Yes, because Moyou means PatternSonnyc wrote:
Can I ask why the highest diff is named "Pattern"?
Vidro is something Idk, so I choose "Pattern"
Yes, because Moyou means PatternSonnyc wrote:
Can I ask why the highest diff is named "Pattern"?
Delis wrote:
Hello! I'm not an expert about storyboard but there are a few of obvious errors in the storyboard, let's see what we can do.
00:02:228 -
the letters are cut off, it seems the problem is pointed out already but not addressed? this still continues to the artist as well. (00:05:434 -)
00:22:838 - 00:29:250 - lyrics aren't fitting to the actual vocals properly. もっともらしい 言葉だとか should be the appropriate lyrics for here, as you can see a contradiction at 00:37:495 -.
01:00:052 - the lyrics in the storyboard doesn't support the phrase properly. the lyrics must be one phrase as "雲の形突き抜ける" this currently is the one phrase being split which is strange. therefore the phrases being mixed at 01:03:831 - looks totally wrong, change the lyrics here with "想いの衝動描く" (く was missing from here) and "雲の形突き抜ける" for the lyrics at 01:00:052 -. // I saw a space in the middle of the lyrics, so I split them up
01:29:708 - is it intented that lyrics aren't fading out with the other SB elements here? I think it would be more cool to match up both together but it's up to you. // I used a script in storybrew, so all lyrics are set to the same fading time. It was not intended, more automatic lol.
also one more thing, isn't the correct title in english "waiting in the summer"? there's literally no source for translated title officially but this seems more popular. // I found it here.
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the SB itself is quite cool but the mistakes I put above made it lame once the things above are addressed, call plaudible back for a rebubble, you might wanna call me once for a final check too. best of luck!
P.S. vidro means glass in portugues, which isn't an unknown word. I'm just saying but I also do think the diffname isn't the best idea as the word "pattern" is kinda confusing with "pattern" in mapping lol xD. // I think I'll go with it cuz I like it xD
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Delis wrote:
alright, the problems regarding the storyboard have been solved.
Edit: I've been checking stuff in the mapset and according to the ranking criteria the soft-sliderslide.wav and soft-sliderwhistle.wav should use the 44kb silent .wav file instead of files made by somebody not official? having double check would be nice.
Edit2: ok another thing, I was finding errors with the modding assistant and I found that it's telling me the truth. while some of them looked like mistakes, there're a plenty of sb files that aren't actually used. you can easily check it out by using a seach on the osb file since none of the osu files using the SB elements, I understood that you guys actually confused since the mapset contains a few of files that using the same name.unused sb files that the modding assistant saysSB\BG\5.png
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unused files seemed to be deleted but I still don't get the reason why you chose the way to extend them instead of using the 44kb file instead even though I have just talked regarding ranking criteria. and the reason why the soft-sliderwhistle.wav is being silenced too since you just remove the whistle where's been used in the map then the file will be useless. I don't know where it is though.Hokichi wrote:
1. I extend those hitsound to 100ms, so it's ok now I hope
2. I re-generate those files, hopefully no unused files now
zzzMrSergio wrote:
Yamicchi:
- 00:04:289 (1,2,3,4) - these feel like... 1-3-1-3-2 (representing emphasis. 3 is highest emphasis). That's why it would feel better to put bigger jumps on 00:04:518 (2,4) - . Same goes for the other instances where this rhythm appears I don't feel the same tbh. I'm just expressing the pitch using the spacing instead, because pitch is the easiest to be noticed while playing.
- 00:50:548 (3,4) - bigger jump on 4 would fit better. Ideally, 3 can be stacked under the previous slider.
Just keep in mind the current flow on 00:50:548 (3,4,5,1) - is kinda meh due to the forced movement between 5-1 fixed, but still not sure xd Random- 00:52:838 - there is a background finish in the song here, so either remove the drum sample or just remove the entire note removed drum
- 01:20:548 (1) - what about dividing this slider into 01:20:548 - circle ; 01:21:006 - 1/2 slider? ok
- 01:29:479 (3) - just circle works better, if you delete 01:29:708 - hmm Idk I don't wanna delete that nor replacing the slider with a circle though
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thanks for the wallMrSergio wrote:
Linada:z
- 00:02:342 (3) - can't hear the triplet in the song tbh. High-hats and kicks alternate every 1/2, so there are no audible 1/4s there is a kick on white tick and two 1/4 snaps on that weird instrument idk it's called
- 00:02:686 (5,6,7,8) - having these on piano and then 00:03:602 (1,2) - on drums sounds so bad, zzz. It's like forcing two magnets to interact both with the same pole. Not to mention that forcing such a rhythm creates an awkward passage on piano again on 00:04:289 - , most likely due to the flow which is not expressing the song.
Possible fixes: 00:03:373 (8,1) - [url=osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784855]reduce the jump between these[/url], that way the piano takes over and there is proper emphasis; if you keep the previous screen, you could move 00:04:518 (3) - at x208 y304 (by using a stretched movement we sort of fix the missing emphasis on the previous slider tail and also fix the problem with 00:04:518 (3,4,5,6,1) - being un-expressive) Fixed with your way but changed slider direction slightly- there is a lot I would like to say, but I feel like it would be ignored, so here's the raw suggestion without any reasoning (because I would really go deep otherwise): 00:05:205 (6) - to x396 y244 ; 00:08:869 (6) - x356 y224 hey that's cool
I suggest this due to a peculiarity in the piano rhythm you ignored. You can ask me if you want the full explanation, but listening to 00:02:686 (5,6,7,8) - and 00:04:518 (3,4,5,6) - in the music should be enough to make you understand, hopefully- 00:22:609 (2) - 00:26:273 (2) - I know they have a guitar beat on them, but they look like filler notes when all the patterns are either on drums or vocals they're filler rhythm but with the hitsounding hokichi did, i really like the rhythm created with filler rhythm here on that section
- 00:37:495 (3,4,5) - imo it would work better with a bigger jump between 3-4 and a smaller one between 4-5 i think it emphasize the clap better as it
- 00:45:510 (4,1) - what an awful emphasis on that slider. Also, the slider should be two clicks, if you listen to the drum. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784945 ? ok
- it would also be cool if you kept a pattern for all: 00:45:510 (4,1) - 00:49:403 (1,2,3) - 00:53:067 (1,2,3) - . It just seems you went with whatever was fine atm instead of noticing the similarities in the song <.<just kept same spacing for all, also changed 00:50:090 (1,2,3,4) - to make more contrast
- 00:56:273 (3) - your hitsounds do not match your pattern here. A better option would be to remove 3 repeats from the slider and using a circle at 00:56:502 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784963 // 01:13:449 (1) - cousin i'd rather remove clap tbh, feel buzz+circle would be too much for what the intensity here imo
- 01:05:205 (5,6,7) - this feels overmapped compared to 01:07:495 (5,6,1) - . The reason for that is that the second one is on drums, the same as all the other patterns, while the first is simply that sort of... keyboard sound which plays as a background instrument i dunno, because even if it's different than other triples, it's still snapped and add some rhythm rather than just 1/2 spams, if you really want to i'll remove tho not that much of a big deal
- 01:10:014 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - soft piano notes would make more sense with smaller spacing than the drum parts tbh i kinda agree but here the piano is really dominant on that part, way more than drums
- 01:21:464 (1,2,1,2) - wut. How come these are grouped by 2 and extra large when they are the same intensity as the rest of the vocal parts? yeah that part was topkek i never found something to my liking. now it's better
- 01:29:021 (1,2,1) - look at Yamicchi's for a better rhythm. 01:29:021 - 01:29:250 - 01:29:479 - are the same beat, but you decided to mix things up (as in the rest of the map). That makes the map unclear to me and just a mean to entertain the player while discarding the song well, i just went to 1 rhythm then
the new ending may look a bit harder but considering it's bpm it's pretty easy to play, really play easily
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Thanks for the check!MrSergio wrote:
you have no bubble, why did you ask me // It was bubbled, and Plaudible said he can't re-rebub, so I was thinking about requesting a t2 BN to check it and make sure everything is ready, then I can ask him to rebub
add disclaimer in desc about the spoilers your SB contains (yes, it's about the pic at 01:15:052 - , taken from the anime) not a big spoiler, but still a spoiler Okay
the song ends at 01:29:479 - , unless you find a way to merge that last guitar stroke with the rest of the map {all diffs}
Check some past versions like jonathanlfj's or Fumika's for confirmation // All diffs have that spot mapped, so I guess it's not a problem
Hard:Normal:
- 00:06:121 (2,3,4) - Apart from the slight DS difference between 1-2-3. I would suggest a more natural flow like this // Agree, fixed
- 00:07:953 (1,2,3,1) - this is a surprisingly clean pattern considered the previous ones. While being this a praise, it is also a way to tell you that generally you could make the map look cleaner // Sure
- 00:13:678 (3) - wild soft whistle on slider body // Fixed
- 00:19:403 (2,1) - forced movement I would rather avoid, but apart from that I would like it if you kept vocals over drums.
The passage at 00:18:258 (1,2,1) - is really awkward because you have been following vocals quite well so far, but decided to skip the one at 00:18:945 - . Skipping that is not a big deal by itself, but the choice to use vocals for 00:19:403 (2) - IS a problem, since you mix things up in an uncomfortable way imo.
00:18:258 (1) - remove repeat; 00:18:945 - 1/1 slider; 00:19:632 - 1/2 slider // I did this instead, hopefully it's fixed- 00:43:449 (5,6) - clap goes on 6 // Fixed
- I assume hitsounds were took by your diff on Yamicchi, which explains why 00:52:609 (3) - is the same. That grave drum sample doesn't fit with the song: either remove the beat or remove the drum sample // Removing the drum beat sounds like a better idea
- 00:56:273 (3) - go with circles if you want the double clap. Having the first clap clickable while not the second one feels strange // Removed the second clap
- 00:59:479 (3) - what do you think of a slider till 00:59:479 (3) - ? // Till where?
- 01:05:434 (4,5,1) - tiny detail, but this stuff happens a bit everywhere: when there is no reason to break it, why not keeping a constant DS... // Changed
- 01:14:136 (3) - the bigger jump should go on this, and not on 01:13:907 (2) - . See how 01:14:136 (3,4,5) - are a triplet of strong beats // I extended the triangle
- 01:22:380 (1) - finish on head? // Sure
z // zz
- 00:02:457 (2) - if you remove this beat you can make 00:03:602 (1) - start from 00:03:373 - where the piano note is instead (which would make more sense)
- 00:06:121 (2) - same // 00:09:785 (2) - cousin // I followed Akitoshi's beat, so I think I'll keep it
- 00:11:846 - why is this skipped tho // Mapped
- 00:30:166 (3) - this would work better extended till 00:30:853 - instead // Fixed
- 00:43:449 (3,1) - clap goes on 1's head // Fixed
- 01:10:014 (2) - whistle is enough on head // Whistle followed the piano sounds, and I'm pretty sure I did it throughout the whole map, so I'll keep it that way
- 01:22:380 (1) - finish on head // Fixed
- 01:26:044 (1,1) - when for no reason things start changing... Not sure why the second one has to be curved, but I guess that's anime mapping for you.. // This is where I'm going to add a spinner instead
- pretty sure you can make a spinner fit somewhere in the map
all fixed ! also did some self-moddingNatsu wrote:
Linada's Glass Pattern
- 00:42:991 (3,1,2,3,1,2) - eh I really don't understand the structure of this pattern, can you make it more geometrical? atleast make 00:43:220 (1,3) - 00:43:449 (2,1) - have similar spacing visually fixed
- 00:44:136 (2) - I don't agree with this, ending the slider on such important beat doesn't fit the song at all Fixed but had to remove the buzz because it'll kill the playability pretty hard
- 01:28:219 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - also this is too much, and also a bit inconsistent, for example you don't have a 1/4 jump at 01:26:387 (4,5) - and the sound is basically the same as 01:28:219 (8,1) - just don't use the stream jump and also 01:29:021 (1,2,3,4) - the pressure points are 1 and 3, 2 and 4 are regular beats, so either make a 1/4 jumps or a normal stream fixed
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Thanks for the modsNatsu wrote:
ask to delis if he is fine with the map now, since he popped it
generalHard
- can u make the colors a bit more different // Sure, I'll use Linada's
Normal
- 00:19:632 (3,1) - blanket is super off // Fixed
- 00:20:090 (1,2,3) - spacing // Oops, sorry
- 00:34:289 (4,5) - the stack leniency ruins your spacing // Adjusted
- 00:41:388 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - eh you can rebuild this pattern better, like the overlaps and the objects being at the same place doesn't really fit the rest of the map // Hmm this can be hard
- 01:28:334 (2,5) - try to avoid the overlap // Okie
maybe try to make some clean up at this diff and also I'd nerf those star jumps, since the spread with the normal diff isn't that nice atm // I will remove some of the overlaps, but will keep someif you fix the bolded things you can call me back once this gets rebubbled
- OD 4
- Just try to improve your blankets