- 00:38:155 (2,3) - Only this slider is extended, quite incoherent with how you mapped eveything before, also sounds bad. The sound on 00:38:755 - is not an excuse since you could have done that on all other (and would have been quite terrible).
- 01:44:841 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - So yes you split them, but the piano is continuous and no beat here call that spacing between them. Also it make them different from 01:47:413 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - who are same but without spacing.
- 02:08:927 (1,2,3) - Only this one have a different structure from others like 02:14:413 (1,2,3) - and that's weird.
- Also I assume you're stacking notes only when you have 3 objects and not 4, but in that case 02:21:355 (2,3,4) - / 02:10:384 (2,3,4) - should be stacked too.
- 02:13:298 (5) - This slider have no purpose to be 1/8. The rhythm is a 1/4.
- 02:21:527 (4) - /02:27:013 (3) - These one are even worst, since there's only important beats on 02:21:698 - / 02:21:784 - .
- 02:41:070 - This kiai don't have much rhythmic sense. As example, stuff like 02:47:584 (1,2) - don't reflect the song in any way when the wub clearly is more dominant, and is different from 02:48:269 (3) - who cover the same sound. I prefer clearly the rhythm you used for 02:47:927 (1,2,3) - but how you build the rest make this just random. Also reverses like 02:51:698 (2) - sounds overdone.
- 03:08:841 (1,2,3,4) - Why these are different from 03:14:326 (1,2,3,4) - ? Diversity is not an excuse btw ^^
Mukyu~