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Imperial Circus Dead Decadence - Fusyoku Ressentiment, Fushi

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Mayuzumi Sayaka
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Joined January 2015
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Mayuzumi Sayaka
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, October 30, 2017 at 12:01:42 AM

Artist: Imperial Circus Dead Decadence
Title: Fusyoku Ressentiment, Fushiyoku no Sarugakuza.
Tags: metal japanese icdd melodical death stream jump black symphonic rsi merciless
BPM: 210
Filesize: 8766kb
Play Time: 07:05
Difficulties Available:
  1. Death (7.45 stars, 2501 notes)
Download: Imperial Circus Dead Decadence - Fusyoku Ressentiment, Fushiyoku no Sarugakuza.
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You will find Ressentiment here

腐蝕ルサンチマン、不死欲の猿楽座。

Taiko diff
SS: God above gods
S: King also FC: God
A: Champion also FC: King of Kings
B: Competitor also FC: Golden Knight
C: Human also FC: Ming3012
D: Weakling also FC: Saviour of Humans







thanks for help
A r M i N
Mazzerin
Jameslike
Celektus
AlexTroIIPsy
AmatzuYzu
CBullet
Will Stetson
C-Yuyuko
Amos
ScubDomino
Incomp
Moge-ko
ShiiTsuin

thanks for testing
CBullet
Will Stetson
Jameslike
ThePooN
Kynan
Touchette
Gayzmcgee/bro_gamer76
Mazzerin(this guy is my dad)
Last edited by Mayuzumi Sayaka , edited 31 times in total.
AlexTroIIPsy
200 posts
Joined November 2014
AlexTroIIPsy
Hey i saw ur post on my map , sadly i wont update it for some time but u can recheck it if u want after i do ;)
i'll modd ur map since u modded mine
Death
U could have a name with more creativity on it , maybe death but in japanese?
First thing besides the name :V
00:32:479 - 01:27:336 - 03:10:192 - those are timing points that shouldnt exist , the bpm is constant , u only need to fiz the offset from the first one (737 offset? or something near it)

Ok now to the compose section:
00:01:594 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a perfect star using the command ctrl shift D
00:02:165 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - The flow of this stream is terrible to be honest , why dont u remake it using sliders and transform them using ctrl shift F? they have a better flow and visual with it
00:06:737 (1,2,3) - The problem here is the first note , u can either change it or delete the other 2 00:07:022 (2,3) - Copy and paste the first in both places , rotate the second with ctrl shift R in 120 degrees and the third the same thing but 240 degrees
00:08:451 (1,2,3) - Same with other with those (But why , they look weird not beeing perfectly similar , the real reason to change the pattern is that , if u listened to me , u changed the previous pattern , so this should be the same )
00:09:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This one is better than the first one i pointed out , but it still needs to be polished (Use the slider command OwO)
00:11:881 (1,2,3,4) - Thats REALLY GOOD , tho u still need to fix it
First delete those 00:12:453 (3,4) - , then get these 2 00:11:881 (1,2) - and past it where u deleted the others , use the command ctrl H and then ctrl G
After that u select only one of them and press ctrl g again to invert the slider and then u do it to the other one
If u didnt like it this way , do the following : delete these 00:12:167 (2,3,4) - , copy the first one and past it on the second note's spot , then u rotate 90 degrees
After u did that just copy those two , paste and rotate 180 degrees and change the other using ctrl G if u want

00:13:596 (1,2,3) - PERFECT Tho this note 00:14:453 (1) - would be better in the center of it x 252 and y 223 (coordinates if u want to try)
00:17:024 (1,2,3) - Those patterns are really good compared to the ones i pointed out b4
00:18:167 (2,3,4,5) - This square isnt perfect (Use the geometry command ctrl shift D OwO)
00:22:739 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Pretty good if i say so , tho u can make it even better (Use the command , some angles in the stream are kinda weird making it's flow to be kinda of uncomfortable , i recommend u to change only this one 00:23:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - )
00:24:453 (1,2,3,4,1) - Redo this stream
00:27:024 (1,2,3,4,1) - OK i'll stop pointing out some streams , u'll probably see more of those to fix
00:27:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Those jumps seems to be kinda Random , they have no real reason , make some geometric shapes (perfect shapes , not like this 00:28:167 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
00:32:621 (2,4) - stack the 2 on the 4's slider head? or blanket? idk
00:33:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - / 00:39:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Nice OwO
I said i would say anything about streams again but
00:59:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - fix it pls
I'll stop here cuz there are too many things like those ^
And u need to fix some unnecessary overlaps , blankets and A LOT of streams and jumps
03:48:763 - And for last thing , u mapped this with too much intensity , u can barely listen to the sounds , a break here would fit perfectly so the player can rest a bit before the bpm change to 300
I'll Answer ur mod on my map when i update it OwO
And btw , put ur mods on a box , its better like this
And sorry , my english is kinda rusty
Mayuzumi Sayaka
226 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Mayuzumi Sayaka

AlexTroIIPsy wrote:

Hey i saw ur post on my map , sadly i wont update it for some time but u can recheck it if u want after i do ;)
i'll modd ur map since u modded mine
Death
U could have a name with more creativity on it , maybe death but in japanese?
First thing besides the name :V
00:32:479 - 01:27:336 - 03:10:192 - those are timing points that shouldnt exist , the bpm is constant , u only need to fiz the offset from the first one (737 offset? or something near it)

Ok now to the compose section:
00:01:594 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a perfect star using the command ctrl shift D
00:02:165 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - The flow of this stream is terrible to be honest , why dont u remake it using sliders and transform them using ctrl shift F? they have a better flow and visual with it
00:06:737 (1,2,3) - The problem here is the first note , u can either change it or delete the other 2 00:07:022 (2,3) - Copy and paste the first in both places , rotate the second with ctrl shift R in 120 degrees and the third the same thing but 240 degrees
00:08:451 (1,2,3) - Same with other with those (But why , they look weird not beeing perfectly similar , the real reason to change the pattern is that , if u listened to me , u changed the previous pattern , so this should be the same )
00:09:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This one is better than the first one i pointed out , but it still needs to be polished (Use the slider command OwO)
00:11:881 (1,2,3,4) - Thats REALLY GOOD , tho u still need to fix it
First delete those 00:12:453 (3,4) - , then get these 2 00:11:881 (1,2) - and past it where u deleted the others , use the command ctrl H and then ctrl G
After that u select only one of them and press ctrl g again to invert the slider and then u do it to the other one
If u didnt like it this way , do the following : delete these 00:12:167 (2,3,4) - , copy the first one and past it on the second note's spot , then u rotate 90 degrees
After u did that just copy those two , paste and rotate 180 degrees and change the other using ctrl G if u want

00:13:596 (1,2,3) - PERFECT Tho this note 00:14:453 (1) - would be better in the center of it x 252 and y 223 (coordinates if u want to try)
00:17:024 (1,2,3) - Those patterns are really good compared to the ones i pointed out b4
00:18:167 (2,3,4,5) - This square isnt perfect (Use the geometry command ctrl shift D OwO)
00:22:739 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Pretty good if i say so , tho u can make it even better (Use the command , some angles in the stream are kinda weird making it's flow to be kinda of uncomfortable , i recommend u to change only this one 00:23:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - )
00:24:453 (1,2,3,4,1) - Redo this stream
00:27:024 (1,2,3,4,1) - OK i'll stop pointing out some streams , u'll probably see more of those to fix
00:27:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Those jumps seems to be kinda Random , they have no real reason , make some geometric shapes (perfect shapes , not like this 00:28:167 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
00:32:621 (2,4) - stack the 2 on the 4's slider head? or blanket? idk
00:33:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - / 00:39:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Nice OwO
I said i would say anything about streams again but
00:59:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - fix it pls
I'll stop here cuz there are too many things like those ^
And u need to fix some unnecessary overlaps , blankets and A LOT of streams and jumps
03:48:763 - And for last thing , u mapped this with too much intensity , u can barely listen to the sounds , a break here would fit perfectly so the player can rest a bit before the bpm change to 300
I'll Answer ur mod on my map when i update it OwO
And btw , put ur mods on a box , its better like this
And sorry , my english is kinda rusty
Can't really say anything about the mod since many things that you pointed out are intentional and made that way for the increased difficulty
00:27:318 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - try seeing every 4th circle as a NC and you'll see the geometry, I kept them without NC so the player doesn't get as hardly punished if he misses a note or 2
03:48:763 - Personally, I'm not a fan of breaks
However I tried to look for some overlaps, especially in the 300 bpm part and I think I kinda fixed some of it.
Celektus
694 posts
Joined April 2014
Celektus
TAKE THE L
2017-09-01 21:44 Celektus: tell me when you're done with the mod or when I can give you a irc mod
2017-09-01 21:44 Mayuzumi Sayaka: hello there
2017-09-01 21:44 Celektus: hellow there
2017-09-01 21:45 Mayuzumi Sayaka: well i placed the aragami mod on pause
2017-09-01 21:45 Celektus: ok
2017-09-01 21:46 Celektus: I have a question what would you say is the most inrtense section of the song?
2017-09-01 21:46 Mayuzumi Sayaka: theres no doubt about it
2017-09-01 21:46 Mayuzumi Sayaka: 04:29:062 -
2017-09-01 21:46 Mayuzumi Sayaka: onwards till
2017-09-01 21:46 Mayuzumi Sayaka: 05:10:048 -
2017-09-01 21:47 Mayuzumi Sayaka: thats the part that needs most work also
2017-09-01 21:47 Celektus: yea
2017-09-01 21:48 Celektus: that part is very incompreheansible if I can say that
2017-09-01 21:48 Mayuzumi Sayaka: i know its extremly hard to read
2017-09-01 21:48 Mayuzumi Sayaka: but thats cause of the high bpm
2017-09-01 21:48 Celektus: not just that you have like wide angle jump in that
2017-09-01 21:49 Celektus: and 90° angles
2017-09-01 21:49 Mayuzumi Sayaka: i consider myself a straight map if i say so myself
2017-09-01 21:49 Celektus: and very hard direction changes
2017-09-01 21:49 Mayuzumi Sayaka: ik, thats what makes it hard
2017-09-01 21:50 Mayuzumi Sayaka: but it could still be hard and mapped in another way that'd be fun but i dont know that way even after 20 remaps of that part
2017-09-01 21:50 Celektus: well sort of
2017-09-01 21:50 Celektus: I think the first stream specifically should be re done
2017-09-01 21:50 Celektus: 00:02:175 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - 
2017-09-01 21:50 Celektus: all the other streams look way better
2017-09-01 21:51 Celektus: and stuff like 00:02:389 (8,1) - has not the emphasis you want I think
2017-09-01 21:51 Celektus: like that doesn't play like a stream conrner since you can just go with a straight motion thought it
2017-09-01 21:52 Celektus: ctrl + J for 00:02:175 (5,6,7,8) - would sort of help, but it still looks meh so I'd re do the whole pattern
2017-09-01 21:53 Mayuzumi Sayaka: redone
2017-09-01 21:55 Celektus: does it make sense when I say that staight sliders like these 00:10:175 (1,2,3) - often look not very related?
2017-09-01 21:56 Celektus: the angles they're tilted at should be related to each other somehow
2017-09-01 21:56 Celektus: that goes for A LOT of other patterns
2017-09-01 21:56 Mayuzumi Sayaka: made those sliders because of how the song is like at that part
2017-09-01 21:56 Mayuzumi Sayaka: i just imagine those sounds as straight lines
2017-09-01 21:56 Mayuzumi Sayaka: maybe a bit curved but that'd be it
2017-09-01 21:56 Celektus: nah
2017-09-01 21:57 Celektus: I mean the way they're tilted seems very unrelated
2017-09-01 21:57 Mayuzumi Sayaka: ooh
2017-09-01 21:57 Celektus: like if they were all rotated by exactly 120 or something then they would be connected somewhat
2017-09-01 21:57 Celektus: or just being the same angle
2017-09-01 21:58 Mayuzumi Sayaka: making the slider head lead to the other slider would help i guess
2017-09-01 21:58 Celektus: sort of
2017-09-01 21:58 Mayuzumi Sayaka: sentenced it kinda wrong
2017-09-01 21:58 Mayuzumi Sayaka: but ey
2017-09-01 21:59 Celektus: yeeeeeeeeee
2017-09-01 21:59 Mayuzumi Sayaka: made the dota 2 card game logo lul
2017-09-01 21:59 Celektus: xD
2017-09-01 22:00 Celektus: btw do you know that thing that most mappers do where they tilt straight sliders by about 5° so they're never fully straigh?
2017-09-01 22:01 Mayuzumi Sayaka: whenever i play maps like that
2017-09-01 22:01 Mayuzumi Sayaka: they tilt me off the earth
2017-09-01 22:01 Celektus: it's very hard to explain why it looks good or why perfectly horizontel or vertical looks bad, but you might wanna tilt them
2017-09-01 22:01 Mayuzumi Sayaka: but yea i do
2017-09-01 22:01 Celektus: like 00:26:461 (1,2) - 
2017-09-01 22:02 Mayuzumi Sayaka: feels satisfying to do that
2017-09-01 22:02 Mayuzumi Sayaka: xd
2017-09-01 22:03 Celektus: like this https://puu.sh/xp99s.png
2017-09-01 22:03 Celektus: just in case
2017-09-01 22:03 Celektus: this transition could be better 00:36:407 (8,1) - 
2017-09-01 22:04 Celektus: example https://puu.sh/xp9dc.png
2017-09-01 22:04 Mayuzumi Sayaka: i was thinkin of something like that
2017-09-01 22:04 Celektus: again this doesn't really play like a stream corner 00:39:836 (8,1) - 
2017-09-01 22:05 Celektus: since you can just go though it without changing your direction or angle
2017-09-01 22:05 Mayuzumi Sayaka: by that i wanted to emphasize the little crown i imagined in the song
2017-09-01 22:05 Mayuzumi Sayaka: at that moment
2017-09-01 22:05 Mayuzumi Sayaka: and i know that
2017-09-01 22:06 Mayuzumi Sayaka: i didnt mean it to change much of the stream, just for the looks
2017-09-01 22:06 Celektus: you could ctrl + g 00:39:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 
2017-09-01 22:06 Celektus: well this also insn't for the looks
2017-09-01 22:07 Celektus: it should play well
2017-09-01 22:07 Celektus: looks come after gameplay
2017-09-01 22:07 Mayuzumi Sayaka: https://kotasexdungeon.s-ul.eu/OjjTXP0P
2017-09-01 22:07 Mayuzumi Sayaka: something something this might work?
2017-09-01 22:08 Celektus: yea
2017-09-01 22:09 Celektus: also the NC spam here is super uneccesary 00:37:050 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 
2017-09-01 22:09 Mayuzumi Sayaka: how to drain hp
2017-09-01 22:09 Mayuzumi Sayaka: if they miss a circle
2017-09-01 22:09 Celektus: yea but it's not what the song is doing
2017-09-01 22:10 Celektus: there's not a new phrase on each of these
2017-09-01 22:10 Mayuzumi Sayaka: no more only nc
2017-09-01 22:10 Mayuzumi Sayaka: :^)
2017-09-01 22:10 Celektus: why is the spacing here like 4 times lower than usual 00:41:621 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -  anf then big AF here? 00:41:621 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 
2017-09-01 22:11 Mayuzumi Sayaka: you gave the same section
2017-09-01 22:11 Mayuzumi Sayaka: 2 times
2017-09-01 22:11 Celektus: 00:43:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 
2017-09-01 22:11 Celektus: can happen
2017-09-01 22:11 Celektus: zzzzzzzzzzzzz
2017-09-01 22:12 Mayuzumi Sayaka: at 41 he doesnt scream as loud
2017-09-01 22:12 Mayuzumi Sayaka: at 43 however
2017-09-01 22:12 Mayuzumi Sayaka: :^)
2017-09-01 22:12 Celektus: well the question is does he just scream a bit less or like whispers in your ear
2017-09-01 22:12 Celektus: ?
2017-09-01 22:13 Mayuzumi Sayaka: i see your ponit
2017-09-01 22:13 Mayuzumi Sayaka: point
2017-09-01 22:13 Celektus: then make at least this not big 00:43:479 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 
2017-09-01 22:13 Mayuzumi Sayaka: id rather change 41
2017-09-01 22:13 Celektus: and this a bit less maybe 00:45:050 (1,1,2,3) - 
2017-09-01 22:13 Celektus: since those are actually stronger
2017-09-01 22:15 Mayuzumi Sayaka: changed
2017-09-01 22:15 Mayuzumi Sayaka: bigger spacing
2017-09-01 22:16 Celektus: the sirection changes here are a bit too subtle I think 01:00:550 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - like you can't really tell that it's supposed to change direction on 13
2017-09-01 22:16 Mayuzumi Sayaka: this mod will be a long one
2017-09-01 22:16 Mayuzumi Sayaka: i got my beer and popcorn ready
2017-09-01 22:16 Celektus: well I'll try to not repeat problems
2017-09-01 22:17 Celektus: a lot of what I said applies to multiple sections
2017-09-01 22:17 Mayuzumi Sayaka: 01:00:479 (9,10) - so something like this should be for 12,13
2017-09-01 22:17 Celektus: I mean that the S shap in the stream should be stronger
2017-09-01 22:18 Mayuzumi Sayaka: https://kotasexdungeon.s-ul.eu/BWEYQBkY
2017-09-01 22:19 Celektus: yea sort of
2017-09-01 22:20 Celektus: you knwo the biggest problem I think is that starting off with really high star-rate mapping is really hard to give feedback to
2017-09-01 22:21 Mayuzumi Sayaka: i told myself that id pull the kroytz and mazzerin
2017-09-01 22:21 Celektus: like I can't tell you specifically which section are overall too spaced and what difficulty elements are technically too hard
2017-09-01 22:21 Mayuzumi Sayaka: im not a beginner
2017-09-01 22:21 Celektus: you are
2017-09-01 22:21 Celektus: I am in some way
2017-09-01 22:22 Mayuzumi Sayaka: we all are in a way at certain things
2017-09-01 22:23 Celektus: yea but what I mean is that you have beginner problems from my perspective... but most of them boild down to I can't tell you since the song is hard to interpret anyway
2017-09-01 22:24 Celektus: it's mostly the spacing for me
2017-09-01 22:24 Mayuzumi Sayaka: so thats what triggers you
2017-09-01 22:24 Celektus: I can't tell sections apart
2017-09-01 22:25 Celektus: not really triggering
2017-09-01 22:26 Celektus: like you're ideas aren't clear enough, I can see some like the part that has low spacing or the something like this 01:41:050 (1,2,3,4) - 
2017-09-01 22:26 Mayuzumi Sayaka: tbh the map used to be much more spaced\
2017-09-01 22:26 Celektus: yea
2017-09-01 22:26 Celektus: I noticed that
2017-09-01 22:26 Mayuzumi Sayaka: but the amount of people that said it is too hard
2017-09-01 22:26 Celektus: I improved
2017-09-01 22:27 Mayuzumi Sayaka: and i lowered the spacing
2017-09-01 22:27 Mayuzumi Sayaka: by a ton
2017-09-01 22:27 Celektus: it's not that it's too hard
2017-09-01 22:27 Celektus: when peole say that
2017-09-01 22:27 Celektus: if they do they're wrong
2017-09-01 22:27 Celektus: it's about if it represents the song
2017-09-01 22:27 Mayuzumi Sayaka: tl;dr
2017-09-01 22:27 Mayuzumi Sayaka: pull the mazzerin
2017-09-01 22:27 Mayuzumi Sayaka: despite the people's opinions
2017-09-01 22:27 Celektus: not really
2017-09-01 22:28 Mayuzumi Sayaka: in a way to an extent
2017-09-01 22:28 Celektus: it's not like they just say that it's too hard
2017-09-01 22:28 Mayuzumi Sayaka: and know the limit
2017-09-01 22:28 Celektus: yea
2017-09-01 22:28 Mayuzumi Sayaka: i have some maps like croix that like to challenge the player's aim and speed
2017-09-01 22:28 Mayuzumi Sayaka: ill submit that when i can
2017-09-01 22:29 Mayuzumi Sayaka: pretty sure youll like it i guess
2017-09-01 22:29 Celektus: I think a really good example of where your spacing is taking away emphasis would be the solo here02:34:764 - 
2017-09-01 22:29 Mayuzumi Sayaka: in a good or bad way
2017-09-01 22:29 Mayuzumi Sayaka: :^)
2017-09-01 22:29 Celektus: this doesn't really stick out since it's just spaced like every other stream
2017-09-01 22:29 Celektus: and I don't think making it a spaced stream would improve it
2017-09-01 22:30 Mayuzumi Sayaka: ik
2017-09-01 22:30 Mayuzumi Sayaka: there are things in the mapset i mapped when i didnt have ideea what i was doing
2017-09-01 22:30 Mayuzumi Sayaka: tired or bored
2017-09-01 22:30 Mayuzumi Sayaka: that can be seen
2017-09-01 22:30 Celektus: I can't just tell you to make every stream small and leave tho... or at least I think that it can't be fixed
2017-09-01 22:31 Celektus: as in it would take too much effort xd
2017-09-01 22:31 Mayuzumi Sayaka: i tend to say that when i map streams
2017-09-01 22:31 Mayuzumi Sayaka: i map them to the song
2017-09-01 22:31 Mayuzumi Sayaka: depending on how i feel they'd be
2017-09-01 22:32 Mayuzumi Sayaka: there's not much fixing into that
2017-09-01 22:32 Celektus: yea you just need to get some feedback and start new projects
2017-09-01 22:32 Celektus: I think
2017-09-01 22:32 Celektus: I would still get mods on this
2017-09-01 22:33 Celektus: but I think I can say that you won't be able to push this version to ranked
2017-09-01 22:33 Mayuzumi Sayaka: fusyoku is by far my most favourite icdd song
2017-09-01 22:33 Mayuzumi Sayaka: so mapping it and trying for rank wouldnt be a bad thing
2017-09-01 22:33 Celektus: yea
2017-09-01 22:33 Mayuzumi Sayaka: considering other maps of the same song
2017-09-01 22:33 Celektus: just don't focus on it too much
2017-09-01 22:34 Mayuzumi Sayaka: oh i dont
2017-09-01 22:34 Mayuzumi Sayaka: i got more maps ready
2017-09-01 22:34 Mayuzumi Sayaka: but i also need for graveyard
2017-09-01 22:34 Mayuzumi Sayaka: to submit others
2017-09-01 22:34 Mayuzumi Sayaka: should be able to submit to graveyard directly
2017-09-01 22:34 Mayuzumi Sayaka: shit system :^)
2017-09-01 22:35 Celektus: you maybe need to plan out the intensity of songs you map more before hand
2017-09-01 22:35 Mayuzumi Sayaka: oh i do
2017-09-01 22:35 Celektus: that's good to hear
2017-09-01 22:35 Celektus: the SV here is a bit too fast lol 03:48:763 - 
2017-09-01 22:36 Celektus: like I would go straight up 0,5x here
2017-09-01 22:37 Celektus: this sections has more fitting SV 04:01:620 - 
2017-09-01 22:37 Celektus: I would even say that it's the best section except for the jumps
2017-09-01 22:40 Mayuzumi Sayaka: ill get to remapping 3:48 a bit later
2017-09-01 22:40 Celektus: really?
2017-09-01 22:41 Mayuzumi Sayaka: well it is the most peacefull part
2017-09-01 22:41 Celektus: oh ok
2017-09-01 22:41 Mayuzumi Sayaka: spacing and shit shouldnt be that big :d
2017-09-01 22:41 Celektus: well I think that's all I have to say
2017-09-01 22:41 Mayuzumi Sayaka: and spacing on the general map
2017-09-01 22:41 Mayuzumi Sayaka: :^)
2017-09-01 22:41 Mayuzumi Sayaka: well
2017-09-01 22:42 Mayuzumi Sayaka: you know theres more but you dont want to ruin your eyes
2017-09-01 22:42 Mayuzumi Sayaka: do you
2017-09-01 22:42 Celektus: also do you know what slider leniency is?
2017-09-01 22:44 Mayuzumi Sayaka: ticks
2017-09-01 22:44 Mayuzumi Sayaka: thats all i can say
2017-09-01 22:44 Celektus: there're multiple types of it like how they are easy AF to acc, but the most important has to do with spacing
2017-09-01 22:45 Celektus: since you can actually move out of sliders really far without breaking
2017-09-01 22:45 Mayuzumi Sayaka: also
2017-09-01 22:45 Mayuzumi Sayaka: is my hitsounding nice
2017-09-01 22:45 Celektus: it's alright
2017-09-01 22:45 Celektus: so jumps out of sliders are most of the time less intense
2017-09-01 22:45 Mayuzumi Sayaka: ik
2017-09-01 22:46 Celektus: ok
2017-09-01 22:46 Mayuzumi Sayaka: sliders in general for me are a fake pause
2017-09-01 22:46 Celektus: yea sort of
2017-09-01 22:46 Celektus: most people treat 1/2 sliders like 1/1 jumps 
2017-09-01 22:47 Mayuzumi Sayaka: if there was somewhere i wouldve expect you to be hars on me
2017-09-01 22:47 Mayuzumi Sayaka: it'd eb towards the end
2017-09-01 22:47 Celektus: ikr
2017-09-01 22:47 Celektus: any I'll just post the chat log into your thread for free kds
Mayuzumi Sayaka
226 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Mayuzumi Sayaka
thanks for the mod, waiting for more :D
Avenora
26 posts
Joined August 2015
Avenora
hello there

mod for you
First of all, I noticed you wanted to make looping streams by converting sliders perhaps, but it ended up looking...ugly, imo (for example 01:49:335). Try using Ctrl+Shift+D to make perfect round loop stream.
Secondly, the 300bpm part. This is a HUGE spike in difficulty because of the spacing coupled with the unintuitive flow. I suggest mapping it in a way how "alternating maps" work (pishifat's video covered about it, you might wanna check it out).

00:11:889 (1,2,3,4) - I understand what you trying to do here. Introducing the rotate tool (Ctrl+Shift+R), you'll use it very often for symmetrical patterns. There are lots of imperfect symmetries in this map that suffered from the same problem like this pattern, fix it with this tool. :)
00:38:193 (5,6,7,8) - Music stays the same, yet the spacing increases on 7 and 8. May I ask why?
00:40:907 - There's a drum sound here listening at a slower speed, consider adding notes or a 1/4 slider.
00:42:621 (1,2,3,4) - In the timeline, shift 4 to 1's position and the rest to the right, fits the rhythm better (Tip: always NC on major downbeats, except for special cases). Change the positions of each note accordingly. Lots of section in this map with similar rhythm have the same problem. I'm too lazy to point all out
00:45:050 (1,1) - Two NCs?
00:56:193 (1,2,3) - NC on 3 instead of 1
00:56:193 (1,2,3) - Not an impossible pattern, but the music doesn't warrant a change of spacing for the triple.
01:07:907 (1,2,3,4) - This is a bit too sudden. perhaps making the sliders starts from a slower speed like 1x then gradually increase the speed each slider (Special case: use NC for each SV change please).
01:24:764 (6,7,1) - Same spacing issue as previous triple
02:31:550 (1) - No NC
02:43:621 (1,2,3) - Any reason why these are sliders instead of circles? I don't see any difference if you replace them with circles in terms of gameplay. (Applies to most of the 1/4 sliders)

The rest of the map doesn't have as much problem (or I lost interest and somehow missed them). I would suggest organizing your note placements better, but since I suck at organizing, I'm not one to talk about this.

good luck
Mayuzumi Sayaka
226 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Mayuzumi Sayaka

C-Yuyuko wrote:

hello there

mod for you
First of all, I noticed you wanted to make looping streams by converting sliders perhaps, but it ended up looking...ugly, imo (for example 01:49:335). Try using Ctrl+Shift+D to make perfect round loop stream.
Secondly, the 300bpm part. This is a HUGE spike in difficulty because of the spacing coupled with the unintuitive flow. I suggest mapping it in a way how "alternating maps" work (pishifat's video covered about it, you might wanna check it out).

00:11:889 (1,2,3,4) - I understand what you trying to do here. Introducing the rotate tool (Ctrl+Shift+R), you'll use it very often for symmetrical patterns. There are lots of imperfect symmetries in this map that suffered from the same problem like this pattern, fix it with this tool. :)
00:38:193 (5,6,7,8) - Music stays the same, yet the spacing increases on 7 and 8. May I ask why?
00:40:907 - There's a drum sound here listening at a slower speed, consider adding notes or a 1/4 slider.
00:42:621 (1,2,3,4) - In the timeline, shift 4 to 1's position and the rest to the right, fits the rhythm better (Tip: always NC on major downbeats, except for special cases). Change the positions of each note accordingly. Lots of section in this map with similar rhythm have the same problem. I'm too lazy to point all out
00:45:050 (1,1) - Two NCs?
00:56:193 (1,2,3) - NC on 3 instead of 1
00:56:193 (1,2,3) - Not an impossible pattern, but the music doesn't warrant a change of spacing for the triple.
01:07:907 (1,2,3,4) - This is a bit too sudden. perhaps making the sliders starts from a slower speed like 1x then gradually increase the speed each slider (Special case: use NC for each SV change please).
01:24:764 (6,7,1) - Same spacing issue as previous triple
02:31:550 (1) - No NC
02:43:621 (1,2,3) - Any reason why these are sliders instead of circles? I don't see any difference if you replace them with circles in terms of gameplay. (Applies to most of the 1/4 sliders)

The rest of the map doesn't have as much problem (or I lost interest and somehow missed them). I would suggest organizing your note placements better, but since I suck at organizing, I'm not one to talk about this.

good luck
01:49:335). Try using Ctrl+Shift+D to make perfect round loop stream.
Secondly, the 300bpm part. This is a HUGE spike in difficulty because of the spacing coupled with the unintuitive flow. I suggest mapping it in a way how "alternating maps" work (pishifat's video covered about it, you might wanna check it out).
No I didn't care about the loop.
I also don't care that there's the spike in the diff, that's how the song is like.

00:56:193 (1,2,3) - Not an impossible pattern, but the music doesn't warrant a change of spacing for the triple.
Did you try following vocals?

01:07:907 (1,2,3,4) - This is a bit too sudden. perhaps making the sliders starts from a slower speed like 1x then gradually increase the speed each slider (Special case: use NC for each SV change please).
??? That's how the song is like and it's pointed out by a NC on the first slider

02:43:621 (1,2,3) - Any reason why these are sliders instead of circles? I don't see any difference if you replace them with circles in terms of gameplay. (Applies to most of the 1/4 sliders)
Do you like listen to the song

I didn't mean to disrespect your mod, it did point out some things that would be changed if more would point out, but I'd like to try to keep them as they are.
However still applied a bit of your mod, thank you and appriciate it
Amos
96 posts
Joined March 2016
Amos
hello, from my mod queue
[Death]
00:06:604 (5,1) - sudden change in flow like this in a fast jump is uncomfortable and hard to hit, maybe you should make the jump like 00:11:747 (5,1) -
00:12:747 (4) - CTRL+G would fix it maybe?
00:16:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the jump seems random, try to make it the same angle instead
00:22:175 (1,2) - movement is weird on this one, i recommend to move 00:21:889 (1,2,3,4,1) - a bit higher and place 00:22:461 (2) - below the stream and make a bit curve so hitting 00:22:747 (1) - would be easier
00:26:747 (2,1,2) - angle too sharp to enter a stream
00:44:050 (4,5,6) - weird flow
00:46:621 (3) - CTRL+G too maybe?
00:46:907 (4,1) -
00:50:907 (2,3,4,1) - seems too slow for an intense part
00:57:479 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:01:907 (13,1) -
01:13:050 (3,4) - uncomfortable to hit
02:29:621 (1,2,1,2) - swapping 1s and 2s will fix it
02:45:621 (3,1) -
02:51:335 (1,2) -
03:29:906 (2,2,3,4) - why not amking it 1/2 slider like the other?
03:51:049 (1,2,3) - why sudden change of direction and slider?
04:33:862 (1,2,3,4,1) - seems too random and has no pattern
04:35:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - fast jump, inconsistent angle, unclean overlap, i have nothing to say but i think you need to remap it
04:41:262 (2,3) - not perfectly straight
04:48:862 (4,1) - uncomfortable to hit
05:08:648 (2,1) - why don't you make a large jump like before? it's unexpected that 1 would start at the bottom too
05:37:476 (1,2) - ugly overlap
05:55:690 (8,1,2,3) - you shouldn't make sudden change of direction in an intense section like this, it will make the player confused
i think that's all from me, gl with your map
ScubDomino
690 posts
Joined September 2016
ScubDomino
Hi

Death

  1. 00:02:747 (5,6,7,8) - Did you handmake the stream? It looked really poorly spaced. Would recommend using Ctrl+Shift+D. Same with literally every stream in this map, so I'm not going to point out every single one of them.
  2. 00:03:318 (1) - Unintuitive flow on this slider. Would recommend making it like this
  3. 00:29:032 (1) - Why is this one circle spaced less than the previous jumps? This definitely contradicts beat emphasis on the map.
  4. 00:37:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Full beat jumps here definitely spiked the difficulty, since previous 1/2 jumps spaced similarly will have defined the jumps in this map. It's a new concept that's introduced very late and unintuitively into the map.
  5. 00:40:907 (2,3) - Spaced too far away, basically makes it even harder to not get a 100 upon missing a sliderend.
  6. 00:44:193 (5,6,7) - Nothing in this part represented the triples. It's overmapped.
  7. 00:44:336 (7,8) - ...what (these 2 objects are definitely spaced contradictory to the entire map and that part of the song). Would recommend fixing.
  8. 00:48:193 (7,8,1) - This contradicts circular flow (circles not landing on the tangent of the illusionary circle flow pattern)
  9. 00:50:907 (2,3,4,1,2) - Why are vocals and prominent beats mapped with sliderends?? Contradicts song.
  10. 00:57:336 (6,7,1) - These triples are spaced differently to all the other triples in this map, and it's way too snappy and uneven. Again, it's a new concept that's introduced very late and unintuitively into the map.
  11. 00:57:479 (1,2,3) - Vocals and prominent beats mapped with sliderends. Contradicts song.
  12. 01:01:907 (13,1) - (13) didn't land on the circular tangent of the stream. (1) blankets (13) way too tightly. Would recommend making it a bit more loose.
  13. 01:05:621 (1,2) - Breaks flow (note that conventional flow were used in this map). Contradicts map.
  14. 01:07:907 (1,2,3,4) -
    What... (fix overlaps)
  15. 01:10:050 (1) - Would recommend 2 circles instead of a
    so prominent beat is highlighted.
  16. 01:19:336 (1) - Breaks stream flow. Contradicts map.
  17. 01:19:907 (1) - ^
  18. 01:24:764 (6,7,1) - These triples are spaced differently to all the other triples in this map, and it's way too snappy and uneven. Again, it's a new concept that's introduced very late and unintuitively into the map. (again)
  19. 01:25:479 (4) - Would recommend 2 circles instead of a slider so prominent beat is highlighted. (again)
  20. 01:29:907 (1,2,3) - Breaks slider flow.
  21. 02:22:192 (1,2) - doesn't form 180 degree angle.
  22. 02:22:621 (1,2) - ^
  23. 02:34:192 (1,2,3) - Breaks slider flow.
  24. 02:42:192 (2,3,4) - ^ (also slider leniency fail)
  25. 02:43:621 (1,2,3) - Prefer jumps, since all rhythmic patterns are mapped in a similar fashion. This pattern contradicts the map.
  26. 02:51:335 (1,2) - Blanket too tight
  27. 02:52:192 (1,2,3) - Breaks slider flow. (also slider leniency fail)
  28. 03:02:478 (1) - Unconventional stream flow.
  29. 03:04:192 (1,2,3) - Breaks slider flow. (also slider leniency fail)
  30. 03:28:477 (1,2) - Blanket too tight
  31. 03:31:906 (1,2,3) - Triangle pattern not properly structured
  32. 04:17:905 (1,2) - Would just make it either 1 full slider or 2 circles
  33. 04:18:762 (1,2) - ^
  34. 04:19:620 (1,2) - ^
    04:23:048 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Triangle pattern not properly structured.
  35. 04:32:762 (3) -
    Overmapped since nothing represented that tiny anchor part and breaks slider flow.
  36. 04:50:848 (1) - This part is timed in 3/4 rhythm, not 4/4. Fix timing and hitsounding.
  37. 04:55:648 (1,2,3) - Triangle pattern not properly structured
  38. 04:58:648 (1,2) -
    This sliderend lol (Just don't overlap the slider before)
  39. 05:10:048 (1) - Why is this one circle spaced less than the previous jumps? This definitely contradicts beat emphasis on the map. (copied)
  40. 05:18:048 (1) - Breaks slider flow.
  41. 06:30:048 (1) - Breaks stream flow.
Conclusion:
Map can be structured in a much better way.
And quoting you from "I didn't mean to disrespect your mod, it did point out some things that would be changed if more would point out, but I'd like to try to keep them as they are." That's called rejecting good criticism. Don't keep bad things just because you like it.

Good luck! :)
Mayuzumi Sayaka
226 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Mayuzumi Sayaka
Amos
03:29:906 (2,2,3,4) - why not amking it 1/2 slider like the other? -Sillables
04:33:862 (1,2,3,4,1) - seems too random and has no pattern -Well, yea it is kinda random but I just listened to the song and came up with that
04:35:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - fast jump, inconsistent angle, unclean overlap, i have nothing to say but i think you need to remap it -Well of course they're fast, 300 BPM and it's the gangsta pensamento star that leads into multiple triangles, I just didn't spam NC to not punish the player as hard as it should for not getting the circle
Thank you for taking your time to mod, appriciate it alot :D

ScubDomino
00:29:032 (1) - Why is this one circle spaced less than the previous jumps? This definitely contradicts beat emphasis on the map. -Literally just for aesthetics, looks pretty nice imo, you can also hear the beat on that circle not being as intense as the others.
00:37:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Full beat jumps here definitely spiked the difficulty, since previous 1/2 jumps spaced similarly will have defined the jumps in this map. It's a new concept that's introduced very late and unintuitively into the map. -More or less, but ey, what did you expect to be there, and it's that late into the map because there are no earlier points for it
00:44:193 (5,6,7) - Nothing in this part represented the triples. It's overmapped. -Sillables
00:50:907 (2,3,4,1,2) - Why are vocals and prominent beats mapped with sliderends?? Contradicts song. -Decided to follow vocals instead of beats since I had no ideea on how to map that part
- Darkness -
10 posts
Joined August 2013
- Darkness -
hey this Kinda fUCKiNG SuCK! remap

kds ty
atxsu
atxsu
nice map brah
A r M i N
1,298 posts
Joined October 2014
A r M i N
irc
2017-09-16 21:36 A r M i N: there are problems
2017-09-16 21:36 A r M i N: visual spacing for example
2017-09-16 21:37 A r M i N: strange slider shapes
2017-09-16 21:37 Mayuzumi Sayaka: pretty sure with a bit more mods
2017-09-16 21:37 Mayuzumi Sayaka: pointing that out
2017-09-16 21:37 Mayuzumi Sayaka: strange slider shapes
2017-09-16 21:37 Mayuzumi Sayaka: what
2017-09-16 21:38 A r M i N: i have no idea who is a fan of those http://puu.sh/xBksW/94cb0bbf70.jpg
2017-09-16 21:38 A r M i N: also, most mappers dont draw each slider, they copy paste
2017-09-16 21:38 A r M i N: so it looks more clean
2017-09-16 21:38 A r M i N: 02:33:050 (1,2,3) - whats that, make the gap more clear
2017-09-16 21:39 A r M i N: 02:34:192 (1,2,3) - thats actually really cool
2017-09-16 21:39 A r M i N: 02:44:478 (1,1) - stack those
2017-09-16 21:39 Mayuzumi Sayaka: i did join in the scrublord army with slider to stream
2017-09-16 21:39 A r M i N: 02:46:906 - circle missing
2017-09-16 21:40 Mayuzumi Sayaka: next is copy paste slider feg army :^)
2017-09-16 21:40 A r M i N: 02:48:192 (2,1) - no reason to have them so spaced
2017-09-16 21:41 A r M i N: 02:55:192 (3) - CTRL+G ?
2017-09-16 21:41 Mayuzumi Sayaka: are those little stream really that spaced to even consider them spaced
2017-09-16 21:41 Mayuzumi Sayaka: :Thinking:
2017-09-16 21:41 Mayuzumi Sayaka: irc mod by armin
2017-09-16 21:41 Mayuzumi Sayaka: lul
2017-09-16 21:41 A r M i N: they are different to other streams without any audible change in the music
2017-09-16 21:42 A r M i N: can you try to not make this look like a 2010 cancer slider but have a nice curve http://puu.sh/xBkDO/6d33108edd.jpg 03:02:478 (1) -
2017-09-16 21:43 A r M i N: 03:03:335 (2) - NC
2017-09-16 21:43 A r M i N: 03:15:192 (3,1) - whats that spacing, hear the clap?
2017-09-16 21:43 A r M i N: 03:19:334 (1,4) - stack
2017-09-16 21:45 Mayuzumi Sayaka: i did clap my hands
2017-09-16 21:45 Mayuzumi Sayaka: Kappa
2017-09-16 21:45 A r M i N: 03:28:477 (1,2) - make this more neat
2017-09-16 21:45 A r M i N: 03:29:049 (3) - cancer slider
2017-09-16 21:46 A r M i N: 03:51:049 (1) - WHAT
2017-09-16 21:46 A r M i N: why 5 points dude
2017-09-16 21:46 Mayuzumi Sayaka: sssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhh
2017-09-16 21:47 A r M i N: 04:01:620 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - literally the best part so far
2017-09-16 21:48 Mayuzumi Sayaka: cuck xd
2017-09-16 21:48 A r M i N: 04:30:662 - not gonna mod that part 300bpm
2017-09-16 21:48 Mayuzumi Sayaka: i fuckin knew it
2017-09-16 21:48 Mayuzumi Sayaka: xd
2017-09-16 21:49 A r M i N: 05:14:048 - why have normal sampleset here
2017-09-16 21:49 Mayuzumi Sayaka: the hitsounds i have didnt fit too nice there
2017-09-16 21:49 A r M i N: 05:28:333 (1) - best shape so far lol
2017-09-16 21:49 Mayuzumi Sayaka: decided to go without
2017-09-16 21:49 Mayuzumi Sayaka: xd
2017-09-16 21:49 A r M i N: then do soft sampleset
2017-09-16 21:49 A r M i N: 05:37:476 (1) - ew
2017-09-16 21:51 Mayuzumi Sayaka: 2
2017-09-16 21:51 Mayuzumi Sayaka: 0
2017-09-16 21:51 Mayuzumi Sayaka: 1
2017-09-16 21:51 Mayuzumi Sayaka: 0
2017-09-16 21:51 Mayuzumi Sayaka: xd
2017-09-16 21:51 Mayuzumi Sayaka: gibe better shape
2017-09-16 21:51 Mayuzumi Sayaka: ideeas machine broke
2017-09-16 21:52 A r M i N: ok the only thing i really like pattern-whise is the streams
2017-09-16 21:52 A r M i N: sorry but the jumps meh
2017-09-16 21:52 Mayuzumi Sayaka: did you forget im mainly a stream mapper
2017-09-16 21:52 Mayuzumi Sayaka: xd
2017-09-16 21:52 A r M i N: ye just saying the streams are good the other stuff eh not so much
2017-09-16 21:52 A r M i N: and idk how to make them good slidershapes
2017-09-16 21:53 Mayuzumi Sayaka: just made a basic 3 point slider
2017-09-16 21:53 Mayuzumi Sayaka: eh
2017-09-16 21:53 Mayuzumi Sayaka: semi circle works i guess
2017-09-16 21:56 Mayuzumi Sayaka: ill just update fusyoku when axer finishes his taiko diff
2017-09-16 21:57 A r M i N: aight
Incomp
114 posts
Joined December 2016
Incomp
Hey there. From the skins! Discord server.

[Death]
Generally, your hitsounds are really loud. They drown out the music.

01:20:193 (1) - The emphasis on this note is much less than the other 1/1 notes before it. In fact, you may want to change the stream's shape a bit so that all of those sounds are emphasized more, since they seem to all be a bit lacking.
01:21:336 (1,2,3,4,1) - The flow here isn't consistent with the previous part of the stream. It makes a weird egg shape.
01:30:764 (1) - The curve on the end of the slider here is ugly. Maybe try something like this?
01:42:050 (4) - Similar issue to above. Call me fussy, but I think the hook on this slider should be more circular.
02:58:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why did you opt for 1/4 sliders instead of a stream here? I'm not sure what it's supposed to emphasize.
03:28:477 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket RIP 0/5
04:30:262 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think you should have the slider here moved to the bottom half of the playing field. The break in circular flow along with the relatively wide jumping angle make hitting this slider extremely uncomfortable.
04:36:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The wide angles with the 300 BPM jumps make this part of the map a huge difficulty spike.
04:45:362 (2,3,4,5) - The 4 here breaks circular flow, and I'm unsure why.
05:21:190 (3,4,1) - The distance between these notes isn't within time-distance equality or whatever it's called. It could cause players to click the 4 too early, which is unfitting for a calm section.
05:37:476 (1,2) - Try a blanket like this.
06:45:476 (1,2) - Try this one.

The fact that most of my issues were aesthetic problems either attests to the quality of your map or my lack of modding skills. I'd love to see this ranked.
Mayuzumi Sayaka
226 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Mayuzumi Sayaka

Incomp wrote:

Hey there. From the skins! Discord server.

[Death]
Generally, your hitsounds are really loud. They drown out the music.

01:20:193 (1) - The emphasis on this note is much less than the other 1/1 notes before it. In fact, you may want to change the stream's shape a bit so that all of those sounds are emphasized more, since they seem to all be a bit lacking.
01:21:336 (1,2,3,4,1) - The flow here isn't consistent with the previous part of the stream. It makes a weird egg shape.
01:30:764 (1) - The curve on the end of the slider here is ugly. Maybe try something like this?
01:42:050 (4) - Similar issue to above. Call me fussy, but I think the hook on this slider should be more circular.
02:58:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why did you opt for 1/4 sliders instead of a stream here? I'm not sure what it's supposed to emphasize.
03:28:477 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket RIP 0/5
04:30:262 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think you should have the slider here moved to the bottom half of the playing field. The break in circular flow along with the relatively wide jumping angle make hitting this slider extremely uncomfortable.
04:36:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The wide angles with the 300 BPM jumps make this part of the map a huge difficulty spike.
04:45:362 (2,3,4,5) - The 4 here breaks circular flow, and I'm unsure why.
05:21:190 (3,4,1) - The distance between these notes isn't within time-distance equality or whatever it's called. It could cause players to click the 4 too early, which is unfitting for a calm section.
05:37:476 (1,2) - Try a blanket like this.
06:45:476 (1,2) - Try this one.

The fact that most of my issues were aesthetic problems either attests to the quality of your map or my lack of modding skills. I'd love to see this ranked.
01:30:764 (1) - The curve on the end of the slider here is ugly. Maybe try something like this? - Fixed, I think...Thank you
01:42:050 (4) - Similar issue to above. Call me fussy, but I think the hook on this slider should be more circular. - Emphasize the vocal.
02:58:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why did you opt for 1/4 sliders instead of a stream here? I'm not sure what it's supposed to emphasize. - Song changes
03:28:477 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket RIP 0/5 - Think I might've fixed, idk
04:30:262 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think you should have the slider here moved to the bottom half of the playing field. The break in circular flow along with the relatively wide jumping angle make hitting this slider extremely uncomfortable. - I guess it's fixed.
04:36:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The wide angles with the 300 BPM jumps make this part of the map a huge difficulty spike. - I know, the 300 bpm part is the most intense part of the song, so saying its a huge diff spike, i could argue with you on that since it jumps from 210 to 300 without a warning, sorry can't do much on that.
04:45:362 (2,3,4,5) - The 4 here breaks circular flow, and I'm unsure why.- It wasn't fitting with the other objects, fixed.
05:21:190 (3,4,1) - The distance between these notes isn't within time-distance equality or whatever it's called. It could cause players to click the 4 too early, which is unfitting for a calm section.- One that can't sight-read will infact break there.
05:37:476 (1,2) - Try a blanket like this.- Fixed
06:45:476 (1,2) - Try this one. - Fixed
Thank you for your mod. Appriciated
Lusumi
227 posts
Joined December 2015
Lusumi
Smol mod lul
Death
  1. 00:01:961 - 00:02:104 - uh your skipping drumsounds here lol why?
  2. 00:02:175 - why the fuck u skipping a song strong here? well by now i noticed the map has a wrong offset its off by like 20 - 25 ms lol
  3. 00:04:889 (5,1) - your going from wide angles into even wider angles it flows pretty bad u should at least make the jump to 00:05:032 (1) - more sharp angled/comfortable
  4. 00:05:747 (6,2,5) - so many bad overlaps orgnaize your jumps more
  5. 00:13:175 (2,2,1,5) - it looks like u randomly placed circles and sliders without any structure lol organize it more use shapes to organized them stack objects if they are almost at the same position and dont just randomly spam jumps
  6. 00:20:461 (1,2) - why are these 2 shapes so different? theres no reason for it copy and paste sliders more instead of making every slider per hand
  7. 00:40:907 (2) - this is 1/6 not 1/8
  8. 00:48:193 (7,8,1) - why is this triple that spaced? 00:44:193 (5,6,7) - same sounds less spaced same section and intensity its just inconsistent
  9. 01:02:193 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - uh u should map that part like 00:59:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - maybe with more repeat slider or less spacing or idk but the drums dont change but i get that u mapped that one part more dense cuz of the screaming to reflect intensity but still the drums that u mapped the streams to are still there

    tbh i dont think its worth it going through the whole map at this point cuz i would mostly point out inconsistent/unorganized overlaps and shit...

    well i think u should fix the offset first it's like + 20 - 25 ms off or something like that not sure u maybe should ask someone else or try yourself to fix it (it might help if u check the offset not only on first sound of the song)

    then u should turn off hit animations and slider animations if u haven't already and go through your map and check for inconsistent/unorganized stuff like 00:45:621 (3,1,4) - or 00:52:621 (4,2,3,6) - and make them organized u can organize them in a line stack them overlap a circle exactly on the half of another circle do triangles with them or squares or whatever u feel like as long as it is consistent and organized

    Well i hope that small mod helped you lol...

    Good luck with your map ^^
Mayuzumi Sayaka
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Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Mayuzumi Sayaka

Moge-ko wrote:

Smol mod lul
Death
  1. 00:01:961 - 00:02:104 - uh your skipping drumsounds here lol why?
  2. 00:02:175 - why the fuck u skipping a song strong here? well by now i noticed the map has a wrong offset its off by like 20 - 25 ms lol
  3. 00:04:889 (5,1) - your going from wide angles into even wider angles it flows pretty bad u should at least make the jump to 00:05:032 (1) - more sharp angled/comfortable
  4. 00:05:747 (6,2,5) - so many bad overlaps orgnaize your jumps more
  5. 00:13:175 (2,2,1,5) - it looks like u randomly placed circles and sliders without any structure lol organize it more use shapes to organized them stack objects if they are almost at the same position and dont just randomly spam jumps
  6. 00:20:461 (1,2) - why are these 2 shapes so different? theres no reason for it copy and paste sliders more instead of making every slider per hand
  7. 00:40:907 (2) - this is 1/6 not 1/8
  8. 00:48:193 (7,8,1) - why is this triple that spaced? 00:44:193 (5,6,7) - same sounds less spaced same section and intensity its just inconsistent
  9. 01:02:193 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - uh u should map that part like 00:59:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - maybe with more repeat slider or less spacing or idk but the drums dont change but i get that u mapped that one part more dense cuz of the screaming to reflect intensity but still the drums that u mapped the streams to are still there

    tbh i dont think its worth it going through the whole map at this point cuz i would mostly point out inconsistent/unorganized overlaps and shit...

    well i think u should fix the offset first it's like + 20 - 25 ms off or something like that not sure u maybe should ask someone else or try yourself to fix it (it might help if u check the offset not only on first sound of the song)

    then u should turn off hit animations and slider animations if u haven't already and go through your map and check for inconsistent/unorganized stuff like 00:45:621 (3,1,4) - or 00:52:621 (4,2,3,6) - and make them organized u can organize them in a line stack them overlap a circle exactly on the half of another circle do triangles with them or squares or whatever u feel like as long as it is consistent and organized

    Well i hope that small mod helped you lol...

    Good luck with your map ^^
Thanks for the mod, I don't have much to reply to but one thing, I had the offset checked so many times i stopped counting, pretty sure it's right as it is now but I'll try with your offset too, to see if there's any difference.
Shii
379 posts
Joined October 2016
Shii
o/ from my mod queue. This is one long map, so I'm not sure how much of a mod I can give >.<

Death
00:01:889 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - This whole stream looks like it's handmade, and not in a good way. having shape change quite drastically at irregular intervals is something you wanna avoid in a stream unless the music supports it.
00:05:175 (2) - potentially overlaps with 00:04:175 (1) as both can be seen in the editor at the same time :p
00:05:604 (5) - Overlaps with 00:06:318 (3) .
00:05:889 (1) - Overlaps with 00:05:175 (2) BADLY.
00:07:604 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Not quite perfect imo, but better than above.
00:08:461 (1) - Kind of cuts into the stream at 00:07:961 (6) , which looks a little messy.
00:11:461 (3) - Overlaps with 00:11:889 (1) in an unpleasing way.
00:13:175 (2) - This overlaps with 00:13:889 (2) , when it could be put in the middle of 00:13:604 (1,2,3) for blanketing. This would mess up the jump pattern you have though.
00:19:889 (2) - Messy overlap with 00:20:461 (1) .
00:20:032 (3) - exact same as above? Not sure if both are done intentionally, but it doesn't look nice at alL.
00:22:747 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is a pain to read, and looks really bad.
00:23:889 (1) - Don't like how much this is overlapped by the stream and other objects.
00:25:032 (2) - overlaps with 00:24:461 and 00:24:532 (2) .
00:33:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A neat, yet really annoying stream. The pattern is just so cramped.
00:35:050 (3) - Overlaps with the stream. I could maybe forgive this if it was stacked onto 00:34:550 (6) .
00:34:907 (2) - Overlaps with 00:35:621 (5) .
00:35:336 (4) - Slider tail overlaps the following stream (arguably the head also does with the later part of the stream, but that's nitpicky as hell).
00:37:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Very messy jump pattern, like a lot of the patterns you use. Remember that aesthetics are vital with mapping, imo moreso with higher difficulty maps and low difficulty maps.
00:41:621 (1) - Not a neat overlap on 00:40:907 (2) .
00:43:764 (3) - Overlaps with 00:43:193 (3) (I am aware that they are mirrored objects, but it looks ugly as hell lmao).
00:44:621 (8) - Why this shape? I expected to hear a "-pa/e/i/o/u" sound yet nope. Stick with normal sliders where necessary, rather than trying to
00:46:621 (3) - Overlaps 00:45:907 (4) .
00:47:193 (1) - Overlaps 00:46:336 (2) .
00:47:479 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make your jump patterns recognisable and pretty, not random. Something as simple as using the same triangle shape rotated in different ways could have done a better job.
00:48:907 (3) - Overlaps with 00:48:264 (7,8) .
00:57:336 (6) - Overlaps with 00:56:764 (2) .
00:58:907 (2) - Overlaps with several elements of 00:59:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) .
01:07:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - No.
01:07:907 (1,2,3,4) - Looks so damn messy. If you're gonna do fast slider art, do it carefully and effectively.
01:09:050 (1) - Hard to read because of all the slider's surrounding it. Would have been much better moving it away from the slider-pile.
01:17:336 (1) - Overlaps the stream 01:17:907 (1,2,3,4) . Could be resolved by moving 01:17:336 (1) away from this area.
01:18:764 (5) - Slight overlap with 01:18:193 (1) sliderhead.
01:25:336 (3) - Messy overlap. Could be moved to be blanketed by 01:24:907 (1) .
01:25:621 (5) - Overlaps 01:26:193 (1) in a messy way.
01:27:336 (1) - Slider movement is a little unclear at the small loop.
01:30:764 (1) - Why does this overlap here?

So I've modded about 1:30 of this map, about the same length as a TV Size map. This is done intentionally, as looking through my mod there's a lot of me repeating myself when I've already made myself clear.
It's not something any mapper want's to hear, I especially wouldn't, but I'm going to suggest that you remap the Death difficulty from scratch, since the effort of fixing every single issue is far greater than just restarting and applying anything you might have learned from this mod.

Good luck getting this ranked in the future!
Mayuzumi Sayaka
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Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Mayuzumi Sayaka
mod answer
00:01:889 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - it wasn't handmade but stream changed anyway, hopefully for the better
00:07:604 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - also changed
00:33:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i know, but it looks nice, won't affect gameplay if i make it a bit larger.
Can't reply to much because it's good, I'll also attempt to look more for quality of life changes on the map
Kondou-Shinichi
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Joined September 2015
Kondou-Shinichi
haha! not going to grave!


going for loved I can see
this isn't really rankable quality yet

also the background is shit

ill try to mod if this will be alive
Mayuzumi Sayaka
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Mayuzumi Sayaka
im planning a remap in 2018 tho
_handholding
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Nice song, going for loved?
Pachiru
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Kisses wrote:

Nice song, going for loved?
nice disrespect Kisses !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mayuzumi Sayaka
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Mayuzumi Sayaka

Kisses wrote:

Nice song, going for loved?
owo
Nah, I don't feel like it, sheerly cause i highly doubt anyone would shoot stars and favorites at this, but sure i could try
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