Insanefirst and formost, i wanna said that for me the biggest issue is that you're not putting emphasis on stronger beats, you could do that by increasing the spacing
and also some of your greenline is unsnapped like 00:49:050 - this one
snapped to 1/8 cause why not?with that said here goes
00:00:462 - feels underwhelming if you don't put something
I wanted all the diffs to start at the same place. Will continue to consider.00:03:958 (4,5,6) - this part feels untidy due to the overlap with 00:03:038 (5)
Fixed.00:12:425 (1) - 00:12:057 (6) - mirroring (6) can make the map a lot cleaner and flows nice too
smth like this you can do it to right or left up to you.
I like it. Using this.00:22:179 - you should make this clickable tbh
I like the slider here and I didn't want to add another circle so close to the double kick drum hitsound for 00:22:363 (1,2). 00:27:701 (1,2,3,4,5) - this doesn't flow well with the prev note
Fixed.00:28:437 (1) - see like you put proper emphasis on here, but not on the previous part.
00:29:725 (6,1) -
screenshot you could do this to put emphasis on the peak of the instrument and the next one
Changed with a similar pattern.00:33:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this jump feels kinda random to me, how about you make it more structured?
Fixed.00:35:799 (3,4) - how about u switched this two, (3) being the slider and yeah
Fixed.00:50:155 (6) - you could parallel this again so it looks cleaner
Kept pattern since I like it but made it cleaner.00:53:284 (5) - you could extend this into a 1/1 so it covers up the vocal
I wanted to map the two circles on the piano hits that happen at that point. Same pattern in the 2nd chorus as well for same reason.00:55:308 (6,7) - CTRL + G this two (for the rhythm)
Ongoing theme in the map is the double kick drum being mapped as a circle slider stack. Going to keep for now.00:57:517 -
kinda a better rhythm Fixed.01:02:118 (5) - this is ugly lmao
Fixed. 01:03:590 (1) - i found the lack of spacing emphasis on this is tilting XD
Increased spacing!01:07:087 (5) - just make it straight, that tilt isn't pretty
Made it mirror the the next slider.01:09:480 (1) - don't undermap this T_T
Made it same pattern as earlier pattern.01:16:842 (4,5,6) - 01:24:388 (1,4) - fix blanket with these 2, also (2) make ugly overlap with the slider
Fixed.01:25:492 (5) - not well shaped slider T_T
Changed slider shape.01:32:854 (6) - you should make this a slider to catch that short buildup
Conflicts with the established kick drum pattern. Keeping for now.01:44:449 - use a 1/1 to cover up the vocal
Conflicts with the established kick drum pattern. Keeping for now. It appears elsewhere in the map too: 00:30:277 (2,3,4)01:56:044 (4) - this could be cool if you CTRL+G this
I like it. Changed.01:59:357 (8) - need to be clickable, i will switch that with (7) if i were you
I like it. Changed.02:01:198 (5) - this slider need to start here 02:01:014 -
02:01:842 - remove this, the triplet doesn't fit imo
I wanted to map the drum rolls at this part.since the second kiai is p similiar, just take note of what i suggest on the first one and apply that to this one.
02:34:511 (8) - this slider start here and add a circle to the prev part (also shorten the slider into a 1/1)
I have no clue what you're talking about but fixed?02:52:547 (3,4) - this two at least for me, i would change that into reverses. and their position is awkward
Changed and fixed.03:46:658 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - lmao this is overkill
How so? I wanted to map the snare roll here. Keep for now. 03:57:149 (9) - i think a short slider would fit more appropiately rather than fast slider. color=#00BF00]Changed.[/color]