Kaori Oda - Make it Real (Short Ver.) · forum

Shunao

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-08-15T20:35:43+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mercredi 25 octobre 2017 at 16:17:18

Artist: Kaori Oda
Title: Make it Real (Short Ver.)
Tags: Make it 津波幸平 Tsunami Kohei Sound Jewel Designers hikan akitoshi joker-
BPM: 178
Filesize: 2951kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

Akitoshi's Hard (3,15 stars, 235 notes)
Hikan's Easy (1,42 stars, 90 notes)
joker's Insane (4,3 stars, 310 notes)
Just make it!! (5,23 stars, 344 notes)
Normal (2,11 stars, 177 notes)

Download: Kaori Oda - Make it Real (Short Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Beautiful banner by XxCrystal!~

#4

Easy by Hikan

Normal by me

Hard by Akitoshi

Insane by joker-

Extra by me

Metadata

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5x6mWsQGeuE
http://www.team-e.co.jp/sp/oda_kaori/

Last edited by Shunao 2017-10-28T13:35:58+00:00, edited 75 times in total.

Zonthem

568 posts

Joined October 2015

Zonthem 2017-08-16T16:49:36+00:00

Easy GD

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TitleUnicode:Make it Real (Short Ver.)
Artist:Kaori Oda
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2h, i like making 1min30 easy GD, it's not too long u_u

yShadowXOP_

536 posts

Joined January 2016

yShadowXOP_ 2017-08-17T14:01:45+00:00

My req for GD is acceptable? :v

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-08-17T14:36:49+00:00

yShadowXOP_ wrote:
My req for GD is acceptable? :v

oh i already asked to Kisses :/ (and he said no..)

Last edited by Shunao 2017-10-26T20:13:17+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Hikomori

840 posts

Joined November 2015

Hikomori 2017-08-18T10:39:36+00:00

i always wondered why you didnt map extra/insanes when youre awesome in them!

gl with set!

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-08-18T15:01:43+00:00

[A L P H A] wrote:
i always wondered why you didnt map extra/insanes when youre awesome in them!

gl with set!

thanks!!~ but my extra diffs are wtf xd

oh and i'm not very good for map insane diffs lul

Xayler

628 posts

Joined November 2013

Xayler 2017-08-19T15:45:49+00:00

Nice map.

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-08-19T20:05:24+00:00

Xayler wrote:
Nice map.

Thanks Xayler!!~ <3

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2017-08-22T22:12:35+00:00

irc mod

23:42 ByBy: hey
23:42 ShogunMoon: Heyo~
23:42 ByBy: would you like to do irc mod?
23:43 ShogunMoon: oh sure~
23:43 ByBy: oki :3
23:44 ShogunMoon: kk ready!
23:44 *ByBy is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1387842 Kaori Oda - Make it Real (Short Ver.) [Just make it!!]]
23:45 ByBy: 00:03:034 (1,2) - better space them less as they are the first two hitobjects of the diff and it can be harsh for the player to aim a big jump like this just when he/she's about to start the diff
23:46 ByBy: 00:04:382 (4,5,6) - this triangle can be improved http://puu.sh/xgSSI/f641550ab4.jpg
23:47 ShogunMoon: kk fixed
23:47 ShogunMoon: the 2
23:47 ByBy: 00:08:427 (5,6) - i think these should be spaced a bit more as the snare from 00:08:595 (6) - is really strong
23:48 ByBy: 00:12:135 (2) - after a wave slider i guess a curved slider would work here
23:49 ByBy: 00:13:483 (4,5,6) - these can be spaced more just to give a better playability and movement imo
23:50 ShogunMoon: fixed all lul
23:51 ByBy: xD right
23:51 ByBy: 00:23:427 (5) - move to 393|85 for better angle
23:52 ByBy: 00:35:225 (4,5,6) - space them a bit less as the instruments are getting less intense here
23:54 ByBy: 00:56:460 (2) - i hear like the snares are searching for a stream i would map a stream here instead of a generic 1/2 slider
23:55 ByBy: 00:57:303 (3) - i'm not a huge fan of these sloopy sliders tbh try another slidershape which would be more decent and more aesthetically pleasing
23:57 ShogunMoon: if someone tell me this too i'm going to change because i like it lo
23:59 ByBy: 00:50:562 (1) - missing hitwhistle // 00:52:753 (3) - should be hitwhistle on head // 00:53:427 (1) - same etc.
23:59 ByBy: the kiai is really jumpy also recheck your hitsound in kiai some claps does not even fit
00:00 ByBy: 00:57:135 (2,3) - overmapped perhaps as i don't hear any doublets o_o 
00:01 ByBy: oh wait 
00:01 ByBy: i hear 
00:01 ByBy: xD
00:02 ByBy: 01:12:303 (1,2,3) - same thing as i said for 00:13:483 (4,5,6) - 
00:03 ByBy: 00:19:719 (1,2)- these are the only two 1/2 sliders whose their 1/2 spacing has been increased as the others don't so why don't you make at other 1/2 sliders like this in this section?\
00:09 ByBy: you're back owo
00:09 ByBy: anyway
00:09 ByBy: 01:18:539 (5,6,7) - these can be spaced a little bit for improving a bit the flow
00:10 ByBy: and that's all
00:10 ShogunMoon: yes ;w;
00:10 ShogunMoon: okay all fixed!
00:10 ShogunMoon: Thanks for modding!~
00:10 ByBy: oki owo
00:11 ByBy: time to post the mod

hitsounding in kiai can be improved imo
gl!

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-08-22T23:22:40+00:00

ByBy wrote:
hitsounding in kiai can be improved imo
gl!

i know what you mean but if you remove for example 00:49:887 (2) - clap on the tail and put the playback rate to 25% you can here the drum but it is not similar to 00:49:382 (1) - on the tail. And it's similar for the rest of the kiai parts, that's why i put some claps~

edit: but if it's very necessary i can replace some claps by whistle

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2017-08-25T23:06:15+00:00

ShogunMoon wrote:
edit: but if it's very necessary i can replace some claps by whistle

that's what i wanted to say xD

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

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Shunao 2017-08-25T23:30:11+00:00

ByBy wrote:
ShogunMoon wrote:
edit: but if it's very necessary i can replace some claps by whistle
that's what i wanted to say xD

oo okay going to fix that xd

edit: Fixed!

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-08-26T11:00:33+00:00

http://puu.sh/xjV0T/e9652fa0b2.zip a

Shunao

1,906 posts

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Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-08-26T12:03:31+00:00

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Metaku

524 posts

Joined August 2015

Metaku 2017-08-27T15:50:27+00:00

NM from q

[Hikan]

00:35:899 (1,2,3,4) - You should avoid using this many repeats in a row or at least try to make them a bit different visually
00:54:775 (1) - This just feels really wrong... The rhythm is kind inconvenient here but I just can't agree with starting the slider here when the actual sound is a lot earlier

[Normal]

00:16:180 (5,1) - I think it you could get more natural rhythm if you changed 5 into repeat and started 1 on the downbeat
00:27:640 (1) - The change from drums to vocals kinda feels unnatural here so would be better to start this at downbeat imo
00:32:865 (6,1) - here too the change would feel more natural if you moved both one tick forward like this or making 00:32:359 (5) - into a repeat. These changes from vocals to drums and vice versa just feel really forced.
00:33:034 (1) - there's similar stuff here and a few other places where the rhythm just feels really unintuitive at least to me, 00:33:034 (1,2,3) - in particular felt really weird to play as it's an odd mix of vocals drums and background melody
00:35:899 (1,2) -maybe try blanketing these?
01:02:191 (6) - here again an odd transition which could be made a lot smoother by making it into a 1/1 starting from 01:02:022 -
01:08:090 - I assume the rest is unfinished?

In my opinion this diff could use a lot of improvement and it didn't really feel intuitive to play for me

[Akitoshit]

idk it nice maybe change spinner to end at 01:29:410 - to match other diffs

[joker]

00:32:022 (2) - Dunno kinda weird to skip this beat imo
01:21:067 (4,1) - kinda clashes with the visuals of the rest of the map

cool diff tbh

[Just Make it!!]

00:13:651 (5,6) - Kinda feels underspaced imo compared to all the other stuff around it
00:23:427 (5) - add whistle or smtng?
00:26:4 60 (1,2,3,4,5) - Might want to use rhythm here like at 00:29:157 (1,2,3,4,5) - as now 00:26:798 (3,4) - aren't following either vocals or drums
00:34:887 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - dunno but the pattern should increase in spacing instead of decreasing imo as it's kind of building tension here so would make sense to me
00:57:135 (1,2) - even tho there's sounds here in the music I think they are kinda insignificant and kinda feels weird to have triple here when the music kinda pauses at 00:56:966 (6)
01:12:303 (1,2,3) - again feels kinda underspaced after such huge spacing on 01:10:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

Eir_DELETED

Eir_DELETED 2017-08-27T19:08:23+00:00

My Angel Mir wrote:
NM from q
[joker]
00:32:022 (2) - Dunno kinda weird to skip this beat imo as you said, it's kinda weird right now. but i dont have any good rhythm and placement than present one so far. i will change the pattern when i conceive good one.
01:21:067 (4,1) - kinda clashes with the visuals of the rest of the map adjusted
cool diff tbh thanks tbh

c

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Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-08-27T21:57:15+00:00

My Angel Mir wrote:
NM from q

[Normal]

00:16:180 (5,1) - I think it you could get more natural rhythm if you changed 5 into repeat and started 1 on the downbeat 00:16:854 - vocals are more intense than 00:16:180 (5) - so i wanted to emphasize them
00:27:640 (1) - The change from drums to vocals kinda feels unnatural here so would be better to start this at downbeat imo
00:32:865 (6,1) - here too the change would feel more natural if you moved both one tick forward like this or making 00:32:359 (5) - into a repeat. These changes from vocals to drums and vice versa just feel really forced.
00:33:034 (1) - there's similar stuff here and a few other places where the rhythm just feels really unintuitive at least to me, 00:33:034 (1,2,3) - in particular felt really weird to play as it's an odd mix of vocals drums and background melody tbh i just wanted to follow the melody i don't really see a problem here :/
00:35:899 (1,2) -maybe try blanketing these? no i don't want to :c
01:02:191 (6) - here again an odd transition which could be made a lot smoother by making it into a 1/1 starting from 01:02:022 - the chain should be to long and 01:02:190 (6,7) - they emphasis well the drums imo
01:08:090 - I assume the rest is unfinished? yes ;w;
In my opinion this diff could use a lot of improvement and it didn't really feel intuitive to play for me

[Just Make it!!]
00:13:651 (5,6) - Kinda feels underspaced imo compared to all the other stuff around it it's feel more comfortable to play
00:23:427 (5) - add whistle or smtng?
00:26:4 60 (1,2,3,4,5) - Might want to use rhythm here like at 00:29:157 (1,2,3,4,5) - as now 00:26:798 (3,4) - aren't following either vocals or drums
00:34:887 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - dunno but the pattern should increase in spacing instead of decreasing imo as it's kind of building tension here so would make sense to me
00:57:135 (1,2) - even tho there's sounds here in the music I think they are kinda insignificant and kinda feels weird to have triple here when the music kinda pauses at 00:56:966 (6) at 00:57:135 (1,2) - there are sound and tbh its fit well with the music
01:12:303 (1,2,3) - again feels kinda underspaced after such huge spacing on 01:10:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - like i said before it's more comfortable to play (tested by some people)

No reply mean fixed!~

Thanks for modding!~

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-08-28T02:59:37+00:00

@My Angel Mir
fixed the spinner, thanks

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Hikan

430 posts

Joined February 2016

Hikan 2017-08-28T15:59:55+00:00

Metaku wrote:
NM from q

[Hikan]

00:35:899 (1,2,3,4) - You should avoid using this many repeats in a row or at least try to make them a bit different visually 2nd choice (its suck will change again la)
00:54:775 (1) - This just feels really wrong... The rhythm is kind inconvenient here but I just can't agree with starting the slider here when the actual sound is a lot earlier dont ask me how many time i wasted for this change

Thank.

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Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2017-09-02T23:05:26+00:00

e

[Lame diff name!!]
00:06:573 (2,3) - essaye de garder une consistence dans tes spacing, pour eviter que tout paraisse random, 00:03:876 (2,3) - c'est les même section, et ya casiment 2x plus de spacing sur celle là
à voir sur d'autres section c'est casi pareil sur toute la map, tu voudras garder une certaine consistance dans tes spacings, c'est pas dur a faire, mais ça sera effectivement moins random a jouer et aussi plus agréable.
j'vais pas tous les mentionner, à toi de gérer ça ^^

00:11:629 (1,2) - chelou ton rythme ici, tu skip des 1/4 a partir de 00:12:303 - qui sont essentiels, et un gros kick qui est pas mapé, ça parrait juste bizarre ton slider là.

00:27:640 (1,2) - soucis au niveau de la rythmique ici, essaye quelque chose comme ça :

suggestion 1

ou alors

suggestion 2

j'préfère la deux perso, car ta pas vraiment de son sur le tic rouge ici, pense vraiment a mapé ce qui est le plus important dans la musique et ne pas sous-maper.

00:33:202 (1) - ta oublié un clap sur la fin du slider

00:40:786 (1,2) - overmap, y'a rien sur ces tics là.

00:45:337 (7) - NC

00:46:517 (1) - retire moi ton clap sur la fin du slider x)

00:55:281 (3) - tu peux remplacer ça par 2 cercles vraiment.

00:56:376 - 'tas oublié du 1/4 ici

01:08:595 (2,3,4) - qu'es tu m'as fait ici au niveau du rythme xD comme j'tai dit auparavant focus les bons instrument, la ça veut rien dire.

beat important

01:12:977 - map moi ce vocal la stp quelque chose comme ça :

suggestion

j'pense pas que cette diff soit prête pour le ranking, tu peux vraiment mieux polish tes patterns et les passages random.. j'parle surtout pour la section de la 00:03:539 - à 00:13:820 - là et pareil pour la fin, on dirai juste des notes placé aléatoirement.

gl

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-09-02T23:31:18+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
e

[Lame diff name!!]
00:06:573 (2,3) - essaye de garder une consistence dans tes spacing, pour eviter que tout paraisse random, 00:03:876 (2,3) - c'est les même section, et ya casiment 2x plus de spacing sur celle là
à voir sur d'autres section c'est casi pareil sur toute la map, tu voudras garder une certaine consistance dans tes spacings, c'est pas dur a faire, mais ça sera effectivement moins random a jouer et aussi plus agréable.
j'vais pas tous les mentionner, à toi de gérer ça ^^

00:11:629 (1,2) - chelou ton rythme ici, tu skip des 1/4 a partir de 00:12:303 - qui sont essentiels, et un gros kick qui est pas mapé, ça parrait juste bizarre ton slider là.

00:27:640 (1,2) - soucis au niveau de la rythmique ici, essaye quelque chose comme ça :
suggestion 1
ou alors
suggestion 2
j'préfère la deux perso, car ta pas vraiment de son sur le tic rouge ici, pense vraiment a mapé ce qui est le plus important dans la musique et ne pas sous-maper.

00:33:202 (1) - ta oublié un clap sur la fin du slider

00:40:786 (1,2) - overmap, y'a rien sur ces tics là.

00:45:337 (7) - NC

00:46:517 (1) - retire moi ton clap sur la fin du slider x)

00:55:281 (3) - tu peux remplacer ça par 2 cercles vraiment.

00:56:376 - 'tas oublié du 1/4 ici

01:08:595 (2,3,4) - qu'es tu m'as fait ici au niveau du rythme xD comme j'tai dit auparavant focus les bons instrument, la ça veut rien dire.
beat important

01:12:977 - map moi ce vocal la stp quelque chose comme ça :
suggestion

j'pense pas que cette diff soit prête pour le ranking, tu peux vraiment mieux polish tes patterns et les passages random.. j'parle surtout pour la section de la 00:03:539 - à 00:13:820 - là et pareil pour la fin, on dirai juste des notes placé aléatoirement.

gl

Tout fix, à par les spacings que je remappe en ce moment!~ (plus le polish)

Thanks Sotarks!

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-09-05T14:56:00+00:00

Easy

00:03:202 (1) - because there's a big drum hit at 00:03:034 the timing of this object is a bit ambiguous imo (it can be easily confused with 00:03:034 )). Because of this I would recommend to delete this circle and have 00:03:539 (2) as your first object
00:31:854 (4,5) - I think it's better to use a 3/2 reverse slider like 00:26:460 (3,1) to map the vocals like you have done for the rest of the section
00:52:753 (5,6) - These are quite close. It would be fine to increase the spacing between the slider bodies so that they are similar to the DS spacing
01:12:303 (3,4) - To me it's really bland to map to 2 different sounds with the same rhythm ( 1/1 slider) . I think deleting 01:12:977 (4) would help to reflect the song better by emphasising the quiet part.

Normal

00:30:168 (6) - Put in the center of the slider end like you did with 00:32:359 (5,6) ?
00:45:674 (3) - imho I think it would be better to not follow the vocals at all and stick to the drums. It makes it more clearer and easier to follow especially since you've only mapped the drums in the entire build up https://snag.gy/H1sd3B.jpg . If you do this then you can remove the timing point at 00:45:337 which lowers the volume as it won't be needed
If you don't do this then do the below
00:45:337 (2) - This object is still part of the loud drum beats so move the timing point to 00:45:674 (3) so it doesn't affect the volume

[] I'll finish this mod later in the week ~

timemon

Beatmap Nominator

1,305 posts

Joined November 2012

timemon 2017-09-08T09:57:54+00:00

[Just make it!!]
00:13:146 (2,3,4,5,6) - not even following the music here lol
01:23:258 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^

00:38:258 (3) - no support from the music just make the slider before a 3/2

00:57:135 (1,2) - overmapped, the song stops but the map doesn't

01:11:966 (7,8) - streams

[joker's insane]
why doesn't your diff use the border skin

00:44:326 (2) - just center this, no need to avoid overlap, it looks off

[Akitoshi's Hard]
lol your spinner is a tick longer than other diffs

00:56:966 (4) - I think it's better as a circle cuz the song stops here

[Normal]
The kiai spins in circle..... keeping the same direction for so long can make your map bland but too late now I guess

[Easy]

Good luck

Kujinn

1,382 posts

Joined December 2013

Kujinn 2017-09-08T17:19:00+00:00

m4m ~ Sorry its late D:

[just make it!!]

00:06:236 (1,2) - I think this would work better as a repeat or 3 circles, as each sound are too similar for one to be placed on slider end. http://prntscr.com/giqja2
00:11:629 (1) - I would say ctrl g to follow previous pattern more 00:10:955 (4,5,6) -
00:14:663 (2) - ctrl g?
00:16:348 (3,4,5,6,3,4,5,6,3,4,5,6,3,4,5,6,3,4,5,6) - consider using a fixed distance snap for these.
00:37:753 (2,3) - maybe remove 00:38:258 (3) - and push previous slider towers next white tick
00:46:180 (2,1) - Because there's already a large spacing between 00:46:011 (1,2) - why not stack 00:46:180 (2,1) - for increase emphasis?
00:47:191 (3,4) - I feel like this is too much too early, consider using a slider. http://prntscr.com/giqpcp
00:55:112 (2,3,4,5,6) - It doesn't make sense that this is less spacious than 00:51:067 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
01:12:303 (1,2,3) - Seriously decreases the intensity of these jumps, maybe space them out more instead of staking to 01:11:629 (5) -
01:23:933 (6) - place around x369 y 148, just feels better imo.

[joker's]

00:01:180 (1) - omg, no, pls, bring it back to white tick, this was actually so annoying during gameplay.
00:25:786 (3,4) - maybe ctrl g and change it to something like this? http://prntscr.com/giqwlc
00:47:191 (3) - would improve gameplay if ctrl g imo
01:10:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - consider mapping some jumps, this feels way too subtle for the most intense part of the song.

[akitoshi]

00:46:011 (1,2) - this is kind of confusing and a little off since there isn't really much of a sound after the red tick, unless you push it up to the blue then I guess it'll work then.
01:10:786 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Mapping to too many things, its kinda confusing, I think this 01:12:135 (1,2) - should be mapped to the drums only, its the most intense part of the song so why not.

Normal and Easy looks good, I think top diff just needs a little more polishing up before its ready ~

Good Luck!

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-09-09T03:55:43+00:00

reply

timemon wrote:
[Akitoshi's Hard]
lol your spinner is a tick longer than other diffs ffffffffff

00:56:966 (4) - I think it's better as a circle cuz the song stops here guitar stops on red so ye

Kujinn wrote:
[akitoshi]
00:46:011 (1,2) - this is kind of confusing and a little off since there isn't really much of a sound after the red tick, unless you push it up to the blue then I guess it'll work then. i don't think it's off tho owo
01:10:786 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Mapping to too many things, its kinda confusing, I think this 01:12:135 (1,2) - should be mapped to the drums only, its the most intense part of the song so why not. it's pretty clear that im mapping for vocals (since it's way more intense than drums z), my whole kiai is like that tho w

thanks!

upd

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Hikan

430 posts

Joined February 2016

Hikan 2017-09-09T06:42:47+00:00

Kisses wrote:
Easy
00:03:202 (1) - because there's a big drum hit at 00:03:034 the timing of this object is a bit ambiguous imo (it can be easily confused with 00:03:034 )). Because of this I would recommend to delete this circle and have 00:03:539 (2) as your first object okay
00:31:854 (4,5) - I think it's better to use a 3/2 reverse slider like 00:26:460 (3,1) to map the vocals like you have done for the rest of the section 3/2 reverse slider before another 1/1 reverse is not a choice imo, they would be easily confused. I want more white tick here so ppl can get that better
00:52:753 (5,6) - These are quite close. It would be fine to increase the spacing between the slider bodies so that they are similar to the DS spacing adjusted
01:12:303 (3,4) - To me it's really bland to map to 2 different sounds with the same rhythm ( 1/1 slider) . I think deleting 01:12:977 (4) would help to reflect the song better by emphasising the quiet part. nice

Thanks

also changed terrible part );

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timemon wrote:
[joker's insane]
why doesn't your diff use the border skin my bad. however i dont know how to consist with others about that... sorry for noob

00:44:326 (2) - just center this, no need to avoid overlap, it looks off i dont place only for avoiding overlap, but also to make better flow than straight flow imo

Kujinn wrote:
m4m ~ Sorry its late D:
[joker's]
00:01:180 (1) - omg, no, pls, bring it back to white tick, this was actually so annoying during gameplay. i assume the white tick doesnt audible anything,but i changed the spinner as you said considering playability
00:25:786 (3,4) - maybe ctrl g and change it to something like this? http://prntscr.com/giqwlc not bad idea, but i'd to keep current pattern since too much distance on 00:25:955 (4,5) - as your suggested pattern in my view
00:47:191 (3) - would improve gameplay if ctrl g imo what the great idea. fixed together with around object
01:10:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - consider mapping some jumps, this feels way too subtle for the most intense part of the song. Hmm... i know but i dont get an good idea right now. i will reconsider well again when i get same mention from different person

thanks guys!

asdf

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Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-09-09T12:00:36+00:00

Kisses wrote:
Normal
00:30:168 (6) - Put in the center of the slider end like you did with 00:32:359 (5,6) ?
00:45:674 (3) - imho I think it would be better to not follow the vocals at all and stick to the drums. It makes it more clearer and easier to follow especially since you've only mapped the drums in the entire build up https://snag.gy/H1sd3B.jpg . If you do this then you can remove the timing point at 00:45:337 which lowers the volume as it won't be needed
If you don't do this then do the below
00:45:337 (2) - This object is still part of the loud drum beats so move the timing point to 00:45:674 (3) so it doesn't affect the volume
[] I'll finish this mod later in the week ~

Kujinn wrote:
m4m ~ Sorry its late D:

[just make it!!]
00:06:236 (1,2) - I think this would work better as a repeat or 3 circles, as each sound are too similar for one to be placed on slider end http://prntscr.com/giqja2 i keep this because it's sound fine with 1/2 sliders imo
00:11:629 (1) - I would say ctrl g to follow previous pattern more 00:10:955 (4,5,6) -
00:14:663 (2) - ctrl g? no c:
00:16:348 (3,4,5,6,3,4,5,6,3,4,5,6,3,4,5,6,3,4,5,6) - consider using a fixed distance snap for these. It is what I made but between 00:15:168 (4,5) - 00:17:865 (4,5) - ... vocals or a little more higher than before
00:37:753 (2,3) - maybe remove 00:38:258 (3) - and push previous slider towers next white tick i like this i don't want to change it :/ and there is no sound on the white tick
00:46:180 (2,1) - Because there's already a large spacing between 00:46:011 (1,2) - why not stack 00:46:180 (2,1) - for increase emphasis?
00:47:191 (3,4) - I feel like this is too much too early, consider using a slider. http://prntscr.com/giqpcp
00:55:112 (2,3,4,5,6) - It doesn't make sense that this is less spacious than 00:51:067 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
01:12:303 (1,2,3) - Seriously decreases the intensity of these jumps, maybe space them out more instead of staking to 01:11:629 (5) -
01:23:933 (6) - place around x369 y 148, just feels better imo.

Good Luck!

timemon wrote:
[Just make it!!]
00:13:146 (2,3,4,5,6) - not even following the music here lol i don't think so
01:23:258 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^

00:38:258 (3) - no support from the music just make the slider before a 3/2 it's good like this tbh

00:57:135 (1,2) - overmapped, the song stops but the map doesn't no there are sounds on the white and blue ticks (electronic sound)

01:11:966 (7,8) - streams

[Normal]
The kiai spins in circle..... keeping the same direction for so long can make your map bland but too late now I guess I would have been able to change it but seen that here I don't really find that he turns on himself, is not even noticed (I don't even have it to notice) I try to do my best so that that cannot go round in circles and to be honest I hate going round in circles so like this is fine

[Easy]

Good luck

No reply mean fixed!

Thanks all for modding!~

negusver

258 posts

Joined August 2017

negusver 2017-09-09T16:39:24+00:00

NM as requested

I can't find anything on Easy/Normal

[Akitoshi's Hard]

00:04:213 - should be emphasized imo, I'd use https://drive.google.com/uc?id=0BzAUOW6 ... 3JWOF9xYzg and stack 2 with 3
In case you decide to do that I'd rather not stack 00:04:887 (1,2) - and 00:10:281 (1,2) -
I'd like to see 00:05:225 - be clickable; its different from 00:07:584 (1,2) - where the long slider serves as buildup
00:09:438 - is emphasized movement-wise but shouldn't be imo, I think making 00:09:269 - clickable instead of repeat would solve this
00:47:528 (4,5) - I'd use circle slider for drum on 00:47:696 -
same for 00:48:876 (3,4) -
01:14:494 (3,4) - I think stacking these and move 01:15:168 (2) - to 01:15:000 - for better emphasis of distorted string noise, would also be consistent with 01:16:348 (1) -

I can't really judge emphasis on higher diffs as I can't play them, rhythm seems to be consistent.

Yeah not much to say, sorry.

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-09-10T03:30:26+00:00

negusver wrote:
[Akitoshi's Hard]

00:04:213 - should be emphasized imo, I'd use https://drive.google.com/uc?id=0BzAUOW6 ... 3JWOF9xYzg and stack 2 with 3
In case you decide to do that I'd rather not stack 00:04:887 (1,2) - and 00:10:281 (1,2) - guitar rhythm
I'd like to see 00:05:225 - be clickable; its different from 00:07:584 (1,2) - where the long slider serves as buildup ^ its kinda obvious enuf
00:09:438 - is emphasized movement-wise but shouldn't be imo, I think making 00:09:269 - clickable instead of repeat would solve this variation from guitar rhythm, also it emphasized well already imo
00:47:528 (4,5) - I'd use circle slider for drum on 00:47:696 - 3 circles are way too much here, also im following vocals here :/
same for 00:48:876 (3,4) - ^
01:14:494 (3,4) - I think stacking these and move 01:15:168 (2) - to 01:15:000 - for better emphasis of distorted string noise, would also be consistent with 01:16:348 (1) - that will ruin my structure ;; also it's new section from kiai so i dont need to be consistent anymore

I can't really judge emphasis on higher diffs as I can't play them, rhythm seems to be consistent.

Yeah not much to say, sorry.

thanks for looking!

i fixed sth

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Hishiro Chizuru

Hishiro Chizuru 2017-09-10T17:19:15+00:00

Hikan's Easy

00:12:977 (2) - control-j this so that the curves go into each other (u did the same for 00:08:932 (1,2) - so I thought for consistency sake and aesthetics, u should do this)
00:52:753 (5,6) - I would reconsider rhythm here as you usually but clicks on strong notes but 00:53:595 (6) - doesnt feel strong at all
01:04:382 (6) - ^

Normal

00:08:595 (7) - make this into circle because you did the same here 00:05:899 (8,1) - and 00:11:292 (7,1) -
00:35:899 (1,2,3,4) - felt a bit ugly when playing

Akitoshi's Hard

00:12:135 (2,2) - reading diff spike uwu I would maybe overlap (just mentioning because two of my friends I used this in a multi with who are low ranked both missed the stack)
00:28:820 (4,3) - not much reason for an overlap
00:51:573 (4) - i would control-j to keep flow, since u already did the same linear flow break for 00:50:562 (1) - which is a nc but this one isn't
01:02:022 (3,6) - same deal as before
01:03:202 (2,3) - no need for overlap as you didn't here: 00:52:078 (1,2,3) -
01:12:977 (3) - maybe turn this into a slider with slow sv that ends on the red tick?
01:16:854 (2,2) - uwu overlap that I dont find pretty

Joker's Insane

00:04:887 (1,2) - maybe turn this into one slider (since it's a new beat) and 00:05:562 (4) - add more clicks into this area (and then reapply to the rest of the rhythm pattern afterwards)
00:21:236 (2) - straight slider imo since u had a straight slider before the 00:21:236 (2) - curved pattern
01:06:910 (1) - shorten slider and make a double? just an idea, felt like it goes better
01:06:910 (1,2) - if you ignore above, stack these tho (this too 01:09:607 (1) - )

JUST MAKE IT!!1!!11111

00:03:539 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i noticed this repeating, so I guess it's justified buuuutttt . . . 00:03:539 (1,2,3) - going clockwise and 00:04:382 (4,5,6) - going counterclockwise was weird for me to play. Just felt like strain for no reason
00:08:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I just noticed this doesn't follow the break of flow in each beat I mentioned above.
** Fix one of the issues I mentioned above pls **
00:15:000 (3,4,5,6) - and 00:16:348 (3,4,5,6) - different spacing but same sounds and rhythm :thonk:
00:20:393 (3,4,5,6) - How come you went to obtuse linear jumps? (here as well 00:21:741 (3,4,5,6) - ) those are uncomfortable to hit (and there's not much reason for a bit of a spike) uwu
00:22:416 (1,2) - how come these ones are curved and facing out in opposite directions unlike: 00:18:371 (1,2) - and 00:21:067 (1,2) - )
00:27:809 (1,2) - feels out of place in the song
00:32:359 (4) - why stack? you've been overlapping these patterns (ex: 00:26:460 (1,2,3,4) - , etc)
00:37:247 (1,2) - curve both for aesthetics sake? or keep both straight?
00:57:135 (1,2,3) - triple seems a bit too overmapped especially with the circle density right before this
** final note of this diff, I was confused with you use of stacks and overlaps, some times u overlapped and in the same rhythm at another time you stacked, etc **

Good luck, keep pushing this, this song needs to be ranked! >w<

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-09-10T17:20:46+00:00

Hard

00:24:101 (2) - This object feels really unnecessary and forced. If you added this note fo the sake of polarity then it's not really needed as the drum beats are so predominant it's easy to follow with your ears. The object takes a lot of emphasis way from the drums themselves so imho it would play better alongside the song to delete it
00:46:180 (2) - suggestion ~ Because the spacing before the kiai is similar to the kiai itself it takes away quite a bit of emphasis from the explosiveness of the chorus. I think a good idea would be to have a small jump between 00:46:011 (1,2) whilst turning 00:46:180 (2) - into a circle and stacking it on top 00:46:517 (1) - . The 1/1 stack helps create a calm before the storm feeling. example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9060649
00:56:966 (4) - same suggestion as above

add hitsounds ~

Insane

00:13:651 (1,2) - such a big jump after a stream is really, really hard. Couldn't you make it smaller? A size like this perhaps https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9060693 ?
01:23:932 (2) - ^
add hitsounds ~

top diff

00:20:393 (3,4,5,6) - use the same DS for each object? It would make it look more structured and neater
00:21:741 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:12:472 (2,3) - I honestly find the spacing of these objects a bit lack luster in comparison with the rest of the map. same with 01:23:764 (5,6) - and 00:13:651 (5,6) . Most people at this difficulty will play these kick sliders as circles, so yeah.

[] ~

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-09-10T17:36:12+00:00

aa my bad I would have to give your kudosu on your post above xd

anyway gonna reply when i have time ~

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-09-10T17:54:10+00:00

[ amb1d3x ] wrote:
Akitoshi's Hard

00:12:135 (2,2) - reading diff spike uwu I would maybe overlap (just mentioning because two of my friends I used this in a multi with who are low ranked both missed the stack) they have enuf time for fading
00:28:820 (4,3) - not much reason for an overlap and this one is for easier reading for what ur saying for reading issue, perfect stack is really hard for this time gap
00:51:573 (4) - i would control-j to keep flow, since u already did the same linear flow break for 00:50:562 (1) - which is a nc but this one isn't i prefer current flow
01:02:022 (3,6) - same deal as before did overlap for easier reading
01:03:202 (2,3) - no need for overlap as you didn't here: 00:52:078 (1,2,3) - variations are good thing
01:12:977 (3) - maybe turn this into a slider with slow sv that ends on the red tick? not my fetish...
01:16:854 (2,2) - uwu overlap that I dont find pretty i tried

Kisses wrote:
Hard
00:24:101 (2) - This object feels really unnecessary and forced. If you added this note fo the sake of polarity then it's not really needed as the drum beats are so predominant it's easy to follow with your ears. The object takes a lot of emphasis way from the drums themselves so imho it would play better alongside the song to delete it ok
00:46:180 (2) - suggestion ~ Because the spacing before the kiai is similar to the kiai itself it takes away quite a bit of emphasis from the explosiveness of the chorus. I think a good idea would be to have a small jump between 00:46:011 (1,2) whilst turning 00:46:180 (2) - into a circle and stacking it on top 00:46:517 (1) - . The 1/1 stack helps create a calm before the storm feeling. example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9060649 tried similar things,
thanks for that
00:56:966 (4) - same suggestion as above

add hitsounds ~ soon, or i'll copy the hs from top diff cuz im loaded on reqs atm ;;

thanks!

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[ amb1d3x ] wrote:
Hikan's Easy
Joker's Insane

00:04:887 (1,2) - maybe turn this into one slider (since it's a new beat) and 00:05:562 (4) - add more clicks into this area (and then reapply to the rest of the rhythm pattern afterwards) im following guitar obviously. keep it
00:21:236 (2) - straight slider imo since u had a straight slider before the 00:21:236 (2) - curved pattern hmm... ok
01:06:910 (1) - shorten slider and make a double? just an idea, felt like it goes better it's not my preference
01:06:910 (1,2) - if you ignore above, stack these tho (this too 01:09:607 (1) - ) well... idk the reason. i'd prefer to keep the distances for emphasis of those sounds

Kisses wrote:
Insane
00:13:651 (1,2) - such a big jump after a stream is really, really hard. Couldn't you make it smaller? A size like this perhaps https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9060693 ? those objects are nerfed a bit
01:23:932 (2) - ^ ^
add hitsounds ~ oh, i forget it

thanks!

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Aro

77 posts

Joined April 2014

Aro 2017-09-11T20:49:46+00:00

Hey! My mod from chat logs~

Just make it!!

21:45 Aro: Hey Shogun! I saw you asked for mod in modreq for your map and i wanted to mention some things in it if you have time now 
21:49 ShogunMoon: umm okay
21:50 ShogunMoon: ready!
21:51 Aro: yeah only some small things ^.^ so first is this one: 00:19:719 (1,2) - i don't know why you patterned it so different from the others in this part :v 
21:52 Aro: they are all these 1 2 sliders somewhat symmetrical to each other, but this one stands out and i don't know why
21:53 ShogunMoon: i wanted normal flow with a slider curved and a slider straight
21:54 Aro: but why? 
21:55 ShogunMoon: just like this, and if i curved it, i think i'm not going to appreciate it :/
21:55 Aro: this pattering implies that these sliders are special and i don't really get the difference between the others 
21:56 Aro: 00:14:326 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - there are in a complete contrast to all these 
21:58 ShogunMoon: ye kk fixed~
21:59 Aro: :p ok i mean you don't have to fix it if you can explain your reasoning behind it, but these 2 looked kind of random 
22:00 Aro: 00:29:663 (4,5,1) - here you go with the vocal and here 00:32:696 (5,6,7,1) - you choosed a completely different rhythm and i also wondered why
22:00 ShogunMoon: but you're right so i fixed them c:
22:01 Aro: ok ^_^
22:04 ShogunMoon: aah a mistake going to fix that xd
22:07 Aro: ah ok :d 00:13:146 (2,3,4) - also i didn't quit get why you undermapped here :p
22:09 ShogunMoon: i don't undermapped :o
22:09 ShogunMoon: there are sounds on these notes :/
22:09 Aro: yes
22:09 Aro: and sounds on the blue ticks too :o
22:09 Aro: not overmapped. i ment undermapped
22:10 ShogunMoon: my bad xd
22:10 Aro: dont worry ^_^
22:15 ShogunMoon: okay fixed!
22:16 Aro: also.. (but i am not sure about this one) you always used this kind of pattern (00:21:067 (1,2) - two sliders somewhat symmetrical to eachother) , right? Parts of music are different from each other and you can show this by pattering. Using everytime the same pattern kind of blurrs the lines between parts, if you get what i mean ^^'
22:17 Aro: in every part you got these things 00:38:595 (1,2) - 
22:17 Aro: but like i said i am not sure about it 
22:18 Aro: but sergio told me that contrast in different section of the song is important, and this repeating pattern kind of reminded me about what he said
22:23 ShogunMoon: yes i know but sometimes there is no reason to emphasize pattern i make contrast but just on the important sounds
22:23 Aro: ah ok! got it ^_^
22:25 ShogunMoon: :D
22:25 ShogunMoon: it's finish?
22:27 Aro: 00:49:382 (1,2) - is this blanket perfect? it seems like the 2 has to be a bit more right top, or what do you think? 
22:27 Aro: yeah i am finished, only saw this one right now :D 
22:28 Aro: 00:57:135 (1,2) - overmapped :o
22:37 ShogunMoon: no there are sound on the white and blue tick :o
22:37 ShogunMoon: 00:57:135 (1,2)
22:37 Aro: oh lol
22:37 ShogunMoon: fixed blanket xd
22:38 ShogunMoon: it's fine i think xd
22:38 Aro: sorry I was so fixed on drum sounds, completely screwed over :o 
22:38 ShogunMoon: :c
22:39 Aro: but yeah that's it with my mod ^_^
22:39 ShogunMoon: okayy, thanks!!

Good luck with your Set!!

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-09-12T20:55:27+00:00

[ amb1d3x ] wrote:
Normal

00:08:595 (7) - make this into circle because you did the same here 00:05:899 (8,1) - and 00:11:292 (7,1) -
00:35:899 (1,2,3,4) - felt a bit ugly when playing but me i like it it's doesn't look so bad :/

JUST MAKE IT!!1!!11111

00:03:539 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i noticed this repeating, so I guess it's justified buuuutttt . . . 00:03:539 (1,2,3) - going clockwise and 00:04:382 (4,5,6) - going counterclockwise was weird for me to play. Just felt like strain for no reason some players plays it and there are no problem
00:08:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I just noticed this doesn't follow the break of flow in each beat I mentioned above. sorry but it's sound good imo
** Fix one of the issues I mentioned above pls ** :c
00:15:000 (3,4,5,6) - and 00:16:348 (3,4,5,6) - different spacing but same sounds and rhythm :thonk:
00:20:393 (3,4,5,6) - How come you went to obtuse linear jumps? (here as well 00:21:741 (3,4,5,6) - ) those are uncomfortable to hit (and there's not much reason for a bit of a spike) uwu i wanted to make some jumps differents for contrast so i make this lol
00:22:416 (1,2) - how come these ones are curved and facing out in opposite directions unlike: 00:18:371 (1,2) - and 00:21:067 (1,2) - )
00:27:809 (1,2) - feels out of place in the song on the red tick the sound is not very important :/
00:32:359 (4) - why stack? you've been overlapping these patterns (ex: 00:26:460 (1,2,3,4) - , etc) because it's doesn't look bad imo
00:37:247 (1,2) - curve both for aesthetics sake? or keep both straight? no i wanted to make a different flow so i put a curved slider and a straight and plus for a better transition
00:57:135 (1,2,3) - triple seems a bit too overmapped especially with the circle density right before this but on the white and blue ticks there are sounds
** final note of this diff, I was confused with you use of stacks and overlaps, some times u overlapped and in the same rhythm at another time you stacked, etc **

Good luck, keep pushing this, this song needs to be ranked! >w< owo

Kisses wrote:
top diff
00:20:393 (3,4,5,6) - use the same DS for each object? It would make it look more structured and neater but between 4 and 5 there are vocals who increase so i keep this but if someone tell me this again maybe i'm gonna chance this
00:21:741 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:12:472 (2,3) - I honestly find the spacing of these objects a bit lack luster in comparison with the rest of the map. same with 01:23:764 (5,6) - and 00:13:651 (5,6) . Most people at this difficulty will play these kick sliders as circles, so yeah.
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Rizen

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Rizen 2017-09-13T18:42:18+00:00

Hikan's Easy

This difficulty seems fine except for one thing. Your NC'ing patterning deviates from the standard "NC per 1 or 2 measures" at certain points. 00:27:809 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - should be NC'd only at 00:27:809 - and 00:30:505 - . Can add one at 00:38:595 (3) - unless you want to keep the 4 measure combo due to that part being the 'slow' part. 00:49:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is a bit long and it's due to you mapping a large white tick with a slider end. You can break this up at 00:52:416 (4) - . Same reasoning applies to 01:03:202 (4) - . Meanwhile, the combo lengths at 01:05:393 (1,2,1,2) - are too short. I recommend removing the combo at 01:06:910 (1) - to fix this.

Normal

00:33:708 (2) - I don't think this circle fits well here. The white tick after this has a much stronger percussion beat compared to the soft piano on the current red tick. Consider moving the circle to the white tick over.
00:46:011 (3) - missing clap for the strong drum beat
rest seems good

Akitoshi's Hard

missing hitsounding
00:23:764 (1,2,3) - This motion here feels quite forced/uncomfortable due to the cursor movement snapping in awkward angles. I highly suggest either repositioning the objects here to accomodate a much smoother flow as the snappiness here seems rather out of place.
00:29:326 (2,3) - and 00:32:865 (5,1) - I these seem rather out of place imo as you only "break the DS" in this way at only these two timestamps. If they were more prevalent in the difficulty, it would of been fine but since it only happens at these two places, it kinda messes up with the cohesion of the map design. I suggest equalizing DS at these points or using more of these DS breaks.
00:48:034 (1) - just a minor suggestion, but perhaps you can make this a wavy slider too like 00:58:820 (1) - ?
00:53:932 (3,4,5) - ctrl+g the rhythm here? I feel as though the two circles here would work better with the drum roll and also pairing up the vocals with triplet sliders seems more fitting. Along with that, also for consistency with 01:04:719 (3,4,5) - .
01:06:067 (3) - perhaps a V slider would be better to pseudo map the instrument at 01:06:236 -

joker's insane

missing hitsounding
joker's Insane? Need to keep with the mapset difficulty name stylization
00:08:090 (3,4) - Perhaps circle then slider would fit better here? The white tick at 00:08:258 - has the much stronger guitar and percussion beat compared to the red tick so I think it will be beneficial to make the white tick clickable here.
00:39:607 (3,1) - is it possible to reuse the "flow stopping" idea you had at 00:36:910 (3,1) - here? Feels more appropriate imo for this slow part.
01:06:910 (1) - I think ending this slider on a white tick would be better as there is a clear vocal and percussion beat here. Although there is a percussion beat also on the blue tick, ending on the white tick would avoid undermapping it. Or if you want, you can end the slider on the white tick then add a circle to the blue tick to fully map the percussion triplet.
01:18:202 (3,4) - same thing I as the first point applies here too.

Just make it!!

00:16:348 (3,4,5,6) - using the same spacing idea as 00:15:000 (3,4,5,6) - doesn't seem very appropriate imo as the vocal pattern for both parts are different. I suggest either making both instances a single DS or changing the second instance's spacing a little bit to accomodate for the variation in vocal patterning.
00:21:741 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:23:090 (3,4) - This increase in spacing doesn't seem very fitting imo as the sound on circle 4 is pretty much the same in tone and intensity as the one on circle 2. I suggest equalizing the DS here and perhaps increase spacing at 00:23:427 (5) - due to the prominent drum beat.
00:30:505 - I understand you are mapping to the held vocal at this part, but the cymbal crash here is very notable and imo should be prioritised over the vocal (i.e. made clickable)
00:32:696 (5) - ctrl+g this slider? Right now, the flow at 00:32:359 (4,5,6) - seems rather... caged/oblong, that is that it's kinda uncomfortable. It can be made more comfortable imo by ctrl+g'ing that slider to introduce some diagonal angle flow. It would also give some angle emphasis to 00:33:202 (1) - which is a rather strong beat in the music.
00:35:899 (1,2,3) - spacing here seems kinda too small compared to the next upcoming patterns of relatively similar intensity. Not to mention that the spacing between these three objects (bigger for object 3) diffs from the other patterns which have a more uniform spacing.
00:50:562 (1) - accidental whistle on slider head? same at 01:01:348 (1) -
00:52:753 (3,3) - misstack perhaps?
00:56:713 - add a circle here? The drum roll at this part extends to 00:56:798 (6) - so leaving a 1/2 gap here seems a bit underwhelming.
00:57:135 (1,2) - although there are piano sounds on these 1/4 ticks, they are very soft/too quiet and so I think it's not worth mapping circles to. Removing the circles would also leave a 1/1 gap here which I think would be fitting to connect the two kiai halves.
00:57:303 (3,4,5) - spacing at 3-4 seems too short compared to 4-5. I suggest moving it to somewhere like x:355 y:345 to fix this.
01:05:899 (2,3,4,5) - I think it would be beneficial to add a jump section here as there is a very clear build up in the music. Also because the spacing/rhythm here seems rather lacking compared to the jump section at 01:01:854 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - which is agruably less intense.
01:12:977 (1,2) - silence these two extender slider slider ends? There is no beat where these two sliders end so reduced volume would make this part less noisy.

glgl

Hikan

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Hikan 2017-09-13T19:08:44+00:00

[ amb1d3x ] wrote:
00:12:977 (2) - control-j this so that the curves go into each other (u did the same for 00:08:932 (1,2) - so I thought for consistency sake and aesthetics, u should do this) fixed
00:52:753 (5,6) - I would reconsider rhythm here as you usually but clicks on strong notes but 00:53:595 (6) - doesnt feel strong at all that is the only way I can do to make 00:54:607 (1) - be clickable
01:04:382 (6) - ^

thank

a q p w wrote:
This difficulty seems fine except for one thing. Your NC'ing patterning deviates from the standard "NC per 1 or 2 measures" at certain points. 00:27:809 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - should be NC'd only at 00:27:809 - and 00:30:505 - . Can add one at 00:38:595 (3) - unless you want to keep the 4 measure combo due to that part being the 'slow' part. 00:49:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is a bit long and it's due to you mapping a large white tick with a slider end. You can break this up at 00:52:416 (4) - . Same reasoning applies to 01:03:202 (4) - . Meanwhile, the combo lengths at 01:05:393 (1,2,1,2) - are too short. I recommend removing the combo at 01:06:910 (1) - to fix this. I am bad at nc
glgl

thx

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Shunao

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Shunao 2017-09-13T20:20:25+00:00

a q p w wrote:
Normal
00:33:708 (2) - I don't think this circle fits well here. The white tick after this has a much stronger percussion beat compared to the soft piano on the current red tick. Consider moving the circle to the white tick over.
00:46:011 (3) - missing clap for the strong drum beat
rest seems good
Just make it!!
00:16:348 (3,4,5,6) - using the same spacing idea as 00:15:000 (3,4,5,6) - doesn't seem very appropriate imo as the vocal pattern for both parts are different. I suggest either making both instances a single DS or changing the second instance's spacing a little bit to accomodate for the variation in vocal patterning.
00:21:741 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:23:090 (3,4) - This increase in spacing doesn't seem very fitting imo as the sound on circle 4 is pretty much the same in tone and intensity as the one on circle 2. I suggest equalizing the DS here and perhaps increase spacing at 00:23:427 (5) - due to the prominent drum beat.
00:30:505 - I understand you are mapping to the held vocal at this part, but the cymbal crash here is very notable and imo should be prioritised over the vocal (i.e. made clickable)
00:32:696 (5) - ctrl+g this slider? Right now, the flow at 00:32:359 (4,5,6) - seems rather... caged/oblong, that is that it's kinda uncomfortable. It can be made more comfortable imo by ctrl+g'ing that slider to introduce some diagonal angle flow. It would also give some angle emphasis to 00:33:202 (1) - which is a rather strong beat in the music.
00:35:899 (1,2,3) - spacing here seems kinda too small compared to the next upcoming patterns of relatively similar intensity. Not to mention that the spacing between these three objects (bigger for object 3) diffs from the other patterns which have a more uniform spacing.
00:50:562 (1) - accidental whistle on slider head? same at 01:01:348 (1) -
00:52:753 (3,3) - misstack perhaps?
00:56:713 - add a circle here? The drum roll at this part extends to 00:56:798 (6) - so leaving a 1/2 gap here seems a bit underwhelming.
00:57:135 (1,2) - although there are piano sounds on these 1/4 ticks, they are very soft/too quiet and so I think it's not worth mapping circles to. Removing the circles would also leave a 1/1 gap here which I think would be fitting to connect the two kiai halves.
00:57:303 (3,4,5) - spacing at 3-4 seems too short compared to 4-5. I suggest moving it to somewhere like x:355 y:345 to fix this. it's doesn't work :/
01:05:899 (2,3,4,5) - I think it would be beneficial to add a jump section here as there is a very clear build up in the music. Also because the spacing/rhythm here seems rather lacking compared to the jump section at 01:01:854 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - which is agruably less intense. i increase jumps idk if its better lo
01:12:977 (1,2) - silence these two extender slider slider ends? There is no beat where these two sliders end so reduced volume would make this part less noisy.
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