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22:51 Hokichi: Hey
22:51 Kocari: hi
22:52 Hokichi: Are you free for a small check for my diff?
22:52 Hokichi: I don't feel confident about it
22:52 Kocari: sure
22:52 *Hokichi is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1330487 yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou [Hard]]
22:54 Hokichi: Just the hard diff, oops
22:54 Hokichi: I forgot
22:56 Kocari: pretty strong piano key here compared to others
22:56 Kocari: that could be emphasized 00:08:411 -
22:58 Kocari: 00:14:823 (2,3,4) - could be just 1 slider on 1/8 to play this part out
22:58 Kocari: would be strange to have the middle note not hit anything
22:58 Kocari: also spacing on (2) is really far
22:59 Kocari: sliderend should be emphasized with a note if you're going for sounds like on 00:15:968 (7,8) -
23:00 Hokichi: 00:14:823 (2) - This is 1/6 so I will use a 1/6 slider instead
23:00 Kocari: ye
23:00 Kocari: really?
23:00 Kocari: I hear it as 1/8
23:00 Kocari: 1/6 is still early
23:01 Kocari: or I mean late
23:01 Hokichi: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8635746
23:01 Hokichi: Then that is what I heard correctly lol
23:01 Kocari: ye
23:01 Kocari: thats righjt
23:01 Kocari: 1/8
23:02 Hokichi: Dunno if it's too hard
23:02 Kocari: it wont
23:02 Kocari: if its just holding then it should be easy
23:02 Kocari: will just play like a single note
23:02 Hokichi: Ok
23:03 Kocari: 00:24:899 (2) -
23:03 Kocari: doesn't really serve a purpose like your other sliders
23:03 Kocari: its skipping over usuable beats such as 00:24:899 (2) - and 00:25:357 -
23:03 Kocari: more like this imo https://puu.sh/wOfio/7db79b6aef.png
23:05 Hokichi: Alright
23:05 Kocari: I'd be careful with this
23:05 Kocari: not much hard has a 3/4 rhythm
23:05 Kocari: and its confusing thrown along with the same repeat sound
23:05 Kocari: I would just keep this as a 1/2 slider
23:05 Hokichi: 00:30:624 (6) - You mean this?
23:06 Kocari: yeah
23:06 Kocari: I was gonna link it
23:06 Kocari: you can also make it 2 circle notes instead of a slider
23:06 Kocari: to add emphasis to the NC
23:06 Kocari: your call
23:06 Hokichi: 00:59:479 (3) - I can do something like this
23:07 Hokichi: Nah a slider works better
23:07 Kocari: yeah
23:07 Kocari: a slider would do you nicely
23:08 Kocari: rhythm here is a little strange
23:08 Kocari: 00:35:205 (2,3) -
23:08 Kocari: couldve been something maybe like this https://puu.sh/wOfre/2f13cdbaf2.png
23:09 Hokichi: Agree
23:09 Kocari: this should be 2 notes 00:39:785 (5) -
23:09 Kocari: since you mapped out the sound at 00:38:869 (2,3) -
23:10 Kocari: just to keep it consistent
23:10 Hokichi: Okay
23:11 Kocari: how do you feel about
23:11 Kocari: this 00:43:449 (5,1) -
23:11 Kocari: being more like https://puu.sh/wOfx4/ef81499a52.png
23:12 Hokichi: Well
23:12 Hokichi: I did map it like that
23:12 Hokichi: Then I changed, don't remember why
23:12 Hokichi: Bc of a mod iirc
23:12 Kocari: lemme see who said this
23:13 Hokichi: It can be an IRC mod tho, I asked for a lot of checks before this is uploaded, so...
23:13 Hokichi: It may not be on the thread
23:13 Kocari: yeah just checked it
23:14 Kocari: but the downbeat should be mapped
23:14 Kocari: it has an electronic and a drum beat on it
23:14 Hokichi: I changed to your suggestion anyway
23:15 Kocari: I think the clap profile starting here could be
23:15 Kocari: on the end of 00:45:739 (1) -
23:15 Kocari: and removed on end of 00:48:258 (2) -
23:16 Hokichi: Oh don't mind the hitsound cuz I'll edit it later
23:16 Kocari: kk
23:16 Kocari: this needs to be a repeat
23:16 Kocari: 00:49:403 (1) -
23:16 Kocari: its done at
23:16 Kocari: 00:45:739 (1) -
23:16 Kocari: and 00:53:067 (1) -
23:17 Hokichi: Changed
23:17 Kocari: I honestly feel this can be a slider play around with it and see what you think 00:56:273 (3) -
23:18 Kocari: playing into the new section seems smoother for my preference
23:18 Hokichi: 1/4 slider perharps?
23:19 Kocari: yeah 1/2
23:19 Kocari: https://puu.sh/wOfLG/e316c91d60.png
23:19 Hokichi: I'll keep the consistency with 00:52:609 (3) -
23:19 Hokichi: Now I realized it lol
23:20 Kocari: k
23:20 Kocari: you dont need a repeat
23:20 Kocari: 01:00:395 (1) -
23:20 Kocari: its kiai'
23:20 Kocari: I think mixing up and staying away from previous rhythms suits you better
23:20 Kocari: so a 1/2 slider and a note would be best
23:21 Kocari: to compensate for changing it things without much emphasis on them could be used as filler with sliders
23:21 Kocari: such as
23:21 Kocari: 01:01:770 (4,5) -
23:22 Hokichi: Idk why but I feel like I should place 2 circles there
23:22 Hokichi: Like 01:01:770 (4) - drum, 01:01:999 (5) - vocal
23:23 Kocari: nothing wrong with it
23:23 Kocari: thats fine
23:23 Kocari: but this though
23:23 Kocari: 01:03:602 (8,1) -
23:23 Kocari: flow pattern on this is weird
23:23 Kocari: or all of them 01:02:915 (7,8,1) -
23:24 Kocari: Ill reshow it 01:02:915 (2,3,1) -
23:25 Kocari: can be 2 notes like previously 01:07:266 (4) -
23:25 Kocari: maybe difficult for newbies 01:10:014 (2,3,4,5,6) -
23:26 Kocari: especially with how the spacing is
23:26 Kocari: spacing is far 01:14:594 (5,6) -
23:27 Hokichi: About the star formation, it's low bpm and I place them quit close so it shouldn't be a problem
23:27 Kocari: alright
23:27 Kocari: same things as above and others after this
23:27 Kocari: 01:21:464 (3,4) -
23:28 Kocari: seems bland to just have 2 1/2 sliders back to back
23:28 Kocari: it fills up a lot
23:28 Kocari: other than that
23:28 Kocari: seems reaseonable
23:28 Kocari: I mapped this as my first map too
23:29 Kocari: until I deleted it
23:29 Kocari: bubble and everything
23:29 Hokichi: Nice
23:29 Hokichi: Oh
23:31 Hokichi: Thanks for the check
23:31 Kocari: np
Yamicchi
Chatlog as hoki requested for +SP
08:25 Yamicchi: có thời gian không
08:26 Hokichi: Tuỳ việc
08:26 Yamicchi: tao quick check hard cho
08:26 Hokichi: Kê
08:26 Yamicchi: 00:07:953 (5,6,7) - cái cục này hơi bị lộn xộn nè
08:27 Yamicchi: chủ yếu là do cái vị trí m đặt 00:05:434 (1,2,3,4) -
08:28 Hokichi: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8659989
08:28 Hokichi: Hì
08:28 Yamicchi: nô nô m đừng sửa 5,6,7
08:28 Yamicchi: pattern vậy được rồi
08:28 Yamicchi: ý t là
08:28 Yamicchi: tại cái cục đằng trước nên nhìn 567 nó dơ
08:29 Yamicchi: http://puu.sh/wQBY1/84221e53c4.jpg
08:29 Yamicchi: http://puu.sh/wQBYJ/b33167f0f1.jpg
08:29 Yamicchi: xài stack í
08:30 Yamicchi: 00:06:121 (2) - stack với slider end của 00:04:518 (2) - này
08:30 Hokichi: Chờ tí đi man
08:30 Yamicchi: 00:07:037 (4) - stack 00:04:976 (3) - này
08:30 Yamicchi: ok t chỉ đang giải thích cách t làm thôi
08:33 Hokichi: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8660019
08:34 Yamicchi: giữ spacing cho 4 luôn chứ tách ra chi
08:34 Hokichi: Sửa rồi
08:34 Hokichi: Vừa gửi mày xong là tao sửa
08:34 Yamicchi: :v
08:35 Yamicchi: ok nếu m thấy được thì t tiếp
08:35 Hokichi: Ok tiép
08:35 Yamicchi: 00:14:823 (2) - cái này mới
08:35 Yamicchi: xài spacing nhỏ thôi
08:35 Hokichi: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8660027 ?
08:36 Yamicchi: ừ
08:36 Yamicchi: 00:15:052 (3,6,7) - nhìn cho nó gọn http://puu.sh/wQCdw/6b338415fd.jpg
08:37 Yamicchi: rồi dời 00:16:426 (1) - đi chỗ khác tí luôn để khỏi bị overlap
08:39 Hokichi: Ok
08:39 Yamicchi: 00:34:747 (1) - minor thôi mà t thấy cái này bỏ cái anchor ở giữa đi
08:39 Yamicchi: nó cong cong nhìn cứ bê dê
08:40 Yamicchi: 00:35:205 (2,3,4,5,1) - giảm spacing đoạn này lại, bằng với 00:37:724 (2,3) - thôi tự nhiên boost lên chi
08:40 Hokichi: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8660045
08:40 Hokichi: Chắc đỡ bê đê mà flow hơi tệ :v
08:40 Yamicchi: thì t bảo cứ slider thẳng thôi :v
08:40 Yamicchi: kh cần blanket đâu
08:40 Yamicchi: đừng bắt chước noz
08:41 Hokichi: Ok man
08:41 Hokichi: Tiếp
08:41 Yamicchi: spacing kìa
08:41 Yamicchi: sửa chưa
08:41 Hokichi: Cái chỗ DS là do remap óc cu đó
08:41 Yamicchi: :v
08:41 Yamicchi: sửa rồi phải kh
08:41 Hokichi: Sửa rồi ba
08:41 Yamicchi: 00:39:327 (4,5,6,1) - same
08:41 Yamicchi: 00:40:243 (1,2,3,4) - same
08:42 Hokichi: Rồi, tiếp
08:42 Yamicchi: 00:42:991 (3,4,5,6) - sao nó kh ra cái hình thoi :v
08:43 Hokichi: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8660058
08:43 Hokichi: Squares zzz
08:44 Yamicchi: 00:47:571 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/wQCta/b419631148.jpg không đẹp, http://puu.sh/wQCtN/316b2c5c6d.jpg đẹp, m hiểu chứ :v
08:44 Yamicchi: 00:45:281 (4,2) - cho 2 cái lợn này stack với nhau cũng đc
08:44 Yamicchi: hoặc stack xong rồi muốn dời 00:45:739 (1) - qua stack với 00:45:052 (3) - cũng đc luôn
08:45 Yamicchi: mà nhớ xoay cái (1) lên trên tí để khỏi overlap
08:45 Yamicchi: like this ô ô like this http://puu.sh/wQCyn/8fde3eb91f.jpg
08:45 Hokichi: Rồi
08:45 Hokichi: Tiếp đi man
08:46 Yamicchi: 00:47:571 (1,2) - cục này sửa chưa
08:46 Hokichi: 00:45:510 (5,2) - Stack 2 cái nì nhoé
08:46 Hokichi: Sửa rồi
08:46 Yamicchi: nah kh cần đâu
08:46 Hokichi: Thôi tiếp đi :v
08:46 Yamicchi: 00:50:777 (3,1,2) - do sth like this pls http://puu.sh/wQCC1/f15f5e1ffd.jpg
08:47 Yamicchi: 00:53:067 (1) - và kiếm chỗ khác để cái này cho hợp lí hơn tí
08:48 Hokichi: Ok
08:48 Hokichi: Done
08:48 Yamicchi: 00:53:067 (1) - nhớ tăng spacing
08:48 Yamicchi: t quên nhăczs
08:48 Hokichi: Stack hết :v
08:48 Yamicchi: 00:54:899 (1,2,3) - hmm, cái này kh đẹp lắm
08:50 Hokichi: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8660082
08:51 Yamicchi: ye
08:51 Yamicchi: 00:56:273 (3,1) - mà chỗ này boost spacing lớn quá, nhớ sửa nốt
08:51 Hokichi: Ok fixed
08:52 Hokichi: Fix lẹ tao đi phơi đồ :v
08:52 Yamicchi: 01:00:853 (2) - giữ spacing
08:52 Yamicchi: 01:02:915 (2) - giảm spacing
08:52 Yamicchi: 01:04:518 (2) - giảm spacing
08:52 Yamicchi: 01:04:747 (3,4,5) - giảm
08:52 Yamicchi: 01:05:892 (1) - buff
08:52 Yamicchi: đừng có stack
08:52 Yamicchi: 01:10:014 (2,3,4,5,6) - vãi l
08:52 Yamicchi: mà thôi kệ
08:53 Yamicchi: 01:13:907 (2,3,4,5) - giảm hoặc buff 01:14:823 (6,7,1) -
08:53 Yamicchi: 01:15:739 (3,4,5) - cân bằng spacing
08:53 Yamicchi: 01:18:487 (5,1) - giảm
08:53 Yamicchi: í lộn tặng
08:53 Yamicchi: tăng
08:53 Yamicchi: 01:18:716 (1,2) - giảm
08:53 Yamicchi: 01:19:403 (2,3,4) - giảm
08:53 Yamicchi: 01:20:548 (1) - tăng
08:53 Yamicchi: tăng
08:54 Yamicchi: tăng
08:54 Yamicchi: 01:24:212 (1) - tăng
08:54 Yamicchi: ok
08:58 Hokichi: Xong rồi ha?
08:59 Yamicchi: ừa
08:59 Hokichi: Để update
08:59 Hokichi: Giờ đi phơi đồ :v
08:59 Yamicchi: updoot đi tao nhờ Plau check cho
08:59 Hokichi: Up mod lên forum tao kds cho
08:59 Hokichi: Để tao hú cho
08:59 Hokichi: Mày up mod đi :v
Plaudible
hey! recheck~

you're missing epilepsy warning in top 3 difficulties still
all diffs still missing 01:07:724 - and 01:13:907 - finish

normal
00:32:915 (1,2,3) - what happened to ds here lol
01:27:876 (3) - nc missing

hard
00:04:976 (3,1) - spacing here feels too large, compare to 00:08:640 (7,1) -
00:15:510 (5,6) - if you dont include the 1/8 here i dont think you should at 00:14:823 (2,3) - either, it's fine to undermap both. you don't use 1/8 now anyways later, so it should be k
00:07:953 (5) - nc
01:04:747 (3,5) - odd overlap imo
01:10:014 (2,3,4,5,6) - jumps a bit too big here, consider making the star overall a bit smaller :< 01:28:792 (3,4,5,6,1) - is perfect

yamicchi's li
00:52:838 - there's a cymbal crash here, why not just make this a triple to map it out?
01:13:449 (2) - would prefer if this isn't snapped 1/8, small window to hit this and would be pretty rough for people who play 3 star maps like this. you do at 00:30:624 (8,1) - , anyways

kk, you can call me back for bubble once these get addressed :)
Yamicchi

Plaudible wrote:

yamicchi's li
00:52:838 - there's a cymbal crash here, why not just make this a triple to map it out? 1/4 slider then :^)
01:13:449 (2) - would prefer if this isn't snapped 1/8, small window to hit this and would be pretty rough for people who play 3 star maps like this. you do at 00:30:624 (8,1) - , anyways done~

kk, you can call me back for bubble once these get addressed :)
Thanks Plau <3

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Topic Starter
Hokichi

Plaudible wrote:

hey! recheck~

you're missing epilepsy warning in top 3 difficulties still
all diffs still missing 01:07:724 - and 01:13:907 - finish

normal
00:32:915 (1,2,3) - what happened to ds here lol
01:27:876 (3) - nc missing

hard
00:04:976 (3,1) - spacing here feels too large, compare to 00:08:640 (7,1) -
00:15:510 (5,6) - if you dont include the 1/8 here i dont think you should at 00:14:823 (2,3) - either, it's fine to undermap both. you don't use 1/8 now anyways later, so it should be k // 00:15:052 (3) - I removed this, since it's single tap so it shouldn't be too hard. Did some check at that spot with some mappers, and it's ok.
00:07:953 (5) - nc
01:04:747 (3,5) - odd overlap imo // I swear to god I didn't do that but fixed lol
01:10:014 (2,3,4,5,6) - jumps a bit too big here, consider making the star overall a bit smaller :< 01:28:792 (3,4,5,6,1) - is perfect

yamicchi's li
00:52:838 - there's a cymbal crash here, why not just make this a triple to map it out?
01:13:449 (2) - would prefer if this isn't snapped 1/8, small window to hit this and would be pretty rough for people who play 3 star maps like this. you do at 00:30:624 (8,1) - , anyways

kk, you can call me back for bubble once these get addressed :)
Thanks for reply
All fix but replied
Sonnyc
Can I ask why the highest diff is named "Pattern"?
Topic Starter
Hokichi

Sonnyc wrote:

Can I ask why the highest diff is named "Pattern"?
Yes, because Moyou means Pattern
Vidro is something Idk, so I choose "Pattern"
Plaudible
sb checked, hitsounds fixed and warning on

looks good to me then, gl :)
Delis
Hello! I'm not an expert about storyboard but there are a few of obvious errors in the storyboard, let's see what we can do.

00:02:228 -
the letters are cut off, it seems the problem is pointed out already but not addressed? this still continues to the artist as well. (00:05:434 -)


00:22:838 - 00:29:250 - lyrics aren't fitting to the actual vocals properly. もっともらしい 言葉だとか should be the appropriate lyrics for here, as you can see a contradiction at 00:37:495 -.


01:00:052 - the lyrics in the storyboard doesn't support the phrase properly. the lyrics must be one phrase as "雲の形突き抜ける" this currently is the one phrase being split which is strange. therefore the phrases being mixed at 01:03:831 - looks totally wrong, change the lyrics here with "想いの衝動描く" (く was missing from here) and "雲の形突き抜ける" for the lyrics at 01:00:052 -.


01:29:708 - is it intented that lyrics aren't fading out with the other SB elements here? I think it would be more cool to match up both together but it's up to you.


also one more thing, isn't the correct title in english "waiting in the summer"? there's literally no source for translated title officially but this seems more popular.
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the SB itself is quite cool but the mistakes I put above made it lame :( once the things above are addressed, call plaudible back for a rebubble, you might wanna call me once for a final check too. best of luck!

P.S. vidro means glass in portugues, which isn't an unknown word. I'm just saying but I also do think the diffname isn't the best idea as the word "pattern" is kinda confusing with "pattern" in mapping lol xD.
Plaudible
thanks for the sb check o/ sorry about that
once you fix everything hoki check back in with delis then lets get back on track with ranking this
Topic Starter
Hokichi
Hi, I'll just place the lyrics source here so we can make everything easier to check

Delis wrote:

Hello! I'm not an expert about storyboard but there are a few of obvious errors in the storyboard, let's see what we can do.

00:02:228 -
the letters are cut off, it seems the problem is pointed out already but not addressed? this still continues to the artist as well. (00:05:434 -)


00:22:838 - 00:29:250 - lyrics aren't fitting to the actual vocals properly. もっともらしい 言葉だとか should be the appropriate lyrics for here, as you can see a contradiction at 00:37:495 -.


01:00:052 - the lyrics in the storyboard doesn't support the phrase properly. the lyrics must be one phrase as "雲の形突き抜ける" this currently is the one phrase being split which is strange. therefore the phrases being mixed at 01:03:831 - looks totally wrong, change the lyrics here with "想いの衝動描く" (く was missing from here) and "雲の形突き抜ける" for the lyrics at 01:00:052 -. // I saw a space in the middle of the lyrics, so I split them up


01:29:708 - is it intented that lyrics aren't fading out with the other SB elements here? I think it would be more cool to match up both together but it's up to you. // I used a script in storybrew, so all lyrics are set to the same fading time. It was not intended, more automatic lol.


also one more thing, isn't the correct title in english "waiting in the summer"? there's literally no source for translated title officially but this seems more popular. // I found it here.
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the SB itself is quite cool but the mistakes I put above made it lame :( once the things above are addressed, call plaudible back for a rebubble, you might wanna call me once for a final check too. best of luck!

P.S. vidro means glass in portugues, which isn't an unknown word. I'm just saying but I also do think the diffname isn't the best idea as the word "pattern" is kinda confusing with "pattern" in mapping lol xD. // I think I'll go with it cuz I like it xD
Delis
alright, the problems regarding the storyboard have been solved.

Edit: I've been checking stuff in the mapset and according to the ranking criteria the soft-sliderslide.wav and soft-sliderwhistle.wav should use the 44kb silent .wav file instead of files made by somebody not official? having double check would be nice.

Edit2: ok another thing, I was finding errors with the modding assistant and I found that it's telling me the truth. while some of them looked like mistakes, there're a plenty of sb files that aren't actually used. you can easily check it out by using a seach on the osb file since none of the osu files using the SB elements, I understood that you guys actually confused since the mapset contains a few of files that using the same name.
unused sb files that the modding assistant says
SB\BG\5.png
SB\cre\0042.png
SB\cre\006d.png
SB\cre\bm.png
SB\cre\sb.png
SB\cre\singer.png
SB\cre\title.png
SB\cre\glow\003a.png
SB\cre\glow\0042.png
SB\cre\glow\0048.png
SB\cre\glow\004d.png
SB\cre\glow\0053.png
SB\cre\glow\0061.png
SB\cre\glow\0062.png
SB\cre\glow\0063.png
SB\cre\glow\0064.png
SB\cre\glow\0065.png
SB\cre\glow\0068.png
SB\cre\glow\0069.png
SB\cre\glow\006b.png
SB\cre\glow\006d.png
SB\cre\glow\006f.png
SB\cre\glow\0070.png
SB\cre\glow\0072.png
SB\cre\glow\0073.png
SB\cre\glow\0074.png
SB\cre\glow\0079.png
SB\cre\glow\304e.png
SB\cre\glow\306a.png
SB\cre\glow\3084.png
SB\cre\glow\30c9.png
SB\cre\glow\30d3.png
SB\cre\glow\30ed.png
SB\cre\glow\30fc.png
SB\cre\glow\69d8.png
SB\cre\glow\6a21.png
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Topic Starter
Hokichi

Delis wrote:

alright, the problems regarding the storyboard have been solved.

Edit: I've been checking stuff in the mapset and according to the ranking criteria the soft-sliderslide.wav and soft-sliderwhistle.wav should use the 44kb silent .wav file instead of files made by somebody not official? having double check would be nice.

Edit2: ok another thing, I was finding errors with the modding assistant and I found that it's telling me the truth. while some of them looked like mistakes, there're a plenty of sb files that aren't actually used. you can easily check it out by using a seach on the osb file since none of the osu files using the SB elements, I understood that you guys actually confused since the mapset contains a few of files that using the same name.
unused sb files that the modding assistant says
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1. I extend those hitsound to 100ms, so it's ok now I hope
2. I re-generate those files, hopefully no unused files now
Delis

Hokichi wrote:

1. I extend those hitsound to 100ms, so it's ok now I hope
2. I re-generate those files, hopefully no unused files now
unused files seemed to be deleted but I still don't get the reason why you chose the way to extend them instead of using the 44kb file instead even though I have just talked regarding ranking criteria. and the reason why the soft-sliderwhistle.wav is being silenced too since you just remove the whistle where's been used in the map then the file will be useless. I don't know where it is though.

and as the SB problems have been addressed now, I would rather like plaudible to handle this map from now on. by the way having no spinner in normal is absolutely not a good idea because the first person who took the first place with 4 mods will stick there forever: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/292056?m=0
Plaudible
got him the blank file to use instead of extending them, once he fixes hitsounding i think we should be set to go. regarding the spinner ordeal, i'm on the fence on it, since the song doesn't really have great spots to support a spinner being thrown in. yamicchi did it fine so it could be something you could implement, though, but in the end it's up to you @hoki. once you fix the hitsounding stuff call me back for a recheck and rebub~
Seijiro
you have no bubble, why did you ask me

add disclaimer in desc about the spoilers your SB contains (yes, it's about the pic at 01:15:052 - , taken from the anime) not a big spoiler, but still a spoiler

the song ends at 01:29:479 - , unless you find a way to merge that last guitar stroke with the rest of the map {all diffs}
Check some past versions like jonathanlfj's or Fumika's for confirmation

Linada:
  1. 00:02:342 (3) - can't hear the triplet in the song tbh. High-hats and kicks alternate every 1/2, so there are no audible 1/4s
  2. 00:02:686 (5,6,7,8) - having these on piano and then 00:03:602 (1,2) - on drums sounds so bad, zzz. It's like forcing two magnets to interact both with the same pole. Not to mention that forcing such a rhythm creates an awkward passage on piano again on 00:04:289 - , most likely due to the flow which is not expressing the song.
    Possible fixes: 00:03:373 (8,1) - [url=osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784855]reduce the jump between these[/url], that way the piano takes over and there is proper emphasis; if you keep the previous screen, you could move 00:04:518 (3) - at x208 y304 (by using a stretched movement we sort of fix the missing emphasis on the previous slider tail and also fix the problem with 00:04:518 (3,4,5,6,1) - being un-expressive)
  3. there is a lot I would like to say, but I feel like it would be ignored, so here's the raw suggestion without any reasoning (because I would really go deep otherwise): 00:05:205 (6) - to x396 y244 ; 00:08:869 (6) - x356 y224
    I suggest this due to a peculiarity in the piano rhythm you ignored. You can ask me if you want the full explanation, but listening to 00:02:686 (5,6,7,8) - and 00:04:518 (3,4,5,6) - in the music should be enough to make you understand, hopefully
  4. 00:22:609 (2) - 00:26:273 (2) - I know they have a guitar beat on them, but they look like filler notes when all the patterns are either on drums or vocals
  5. 00:37:495 (3,4,5) - imo it would work better with a bigger jump between 3-4 and a smaller one between 4-5
  6. 00:45:510 (4,1) - what an awful emphasis on that slider. Also, the slider should be two clicks, if you listen to the drum. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784945 ?
  7. it would also be cool if you kept a pattern for all: 00:45:510 (4,1) - 00:49:403 (1,2,3) - 00:53:067 (1,2,3) - . It just seems you went with whatever was fine atm instead of noticing the similarities in the song <.<
  8. 00:56:273 (3) - your hitsounds do not match your pattern here. A better option would be to remove 3 repeats from the slider and using a circle at 00:56:502 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784963 // 01:13:449 (1) - cousin
  9. 01:05:205 (5,6,7) - this feels overmapped compared to 01:07:495 (5,6,1) - . The reason for that is that the second one is on drums, the same as all the other patterns, while the first is simply that sort of... keyboard sound which plays as a background instrument
  10. 01:10:014 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - soft piano notes would make more sense with smaller spacing than the drum parts tbh
  11. 01:21:464 (1,2,1,2) - wut. How come these are grouped by 2 and extra large when they are the same intensity as the rest of the vocal parts?
  12. 01:29:021 (1,2,1) - look at Yamicchi's for a better rhythm. 01:29:021 - 01:29:250 - 01:29:479 - are the same beat, but you decided to mix things up (as in the rest of the map). That makes the map unclear to me and just a mean to entertain the player while discarding the song
Yamicchi:
  1. 00:04:289 (1,2,3,4) - these feel like... 1-3-1-3-2 (representing emphasis. 3 is highest emphasis). That's why it would feel better to put bigger jumps on 00:04:518 (2,4) - . Same goes for the other instances where this rhythm appears
  2. 00:50:548 (3,4) - bigger jump on 4 would fit better. Ideally, 3 can be stacked under the previous slider.
    Just keep in mind the current flow on 00:50:548 (3,4,5,1) - is kinda meh due to the forced movement between 5-1 Random
  3. 00:52:838 - there is a background finish in the song here, so either remove the drum sample or just remove the entire note
  4. 01:20:548 (1) - what about dividing this slider into 01:20:548 - circle ; 01:21:006 - 1/2 slider?
  5. 01:29:479 (3) - just circle works better, if you delete 01:29:708 -
Hard:
  1. 00:06:121 (2,3,4) - Apart from the slight DS difference between 1-2-3. I would suggest a more natural flow like this
  2. 00:07:953 (1,2,3,1) - this is a surprisingly clean pattern considered the previous ones. While being this a praise, it is also a way to tell you that generally you could make the map look cleaner
  3. 00:13:678 (3) - wild soft whistle on slider body
  4. 00:19:403 (2,1) - forced movement I would rather avoid, but apart from that I would like it if you kept vocals over drums.
    The passage at 00:18:258 (1,2,1) - is really awkward because you have been following vocals quite well so far, but decided to skip the one at 00:18:945 - . Skipping that is not a big deal by itself, but the choice to use vocals for 00:19:403 (2) - IS a problem, since you mix things up in an uncomfortable way imo.
    00:18:258 (1) - remove repeat; 00:18:945 - 1/1 slider; 00:19:632 - 1/2 slider
  5. 00:43:449 (5,6) - clap goes on 6
  6. I assume hitsounds were took by your diff on Yamicchi, which explains why 00:52:609 (3) - is the same. That grave drum sample doesn't fit with the song: either remove the beat or remove the drum sample
  7. 00:56:273 (3) - go with circles if you want the double clap. Having the first clap clickable while not the second one feels strange
  8. 00:59:479 (3) - what do you think of a slider till 00:59:479 (3) - ?
  9. 01:05:434 (4,5,1) - tiny detail, but this stuff happens a bit everywhere: when there is no reason to break it, why not keeping a constant DS...
  10. 01:14:136 (3) - the bigger jump should go on this, and not on 01:13:907 (2) - . See how 01:14:136 (3,4,5) - are a triplet of strong beats
  11. 01:22:380 (1) - finish on head?
Normal:
  1. 00:02:457 (2) - if you remove this beat you can make 00:03:602 (1) - start from 00:03:373 - where the piano note is instead (which would make more sense)
  2. 00:06:121 (2) - same // 00:09:785 (2) - cousin
  3. 00:11:846 - why is this skipped tho
  4. 00:30:166 (3) - this would work better extended till 00:30:853 - instead
  5. 00:43:449 (3,1) - clap goes on 1's head
  6. 01:10:014 (2) - whistle is enough on head
  7. 01:22:380 (1) - finish on head
  8. 01:26:044 (1,1) - when for no reason things start changing... Not sure why the second one has to be curved, but I guess that's anime mapping for you..
  9. pretty sure you can make a spinner fit somewhere in the map
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Yamicchi
placeholder, replying tomorrow zzz I spent 12 hours for mapping today, exhausted.

MrSergio wrote:

Yamicchi:
  1. 00:04:289 (1,2,3,4) - these feel like... 1-3-1-3-2 (representing emphasis. 3 is highest emphasis). That's why it would feel better to put bigger jumps on 00:04:518 (2,4) - . Same goes for the other instances where this rhythm appears I don't feel the same tbh. I'm just expressing the pitch using the spacing instead, because pitch is the easiest to be noticed while playing.
  2. 00:50:548 (3,4) - bigger jump on 4 would fit better. Ideally, 3 can be stacked under the previous slider.
    Just keep in mind the current flow on 00:50:548 (3,4,5,1) - is kinda meh due to the forced movement between 5-1 fixed, but still not sure xd Random
  3. 00:52:838 - there is a background finish in the song here, so either remove the drum sample or just remove the entire note removed drum
  4. 01:20:548 (1) - what about dividing this slider into 01:20:548 - circle ; 01:21:006 - 1/2 slider? ok
  5. 01:29:479 (3) - just circle works better, if you delete 01:29:708 - hmm Idk I don't wanna delete that nor replacing the slider with a circle though
zzz

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Linada
holy moly

MrSergio wrote:

Linada:
  1. 00:02:342 (3) - can't hear the triplet in the song tbh. High-hats and kicks alternate every 1/2, so there are no audible 1/4s there is a kick on white tick and two 1/4 snaps on that weird instrument idk it's called
  2. 00:02:686 (5,6,7,8) - having these on piano and then 00:03:602 (1,2) - on drums sounds so bad, zzz. It's like forcing two magnets to interact both with the same pole. Not to mention that forcing such a rhythm creates an awkward passage on piano again on 00:04:289 - , most likely due to the flow which is not expressing the song.
    Possible fixes: 00:03:373 (8,1) - [url=osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784855]reduce the jump between these[/url], that way the piano takes over and there is proper emphasis; if you keep the previous screen, you could move 00:04:518 (3) - at x208 y304 (by using a stretched movement we sort of fix the missing emphasis on the previous slider tail and also fix the problem with 00:04:518 (3,4,5,6,1) - being un-expressive) Fixed with your way but changed slider direction slightly
  3. there is a lot I would like to say, but I feel like it would be ignored, so here's the raw suggestion without any reasoning (because I would really go deep otherwise): 00:05:205 (6) - to x396 y244 ; 00:08:869 (6) - x356 y224 hey that's cool
    I suggest this due to a peculiarity in the piano rhythm you ignored. You can ask me if you want the full explanation, but listening to 00:02:686 (5,6,7,8) - and 00:04:518 (3,4,5,6) - in the music should be enough to make you understand, hopefully
  4. 00:22:609 (2) - 00:26:273 (2) - I know they have a guitar beat on them, but they look like filler notes when all the patterns are either on drums or vocals they're filler rhythm but with the hitsounding hokichi did, i really like the rhythm created with filler rhythm here on that section
  5. 00:37:495 (3,4,5) - imo it would work better with a bigger jump between 3-4 and a smaller one between 4-5 i think it emphasize the clap better as it
  6. 00:45:510 (4,1) - what an awful emphasis on that slider. Also, the slider should be two clicks, if you listen to the drum. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784945 ? ok
  7. it would also be cool if you kept a pattern for all: 00:45:510 (4,1) - 00:49:403 (1,2,3) - 00:53:067 (1,2,3) - . It just seems you went with whatever was fine atm instead of noticing the similarities in the song <.<just kept same spacing for all, also changed 00:50:090 (1,2,3,4) - to make more contrast
  8. 00:56:273 (3) - your hitsounds do not match your pattern here. A better option would be to remove 3 repeats from the slider and using a circle at 00:56:502 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784963 // 01:13:449 (1) - cousin i'd rather remove clap tbh, feel buzz+circle would be too much for what the intensity here imo
  9. 01:05:205 (5,6,7) - this feels overmapped compared to 01:07:495 (5,6,1) - . The reason for that is that the second one is on drums, the same as all the other patterns, while the first is simply that sort of... keyboard sound which plays as a background instrument i dunno, because even if it's different than other triples, it's still snapped and add some rhythm rather than just 1/2 spams, if you really want to i'll remove tho not that much of a big deal
  10. 01:10:014 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - soft piano notes would make more sense with smaller spacing than the drum parts tbh i kinda agree but here the piano is really dominant on that part, way more than drums
  11. 01:21:464 (1,2,1,2) - wut. How come these are grouped by 2 and extra large when they are the same intensity as the rest of the vocal parts? yeah that part was topkek i never found something to my liking. now it's better
  12. 01:29:021 (1,2,1) - look at Yamicchi's for a better rhythm. 01:29:021 - 01:29:250 - 01:29:479 - are the same beat, but you decided to mix things up (as in the rest of the map). That makes the map unclear to me and just a mean to entertain the player while discarding the song well, i just went to 1 rhythm then
    the new ending may look a bit harder but considering it's bpm it's pretty easy to play, really play easily
z
thanks for the wall :D

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Topic Starter
Hokichi

MrSergio wrote:

you have no bubble, why did you ask me // It was bubbled, and Plaudible said he can't re-rebub, so I was thinking about requesting a t2 BN to check it and make sure everything is ready, then I can ask him to rebub

add disclaimer in desc about the spoilers your SB contains (yes, it's about the pic at 01:15:052 - , taken from the anime) not a big spoiler, but still a spoiler Okay

the song ends at 01:29:479 - , unless you find a way to merge that last guitar stroke with the rest of the map {all diffs}
Check some past versions like jonathanlfj's or Fumika's for confirmation // All diffs have that spot mapped, so I guess it's not a problem

Hard:
  1. 00:06:121 (2,3,4) - Apart from the slight DS difference between 1-2-3. I would suggest a more natural flow like this // Agree, fixed
  2. 00:07:953 (1,2,3,1) - this is a surprisingly clean pattern considered the previous ones. While being this a praise, it is also a way to tell you that generally you could make the map look cleaner // Sure
  3. 00:13:678 (3) - wild soft whistle on slider body // Fixed
  4. 00:19:403 (2,1) - forced movement I would rather avoid, but apart from that I would like it if you kept vocals over drums.
    The passage at 00:18:258 (1,2,1) - is really awkward because you have been following vocals quite well so far, but decided to skip the one at 00:18:945 - . Skipping that is not a big deal by itself, but the choice to use vocals for 00:19:403 (2) - IS a problem, since you mix things up in an uncomfortable way imo.
    00:18:258 (1) - remove repeat; 00:18:945 - 1/1 slider; 00:19:632 - 1/2 slider // I did this instead, hopefully it's fixed
  5. 00:43:449 (5,6) - clap goes on 6 // Fixed
  6. I assume hitsounds were took by your diff on Yamicchi, which explains why 00:52:609 (3) - is the same. That grave drum sample doesn't fit with the song: either remove the beat or remove the drum sample // Removing the drum beat sounds like a better idea
  7. 00:56:273 (3) - go with circles if you want the double clap. Having the first clap clickable while not the second one feels strange // Removed the second clap
  8. 00:59:479 (3) - what do you think of a slider till 00:59:479 (3) - ? // Till where?
  9. 01:05:434 (4,5,1) - tiny detail, but this stuff happens a bit everywhere: when there is no reason to break it, why not keeping a constant DS... // Changed
  10. 01:14:136 (3) - the bigger jump should go on this, and not on 01:13:907 (2) - . See how 01:14:136 (3,4,5) - are a triplet of strong beats // I extended the triangle
  11. 01:22:380 (1) - finish on head? // Sure
Normal:
  1. 00:02:457 (2) - if you remove this beat you can make 00:03:602 (1) - start from 00:03:373 - where the piano note is instead (which would make more sense)
  2. 00:06:121 (2) - same // 00:09:785 (2) - cousin // I followed Akitoshi's beat, so I think I'll keep it
  3. 00:11:846 - why is this skipped tho // Mapped
  4. 00:30:166 (3) - this would work better extended till 00:30:853 - instead // Fixed
  5. 00:43:449 (3,1) - clap goes on 1's head // Fixed
  6. 01:10:014 (2) - whistle is enough on head // Whistle followed the piano sounds, and I'm pretty sure I did it throughout the whole map, so I'll keep it that way
  7. 01:22:380 (1) - finish on head // Fixed
  8. 01:26:044 (1,1) - when for no reason things start changing... Not sure why the second one has to be curved, but I guess that's anime mapping for you.. // This is where I'm going to add a spinner instead
  9. pretty sure you can make a spinner fit somewhere in the map
z // zz
Thanks for the check!
Natsu
hey call me once u get a bubble, is that fine?

edit: I also dislike the top diff name lol, maybe try to change it?
Natsu
ask to delis if he is fine with the map now, since he popped it

general

  1. can u make the colors a bit more different
Linada's Glass Pattern

  1. 00:42:991 (3,1,2,3,1,2) - eh I really don't understand the structure of this pattern, can you make it more geometrical? atleast make 00:43:220 (1,3) - 00:43:449 (2,1) - have similar spacing visually
  2. 00:44:136 (2) - I don't agree with this, ending the slider on such important beat doesn't fit the song at all
  3. 01:28:219 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - also this is too much, and also a bit inconsistent, for example you don't have a 1/4 jump at 01:26:387 (4,5) - and the sound is basically the same as 01:28:219 (8,1) - just don't use the stream jump and also 01:29:021 (1,2,3,4) - the pressure points are 1 and 3, 2 and 4 are regular beats, so either make a 1/4 jumps or a normal stream
Yamicchi's Light Insane

  1. the OD makes no sense tbh, just use 7
Hard

  1. 00:19:632 (3,1) - blanket is super off
  2. 00:20:090 (1,2,3) - spacing
  3. 00:34:289 (4,5) - the stack leniency ruins your spacing
  4. 00:41:388 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - eh you can rebuild this pattern better, like the overlaps and the objects being at the same place doesn't really fit the rest of the map
  5. 01:28:334 (2,5) - try to avoid the overlap
    maybe try to make some clean up at this diff and also I'd nerf those star jumps, since the spread with the normal diff isn't that nice atm
Normal

  1. OD 4
  2. Just try to improve your blankets
if you fix the bolded things you can call me back once this gets rebubbled
Linada

Natsu wrote:

Linada's Glass Pattern

  1. 00:42:991 (3,1,2,3,1,2) - eh I really don't understand the structure of this pattern, can you make it more geometrical? atleast make 00:43:220 (1,3) - 00:43:449 (2,1) - have similar spacing visually fixed
  2. 00:44:136 (2) - I don't agree with this, ending the slider on such important beat doesn't fit the song at all Fixed but had to remove the buzz because it'll kill the playability pretty hard
  3. 01:28:219 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - also this is too much, and also a bit inconsistent, for example you don't have a 1/4 jump at 01:26:387 (4,5) - and the sound is basically the same as 01:28:219 (8,1) - just don't use the stream jump and also 01:29:021 (1,2,3,4) - the pressure points are 1 and 3, 2 and 4 are regular beats, so either make a 1/4 jumps or a normal stream fixed
all fixed ! also did some self-modding

@hokichi: i did put combo colors in my diff if you want to use them
also i think offset need -5 (1770) but i'm not entirely sure

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Topic Starter
Hokichi

Natsu wrote:

ask to delis if he is fine with the map now, since he popped it

general

  1. can u make the colors a bit more different // Sure, I'll use Linada's
Hard

  1. 00:19:632 (3,1) - blanket is super off // Fixed
  2. 00:20:090 (1,2,3) - spacing // Oops, sorry
  3. 00:34:289 (4,5) - the stack leniency ruins your spacing // Adjusted
  4. 00:41:388 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - eh you can rebuild this pattern better, like the overlaps and the objects being at the same place doesn't really fit the rest of the map // Hmm this can be hard
  5. 01:28:334 (2,5) - try to avoid the overlap // Okie
    maybe try to make some clean up at this diff and also I'd nerf those star jumps, since the spread with the normal diff isn't that nice atm // I will remove some of the overlaps, but will keep some
Normal

  1. OD 4
  2. Just try to improve your blankets
if you fix the bolded things you can call me back once this gets rebubbled
Thanks for the mods
Delis
p/6156115
I already mentioned that my pop reason was solved there (the SB), then I just found additional unrankable elements but apparently these also have been fixed now, you can get a rebubble.
Yamicchi
@Hoki change my Light Insane to OD7 please thanks
Plaudible
Everything addressed, looks like we're set for rebub :)
Natsu
ok
0109-
gratz :x
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HOKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
Pachiru
Finally!!
Congratz on your first ranked map (:
Topic Starter
Hokichi
Thanks guys
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