谢谢船业大大!smallboat wrote:
[liaoxingyao's Hard]
00:28:247 (2,3,4,5) - 對Hard diff而言這串子的note多了些,建議還是用滑條來取代 (4跟5合併成一個1/4滑條)fixed
谢谢船业大大!smallboat wrote:
[liaoxingyao's Hard]
00:28:247 (2,3,4,5) - 對Hard diff而言這串子的note多了些,建議還是用滑條來取代 (4跟5合併成一個1/4滑條)fixed
谢船smallboat wrote:
[Global]
1.難度來源不一樣 (查看Aimod)√
2.有個沒使用的osb : Tachibana Arisu (CVSatou Amina) - Kimi Ni Todoke (S o a p).osb√
[Normal]
00:27:532 (1) - 間距√
[liaoxingyao's Hard]
00:28:247 (2,3,4,5) - 對Hard diff而言這串子的note多了些,建議還是用滑條來取代 (4跟5合併成一個1/4滑條)
[Insane]
00:27:533 (3) - 重音忘了NC√
00:54:913 (6) - 同上√
Kurai wrote:
I didn't find anything actually wrong in this set, but I have some suggestions regarding metadata:Edit: I didn't see someone already posted about the metadata, anyway this is still relevent and you should do the fix
- Tachibana Arisu is the character singing this song, but not the real person. The artist should be changed accordingly. According to columbia.jp (the company releasing the idolmaster musics), the artist name should be "橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" (romanised: "Tachibana Arisu (CV: Satou Amina)").
All the information regarding the metadata can be found on this page: http://columbia.jp/idolmaster/imasnews/160513.html- The original of this song is by Tomofumi Tanizawa, so please consider adding "谷澤智文", "タニザワトモフミ" and "Tomofumi Tanizawa" to the tags. fix
I disagree with KwaN here. I believe the artist should be "橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" as it is written "starring by 橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" everywhere, even on the album's back cover. Anyway, at least add "佐藤亜美菜" and "Satou Amina" in tags?S o a p wrote:
Kurai wrote:
I didn't find anything actually wrong in this set, but I have some suggestions regarding metadata:Edit: I didn't see someone already posted about the metadata, anyway this is still relevent and you should do the fix
- Tachibana Arisu is the character singing this song, but not the real person. The artist should be changed accordingly. According to columbia.jp (the company releasing the idolmaster musics), the artist name should be "橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" (romanised: "Tachibana Arisu (CV: Satou Amina)").
All the information regarding the metadata can be found on this page: http://columbia.jp/idolmaster/imasnews/160513.html- The original of this song is by Tomofumi Tanizawa, so please consider adding "谷澤智文", "タニザワトモフミ" and "Tomofumi Tanizawa" to the tags. fix
From IamKwaNUnicode Title: きみにとどけ
Romanised Title: Kimi ni Todoke
Unicode Artist: 橘ありす
Romanised Artist: Tachibana Arisu
Source: アイドルマスターシンデレラガールズ
References:
http://columbia.jp/idolmaster/COCX-39653.html
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LwlEPr6m2ZY
https://truth.bahamut.com.tw/s01/201607 ... 7fd2c4.JPG
http://cinderella.idolmaster.jp/
thanks
Kurai wrote:
I disagree with KwaN here. I believe the artist should be "橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" as it is written "starring by 橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" everywhere, even on the album's back cover. Anyway, at least add "佐藤亜美菜" and "Satou Amina" in tags?√
Also you could probably add "idolmaster" in tags as well; people looking for IDOLM@STER songs are probably more prone to type "idolmaster" in the search bar as it is easier to write than "idolm@ster".
[General]
- Your background image is a bit too big for a .jpg image (1.13 MB). I re-encoded it and now it is 136 kB (no quality loss): http://up.kuraip.net/0726x3nY2348.jpg√
- You should remove "Satou Amina - Kimi Ni Todoke (S o a p).osb" from the folder of your beatmap.√
谢骏喵喵-3-IamKwaN wrote:
歌:橘ありす is also everywhere. Uta means Vocal, which we usually interpret it as artist. "starring by" just credits the voice actor, which doesn't necessarily mean artist. We do not care whether the artist is virtual / vocaloid character or not, what we care only is whether it is official.
And ye, you can put THE IDOLMASTER, 佐藤亜美菜 and Satou (or Sato) Amina in tags.√ Actually 佐藤亜美菜 was a former AKB48 member too.
快點飛了飛 in fact!!hahaa好的
Kyuukai wrote:
ayyyyyyyy another Kimi ni Todoke
thxRegraz wrote:
[Kayano's Easy]
00:46:342 (3,1) - Flow here is a bit sharp, recommend: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8777210 这一段和 00:39:675 (3,4,1) - 一样都是两个note跟着滑条的方向,note和滑条方向之间有个反向的夹角,我觉得打着还ok,不改的主要原因是我觉得改了之后 00:48:723 (1) - 太丝滑了跟音乐这里偏重的人声有点不搭
谢谢瓜子Regraz wrote:
M4M as required. My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/542163 You could just choose 2-3 diffs to mod since my mapset is of great size.
[General]
You need to add "Kayano" into tags and might consider adding Sun Rainbow into tags too.√
[Kayano's Easy]
00:46:342 (3,1) - Flow here is a bit sharp, recommend: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8777210
[Normal]
00:14:913 (3) - Shape is quite sharp and not matching with the smooth vocal here.我认为这还可以
00:19:675 (1,2) - Should be 1.3x in spacing.√
00:30:866 (1,2) - I think a parallel pattern would be better.我试了一下觉得平行的看起来很死板
00:38:723 (1,2,1,2) - Rhythm is pretty empty here, add some 1/2s, for example: 00:42:294 加了两个note
00:43:723 (3,1) - Visual spacing here makes it look closer than it actually is.√
00:47:532 (3,1) - Should be 1.3x too. A stable spacing in Normal is needed.√
00:48:961 (2,3) - Better blanket them.√
00:50:627 (2,3,1) - This double stack is too tricky to exist in Normal.有吗。。那我把NC移到note上好了。(
00:56:818 (3,1) - Poor blanket.√
01:08:008 (2,3) - In most cases you could only have one type of rhythm for stack in lower level diffs.换成了个滑条。不然觉得空空的
[liaoxingyao's Hard]
00:44:913 (2,3) - 01:03:247 (5,1) - Imperfect blanket.
00:51:818 (5,1) - Enhanced spacing is needed for the cymbal.
[Insane]
This diff obviously needs to be nerf'ed to match with the spread.我觉得我还是做的很良心送分了
00:18:723 (6,1) - I don't think it is appropriate to apply such a large spacing as well as anti-flow for 1/4 gap.√
00:52:533 (2,3) - Yes jump might be applied to here but this is excessively large.间距改小了一点
00:56:818 (4,5) - Poor flow for 1/4√
01:04:437 (4,5,6) - For rhythm consistency, it need to be altered to 3/4 slider + 1/2 slider.√
You need a re-bubble from the previous bn and then call me back.
bu keng bu kengKaren wrote:
00:49:199 (5,6) - keng
你又不是Mr.aipaoSuzuki_1112 wrote:
fly了,迟来的congratz
性先生不要打我就好了
这位爱跑先生毒奶选手-[Apple]- wrote:
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mr.xingyao nbnb, congratulation here
cmn-[Apple]- wrote:
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mr.xingyao nbnb, congratulation here
mr.xingyaoliaoxingyao wrote:
cmn-[Apple]- wrote:
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mr.xingyao nbnb, congratulation here