1. Ambrew's Farewell (5.15 stars, 882 notes)
2. Easy (1.43 stars, 201 notes)
3. Hard (3.32 stars, 559 notes)
4. Insane (4.4 stars, 800 notes)
5. Normal (1.98 stars, 321 notes)

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✬ Sayonara Bystander ✬
by Botan

GD by Ambrew
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Thank you to the Italian all-star MrSergio for the timing!

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Birkis wrote:

Hi~~ a lil mod here.

Easy (1/1)

Nice diff o.o Thank you!
01:07:087 (4,5) - This part is weird Remapped.

Insane (7/7)

00:06:535 (1,2,3) - Try this triangular pattern here I like it, remapped using this.
01:40:952 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - NC all this part Done.
01:51:627 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This part is weird, blue ticks are hard to read (try using sliders instead) Remapped.
02:13:345 (6,1,2,3,4) - NC here Done.
02:51:995 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - NC all this part Done.
03:19:050 - Start mapping from here Added 3 circles.
03:44:265 (9) - Start break from here Done.

Calcyon wrote:

Hey, random mod coming through, feel free to reject my mods considering I haven't modded standard in a while.

Insane (9/11)

00:14:817 (5,1) - blanket seems too tight Replaced blanket with looser one.
00:29:173 (3,4,5,6,1) - try increasing the spacing gradually Done.
00:32:486 (5) - for example this slider, vocal with 2 vowels, maybe change the curve to the point where the 2nd vowel starts? (happens in others places of the map too) Done. Will be looking at rest of map for other instances.
00:38:008 (3) - I would change this up, so the loudest noise in the slider isn't on a tick that has no input Remapped and edited hitsounds.
00:42:425 (3) - again, slider ending on a louder sound (ive noticed it happens multiple times in the map so I'm not going to point out any more, i would recommend avoiding that, not sure if there is a rule about this, but it has been pointed out to me before by other mappers), i suppose youre mapping it to the tone change in vocals, which I suppose justifies it, but if this 00:41:873 (1,2) - is mapped on drums then i think the rest should follow it and not change to vocals I chose to map the very long vocal in parts rather than one slider. Along with that also mapping to the hitsounded snares at that part. Arranged the objects so the sliders hit on the drums.
00:58:621 (3,4) - I wouldn't stack this, or atleast increase the distance between the note and the slider by a tiny bit for the piano influenced kick drums, same with this 01:00:093 (2,3) - maybe i missed some, but it seemed to me like you placed them like this if they both started at the same/very similar sound, which doesn't seem the case here to my ear atleast (I hear the piano more) I want to stay consistent with how I've mapped the kick drums throughout the entire song. I'll look over this to see if I could adjust it but it's staying for now.
01:51:903 (2,2,2) - I think a double would work for these better as the end and beginning of the slider are very distinctive sounds and also its right after a slider so i think this might even play better, i would consider changing the pattern up a bit too if you decide to put them in (maybe the distances or the entire direction of it) Originally they were doubles but changed to sliders for easy readability considering the difficulty. I like them being sliders. Adjusted pattern!
02:01:198 (5) - id finish this as a stream instead of a slider, I wouldnt worry about it being too long or something, youve already put some like this in :p Slider is to represent the ends of the vocal with the circles being the snare drums. I like this pattern as it does two jobs and the snares are accented a because of the change in object (slider). If it was a stream then the snare wouldn't feel/sound as powerful.
02:02:578 (5) - add a circle and move 02:02:670 (1) - closer to make it a double I think that's the wrong timestamp but fixed!
02:04:879 (1,2,3) - id make this angle a bit wider to fit the slider coming up (same with this 00:51:259 (1,2,3) - ) Done for both.
02:10:952 (4,5,6,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8806230 what about making it like this? I like this. Done.

Closing thoughts : I would prefer if there were less longer sliders on instruments and they were represented with circles instead (mainly towards the end), I can understand the vocals though. I will continue to look at the map to see if I can fine tune anything else.
Overall it's a nice aesthetically pleasing map and a great song, sorry for the short mod but I hope it inspires you or helps with your map!
I've kind of wanted this to be a bit of a guideline for you to revisit the objects I brought up and see if you find stuff to change.
e: one more thing, I feel like AR8,8 could fit this map a bit more, up to you! I like it. AR changed from 9 -> 8.8

good luck~

[-R1] wrote:

hello! i found your map now more interesting than before, so i'm interested in modding it You talking shit?

Insane
first and formost, i wanna said that for me the biggest issue is that you're not putting emphasis on stronger beats, you could do that by increasing the spacing
and also some of your greenline is unsnapped like 00:49:050 - this one snapped to 1/8 cause why not?
with that said here goes

00:00:462 - feels underwhelming if you don't put something I wanted all the diffs to start at the same place. Will continue to consider.
00:03:958 (4,5,6) - this part feels untidy due to the overlap with 00:03:038 (5) Fixed.
00:12:425 (1) - 00:12:057 (6) - mirroring (6) can make the map a lot cleaner and flows nice too smth like this you can do it to right or left up to you. I like it. Using this.
00:22:179 - you should make this clickable tbh I like the slider here and I didn't want to add another circle so close to the double kick drum hitsound for 00:22:363 (1,2).
00:27:701 (1,2,3,4,5) - this doesn't flow well with the prev note Fixed.
00:28:437 (1) - see like you put proper emphasis on here, but not on the previous part.
00:29:725 (6,1) - screenshot you could do this to put emphasis on the peak of the instrument and the next one Changed with a similar pattern.
00:33:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this jump feels kinda random to me, how about you make it more structured? Fixed.
00:35:799 (3,4) - how about u switched this two, (3) being the slider and yeah Fixed.
00:50:155 (6) - you could parallel this again so it looks cleaner Kept pattern since I like it but made it cleaner.
00:53:284 (5) - you could extend this into a 1/1 so it covers up the vocal I wanted to map the two circles on the piano hits that happen at that point. Same pattern in the 2nd chorus as well for same reason.
00:55:308 (6,7) - CTRL + G this two (for the rhythm) Ongoing theme in the map is the double kick drum being mapped as a circle slider stack. Going to keep for now.
00:57:517 - kinda a better rhythm Fixed.
01:02:118 (5) - this is ugly lmao Fixed.
01:03:590 (1) - i found the lack of spacing emphasis on this is tilting XD Increased spacing!
01:07:087 (5) - just make it straight, that tilt isn't pretty Made it mirror the the next slider.
01:09:480 (1) - don't undermap this T_T Made it same pattern as earlier pattern.
01:16:842 (4,5,6) - 01:24:388 (1,4) - fix blanket with these 2, also (2) make ugly overlap with the slider Fixed.
01:25:492 (5) - not well shaped slider T_T Changed slider shape.
01:32:854 (6) - you should make this a slider to catch that short buildup Conflicts with the established kick drum pattern. Keeping for now.
01:44:449 - use a 1/1 to cover up the vocal Conflicts with the established kick drum pattern. Keeping for now. It appears elsewhere in the map too: 00:30:277 (2,3,4)
01:56:044 (4) - this could be cool if you CTRL+G this I like it. Changed.
01:59:357 (8) - need to be clickable, i will switch that with (7) if i were you I like it. Changed.
02:01:198 (5) - this slider need to start here 02:01:014 -
02:01:842 - remove this, the triplet doesn't fit imo I wanted to map the drum rolls at this part.
since the second kiai is p similiar, just take note of what i suggest on the first one and apply that to this one.
02:34:511 (8) - this slider start here and add a circle to the prev part (also shorten the slider into a 1/1) I have no clue what you're talking about but fixed?
02:52:547 (3,4) - this two at least for me, i would change that into reverses. and their position is awkward Changed and fixed.
03:46:658 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - lmao this is overkill How so? I wanted to map the snare roll here. Keep for now.
03:57:149 (9) - i think a short slider would fit more appropiately rather than fast slider. color=#00BF00]Changed.[/color]

good luck, i have a lot of hope on this set Me too, thanks for the mod fam.

Mordred wrote:

hello there, just passing by


timing seems a bit off sometimes

top diff

ctrl+a try to use the corners a bit more, it's a 4 minute map, so why not use them a bit? I'll see where that could be appropriate. thanks.

00:03:682 - no need to ignore the 1/4 I don't see why it's necessary here, it's the intro so the rhythm can be a little lighter

00:12:977 (5,6,7) - the fuck is that stack, fix it lmao Ok

00:18:866 (3,4) - could make this a 1/1 slider instead to emphasize voice a bit more I don't think it's necessary, plus makes the movement a little too slow and slider heavy

00:21:811 (7) - would be better as a 1/2 slider since the singer doesn't stop like she does 00:20:339 (3) - here for example Ok

00:22:363 - no need to ignore this Ok

00:26:044 (3) - this slider... is not very good, since it covers 3 beats, but only has one of them actually provide reasonable feedback; so changing it to circles would fit a lot better (also NC this) Revised

00:38:652 (8) - this note doesn't exist Revised also

00:51:811 (4,1) - dunno what happened here, making 00:51:811 (4) - a 1/1 slider would fit better + NC it I think ignoring the strong beat would be a bad idea in this case because it's the start of the kiai

00:54:020 (3) - would be nicer as 2 circles, as 1/4 doesn't exist here + 00:54:204 - has a strong vocal on it, so making it clickable would be more intuitive Changed to a triple

00:56:596 (2,3,4,5,6) - you could just have this entire section as circles only, since every beat has a strong vocal on it don't think that's necessary

01:21:075 (5) - might just be me, but I'm sure you can make a more visually pleasing shape than this tried to make it more pleasing [?]

01:32:854 (8) - same as before, a 1/2 slider would emphasize the vocal better imo I think a circle fits better, gives the player more time to aim for the next section of notes.

01:36:903 (5,1) - same as mentioned for 00:18:866 (3,4) - I like this as it is

02:03:590 (5,6) - why is the climax of the buildup spaced the least :thinking: increased spacing

02:05:431 (4,1) - what I mentioned before keeping this as mentioned before

02:28:437 (5,6,7,8) - dude where did these anti jumps come from, the previous kiai you had jumps, this is super easy to misread because of that; sticking to jumps would be more consistent; it also fits better imo I'll separate the first note. other than it's completely fine and the testplays all proved that this is readable.

02:37:087 (2,3,4,5) - this really doesn't have to be that spaced It's fine

02:54:848 (3) - doesn't exist one extra note won't hurt

02:55:952 - you have a strong beat here, having a reverse slider covering that tick should be good

like this

it sounds right, but it would break consistency with the other sections

03:08:928 (1,2,3,4) - pretty sure all of this is 1/3, ignoring the drums feels kinda wrong here so, just map it as 1/3 repeat sliders Fixed to 1/3

03:13:345 (1) - could just leave this empty, there isn't really a reason for a spinner I put a spinner cuz some reason the timing feels weird,
and I don't want to just leave it empty..

03:32:302 (7,1) - the flow here is a little uncomfortable, you have this up and down motion and then you go into the slider, but it doesn't continue that motion, going to the right instead Redirected the angle on the slider

Toumoko wrote:

easy & normal seems fine

[hard]
not stacked properly 00:43:713 (5) - Fixed.
same 01:35:799 (4) - Fixed. How did you even notice these!?

humm , your map is good ! Hope this ranked , loved the song ~
glgl

KanpanRin wrote:

Hi from my queue. (*'ω'*)ﾉｼ
General

Background: thumb-1920-769360.jpg is 1699x1200, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
It's "recommended" not mandatory. I'll look into this a bit more, think of the people playing at 1080p! (

Inconsistency Kiai Time

[Ambrew's Farewell]
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:811, ends on 01:15:554
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:05:431, ends on 02:29:173
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:19:050, ends on 03:38:376
[Easy]
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:811, ends on 01:15:554
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:05:431, ends on 02:29:173
[Hard]
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:811, ends on 01:15:554
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:05:431, ends on 02:29:173
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:19:050, ends on 03:38:376
[Insane]
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:811, ends on 01:15:600
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:05:431, ends on 02:29:173
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:19:050, ends on 03:38:376
[Normal]
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:811, ends on 01:15:554
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:05:431, ends on 02:29:173
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:19:050, ends on 03:38:376

Oh dang, that would have been a tricky one to spot. Thank you!
Normal

Nothing to see!

Hard

00:51:443 (2) - move to [352, 228]
00:51:627 (3) - move to [260, 204]
02:03:038 (3) - why not uses same distance snap? move to [152, 188]
Distance snap is allowed to be unlocked in this difficulty, kept to a minimum of course, and so I wanted to emphasize these parts a little bit by varying the spacing a bit. I don't think it is too challenging to play given the low bpm and easy readability of the jumps.
That's it.

rohasshiki wrote:

Hello from my queue!

Ambrew's Farewell

1. 00:02:486 (4) - This blanket looks a little off to me. Idk Moved a bit just in case
2. 00:03:038 (6) - this blanket is also a little off. If you adjust the shape, also consider moving 00:03:774 (1,2) - a bit farther to even up the spacing Fixed
3. 00:06:995 (6) - Don't think this is an issue (I think it's fine personally) but this note isn't mapped to anything: there's a break in the piano run Ah you're right thanks for noticing this!
4. 00:26:228 (3,4) - Nitpicky but these aren't really mapped to any major parts, maybe try incorporating the guitar part? Changed these to circles to emphasize guitar a bit more
5. 00:29:541 (6) - Might have missed others before, but I'll mark em now, I think NC should be here instead because it falls on a vocal hit rather than nothing I think for simplicity sake, it's better to keep them on the downbeats
6. 00:30:646 (5) - If you do the NC like I suggested above the next one could go here same as above.
7. 00:30:646 (5,6,1) - Since tthese play like a string might be a good idea to make the spacing consistent between them Done
8. 00:32:486 (6) - NC like above pattern I'd like to keep these on the downbeats for now, but I appreciate the idea!
9. 00:33:406 (5) - Then another NC here if you want
10. 01:03:590 (1) - Maybe blanket this a bit better with 01:03:038 (8) - Done
11. 01:22:179 (2) - Consider changing this slider to this to make the curve smoother Done
12. 01:25:860 (1,2) - Same as above for these two sliders, putting the anchor in the middle might make it smoother Idk, I wanna keep these because I've been using mainly curvy sliders
13. 01:40:768 (2,3,4) - The spacing of these three is a bit misleading, not a huge issue though Moved this closer to the slider
14. 01:41:136 (5) - The curvature of this slider in this pattern is sort of ugly, maybe just make it straight because the curve goes against the direction of the following stream Changed to a straight slider as suggested
15. 01:52:179 (1) - Minor aesthetic thing but angle this slightly to match the direction of flow when you're coming in from the previous note. Basically line them up Wasn't entirely sure of what you meant, but I did a ctrl h ctrl j if that sort of helped.
16. 02:08:376 (1) - Maybe flip this horizontally so that you have it flow into the next note and kinda blanket It's on blanket with 02:07:455 (2) - , I think the Ctrl H on this would make the distance a bit too huge
17. 02:18:498 (5) - Move the anchor to the middle; just in general I think it's better to have the anchor in the middle so you get the smoothest possible curve Thanks for the tip, done
18. 02:31:382 (4) - Maybe make this match a bit more with the slider before it so it looks a bit better. Sorta ugly as is imo Fixed!
19. 02:35:063 (1) - This blanket feels a bit off, consider changing I kind of wasn't going for a blanket here, cuz I wanted the slider to be flatter, but I positioned it more in the center.
20. 02:51:259 (1) - This blanket is a tiny bit off, the bottom should curve up a little more Done
21. 03:01:198 (7) - Missed opportunity to blanket or line up for better flow, not necessary tho Fixed
22. 03:10:400 (1) - Maybe change to this so it looks a little cleaner at the top I can't really see what the difference is lol
23. 03:16:106 (1) - Blanket this Fixed
24. 03:30:646 (6,1) - Maybe blanket these two a bit more Done
25. 03:43:897 (1,1) - These can blanket a bit better Fixed
26. 03:48:314 (6) - I sort of feel like this should be a slider because it matches the instrumental note better than a drum hit Done
27. 03:51:259 (6) - Same as above, I suggest doing it like 03:50:707 (4) - where the slider matches the instrumental perfectly
    Pretty good map, good flow and good patterns on the jumps. Just watch out for the missed blankets and small aesthetic stuff. I have high hopes for this mapset! Good luck in the future!

KanpanRin wrote:

Hi from my queue. (*'ω'*)ﾉｼ
Ambrew's Farewell

00:08:008 (2) - move to [64, 40] Done
00:08:192 (3) - move to [97, 192] Done
00:08:928 (6) - move to [324, 336] Done
00:27:149 (2,3,4) - It sounds like "don don don don don". ok
01:25:860 (1,2) - why adding whistle sound, I don't think the whistle would suit the rhythm. removed
01:37:455 (2) - move to [220, 264] Done
01:40:584 (1,2,3,4) - It might coufusing the player, through the distancy snaping was misled. Adjusted as mentioned by previous mod
01:45:369 (3) - move to [240, 184] Done
Unsnapped inherited sections: 02:04:331 snap to 02:04:327 Done
02:54:848 (3) - move to [416, 80] Done
03:13:345 (1) - In my opinion, place some notes better than a spinner. Could you sort of recommend what I would do here? that's where I'm having the most trouble lol
That it.

Pretty nice map, hope it become to ranked. (っ*'ω'*c)
Good luck with it. (｡◜◡◝｡)

Carol wrote:

o_ob do_o

Insane

1. 00:04:879 (5) - . NC Done.
2. 00:22:363 (8) - . delete NC and, 00:22:547 (1) - . NC Done.
3. 00:39:296 (1) - . delete NC Done.
4. 01:21:075 (1) - . Done.
5. 01:27:333 (4) - . NC and, 01:28:437 (1) - . delete NC Done.
6. 01:28:989 (2) - . NC and, 01:29:541 (1) - . delete NC Done.
7. 01:39:112 (9) - . NC and, 01:39:296 (1) - . delete NC Done.
8. 01:39:664 (1) - . delete NC Done.
9. 02:38:008 (4) - . add Circle Done.
10. 02:56:412 (5) - . NC and, 02:56:596 (1) - . delete NC Done.
11. 02:57:885 (7) - . NC and, 02:58:069 (1) - . delete NC Done.
12. 01:17:762 (2,3,4,5) - . ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8937490 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8937507 ) How about fixing this..? I like it. Fixed, but circle-1 isn't as high as in the picture because I don't want too big of jumps.

Nice song!
I am not a good NCer. ( Thank you Carol!

good luck