CraEZy wrote:

from q

no haitai, im disappointed

gen

you need a bpm reset at Offset: 16,664 | BPM: 180.00

also with this much timing, you need a precieved set sllider velocity. to find this, you take the bpm you want to be the set bpm and divide it by the current bpm that is straddling the bpm you want it to be. for this sake, lets use 180 bpm, as it's a pretty normal bpm for this map, you have your 186 bpm, which is faster than 180, so we have to compramise, so you do 180/186, and you get .968 (rounded) and you take that value, and put it on the same bpm as 186, and that sv is pretty close to the sv at 180 bpm.

for bpm 182, its .989

for bpm 185, its .972

for bpm 183, its .984

Edit: a perceived sv is only necessary on low level diffs

easy

there are too many sv changes

00:03:757 (2,1) - avoid overlap

00:06:338 (1,2) - maybe make these sliders a differnt shape so 00:11:499 (1) - is more special as it is calmer i've alternative

00:26:997 (6,1) - could line up better

normal

00:37:164 (4,5) - could line up beter

01:22:494 (5,1,2) - blanket better

hard

00:43:331 (1,2) - space these out a bit farther to keep spacing consistent

01:40:355 (3,1) - im pretty sure most people would read this as 1/2 not 1/1

insane

00:08:273 (7) - nc to show that youre changing from guitar to vocals? nope, because the vocal has a more intense sound from 00:08:918 - here

00:43:331 (1) - emphasise more this is a low voice that dont need more emphasise

insanity

I dont really think "Insanity" is a good name, more like "another" would be better, as it's usually associated with a light extra sort of diff how bout this diff?
Besides, this diff is still far from extra

hp 6 plz x)

I cant mod extras +

nice mapset, gl!

Blizs wrote:

<< Did I sing there ? But I'm peeking right now desu~!

here my candy uhh... mod!

General

1. Rather than deleting the red line on 00:16:998 , it should be moved to 00:16:664 - instead like CraEZy said. As the rules says :
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Uninherited (red) Timing Sections should be used to accurately map the song's timing. They should synchronize to the beats of the song as accurately as possible and use the correct time signature whenever possible. If an incorrect time signature would last for more than 2 bars, add another timing section to fix it. Please see Setting the Offset on the Correct Beat for more information on downbeats.

   That means we should put the big white tick (main beat) on the right position in the timing point.
2. Related to the rules above, you should add a red line on 01:28:086 - too.

bwt apa? lagu yg 180bpm emg mulai 01:27:420 - disini
[notice]

Easy

1. 00:32:664 (1,2,3,4,5) - It feels really strange when you suddenly change the pattern to follow the vocal without any transition. Generally you follow the snare drum before and you ignore it on 00:32:997 - And this point has a bit big effect too since this point has snare and the vocal "warai" starts here. So ignoring it seems not a good idea. And also since this is an Easy diff, keeping things consistent and easy to read is more important. I suggest to keep following the snares here like the other points. It also applied for 00:43:331 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2. 00:53:947 (1,2,3) - It seems empty without clap on their tails since the song have snares there (or maybe you just forgot to put it xd).
3. 01:37:897 (1) - You sure you need this nc ? it seems a bit weird to put a single combo here.

Normal

1. 00:47:164 (3,4,5) - It seems like you want to keep it consistent with 00:36:497 (3,4,5) - , but I think you don't really need to do that since they seems a bit different, both in vocal and instrument. Personally I like what you did on 00:36:497 (3,4,5) - since they follow the vocal and instrument nicely, but not on 00:47:164 (3,4,5) - . Since the main vocal is only heard on 00:47:497 - and 00:47:831 - , I think putting 00:47:164 (3) - 's tail on 00:47:497 - would be good.desu ne~ followed by a 1/2 slider and 1/1 slider after it for the following vocal on 00:47:997 - like this. It would follow both instrument and vocal nicely.

Hard

1. 00:56:585 - It seems a bit waste to ignore the cymbal here imo since it's really audible. How about do it like 00:53:618 (2,3,1,2) - on 00:56:420 (1,2) - ?

Insane

1. 00:32:997 (2,3) - How about ctrl+g them to give a click to the vocal on 00:33:164 - ? And also it seems there's nothing audible at 00:33:331 (3) - that deserve a click so put a slider tail here seems fair. If you do this don't forget to ctrl+g back the slider. And also if you ctrl+g 00:33:497 (4,5) - too it would be a nice flow >< but it's up to you since the current flow seems fine too.
2. 00:56:585 - Just like I said on Hard diff.

Insanity

1. 00:32:997 (2,3) - Also the same too Insane diff.
2. 01:31:253 (1) - How about add a backpoint to tell the player that the next slider head was on it's head too. Like this maybe ? agree

Extra

1. 00:32:997 (2,3) - Also the same too Insane diff.
2. 01:01:839 (1) - This slider is touching the HP bar in game play and that is really not recommended. You can make it a bit tilted to avoid this problem. Something like this might be work fine.

Rapsodi Para Pedo :V

1. 00:32:998 (2,3) - Also the same too Insane diff. (I've said it 3 times xd).

Nothing much I could mod here ;w; the set is too good.
personally, I like your style on mapping. Keep going with it .
Anyway take some stars for this amazing set and lolis :3 o/**
GL!~~

Reynolduh wrote:

hihihihihihihihihihihihihihihihi from my qqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqq

EAsy

SPOILER

01:02:822 - 01:03:478 - 01:05:445 - 01:06:101 - 01:09:379 - 01:13:314 - 01:13:970 - 01:15:937 - 01:16:593 - 01:19:871 - add circle? it'll hard to play, sice this is easy diff
would be better if 01:11:675 (5) - was changed to 1/2 slider and start at 01:11:511 - i've alternative
01:12:002 - add circle here! u did it for 01:22:494 (5) - so why not here? fixed
01:40:847 (2,3) - replace with spinner? looks weird

Normal

SPOILER

00:20:497 (4) - you skip over some important sounds here. try mapping them? maybe make 4 slider tail end 00:20:831 - and add a circle at 00:20:997 -
00:23:164 (4) - ^
00:28:497 (3) - the 'shi' sound ends here at 00:28:831 - maybe shorten slider tail to here and add circle at 00:28:997 - where the 'ii' sound is
00:31:164 (3) - ^
00:36:497 (3) - ^
00:39:164 (3) - ^
00:41:831 (3) - ^
00:47:164 (3) - ^
01:32:586 (4) - ^
01:35:252 (4) - ^
00:43:997 (2) - how about changing this into circles?
00:49:332 (2) - ^
00:50:486 - add circle here?
00:53:453 - ^
if i add circle on each point above, maybe this diff will be ''hard'' diff, even though it'll looks good
01:40:847 (1) - spinner? same as easy

Hard

SPOILER

01:40:847 (1,2,3) - spinner? same as easy
tf this diff is su gud

Insane

SPOILER

00:10:854 (3) - maybe don't overlap the tail end of slider? might confuse players thinking its just a circle (including me xD) fixed
00:20:497 (1) - slider tail end on tail. replace with circles or some other pattern instead
00:23:164 (1) - ^
00:24:164 (4) - ^
00:39:831 (4) - ^
01:32:586 (1) - ^
01:35:253 (1) - ^
01:36:253 (4) - ^
01:40:847 (1,2,3) - spinner?
1/1 slider to make it slightly varied so as not to seem monotonous when too many 1/2 rhythm
why all the harder diff so gud

ACTUALLY i'll end it here cause i can't find anymore flaws. just remember to add spinners at the end! on every 01:40:847 (1,2,3) - there's important sound, it'll looks weird if replace it with spinner you don't want cluttered scores now do you?

YashaPlay wrote:

Hello from my Modding Queue!

Easy

Very Good!

Normal

Dark sliders!
01:01:839 (1,2,3,4) - I think it so hard for Normal the vocal on reff has intense sound, i think this already gud

Hard

Sliders very dark!
I like this Hard!

Insane

Slider very dark!
Very simple jump's (i don't like it)

Insanity

Dark sliders
01:21:347 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like jumps there

Extra

Dark sliders)

Rhapsody of the Lolicon

Dark Sliders

I LIKE YOUR MAP! HF!

Nevertary wrote:

Blizs wrote:

<< Did I sing there ? But I'm peeking right now desu~!

here my candy uhh... mod!

General

1. Related to the rules above, you should add a red line on 01:28:086 - too.

bwt apa? lagu yg 180bpm emg mulai 01:27:420 - disini

AchsanLovers wrote:

yes 500 post hype yey

1. remap all difficulties for better flow
2. insanity & extra've been deleted

Saltssaumure wrote:

Is this still being worked on? yes

Nevertary wrote:

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Milar001 wrote:

Hi, from my queue

[Hard]
00:15:693 - Give a click i snap a circle for drum sound/vocal+drum, not vocal only
00:17:164 - Fill what sound're here
00:19:830 - ^ ^
00:23:830 (3,4) - Start on white tick i think the voice is on the red thick
00:34:497 (3) - Rotate nope, this gud enough for emphasise the sound
00:41:497 (3) - Breaking flow I know, but I do not think this causes any discomfort when aiming
00:54:761 - Give a click and nc there instead of 00:55:091 (1) - i snap circle for drum only on this section even though the vocal has more intense sound i think nc already good
00:56:080 (3) - Nc ^
00:57:234 (3) - ^^
01:23:795 (4) - Snap more i dont get it

[Insane]
00:01:660 (2,3,1,2) - Don't start sliders on red tick. Basically it's better here to focus on music not vocals and fill it all with simple 1/2 sliders and circles (from 00:01:177 (1) - to 00:06:015 (4) - ) i took a reference from here
00:13:435 - and 00:13:596 - fill like what a say on hard diff
00:15:693 - Give a click here ^
00:16:664 - Remove red line it'll looks weird even though the same bpm
00:23:163 (1) - Like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8900927 this good enough because 00:23:163 (1,3) - can be made a blanket
00:35:330 (1) - This and 00:35:830 (2,3) - are the same so map in same waywhut's wrong with this? slider shape? flow? :/
00:45:497 (4) - Rotate because 00:45:997 (1) - this object is facing downwards the sliderend should face upwards

01:22:483 (3) - Nc here instead of 01:22:811 (1) -I just adjust to the prefix of the stream even though the vocal starts here

Good luck with mapset

Nikoxellunia wrote:

Hi, I'm here for NM.

Easy

00:32:663 (1) , 00:43:330 (1) - Are you following the vocals or the instrumentals? instrumental
01:25:434 (1,2,3,4) - I think here should be Kiai. why? this is no longer the hard rhythmic part

Normal

00:29:663 (6) , 00:32:330 (6) , 00:40:330 (6) , 00:42:997 (6) - The circles seems a bit unneeded. i follow the instrumental
00:32:663 (1) - Are you following the vocals or the instrumentals? yes

Hard

00:05:047 (1,2) , 00:07:628 (1,2) - If you want to follow the instrumentals here, you should use new comble. but this is ineed a new combo :/

I'm not an expert, so I may be completely wrong.

tiffany yu tyu wrote:

hi from my NM!
its pretty hard to mod yours because I am a noob (pssst its good u know)
I think everything I said here is optional, change it if you think that make sense.

Easy

there are too many reverse slides which beginners don't use them a lot. like 00:59:212 (1,2) - (change some if u want)
01:29:734 - there is a strong beat there, put something there will be better i'll avoid 1/2 used
01:38:206 (4,5) - a bit overmapped, follow 01:36:894 (2) - will be better, plus there is no any beat on the end of (4) there's a sound on 4's end
like this
(change this if u want)
btw no background? XD wtf

Normal

00:01:015 (1) - I don't think there is a beat or what, delete it
and IDK fixed

Hard

00:01:015 (1) - same as the normal one not for hard, i took a reference from here

I think that's it, I hope this can help u

- Frontier - wrote:

loli ah

[General]

1. Difficulties end time is not consistent:
   
   1. 01:41:811 - Easy
   2. 01:41:156 - Normal
   3. 01:41:811 - Hard
   4. 01:41:156 - Insane
   And looks like each difficulty has different ending. (like normal diff use spinner in the end, which is pretty weird since the other diffs didn't do like this) Consider making them the same to make consistency in the mapset.
2. Color 5 is quite too bright. Consider darken this color a bit (like under 210 luminosity) to avoid too bright color.
3. Are you the owner of the song? yes gakkou gurashi isn't loli lol
4. I think you should add japanese title or whatnot (like アンハッピーエンドワールド, がっこうぐらし！or ゆるゆり♪♪) in tags to make it suitable for somebody who wants to find in japanese.

[Timing]

1. 01:01:828 - Having your Inherited Point (green point) and your Timing point (red point) with different kiai settings is unrankable. Consider adding kiai in Timing point to make them consistent.

[Easy]

1. :thinking:
2. 00:06:338 (1,2) - Maybe avoid having these note with 1/2 gap, since these are the only one in this diff that have 1/2 gap. Why don't you make something like this to avoid 1/2 gap?
3. 00:11:499 (3) - Maybe add nc here to emphasize the less intense sound.
4. 00:37:163 (4,2) - Don't know if you're intend to make the movement goes reverse but i think you should make the slider the same to make a perfectly overlapped sliders.
5. 00:59:212 (1,2,3) - I think you should make it a 2/1 slider here instead. Using 2/3 is quite too fast to be comprehended by beginners.

[Normal]

1. 00:14:080 (3) - Maybe add nc here to emphasize the stronger sound.
2. 00:15:693 - I think here should be mapped since the vocal here is quite noticeable.
3. 00:25:663 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - Avoid long chains of hitobjects with 1/2 gaps. This can cause players to click continuously and can eventually miss. Try to make a break (1/1 gaps) to give players a time.
4. 00:51:959 (2) - Having this note flip downwards looks better in flow.
5. 00:59:212 (1,2) - hi did you copy from easy?
6. 01:37:386 (3) - I think this should be 1/2 slider with 2 reverses. i took reference from this
7. 01:39:434 (1) - As I mentioned before, it is better to make hitobjects here instead of spinner.

[Hard]

1. 01:00:531 - Having your Inherited point and your Timing point different volumes on the same spot is unrankable, please make them the same for consistency.

Copy-pasting from part to another part lacks of creativity and should be discouraged. Also, it makes the map boring. fixed for hard
GL~

bezbashn wrote:

[Easy]
~

[Normal]
00:06:225 - x80 y256 there's no object that can be moved

[Hard]
01:20:680 - sliderend 1 tick to left remapped

[Insane]
01:07:401(2,3,4,5,6) - Ctrl+Shift+D ????

It's nicely mapped. GL!

Satania Daimaou wrote:

Satania Desu :3


Here's your Mod From Team Frontline Modding Queue

Easy

1. Gk ada masalah, Good map :3

Normal

1. Good Map :3

Hard

1. Au ah terang :3

Insane

1. 00:13:757 - bisa diubah gk patern nya, rasanya gk pas... suara drum nya dari 1 s/d 4 makin rendah, klo pke linear stream kyknya kurang variatif
2. Sisanya udh sipp :3

Bagus map nya moga cepat ranked
Bonus 2 star dr ane awwww thank you >w<

Good luck

Kyousukee wrote:

Insane
not stacked properly? 00:17:330 (3) - 01:29:401 (4) -
i think nc at here 01:13:959 (2) - would be nice cause the flow change at there I'll just put a new combo if the pitch is really changed, not just the vocals/flow
ctrl+g these 01:40:828 (1,2) - and make this 01:41:156 (3) - stacked on 01:40:828 (1) - would be nice than the current one imo, the flow at there is good ! also at this 01:41:156 (3) - , it got a big loud so player need space for get that as circle as final strike, however, the current one has a little space. remapped

Hard
rhythm at 00:55:586 (2) - is unsuitable imo, u can hear the big loud at sliderend of the reverse . would be good if duplicate it like 00:54:432 (2,3) - and 00:57:069 (2,3) -
01:39:026 (5) - not nc it ? u already do it at 01:22:483 (1) - and 01:11:991 (1) - i think I guess 01:39:026 (5) - here there is no difference of sound like at 01:22:483 (1) - and 01:11:991 (1) here
01:29:068 (2) - 1/1 slider at here is not good idea imo cause got a sound need to be click on that sliderend. such as 01:35:234 (1,2) - is good at here , unfortunately , you're not do this on 01:29:068 (2,3) - , 01:31:734 (2,3) - remapped
00:34:830 (4) - ctrl+g this is good flow i think with that 1/1 slider , here too 00:45:497 (4) -
i think these space 00:52:289 (4,1) - is a bit off with that flow at there
ctrl+g this 01:13:303 (4) - for consistent with 01:15:598 (3,4) - but it will be not consistent with 01:02:483 (3,4) -

Normal
ignore that gap 01:36:567 (1,2) - like this is bad flow i think, player need to enjoy the music. In addition, ar 5 at there will make player miss at there imo. u can fix it by remove this 01:37:222 (2) - then make that 1/1 slider to the reverse xD but i took a reference from here
make this nc 00:52:619 (3) - would be tell the player that reverse is twice ! as long as it's not a different pitch, I will not put a new combo uwu

Easy
new player got a problem with the reverse at 1st, at here, u make 2 reverse 00:08:918 (1,2) - . would be nice 1 reverse only and make that another reverse become 2 circle . you can put circle at white tick 1/1 gap at there i dun get it
00:19:163 (1,2,3,4) and 01:31:234 (1,2,3,4) - try to give your friend which is new to the osu play this , then u can understand xP tapi aku tak punya teman idk what kind of rhythm structure is suitable for new players in this part of the song :'' . if I put too much 1/1 in, it will look out of sync with the song
i think this 00:25:663 (3) - should start at red tick, or u just put a circle one at there !1 circle will make it more weird. i guess
here too 00:33:663 (3) - , start at white tick is not bad , however , the flow is not good at there , u alrdy do this 00:36:497 (3) - there's a difference in vocall intensity between the 2 points you says
00:44:330 (3) - ^ ^
overlap 00:37:163 (4,2) - if i stack this, it will look more confusing for new player

glgl