i will report this map if it gets ranked before deus ex machina does
riunosk wrote:
from mod queue 1 2 3 4mamahiragud luk for renk00:30:457 (30457|2,30613|1) - if these were following the vocals, 00:31:707 - there should be notes here and 00:32:957 - and so on // i follow some kind of echo, not vocal
00:42:645 (42645|1,42645|2) - on hearing at 25%, it sounds like a triple note burst // ahh, too hard to hear though D:
01:31:395 (91395|0,91551|0,91707|0,91863|0,92020|0,92176|0,92332|0) - im assuming this is intended? // nope, moved some
01:42:957 (102957|1,103113|1,103270|1,103504|1,103660|1,103816|1) - somewhat broken anchor // mm i'll move some stuff
01:52:879 (112879|0,112957|0) - any reason for forcing this minijack? // hoo for transition to the next part, kinda light tho so i think its fine
02:55:457 (175457|2,175613|2,175770|2,175926|2) - anchor // keep, actually to make things a little intense towards the end of the kiai
04:43:113 (283113|2,283270|2,283426|2,283582|2,283738|2,283895|2,284051|2,284207|2,284363|2) - ^
04:44:207 (284207|1,284363|1,284520|1,284676|1,284832|1) - ^why
04:45:457 (285457|3,285613|3,285770|3,285926|3,286082|3) - ^the
04:46:395 (286395|2,286551|2,286707|2,286863|2,287020|2,287176|2) - ^sudden
04:47:332 (287332|0,287488|0,287645|0,287801|0,287957|0,288113|0,288270|0,288426|0) - ^anchor
04:50:770 (290770|3,290926|3,291082|3,291238|3,291395|3,291551|3,291707|3) - ^spike
04:51:082 (291082|0,291238|0,291395|0,291551|0,291707|0,291863|0,292020|0) - ^??
04:52:020 (292020|3,292176|3,292332|3,292488|3,292645|3,292801|3,292957|3,293113|3,293270|3,293426|3,293582|3,293738|3,293895|3) - big one
04:57:332 (297332|3,297488|3,297645|3,297801|3,297957|3,298113|3,298270|3,298426|3) - ^
04:59:207 (299207|3,299363|3,299520|3,299676|3,299832|3,299988|3,300145|3,300301|3,300457|3) - ^
// hehehe, i'll try to move some anchors, but they were intended for the stream direction, left-to-right and right-to-left stream direction, following pitches per each stanzas, i'll see if i can reduce the anchor, i forgot to put bookmarks tho
Interesting chart, but sudden anchor spikes at the end
btw what has camellia got to do with anything here? did he make the track?
also i added a new map that you can do a m4m for here
juicy bg
DDMythical wrote:
1 / 2 / 3 / 4
ignoring the no marathon rule on my queue becausecute loli bgyou m4m'dGeneralWhat a strange place for a preview point!
I would cut the mp3 to save filespace because bns are generally picky about that. You can easily move the preview point so i imagine this wont be a major issue for you.Flower01:14:363 (74363|1,74520|1,74676|1) - Strange anchors in the stream, Could repattern out
01:15:613 (75613|1,75770|1,75926|1) - ^
01:18:035 (78035|2,78191|2,78348|2,78504|2) - ^
01:20:770 (80770|2,80926|2,81082|2) - ^
01:23:035 (83035|2,83191|2,83348|2,83504|2) - ^
01:23:973 (83973|2,84129|2,84285|2) - ^
01:24:832 (84832|1,84988|1,85145|1) - ^
02:23:738 (143738|2) - This note is a bit weird as it leads into the massively long anchor but with a different sound. You could put this on 4th column and change the previous double to [12] // only keep this, the small anchor is actually intended, that's how i put kick > snare or kick > cymbol (or big beats)
reeee i literally cant mod this because its really well layered and i cant notice any problems
Tofu1222 wrote:
I was intending to make this but hmmm....
then i will focus on my Bassdrop Freaks...
Mod here XDD
[Flowers]That's all. Good luck and hope my mods can help you! // it really is! thank you for the detailed mods! some idea aren't fully rejected, some are rearranged differently
- 01:22:566 (82566|1,82645|2,82723|1,82801|2) - and 01:22:957 (82957|1,83035|2,83113|1,83191|2) - are really similar, i suggest u vary the pattern between them // ok
- 01:29:207 - 01:29:832 - 01:30:457 - 01:31:082 - these sounds should definitely be emphasized by the double cuz u use double for these sounds before, and it is strong enough to put double. If u are concerned about marking the difference between 01:29:051 (89051|3,89051|2,89207|3) -, u can make those in different columns so that they will be emphasized and difference will be noted out obviously // i'll keep this, its kind of gimmick where the anchor has emphasized the light snare already hihihi
- 01:37:176 (97176|1,97176|3) - this is the same sound as 01:34:676 (94676|1,95301|2,95926|1) - so if u double that, u have to double all of these 01:34:676 (94676|1,95301|2,95926|1) - // another gimmick i try to implement here, you got the idea, the kick sound where it has 1/2 space before the snare has 1 note, the anchor emphasize it, while the double one is where the kick far enough to the next snare.. i'll refine this arrangement either way
- 01:37:801 - 01:38:426 - make sure u also double these two if u accept my previous idea
- 01:39:676 (99676|2,100301|1,100926|2,102801|2,103504|1) - ^
- 01:44:676 (104676|2,105301|1,105926|2,107801|2,109676|1,110301|2,110926|1) - ^
- 01:49:520 - 01:50:145 - 01:50:770 - u only put double notes in this part for the vocal sound but not on the previous parts. It seems really inconsistent cuz this part really doesnt make such big difference with the previous one. I suggest not to double these sounds too in this part // hehe you got the idea of this double, and yea it was intended to add some notes to highlight them so it become sightly (but not really) denser to the end of kiai, i want to give some escalating density in there, will consider to remove tho!
- 01:52:801 (112801|2,112801|3,112879|0) - they have the same sounds, so better double 01:52:879 (112879|0) - // oo i'll make them single then.. applied
- 01:54:676 (114676|0,115301|3,115926|1,117801|3,118426|0) - same as above // i might add doubles here to differ this section and the previous one.. thought?
- 01:58:895 - u also need a double here // okay
- 01:59:676 (119676|3,120301|0,120926|1,122801|0,123426|2,123738|3) - same for double
- 02:04:676 (124676|3,125301|2,125926|0,127801|2,128426|3,128895|2) - ^
- wont go forward for the double notes issue. Remember just to double those with W sound // xD i know, if more people point this out i'll consider to fix
- 02:13:582 (133582|0,133582|1,133582|2,133660|3,133738|2,133816|1) - 02:08:582 (128582|0,128582|1,128582|3,128660|2,128738|0,128738|3,128816|1) - should all be double? according to this: 01:43:582 (103582|2,103582|3,103660|1,103660|0,103738|2,103738|3,103816|1,103816|0) - // different section, also the denser JS is on kiai
- 02:17:488 - 02:17:801 - need double and add W sounds // omg i didn't caught those kick, added
- 02:22:332 - 02:22:645 - better add notes here // hmm i have different idea
- 02:23:113 (143113|1,143270|1,143738|2,143895|2) - if ok u may avoid such small jacks imo
- 02:33:895 - to 02:35:145 - should all be double imo. As u can see this part: 02:23:895 - 1/1 02:31:395 - 1/2 02:33:895 - 1/4 // welp i won't make long JS, but instead its become denser now
- 02:47:488 (167488|1) - may wanna move to 4 to at least nerf some left-hand bias here // ok, evil D:
- 02:56:551 (176551|0,176551|1,176629|3) - these two same sounds so if double then both double // ok
- 03:09:207 (189207|1,189207|0,189233|2,189233|3) - what's this??? // echo XD im sure there's 2 different snare there
- 03:12:020 (192020|3,192020|0,192020|2) - only F sound here why triple? better nerf to single note // the chime is somehow contrast to be layered differently, so i put triple
- 03:17:020 (197020|2,197020|0,197020|3) - ^ // same
- 03:46:551 - piano sound here add notes
- 04:07:645 - 04:08:270 - 04:08:895 - 04:10:145 - 04:11:395 - make them all double notes cuz F sound just like what u do at 04:12:645 (252645|3,252645|0) - // different part, those single are intended as a variation
- 04:19:207 (259207|3,259832|0,260457|1,261082|2) - double them. Reason as 01:29:207 - 01:29:832 - 01:30:457 - 01:31:082 - // ok
- 04:42:801 (282801|2,282801|0,282879|3) - so if double both double
- 04:46:082 (286082|1,286082|3,286082|0,286160|2,286238|1,286238|0,286316|3,286395|0,286395|2) - why not try double all of them like what u did here 04:48:582 (288582|3,288582|2,288660|0,288660|1,288738|2,288738|3,288816|1,288816|0,288895|3,288895|2) - // different sound
thank you for mod! o,o not sure if next mod will points out another issueMage wrote:
just some things
00:00:145 - 00:05:145 - make doubles // i got the idea, but i'll keep everything single in the intro :3
01:04:051 - sound, add note // added and some thing rearranged
01:04:285 - add note, but i'm not sure, maybe you wanted to highlight vocal // rearranged as above ^
02:57:176 - 02:57:410 - should be doubles // applied differently
03:42:957 - LNs should ends here cuz sound ends here // 1/4 earlier but okay!
04:09:520 - 04:10:145 - 04:10:770 - 04:11:395 - would be cool if you put here doubles to highlight vocal // hmmmmmmmm i want to D: but i want to make a single stream in this section
04:23:895 - double? // dense and evil.. i like it.. ok!
yah di apply 1 doangan D: btw thanks dah nge cek beb <3Virtue- wrote:
General
- Metadata : OK!
- BPM/Offset : OK!
- BG/Video : OK!
- Hitsound : OK!
- Files : OK!
1|2|3|4i guess that's it, good luck!
- [Flower]
- 00:17:020 (17020|0,17645|1,18738|3,18816|2,18895|1) - http://puu.sh/wHjO1/3b17283177.jpg gpp sih, cmn rada susah gitu ya mencetny. 00:17:020 (17020|0) - mending turunin ujungny 1 bar biar sejajar sama sblhny, biar ena // a e s t h e t i c s
- 00:19:832 (19832|2,19910|3,19988|0) - jadiin gini aja, ena kok http://puu.sh/wHjUl/64c058b487.jpg // pen nge mirror yg atas :C
- 00:21:395 (21395|3) - sama nih, turunin 1 bar // :S hmm pen konsisten sama yg atas
- 00:28:895 (28895|3,28895|2,29363|0,29441|1,29520|3,29598|2,29676|1,29754|0,29832|2,29910|3,29988|2,30066|1) - http://puu.sh/wHjXm/87f96a5162.jpg pls ajee, susah amat di pencet astaga.. cobain ini dah http://puu.sh/wHjZb/fb0d2121c6.jpg // sek sek, di bikin lebih mudah
- 01:46:551 - add note, ada hi hat // spicy spacing, keep, gimmick tho
- 01:53:582 (113582|3,113660|2) - double aja // sek, baru kiai 1, di bikin gk mashy, (di bedain sama kiai 2)
- 02:07:801 (127801|2,128426|3) - sengaja single? // di semua part yg nge-anchor 1/2 satu satu aja C:
- 02:37:254 (157254|2,157293|1,157332|0,157371|3,157410|2,157449|1,157488|0,157527|2,157566|1,157605|3,157645|0,157645|2) - :'VV mungkin gini lebih gud http://puu.sh/wHkkD/65eb337701.png // yah, 02:37:488 (157488|0,157527|2,157566|1,157605|3,157645|2) - ini nya sengaja biar gk JS banget
- 03:36:941 - add LN buat vocal? // no vocal, biar yg main pencet pencetan improvisasi sendiri awokawokwokwkwk
- 03:59:051 - add note, ada piano // ok, headset gw kurang bagus, add ae lah klo kata org ada piano mah
- 04:01:395 (241395|0) - jadiin LN buat vocal, trs tambahin LN juga di 04:02:645 - // nda mau isi vocal huee..
eyes wrote:
General
Add tags: Comiket コミケット Comic Market コミックマーケット 91 リリース C91 // added
MAybe reduce BG picture's resolution to 1366x996 for decreasing file size // 1920x1080, sure
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[Flowers]
Reduce OD to 7.7-7.9 because of complex LNs // the rest of the map is only rice though, the ln part only covers at least 10% of total, would be too easy to mash
by 00:00:145 - till 00:10:145 - too loud hitsounds, please reduce to +-20% // keep, instead added keysounds :^^^)
00:10:145 - make this triple, because this it has bass sound, but 00:27:645 - this double has no bass sound. // keep, the anchor should be enough to emphasize, also too early imo
00:35:281 (35281|2) - I think it should be on 00:35:301 // omg nice catch
00:37:762 (37762|0) - delete? I can't catch the sound // the highest pitch of the glissando is there, keep
00:38:953 (38953|0) - delete (same reason as above) and move it 00:39:012 (39012|3) - to 00:39:025 // ^ same reason
00:40:223 (40223|1) - not sure but I think should be on 00:40:249 // i think so, moved
00:57:671 - missed sound maybe
01:02:684 - ^ // nice idea, added
01:34:676 (94676|1,95301|2,95926|1,97801|1,99676|2,100301|1,100926|2,102801|2,104676|2,105301|1,105926|2,109676|1,110301|2,110926|1) - I think these should be doubles // as i stated in previous mod reply, will keep the kicks on anchor with single note when it has 1/2 distance to the snare, and double if it has 1/1 distance to the snare
Suggestion: 04:43:973 (283973|1) - move to 04:43:895 // nice, moved
upd: 03:09:207 (189207|1) - remove hitsound, these two notes 03:09:207 (189207|0,189233|3) - are very close and sounds almost in one moment so it sounds like 3 snares // yuss sounds better now, removed..
Unpredictable wrote:
not all too big on Nanahira but i like camellia tho >:]
1|2|3|4Flowers- 01:23:895 I was thinking about adding another note here..? My reasoning for it is I think that it's way more significant than 01:24:207 (84207|0,84207|3) - and with a hand, I think it shows difference and emphasize. Up to you tho // mmmm naw, still not as intense as the other downbeat, considerable tho
- 02:30:691 (150691|2,150848|2) - eh not a fan of the stack here, maybe moving 02:30:691 (150691|2) - this to column 4? // a follow up from 02:30:613 (150613|0,150770|0) - but sure, moved
Not else to say
Honestly, this map is really good. I seriously like it a lot. It follows the song pretty well and I couldn't find much wrong with it. You might have made me like Nanahira a little bit more. Take a star as well! Wasn't much but hope you enjoy.
P.S. This BG tho is uh... wow is uh like "definitely" about flowers ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
omg thank you, i thought to finish the 7K later but glad there's some other people who interested into it thank you thank you thank you thank youMrDorian wrote:
Hi owo/
I'm from RRM queue and here's your mod!
sniped Kaito :^) // wow4knice one, couldn't find much :'v01:29:207 (89207|3) - I do not really understand why it is one note only. There is that "tick" and 01:29:051 (89051|2) - "bass" or how to call this sound. It is rather inconsistent because there's strong sound combined with another sound. I'd suggest adding another note in 2 to make 4 notes stack. // intended for unorthodox gimmick, also i rely the anchor for emphasize
01:37:801 (97801|1) - missing note, the sound has the same intensitivity as 01:36:395 (96395|2) -
01:42:801 (102801|2) - 01:47:801 (107801|2) - ^ // another gimmick i want to implement, all these kicks in the 3/4 part of the 1st kiai / chorus (and the 2nd verse) are intended to be one note, every kicks that are having 1/2 distance to the next snare is mini-anchored to catch the "lite" feeling of this track.
01:50:145 (110145|3,110145|0) - this should have one note, is different with 01:49:520 (109520|3,109520|2) - // i break the gimmick in this part for transition before the next verse.. so its intended
02:17:723 (137723|1) - are you sure there's a sound? // nope >.> removed
02:55:926 (175926|2) - could you move it to 4? 4 notes anchor looks terrible here // oke, didn't notice that anchor lel
03:51:707 (231707|1) - you could move this to 4, because 03:51:863 (231863|2) - here sounds start to repeat // i like my current trill-y 2323 to emphasis the repeats tho, will consider to move
04:19:207 (259207|3) - same suggestion as before in similiar part // huehuehue
04:25:613 (265613|1) - move to 4 to avoid anchor on 2 perhaps / ok
04:43:113 (283113|2,283152|3,283191|0,283230|1,283270|2,283270|3,283348|0,283426|2,283426|1,283504|0,283504|3,283582|2,283660|0,283660|1,283738|2,283738|3) - you could ctrl+h this, right hand is used a bit in this kiai // ok
that bookmark spam later wew // the structure behind the stream are marked with the bookmark :3
good luck owo/
call me when u'll finish 7k, gonna mod it as well
11:01 Arzenvald: allo
11:02 Arzenvald: jadi inget klo dulu usagi san xD
11:02 Ridho 2307: emangnya pas dulu namanya usagi panggilannya itu yah? ;v
11:03 *Ridho 2307 is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/992512 Kurokotei - Galaxy Collapse [Cataclysmic Hypernova]] <osu!mania> -HalfTime |4K|
11:03 Ridho 2307: rip stamina
11:09 Ridho 2307: kamu punya map yang bisa w mod gak? gw lagi bosen banget nih
11:09 Ridho 2307: nm aja
11:19 Arzenvald: weh
11:19 Arzenvald: 7K tapinya
11:19 *Arzenvald is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1368838 Nanahira - Petals [7K Fine Grills]]
11:19 Ridho 2307: irc aja yah
11:19 Arzenvald: sbb baru masak
11:19 Arzenvald: yeh baru mau makan ini
11:19 Arzenvald: ; ;
11:19 Ridho 2307: kamu ngekos yah?
11:20 Arzenvald: ngga, tinggal di rumah sodara
11:20 Arzenvald: sendiri tapinya
11:20 Ridho 2307: senasib dong
11:20 Arzenvald: lha
11:20 Arzenvald: kuliah?
11:20 Ridho 2307: lagi nunggu univ nih
11:20 Ridho 2307: kapan uktnya keluar
11:21 Ridho 2307: univ vangke
11:21 Ridho 2307: :v
11:21 Arzenvald: ukt?
11:21 Arzenvald: gw kerja freelance sih, entah berantah soal kuliah dsb. o,o
11:22 Ridho 2307: saudara kerja, anaknya sekolah, dan kini tinggal lah dirumah seorang diri
11:23 Arzenvald: hoo
11:23 Ridho 2307: ukt = Uang kuliah tunggal
11:23 Arzenvald: hoo
11:24 Arzenvald: ongkos bensin? :v
11:24 Ridho 2307: ewntah :v
11:24 Ridho 2307: btw itu lagunya berapa min?
11:28 Arzenvald: marathon
11:28 Arzenvald: mending post tbh
11:28 Ridho 2307: gpp
11:29 Ridho 2307: irc aja
11:29 Ridho 2307: rada lemot soalnya kalo osu +browser
11:36 Arzenvald: wes
11:36 Arzenvald: '3' sbb lagi, baru posting di mq
11:37 Arzenvald: huehue
11:37 Ridho 2307: btw sbb itu apaan sih?
11:37 Arzenvald: sorry baru bales
11:38 Ridho 2307: oh
11:39 Ridho 2307: lah...kirain
11:39 *Arzenvald is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1368838 Nanahira - Petals [7K Fine Grills]]
11:39 Ridho 2307: btw mutualan kuy
11:39 Arzenvald: penuh ; ;
11:39 Arzenvald: eh
11:39 Arzenvald: EH BISA
11:39 Arzenvald: oiya kemarin dah remove beberapa
11:40 Ridho 2307: btw lu yuricon yah?
11:40 Ridho 2307: tuh ada 4 k kok
11:40 Arzenvald: apaan
11:40 Arzenvald: awokawokawokwk
11:40 Ridho 2307: _-
11:40 Arzenvald: gw nyari gambar yg relevan
11:40 Arzenvald: 4K udah di mod banyak
11:41 Arzenvald: 7K baru selesai pagi ini 'w'
11:42 Ridho 2307: berarti 7k nya baru ane dong yang sentuh?
11:42 Arzenvald: yap
11:42 Ridho 2307: XD
11:42 *Ridho 2307 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1368838 Nanahira - Petals [7K Fine Grills]]
11:42 Ridho 2307: gw mulai sekarang yah
11:42 Arzenvald: ok
11:43 Arzenvald: gw kuat kuatin online stengah jam sebelum tidur
11:43 Ridho 2307: 1|2|3|4|5|6|7
11:43 Arzenvald: btw ini style o2jam lama, so harap maklum klo kolum nya banyak yg kosong
11:43 Ridho 2307: 00:03:113 - gak dijadiin 2 note aja disini?
11:44 Arzenvald: a
11:44 Arzenvald: baru bilang
11:44 Ridho 2307: kasih impact buat suara beningnya
11:44 Arzenvald: xD
11:44 Ridho 2307: gak ngerti waelah soal kayak gituan
11:45 Arzenvald: iya, klo o2jam jadul gk kyk mapnya kawawa, tiap intensity tambah 1 tambah 2
11:45 Arzenvald: lebih ke permainan visual sama less note
11:45 Ridho 2307: kawawa mah mapnya keren keren
11:45 Ridho 2307: garem 7k
11:46 Arzenvald: garem indeed
11:46 Arzenvald: PP kabeh
11:46 Ridho 2307: 00:07:645 (7645|0) - ln yang ini startnya bukan disin yah?
11:46 Ridho 2307: 00:08:113 -
11:47 Arzenvald: itu reverse cymbal
11:47 Arzenvald: weh
11:47 Ridho 2307: oh
11:48 Ridho 2307: nggak mau dikasih kick kah?
11:48 Arzenvald: naw
11:48 Ridho 2307: maksudnya note
11:48 Arzenvald: nda
11:48 Arzenvald: pengen bikin note nya lebih banyak single dan double
11:49 Arzenvald: nge capture lagu nya yg ringan
11:49 Ridho 2307: 00:35:145 (35145|5,35223|6,35301|1,35359|3) -
11:50 Arzenvald: 1 3 5 7?
11:50 Ridho 2307: yup
11:50 Arzenvald: udah
11:50 Ridho 2307: biar lebih seimbang
11:50 Ridho 2307: lu peramal yak?
11:51 Arzenvald: kagak
11:51 Arzenvald: cuma obvious xD
11:51 Ridho 2307: wtf
11:51 Arzenvald: habit 7K stairs, klo 1234 7654 1357
11:54 Ridho 2307: 01:43:895 - disini ada suara nih.. enak nih kalo dibuatin ln satu
11:55 Ridho 2307: 01:48:895 - sama kayak ini juga
11:55 Ridho 2307: 01:58:897 - nggak add satu note lagi?
11:57 Arzenvald: oke
11:57 Ridho 2307: 02:35:145 (155145|2) - bukan 1/8 yah?
11:57 Ridho 2307: kayak snare gitu
11:58 Ridho 2307: 02:35:145 (155145|2) - suaranya mirip disini 02:36:082 -
12:00 Ridho 2307: 02:56:863 - bagian 02:56:863 - ampe 02:57:654 - nggak mau di rearrange kah? bikin puyeng disitu kalo menurut ane
12:00 Arzenvald: jgn dulu 1/8 nya
12:01 Ridho 2307: oke
12:01 Ridho 2307: wadoo ln nya
12:01 Ridho 2307: sugeh
12:01 Ridho 2307: 03:08:660 - ada suara disini
12:01 Ridho 2307: 03:09:129 - sini juga
12:02 Arzenvald: rearranged
12:02 Arzenvald: yg 2 itu
12:02 Arzenvald: gk ikut hat
12:02 Arzenvald: jadi kosong '3'
12:02 Arzenvald: eh yg kedua ada
12:02 Ridho 2307: oh
12:03 Arzenvald: ada gk si
12:03 Arzenvald: XD
12:03 Arzenvald: bingung
12:03 Arzenvald: headsetnya
12:03 Ridho 2307: 03:10:457 - add note satu lagi buat impact kick drum apalah itu
12:03 Arzenvald: okee
12:03 Ridho 2307: suara nya sama kayak 03:11:238 -
12:03 Arzenvald: gk merhatiin, sorry
12:04 Arzenvald: added
12:04 Ridho 2307: 03:11:941 - add note di 7
12:05 Arzenvald: oh sengaja di kosongin buat next trill
12:05 Ridho 2307: oh souka
12:05 Arzenvald: lumayan handstrainnya, dan suaranya sama kecil kyk yg 2 tadi
12:05 Ridho 2307: 03:14:129 - ada suara kyk bukan hat
12:05 Arzenvald: yea, jadinya kosong
12:06 Ridho 2307: kayak disini 03:14:441 - tapi volumenya kecil
12:06 Arzenvald: yus
12:06 Arzenvald: also karena ada kick-snare, spacingnya sengaja di adain
12:06 Ridho 2307: gitu toh
12:07 Arzenvald: jadi gk perlu layer semua suara buat bikin emphasize nya lebih kontras
12:07 Arzenvald: yuss
12:07 Ridho 2307: ilmu lagi itu :v
12:07 Ridho 2307: 03:20:613 - ada suara
12:07 Arzenvald: added
12:07 Ridho 2307: kayak03:20:771 -
12:08 Ridho 2307: 03:20:926 - ini juga
12:08 Arzenvald: oke
12:08 Ridho 2307: 03:22:020 - idk
12:08 Arzenvald: sengaja satu ae
12:08 Ridho 2307: mau dikasih note apa kagak
12:08 Ridho 2307: oh
12:08 Arzenvald: nda
12:09 Ridho 2307: 03:22:840 - gak mau dicover nih?
12:10 Ridho 2307: btw lu orang mana sih?
12:10 Arzenvald: nda usah, bikin simple aja
12:10 Arzenvald: bogor, tinggal depok
12:10 Ridho 2307: jauh berarti
12:10 Arzenvald: u?
12:10 Ridho 2307: bone, tinggal di kendari
12:11 Arzenvald: wah
12:11 Ridho 2307: 03:25:457 - nggak mau dicover juga?
12:11 Ridho 2307: biar konsisten ama 03:27:020 -
12:11 Arzenvald: di pikir pikir add aja deh
12:12 Arzenvald: sama yg lain juga
12:12 Arzenvald: ok
12:13 Ridho 2307: add note di 7 04:22:645 -
12:13 Ridho 2307: jadiin double maksudnya
12:14 Ridho 2307: suaranya mirip ama yang dibawah
12:14 Arzenvald: o
12:14 Arzenvald: yg ini
12:14 Arzenvald: keep ah, pengen emphasize space bar
12:14 Ridho 2307: oke
12:14 Arzenvald: soalnya stylenya kadang 123 S 567
12:14 Arzenvald: bukan 123 4 567
12:15 Ridho 2307: souka
12:15 Ridho 2307: oke
12:15 Ridho 2307: 04:43:348 (283348|3,283426|4,283504|2,283504|3,283504|5,283582|4,283660|5,283738|4,283738|3,283738|6) - susah + gak enak menurutr ane
12:16 Ridho 2307: gak mau di rearrange?
12:16 Arzenvald: huehue
12:16 Arzenvald: keep ah
12:16 Arzenvald: broken stair nya ala jadul
12:16 Ridho 2307: 04:43:816 - ada suara juga, nggak mau dicover?
12:16 Ridho 2307: wkwkwk\
12:17 Arzenvald: keep aja
12:17 Arzenvald: pen kyk 4K
12:18 Ridho 2307: kalo gaian dari style mah
12:18 Ridho 2307: harus dikeep
12:18 Ridho 2307: 04:46:395 - remove note nya
12:18 Ridho 2307: kebanyakan itu
12:18 Arzenvald: remove 1
12:18 Arzenvald: oke
12:18 Ridho 2307: 04:47:488 - sedangkan disini cuman 2
12:19 Arzenvald: 3 plus ln
12:19 Ridho 2307: 04:52:566 (292566|0,292645|0) - apa ini?
12:19 Ridho 2307: wkwkwk
12:19 Arzenvald: error
12:19 Arzenvald: dah di fix
12:19 Ridho 2307: 3+ ln mah gitu aja
12:19 Ridho 2307: 04:52:566 (292566|0,292645|0) - sama kyk ini
12:20 Ridho 2307: eh salah
12:20 Ridho 2307: 04:56:395 -
12:20 Arzenvald: 04:47:176 (287176|0,287332|1,287488|2) - gpp klo ini 3 3 walaupun suaranya beda
12:20 Arzenvald: removed lagi
12:20 Ridho 2307: idk
12:21 Ridho 2307: 04:56:395 - yang ini 3+ln juga
12:21 Ridho 2307: kyk tadi
12:21 Arzenvald: udah
12:23 Ridho 2307: ini suara yang pas patternya selese nggak mau diisikah? mantap ini kalo diisi
12:23 Arzenvald: males _(:3
12:23 Ridho 2307: udffah...itu aja
12:23 Ridho 2307: wkwkwk
12:23 Arzenvald: also endingnya kan udah klimaks
12:23 Arzenvald: so klo di tambah lagi
12:23 Arzenvald: males
12:23 Arzenvald: _(:3
12:24 Ridho 2307: gw kirim nih?>
12:24 Arzenvald: yuss
12:24 Ridho 2307: hampir aja jiwa kefudanan gw terluka liat bg nya
12:25 *Ridho 2307 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1368838 Nanahira - Petals]
12:25 Arzenvald: wat
12:25 Arzenvald: LOL
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some parts are actually using bms-alike (hyper diff?) like at 01:53:895 (113895|1) -OscarRickyH02 wrote:
yo
M4M from weird queue, idk which one lelseven keyok lets say the map is good already so i dont have much word to this map and suggesting an o2jam map with bms style is nonsense so good luckdiffname plz xD // imma hippies uwu
00:26:707 - skipped sound? // i'll add this one
00:27:176 - chord changed?
00:28:582 - skipped :<
00:29:285 - here is skiped sound as well :<<
00:35:145 - this is just, weird, maybe - 00:35:262 - skipped sound here and 00:35:359 (35359|6) - not sure this is 1/16 or 1/4 // i can only hear 4 high pianos, and i won't simplify the 1/16 because ye
00:38:953 (38953|0) - not sure this is ghost bcz i think it start from blue line // weh ok
00:40:223 - why no more stairs? :< // yuss :^)
lets skip these piano stair thisngy shall we, im succ :<
00:50:145 - just a simple suggestion, im not hearing these 1/4 piano sound, maybe because its not clear but at some point there are clear, probably increase the emphasize of the clearer sound would good (like 2 note for clear sound) and increase the one with multi tuts 00:50:145 - as well (triple maybe), probably this will fix monotonic part which almost all note were single and bit undermapped :< // the undermapping in this part are intended to make a big variation through the next part, but the trill pattern itself is quiet rapid more than stairs so i think its okay, and about the ghosts, you could re-check things using 50% playback rate
01:23:895 - i usually emphasized kick around 3 or 4 notes for diversion with piano, especially for this kind of song, but idk with you, every mapper have different style // double is enough for this map? usually i use 1 note for 1 percussion even its so loud
01:29:207 - and add 1 extra note for the one have snare sound like this // huehuehuehuehuehuehue gimmick
01:34:676 - kicks, just telling you .-. // yus, i left the 1st kiai with no kicks consistently through those 5 1/4 notes for some lite dnb feeling
03:09:207 - mapping snare's echo is kinda unusual for me // audible and reasonable enough so why not
shooting stars
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Хорошо~ Good Luck..Verniy_Chan wrote:
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just for fun only, don’t take it seriously
very helpful mod tbh, like a lot! thanks v_chan <3Verniy_Chan wrote:
Hi Arzen-san and nanahira // my moe is deadly w
Mod Via [osu!mania] Queue7K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
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rencananya mau saya fixkan, tapi malas buka image editor- Add in tag your old nick name lel : ExUsagi, Ajemaniz, etc...
seven key
OD : 7,7 or 7,8
HP : 8,3Notes : Great LN pattern, saya suka saya suka XD
- 00:28:582 - sebenarnya disini masih terdengar jelas suara piano, apakah ini di sengaja? // ok deh karena banyak yg bilang add :'D
- 00:29:051 (29051|3) - kalau seandainya ini ikut suara piano, bukannya letaknya di blue line 00:29:129 - // ok
- 01:02:671 - kenapa gak ngemap piano 1/12?
- 01:08:895 - rasanya disini gak perlu di beri penekanan chord 2 note karena gak masih low, mungkin referensi di 01:03:895 -
- 01:23:270 - konsistensi? 01:22:332 -
- 01:34:676 - akan lebih baik suara kick di beri penekanan 2 note biar nyata XD, 01:35:301 - 01:35:926 - 01:37:176 - wait.. 01:37:332 - disini kok ada 2 note? // removed yg 2 wkwkwk
- 01:39:207 - 01:49:207 - bukannya 3 note untuk konsistensi snare seperti layaknya di 4K? kecuali 01:54:207 - karena seluruh ke depannya udah konsisten // oiyak, sorry ini lupa
- 01:39:676 (99676|6,99832|6,99988|6) - mungkin bisa hindarin achor seperti walapun ada sedikit nyambung dengan pitchnya, imo 01:39:988 (99988|6,100066|5,100145|4,100223|3,100301|2) - geser ke kiri 2x // actually hand balance dari part sebelumnya, anchornya ya... fixed deh
- 01:42:801 (102801|0,102957|2) - harusnya 1 kolom untuk konsistensi style mappingmu, sama halnya di
01:50:301 (110301|2,110457|6) - // ok- 02:21:395 - sampai 02:23:270 - terlihat empty, mungkin bisa tambah variasi LN untuk suara vocal mungkin untuk mengisisi kekosongan hati ? atau ngemap SN di white/red line yang tersedia // sengaja huehue, ngikut gain volume perkusi nya biar jadi monorhythm
- 02:23:895 (143895|6) - berhenti di red line 02:24:676 - ? // buat backing vocal berhentinya pas kali ya? owo?
- 02:43:426 (163426|5,163582|6) - buat jack/kolom bersamaan please untuk konsistensi, sama halnya dengan
02:44:676 (164676|4,164832|5) -
02:45:926 (165926|5,166238|2) -
02:46:551 (166551|2,166707|3) -
02:47:176 (167176|1,167332|0) -
// di bikin unjack semua biar lebih konsisten ke non-jack huehue- 02:43:348 (163348|2,163504|2,163660|2) - mungkin bisa hindarin double strike shield LN ini XD. mungkin 02:43:504 (163504|2,163582|3) - geser ke kanan biar dapat feelnya // ok
- 02:47:957 (167957|4) - pindah ke |1| atau |2| biar balance // rearranged
- 02:51:395 (171395|6,171551|5) - Ctrl + G? sama dengan penjelasan sebelumnya, sebenanya gpp jg demi variasi ok stop saya fokus ke itu // mm keep deh
- 02:55:457 - seharusnya 3 note untuk konsistensi snare dan 02:55:926 - seharusnya 2 note, kok kebalik? // ohhh added
- 03:01:863 (181863|4,182020|5,182098|4,182254|4,182332|5) - oh no, but interesting >w< // huehue
- 03:09:051 - coba cek konsistensi di bagian 03:14:051 - // sengaja 1 biar bikin kontras ke echo snare di depannya, terkadang ngorbanin konsistensi untuk emphasize juga butuh
- 03:17:957 (197957|2,198270|1,198582|0,198895|0,199207|1,199520|5) - kenapa gak buat layering LN untuk suara vocal, padahal menarik, sama halnya di section ini 03:22:957 - // HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM boleh, ntar di pikirin lagi
- 04:15:770 (255770|1) - pindah ke |5| lebih friendly patternya
- 04:49:832 (289832|4) - pindah ke |2| ^ // keep yg ini
- 04:50:301 (290301|6) - remove please untuk konsistensi kick selain itu note amount udah di cover dengan LN, sama halnya di 04:50:926 - // sengaja buat klimaks di overemphasize
- 05:03:191 - missing W disini
Хорошо~ Good Luck..Verniy_Chan wrote:
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just for fun only, don’t take it seriously // kebiasaan :'v
the rest is applied, thank you very much for mod <3[Shana Lesus] wrote:
Hello Arzen, sorry for delay ;w;seven1 2 3 4 5 6 7
00:14:832 (14832|4) - move to 4
00:17:801 (17801|2,17957|5,18113|4) - ctrl + g
00:19:051 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862318
00:24:988 (24988|0) - move to 3
00:27:488 (27488|5,27645|4) - ctrl + g
01:22:332 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862342
01:29:676 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862350
01:38:582 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862360 // i'll keep this
01:43:582 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862367 // and this one too, both to follow the violin and hi-hat
01:48:582 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862373 // changed in different pattern
01:50:770 (110770|1) - move to 4 // i'll keep the trill in more comfortable pattern
03:08:113 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862398
03:15:848 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862403
03:43:895 - add note to 6
04:01:395 - add note to 7
04:01:395 (241395|3) - end here 04:03:895 - will be better // gonna keep because i still can hear something at 04:03:816 (243816|3) -
04:13:504 (253504|3) - move to 2
sorry for the short mod, i have very little time recently
Good map // yay
all unreplied means done, wow thank you for the mod <3Blocko wrote:
hi there uhh i kinda forgot about your black and white map you asked me to mod so uhh heres a mod
you should probably change the diff names to something better and something that at least relates to the song though[four key]
00:38:895 - Snap kinda conflicts with the 7K diff, might wanna check that out. // fixed
01:11:707 (71707|1,72020|0,72332|2) - You could extend these to 1/1 LNs to highlight those synths. // tasty, ok
01:37:176 (97176|2,97176|3) - Following the way you patterned out this section, shouldn't this be a single note? // the kicks that has 1/1 distance from snare has doubles, and the 1/2 distance only 1 note, but emphasized by anchor, dunno whether the odd is a good idea
02:28:895 - to 02:31:395 - Feels a bit left hand biased. You could balance this out by moving 02:29:363 (149363|0) - and 02:30:613 (150613|0) - to 4. // done
03:16:395 (196395|3) - Move to 3 to avoid that long 5-note anchor. // the anchor was intended tho, but either way fixed
04:07:332 (247332|1) - Move to 3 again to avoid anchoring. // ok
04:25:848 (265848|2,265926|0,266004|2,266082|1,266160|2,266238|3) - Rearrange to 1|3|2|3|2|3 to avoid that somewhat long trill at the right side.
04:33:113 (273113|2) - Move to 4 for anchor avoidance.
[seven key]
00:30:457 (30457|5,30613|2) - Are you following the reverse cymbal here? I initially thought you were going for the vocal, so this was a bit confusing. // yea, its somehow contrast enough to be layered
00:40:242 (40242|2,40301|0) - Sounds more like a 1/12 triplet grace if I'm hearing that correctly.
00:45:340 (45340|2) - Can't really seem to hear a sound that supports this. Also, move 00:45:379 (45379|4) - down to 00:45:359 - to follow the piano.
01:53:270 - This part could use more notes for that drum.
02:17:723 (137723|4) - I'm not really hearing a sound there.
02:53:895 - to 02:56:238 - Part seems to be a bit heavy on the left hand. You could move 02:54:363 (174363|2,174441|1) - to 4,5 and move 02:55:301 (175301|1) - to 5 to alleviate that and to make a slightly broken stair pattern.
02:56:629 (176629|6,176707|6) - Idk, I'm not really feeling this mini-jack. This feels like an unexpected pattern that completely contradicts the flow this map has, and it's uncomfortable to transition after on the right hand. It'd be better if you could rearrange it to something like 04:42:801 - so it highlights the kick and also makes the overall pattern much better to play.
03:11:395 - Feels alright for right hand but really biased on the left. It's really tricky to do trills using the ring/index finger and thumb.
I'd suggest using this pattern to create some hand balance with the patterns. It's not as concrete as it previously was, but at least it makes it easier for the left hand to play through. // rearranged with my own pattern, symmetrical but somehow with more aesthetic C:
03:52:645 - I think it'd be neat if this pattern can be the exact mirror pattern of 03:51:395 - just for asymmetry and also to accentuate the piano chords.
04:44:363 (284363|4) - Turn this into two 1/4 LNs for that piano.
Pretty fun map. Good luck!
gib me more flowerYaHao wrote:
Modwhy not
[The 4K one]
00:07:645 (7645|0) - smh feels this Ln should start at 00:07:488 - // i caught reversed cymbal here, gud addition uwu
00:19:520 - add a new LN here? as you can hear the changing pitch on the main sound // added, in 7K too
00:29:441 - img make it more evil // hhh
01:05:926 (65926|2,66082|3) - arent they same pitch? // ok
01:52:801 - hmm... these two are the same pitch 01:52:801 (112801|3,112879|0) - , so jacking these two 01:52:879 (112879|0,112957|0) - plays kinda weird imo // ooo ok
02:56:551 - same here // done
03:32:332 (212332|0,212332|1,212488|2,212488|3) - same col pls ;w; // intended tho :^) moved anyway
No need to be rude like this-qqqant wrote:
map sucks, bg also sucks
pls, it's jokePachiru wrote:
No need to be rude like this-qqqant wrote:
map sucks, bg also sucks