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DAOKO x Kenshi Yonezu - Uchiage Hanabi

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Trynna
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Trynna
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on segunda-feira, 20 de maio de 2019 at 08:05:51

Artist: DAOKO x Kenshi Yonezu
Title: Uchiage Hanabi
Source: 打ち上げ花火、下から見るか？横から見るか？
Tags: Japanese Anime Movie Fireworks, Should We See It from the Side or the Bottom? Shita kara Miru ka? Yoko kara Miru ka? Movie hachi ハチ summer shaft Kalindraz cut ver
BPM: 96
Filesize: 4897kb
Play Time: 01:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2,04 stars, 133 notes)
  2. Fireworks (3,86 stars, 206 notes)
  3. Insane (3,01 stars, 178 notes)
  4. Kalindraz's Hard (2,37 stars, 169 notes)
  5. Normal (1,51 stars, 92 notes)
Download: DAOKO x Kenshi Yonezu - Uchiage Hanabi
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1
It's been a while little Trynna

Full version by a q p w

hard by Kalindraz
intro timing by PimpG
Net0 helped with hitsound stuff during kiai
tags from alacat's mapset
Last edited by Trynna , edited 37 times in total.
Net0
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Joined October 2014
Net0
Hype Songs and Hype mapsets :v
GD soon
Trynna
714 posts
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Topic Starter
Trynna
how can this mapset be hyped tho lmao
Rizen
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Joined August 2013
Rizen
pleasant chat with Net0 about Fireworks (take a look Trynna!)
02:23 Net0: can you take a quick look at my friends map?
02:23 a q p w: sure
02:24 *Net0 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1388038 DAOKO x Kenshi Yonezu - Uchiage Hanabi [Fireworks]]
02:24 a q p w: dl'ing
02:24 Net0: thanks a lot
02:27 a q p w: oh
02:27 a q p w: short ver
02:27 Net0: yeah he told he took the mp3 from another set
02:29 a q p w: 00:47:885 - add note
02:30 Net0: agree
02:30 a q p w: transition at 00:54:916 (10,1) - is rather icky
02:31 Net0: icky?
02:31 Net0: or tricky?
02:31 a q p w:  doesn't go smoothly
02:31 Net0: all right
02:32 a q p w: 01:08:666 - important drumbeat, should be clickable
02:32 a q p w: 01:09:448 (4) - NC perhaps
02:33 a q p w: 01:09:448 (4,5,6,7,1) - I'm a sucker for these patterns x)
02:33 Net0: 01:08:510 (1) -  could be like two circles
02:34 a q p w: 01:08:510 (1,2,3) - I would go with uhh circle slider circle circle
02:34 a q p w: 01:13:041 (4) - missed NC I suppose
02:35 Net0: yeah makes sense using NC
02:35 Net0: for those circle only sections
02:35 Net0: both musically structure and mapping wise
02:35 a q p w: 01:10:073 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't seem to flow very well imo
02:36 a q p w: 01:13:823 (1,2) - swap NC's I thinkk, compared to 01:04:135 (1) - 
02:36 a q p w: 01:15:073 (1,2,3) - spacing should be bigger at 2-3 than 1-2 because of percussion
02:37 a q p w: so like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8859477
02:37 Net0: the emphasis here is done on flow not spacing 01:15:073 (1,2,3) -
02:37 Net0: imo
02:38 Net0: 01:15:073 (1,2) -  vs 01:15:541 (2,3) -
02:38 Net0: there's both flow and spacing contrast
02:38 Net0: instead of using an increase
02:38 Net0: he decreased
02:38 Net0: for the emphasis
02:38 Net0: while keeping the difficulty
02:38 a q p w: ah ok
02:39 Net0: at least that's how I see it
02:39 a q p w: 01:19:448 (4) - perhaps introduce a change in flow here to emphasise the drums further
02:39 Net0: yeah[
02:39 a q p w: but yeah
02:40 a q p w: that's about it
02:40 Net0: hey thanks a lot for actually not taking a look but modding it
02:40 Net0: lmao
02:40 a q p w: x)
Mirash
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Mirash
hu3
Bastionior
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diff
http://puu.sh/xbDhi.rar

ps; hitsoundea pra mim enois
Trynna
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Trynna
@Rizen (can i still call u as Rizen doe?) applied everything but the last drums thing
cuz that sounds like some generic 1-2 patterning and idk, making the spacing larger makes it feels like fits enough, not sure
edit: o also, 01:10:073 (1,2,3) - was somehow on purpose fu k

thank you for the mod!!

@Kalindraz submitted dude
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Ataraxia
00:57:573 (1) - mano coloca um circle sla no final slider é mto bosta seu porrinha

00:11:948 (5) - little overlap ficaria bem eu acho

00:15:698 (2) - vira isso

isso e na last diff
Trynna
714 posts
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Trynna

Ataraxia wrote:

00:57:573 (1) - mano coloca um circle sla no final slider é mto bosta seu porrinha git gud lol

00:11:948 (5) - little overlap ficaria bem eu acho ok

00:15:698 (2) - vira isso ok

isso e na last diff
lazy as fu k hein atroxa
thank you dad!!
Rizen
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Rizen
wanna link each others mapset in desc?
Trynna
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Trynna
sure
friendship goals
Mekki
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Mekki
[geral]

-amiga não gostei de como ficou seus hitsounds no kiai em todas as diffs não. vc não usou clap onde precisava e usou onde não precisava, ficou bem estranho na minha opinião.

-eu acho que seus hitsounds tão com delay pq eles parecem atrasar o ritmo em algumas partes da musica, mas eu n sei checar isso então é melhor vc ver ai.

[normal]
00:29:135 (1) - tira o finish do final desse slider que ficou estranho, não tem nenhum cymbal sound ai pra finish.
00:31:635 (3,4) - acho que um ritmo assim https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8886386 ficaria muito melhor, pois assim temos todas as batidas com a enfase correta e não fica a gap estranha q tava antes do (3) pro (4).
00:53:510 (7) - esse slider tá ignorando a vocal mais importante com a reverse dele, eu acho que fazendo um ritmo assim https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8886431 a construção dessa parte vai ficar muito melhor com a musica.

tirando alguns desses ritmos ai o resto tá ok

[avançado]
00:01:323 (3,4) - acho que o assobio devia estar no final do (3), e não no (4)
00:06:323 (3,4) - same e o mesmo pra todas as outras partes tb
00:29:135 (1) - mesma coisa do finish no normal
00:40:698 (3,4) - ctrl + g no ritmo, o (4) não tá seguindo nada ignorando a vocal forte no final dele.
00:41:635 (5,6) - amiga essa overlap tá bem ruim, todo mundo vai reclamar o jeito q vc overlapou o final do (6) não ficou bom, eu faria um blanket ai sei la
00:53:510 (3) - esse slider tá ignorando uma batida importnate no final dele e não representa nada no começo.
01:04:760 (4) - ^^ aqui está pior ainda pois o final é tipo o começo de uma nova parte da musica, substituir o slider por duas notas e colocar NC na que vai ficar no downbeat é a melhor coisa a se fazer.

tá legal mas sei la, vc devia olhar melhor o ritmo para não começar um slider numa batida fraca e terminar numa forte.

[dificil do kalindras]
00:01:323 (1,2,3,4) - amiga pq o spacing ficou grande aqui do nada? tá bem pombo pra mim, acho q vc devia manter o spacing inteiro dessa parte da musica q nem vc fez aqui 00:00:073 (1,2) - com exceção dos jumps, claro
00:15:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - de novo o spacing começou a ficar maior pra um combo inteiro ;w; se decide mulher
00:15:698 (3,6) - nossa conserta essa stack que agonia
00:17:885 (2) - a unica batida desse slider tá bem na reverse dele, enquanto a parte clicável dele não tá em nada. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8886616 um ritmo assim ficaria melhor
00:29:135 (1) - tira o finish daqui q nem eu disse nas outras diffs aaaaaaaa
00:33:198 (2,3) - esses mini jump em hard fica mt feio, eu entendi q vc quis dar enfase pro (3) mas a enfase q vc tá dando ai é minima, só fica feio e ruim msm. deixa com o spacing normal pro (2) e (3)
00:33:510 (3,4) - esse spacing tá ruim tb, tá pequeno do (3) pro (4) do nada.
00:52:885 (1,2) - ctrl + g nesse ritmo porque o (1) tá ignorando a vocal mais forte
agr vamos para o problema principal: o kiai, eu achei q ficou mt ruim o jeito q vc mapeou, vc podia ter usado muito mais 1/4 porém vc usou um monte de 1/2 com 3/4 e o ritmo ficou bem estranho.
01:01:635 (4) - aqui tá mt light por exemplo, vc podia ter deixado um ritmo mais 1/4 ao inves de colocar um 3/4 com reverse
01:01:166 (3) - vc podia colocar uma nota aqui tb, pra representar as vocais
01:03:198 (2,3,4) - esse ritmo tá mt ruim, o (4) tá seguindo as drums 01:00:698 (2) - sendo q aqui vc ignorou elas completamente, e outra, simplesmente ficou estranho o jeito q vc representou as vocais com o triplet. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8886653 assim ficaria mt melhor por exemplo
01:16:010 (2,3) - spacing estranho da pra confundir mt facilmente com 1/2, eu sugiro deixar menor para q haja essa diferenciação.
01:19:135 (2) - ao inves de botar um monte de nota stackada, que tal fazer algo tipo assim https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8886668

então amiga, o kiai ficou mt estranho na minha opinião vc podia ter usado mais 1/4, nem que seja com spacing pequeno entre eles. 01:05:698 (2,3,4) - essas batidas q foram ignoradas entre essas notas, e ainda mais o jump ficou mt estranho pra mim, há varias outros tipo de ritmo q vc poderia ter usado ai na minha opiniao, com 1/4 q retratassem mais a musica. ainda mais pq o mapa foi feito como double bpm.

[insano da trynna]
ai os whistles é a mesma coisa q eu falei no avançado rs
00:39:135 (4,5) - ai essa overlap tá mt estranha vc podia fazer tipo assim https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8886704 a enfase do (5) pro (1) ia ficar maior até.
00:42:573 (1) - hmm o spacing podia ser maior que nem anteriormente aqui
00:50:698 (2) - ^
00:46:010 (3,4,5,6,7) - eu não acho q fazer uma pattern degraduando desse jeito tenha algum sentido nessa parte da musica.
01:18:666 (3) - esse jump ficou bem grande e n tem um bom flow, ja q pode ser facilmente confundido com 1/2, eu acho melhor se vc movesse ele mais pra baixo (mais perto)

muito top a diff gostei

[fireworks top diff da trynna]

tomorrow
Mirash
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Mirash
Fireworks
00:12:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - since it has some new sounds, you may hitsound it differently, like drum sampleset would fit i guess, and some drum whistles around
00:17:573 (1,2,3,4,5) - same
idk actually about further places like this xD
01:02:573 (1) - try ctr J it so jump is kinda anti for more emphasis:)))))

Insane
00:03:510 (2) - it feels like it should be somewhere here http://i.imgur.com/rNybzbL.png
00:54:604 (5,6) - movement here seems somewhat harsh, try something like http://i.imgur.com/O7rHEQJ.png
01:08:510 (1,2,3,4) - idk if only i am getting ass pain everytime it occurs, but it is much easier when they are evenly spaced, like in last diff. try using this in last diff instead and use what you have in last here. asdasdasd

Kalindraz's Hard
01:01:323 (3) - shouldn't it be on a blue tick a little bit earlier? anyway skipping such a strong sound doesn't seem right here
01:11:166 same here aaa

Advanced
00:04:448 (5,1) - idk its cosmetic thing but it'd be nice to space them out more so they have same distances even with stack view http://i.imgur.com/eh2pBrR.png
yeah
gary00737
593 posts
Joined February 2015
gary00737
from my Q


Fireworks
00:40:073 (1,2) - i think here change this will be better
00:41:010 (3) - this can change 1/8 slider
00:43:510 (4) - ^
00:44:604 (7) - , i think the sound is prominent , so i will change this
00:46:010 (2,3) - ^
not gonna list more problem about it


good song
Trynna
714 posts
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Topic Starter
Trynna

MkGuh wrote:

[geral]

-amiga nao gostei de como ficou seus hitsounds no kiai em todas as diffs nao. vc nao usou clap onde precisava e usou onde nao precisava, ficou bem estranho na minha opiniao. poderia me mostrar onde exatamente? porque eu to perdidao

-eu acho que seus hitsounds tao com delay pq eles parecem atrasar o ritmo em algumas partes da musica, mas eu n sei checar isso entao e melhor vc ver ai. verei

[normal]
00:29:135 (1) - tira o finish do final desse slider que ficou estranho, nao tem nenhum cymbal sound ai pra finish. eu coloquei finish onde eu achei interessante, nao usei nenhum aspecto da musica para tal, meu criterio foi no meio de uma secao e no inicio da mesma, quando obviamente, a secao nao e tao fraca
00:31:635 (3,4) - acho que um ritmo assim https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8886386 ficaria muito melhor, pois assim temos todas as batidas com a enfase correta e nao fica a gap estranha q tava antes do (3) pro (4). ok
00:53:510 (7) - esse slider ta ignorando a vocal mais importante com a reverse dele, eu acho que fazendo um ritmo assim https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8886431 a construcao dessa parte vai ficar muito melhor com a musica. eu gosto, nao sei, nao curto isso de enfase clicavel ou nao em diff baixa

tirando alguns desses ritmos ai o resto ta ok nois

[avancado]
00:01:323 (3,4) - acho que o assobio devia estar no final do (3), e nao no (4) sim, e que eu fiz um ritmo meu no inicio, nao usei o instrumental da musica como base, usei hitsounds aqui pra "acrescentar"
00:06:323 (3,4) - same e o mesmo pra todas as outras partes tb smae
00:29:135 (1) - mesma coisa do finish no normal
00:40:698 (3,4) - ctrl + g no ritmo, o (4) nao ta seguindo nada ignorando a vocal forte no final dele. mas o vocal comeca nesse slider, eu nao to focando em intensificacao de vocal, mas sim onde ele inicia ou termina aqui :( mas devo mudar se mais gente reclamar
00:41:635 (5,6) - amiga essa overlap ta bem ruim, todo mundo vai reclamar o jeito q vc overlapou o final do (6) nao ficou bom, eu faria um blanket ai sei la ok mudado
00:53:510 (3) - esse slider ta ignorando uma batida importnate no final dele e nao representa nada no comeco. a
01:04:760 (4) - ^^ aqui esta pior ainda pois o final e tipo o comeco de uma nova parte da musica, substituir o slider por duas notas e colocar NC na que vai ficar no downbeat e a melhor coisa a se fazer. mudado, ficou mais top

ta legal mas sei la, vc devia olhar melhor o ritmo para nao comecar um slider numa batida fraca e terminar numa forte.

[insano da trynna]
ai os whistles e a mesma coisa q eu falei no avancado rs
00:39:135 (4,5) - ai essa overlap ta mt estranha vc podia fazer tipo assim https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8886704 a enfase do (5) pro (1) ia ficar maior ate. mudado
00:42:573 (1) - hmm o spacing podia ser maior que nem anteriormente aqui como nao foi bem uma transicao nem nada do tipo, eu fiz isso pra evitar stackar mesmo, um spacing maior nao e tao necessario, mas eu entendo seu ponto <3
00:50:698 (2) - ^
00:46:010 (3,4,5,6,7) - eu nao acho q fazer uma pattern degraduando desse jeito tenha algum sentido nessa parte da musica. e que como eu ja vinha fazendo antes, quando tem uma parte assim com circles seguidos me parece gostoso de jogar, vou ver se mais nego reclama
01:18:666 (3) - esse jump ficou bem grande e n tem um bom flow, ja q pode ser facilmente confundido com 1/2, eu acho melhor se vc movesse ele mais pra baixo (mais perto) caralho e mesmo UOGIAHEUIGHA IUGHUEIAHGUIEAH eu so burro

muito top a diff gostei

[fireworks top diff da trynna]

tomorrow
valeu meu broder, mudei varias coisinha top, so nao dei muito foco pro hitsound, vou ver o que os outros acham porque nossas ideias conflitaram aqui
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mirash wrote:

Fireworks
00:12:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - since it has some new sounds, you may hitsound it differently, like drum sampleset would fit i guess, and some drum whistles around
00:17:573 (1,2,3,4,5) - same
idk actually about further places like this xD
01:02:573 (1) - try ctr J it so jump is kinda anti for more emphasis:))))) death to emphasis

Insane
00:03:510 (2) - it feels like it should be somewhere here http://i.imgur.com/rNybzbL.png ends up being the same system as a blanket, but i don't wanna make a blanket at all
00:54:604 (5,6) - movement here seems somewhat harsh, try something like http://i.imgur.com/O7rHEQJ.png rotated
01:08:510 (1,2,3,4) - idk if only i am getting ass pain everytime it occurs, but it is much easier when they are evenly spaced, like in last diff. try using this in last diff instead and use what you have in last here. asdasdasd hmm i'm p sure it's ok and not that hard, but let's see :(

Advanced
00:04:448 (5,1) - idk its cosmetic thing but it'd be nice to space them out more so they have same distances even with stack view http://i.imgur.com/eh2pBrR.png ds hates me and can't allow this chang e
yeah

gary00737 wrote:

from my Q


Fireworks
00:40:073 (1,2) - i think here change this will be better you are right, nothing important is listed on 00:40:229 -, although that's not a problem to have the pattern as it is, since i wanted something cool that could cover 00:40:385 - as clickable
00:41:010 (3) - this can change 1/8 slider it used to be 1/12 to be fair, but due to rhythm issues i've simplified this one as a recommendation by Delis
00:43:510 (4) - ^
00:44:604 (7) - , i think the sound is prominent , so i will change this it would be good, indeed, but as i'm followng another sound it would be just messy with my strucure and stuff :(
00:46:010 (2,3) - ^
not gonna list more problem about it


good song
thank you all for the modz!!
PandaHero
662 posts
Joined November 2011
PandaHero
Helloo

[General]
1. Why you add yellow combo color, girl's eyes is not so yellow, try orange isntead?
2. Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
normal-hitfinish.wav
soft-hitfinish.wav
3. I guess hs advices that I did for normal will works for whole set (especially about normal clap)

[Normal]
Hitsounds are too loud in the beginning, especially slider border, can you reduce volume to 25-30%, please?
00:13:823 (5) - this note overlap accuracy bar
00:14:448 (6) - drum normal sounds strange here, I would like to remove it
00:18:823 (4) - ^
00:18:823 (4,1) - ds?
00:40:073 - this clap sounds spammy, I would recommend you to remove it, because only finish hs will be enough here
00:41:635 (4) - add whistle?
00:42:573 (5) - 00:45:073 (1) - 00:47:573 (5) - 00:50:073 (1) - 00:52:573 (5) - better to put finish instead of clap (or maybe whistles in some places)
00:54:448 (8,1) - ds again
00:59:448 (4) - put nc :o
01:00:698 (2) - better find custom clap for this sound, or you can just change sampleset to normal and remove additions. It will works for whole kiai
01:01:948 (3) - ^ because it's the same sound
01:02:573 (5) - put soft whistle, because it's the same instrument as here - 01:01:635
01:04:448 (7) - remove clap from slider's end, it sounds strange
01:18:823 (5) - what about two drum finishes here?
01:20:073 (1) - this note is too loud

[Advanced]
Same about volume lvl of hitsounds in the beginning.
Rhythm in this diff is pretty similar to normal, I would recommend you to make it harder

[Kalindraz's Hard]
00:01:635 (2,4) - these notes overlap accuracy bar a bit
00:56:635 (5,1) - this jump is strange, I can't hear any reason for it in the music
01:01:323 (3) - hm, but vocal starts from 01:01:166, and I can't hear anything on white tick, maybe will be better to move this note on it?
01:11:323 (3) - same

[Insane]
00:25:073 (1,3) - this overlap triggers me
00:30:073 (1,2) - this one too
00:34:135 (3,4,5,6) - wow, this pattern was so unexpected and hard for the calm beginning, try to make a reverse sliders instead?
01:00:073 (1) - move it a bit up for better flow?
01:04:448 (5,6) - why you add clap on the ends of these sliders, it sounds really out of the place
01:08:823 (3) - sound on this tick is not so important and this note feels strange, try to remove it
01:09:448 (1,2,3,4) - looks like massive difficulty spike, try to remove notes from blue ticks (or make a 1/4 sliders)

[Fireworks]
00:55:073 (1) - try to reduce spacing on this note, since you gradually decrease it in this pattern 00:54:448 (7,8,9,10,1) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8938229
01:09:448 (2,3,4,5,1) - cool


ok, you have a mod now
Net0
1,238 posts
Joined October 2014
Net0
RIP my GD
but here's some hs improvement
top diff
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59291
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Uchiage Hanabi
TitleUnicode:打上花火
Artist:DAOKO x Kenshi Yonezu
ArtistUnicode:DAOKO × 米津玄師
Creator:Trynna
Version:Fireworks
Source:打ち上げ花火、下から見るか？横から見るか？
Tags:Shita kara Miru ka? Yoko kara Miru ka? Movie hachi ハチ summer shaft Kalindraz cut ver
BeatmapID:1388038
BeatmapSetID:654870

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5.5
CircleSize:4.3
OverallDifficulty:7.7
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:2.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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80073,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 249,203,119
Combo3 : 154,245,109
Combo4 : 131,217,250
Combo5 : 219,153,247
SliderTrackOverride : 40,90,255
SliderBorder : 255,255,248

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HS -> https://puu.sh/xkWDh.rar
Trynna
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Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Trynna

PandaHero wrote:

Helloo

[General]
1. Why you add yellow combo color, girl's eyes is not so yellow, try orange isntead? i like mine :((((
2. Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
normal-hitfinish.wav
soft-hitfinish.wav nah they are fine, modding assistant is a lie
3. I guess hs advices that I did for normal will works for whole set (especially about normal clap) changed dab

[Normal]
Hitsounds are too loud in the beginning, especially slider border, can you reduce volume to 25-30%, please? oki
00:13:823 (5) - this note overlap accuracy bar is this a real problem? i wonder, let's see o.o
00:14:448 (6) - drum normal sounds strange here, I would like to remove it sure
00:18:823 (4) - ^
00:18:823 (4,1) - ds? ds
00:40:073 - this clap sounds spammy, I would recommend you to remove it, because only finish hs will be enough here OkAy i suk at hitsounding FUKK
00:41:635 (4) - add whistle? added whistle
00:42:573 (5) - 00:45:073 (1) - 00:47:573 (5) - 00:50:073 (1) - 00:52:573 (5) - better to put finish instead of clap (or maybe whistles in some places) i hate finishes and i will kill them
00:54:448 (8,1) - ds again ds again
00:59:448 (4) - put nc :o not needed since they are still in the 2 downbeats range
01:00:698 (2) - better find custom clap for this sound, or you can just change sampleset to normal and remove additions. It will works for whole kiai ok
01:01:948 (3) - ^ because it's the same sound what
01:02:573 (5) - put soft whistle, because it's the same instrument as here - 01:01:635 ok did it on every time it happens
01:04:448 (7) - remove clap from slider's end, it sounds strange **never** i am hitsound japanese god
01:18:823 (5) - what about two drum finishes here? idk i think it's cool the way it currently is but if someone suggest something like this again i might change
01:20:073 (1) - this note is too loud fixd

[Advanced]
Same about volume lvl of hitsounds in the beginning. ok
Rhythm in this diff is pretty similar to normal, I would recommend you to make it harder hmm normal is way more simplified imo, but ok i can simplify even more

[Kalindraz's Hard]
00:01:635 (2,4) - these notes overlap accuracy bar a bit
00:56:635 (5,1) - this jump is strange, I can't hear any reason for it in the music
01:01:323 (3) - hm, but vocal starts from 01:01:166, and I can't hear anything on white tick, maybe will be better to move this note on it?
01:11:323 (3) - same

[Insane]
00:25:073 (1,3) - this overlap triggers me overlap = life <3
00:30:073 (1,2) - this one too
00:34:135 (3,4,5,6) - wow, this pattern was so unexpected and hard for the calm beginning, try to make a reverse sliders instead? fuk u caught me
01:00:073 (1) - move it a bit up for better flow? aes
01:04:448 (5,6) - why you add clap on the ends of these sliders, it sounds really out of the place cuz sounds cool, not a really good feedback tbh, but as i said i sUCK at hitsounding aaaa sorry
01:08:823 (3) - sound on this tick is not so important and this note feels strange, try to remove it plays cool, i'd keep for a better enjoyment on this part
01:09:448 (1,2,3,4) - looks like massive difficulty spike, try to remove notes from blue ticks (or make a 1/4 sliders) truuuuuu reduced spacing instead as it works as introduction for something similar on Fireworks diff!!

[Fireworks]
00:55:073 (1) - try to reduce spacing on this note, since you gradually decrease it in this pattern 00:54:448 (7,8,9,10,1) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8938229 not sure, it's aes and plays pretty ok as the spacing isn't thaaaat large so it's not miss material
01:09:448 (2,3,4,5,1) - cool c00l


ok, you have a mod now
ty i am shIT at hitsounding
also ty net0 for hitsounding help during the kiai
Bastionior
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Joined January 2013
Bastionior

PandaHero wrote:

Helloo

[Kalindraz's Hard]
00:01:635 (2,4) - these notes overlap accuracy bar a bit
00:56:635 (5,1) - this jump is strange, I can't hear any reason for it in the music
01:01:323 (3) - hm, but vocal starts from 01:01:166, and I can't hear anything on white tick, maybe will be better to move this note on it?
01:11:323 (3) - same

All fixed lol


ok, you have a mod now
<3 <3 < <#3<#,3,#,#,3#,

Mirash wrote:

Kalindraz's Hard
01:01:323 (3) - shouldn't it be on a blue tick a little bit earlier? anyway skipping such a strong sound doesn't seem right here
01:11:166 same here aaa

KAJKJAKJSKLQWUIOUOIDUAOOUAO FIXEDALL POSKPODKSAPOKDPOSKPODKPOWEU1HGS
yeah

<3 Mirash <3 Mirash <3

MkGuh wrote:

[geral]


[dificil do kalindras]
00:01:323 (1,2,3,4) - amiga pq o spacing ficou grande aqui do nada? tá bem pombo pra mim, acho q vc devia manter o spacing inteiro dessa parte da musica q nem vc fez aqui 00:00:073 (1,2) - com exceção dos jumps, claro
00:15:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - de novo o spacing começou a ficar maior pra um combo inteiro ;w; se decide mulher
00:15:698 (3,6) - nossa conserta essa stack que agonia
00:17:885 (2) - a unica batida desse slider tá bem na reverse dele, enquanto a parte clicável dele não tá em nada. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8886616 um ritmo assim ficaria melhor
00:29:135 (1) - tira o finish daqui q nem eu disse nas outras diffs aaaaaaaa
00:33:198 (2,3) - esses mini jump em hard fica mt feio, eu entendi q vc quis dar enfase pro (3) mas a enfase q vc tá dando ai é minima, só fica feio e ruim msm. deixa com o spacing normal pro (2) e (3)
00:33:510 (3,4) - esse spacing tá ruim tb, tá pequeno do (3) pro (4) do nada.
00:52:885 (1,2) - ctrl + g nesse ritmo porque o (1) tá ignorando a vocal mais forte
agr vamos para o problema principal: o kiai, eu achei q ficou mt ruim o jeito q vc mapeou, vc podia ter usado muito mais 1/4 porém vc usou um monte de 1/2 com 3/4 e o ritmo ficou bem estranho.
01:01:635 (4) - aqui tá mt light por exemplo, vc podia ter deixado um ritmo mais 1/4 ao inves de colocar um 3/4 com reverse
01:01:166 (3) - vc podia colocar uma nota aqui tb, pra representar as vocais
01:03:198 (2,3,4) - esse ritmo tá mt ruim, o (4) tá seguindo as drums 01:00:698 (2) - sendo q aqui vc ignorou elas completamente, e outra, simplesmente ficou estranho o jeito q vc representou as vocais com o triplet. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8886653 assim ficaria mt melhor por exemplo
01:16:010 (2,3) - spacing estranho da pra confundir mt facilmente com 1/2, eu sugiro deixar menor para q haja essa diferenciação.
01:19:135 (2) - ao inves de botar um monte de nota stackada, que tal fazer algo tipo assim https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8886668

então amiga, o kiai ficou mt estranho na minha opinião vc podia ter usado mais 1/4, nem que seja com spacing pequeno entre eles. 01:05:698 (2,3,4) - essas batidas q foram ignoradas entre essas notas, e ainda mais o jump ficou mt estranho pra mim, há varias outros tipo de ritmo q vc poderia ter usado ai na minha opiniao, com 1/4 q retratassem mais a musica. ainda mais pq o mapa foi feito como double bpm.

Fixei alguns como: 00:01:323 (1,2,3,4) - e hitsound e stack itens

Recusei a grande maioria porque voce praticamente ta dizendo pra eu fazer um ritmo repetitivo e o spacing é subjetivo demais tendo em vista que é 96 bpm e to seguindo um padrao da spread fora isso se fixasse creio que ficaria 2.11 em torno* (fiz um teste base)
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schoolboy
571 posts
Joined July 2016
schoolboy
i wanted to map it too :?
pimp
1,417 posts
Joined April 2010
pimp
log da timing check request
2017-09-01 22:58 pimpG: ja testou o timing?
2017-09-01 22:59 Trynna: você chegou a me passar? :o
2017-09-01 22:59 pimpG: no dia seguinte. apesar de vc estar afk
2017-09-01 23:00 Trynna: ah, eu devo ter desligado o pc sem ver
2017-09-01 23:00 Trynna: deixa eu pegar o log
2017-09-01 23:00 Trynna: perai
2017-09-01 23:00 pimpG: https://puu.sh/xm1z2/4a17517f09.zip
2017-09-01 23:02 pimpG: "eu prefiro que me avise se alguem pedir pra modificar o timing"
2017-09-01 23:05 Trynna: opa o timing parece bem melhor
2017-09-01 23:05 Trynna: muitíssimo obrigado

boa sorte
Trynna
714 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Trynna
thank you for intro timing PimpG <3333
Delis
1,433 posts
Joined May 2012
Delis
yeah this is more like sharing opinions on every single pattern since you tilted before

00:00:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Oh these patterns, I'm neither a fan or hater but on this bpm it plays kind of underwhelming according to overlapping so its spacing also doesn't play very cool :│. I would simply remove these overlaps to look more clearn, and it actually helps the map more fun in game play. If you just remove the overlaps by spreading the circles' spacing it will also play not really nice, https://delisha.s-ul.eu/MGEnD7wM is what I would possibly do for here while the original pattern is still similar, the spacing is a bit larger than the original but doesn't feel too large.

00:06:926 (6) - If you didn't want to do a 90 degrees rotate from the previous slider, should move down a bit like to be a blanket for 00:06:301 (5) - ? I don't know it's way too intituitive but yeah either doing a 90 degrees stuff or blanket solves it.

00:19:440 (4,5) - I think this deserved a certain movement lol here for the vocals, since this kind of overlap plays much different from both stacked circles or patterns that have some movements between circles, thus cursor movement here doesn't look as clearn as other patterns, like you can watch a reply someone or you playing the pattern. Yeah, you know who suggesting it, it me the degen trash loo, but the suggestion also make somewhat sense because maps are for playing, especially what perspective I'm from.

00:28:823 (3) - I'm not an emphasis user but you could consider using a more obviously different spacing to highlight the different sounds each clickable objects have, 00:28:510 (2) - is technically a ghost note which is an overmap, 00:28:823 (3) - has the guitar, 00:29:135 (4) - has the bass drum also whistle (this is ? tho) so if it's me I would use an incredibly different spacing for them unless I wanna map something different from patterns in general (https://delisha.s-ul.eu/f2d9vv2y like spacing being much closer than usual) but for the pattern you built up here you should be better using a variety in spacing. As a result this could be something like https://delisha.s-ul.eu/zOkPQFix as the spacing between 3 and 4 emphasizes ^^ the bass drum nicely.

00:31:010 (2,3,4) - I uh, would say the slider angle currently isn't really the best and is what I recently think while playing maps lol. The jump itself is ok, but the flow from 3 onto 4 has some acceleration, that's why a downward slider is not the best for the flow, to me. I assume a rightward slider can flow better https://delisha.s-ul.eu/C9sa1M7M this won't flow like cursor getting hold at (4) so is smoother.

00:35:073 (1,2) - 00:36:635 (4,5) - haha blanket anime fight 2010

00:39:448 (4,5,6,1) - This is also a reason that can trigger me a bit with overlap 1/2s in earlier parts like 00:02:573 (1,2,3,4) - because the intensity of the song isn't much different besides theres the vocals or not, the 1/4s ones are good to introduce into the denser part though.

00:41:635 (6,7,8) - I actually prefer spacing like 00:46:010 (2,3,4) - haha that's it my suggestion for here.

00:49:135 (6,7) - Please this doesn't have to be overlapped each other!! I mean, you unlocked the pattern not overlapping the slidertail and sliderhead 00:44:135 (6,7,1) - here and it provides a good game play and also a variation from 00:34:135 (3,4,1) - etc but 00:49:135 (6,7) - made me :'(

00:51:010 (2,3,4,5) - 2-3 and 4-5 could be pararell each other to make them looking more random, I feel bad to say but this looks currently like what less experienced mappers do haha say anything im salty as always https://delisha.s-ul.eu/yCXtmh0a

00:53:666 (4,6) - This overlap simply doesn't play, or read good at all since you made a plenty of overlaps in a brief period. And so the different usage of spacing like 00:53:041 (2,3) - and 00:53:198 (3,4,5) - also helped it playing worse. https://delisha.s-ul.eu/FPwv0aTe is a substitute for the pattern here, making a downward flow becomes very helpful to highlight the pattern idk 00:54:448 (7,8,9,10,1) - how it flows like btw if the pattern 00:54:448 (7,8,9,10) - has lower decreasements in spacing that would be nice.

01:09:448 (2,3,4,5,1) - This isn't fitting as good as 00:54:448 (7,8,9,10) - because this has no tone down or something

01:15:698 (3) - a full linear slider all of a sudden isn't a great idea imo lol because it looks/flows pretty random when it comes to get mixed with curved sliders such as 01:15:073 (1) - and so 01:16:635 (1,2) - lol. 01:17:573 (1,2) - this kind of symmetrical pattern is completely ok as it's not somewhat random but if the linear sliders are intended to be an introduction into the symmetry I don't think they currently work as it should be :P.
Trynna
714 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Trynna

Delis wrote:

yeah this is more like sharing opinions on every single pattern since you tilted before thank you for helping!!

00:00:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Oh these patterns, I'm neither a fan or hater but on this bpm it plays kind of underwhelming according to overlapping so its spacing also doesn't play very cool :│. I would simply remove these overlaps to look more clearn, and it actually helps the map more fun in game play. If you just remove the overlaps by spreading the circles' spacing it will also play not really nice, https://delisha.s-ul.eu/MGEnD7wM is what I would possibly do for here while the original pattern is still similar, the spacing is a bit larger than the original but doesn't feel too large. hmm u sure? i mean, my real intentions behind it was to make something different from insane diff that i did this section as the "usual", here i tried to abuse a bit different patternings as different kinds of overlapping, such as 00:08:801 (4,5) - 00:03:792 (5,6) - 00:11:310 (3,5) - and some jumpy stuff. I know it isn't the best thing to play but i think it works well, not sure

00:06:926 (6) - If you didn't want to do a 90 degrees rotate from the previous slider, should move down a bit like to be a blanket for 00:06:301 (5) - ? I don't know it's way too intituitive but yeah either doing a 90 degrees stuff or blanket solves it. 90 degrees better!!! blanket is for nubz

00:19:440 (4,5) - I think this deserved a certain movement lol here for the vocals, since this kind of overlap plays much different from both stacked circles or patterns that have some movements between circles, thus cursor movement here doesn't look as clearn as other patterns, like you can watch a reply someone or you playing the pattern. Yeah, you know who suggesting it, it me the degen trash loo, but the suggestion also make somewhat sense because maps are for playing, especially what perspective I'm from. agree, the vocals needs something different, i just dunno a nice pattern to do here without destroyin everything but i will try

00:28:823 (3) - I'm not an emphasis user but you could consider using a more obviously different spacing to highlight the different sounds each clickable objects have, 00:28:510 (2) - is technically a ghost note which is an overmap, 00:28:823 (3) - has the guitar, 00:29:135 (4) - has the bass drum also whistle (this is ? tho) so if it's me I would use an incredibly different spacing for them unless I wanna map something different from patterns in general (https://delisha.s-ul.eu/f2d9vv2y like spacing being much closer than usual) but for the pattern you built up here you should be better using a variety in spacing. As a result this could be something like https://delisha.s-ul.eu/zOkPQFix as the spacing between 3 and 4 emphasizes ^^ the bass drum nicely. I'm not getting 00:28:510 (2) - as ghost, since the background still exists, while 00:28:823 (3) - and the tail of 00:27:573 (1) - are near the same place (and they sound similar), the ""emphasis"" on drum is given when the flow on 00:28:510 (2,3,4) - is way too different

00:31:010 (2,3,4) - I uh, would say the slider angle currently isn't really the best and is what I recently think while playing maps lol. The jump itself is ok, but the flow from 3 onto 4 has some acceleration, that's why a downward slider is not the best for the flow, to me. I assume a rightward slider can flow better https://delisha.s-ul.eu/C9sa1M7M this won't flow like cursor getting hold at (4) so is smoother. ah that was kinda intentional, as i wanted to highlight that sound so hard that this jump would be nice imo, making it to the right isn't bad but doesn't seem so fun to play to me at least

00:35:073 (1,2) - 00:36:635 (4,5) - haha blanket anime fight 2010 making 00:35:073 (1,2) - a blanket is so sad, as i'd prefer keep the spacing cool instead of random aes stuff as blankets

00:39:448 (4,5,6,1) - This is also a reason that can trigger me a bit with overlap 1/2s in earlier parts like 00:02:573 (1,2,3,4) - because the intensity of the song isn't much different besides theres the vocals or not, the 1/4s ones are good to introduce into the denser part though. honestly, you can take my overlaps like this one as stacks, as in stacks you will react to the circle approach, here the system is the same, but with some aes appeal. Imo in this part it's oki

00:41:635 (6,7,8) - I actually prefer spacing like 00:46:010 (2,3,4) - haha that's it my suggestion for here. hmm don't you agree that on 00:40:073 - till 00:45:073 - vocals and song has an intensity and after this point from 00:45:073 - till 00:50:073 - it has another? looks like in one part is should be bigger than another, to me at least, we can discuss about it

00:49:135 (6,7) - Please this doesn't have to be overlapped each other!! I mean, you unlocked the pattern not overlapping the slidertail and sliderhead 00:44:135 (6,7,1) - here and it provides a good game play and also a variation from 00:34:135 (3,4,1) - etc but 00:49:135 (6,7) - made me :'( o u found something i couldn't even think about before, nice one!

00:51:010 (2,3,4,5) - 2-3 and 4-5 could be pararell each other to make them looking more random, I feel bad to say but this looks currently like what less experienced mappers do haha say anything im salty as always https://delisha.s-ul.eu/yCXtmh0a ok they are more random now

00:53:666 (4,6) - This overlap simply doesn't play, or read good at all since you made a plenty of overlaps in a brief period. And so the different usage of spacing like 00:53:041 (2,3) - and 00:53:198 (3,4,5) - also helped it playing worse. https://delisha.s-ul.eu/FPwv0aTe is a substitute for the pattern here, making a downward flow becomes very helpful to highlight the pattern idk 00:54:448 (7,8,9,10,1) - how it flows like btw if the pattern 00:54:448 (7,8,9,10) - has lower decreasements in spacing that would be nice. did both

01:09:448 (2,3,4,5,1) - This isn't fitting as good as 00:54:448 (7,8,9,10) - because this has no tone down or something i don't think so explained on disc

01:15:698 (3) - a full linear slider all of a sudden isn't a great idea imo lol because it looks/flows pretty random when it comes to get mixed with curved sliders such as 01:15:073 (1) - and so 01:16:635 (1,2) - lol. 01:17:573 (1,2) - this kind of symmetrical pattern is completely ok as it's not somewhat random but if the linear sliders are intended to be an introduction into the symmetry I don't think they currently work as it should be :P. yea that feel of something that doesn't fit is what i was aiming for in that part i guess
oh thank you
edit: also removed a pattern on insane that i was clearly forcing stuff such as https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9010517 for no reason at all
Pulse
257 posts
Joined April 2015
Pulse
joguei star saí correndo pau no cu de quem tá fedendo
Trynna
714 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Trynna
oook after 3288927892 years now normal and adv are not the same thing loooo ty pandaher o
also added breaks on normal and adv diffs at 00:56:948 -
added missing hs on insane too, on that pattern 00:34:135 (3,4) -, cuz i remapped after pandahero's mod and forgot
and yea i wanna die

why am i applying things so late? i responded that years ago
Bariton
296 posts
Joined October 2012
Bariton
Kalindraz's Hard
00:23:198 (3) - esse slider ignora a parte mais importante da vocal!!!
00:59:760 (1) - tbh eu acho que ficaria melhor sem esse slider
01:03:198 (2,3,4) - com o stack ligado dá a impressão de que esse slider tá muito perto do anterior
also, eu acho que vc poderia dar um spacing maior nas notas do kiai, pq ele tá basicamente o mesmo do que na parte lenta daí acaba não dando aquela impressão de kiai <vc também ignorou um monte de sons importantes tipo aqui 01:01:166 - e aqui 01:01:479 - mas eu meio que entendo que vc não quer fazer algo muito complicado pq é um hard afinal...

Insane
00:44:604 - adiciona um círculo aqui? dá impressão de que tá undermapped pq vc cobriu todos os sons do 00:41:323 (3,4,5,1) -
00:54:448 (4,5,6) - dá um distância maior desse slider 00:53:823 (3) - pq tá meio confuso de ler
00:59:760 (1,2) - por mim deletava isso
01:06:479 (5) - não entendi pq vc deu enfase ao vocal depois de ter passado metade do kiai dando enfase ao instrumental

Fireworks
01:05:541 (2) - círculo desnecessário tbh, ele não cobre o som de nada
01:07:104 (2) - parece undermapped comparado ao resto do kiai!
01:12:104 (2) - ^
01:13:041 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - pattern estranho... parece um tanto overmapped
01:20:073 (1) - deixa assim pra ficar bonitinho :3c

eu juro que tentei moddar as diffs mais baixas só que não achei nada de errado asdjkas
o mapa tá ótimo btw!!! desculpa por esse mod horrível

TEM UMAS OVERLAPS QUE TÃO ME DANDO UM TRIGGER DO CARALHO
Pentori
1,157 posts
Joined November 2015
Pentori
u posted in my queue a while ago
[General]
idk about the blue slidertrack, the contrast with ur combo colours isnt very nice. perhaps try something lighter?

[Normal]
  1. 00:12:573 (4,5,6,7,1,2) - feels so different to how most of the intro is mapped, yes there is a repetitive guitar there but stuff like 00:16:312 (3,4) - still uses sliders. also u generally had the last two beats of a combo stacked 00:13:816 (6,7) - and it might be worthwhile keeping that idea
  2. 00:39:135 (1) - starting a new section with a slider end just doesnt seem effective. in these instances itd be better to use 3/4 gaps to have downbeats clicked, since you use 3/4 later anyway
[Advanced]
  1. 00:00:073 - 00:20:073 - tbh the contrast between these sections is kinda lacking. both parts follow 1/2 rhythms with no spacing change so the mood is very much the same, while in the music the vocals pick up. would recommend having different rhythm densities for each section to show the difference better
  2. 00:04:426 (5,6,1) - should check these with stacking enabled in the editor. causes minor spacing inconsistencies that look wonky https://puu.sh/xF3x5/13f772776a.png
  3. 00:40:073 - same thing with norm
  4. 01:06:479 (3) - using the blue tick vocal feels a bit off here as u skip the strings that you map in other instances 01:06:635 . should prob remove it and add a repeat to 01:05:698 (2) - for consistency
  5. 01:08:510 (3) - dont think skipping over the snare here is a good idea, since the map is built so much around mappingg them. could try a 3/4 slider from 01:08:198 (2)
  6. 01:16:323 (3,4) - take a look at the rhythm in normal here and try something similar, strong cymbal finishes 01:17:104 - get skipped
[Kalindraz's Hard]
  1. lacking contrast too a bit, read first comment of advanced
  2. 00:00:073 - ncs are used too much in the section imo, should try stick to ncing every measure like the rest of the map does
  3. 00:17:562 (1,2,1,2) - not the best pattern, harms readability a lot for no real reason since you dont have overlaps elsewhere
  4. 00:22:260 (6,7,1) - not rly sure of the logic behind these rhythms, especially when you have kicks on blue ticks 00:24:604 (6) - it doesnt give them much emphasis
  5. 01:01:166 - 01:02:416 - 01:03:666 - lots of offbeat snares are skipped throughout the kiai, while ghost notes 01:01:323 (3) - get mapped instead. should try build a rhythm that gives clicking priority to the snares as to properly follow the music. other diffs follow the 3/4 rhythms so it doesnt really make sense for the hard not to
[Insane]
  1. 00:21:635 (4,5,6) - i still dont think the use of overmapped blue ticks is practical when the song already gives you so many to work with, especially in a calmer section
  2. 00:44:604 - it seems a little weird to be skipping prominent blue tick rhythms when the normal/advanced mainly focuses on this. same for stuff like 00:49:604
  3. 01:08:666 (2,3) - slider seems nicer here to let the snare stand out. using circles for all kinda implies the sounds are equal intensity
  4. 01:16:323 (5,6) - strong strings/drums on 01:16:635 - 01:17:104 - that deserve to be emphasised more. this is where u can have the higher density instead of forcing the density in places like 01:08:510 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4)
[Fireworks]
  1. 00:19:756 (5,1) - think this deserves a lot more spacing, ur spacing later on is much more 00:22:260 (6,1) - while the sounds rnt as important
  2. 00:30:073 - finish here is unnecessary, pretty much the same sound as 00:27:573
  3. 01:07:573 - not sure why this uses a different sampleset to everything else, should keep hitsounding consistent to give the same feedback to the same sounds
  4. 01:08:666 (4,5) - same as insane, slider helps differentiate stuff
  5. 01:13:666 (6,7) - rhythm seems so different to previous instances 01:03:666 (5,6) - where you have the slider on blue tick for emphasis, should ctrl g for consistency
gl~
Bastionior
560 posts
Joined January 2013
Bastionior

Pentori wrote:

u posted in my queue a while ago


[Kalindraz's Hard]
  1. lacking contrast too a bit, read first comment of advanced well, but I clearly reflect your idea presented in the same current way without making any modifications, I randomized most of the patterns so that they did not look the same, and some have objective distances that reflect on the music ..
  2. 00:00:073 - ncs are used too much in the section imo, should try stick to ncing every measure like the rest of the map does Indeed,
    fiexd.
  3. 00:17:562 (1,2,1,2) - not the best pattern, harms readability a lot for no real reason since you dont have overlaps elsewhere ^
  4. 00:22:260 (6,7,1) - not rly sure of the logic behind these rhythms, especially when you have kicks on blue ticks 00:24:604 (6) - it doesnt give them much emphasis Well, has a little sound highlighted in (7) note, so i found it coherent to put.
  5. 01:01:166 - 01:02:416 - 01:03:666 - lots of offbeat snares are skipped throughout the kiai, while ghost notes 01:01:323 (3) - get mapped instead. should try build a rhythm that gives clicking priority to the snares as to properly follow the music. other diffs follow the 3/4 rhythms so it doesnt really make sense for the hard not to
    well, about that ... my hard is just to follow with the majority of piority 1/2 notes, so that the player of this level has an easy understanding of the rhythm, you can verify that in the whole diff all sessions 3/4 ( with the exception of 1 slider 3/4 with reverse arrow) are being represented by triplets, so that the player is already prepared for what has to come in the larger diff (eg introduction to 3/4 rhythm and jump 1/4)

gl~
thanks for mod pentori
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Trynna
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ty pent fixed most stuff except for the advanced (now normal) which i think stuff should be more passive and let the 3/4 to the kiai which is way stronger. i am also not aiming to create a real thing that makes the intro and the common parts with different spacing since it's a very low diff i hope new players can clear without many trouble. One more thing I'm still thinking about is 01:08:510 (3,4,5,6,1) - on insane and fireworks but nice catch

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