-NanoRIPE- wrote:
m4m i guess
hard
00:11:549 (2,3) - the flow is kinda rough for me,cuz the movement isnt represent the drum well.im prefer you follow ds here and make a small jump at 00:11:919 (3,4) - cuz i feel the drum and guitar quite strong here.example : https://prnt.sc/fpzpqc // Something like this may work.
00:21:366 (2) - it looks like you tried emphasised the drum here but at the same it feels odd if you didnt emphasised the guitar here cuz the guitar's sound more stronger here.so my suggestion is put 2 circles here 00:21:366 - and then a 1/1 slider on the white tick 00:21:551 - // Hmm, how about 2 kicksliders at 00:21:366 - then a circle at 00:21:736 - ?
00:24:515 (5,6,7,8,9) - the issue same as above,its about the way you emphasis the music.so maybe 1/2 slider here 00:24:515 - for guitar and then 1/4 reverse slider at 00:24:793 - for the drum? // No thanks, I don't wanna add too much stuff to a Hard diff
00:46:559 (2,1) - ugly overlap actually :/.the overlap is not structured well.just stack the tail on both of that slider instead // Fixed
Underforest wrote:
[Collab Hard]
00:24:886 (6,7,8,9) - can't you just do a reversing slider? an stream is pretty intense for a hard nor needed // Yes
00:31:091 - skipping this beat is not a good idea // Added a kickslider
this map still needs stuff to be polished before it can be ranked, but is not that bad
good luck~
Kisses wrote:
[]Well that's all from me. Some nice clean mapping ~Hard
- 00:12:481 (5) - It would flow better if you moved it the left https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8556807 // I changed due to previous mod
- 00:24:892 (6,7,8,9) - I strongly recommend not doing a stream here. It makes for a bad spread between normal and hard and streams like this are really hard when grouped up with other objects. You can map 00:24:522 (5,6,7,8,9) - as 2 reverse sliders // Changed due to Underforest's mod
- 00:34:151 (1,2,3) - This would follow the vocals better http://puu.sh/wGdyX/32fa1f0c35.png . There aren't any vocals at 00:34:892 so mapping it as a clickable object would lead you to mapping something else // Fixed
I hope this mod was useful, GL!
Kurai wrote:
[Collab Hard]
- 00:13:407 (1) - This slider is not properly snapped on the new red line. // Fixed
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Storyboard stuff
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[centre][heading][color=#02ff85]Hokichi's Special Thanks[/color][/heading][/centre]
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[*]ezek for editing the bg for me
[*]GhostFY for the help with the wave script
[*]Damnae for storybrew[/list]