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Ozu
Hi, M4M~
Im noob at taiko modding so just refer my modding :)
I wrote down just word,not sentence, But it doesn't mean "you should fix it now x( " !!!
Because my English is poor, I can't write what i really want to say 100% ;w;


Kantan
00:19:995 (9) - add d
00:32:329 (27) - d
00:54:995 (53,54) - ctrl g
00:58:995 (59,60) - ctrl g
01:24:329 (90) - add k
01:44:329 (111,112,113,114) - K
01:46:995 (115,116) - ctrl g
02:08:329 (1) - so long

Futsuu
00:19:995 (24) - add d because little difficult in Futsuu
00:52:662 (103) - d
01:09:329 (146) - k
01:17:995 (169,170) - ctrl g
01:29:662 (196) - d
01:56:995 (18) - k
02:08:329 (1) - so long

Muzukashii
00:32:329 (90) - d
00:48:329 (159) - d
01:57:662 (444) - d
02:07:912 (491) - delete
02:08:329 (1) - so long

Lite Oni
00:12:329 (6) - delete
00:17:662 (31) - delete
00:32:329 (102,103) - ctrl g
00:42:995 (160) - d
00:44:329 (166) - delete
00:48:329 (185) - d
00:49:495 (192) - d
00:53:495 (215,216) - ctrl g
01:14:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - so many d so change some d to k
01:36:329 (108) - d
01:46:995 (175) - d
01:47:329 (178) - K
01:57:662 (242) - k
02:08:329 (1) - so long

Oni
00:11:829 (6) - k sound is 'd' but more feeling of end
00:14:495 (22) - k same reason
00:17:162 (40) - ^
00:19:829 (56) - ^
00:20:329 (58) - delete
00:26:829 (108,109) - add a circle between them
00:31:662 (137,138) - ctrl g
00:34:162 (153,154) - add d between
00:34:579 (157) - delete
00:45:662 (232,233) - d
00:57:995 (312) - k
01:01:495 (332) - k
01:05:662 (357) - delete
01:44:079 (609) - delete
01:56:829 (708) - k
01:56:912 (709) - delete
02:08:329 (1) - so long
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

404 AccNotFound wrote:

Hi, M4M~ When I requested M4M? Link of the map plz
Im noob at taiko modding so just refer my modding :) It's fine
I wrote down just word,not sentence, But it doesn't mean "you should fix it now x( " !!!
Because my English is poor, I can't write what i really want to say 100% ;w; My english also is bad


Kantan
00:19:995 (9) - add d 1/2 in a Kantan is unrankeable (except in very low bpm), because this is very hard to this diff
00:32:329 (27) - d The finisher here mark a new section, this mark difference with the above
00:54:995 (53,54) - ctrl g
00:58:995 (59,60) - ctrl g Applied
01:24:329 (90) - add k I don't add note here because I want make difference with these sections 01:22:995 - 01:25:662 -
01:44:329 (111,112,113,114) - K Ok
01:46:995 (115,116) - ctrl g This 01:46:995 (115) - is a snare, so I keep
02:08:329 (1) - so long I want keep this spinner for a better spread with the other diffs

Futsuu
00:19:995 (24) - add d because little difficult in Futsuu I don't see hard this, also I don't like the sound here
00:52:662 (103) - d Changed
01:09:329 (146) - k I listen a kick drum here, keep
01:17:995 (169,170) - ctrl g Don't like the sound, also is inconsistent with 01:14:995 (162,163,164) -
01:29:662 (196) - d Ok
01:56:995 (18) - k Don't like the sound
02:08:329 (1) - so long The sound finish here, keep

Muzukashii
00:32:329 (90) - d Same as Kantan
00:48:329 (159) - d New section
01:57:662 (444) - d Same as 00:32:329 (90) -
02:07:912 (491) - delete Follow the drum
02:08:329 (1) - so long You know

Lite Oni
00:12:329 (6) - delete I conside delete this, but no for now
00:17:662 (31) - delete ^
00:32:329 (102,103) - ctrl g Don't like the sound
00:42:995 (160) - d ^
00:44:329 (166) - delete Consistence with 00:38:329 (135,136,137,138,139) -
00:48:329 (185) - d New section and high pitch
00:49:495 (192) - d Follow the piano here
00:53:495 (215,216) - ctrl g Ok
01:14:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - so many d so change some d to k It's fine for me. I don't think neccesary add kat
01:36:329 (108) - d New section
01:46:995 (175) - d ^
01:47:329 (178) - K Don't like 1/4 with finisher
01:57:662 (242) - k New section
02:08:329 (1) - so long You know

Oni
00:11:829 (6) - k sound is 'd' but more feeling of end Don't like this, keep
00:14:495 (22) - k same reason keep
00:17:162 (40) - ^
00:19:829 (56) - ^ No
00:20:329 (58) - delete Removed
00:26:829 (108,109) - add a circle between them Don't like 1/4 with finisher in the final
00:31:662 (137,138) - ctrl g I follow the vocal here
00:34:162 (153,154) - add d between Ok
00:34:579 (157) - delete Removed
00:45:662 (232,233) - d Sounds good
00:57:995 (312) - k Changed
01:01:495 (332) - k Ok
01:05:662 (357) - delete Consistence with 00:59:662 (321,322,323,324,325) -
01:44:079 (609) - delete Obviously here has a snare
01:56:829 (708) - k Don't like the sound
01:56:912 (709) - delete Snare sound
02:08:329 (1) - so long You know
Thanks for mod!
Beatmap updated~
davidminh0111
Hello from my modding queue
  • [General]
  1. It would be great if you add this skin into taiko (although for all mode): https://osuskins.info/skin?s=321
  2. Would add the slider instead the spinner
  • [Lite Oni]
  1. 00:28:995: Remove this
  2. 00:58:829 (241, 242): change 241 to d and change 242 to k and add drum
  3. 01:23:576: Add d here
  4. 01:56:995: Add d here
  5. 02:05:662: Add Finish
I'm a bad modder if this one doesn't help you, ignore it
Good luck
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello from my modding queue
  • [General]
  1. It would be great if you add this skin into taiko (although for all mode): https://osuskins.info/skin?s=321 I like the skin, but I don't see it's neccesary
  2. Would add the slider instead the spinner I don't like much the sliders xc
  • [Lite Oni]
  1. 00:28:995: Remove this I listen a kick here, but I remove this in Muzukashii
  2. 00:58:829 (241, 242): change 241 to d and change 242 to k and add drum Consistence with 00:58:995 (242,243) - (d k)
  3. 01:23:576: Add d here Added in 01:22:912 - to consistente with 01:21:329 (30,31,32,33) -
  4. 01:56:995: Add d here Added
  5. 02:05:662: Add Finish It's the same as 00:50:995 (197) - for now I keep this
I'm a bad modder if this one doesn't help you, ignore it You help me!
Good luck
Thanks for mod!
Beatmap updated~
Volta
heya promising map, but has some issues that need to be fixed, especially regarding lower difficulties

[General]
  1. I'd prefer if you rename Lite Oni to Oni, and current Oni to Inner Oni. Lite naming is ancient, and should be avoided when possible.
  2. Change HP Muzukashii to 6 and (Lite) Oni to 5 for better curve?
  3. You'll need to buff the kantan to have more balanced spread, Futsuu can also be buffed a bit, while Muzu can be nerfed and make some effective rest moments (2/1 for Muzu and 3/1 or 4/1 for Futsuu). Take a look at example notespread screenshot below
    There are some spots where gap between Kantan and Futsuu become too high. While Muzukashii and (Lite) Oni become too close. I'd recommend you to compare the diffs and add/remove notes where it fits to balance the spread. i'll give some suggestions.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:22:995 (13,14) - maybe swap this note to match the snare sound at (14) with k?
  2. 00:33:995 - , 00:34:329 - add something
  3. 00:38:329 - , 00:39:662 - , 00:39:329 - add something
  4. 00:46:329 - , 00:47:329 - add
  5. 00:49:662 - , 00:50:662 - add
    > 00:51:495 - move to white tick is more friendly (00:51:662 - )
    > 00:52:829 - can be removed for break
  6. 01:13:995 - add k
  7. 01:16:995 - , 01:19:662 - , 01:22:329 - add something
  8. 01:24:329 - , 01:24:995 - , 01:25:329 - add
  9. 01:27:329 - , 01:27:662 - add
  10. 01:31:995 - add
  11. 01:36:995 - , 01:37:995 - , 01:39:662 - add
  12. 01:42:329 - , 01:42:662 - add
  13. 01:48:662 - , 01:48:995 - add
  14. 01:52:995 - , 01:53:995 - add
  15. 02:01:329 - , 02:02:329 - add
  16. 02:04:329 - 02:05:329 - add
    > 02:06:162 - move to next white tick
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:33:995 - , 00:34:162 - , 00:34:662 - looking at muzu, you can try to add note there
  2. 00:37:995 - 00:39:329 - 00:40:662 - add?
  3. 01:26:662 - add
  4. 01:29:329 - add
  5. 01:31:329 - remove
  6. 01:39:329 - remove, kiai is very dense comparing with kantan
  7. 01:51:495 - remove
  8. 01:55:329, 01:55:495 - remove both
    > 01:55:829 - move to 01:55:662 -
[Muzukashii]
  1. i think Muzu's intro can be made less dense to make larger gap with (Lite) Oni. try to remove notes such as 00:12:996 - , 00:13:162 - , 00:18:329 - , 00:18:496 -
  2. 00:21:495 - move to 00:21:162 - and change to d? i find it more comfortable to give some space before the finisher, like you did at 00:26:829 -
  3. 00:31:995 - consider to remove this notes to give effective rest. just ignore the piano sound and let player enjoy it without tapping :^)
    > 00:28:995 - it's fine to add d here after that for the kick, or at 00:28:829 - for the vocal. i'd suggest the vocal though because sounds more natural
  4. 00:34:412 (1,2) - remove the triplet and change 00:34:662 - to d, i think it doesn't need to be this intense.
  5. 00:45:829 - remove and 00:45:662 - change to d?
  6. 00:54:329 (1,2) - really suggest to remove these notes to give another rest because pattern sequences from 00:32:329 - until end will somewhat tiring

  7. > 00:59:662 (1,2) - same, for consistency
    > 01:04:995 (1,2) - consistency ftw
    > 01:11:495 - can add d instead to increase the tension before next session.
  8. 01:15:329 (1,2) - nice rest spot here. and this session is relatively calmer, so less density would reflect the calmness better
    > 01:20:662 (1,2) - remove for consistency with ^
  9. 01:38:245 - remove, and 01:38:329 - move this to 01:38:829 - ?
  10. 01:59:745 (1,2) - remove triplet and 01:59:995 - change to d? same point as 00:34:412
  11. 02:00:995 - change to d? drum is low
that's it for now. i think it's better if you get couple more mods again to polish further. good luck (¦3[▓▓]
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Volta wrote:

heya promising map, but has some issues that need to be fixed, especially regarding lower difficulties

[General]
  1. I'd prefer if you rename Lite Oni to Oni, and current Oni to Inner Oni. Lite naming is ancient, and should be avoided when possible. I thought about this a long time ago. I didn't want to change it because the current "Oni" doesn't have many extensive patterns to consider "Inner Oni". I changed my mind
  2. Change HP Muzukashii to 6 and (Lite) Oni to 5 for better curve? Changed
  3. You'll need to buff the kantan to have more balanced spread, Futsuu can also be buffed a bit, while Muzu can be nerfed and make some effective rest moments (2/1 for Muzu and 3/1 or 4/1 for Futsuu). Take a look at example notespread screenshot below
    There are some spots where gap between Kantan and Futsuu become too high. While Muzukashii and (Lite) Oni become too close. I'd recommend you to compare the diffs and add/remove notes where it fits to balance the spread. i'll give some suggestions. Eventually I realized about this, this is my first mapset and I admit, I'm not very good to have a consistent spread among other difficulties.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:22:995 (13,14) - maybe swap this note to match the snare sound at (14) with k? Sure, sounds is good
  2. 00:33:995 - , 00:34:329 - add something Added
  3. 00:38:329 - , 00:39:662 - , 00:39:329 - add something Added except 00:39:329 -, I try follow the melody
  4. 00:46:329 - , 00:47:329 - add Added
  5. 00:49:662 - , 00:50:662 - add Added
    > 00:51:495 - move to white tick is more friendly (00:51:662 - ) Ok
    > 00:52:829 - can be removed for break Deleted
  6. 01:13:995 - add k Added
  7. 01:16:995 - , 01:19:662 - , 01:22:329 - add something Added
  8. 01:24:329 - , 01:24:995 - , 01:25:329 - add Added
  9. 01:27:329 - , 01:27:662 - add Added
  10. 01:31:995 - add Added
  11. 01:36:995 - , 01:37:995 - , 01:39:662 - add Added
  12. 01:42:329 - , 01:42:662 - add Added
  13. 01:48:662 - , 01:48:995 - add Added only 01:48:662 -. The another note added here 01:49:329 - to follow the vocal and snare
  14. 01:52:995 - , 01:53:995 - add Added
  15. 02:01:329 - , 02:02:329 - add Added
  16. 02:04:329 - 02:05:329 - add Added
    > 02:06:162 - move to next white tick Moved
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:33:995 - , 00:34:162 - , 00:34:662 - looking at muzu, you can try to add note there Added except 00:34:162 - , don't like the sound here
  2. 00:37:995 - 00:39:329 - 00:40:662 - add? Added
  3. 01:26:662 - add Added
  4. 01:29:329 - add Added
  5. 01:31:329 - remove Removed
  6. 01:39:329 - remove, kiai is very dense comparing with kantan Removed
  7. 01:51:495 - remove Removed
  8. 01:55:329, 01:55:495 - remove both Removed
    > 01:55:829 - move to 01:55:662 - Moved
[Muzukashii]
  1. i think Muzu's intro can be made less dense to make larger gap with (Lite) Oni. try to remove notes such as 00:12:996 - , 00:13:162 - , 00:18:329 - , 00:18:496 - You're right, removed
  2. 00:21:495 - move to 00:21:162 - and change to d? i find it more comfortable to give some space before the finisher, like you did at 00:26:829 - I considered change it, ok
  3. 00:31:995 - consider to remove this notes to give effective rest. just ignore the piano sound and let player enjoy it without tapping :^) Removed, I think the same
    > 00:28:995 - it's fine to add d here after that for the kick, or at 00:28:829 - for the vocal. i'd suggest the vocal though because sounds more natural Vocal
  4. 00:34:412 (1,2) - remove the triplet and change 00:34:662 - to d, i think it doesn't need to be this intense. Applied
  5. 00:45:829 - remove and 00:45:662 - change to d? Sounds good, applied
  6. 00:54:329 (1,2) - really suggest to remove these notes to give another rest because pattern sequences from 00:32:329 - until end will somewhat tiring Removed

  7. > 00:59:662 (1,2) - same, for consistency Ok
    > 01:04:995 (1,2) - consistency ftw ftw
    > 01:11:495 - can add d instead to increase the tension before next session. Applied
  8. 01:15:329 (1,2) - nice rest spot here. and this session is relatively calmer, so less density would reflect the calmness better Applied
    > 01:20:662 (1,2) - remove for consistency with ^ Ok
  9. 01:38:245 - remove, and 01:38:329 - move this to 01:38:829 - ? Looks good, applied
  10. 01:59:745 (1,2) - remove triplet and 01:59:995 - change to d? same point as 00:34:412 Sure
  11. 02:00:995 - change to d? drum is low Changed
that's it for now. i think it's better if you get couple more mods again to polish further. good luck (¦3[▓▓]
Really thanks very much Volta, thanks to you mod I see more things to account. I'll try get more mods :D
Thanks for mod!
Beatmap updated~
Lumenite-
Hey there, NM on my queue.

This map is already really good as it is, and because I don't flood my mods with change [note] to d or k, this might be short, sorry.

[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:34:829 - A don note can be added here imo for the sake of keeping these patterns connected and flowing, some of the common 1/1 breaks throughout the entire map sound a little awkward and out of place to me, as this one is one of them. I won't jump on all the awkward pauses I see mainly because it'll flood the mod with too much of the same thing, and that's no bueno.
  2. 00:44:829 (227,228,229,230,231) - Imo, this pattern sounds weird starting on a red tick. I would move this one back to the white tick, either as a kdkkd.
  3. 00:57:662 (310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317) - I can see the purpose of the improvisation here, but there's no sound to support the need of 1/4. These few notes really bother me, they just stick out-the 5 plet pattern matches the vocal, but the triplets to me are just not necessary.
  4. 01:02:995 (340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348) - Same thing here, except you even changed the patterning. The 5 plet should definitely not be in the middle of this bar, and rather the end as you did it the first time.
  5. 01:08:329 (370,371,372) - The kat triplet matches a drum entrance, but this one doesn't match anything.
  6. 01:16:662 (428,429,430) - You're soiling consistency here-you're mapping the same 3 drum sounds, yet you change them every time they occur. Stick to the k d d.
  7. 01:27:829 (487) - I think you should move this note to 01:28:495 to follow the vocal hit that occurs there instead of leaving it blank.
That will be all, gl w/ rank.
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Taikocracy wrote:

Hey there, NM on my queue.

This map is already really good as it is, and because I don't flood my mods with change [note] to d or k, this might be short, sorry. No matter, all count :D

[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:34:829 - A don note can be added here imo for the sake of keeping these patterns connected and flowing, some of the common 1/1 breaks throughout the entire map sound a little awkward and out of place to me, as this one is one of them. I won't jump on all the awkward pauses I see mainly because it'll flood the mod with too much of the same thing, and that's no bueno. I understand about it, actually I too seem rare these breaks. But I do not want to make such a long pattern, also seems to me weird. For now I do not add that note
  2. 00:44:829 (227,228,229,230,231) - Imo, this pattern sounds weird starting on a red tick. I would move this one back to the white tick, either as a kdkkd.I accept this but changed with kkddk to respect the snare here 00:45:329 (230) -
  3. 00:57:662 (310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317) - I can see the purpose of the improvisation here, but there's no sound to support the need of 1/4. These few notes really bother me, they just stick out-the 5 plet pattern matches the vocal, but the triplets to me are just not necessary. Here I try to follow the druml, guitar and piano. So for this I used 1/4. 00:57:662 (308,309,310) - This for piano and this 00:58:162 (312,313,314) - for guitar and drum
  4. 01:02:995 (340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348) - Same thing here, except you even changed the patterning. The 5 plet should definitely not be in the middle of this bar, and rather the end as you did it the first time. I moved this 01:03:745 (345) - to 5 plet 01:04:079 - , but the triplets is the same as avobe
  5. 01:08:329 (370,371,372) - The kat triplet matches a drum entrance, but this one doesn't match anything. Same as avobe, I follow the piano
  6. 01:16:662 (428,429,430) - You're soiling consistency here-you're mapping the same 3 drum sounds, yet you change them every time they occur. Stick to the k d d. Changed to k k d to follow better the vocal and to vary with 01:15:329 (419,420,421) -
  7. 01:27:829 (487) - I think you should move this note to 01:28:495 to follow the vocal hit that occurs there instead of leaving it blank. This break should be the same that 01:25:829 - , so I will keep to maintain consistency
That will be all, gl w/ rank.
Thanks so much for mod :)
Beatmap updated~
World Fraction
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Aisha
Hola! Bueno el mapa está buenísimo hasta ahora así que el mod será bien cortito (ojalá ayude xD).

[General]
  1. Bueno sobre los volúmenes siento que no son iguales en toda la canción; podrías partir con 70 y usar 80 en 00:32:329 - , volver a 70 en 00:53:662 - (o incluso 60, depende de ti, luego 80 01:09:662 - de nuevo, 01:14:995 - 60 acá y hacer algo ascendente desde 01:25:662 - hasta el kiai para llegar a 90 :P
  2. Es un poco raro que la Inner tenga más HP (6) que la Oni (5). Podrías bajarle a 5 también la Inner y queda bien el camino entre ellos :P
    El metadata, timing y todo está bien por lo demás :D
[Kantan]
  1. 00:14:995 (4,5) - podrías aplicar ctrl+g acá, siento que la segunda nota es más alta que la primera (o ddk sería mejor incluso)
  2. 00:39:329 - podrías agregar una nota acá para la consistencia con 00:33:995 (29) -
  3. 00:50:329 - no estoy seguro de esto, pero podrías intentar acá y suena bastante bien para el break
  4. 01:30:329 (111) - no sería malo que agregaras una nota acá, no creo que la deje tan densa, ya que siento que queda muy vacío sin algo ahí (o quizás borrando la próx mejor)
  5. 01:49:329 (142) - :arrow: 01:51:495 - suena mejor imo
  6. 01:56:329 - quizás usar un slider acá o algo por el estilo para seguir un poco ese stream podría ser mejor, además considerando que hay cambio de sección podrías darle un poco más de acción que un quiebre 4/1 :P. Si lo haces podrías dejar breaks en 01:57:662 - mejor (por ejemplo borrando 01:58:329 (155) - )
[Futsuu]

  • SliderMultiplier:1.40000000596046 :arrow: 1.4 (arreglen su juego por favor ?))
  1. 00:34:662 (57) - deberías borrar esta nota, deja muy difícil esta parte para un futsuu
  2. 00:35:495 (60,61) - o quizás podrías cambiar la primera por kat y borrar la segunda, fillea mejor :P
  3. 00:53:662 - esta sección se siente un poco rara, no deberías usar cuadruple taps como 00:54:662 (106,107,108,109) - , borrando 00:55:662 (109) - suena mucho mejor y no tan overmapped para la sección lenta
    Quizás 00:55:662 (109) - :arrow 00:55:995 - es una buena opción también
    Igual se aplica harto a lo largo de esta sección, están medios raros los patrones :c
    Nada más acá, buena diff ^^
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:21:662 (35) - mm no estoy seguro si un finish es quizás muy fuerte :/
  2. 00:34:995 - mmm si es que estás siguiendo el sonido agudo podrías mover 00:35:662 (98) - :arrow: 00:35:829 -
  3. 00:42:495 (125) - podrías usar d acá, suena mejor que muchos kat seguidos
  4. 01:12:662 (240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248) - quizás 3 d d k seguidos es muy repetitivo (y siento que el sonido es distinto entre ellos), podrías probar d d d, d d k, d k k (o d d k también el último)
  5. 01:19:995 (265,266) - no sé si sean buenos los dos finishers, suenan muy fuerte creo :c (tienen casi el mismo tono que 01:22:662 (273,274) - )
  6. 01:40:495 - no sé si es muy difícil el patrón acá, pero es como el único que tiene tanta seguidilla de notas a través de todo el kiai (y la canción), sólo comento :P
  7. 01:57:662 - podrías intentar repetir la sección de notas en 02:00:329 - que calzan re bien
Sobre la Oni y la Inner te diré in game cuando las revise ^^, están bien hechas y sólo son un par de puntos (estoy algo cansado ahora la verdad xD). Me gusta harto la canción así que suerte! Ojalá te sirva!
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

xfraczynho wrote:

Hola! Bueno el mapa está buenísimo hasta ahora así que el mod será bien cortito (ojalá ayude xD).

[General]
  1. Bueno sobre los volúmenes siento que no son iguales en toda la canción; podrías partir con 70 y usar 80 en 00:32:329 - , volver a 70 en 00:53:662 - (o incluso 60, depende de ti, luego 80 01:09:662 - de nuevo, 01:14:995 - 60 acá y hacer algo ascendente desde 01:25:662 - hasta el kiai para llegar a 90 :P Buena idea! Sólo apliqué 2 SVs en 01:30:995 - para aumentar el volumen
  2. Es un poco raro que la Inner tenga más HP (6) que la Oni (5). Podrías bajarle a 5 también la Inner y queda bien el camino entre ellos :P Quiero que haya una diferencia en cuanto al HP para hacerlo más dificl ya que es un Inner Oni, lo mantendré
    El metadata, timing y todo está bien por lo demás :D Gracias~
[Kantan]
  1. 00:14:995 (4,5) - podrías aplicar ctrl+g acá, siento que la segunda nota es más alta que la primera (o ddk sería mejor incluso) Apliqué dkd para mantener el don consistente con 01:30:995 - (y con las demás diff también)
  2. 00:39:329 - podrías agregar una nota acá para la consistencia con 00:33:995 (29) - Agregado
  3. 00:50:329 - no estoy seguro de esto, pero podrías intentar acá y suena bastante bien para el break Aplicado
  4. 01:30:329 (111) - no sería malo que agregaras una nota acá, no creo que la deje tan densa, ya que siento que queda muy vacío sin algo ahí (o quizás borrando la próx mejor) No me gusta como queda el sonido ahí.
  5. 01:49:329 (142) - :arrow: 01:51:495 - suena mejor imo Me gusta que quede el break para que se vayan preparando para 01:52:329 -
  6. 01:56:329 - quizás usar un slider acá o algo por el estilo para seguir un poco ese stream podría ser mejor, además considerando que hay cambio de sección podrías darle un poco más de acción que un quiebre 4/1 :P. Si lo haces podrías dejar breaks en 01:57:662 - mejor (por ejemplo borrando 01:58:329 (155) - ) Lo mismo que arriba, dejo el break para que se vayan preparando para 01:57:662 (155) -
[Futsuu]

  • SliderMultiplier:1.40000000596046 :arrow: 1.4 (arreglen su juego por favor ?)) Siempre me olvido de esto
  1. 00:34:662 (57) - deberías borrar esta nota, deja muy difícil esta parte para un futsuu Eliminado
  2. 00:35:495 (60,61) - o quizás podrías cambiar la primera por kat y borrar la segunda, fillea mejor :P Cambié kat al segundo, se siente muy vacio si no hay nota ahí
  3. 00:53:662 - esta sección se siente un poco rara, no deberías usar cuadruple taps como 00:54:662 (106,107,108,109) - , borrando 00:55:662 (109) - suena mucho mejor y no tan overmapped para la sección lenta
    Quizás 00:55:662 (109) - :arrow 00:55:995 - es una buena opción también
    Igual se aplica harto a lo largo de esta sección, están medios raros los patrones :c No sé qué quise hace ahí xD. Corregido esa sección
    Nada más acá, buena diff ^^
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:21:662 (35) - mm no estoy seguro si un finish es quizás muy fuerte :/ Lo agregué para hacer notar el cambio de sección, lo mantendré por ahora
  2. 00:34:995 - mmm si es que estás siguiendo el sonido agudo podrías mover 00:35:662 (98) - :arrow: 00:35:829 - Si, pero estaría rompiendo el break consistente con Futsuu, cambié unos patrones para que no se note mucho eso
  3. 00:42:495 (125) - podrías usar d acá, suena mejor que muchos kat seguidos Cambiado
  4. 01:12:662 (240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248) - quizás 3 d d k seguidos es muy repetitivo (y siento que el sonido es distinto entre ellos), podrías probar d d d, d d k, d k k (o d d k también el último) Aplicado tu sugerencia
  5. 01:19:995 (265,266) - no sé si sean buenos los dos finishers, suenan muy fuerte creo :c (tienen casi el mismo tono que 01:22:662 (273,274) - ) Para enfatizar la batería
  6. 01:40:495 - no sé si es muy difícil el patrón acá, pero es como el único que tiene tanta seguidilla de notas a través de todo el kiai (y la canción), sólo comento :P Quité un triplet ahí
  7. 01:57:662 - podrías intentar repetir la sección de notas en 02:00:329 - que calzan re bien
Sobre la Oni y la Inner te diré in game cuando las revise ^^, están bien hechas y sólo son un par de puntos (estoy algo cansado ahora la verdad xD). Me gusta harto la canción así que suerte! Ojalá te sirva! Me ha servido bastante, gracias!
Thanks for mod!
Beatmap updated~
Melanie
Hola~ espero esto ayude ;w;

[Futsuu]

00:48:329 (89) - añade K
00:53:662 (102) - D
01:41:662 (228) - K, sonido fuerte~
01:54:995 - D ?

[Muzukashii]
00:45:329 - añade k, solo es una sugerencia
00:53:662 (171) - cambia a D
01:41:662 (350) - K, esta parte se escucha fuerte
01:52:329 (399) - K ?

lindo mapa, me encantó, suerte~ :)
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Melanie wrote:

Hola~ espero esto ayude ;w;

[Futsuu]

00:48:329 (89) - añade K Lo cambié a D, K suena muy fuerte a mi parecer
00:53:662 (102) - D No estoy seguro, lo agregaré luego
01:41:662 (228) - K, sonido fuerte~ Agregado
01:54:995 - D ? Agregado

[Muzukashii]
00:45:329 - añade k, solo es una sugerencia Dejo el break para que se note el cambio a esto 00:45:662 -
00:53:662 (171) - cambia a D Agregado
01:41:662 (350) - K, esta parte se escucha fuerte Lo cambié a D por el mismo motivo que te dije en Futsuu
01:52:329 (399) - K ? D

lindo mapa, me encantó, suerte~ :) Gracias~
Un consejo, trata de aclarar sobre el "por qué" de hacer tal cambio. Te lo digo ya que algunos mappers no aplican los cambios si no les aclaras el por qué.
Thanks for mod!
Beatmap updated~
Kith190
Hi NM as asked here
General
The whole mapset seems to me already good, so what I'm gonna do with this mod is only change some notes that imo could fit better
Kantan
00:41:495 - change to k k k or d k k (?)
00:45:662 (46,47) - control + g
00:55:329 (60) - change to k (?) cause the tone is the same as 00:54:995 - , thing that instead you noticed here 00:56:329 (61,62) - placing the same note
01:00:329 (67,68) - conrol + g (not sure)
01:09:995 - move to 01:10:162 - (as you did in futsuu)
01:29:995 - move to 01:30:162 -
01:32:329 - i think that d would be better, not for the music but to make """more fluid the ascension""" here 01:30:995 (113,114,115,116,117,118) -
Futsuu
00:35:662 - what about moving here 00:35:829 - and changing to d?
00:42:495 - this is not the kantan so you can put a D here
00:52:162 (98,99) - control + g (not sure)
01:18:329 - change to k (?)
Muzukashii
00:20:995 - change to d (?) it would make the sound mor fluid imo
00:34:995 (91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98) - change from: k d k k k k d d to k d d k k d k d or k d d k k d d d
00:36:829 (100,101) - control + g (not sure)
00:53:329 - change to k
01:50:995 - change to k
02:00:329 - same thing as 00:34:995 (91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98) -
02:08:162 - change to k (?)
Oni
00:16:162 - maybe change to k
00:53:329 (211,212,213) - change to kkd would make it more fluid to play but it is quite good even like this
02:08:162 - change to k like muzu
nice diff ;D
Inner Oni
00:26:745 - I know why you did put a d here but I think that k would give a better touch-feeling
00:37:162 - change to k ( no sure cause it would change the style of the map and that is not what I am here for )
00:38:829 (185,186) - and 00:40:162 (193,194) - imo should be the same thing, so both dd or kd are ok
00:48:162 - change to k
here 01:15:329 (419,420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432) - thinking about the right hand (if you are a kddk player) 01:16:662 (426,427,428) - this one is not coherent so i suggest k d d
01:22:162 - ^
really liked the song, good luck for ranking ;D
Ak1o
Hi! Here from mod queue!


[Kantan]

I didn't find that much for this diff, since I am not very experienced here myself and it looks mostly finished to me. There are still a few things I'd like to mention:
  1. 00:32:329 - 00:53:662 - Maybe it's just me, but I believe the density on some parts here varies too much. For example 00:32:329 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - is followed by a fairly (imo) uncomfortable empty bar, since you used 1/2 in those patterns before this feels kind of mismatched. I can't say how to improve this myself tho.
  2. 00:47:329 (49) - I see you're following the strings here, but this note seems out of place to me. It also creates the same issue I stated above, but removing this note should fix it. Maybe this could be the same solution for aforementioned problem.
  3. 01:40:995 - Since this is Kiai, maybe putting a note or two here wouldn't hurt too much I believe. Although I am very unsure, since the overall density on the Kiai is fine now as it is.
By adding a few notes you could buff this diff a bit like Volta mentioned before (if this is still the case), otherwise I think this should be good to go.


[Futsuu]

Also nothing much going on here, patterning and overall density looks good to me.

  1. 00:23:995 - 00:55:995 - 01:01:329 - 01:06:662 - Maybe it isn't necessary to add a note in the first timestamp, since that part is calmer than the other one. Consider putting a note (d) here at the other timestamps, as it would buff this diff at least a little.
  2. 01:14:495 (152) - d sounds better imo.

[Muzukashii]

Changed some parts where I believe it would sound better, also consistency.

  1. 00:23:662 (41) - Should be a k to be a bit more consistent with the other parts.
  2. 00:32:329 - 00:37:662 - Could be restructured, I dislike 00:35:662 (95) - this note in general; maybe move it 1/2 forward so it lines up with the strings?
  3. 00:48:829 (150) - Move to 00:48:995 - , I don't see much of a reason putting this pattern here.
  4. 01:32:329 (304,305,306,307,308,309) - I'd change this to kdk
    kkk to get a more intense build-up.
  5. 01:49:412 (383) - Move this to 01:49:579 - to match the snare at that part.
  6. 02:00:995 (440) - Same story as 00:32:329 - 00:37:662 - here.
  7. 02:03:495 (3) - Also move to 02:03:662 -. To avoid repetetiveness maybe change to d; it would also match 00:48:995 - then.

[Oni]

Again, most points are about better sound and consistency.

  1. 00:21:662 (52) - Change to d to match previous pattern, also to emphasize the k on the following upbeats.
  2. 01:06:829 (281,282) - Ctrl+g to match consistency.
  3. 01:18:662 (18,20) - Ctrl+g, there is no reason to change that pattern (or at least in this way).
  4. 01:48:412 (187) - Move to 01:48:579 - and change to d, works out even better if you move 01:48:995 (190) - to 01:48:829 -. That lines up with the upcoming patterns to give a pause at the 3rd upbeat.

[Inner Oni]

I didn't find anything to be out of place here, just one point that would fit better imo.

  1. 01:18:662 (436,438) - Same as in Oni. If you want to add more variety, I'd ctrl+g this and turn 01:18:829 (437) - to k. You could apply this on Oni as well (if you like it)

Hope I could be of help! And good luck!
Topic Starter
gaston_2199
Sorry for delay :o

Kith190 wrote:

Hi NM as asked here
General
The whole mapset seems to me already good, so what I'm gonna do with this mod is only change some notes that imo could fit better
Kantan
00:41:495 - change to k k k or d k k (?) The piano tone is lower here, keep
00:45:662 (46,47) - control + g I changed this to dd by lower tone (and consistency with futsuu)
00:55:329 (60) - change to k (?) cause the tone is the same as 00:54:995 - , thing that instead you noticed here 00:56:329 (61,62) - placing the same note 00:53:662 - This section is the same than 00:21:662 -
01:00:329 (67,68) - conrol + g (not sure) Following the piano and snare 01:00:662 (68) -
01:09:995 - move to 01:10:162 - (as you did in futsuu) How? I don't understand
01:29:995 - move to 01:30:162 - I try avoid use much 1/2 snap
01:32:329 - i think that d would be better, not for the music but to make """more fluid the ascension""" here 01:30:995 (113,114,115,116,117,118) - Changed
Futsuu
00:35:662 - what about moving here 00:35:829 - and changing to d? Look good
00:42:495 - this is not the kantan so you can put a D here I don't listen the same sound like 00:42:162 -
00:52:162 (98,99) - control + g (not sure) Yeah, also I change this 00:51:329 (95,96) -
01:18:329 - change to k (?) Drum tone
Muzukashii
00:20:995 - change to d (?) it would make the sound mor fluid imo I don't use triplets with two different colours in a Muzukashii. For make this the mapset have already Oni
00:34:995 (91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98) - change from: k d k k k k d d to k d d k k d k d or k d d k k d d d Changed to kdkkd dkd
00:36:829 (100,101) - control + g (not sure) Changed the pattern to kdddk by piano tone
00:53:329 - change to k Nope, drum tone
01:50:995 - change to k This has already kat
02:00:329 - same thing as 00:34:995 (91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98) - Same
02:08:162 - change to k (?) Drum tone
Oni
00:16:162 - maybe change to k Hmmm, for now keep
00:53:329 (211,212,213) - change to kkd would make it more fluid to play but it is quite good even like this I keep this by drum tone
02:08:162 - change to k like muzu Same as Muzukashii
nice diff ;D
Inner Oni
00:26:745 - I know why you did put a d here but I think that k would give a better touch-feeling Idk, but looks good
00:37:162 - change to k ( no sure cause it would change the style of the map and that is not what I am here for ) I follow the piano and drum tone
00:38:829 (185,186) - and 00:40:162 (193,194) - imo should be the same thing, so both dd or kd are ok dd
00:48:162 - change to k Changed
here 01:15:329 (419,420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432) - thinking about the right hand (if you are a kddk player) 01:16:662 (426,427,428) - this one is not coherent so i suggest k d d I try vary here, I don't like this has the same as 01:15:329 (419,420,421) -
01:22:162 - ^
really liked the song, good luck for ranking ;D Thanks :D

Ak1o wrote:

Hi! Here from mod queue!


[Kantan]

I didn't find that much for this diff, since I am not very experienced here myself and it looks mostly finished to me. There are still a few things I'd like to mention:
  1. 00:32:329 - 00:53:662 - Maybe it's just me, but I believe the density on some parts here varies too much. For example 00:32:329 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - is followed by a fairly (imo) uncomfortable empty bar, since you used 1/2 in those patterns before this feels kind of mismatched. I can't say how to improve this myself tho. I've done this to have a better spread with Futsuu. I think change some things here
  2. 00:47:329 (49) - I see you're following the strings here, but this note seems out of place to me. It also creates the same issue I stated above, but removing this note should fix it. Maybe this could be the same solution for aforementioned problem. Like I said avobe, to a better spread with futsuu. Maybe I change some things
  3. 01:40:995 - Since this is Kiai, maybe putting a note or two here wouldn't hurt too much I believe. Although I am very unsure, since the overall density on the Kiai is fine now as it is. I don't add the notes because I want keep the break
By adding a few notes you could buff this diff a bit like Volta mentioned before (if this is still the case), otherwise I think this should be good to go.


[Futsuu]

Also nothing much going on here, patterning and overall density looks good to me.

  1. 00:23:995 - 00:55:995 - 01:01:329 - 01:06:662 - Maybe it isn't necessary to add a note in the first timestamp, since that part is calmer than the other one. Consider putting a note (d) here at the other timestamps, as it would buff this diff at least a little. I think you don't update the map...? I removed these notes
  2. 01:14:495 (152) - d sounds better imo. Changed

[Muzukashii]

Changed some parts where I believe it would sound better, also consistency.

  1. 00:23:662 (41) - Should be a k to be a bit more consistent with the other parts. I do not think so, the other parts also have ddk (I speak of 00:12:996 (6,7,8) - 00:18:329 (23,24,25) - )
  2. 00:32:329 - 00:37:662 - Could be restructured, I dislike 00:35:662 (95) - this note in general; maybe move it 1/2 forward so it lines up with the strings? Yeah, look fine
  3. 00:48:829 (150) - Move to 00:48:995 - , I don't see much of a reason putting this pattern here. Moved
  4. 01:32:329 (304,305,306,307,308,309) - I'd change this to kdk
    kkk to get a more intense build-up. Applied
  5. 01:49:412 (383) - Move this to 01:49:579 - to match the snare at that part. Whoops, I don't make triplets with two different colours in a Muzukashii
  6. 02:00:995 (440) - Same story as 00:32:329 - 00:37:662 - here. Same
  7. 02:03:495 (3) - Also move to 02:03:662 -. To avoid repetetiveness maybe change to d; it would also match 00:48:995 - then. Moved

[Oni]

Again, most points are about better sound and consistency.

  1. 00:21:662 (52) - Change to d to match previous pattern, also to emphasize the k on the following upbeats. I have put a kat here for the high tone you have and the change of section
  2. 01:06:829 (281,282) - Ctrl+g to match consistency. My bad, fixed
  3. 01:18:662 (18,20) - Ctrl+g, there is no reason to change that pattern (or at least in this way). Fixed
  4. 01:48:412 (187) - Move to 01:48:579 - and change to d, works out even better if you move 01:48:995 (190) - to 01:48:829 -. That lines up with the upcoming patterns to give a pause at the 3rd upbeat. I moved 01:48:412 (188) - to 01:48:245 - and 01:48:995 (191) - like you said. I think is better

[Inner Oni]

I didn't find anything to be out of place here, just one point that would fit better imo.

  1. 01:18:662 (436,438) - Same as in Oni. If you want to add more variety, I'd ctrl+g this and turn 01:18:829 (437) - to k. You could apply this on Oni as well (if you like it) I like this, applied

Hope I could be of help! And good luck! You helped me a lot! Thanks :D
Thanks for mod!
Beatmap updated~
IControl
Hey m4m req

Kantan
00:10:996 (1) - Change to finisher. this first note sounds very strong and loud after coming out of the quite intro
00:16:329 (6) - this could also be a finisher
00:36:329 (32) - move to 00:36:995 - add k 00:36:662 - following the strong strings sound here
00:37:662 (33) - sounds strong enough to be a finisher
00:42:995 (43) - ^
00:47:662 (50) - move to 00:47:995 - to follow the drums here
00:48:329 (51) - finisher
01:52:329 (146) - ^
01:54:995 (151) - ^

Futsuu
00:31:329 (47,48) - move to 00:31:162 - 00:31:662 (49) - remove this note. This follows the drum better imo

Muzukashii
01:23:995 (4) - change to k to match this pattern structure 01:20:662 (264,265,266,267) -
01:24:662 (6) - this could be d to follow the previous pattern structure. the k at the end of the triple pattern, because of the strong vocal note
01:41:495 (86,87) - make this a triple kkk pattern? fits the drums
01:42:829 (94) - finisher
01:46:329 (107,108) - ^s
01:49:495 (120,121) - this could be kkk
01:50:912 (128,129) - remove these I dont hear any durms here
01:51:162 (128) - remove this too. Mapping to the vocals and drums here doesn't sound so good imo. I would just map to the vocals
some of patterns might be a little to long at the kai section

Oni
01:52:079 - add a note here. Nice place for a stream
01:52:495 (210) - this could be removed to give oni players a bit of a break
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

IControl wrote:

Hey m4m req

Kantan
00:10:996 (1) - Change to finisher. this first note sounds very strong and loud after coming out of the quite intro In my opinon,
this don't hears so stronger, is very calm as to add finisher

00:16:329 (6) - this could also be a finisher Same ^
00:36:329 (32) - move to 00:36:995 - add k 00:36:662 - following the strong strings sound here I don't like much this. I applied other pattern to follow this
00:37:662 (33) - sounds strong enough to be a finisher The sound is very stronger, I follow the violin sound here. No drum
00:42:995 (43) - ^ Added
00:47:662 (50) - move to 00:47:995 - to follow the drums here Don't like much the pattern here
00:48:329 (51) - finisher Added
01:52:329 (146) - ^ Very stronger, same as 00:37:662 (33) -
01:54:995 (151) - ^ Hmmm, for not now

Futsuu
00:31:329 (47,48) - move to 00:31:162 - 00:31:662 (49) - remove this note. This follows the drum better imo It's fine, also I follow the vocal added note on 00:31:662 (49) -

Muzukashii
01:23:995 (4) - change to k to match this pattern structure 01:20:662 (264,265,266,267) - Ok
01:24:662 (6) - this could be d to follow the previous pattern structure. the k at the end of the triple pattern, because of the strong vocal note Applied
01:41:495 (86,87) - make this a triple kkk pattern? fits the drums I follow the vocal
01:42:829 (94) - finisher Added
01:46:329 (107,108) - ^s I don't add finisher to this 01:46:662 (107) - because I want make more intense 01:46:995 (108) -
01:49:495 (120,121) - this could be kkk I do not like to use triples before a break
01:50:912 (128,129) - remove these I dont hear any durms here vocal
01:51:162 (128) - remove this too. Mapping to the vocals and drums here doesn't sound so good imo. I would just map to the vocals
some of patterns might be a little to long at the kai section I do not think so, combining drum with vocal can look pretty good in some cases imo

Oni
01:52:079 - add a note here. Nice place for a stream I feels a bit overmaped, for now I keep
01:52:495 (210) - this could be removed to give oni players a bit of a break Keep for reason as above
Thanks for mod!
Sorry if my answers are bad. I go to sleep :o
Beatmap updated~
toara_fict
Sorry late ;__;



Taiko Mod request from My Queue.


[ General]
  1. Okay.
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[ Kantan]
  1. none.
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[ Futsuu]
  1. SliderMultiplier:1.40000000596046 -> change 1.4 :3
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[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:36:162 (97) - 02:01:495 (178) - delete ? ( I think can delete it. )

  2. 00:36:662 (99,100,101,102,103) - change kdkdk ? ( some as 02:01:995 (180,181,182,183,1) - ) or kdkkd ( follow back melody. )
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[ Oni]
  1. 01:14:995 (1) - ~ 01:25:662 (53) - It is a little boring because there are many similar patterns.

  2. others : None in particular. nice :3
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[ Inner Oni]
  1. funny diff :3
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All diff :
  1. 01:19:995 - remove finish. ( some as 01:25:329 - )

  2. 02:05:662 - add finish or change kat ? ( follow back sounds. )

Nice mapset :3
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

toara_fict wrote:

Sorry late ;__; np :D



Taiko Mod request from My Queue.


[ General]
  1. Okay.
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[ Kantan]
  1. none.
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[ Futsuu]
  1. SliderMultiplier:1.40000000596046 -> change 1.4 :3 Fixed lol

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[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:36:162 (97) - 02:01:495 (178) - delete ? ( I think can delete it. ) Yeah, it's fine

  2. 00:36:662 (99,100,101,102,103) - change kdkdk ? ( some as 02:01:995 (180,181,182,183,1) - ) or kdkkd ( follow back melody. ) Changed to kdkdk
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[ Oni]
  1. 01:14:995 (1) - ~ 01:25:662 (53) - It is a little boring because there are many similar patterns. I changed it a bit

  2. others : None in particular. nice :3 ty~
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[ Inner Oni]
  1. funny diff :3
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All diff :
  1. 01:19:995 - remove finish. ( some as 01:25:329 - ) Removed

  2. 02:05:662 - add finish or change kat ? ( follow back sounds. ) You're right, the sound is some strong. For now I test it, maybe I'll add or change

Nice mapset :3 Thanks :D
Thanks for mod!
Beatmap updated~
-Sh1n1-
just passing by~~
Que paso con el ultimo spin en la Futsuu? No tenia que acabar en 02:14:162 - como el resto de tus diffs?
Mucha suerte con el set~~
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

-Sh1n1- wrote:

just passing by~~
Que paso con el ultimo spin en la Futsuu? No tenia que acabar en 02:14:162 - como el resto de tus diffs?
Mucha suerte con el set~~
Se me había olvidado. Muchas gracias por el apoyo :D
Jonarwhal
hello m4m, sorry it's late. Remember to only apply what seems good to you.

[General]
  1. 02:13:995 - futsuu's spinner is shorter than the other spinners here
  2. Your spread it unbalanced: Muzu<<<<Oni<Inner Oni. Deleting Oni would be beneficial for the spread, because the Inner Oni being an Oni would make the gaps more even, but, if you don't want to do this, I understand. It only means you will have to further reduce the difficulty in your Muzukashii, and slightly reduce the dificulty in your Oni. Then maybe, slightly increase the difficulty in your Inner Oni.
[Muzu]
  1. 00:15:329 (13,14,15,16,17,18) - this is a relaxed part in comparison to the following, and it should be mapped as such, displaying less objects. But instead, it's mapped with 1/4 patterns. Remember that muzukashii should generally contain some 1/4, not throughout the map. I would wait until the intensity relatively increases, 00:32:329 - here, when there are more instruments and such, before using 1/4 patterns.
  2. Also, remember that you can emphasize certain things be reducing the things afterwards. For example, 00:20:829 - / 00:21:162 - here, you don't have to follow every detail of the drum. There are more options, for example, this option works for the drums and is still harder from futsuu, and here is a more lyric-oriented option that is also still harder than futsuu.
  3. Also, for reducing 1/2, consider turning triplets such as 00:12:996 (6,7,8) - these into doublets with the most important two, those being the latter two
  4. 00:30:329 (68) - & 00:31:079 (71) - can be removed for reasons above
  5. 00:31:662 (76) - you can remove this because you're following the drums and there isn't one here
  6. 00:33:829 (82) - optional remove to emph 00:33:662 (81) - this
  7. 00:32:329 - / 00:53:662 - although the density should remain mostly consistent throughout this section, you have lengthy 1/2 patterns towards the beginning that dye out quickly. This may be in line with the music, but it's not in line with the density, and it's quite a jump from the futsuu anyway.
    With all this in mind, please reduce your usage of longer 1/2 patterns in this section.
  8. 00:49:329 (154) - k might be better based on the drum there, perhaps 00:49:329 (154,155) - ctrl+g to prevent a duplicate.
Oni I won't really mod because you might be deleting it.

[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:11:996 - You missed a lyric / hat here, consider marking it with a d or k, either is fine really.
  2. 00:14:662 - ^, 00:17:329 - ^, This is optional because the spread is ok, without these changes.
  3. 00:42:329 (196,197,198,199) - kkdd seems to make more sense here, I don't really see the reason for kddd
  4. 01:36:329 - I think the first kiai could be denser, at least as dense as the part leading up to it, it's less dense than the following kiai
  5. not too bad I guess?
sorry this took so long ;w;
best of luck >w</~
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Jonawaga wrote:

hello m4m, sorry it's late. Remember to only apply what seems good to you.

[General]
  1. 02:13:995 - futsuu's spinner is shorter than the other spinners here I fixed this before ^
  2. Your spread it unbalanced: Muzu<<<<Oni<Inner Oni. Deleting Oni would be beneficial for the spread, because the Inner Oni being an Oni would make the gaps more even, but, if you don't want to do this, I understand. It only means you will have to further reduce the difficulty in your Muzukashii, and slightly reduce the dificulty in your Oni. Then maybe, slightly increase the difficulty in your Inner Oni. The truth was I was afraid of this since I've been told before and I can not improve it (that's why I'm mapping only marathons). But I want rank it full spread... Ok, I'll nerf muzu and Oni. I think is possible rank it full spread
[Muzu]
  1. 00:15:329 (13,14,15,16,17,18) - this is a relaxed part in comparison to the following, and it should be mapped as such, displaying less objects. But instead, it's mapped with 1/4 patterns. Remember that muzukashii should generally contain some 1/4, not throughout the map. I would wait until the intensity relatively increases, 00:32:329 - here, when there are more instruments and such, before using 1/4 patterns. Well, I delete all 1/4 patterns here, except 00:26:162 (48,49,50) - because I think the drums are noticeable. I delete a lot notes to make too easy this part
  2. Also, remember that you can emphasize certain things be reducing the things afterwards. For example, 00:20:829 - / 00:21:162 - here, you don't have to follow every detail of the drum. There are more options, for example, this option works for the drums and is still harder from futsuu, and here is a more lyric-oriented option that is also still harder than futsuu. I applied some relationed with 00:57:662 -
  3. Also, for reducing 1/2, consider turning triplets such as 00:12:996 (6,7,8) - these into doublets with the most important two, those being the latter two I applied this in Oni
  4. 00:30:329 (68) - & 00:31:079 (71) - can be removed for reasons above Yeah, removed
  5. 00:31:662 (76) - you can remove this because you're following the drums and there isn't one here I thought a lot about this and I decide delete
  6. 00:33:829 (82) - optional remove to emph 00:33:662 (81) - this Removed
  7. 00:32:329 - / 00:53:662 - although the density should remain mostly consistent throughout this section, you have lengthy 1/2 patterns towards the beginning that dye out quickly. This may be in line with the music, but it's not in line with the density, and it's quite a jump from the futsuu anyway.
    With all this in mind, please reduce your usage of longer 1/2 patterns in this section. I deleleted a lot notes here and emphasizes some 1/2
  8. 00:49:329 (154) - k might be better based on the drum there, perhaps 00:49:329 (154,155) - ctrl+g to prevent a duplicate. Good, fixed
Oni I won't really mod because you might be deleting it. I'll nerf it

[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:11:996 - You missed a lyric / hat here, consider marking it with a d or k, either is fine really. This was intentional, I did it because it was the beginning of the song and after adding in this section 00:21:995 - . But to keep the consistency I added the notes
  2. 00:14:662 - ^, 00:17:329 - ^, This is optional because the spread is ok, without these changes. Added
  3. 00:42:329 (196,197,198,199) - kkdd seems to make more sense here, I don't really see the reason for kddd Fixed
  4. 01:36:329 - I think the first kiai could be denser, at least as dense as the part leading up to it, it's less dense than the following kiai I added some notes in the breaks 01:41:829 - 01:42:995 -
  5. not too bad I guess? I hope :/
sorry this took so long ;w; np, you helped me a lot :D
best of luck >w</~ Thanks for mod <3 You have opened my eyes with this mod on the subject of full spread mapset, I thank you so much!
I'll take few days to change some things. Modders still are welcome!
Beatmap updated~
Prophecy
[Kantan]
> No issue found.
> Very solid difficulty, Provide enough break for player. Good Job!

[Futsuu]
> 00:37:662 (59,61) - same pitch (kat)
> 01:34:162 (186) - Offbeat? I can't hear a heavy sound here, kat is enough
> 01:56:495 (13) - I suggest you to remove this and add a don at 01:56:995 instead because it can emphasize the finish of kiai (01:57:662 (14) - )

> Good.

[Muzukashii]
> 00:35:495 - add a kat here as you mapped 00:33:495 (73) - too
> 00:37:995 (91) - remove, no sound there
> 00:38:495 (92) - move to 00:38:329, follow the background music
> 01:34:162 (276) - same as Futsuu

> OK.

[Oni]
> 01:41:579 (130) - add a don, better rhythm
> 01:48:495 (164,165) -same as 01:48:162 (161,162,163) it should be ddk/ddk

> Fine :3
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Prophecy wrote:

[Kantan]
> No issue found.
> Very solid difficulty, Provide enough break for player. Good Job! Thanks~

[Futsuu]
> 00:37:662 (59,61) - same pitch (kat) I listen this 00:37:662 (59) - more low than 00:38:329 (61) -
> 01:34:162 (186) - Offbeat? I can't hear a heavy sound here, kat is enough I changed these finisher to K D K
> 01:56:495 (13) - I suggest you to remove this and add a don at 01:56:995 instead because it can emphasize the finish of kiai (01:57:662 (14) - ) I applied the same pattern than 01:44:329 -

> Good.

[Muzukashii]
> 00:35:495 - add a kat here as you mapped 00:33:495 (73) - too Added
> 00:37:995 (91) - remove, no sound there I listen a snare here
> 00:38:495 (92) - move to 00:38:329, follow the background music I changed the patterns here
> 01:34:162 (276) - same as Futsuu Same here I changed to K D K

> OK.

[Oni]
> 01:41:579 (130) - add a don, better rhythm Added
> 01:48:495 (164,165) -same as 01:48:162 (161,162,163) it should be ddk/ddk I follow the vocal and snare

> Fine :3
Thanks for mod!
Rossi
Hi~! ^^

From Team Frontline Modding Queue

Little modding :

[Kantan]
Looking good :)



[Futsuu]
01:12:329 (138) - remove finisher? no bass sound



[Muzukashii]
00:55:662 (154) - delete? no sound
01:04:329 (183) - remove finisher


[Oni]
01:23:495 (39) - change to k



[Inner Oni]
Looking good :)


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I not find many problems. This already good < or I too noob to find it? lol xD >

I like this song, finally taiko ver was created xD Hope this get ranked~!
Good luck~! :)
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Franklin_DeJavu wrote:

Hi~! ^^

From Team Frontline Modding Queue

Little modding :

[Kantan]
Looking good :)



[Futsuu]
01:12:329 (138) - remove finisher? no bass sound I listen a finisher here. Also to emphasizes 01:12:995 -



[Muzukashii]
00:55:662 (154) - delete? no sound A listen a clarely drum kick
01:04:329 (183) - remove finisher I listen a clarely finisher


[Oni]
01:23:495 (39) - change to k Following the drum kick



[Inner Oni]
Looking good :)


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I not find many problems. This already good < or I too noob to find it? lol xD > Lol, thanks anyways for the mod ♥

I like this song, finally taiko ver was created xD Hope this get ranked~! Also I hope :D
Good luck~! :)
Thanks for mod!
Beatmap updated~
Aisha
Yaa acá vamos con el Oni y el Inner xD
El spread como te dije está re bueno, así que acá sólo comentaré esos, después reviso todo de nuevo :')

No kds

02:08:495 - agrega unas greenline para seguir mejor el volumen de la canción, se ve como aumenta alrededor de 02:12:329 - y terminar con algo más bajo en 02:14:162 - sería bueno, dejaré a tu criterio y después lanzo mi opinión

[Oni]
  1. 00:12:995 (9,10,11) - siento que los triples acá son muy overmappeados, como que viene siempre de una parte bién lenta y repentinamente suena un triple un poco fuerte, quizás en 00:13:246 - podría fillear mejor
  2. 00:18:412 - ^
    En realidad lo que siento es que la diferencia entre los dobles 1/2 y ese patrón un poco largo es como muy distinto y el ritmo es 'similar'
  3. 00:14:662 - quizás añadir una nota? si bien es Oni el vocal creo que podría ser seguido
  4. 00:19:995 - ^ tal vez acá igual
  5. 00:27:329 (77,78,79,80) - creo que fillea mejor d K k D, ya que si comparas el tono de 00:27:495 (78) - con 00:27:995 (80) - es más alto y hace un buen ritmo descendente
  6. 00:28:662 - podrías mappear ese sonido maybe
  7. 00:32:329 - I like it
  8. 00:41:245 - podrías agregar un don acá, hace un buen énfasis al break que viene después :'). Algo similar a 00:47:495 (38,39,40,41,42) -
  9. No soy fan de poner D d o K k, pero siento que un 00:42:329 (15,16) - ctrl+g en esos podría venir bien para seguir el piano y cómo sube su melodía
  10. 01:11:495 (152,153) - su ctrl+g en esos podría venir bien, la melodía es distinta a los d K anteriores
  11. 01:16:829 (9,10) - ^ ctrl+g también prueba :p, 01:24:662 (42,43,44) - igual que este sonaría bien
  12. 01:30:829 - quizás agregar k? le da un buen énfasis al siguiente D y sigue bien el vocal
  13. El kiai es bastante bueno en cuanto a consistencia y estructura, quizás 01:41:495 (130,131,132) - ddk para seguir el vocal, 01:42:662 (138,139) - ctrl+g por la misma razón (lo mismo que en 01:49:995 (175,176) - )
  14. 02:07:912 (274) - :arrow: 02:08:079 - . Quizás esta es un poco más opcional en el sentido que el drum se extiende de 02:07:829 - 02:08:162 - , pero creo que un doble patrón monocolor es medio extraño (puedo entender por el hecho que es el final :p)
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:27:329 (106,107,108,109) - mismo comentario que en la Oni
  2. 00:29:495 - agregar k quizás (overmappear xD)? Enfatiza bien el siguiente D y al ser Inner esa acción cae bien :')
  3. 00:53:662 - 00:57:495 - quizás uno o dos triples en esa parte (a pesar que sea la lenta) podría caer bien para una Inner, ya que en 00:57:495 - caen muchos seguidos de golpe y se siente extraño
  4. 00:58:995 - 01:02:829 - ^
  5. 01:21:162 - agrega nota para el vocal, si bien siento que tu intención era mappear el vocal pero no siguiendo el 100% siento que es más fuerte que otros sonidos
  6. 01:28:162 (469,470,471) - ddk va mejor para el vocal imo
  7. 01:30:829 - me gusta como suena un kat acá, le hace buena conexión y sigue bien el vocal
  8. Considerando que de 01:30:995 - viene con 0,9x SV siento que llegar a 1,2x en un lapso de 5 segs (01:35:995 - ) es muy... fuerte (especialmente cuando lo probé con hr). Terminar con 1,1x es suficiente imo
  9. 01:41:329 (565,566,567,568,569) - kkddk / kdddk creo que van mejor, especialmente en el sentido de terminar con kat. Similar a 01:36:329 (528) - y 01:52:329 (648) -. Lo del D en 01:46:995 (607) - lo puedo entender pq parte de más abajo
  10. 02:07:495 (32,33,34,35,36,37) - no me gusta como suenan estos juntos, prueba kkd dkd quizás mejor
Me avisas cuando aplique el mod, espero que te haya ayudado :3
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

xfraczynho wrote:

Yaa acá vamos con el Oni y el Inner xD
El spread como te dije está re bueno, así que acá sólo comentaré esos, después reviso todo de nuevo :')

No kds

02:08:495 - agrega unas greenline para seguir mejor el volumen de la canción, se ve como aumenta alrededor de 02:12:329 - y terminar con algo más bajo en 02:14:162 - sería bueno, dejaré a tu criterio y después lanzo mi opinión No creo que sea necesario, ya que como es el final de la canción, muchos hacen el spinner demasiado rápido y no le da importancia el volumen

[Oni]
  1. 00:12:995 (9,10,11) - siento que los triples acá son muy overmappeados, como que viene siempre de una parte bién lenta y repentinamente suena un triple un poco fuerte, quizás en 00:13:246 - podría fillear mejor
  2. 00:18:412 - ^
    En realidad lo que siento es que la diferencia entre los dobles 1/2 y ese patrón un poco largo es como muy distinto y el ritmo es 'similar' Lo mantengo para tener una mejor brecha con Inner Oni, además es muy notorio el drum ahí
  3. 00:14:662 - quizás añadir una nota? si bien es Oni el vocal creo que podría ser seguido Claro, agregado
  4. 00:19:995 - ^ tal vez acá igual Ok
  5. 00:27:329 (77,78,79,80) - creo que fillea mejor d K k D, ya que si comparas el tono de 00:27:495 (78) - con 00:27:995 (80) - es más alto y hace un buen ritmo descendente Está bien como es a mi parecer. Sigue el ritmo descendente y sigue el drum
  6. 00:28:662 - podrías mappear ese sonido maybe Tuve varias dudas en si mapear esto o no, pero pienso que corta el sonido de 00:28:495 (84) -
  7. 00:32:329 - I like it thanks (? xD
  8. 00:41:245 - podrías agregar un don acá, hace un buen énfasis al break que viene después :'). Algo similar a 00:47:495 (38,39,40,41,42) - Hmm, no me convence del todo. Lo siento muy overmapeado, ahí se escucha mucho el drum 1/2
  9. No soy fan de poner D d o K k, pero siento que un 00:42:329 (15,16) - ctrl+g en esos podría venir bien para seguir el piano y cómo sube su melodía Me he puesto audifonos y escucho un crash cymbal ahí, cambié el patrón
  10. 01:11:495 (152,153) - su ctrl+g en esos podría venir bien, la melodía es distinta a los d K anteriores Me sigue pareciendo igual, trato de seguir el snare. Cambié el patrón de esa parte dejando un break en 01:29:662 (64) - para enfatizar la voz
  11. 01:16:829 (9,10) - ^ ctrl+g también prueba :p, 01:24:662 (42,43,44) - igual que este sonaría bien Esta me gusta, cambiado
  12. 01:30:829 - quizás agregar k? le da un buen énfasis al siguiente D y sigue bien el vocal Claro, agregado
  13. El kiai es bastante bueno en cuanto a consistencia y estructura, quizás 01:41:495 (130,131,132) - ddk para seguir el vocal, 01:42:662 (138,139) - ctrl+g por la misma razón (lo mismo que en 01:49:995 (175,176) - ) Creo que los patrones actuales están bien ya que para mi sigue la vocal y el instrumental
  14. 02:07:912 (274) - :arrow: 02:08:079 - . Quizás esta es un poco más opcional en el sentido que el drum se extiende de 02:07:829 - 02:08:162 - , pero creo que un doble patrón monocolor es medio extraño (puedo entender por el hecho que es el final :p) Cambié el útlimo ddd a ddk
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:27:329 (106,107,108,109) - mismo comentario que en la Oni Lo mismo ^
  2. 00:29:495 - agregar k quizás (overmappear xD)? Enfatiza bien el siguiente D y al ser Inner esa acción cae bien :') Pienso que cae mejor si agrego d
  3. 00:53:662 - 00:57:495 - quizás uno o dos triples en esa parte (a pesar que sea la lenta) podría caer bien para una Inner, ya que en 00:57:495 - caen muchos seguidos de golpe y se siente extraño Los agregué en 00:54:162 - y similares
  4. 00:58:995 - 01:02:829 - ^ Agregados
  5. 01:21:162 - agrega nota para el vocal, si bien siento que tu intención era mappear el vocal pero no siguiendo el 100% siento que es más fuerte que otros sonidos Pierde consistencia con 01:15:329 (404,405,406) -, no lo agregaré
  6. 01:28:162 (469,470,471) - ddk va mejor para el vocal imo El tono de la vocal es alto en 01:28:162 (473) - , lo dejaré como está
  7. 01:30:829 - me gusta como suena un kat acá, le hace buena conexión y sigue bien el vocal Agregado
  8. Considerando que de 01:30:995 - viene con 0,9x SV siento que llegar a 1,2x en un lapso de 5 segs (01:35:995 - ) es muy... fuerte (especialmente cuando lo probé con hr). Terminar con 1,1x es suficiente imo No lo veo tan dificil, los patrones son simples y no son muy complicados de leer. Lo mantendré por ahora
  9. 01:41:329 (565,566,567,568,569) - kkddk / kdddk creo que van mejor, especialmente en el sentido de terminar con kat. Similar a 01:36:329 (528) - y 01:52:329 (648) -. Lo del D en 01:46:995 (607) - lo puedo entender pq parte de más abajo El patrón actual sigue mejor la vocal y el snare.
    Sobre lo último, lo he cambiado a K por el snare y la voz ya que suenan demasiado fuerte (También lo hice en Oni)
  10. 02:07:495 (32,33,34,35,36,37) - no me gusta como suenan estos juntos, prueba kkd dkd quizás mejor Los cambié a kdk ddk
Me avisas cuando aplique el mod, espero que te haya ayudado :3 Sorry si me demoré un poco, ando un poco distraido xD. Gracias por el mod :D
Thanks for mod!
Beatmap updated~
Aisha
Looking good for me ~
giant irc comments, open under your responsability
2017-09-23 01:07 xfraczynho: ya, vamos con la Kantan
2017-09-23 01:07 gaston_2199: jajaja
2017-09-23 01:07 xfraczynho: 00:10:996 (1) - te tinca empezar con un D? hay una mezcla entre piano voice y drum
2017-09-23 01:07 xfraczynho: desde después no es tan strong
2017-09-23 01:08 xfraczynho: me gustaría ver eso en todas las diff tbh
2017-09-23 01:08 gaston_2199: Es el comienzo de la canción, es muy calmada la parte
2017-09-23 01:08 gaston_2199: además satura el sonido a mi parecer
2017-09-23 01:09 gaston_2199: 00:10:996 (1) - algó así podría agregarlo ya que se escucha el crash cymbal
2017-09-23 01:10 xfraczynho: mmm
2017-09-23 01:10 xfraczynho: siento que podría ser finish
2017-09-23 01:10 xfraczynho: si bien es calmada, suena bien para diferenciar de los siguientes sonidos
2017-09-23 01:10 xfraczynho: no se ve este sonido en 00:16:329 (6) -
2017-09-23 01:10 xfraczynho: pero se parecemucho a 00:21:662 (11) - donde sí usaste
2017-09-23 01:11 xfraczynho: es el mismo de hecho xD
2017-09-23 01:11 gaston_2199: en 00:21:662 - lo usé porque aumenta un poco el tono
2017-09-23 01:12 gaston_2199: bueno, entra el sonido del bajo
2017-09-23 01:12 gaston_2199: y otro que no logro reconocer xD
2017-09-23 01:13 gaston_2199: la guitarra supongo que es de fondo
2017-09-23 01:13 xfraczynho: mmm sigo con la duda jajaja
2017-09-23 01:13 xfraczynho: borrando las notas siento casi el mismo osnido
2017-09-23 01:13 xfraczynho: wait
2017-09-23 01:13 xfraczynho: déjame hablar con algún otro bn para que me de su comentario :p
2017-09-23 01:13 xfraczynho: mientras
2017-09-23 01:14 xfraczynho: 00:26:329 (18) - creo que esta nota podrías borrarla, si bien es sólo 180bpm
2017-09-23 01:14 gaston_2199: mmm... volta? xD
2017-09-23 01:14 xfraczynho: 00:26:995 - estas secciones de Futsuu pueden ser muy densas después de un 'triple' 2/1
2017-09-23 01:15 gaston_2199: Eliminado
2017-09-23 01:16 xfraczynho: 00:46:329 (45,46) -
2017-09-23 01:16 xfraczynho: te tinca hacer ctrl+g acá=
2017-09-23 01:16 xfraczynho: así haces un buen buildup para seguir la melodía
2017-09-23 01:17 gaston_2199: Tienes razón, aplicado
2017-09-23 01:18 xfraczynho: 00:53:662 (56) - btw siento este incluso más bajo que la primera nota
2017-09-23 01:18 xfraczynho: xD
2017-09-23 01:18 xfraczynho: o un tono similar
2017-09-23 01:19 xfraczynho: 00:58:995 (64,65) - un k k suena 10/10
2017-09-23 01:20 gaston_2199: Sobre 00:59:329 (64) -, el tema es que escucho un crash cymbal que el comienzo de la canción no lo tiene
2017-09-23 01:20 gaston_2199: Lo segundo aplicado
2017-09-23 01:22 xfraczynho: con lo primero te referías a 00:53:662 (56) -
2017-09-23 01:22 xfraczynho: verdad?
2017-09-23 01:23 xfraczynho: 01:08:995 (79) - lo mismo de la otra
2017-09-23 01:23 gaston_2199: si
2017-09-23 01:23 xfraczynho: por consistencia más que nada
2017-09-23 01:23 gaston_2199: eliminado
2017-09-23 01:24 xfraczynho: 01:16:995 (91,92) - podrías hacer ctrl+g acá también
2017-09-23 01:24 xfraczynho: hace un buen mirror con el siguiente k k d
2017-09-23 01:24 xfraczynho: y sigue el vocal y la melodía mejor
2017-09-23 01:25 xfraczynho: 01:31:662 (109) - también podrías borrar esta, esta sección parece un poco de futsuu
2017-09-23 01:25 xfraczynho: y sería suficiente con un 4/1 break
2017-09-23 01:26 gaston_2199: Sobre 01:16:329 (88,89,90) - : dkd sigue el piano como también la vocal creo
2017-09-23 01:26 xfraczynho: siento que sería bueno skippear ese vocal
2017-09-23 01:26 xfraczynho: sí en esa las 2 opciones suenan bien
2017-09-23 01:27 xfraczynho: 01:35:162 (116) - este slider me genera una sensación extraña, pero al jugarlo y verlo a la rápida
2017-09-23 01:28 gaston_2199: No estoy seguro sobre 01:31:662 - , se siente incomo al no haber una nota ahí
2017-09-23 01:28 xfraczynho: entiendo que sigues el drum, pero el vocal parte antes
2017-09-23 01:28 xfraczynho: mmm lo sentí piola para seguir el ritmo, es raro ver que en 01:30:662 (107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124) - toda esta sección no hayan 4/1 breaks
2017-09-23 01:29 xfraczynho: no te parece en vez de un slider hacer un spinner desde 01:34:995 - así sigues mejor el vocal?
2017-09-23 01:30 gaston_2199: Bueno, en 01:30:995 - sobre el break agregué un finisher para enfatizar la vocal y dejar el break 4/1
2017-09-23 01:30 xfraczynho: 01:53:995 (12,13) - acá también podrías hacer ctrl+g, depende un poco de ti eso sí, el k d sigue el piano, pero un d k sigue mejor la melodía ascendente y enfatiza los siguientes kat
2017-09-23 01:31 gaston_2199: lo que no estoy seguro es si borrar 01:32:662 -
2017-09-23 01:31 xfraczynho: me gusta esa idea :p
2017-09-23 01:31 xfraczynho: a mí me gusta como se ve borrado tbh
2017-09-23 01:32 xfraczynho: aunque nunca me fijo mucho en los SR, el futsuu es 2.00 casi (algo relativamente fácil a lo que se ve)
2017-09-23 01:32 xfraczynho: así que no sería malo que la Kantan fuera bien simple :')
2017-09-23 01:32 gaston_2199: que te parece si 01:33:662 (109,110,111) - lo convierto en DKD?
2017-09-23 01:33 gaston_2199: personalmente no me gustan los patrones que tengan k K o d D
2017-09-23 01:33 gaston_2199: sobre 01:33:662 (109,110,111) - aplicado
2017-09-23 01:33 gaston_2199: Además sería más facil de jugar
2017-09-23 01:33 gaston_2199: (sobre los finisher ^)
2017-09-23 01:34 xfraczynho: me gusta el D K D, aunque prueba D D K también para la melodía ascendente :p
2017-09-23 01:34 xfraczynho: tampoco me gusta k K o d D
2017-09-23 01:34 xfraczynho: 01:50:829 -
2017-09-23 01:34 xfraczynho: esto se siente un poco vacío
2017-09-23 01:35 xfraczynho: 01:51:495 - agregaría un k acá y borraría 01:52:995 (10) -
2017-09-23 01:36 gaston_2199: estás seguro sobre el 1/2?
2017-09-23 01:36 xfraczynho: tengo una mejor idea
2017-09-23 01:36 xfraczynho: 01:53:995 (12) - moverlo a 01:53:329 -
2017-09-23 01:37 xfraczynho: (btw el 1/2 si calza con la canción y el bpm no es alto anda bien, más aún si es kiai)
2017-09-23 01:37 xfraczynho: las dos opciones andan piola imo, un triple y después seguir con un patrón de fut es medio complicado
2017-09-23 01:38 xfraczynho: nada más que eso en esta diff
2017-09-23 01:38 gaston_2199: a ver
2017-09-23 01:39 gaston_2199: algunas cosas antes de pasar a la futsuu
2017-09-23 01:39 gaston_2199: 01:35:162 - no estoy seguro sobre el spinner, pienso que podría confundir a los jugadores
2017-09-23 01:39 gaston_2199: además que puede llegar a cubrir 01:36:329 (1) -
2017-09-23 01:40 gaston_2199: Estaba pensando en un D
2017-09-23 01:40 gaston_2199: los finishers quedarían D D K D
2017-09-23 01:40 gaston_2199: epa
2017-09-23 01:41 gaston_2199: por alguna razón la diff subió a 1.51* ._.
2017-09-23 01:41 xfraczynho: sí el tema del slider no anda mal si lo dejas
2017-09-23 01:41 xfraczynho: es sólo que me hace sentir extraño al escucharlo xD
2017-09-23 01:42 xfraczynho: mm si haces ese D
2017-09-23 01:42 xfraczynho: anda bien también imo
2017-09-23 01:42 xfraczynho: así dejas un break antes de la densidad del Kiai
2017-09-23 01:42 xfraczynho: hay hartas opciones tbh, muchas dependen de ti
2017-09-23 01:43 xfraczynho: así como vi la kantan antes de los cambios, sentí que habían partes muy densas nada más
2017-09-23 01:44 gaston_2199: voy a dejar el D
2017-09-23 01:44 xfraczynho: deberías hacer lo mismo en fut then
2017-09-23 01:44 gaston_2199: en fustuu pensaba poner el slider
2017-09-23 01:44 gaston_2199: aunque perdería consistencia
2017-09-23 01:45 gaston_2199: 01:42:829 -
2017-09-23 01:45 gaston_2199: hay algo extraño ahí o me parece?
2017-09-23 01:46 xfraczynho: en kantan?
2017-09-23 01:46 xfraczynho: o fut?
2017-09-23 01:46 gaston_2199: en kantan
2017-09-23 01:47 xfraczynho: es extraño porque no sigues vocal nada más imo
2017-09-23 01:47 xfraczynho: ah no wait
2017-09-23 01:48 xfraczynho: es verdad
2017-09-23 01:48 xfraczynho: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9153477
2017-09-23 01:48 xfraczynho: la verdad no quiero influir en tu mapstyle
2017-09-23 01:48 xfraczynho: pero algo así haría yo
2017-09-23 01:48 xfraczynho: lo haría ver bien fut eso sí jaja
2017-09-23 01:49 gaston_2199: es que es raro, ni yo sé como hacerlo
2017-09-23 01:49 xfraczynho: pero necesario
2017-09-23 01:49 xfraczynho: yo haría eso, usar redlines en kantan no es malo
2017-09-23 01:49 xfraczynho: el tema es usar triples con redline
2017-09-23 01:50 gaston_2199: igual no es la unica parte
2017-09-23 01:50 gaston_2199: muchas veces hace ese hincapié
2017-09-23 01:51 gaston_2199: o en todo caso 01:42:329 - 01:42:995 - podría usar dkd en 1/1
2017-09-23 01:51 xfraczynho: sí cuando lo escuché
2017-09-23 01:51 xfraczynho: en tema de ritmo soonaba bien
2017-09-23 01:51 xfraczynho: es porque (te felicito por eso) no sigues vocal en toda lacanción
2017-09-23 01:52 gaston_2199: en el kiai no sigo casi nada a la vocal
2017-09-23 01:52 xfraczynho: es verdad
2017-09-23 01:52 xfraczynho: pesonalmente lo aceptaría como está la composición
2017-09-23 01:53 xfraczynho: los redlines usage están adecuados, sólo que cuando los usas (como dije antes) es mejor dejar un break antes y/o después
2017-09-23 01:53 gaston_2199: A ver, prosigamos mejor para no quedar estancados
2017-09-23 01:53 gaston_2199: voy a tirar updated cuando terminemos
2017-09-23 01:53 gaston_2199: y ahí me dices
2017-09-23 01:53 xfraczynho: sí, así reviso todo
2017-09-23 01:53 xfraczynho: eco
2017-09-23 01:55 xfraczynho: 00:20:662 (20,21,22) -
2017-09-23 01:55 xfraczynho: siento que no suena bien
2017-09-23 01:56 xfraczynho: 00:20:495 - http://puu.sh/xGGGF/8a8f3c2c6a.jpg prueba eso, si lo sientes muy difícil prueba deleteando 00:20:662 -
2017-09-23 01:56 gaston_2199: Es verdad, pero por el tema del drum es así
2017-09-23 01:56 xfraczynho: (no soy fan de seguir vocals, pero 00:20:829 - suena más fuerte que 00:20:995 - incluso en drum)
2017-09-23 01:58 gaston_2199: creo que dkd queda mejor
2017-09-23 01:59 xfraczynho: 00:32:329 - en esta sección se siente un poco raro que hayan 2 2/1 break's seguidos
2017-09-23 01:59 xfraczynho: y luego muchos patrones largos (especialmete el doble quintuple) seguidos
2017-09-23 02:00 xfraczynho: podrías borrar 00:35:329 (53) -
2017-09-23 02:00 xfraczynho: deberías revisar la consistencia ahí
2017-09-23 02:01 gaston_2199: si, ahora que me lo dices pensé en otro pattern
2017-09-23 02:01 xfraczynho: 00:42:995 - patrones como este podrían andar mejor
2017-09-23 02:01 xfraczynho: 2/1 2/1 triple 2/1 2/1 2/1 quintuple anda bien para este tipo de canciones
2017-09-23 02:02 xfraczynho: 00:51:329 (88,89) - ctrl+g anda mejor para seguir el tonito
2017-09-23 02:03 xfraczynho: 01:08:329 - de hecho respecto a 00:20:329 - anda más preciso xD
2017-09-23 02:03 xfraczynho: si bien no son el mismo ritmo y melodía, tienen el mismo cambio de drum
2017-09-23 02:05 gaston_2199: entonces el mismo patrón quedaría bien?
2017-09-23 02:05 xfraczynho: 01:51:829 - siento que un kat acá es necesario
2017-09-23 02:05 gaston_2199: agregado
2017-09-23 02:06 xfraczynho: el patrón que te decía denante suena bien imo
2017-09-23 02:06 xfraczynho: refer: 00:20:162 - d d k d d k
2017-09-23 02:07 xfraczynho: 01:54:829 - también agregaría d
2017-09-23 02:07 gaston_2199: hice el mismo patrón que 01:08:662 -
2017-09-23 02:07 xfraczynho: no pusiste nota en 00:20:329 - verdad?
2017-09-23 02:08 gaston_2199: no, es un break eso
2017-09-23 02:08 xfraczynho: okioki
2017-09-23 02:08 xfraczynho: sí sonaría bien
2017-09-23 02:08 gaston_2199: sobre 01:54:829 - , no quedaría mejor si lo agrego en 01:54:495 -?
2017-09-23 02:08 xfraczynho: 01:56:995 - también agregaría d, está muy vacía ahora imo
2017-09-23 02:08 xfraczynho: sí también suena bien
2017-09-23 02:09 xfraczynho: 02:00:329 (18,19,20,21,22) - unpoco overmapped
2017-09-23 02:09 gaston_2199: 01:56:995 - no hay ningun sonido ahí
2017-09-23 02:09 xfraczynho: pero termina el vocal
2017-09-23 02:09 xfraczynho: podría ser bueno para terminar el kiai y dejar el 2/1break
2017-09-23 02:09 xfraczynho: un 7/8 es como mucho considerando que la melodía sigue (y el drum también)
2017-09-23 02:10 xfraczynho: por eso pensé en esa
2017-09-23 02:11 xfraczynho: eso sería en la fut
2017-09-23 02:11 gaston_2199: Bueno, lo agrego
2017-09-23 02:11 xfraczynho: ah y al tema del spinner
2017-09-23 02:11 xfraczynho: de la greenline que sugerí en el último mod
2017-09-23 02:11 gaston_2199: a ver, dejame ver unas cosas más y pasamos a la muzu
2017-09-23 02:12 gaston_2199: a ver, dejame ver unas cosas más y pasamos a la muzu
2017-09-23 02:12 xfraczynho: entiendo tu punto jaja, pero nardo te dirá que lo hagas igual
2017-09-23 02:12 xfraczynho: prefiero eso a que te hagan dq (a mi diosynth le hizo jajaj)
2017-09-23 02:14 gaston_2199: Bueno, creo que está todo bien
2017-09-23 02:14 gaston_2199: ahora si
2017-09-23 02:14 xfraczynho: he de admitir
2017-09-23 02:14 xfraczynho: que la diff que nunca me convence es la muzu (es la más difícil para todos xD)
2017-09-23 02:14 xfraczynho: pero hasta ahora va bien
2017-09-23 02:15 xfraczynho: 00:20:829 - yo haría un ddd acá eso sí
2017-09-23 02:15 xfraczynho: en la oni lo mappeas
2017-09-23 02:15 xfraczynho: y borraría la siguiente / el kat que viene
2017-09-23 02:17 gaston_2199: mmmm, una foto?
2017-09-23 02:17 xfraczynho: 01:04:162 (185) - kat? (tampoco me gusta el d D y le da mejor énfasis xD)
2017-09-23 02:17 xfraczynho: foto de cómo la dejaría o del spread?
2017-09-23 02:18 xfraczynho: 01:08:829 - acá también mappearía el ddd
2017-09-23 02:18 gaston_2199: como lo dejarías
2017-09-23 02:18 xfraczynho: esos drum son muy buenos para hacerlos en muzu cuando no se repiten tanto
2017-09-23 02:18 xfraczynho: 00:20:829 - http://puu.sh/xGHp8/7728b5dfea.jpg opción 1 (me gusta más)
2017-09-23 02:19 xfraczynho: opción 2: mover el k de 00:21:162 - a 00:21:329 -
2017-09-23 02:19 xfraczynho: si bien los ddd y kkk se guardan más para los kiai, esos sonidos calzan re bien
2017-09-23 02:20 xfraczynho: 01:19:662 - acá podrías hacer un vocal follow, para muzu calza bien en vez de una cadena tan larga de singletaps
2017-09-23 02:21 gaston_2199: a ver, espera un rato que se me abrió el navegador xD
2017-09-23 02:21 xfraczynho: JAJA te entiendo xD
2017-09-23 02:21 xfraczynho: 01:30:995 - mmm no séééé si muzu sea la mejor diff para empezar los sv changes
2017-09-23 02:22 gaston_2199: ya
2017-09-23 02:22 xfraczynho: pero déjalos, yo los dejo pasar por el 180bpm
2017-09-23 02:22 xfraczynho: y pq disminuyen
2017-09-23 02:22 xfraczynho: los muzu son players que ya saben cómo funciona taiko, pero aún les cuestan patrones distintos, así que como esta sección viene fácil no debería haber problemas
2017-09-23 02:23 gaston_2199: Claro, además de que no va tan rápido
2017-09-23 02:23 xfraczynho: 01:38:495 (299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343,344) -
2017-09-23 02:23 xfraczynho: sección gigante sin triples D:
2017-09-23 02:23 xfraczynho: 01:40:662 - algo por acá podrías meter uno
2017-09-23 02:25 gaston_2199: la razón de por qué no hay triples es que la vez que modeo Volta me dijo que disminuyera su uso
2017-09-23 02:25 xfraczynho: o:
2017-09-23 02:25 xfraczynho: http://puu.sh/xGHCB/7b80b48002.png
2017-09-23 02:25 xfraczynho: el spread es un poco grande
2017-09-23 02:26 diferencia * de spread
2017-09-23 02:26 xfraczynho: 01:40:829 - por ej un ddd (tal vez borrando alguna nota alrededor para que no quede tan denso) acá calzaría bien
2017-09-23 02:27 xfraczynho: se ve un poco futsuu el kiai
2017-09-23 02:28 gaston_2199: y nada
2017-09-23 02:28 xfraczynho: más que eso en la muzu no veo tbh
2017-09-23 02:28 gaston_2199: bueno, sobre el triple d lo agregué xD
2017-09-23 02:29 xfraczynho: oki
2017-09-23 02:29 xfraczynho: la densidad de ese patrón que queda es 'aceptable'
2017-09-23 02:29 xfraczynho: para kiai, y siendo el único, anda bien
2017-09-23 02:29 xfraczynho: la Oni y la Inner te las modeé ya
2017-09-23 02:29 xfraczynho: avísame cuando updatees
2017-09-23 02:30 xfraczynho: para revisar si me convence o me gustaría ver un comentario más :c
2017-09-23 02:30 xfraczynho: hay varias cosas que me gustaría conversar con algún otro bn
2017-09-23 02:30 gaston_2199: Dale, le doy una última check y lo updateo
2017-09-23 02:30 xfraczynho: especialmente en k-f
2017-09-23 02:30 xfraczynho: en tema de spread anda piola ahora
2017-09-23 02:30 xfraczynho: son más temas de dificultades por sí mismas
2017-09-23 02:31 xfraczynho: voy a sc2, vengo como en 10~15
2017-09-23 02:32 xfraczynho: me desafiaron a 1v1 y no puedo dejarlo vivir
2017-09-23 02:32 gaston_2199: dale jaja
2017-09-23 02:32 gaston_2199: te aviso por discord en todo caso
2017-09-23 02:36 xfraczynho: dw, ando acá xD
2017-09-23 02:43 xfraczynho: mejor x discord
2017-09-23 02:43 xfraczynho: relogeo altiro
2017-09-23 03:05 gaston_2199: justo te dejé mensaje en discord xD
2017-09-23 03:07 xfraczynho: jajajaj
2017-09-23 03:07 xfraczynho: más encima que la re vendí en sc2 por la mierda
2017-09-23 03:07 xfraczynho: vengo enojado
2017-09-23 03:08 xfraczynho: nah, jk jaja
2017-09-23 03:09 xfraczynho: en cuanto a spread (objetos y sr) se ve perfecto
2017-09-23 03:12 xfraczynho: me acabo de percatar que la Kantan es la única sin finishers en los redlines D:
2017-09-23 03:12 xfraczynho: http://puu.sh/xGIXV/9c0a2a9b6f.png por ejemplo, son necesarios imo
2017-09-23 03:13 xfraczynho: http://puu.sh/xGIYB/ea73cbff45.png also
2017-09-23 03:13 xfraczynho: http://puu.sh/xGIZ1/96e38a964b.png también
2017-09-23 03:13 xfraczynho: también considerando que en http://puu.sh/xGIZN/cf6e0133dc.png los usaste
2017-09-23 03:14 xfraczynho: http://puu.sh/xGJ0r/51f3475e09.png acá también
2017-09-23 03:14 xfraczynho: hay otros como http://puu.sh/xGJ1y/bd62d77e7a.png que los puedo entender, va de la mano con cómo va la dificultad :p
2017-09-23 03:16 gaston_2199: No los agregué porque pensé que lo haría más dificil de tocar al tener ese ritmo
2017-09-23 03:16 xfraczynho: creo que son necesarios, en la testplay los sentí muy vacíos
2017-09-23 03:16 xfraczynho: para los K/F players es bueno que usen big notes
2017-09-23 03:18 gaston_2199: Ok, agregados
2017-09-23 03:20 xfraczynho: la fut va bien imo
2017-09-23 03:22 gaston_2199: Si, creo que la futsuu es la que más problemas tuve
2017-09-23 03:22 gaston_2199: junto con la muzuk
2017-09-23 03:22 gaston_2199: muzukashii*
2017-09-23 03:23 xfraczynho: http://puu.sh/xGJek/54347a969b.png !!!!
2017-09-23 03:23 xfraczynho: jaja me da risa que todos se equivoquen en eso
2017-09-23 03:23 xfraczynho: a todo esto, el hp6 (del primer mod)aún me consterna, pero entendí tu respuesta
2017-09-23 03:24 xfraczynho: si algún otro bn o mod te lo comenta podrías pensarlo 2 veces anyways
2017-09-23 03:25 xfraczynho: 00:52:829 - (muzu) se te olvidó el triple acá?
2017-09-23 03:25 xfraczynho: se siente vacío
2017-09-23 03:26 xfraczynho: comparado con la sección similar
2017-09-23 03:27 gaston_2199: creo que se me olvidó xD
2017-09-23 03:27 gaston_2199: hace consistencia con el final
2017-09-23 03:27 xfraczynho: nada más que eso en la muzu
2017-09-23 03:28 gaston_2199: y sobre el hp, quizás lo baje a 5.5
2017-09-23 03:28 gaston_2199: pero mantengo la misma razón
2017-09-23 03:28 gaston_2199: quizás por la densidad de las notas podría bajarlo
2017-09-23 03:29 xfraczynho: es que igual te entiendo en el sentido que es bastante 'fácil' la inner
2017-09-23 03:29 xfraczynho: así que si quita harta hp no debería ser un mayor problema
2017-09-23 03:30 gaston_2199: lo unico complicado que le veo es el cambio de sv, pero son patrones simples
2017-09-23 03:30 gaston_2199: no creo que quite mucho hp
2017-09-23 03:31 xfraczynho: sip, en ese sentido lo entiendo
2017-09-23 03:32 xfraczynho: única suggest en Oni
2017-09-23 03:32 xfraczynho: 01:10:995 (152,153) - hacer este d K distinto a los anteriores (quizás k D) por el cambio de tono de piano
2017-09-23 03:33 xfraczynho: igual que en la Inner
2017-09-23 03:34 xfraczynho: es el mismo comentario que tiré en mi mod jaja
2017-09-23 03:34 xfraczynho: ah no, nvm
2017-09-23 03:34 gaston_2199: Ahí sólo sigo el drum, de por si tiene que ser dK para que inner oni sea KddKddK
2017-09-23 03:34 gaston_2199: xD
2017-09-23 03:35 xfraczynho: sí en el sentido del drum va bien
2017-09-23 03:35 xfraczynho: forget it jaja
2017-09-23 03:37 xfraczynho: la Inner se ve bien
2017-09-23 03:37 xfraczynho: avísame cuando updatees
2017-09-23 03:38 gaston_2199: listo
Surono
hey you madnuts bird, wanna me check it? :v
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Surono wrote:

hey you madnuts bird, wanna me check it? :v
Hey, of course if you can :^)
Surono
anime?!
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gaston_2199

Surono wrote:

anime?!
I guess xd
Thanksss :D
Ozu
Finally,
kon crat chu~ ^3^
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Gratz~
Wakeshima Kanon <3
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Finally,
kon crat chu~ ^3^

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

Gratz~
Wakeshima Kanon <3
Thanks so much! :D
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