Hi, from my queue
There will be lots of comments about filling what shouldn't be filled imo, but they are subjective
00:17:845 - Sound here changes so you can put second reversed slider like 2 here
00:18:145 (1) - There no sound on slider's end
00:23:695 (6) - Put a 1/8 slider with reversion from 00:23:695 - to 00:23:845 - and a circle on 00:23:995 -
00:25:345 (4,5) - They should be circles
00:27:146 (3,4,5) - ^
00:28:345 (7,8) - ^
00:29:695 (3,4) - Ctrl + G, don't start sliders on blue ticks
00:31:945 (3,4) - ^
00:32:395 (5) - Remove
00:36:595 (3,4,5) - Between 3-4 and 4-5 it's different timegap so spacing shouldn't be equal
00:38:545 (1) - Start kiai here, end on 00:57:745 -
01:22:345 - This part is not a place for kiai imo
01:23:395 (6,9) - Make a blanket here, it would be easier to read
01:25:645 (6,7) - They should be circles
02:19:345 (1) - Kiai
02:26:845 (2) - Remove
02:26:845 (2) - ^
02:27:145 (4) - It should be a circle
02:30:445 (6,7,8,9,10) - If you want to group sounds here 10 is like 8 and 9 so overlap it
02:31:795 (2,5) - Remove
02:32:695 - There's no sound
02:49:045 (3,4) - There's no difference between it and 02:46:645 (2) - or 02:51:445 (2) - so it should be just 1/1 slider
02:53:845 (3,4) - ^
02:58:645 (3,4) - ^
03:01:945 (4) - Like before, not a place for kiai imo
03:06:895 - There's no sound
03:16:495 - ^
04:00:145 (1) - Kiai
05:02:845 (5) - In whole section you map same instrument but here you change that so fill 05:03:145 -
05:07:645 (5) - ^
05:12:295 - ^
Nice map, hope it will be helpful