At least I know your song choices are good because I listen to a lot of music
01:08:997 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Even though vocals wasn't really emphasized as much in kiai, I feel that this could be pretty well represented if it was mapped to the vocals. Maybe these rhythms check it out
https://puu.sh/xglu4/a1bd03964d.png ----->
https://puu.sh/xglvg/c38113194e.png ----->
https://puu.sh/xglxm/36a6192419.png Feel they hit vocals pretty strongly to keep them balance to one another as well as building the emphasis as the song gets stronger after this portion. Instead of just doing a 5 note stream like the rest with a slider and call it good. Sort of like 01:14:194 (1,2) - Just take them into consideration for more variety
01:34:509 (4,5,1) - Quite a lot more emphasis with spacing than previously. Maybe it's to progressively harder but could also be similar in spacing wise for consistency. No issues here just some thoughts
01:38:761 (1) - Feels underwhelming stacked under this, sure it's great visually and provides a great rhythm to the repeat but I don't feel it's interpreting her vocals well enough. Quite a strong emotion during this part with her falsetto. It's just strange to have spacing like this to play a little triplet snare 01:37:580 (3,4) - but then backs down on her unique vocals. Up to you though
01:55:533 - Quite a powerful place to create the build up with a note here. It's ok regardless
02:13:604 - This part just feels strange without anything on it. Sounds like a stream should start here but it's a different time signature. Maybe a 1/4 slider? It'll null over that part yet still feel rhythmically correct to your stream. Ignore the spacing just like
https://puu.sh/xglY9/16b7ff560e.png and well as increasing the stream since 01:11:360 (3) - was a lot stronger build up than having small spacing into a little big spacing rather than big into progressively larger spacing. Feels inconsistent. Up to you because you're letting that small build up stream get beat by a 5 note flower pattern stream 02:15:375 (3,4,5,6,7) -
02:16:793 (2,3) - Tell me about Ctrl+G rhythm here it'll be different from your other rhythm in the previous kiai because the vocals aren't exactly the same
02:22:934 (3,4,5,6,7) - Feels quite jagged compared to your usual smoother streams