on this map. I'm not a Taiko mapper/player.

I think the source is not appropriate. チルノのパーフェクトさんすう教室 is not exactly おてんば恋娘. "Touhou Hyousetsu Kasyuu" is the album features the song (I see you include it in the tag). Most sources of other IOSYS's osu! maps are their respective albums and yours should be no exception. Renamed the source is 東方project, I feel like IOSYS isn''t only in Embodiment of Scarlet Devil, more of them but i don't want to add them to 東方project will make them in general

[Inner]
01:16:327 (490,491,492) - worth placing notes, it feels something is missing there. There are notes with similar melody like in 01:19:242 (511,512,513). Why I don't feel like losing anything

Kantan

Futsuu

Muzukashii

Oni

JessiChan wrote:

Hey, NM request from my queue!

Kantan

1. 00:10:156 - You can add a k here Ok
2. 00:20:270 (26) - Delete this Why? Delete caused loss of music
3. 00:32:613 (46) - Same Same, it doesn't make the game harder
4. 00:47:356 (8) - change to k Low pitch here
5. 00:58:327 (26) - Same^ Same
6. 01:04:499 (4) - I suggest deleting that to replace it with the following: 01:04:499 - add d and 01:05:184 - add k Nice, fixed
7. 01:20:613 (7) - change to k Low pitch
8. 01:26:442 (17,18,19) - This pattern with those bigs is very difficult for these players, removes the red or removes the bigs (finish)Removed finish at 01:26:442
9. 01:31:927 (28) - Change to k Ok

Futsuu

1. 00:04:156 (11) - Change to d d doesn't fit the pitch, and I eant to make consisstency in other diff.
2. 00:08:613 (20,23) - These two, change to d Changed to d at 00:09:299 and 00:08:613
3. 00:20:956 (51) - Delete this, this part is very long xD Deleted at 00:20:613
4. 00:27:127 (69) - Change to k Don't understand what you are saying here, It was k already xD
5. 00:31:584 (82) - The slider ends here for more space to next note Why? It doesn't mater to the note
6. 00:48:384 (15) - Change to d :ok_hand:
7. 01:01:070 (50) - Change to k Pitch is low

Muzukashii

1. 00:03:813 (14) - Change to d Nice, fixed
2. 00:19:927 (41,42) - ctrl + g No, doesn't fit the pitch
3. 00:55:242 (179,180) - ctrl + g Ok
4. 00:56:784 (187) - change to d Fixed
5. 00:58:327 (195) - Change to k Pitch is low

Oni

1. 00:01:756 (8) - change to d Ok
2. 00:42:385 (234) - change to d Nice, fixed
3. 00:46:928 (257,258) - ctrl + g Pitch doesn't fit
4. 01:15:470 (409,410,411,412,413,414,415,416,417) - https://puu.sh/wKkdO/ff8c23ead7.png Wpuld keep my pattern clearer and easier for gameplay

GL

1. 00:01:756 (10) - consider change to k because its the same pitch in here 00:00:384 -
2. 00:03:127 - consider changing to k because it has conflict with oni pattern
3. 00:03:299 - you also could add a note here to make it bit harder than oni
4. 00:21:299 - consider changing to d to emphasize the 2 next notes
5. 00:21:127 - try to make this k like in inner oni
6. from 00:21:984 - to 00:41:184 - such low consistency, you have a lot of variations, its ok to have some but i would recommend you to repeat this section 00:21:984 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146) - everytime the chorus repeats itself, i will point out the times where it does repeat. 00:27:470 - here, 00:32:956 - here, 00:38:442 - and here. i will get so much consistent and you still have some sections where you can improvise like 00:25:584 - 00:31:070 - 00:36:556 -
7. 01:38:784 - ^same as before

1. 00:01:756 - jusst like in inner oni, this sound has the same pitch as 00:00:384 -
2. 00:21:984 - try to keep consistency like in inner oni
3. 01:38:784 - ^same

LZD wrote:

From my mooding queue

Inner oni

1. 00:01:756 (10) - consider change to k because its the same pitch in here 00:00:384 - Fixed
2. 00:03:127 - consider changing to k because it has conflict with oni pattern Ok
3. 00:03:299 - you also could add a note here to make it bit harder than oni Yeah
4. 00:21:299 - consider changing to d to emphasize the 2 next notes Ok
5. 00:21:127 - try to make this k like in inner oni No change due to the pitch
6. from 00:21:984 - to 00:41:184 - such low consistency, you have a lot of variations, its ok to have some but i would recommend you to repeat this section 00:21:984 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146) - everytime the chorus repeats itself, i will point out the times where it does repeat. 00:27:470 - here, 00:32:956 - here, 00:38:442 - and here. i will get so much consistent and you still have some sections where you can improvise like 00:25:584 - 00:31:070 - 00:36:556 -
7. 01:38:784 - ^same as before Check tomorrow

Oni

1. 00:01:756 - jusst like in inner oni, this sound has the same pitch as 00:00:384 - Ok
2. 00:21:984 - try to keep consistency like in inner oni ^
3. 01:38:784 - ^same^

Sorry your song is not so loud, i cant mod this much
Good luck with ranking divadminh0111

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