1. Blue (3.04 stars, 437 notes)
2. Easy (1.31 stars, 172 notes)
3. Normal (1.94 stars, 81 notes)

Renquiem wrote:

Hello Hello~
From M4M

00:06:085 (3,4) - Time Distance Equality please! You used a 1/1 distance for a 1/2 gap. Adjust to be closer. No thanks. This map does not use TDE in a conventional manner. 1/1 = stacks. 1/2 = jump. 1/4 = distance snapped.
00:19:431 (1,2) - TDE again. Bring 2 a bit closer ^
00:22:465 (2,3,4) - Could improve triangle (Move 3 and 4 up a little bit, or use the shape generator tool ctrl+shift+D) Fixed.
00:24:891 (2,3,4,5) - For Hard and below diffs, please follow the same spacing throughout the whole map with some exceptions Increased distance between 3,4 to make 1/2 jump more obvious.
00:34:295 (2,3,4) - There' no sound that represents a triple here. The vocals go to 1/6 here. Specifically the "ah" sounds is on 4/6. No thanks. The vocals have a long attack time (listen to 00:29:138 (1) - vocal comes in much earlier than the drum, though both are supposed to be at the same time), so therefore the vocal here comes in on the blue tick. The red tick is overmapped to represent the rhythm in an easily understandable way.
00:36:722 (2,3,4) - Same thing here. Adjust to 1/6 ^
00:41:575 (2,3,4) - Same thing here. (triples are also spaced unevenly) Fixed spacing, otherwise unchanged.
00:44:305 (2) - Adjust 2 slightly right to improve blanket Done.
00:51:585 (2) - opposite. Adjust left Done.
00:51:585 (2,3,4) - Use shape generator! Nah I'll just eyeball it, fixed.
00:59:775 (5,6,7,1) - There's a wider angle with 5 6 7. compared to 6 7 1. It's a parabola.
01:21:919 (5,6) - For a hard diff, making this a slider might work better Both sounds are the same strength, so no thanks. If other mods say the same, I'll reconsider.
01:37:086 (1) - Again, the vocals are on 1/6 and 4/6 Tried 1/6 snap, it sounds even more off-beat than before so no thanks.
01:50:046 (4,5,6) - TDE (Move 4 over to keep that stack) Changed in a different way.
01:50:652 (6) - bring down a little for better blanket Fixed.
02:04:289 (2,3,4) - For this triple and all of which come after, they are over mapped. There is no sound that pertains to these triples. I suggest switching them with something else. Denied for now, as there are very soft drum sounds in the music. Added green lines to reduce the hitsound volume.
02:27:626 (1,2,3,4) - 1/6 and 4/6 again There's no vocals here, only instruments 1/4 notes.
02:28:839 (6,7,8) - There are sounds for 6 and 7 but not 8. Definitely is a sound.

To fix your timing issue:
-remove the red book mark at 2:22:773
-Adjust your red bookmark at 1:43:986 to be 98.900 Thanks, I felt the timing was off but couldn't tell where :v

I think I just found myself a song to listen to while taking a walk owo

Uraomote Error wrote:

Hi m4m from your queue

although only Hard is ready for modding, i still mod another diff because you have lots of issues you should fix

[General]
disable Widescreen Support (your map doesn't have storyboard)
the red timing point in (Blue) conficts other diff

[Easy]
00:04:265 (4,1) - You must avoid this overlap. Remember, this is Easy diff, the overlap won't suitable for Beginners.
00:04:871 (1,2) - ^
00:07:298 (1,2) - The flow is uncomfortable.
00:08:511 (3,1) - ^

I only mod your Easy diff and do short mod because there's so much problem you should and must fix. Try to watch pishifat's video to find out more.

OK that's it
GL~~

Swegmec wrote:

General Feedback
Woah, the background is bright.
Combo colors blend in a little bit to the background. I think a ligher or more tealish - blue should solve this. Will change background image to greyscale, keeping combo colours.
Your Distance Spacing is really odd; it looks even but there's variations by 0.03-0.04x, telling me you probably use grid snap. Don't use grid snap. You'll find it a lot easier to do what you want.
If you aren't using grid snap, then you need to turn distance snap on. No grid snap used, and no distance snap used either. Was mapping in a rush on request, but now am remapping with proper snapping.

Your map is going to need much more work. So don't get discouraged.
Also, take the map out of the graveyard. (Click your profile > Beatmaps > Graveyard > Resurrect) Done, maps that don't have mods get re-graveyarded fast so I was just waiting for a few posts before resurrecting.


Blue
00:05:478 (2,3) - For ALL of these short jumps (such as 00:07:905 (2,3,4) - ) I think DS could be upped a bit, just because 0.07x is virtually stacking notes. Makes the map a bit sluggish. Try 0.2x? But it's your choice. Map plays fine with the current DS but it could be better with a higher spacing. It's supposed to be snaps, remap will show this more clearly.
00:14:578 (1) - Slider is partially off the grid. Could cause an instant DQ in map, be careful! Off-grid is fine, as long as it's not off-screen when playing.
00:19:431 (1,2,3,4) - Bad way to introduce bigger jumps, since the player has been doing 0.07x earlier and is going to assume the beats are snapped to 1/1 instead of 1/2. Too sudden, try gradually introducing higher jumps however you want. Accidentally put a 1/2 jump on a 1/4 rhythm. Fixed.All 1/1 rhythm in this map is stacked, so any jump = 1/2.
00:21:251 (5,1) - Weird overlap. Idk what it was but it's gone in the remap, so fixed.
00:24:285 (1) - (Optional) Add some sort of transition between intro and verse that shows the player "verse is starting, expect harder things." Song doesn't have enough sounds to support more dense clicking, and I don't want to overmap.
00:29:138 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Your DS is gradually increasing. Not a good place to do that because there's no buildup or anything in the song. If you're going to use DS, make it even. Fixed in remap.
01:07:965 (1) - Slider is off the grid. It's not offscreen, so it's fine.
01:12:819 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you're using long sliders for the first 2 "ahhhhhh" 's in the song, don't change the rhythm this drastically. Maybe add AN extra note or two but don't change the rhythm completely. Keeping this for now to avoid going from long sliders directly into the kiai.
01:19:795 (6,1) - Way too far of a jump. ye
01:21:919 (5,6) - Stack these. Stacks are only for 1/1, will put closer together though.
01:23:132 (2,3,4,5,6) - No pattern to these jumps; seems really random. Fixed
01:27:986 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - slightly better than last jump pattern but still random. ??? It's the same pattern but rotated 90 degrees, fixed though.
01:32:673 (2,3,4) - Distance snap.
01:38:299 (4,5) - I advise against using the verse rhythm and note placement in the chorus; it just confuses people. Increase distance. All 1/1 rhythm is stacked, in verse and chorus. There is no other rhythm to map to.
01:49:447 (2,3,4,5,6) - Bad jump rhythm. It's the same rhythm as in the beginning of the song.
01:53:087 (5,6,1) - DS (Distance spacing).
01:55:210 (5) - Slider off grid. Not offscreen, so it's fine.
01:56:727 (2,3,4,5) - You confuse players by putting three 1/2 jumps then a sudden 1/1 jump. They'll think the slider comes sooner than it actually does. Use that really low DS for your 1/1 jump. Fixed.
02:02:490 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Good! I'm deleting this lol, it's too difficult for hard diff
02:03:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Also good! See how you kept the same spacing, same rhythm? That's how your whole song should be kept. Use the same spacing for each unique part of the song, then change the spacing during transitions to a new part of the song.The spacing here is just as uneven as the rest of the map, except it's smaller spacing overall so it's less visible lol
02:10:680 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is off. Decreased jump.
02:17:050 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - No need to increase the spacing at all. Fixed.
02:17:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Careful of random jumps. It's a zigzag.
02:22:510 (6) - Breaks up the previous (well placed) 3 sliders because of 02:22:510 (6,1) - The (1) looks really confined and should be pointed towards the LEFT, because that's where your next notes will go (in empty space). Changed 1's slider shape.
02:24:027 (4,5,6,7) - DS is off. Random jumps.
02:33:127 (2,3,4) - See how the (4) is further apart? This actually is fine because the beat on (4) is a harder, more intense one, so the spacing should be higher.
02:45:867 (3,4,5) - (5) is WAY too far away from (4).
02:48:294 (4,5,6) - No. Keep same DS.
02:56:787 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
The last part of the map is shitmap, fixed all.

Your map needs a lot of work.
I'll link a few videos that might help you.
How to place/use jumps
How to do streams (less applicable to you but may help) Thanks but these are less applicable to low BPM as the player has much more time to aim.

Good luck! Thanks!
(I will be expecting your mod within a week or less. I've had players who have cancelled their mods for my map after I did theirs; please show common courtesy and do my mod, regardless of how little or much it is.) Sure thing, I always return M4M asap.

[Kurose Riku] wrote:

Hiヽ(ﾟ∀｡)ﾉ
M4M from ur queue.

[Blue]
00:16:095 (4,1) - this overlap looks not nice Fixed.
00:19:431 (1,2) - DS..I think 3.5x~3.8x will better, 5.49x too over ? It's ~2.5 snap.
00:43:698 (1,2) - blanket ? It's already blanketed.
00:50:978 (1,2) - ^
01:00:382 (7) -suggest ctrl+j. If u do this , don't foget adjust 01:00:988 (2,3,4) - Changed something, it's remapped differently now.
01:21:919 (5,6) - suggest DS 0.75~0.80 Distance snap always above 2.
01:37:086 (1) - Why use repeating slider here? suggest change to slider same 01:39:512 (1) - Changed to a stream, as the vocal suggests wavy sounds.
01:52:480 (4) - add clap Fixed.
01:57:333 (4) - ^
01:59:760 (4) - ^
01:56:120 (1,2) - blanket It's already blanketed.
02:00:973 (1,2) - ^
02:24:026 (4) - suggest ctrl+< Remapped to a better pattern.
02:27:667 (1) - hitsound change to Finish? Nah, there's no cymbal sound in the music.
02:55:877 (5,6) - add clap Fixed.

That's all.
Hope it will be helpful ( • ̀ω•́ )✧ Thanks for modding!

Hi, coming from M4M

Since u wrote to only mod 45 sec this is all GL with your map and thanks for modding my map.