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Tae

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Tae 2017-07-28T16:26:31+00:00

Xiaolin wrote:
My fav BTS song My favourite BTS ballad. [This song is about a tragic love between a coconut and a chicken.] Sounds like a good difficulty name, don't you think?

Beginner

00:13:309 (2) - Offscreen. I don't know what you're on about :eyes: Nothing to see here, I promise
Hard

00:04:509 (5) - Feel like there should be a jump here as the sound here sounds fairly strong. The sound here 00:02:909 (3) - sounds less intense (to my ears at least) and it has a jump, so I guess adding a jump there wouldn't hurt.
00:07:509 (3) - Same here, but it's kinda different. Here at 00:13:909 (4) - it's similar and it has a jump, so it's questionable that the first one doesn't have a jump.
00:26:109 (1) - Again, also it's rhymtically different. 00:19:709 (1,2) - This is split into a circle and a 2/1 slider, but the first time swap I mentioned is a 1/2 slider, even though the two of them are the same.
Yeah, all fixed.

(I'll fix Firetruck's seeing as she's away and you can't fix it yourself, I may have to fix Senery's as well, as I believe he's currently on holiday)

Lune

258 posts

Joined September 2015

Lune 2017-07-28T18:18:44+00:00

Xiaolin wrote:
My fav BTS song BTSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS *biggest bts trash mode activated*

MINAKO's Easy

00:02:109 (1,3) - Looks like you wanted to make these symmetrical, but they're not really. (3) one tick is more up than the other tick, while (1) both of them are on the same grid. Copying pasting (1) into (3) and rotating it would work. actually no they aren't made to be symmetrical, but i polished the shape a bit
00:14:909 (1,2) - Flow seemed smooth throughout the diff but these two ruin it, this could probably confuse players because like I said before, the diff has a smooth movement but this one is sharp. Ctrl+G (2) would be better. changed

vvvvvv

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Senery

698 posts

Joined March 2016

Senery 2017-07-28T19:04:06+00:00

Xiaolin wrote:
Senery's Coconut

00:03:709 (1,2,3) - Pretty much what I said in hard, the beat here sounds strong, so a jump would fit here. changed
00:06:509 (5,6) - To be honest, (6) doesn't really sound strong to be a jump, it sounds rather low than intense. this should be fine
Good luck!

chicken nugget code

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Kurai

osu! Alumni

7,734 posts

Joined March 2009

Kurai 2017-07-28T22:21:01+00:00

Ayyy, it took me quite some time, but I found a source for the metadata:

- Official BBQChicken's YouTube Channel: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nRRrWgbgOZc

_______________________

The title is indeed "꼬꼬넛치킨" which roughly transcribes to "kkokkoneoschikin" (so yeah you should use "Coconut Chicken" as the romanisation as "꼬꼬넛치킨" is a Hangul transcription of English).

Good luck!

Tae

1,070 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Tae 2017-07-28T22:26:37+00:00

Kurai wrote:
Ayyy, it took me quite some time, but I found a source for the metadata:

- Official BBQChicken's YouTube Channel: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nRRrWgbgOZc

_______________________

The title is indeed "꼬꼬넛치킨" which roughly transcribes to "kkokkoneoschikin" (so yeah you should use "Coconut Chicken" as the romanisation as "꼬꼬넛치킨" is a Hangul transcription of English).

Good luck!

Thank you very much!

Seolv

847 posts

Joined March 2016

Seolv 2017-08-02T07:22:41+00:00

josh1024 wrote:
Lukas' Advanced

00:05:309 (1,2,3,4) - here 1 2 rotates cw but suddenly 3 4 ccw. ???
00:11:709 (1,2,3,4) - here 3 4 don't have that much of an impact ,still just kinda follow 1 2 in a straight line.
maybe make them feel more similar. I don't see why I would have to make them similar

00:22:109 (4,5,6) - the same voice being map in two different ways right next to each other. maybe make them both sliders.still, why would I make it the same, that would just be boring and repetitive, this rhythm works fine too.

Xiaolin wrote:
Lukas' Advanced

00:02:109 (1,2) - This could be misread, besides, this is the only pattern throughout the diff that looks like this, so better avoid it.
00:03:509 (4) - 00:06:109 (3) - These feel a bit random as they are the only ones that are almost stacked, so it's a bit questionable. idk what I am supposed to change here, no fix
00:09:309 (3,4) - Why do these have different spacing from this 00:05:309 (1,2) - when the two of them have the same lyric? There's no change in the tone either, so there's no reason for them to be speced differently. The first one that I mentioned is using DS while the second one I mentioned breaks the DS, so it really makes no sense considering the fact that the two have the same lyric and sound.
00:08:909 (2,4) - Slight overlap here, should probably avoid it since it doesn't look intentional and they barley overlap which isn't really aesthetically pleasing.
00:11:709 (1,2) - Just like the first point.how can this be misread? no fix

Unmentioned=Changed

updoot

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_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-08-03T01:41:03+00:00

Beginner

00:08:509 (1) - End this at 00:10:709 on the predominant beat. You don't have to worry about polarity and that as players follow music by their ears better
00:14:909 (3) - ^ also NC this like above if you want to keep your consistent NC pattern
00:30:909 (1) - suggestion to change this to spinner for many reasons. -creates fluctuation in scoreboard - adds another element to gameplay -come off as fun to play especially as the final object in a map - the sound here is slightly different to the rest of the song

Minako

00:06:909 (3) - hitsound addition the reverse would be nice
00:10:109 (3) - ^ and same with these 2 as well 00:13:309 (3,3) -
00:29:309 (3) - slight overlaps look weird imho. Either increase the overlap or dont overlap at all https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8748635

Firetruck

00:02:709 (2,3) - When you enable stacking you can see the DS is slightly off and even overlaps a little https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8748646
00:09:909 (4,1) - ^ same with 00:13:109 (4,1) -
00:07:509 (2) - whistle hitsound on head would be nice hear to match the vocals. Same with 00:10:709 (2) - and 00:13:909 (2) -
00:19:709 (1) - The shape and the overlap of this slider goes against the structure that you've used for the rest of the map.
00:22:909 (1) to 00:28:509 (3) - this is just me but I think it would look nicer to increase your overlaps for some parts. Overlaps like 00:23:509 (2) - and 00:25:509 (3) are good but the rest of them overlap too little to be aesthetically pleasing imo.
Because the NC combos are really short (average 3) you can up the hp a bit to make it a bit more challenging

Lukas

imo would be ideal to half the NC lengths for hp reasons

Hard

00:17:509 (4,5,6) - hitsound this like your other triplet pls

[]
short mod, GL ~

Tae

1,070 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Tae 2017-08-03T09:50:44+00:00

Kisses wrote:
Beginner
00:08:509 (1) - End this at 00:10:709 on the predominant beat. You don't have to worry about polarity and that as players follow music by their ears better
00:14:909 (3) - ^ also NC this like above if you want to keep your consistent NC pattern
00:30:909 (1) - suggestion to change this to spinner for many reasons. -creates fluctuation in scoreboard - adds another element to gameplay -come off as fun to play especially as the final object in a map - the sound here is slightly different to the rest of the song

Hard
00:17:509 (4,5,6) - hitsound this like your other triplet pls
[]
short mod, GL ~

All fixed, hopefully a short mod means that there's little to fix :thinking:

Senery

698 posts

Joined March 2016

Senery 2017-08-03T16:30:14+00:00

hi! from my queue
tae put this map in my queue dont judge

With the beginner is nothing wrong, for me atleast its not like it only has 2 circles or anything and is 0.75* :^)

[MINAKO's Easy]

00:26:909 (4,1) - blanket is a little off

[Firetruck's Normal]

00:02:109 (1,2,3) - maybe put a little gab between (1) and (2,3) so it doesnt overlap
00:26:709 (2) - imo a 1 beat slider on 00:26:509 - fits a bit better here

[Lukas' Advanced]

00:03:509 (3,5) - not really sure about this, stacking them seems to be a bit nicer, it also fits nicely in 00:03:709 (4) -
00:05:309 (1,3) - again with the stack
00:10:709 (6,7) - fix the blanket its a little off
00:18:509 (2,3) - ^
00:20:309 (6) - stack with 00:18:509 (2) -
00:22:509 (5,6,7) - why is (6) and (7) stacked? would be nicer to not stack them to copy the previous part (00:21:309 (1,2,3) - )
00:22:909 (7) - NC this one maybe so the combo doesnt go up as much
00:23:509 (8,10) - fix this blanket a bit, seems a bit off to me

[Hard]

00:10:709 (2,3,4,5) - maybe try and space these a bit, it looks like a 1/2 jump
00:22:709 (4,1,2,3) - same for this

[Senery's Coconut]

Garbage diff pls delete
no wait pls dont

thats it, i think tae can fix the stuff on the easy and normal

Tae

1,070 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Tae 2017-08-03T16:41:53+00:00

Senery wrote:
[Hard]
00:10:709 (2,3,4,5) - maybe try and space these a bit, it looks like a 1/2 jump
00:22:709 (4,1,2,3) - same for this
[Senery's Coconut]
Garbage diff pls delete
no wait pls dont

Fixed both, I'll make sure to fix the stuff on your diff too :^)

-Ploy-

177 posts

Joined January 2017

-Ploy- 2017-08-03T16:44:54+00:00

Hi, from my Q!

Senery's Coconut

00:14:909 (1) - Move this up for better flow, so angle between (7) and (1) will be sharper and (1) will sit better at (2)
00:27:109 (4,5,6) - I would make this a bit more spaced since it's Kai. Just like a last back 'n' forth jumps.
00:28:109 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ same here, this can be made just by moving (2) (5) tho.
00:20:709 (4,5) - You can do this if you want. ↓

In my opinion it fits flow and looks better, but it's up to you.

It's very short. Couldn't realy find any mistakes, maybe some flow unconsistency but it's personal, It's made very good (even other diffs) and you have nice sense for jump patterns. Overall I liked it very much!

Senery

698 posts

Joined March 2016

Senery 2017-08-03T17:58:05+00:00

-Ploy- wrote:
Hi, from my Q!

Senery's Coconut
00:14:909 (1) - Move this up for better flow, so angle between (7) and (1) will be sharper and (1) will sit better at (2)
00:27:109 (4,5,6) - I would make this a bit more spaced since it's Kai. Just like a last back 'n' forth jumps.
00:28:109 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ same here, this can be made just by moving (2) (5) tho.
00:20:709 (4,5) - You can do this if you want. ↓

In my opinion it fits flow and looks better, but it's up to you.

Fixed everything

It's very short. Couldn't realy find any mistakes, maybe some flow unconsistency but it's personal, It's made very good (even other diffs) and you have nice sense for jump patterns. Overall I liked it very much!

Thank you

upupdotie

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Lune

258 posts

Joined September 2015

Lune 2017-08-04T16:02:39+00:00

Kisses wrote:
Minako
00:06:909 (3) - hitsound addition the reverse would be nice lilyyyy
00:10:109 (3) - ^ and same with these 2 as well 00:13:309 (3,3) - lilyyyy pt.2
00:29:309 (3) - slight overlaps look weird imho. Either increase the overlap or dont overlap at all https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8748635 fixed

Senery wrote:
[MINAKO's Easy]
00:26:909 (4,1) - blanket is a little off aye

vvvv

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Mashed

43 posts

Joined April 2017

Mashed 2017-08-05T19:36:25+00:00

[Hard]
00:03:809 (2) - Overmapped, sounds weird

I basically can't find anything because it was done really well.

Tae

1,070 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Tae 2017-08-05T19:53:02+00:00

Mashed wrote:
[Hard]
00:03:809 (2) - Overmapped, sounds weird

I basically can't find anything because it was done really well.

Alright, fixed. Thanks!

Stack

osu! Alumni

729 posts

Joined March 2015

Stack 2017-08-06T18:21:12+00:00

nm from my queue

Tae wrote:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/641238 It's TV size for sure, and it's basically anime :thinking:

I was bamboozled, now I'm listening to k-pop ads? for the next 30 min

Hard
00:06:709 (4,3) - ovelap pls fix ty

00:10:709 (2,3) - could you make this 1/1 gap clearer, it's mapped with exactly the same distance as 00:10:109 (1,2) - which makes it really confusing

00:14:309 (5,6,7) - Why suddenly a change to stack when you did not stack them previously like at 00:07:909 (4,5,6) -

00:19:709 (1,2) - to me it feels like the emphasis in the song is not only on (2) but also on (1), so giving (1) extra spacing to be similar to (2) seems better

00:21:909 (4,1) - this jump fells really off, here you are basically transitioning between 2 different parts vocalwise so spacing them like this isn't that great imo

00:26:709 (3,6) - these stacks

00:26:310 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part in general feels really cluttered and also has minimal spacing usage which could be imporved upon greatly

00:29:509 (7) - nc here, you went over a downbeat so it's quite logical to put one

Senery's Coconut
00:03:909 (2,3) - ctrl+g'ing these 2 would flow alot better and also put smore emphasis on 00:04:309 (4) - which is also pretty good

00:06:309 (4,5) - wouldn't this be better off as a slider, as the jumps here rely mainly on vocals and 00:06:509 (5) - doesn't have one

00:11:509 (7,2) - this overlap just tilts me

00:14:109 (5,6,7,1) - can't clearly see what is being followed here, as sometimes the vocals get prioritized 00:14:709 (7) - while at other spots 1 slider gets 2 vocals 00:14:909 (1) -

00:15:509 (3) - sliderend seems a bit too strong to not make clickable

00:18:109 (1,2,3) - this triple here doesn't feel super clear on the blue tick so it could be better of as a 1/4 reverse

00:20:709 (4,5) - the flow here contradicts what you map has been doing so far so would trey something else

00:29:509 (2,3,4) - Increase spacing on these, they all have vocals so it seems appropriate as right now 00:29:309 (1) - is mapped in the same pattern while not being important at all

gl with the map

Senery

698 posts

Joined March 2016

Senery 2017-08-06T19:06:37+00:00

Gottagof4st wrote:
nm from my queue
Senery's Coconut
00:03:909 (2,3) - ctrl+g'ing these 2 would flow alot better and also put smore emphasis on 00:04:309 (4) - which is also pretty good i dont like how the ctrl+g looked did put more emphasis on (4) though

00:06:309 (4,5) - wouldn't this be better off as a slider, as the jumps here rely mainly on vocals and 00:06:509 (5) - doesn't have one im focusing on the guitar here

00:11:509 (7,2) - this overlap just tilts me ye

00:14:109 (5,6,7,1) - can't clearly see what is being followed here, as sometimes the vocals get prioritized 00:14:709 (7) - while at other spots 1 slider gets 2 vocals 00:14:909 (1) - ye i can see the confusion changed 00:14:909 (1) - into 2 circles

00:15:509 (3) - sliderend seems a bit too strong to not make clickable ctrl+g'ed (3,4) and made it look nice

00:18:109 (1,2,3) - this triple here doesn't feel super clear on the blue tick so it could be better of as a 1/4 reverse i dont like the reverse at all

00:20:709 (4,5) - the flow here contradicts what you map has been doing so far so would trey something else ye

00:29:509 (2,3,4) - Increase spacing on these, they all have vocals so it seems appropriate as right now 00:29:309 (1) - is mapped in the same pattern while not being important at all the jump from (7) to (1) is smaller than 00:29:509 (2,3,4) - , (1) get less emphasized like that while (2,3,4) with the vocal get more emphasized with the bigger jump i did change the NC on that to make it clearer

~~oh boy it 4* now~~

AAAAAA

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Tae

1,070 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Tae 2017-08-06T19:23:32+00:00

Gottagof4st wrote:
00:26:310 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part in general feels really cluttered and also has minimal spacing usage which could be imporved upon greatly[/notice]

gl with the map

This is the only thing I didn't adjust from the mod, as I feel minimal spacing usage is appropriate for the end of the map. Thanks for your help!

Okayyyyy, I've also changed Lukas' diff and replaced it with Xiao's, let's go again

Xayaka

11 posts

Joined July 2014

Xayaka 2017-08-07T01:14:14+00:00

I love your maps :^) I can't wait to see this ranked ❤

raechel

68 posts

Joined August 2015

raechel 2017-08-08T15:13:34+00:00

All of these are pretty much just observations and details that don't really need changing but I felt were a bit off.

MINAKO's Easy

00:03:709 (3,4) - the time spacing between the slidertail and the -4- note feels a bit weird to sightread, but it's not that bad. I'd personally just repeat the slider back, but that doesn't make this a bad thing, just a quick suggestion.

00:05:309 (1,2) - if this is blanketing, it's a tiny bit off. But there are other sliders placed in a similar way that aren't blanketing, so I am not sure if this was supposed to be a blanket.

00:09:309 (2,3) - the -3- here is supposed to be parallel to the -2-, right? if so, it's a tiny bit off (rotated them by the same amount and placed them near the grid lines to show it: https://rain.s-ul.eu/BFIOm1Z1.png - might want to rotate the -3- by -1 degree, seems to make it more parallel)

00:26:909 (4,1) - blanket seems off with my skin, could be just my skin though.

I don't think there's anything else I missed here.

Firetruck's Normal

Not much to say about this one.

00:03:709 (1,2,3) - the -1- slider here is unaligned with the others, but since this is repeated with other patterns for the entire map, I suppose it's a design choice. Nothing much about it.

Hard

00:20:709 (4,5,6,1) - the angle for 4-5-6 and the one for 5-6-1 are way different (5-6-1 is way wider). Personally, I would make 1-2 shorter in spacing, then duplicate it for 5-6 without inverting the direction, like this: https://rain.s-ul.eu/SCPj4kXy.png (might want to play around with the distance spacing tho, so that it fits the genera pattern and structure of your map. But other methods also work,. You can keep the wider angle if you want.

00:22:709 (4,1,2,3) - Might want to start the newcombo on the second overlap (so there's no followpoint, would make the timing "skip" easier to notice. Especially since 00:23:509 (3,1) - is also a newcombo after the jump.

00:27:509 (6,1) - this blanket is way closer than other blankets in the song. Probably the only thing you may want to change rather than keeping it as it is, while the others are just observations.

00:29:109 (6,1) - Mmh maybe find another way to place the last two objects here, since overlaps like this were a 2/4 timing for the entire map, but here it's 4/4 (and on red ticks too). The first two notes in the entire map also do this overlap on 4/4 00:02:109 (1,2) - so might want to re-check that as well. But these both shouldn't be that much of a probem.
Still wanted to point it out.

Senery's Coconut

Nice diff name my dude. Not much to say about this one, it's definitely wilder than the others but it's still consistent and structured. The reversing jumps are a bit offputting, especially since there are linear jumps as well, but I still see them as fitting.

00:06:709 (6,1,2,3,4) - might want to start the combo on the 6 here rather than where it currently is, so it fits with the words. But on the white tick is fine as well, especially since you do that for the entirety of the map, just an observation.

00:11:109 (4,5,6) - I think making the 4 a newcombo is better here, since you do that in later triples.

00:14:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - linear jumps, but the spacing isn't the same for all of them.
Might want to move the circles around a bit to fix it. I suggest not making the linear at all. Try using some acute angles here.

00:21:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - that 7-8 that breaks the pattern is kinda weird. But it fits with the next jumps afterwards. Just an observation, if you can change it to fit both would be better, but this still kinda works.

That's all I have to say, I'm not the best at mapping either (and you know it lol) so just take these as suggestions rather than actual complaints or requirements.

EDIT: oh and GL with ranking this \:D/

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Tae

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Topic Starter

Tae 2017-08-08T15:23:55+00:00

Rainfall wrote:
All of these are pretty much just observations and details that don't really need changing but I felt were a bit off.

Hard
00:20:709 (4,5,6,1) - the angle for 4-5-6 and the one for 5-6-1 are way different (5-6-1 is way wider). Personally, I would make 1-2 shorter in spacing, then duplicate it for 5-6 without inverting the direction, like this: https://rain.s-ul.eu/SCPj4kXy.png (might want to play around with the distance spacing tho, so that it fits the genera pattern and structure of your map. But other methods also work,. You can keep the wider angle if you want. Two different things my dude, big emphasis on the vocals, and lower on the instruments before it

00:22:709 (4,1,2,3) - Might want to start the newcombo on the second overlap (so there's no followpoint, would make the timing "skip" easier to notice. Especially since 00:23:509 (3,1) - is also a newcombo after the jump.

00:27:509 (6,1) - this blanket is way closer than other blankets in the song. Probably the only thing you may want to change rather than keeping it as it is, while the others are just observations. Mm, I did express that I wanted to have lower spacing for the closing part of the map

00:29:109 (6,1) - Mmh maybe find another way to place the last two objects here, since overlaps like this were a 2/4 timing for the entire map, but here it's 4/4 (and on red ticks too). The first two notes in the entire map also do this overlap on 4/4 00:02:109 (1,2) - so might want to re-check that as well. But these both shouldn't be that much of a probem.
Still wanted to point it out. Again, I've mentioned that I prefer this current pattern due to the pause in the vocals

That's all I have to say, I'm not the best at mapping either (and you know it lol) so just take these as suggestions rather than actual complaints or requirements.

EDIT: oh and GL with ranking this \:D/

no reply = fix

Senery

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Senery 2017-08-08T18:17:10+00:00

Rainfall wrote:
Senery's Coconut
Nice diff name my dude. Not much to say about this one, it's definitely wilder than the others but it's still consistent and structured. The reversing jumps are a bit offputting, especially since there are linear jumps as well, but I still see them as fitting.

00:06:709 (6,1,2,3,4) - might want to start the combo on the 6 here rather than where it currently is, so it fits with the words. But on the white tick is fine as well, especially since you do that for the entirety of the map, just an observation. changed

00:11:109 (4,5,6) - I think making the 4 a newcombo is better here, since you do that in later triples. changed

00:14:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - linear jumps, but the spacing isn't the same for all of them.
Might want to move the circles around a bit to fix it. I suggest not making the linear at all. Try using some acute angles here. oh ye i see, changed them

00:21:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - that 7-8 that breaks the pattern is kinda weird. But it fits with the next jumps afterwards. Just an observation, if you can change it to fit both would be better, but this still kinda works. mmh ye it does break it but if i ctrl+g them the circulair flow breaks on it so i will leave it like this

codu

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Xiaolin

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Xiaolin 2017-08-08T22:09:22+00:00

Checking for Trookie since she's busy with IRL.

Kisses wrote:
Firetruck
00:02:709 (2,3) - When you enable stacking you can see the DS is slightly off and even overlaps a little https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8748646 Got it.
00:09:909 (4,1) - ^ same with 00:13:109 (4,1) - Fixed this one too.
00:07:509 (2) - whistle hitsound on head would be nice hear to match the vocals. Same with 00:10:709 (2) - and 00:13:909 (2) - I'm gonna be consistent with hitsounds throughout the set.
00:19:709 (1) - The shape and the overlap of this slider goes against the structure that you've used for the rest of the map. #blametrookie4overlaps
00:22:909 (1) to 00:28:509 (3) - this is just me but I think it would look nicer to increase your overlaps for some parts. Overlaps like 00:23:509 (2) - and 00:25:509 (3) are good but the rest of them overlap too little to be aesthetically pleasing imo. Well, I ended up just going through the ones that BARLEY overlap, but of course I did some overlaps, so yeah.
Because the NC combos are really short (average 3) you can up the hp a bit to make it a bit more challenging

Senery wrote:
[Firetruck's Normal]
00:02:109 (1,2,3) - maybe put a little gab between (1) and (2,3) so it doesnt overlap Hm.. I really don't get what you mean since I see no overlap? It's just DS.. xP
00:26:709 (2) - imo a 1 beat slider on 00:26:509 - fits a bit better here Because vocals pause at the previous slider, it felt nice to just add a circle in here to emphasise the vocals better.

Rainfall wrote:
Firetruck's Normal
Not much to say about this one.

00:03:709 (1,2,3) - the -1- slider here is unaligned with the others, but since this is repeated with other patterns for the entire map, I suppose it's a design choice. Nothing much about it. Yeah, not trying to do anything hard on here since most of the diff is vocal-based.

Thank you all for the mods!

https://puu.sh/x59Ia.osu

Tae

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Topic Starter

Tae 2017-08-08T22:12:24+00:00

Ty Xiao, updated all diffs now

riffy

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riffy 2017-08-25T18:34:05+00:00

yo, as promised.

General

Let's add beyond the scene to the tags, I'm sure you know why.

Beginner

00:10:709 - 00:17:109 - these where the vocals peak, so that is probably where the sliders should be finished. This would make the rhythm a bit trickier, yet, a lot more accurate.

Personally, I would say that it is way oversimplified and leaves out a huge number of important beats while Easy is playable enough for a beginner player. Additionally, the song is just ~30 secoonds long.

MINAKO'S Easy

00:23:309 - the beat here is way too strong, and ignoring it doesn't feel reasonable. try this rhythm, instead?

At times the 3/2 sliders felt a bit forced. For insntance, 00:10:109 (3) - removing the reverse off this slider would create a less dense and more logical rhythm built around vocals. It happens here and there, I would probably try to throw in a few 3/2s to make the song a bit more rhythmical, to get beginners to listen to the song rather than just spam 1/1. After all, it's only ~30 seconds, so it should still be playable.

Firetruck's Normal

00:02:109 (1,2,3) - the stack overlaps with the previous slider in-game. Try moving things around to prevent that from happening since the majority of the stacks are without any overlaps?
00:27:109 (3,1) - I would probably keep (1) sraight as the overlap is too minor and feels unintentional rather than neat, at least it is so in my eyes.

Pretty good difficulty. Just as always!

Xiaolin's Advanced

00:03:709 (1,2,3) - the 1/4 slider ignores a strong beat on 00:03:909 - leaving it unclickable, while highlighting 00:04:109 - a weaker beat here. So, we get a somewhat spammed 1/2 rhythm that feels off. There's a break in the beat and I'd try to highlight that
00:10:109 (1,2) - I'd try a reversed 1/2 slider and a 1/2 circle as it seems to match the intensity of the sounds better. See if you like the way it sounds!

Feels quite okay, though I feel like the rhythm at some parts could be a bit better in terms of emphasis.

Hard

00:03:509 (5,1) - the jump here is okay, but when comapared with 00:04:909 (5,1) - it feels overdone. Shouldn't the part with vocal support have a bigger jump?
Sort of similar thing would apply to 00:05:709 (2,3) - which seems to be more based on the pattern itself rather than the song as the beat does not stand out much. Probably it'd be a good idea to look through it one more time and define when and why jumps are used.
00:22:709 (4,5,1) - probably could use a stack or higher spacing as the antijump feels out pf context and is hard to read.

A bit of spacing readjustments wouldn't hurt, I believe. Other than that it is a fairly solid mapset.

Senery's Coconut

My main issue is the way you sopace things. For instance, 00:02:509 (2,3,4) - when you compare 3 and 4, (3) stands out more.And you seem to agree with it, as you give it a stronger hitsound. Yet, it is spaced closer to the previous object. So, spacing-wise, (4) gets more emphasis.

It happens a lot more, for example 00:06:109 (3,4,5) - here (5) should be spaced less as it has no vocal support, or you can space (4) closer if you go for the drums. Or 00:15:709 (4,5,6) - where (5) is definitely a lot weaker, yet, spaced equally. Mixing them creates a sort of hard to understand mix of everything and none of the jumps feel meaningful.

Try to get a few mor eopinions on the spacing, see if I am not the only person feeling this way.

I feel like it still needs some polishing and more work in certain parts of it, sometimes it felt sort of rushed as well. Probably it is a good idea to take some time to go through things one more time.

Tae

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Tae 2017-08-25T21:44:42+00:00

Bakari wrote:
yo, as promised.

General
Let's add beyond the scene to the tags, I'm sure you know why.
no idea at all :^) I completely forgot about this for some reason, despite having put it on spring day

Beginner
00:10:709 - 00:17:109 - these where the vocals peak, so that is probably where the sliders should be finished. This would make the rhythm a bit trickier, yet, a lot more accurate.

Personally, I would say that it is way oversimplified and leaves out a huge number of important beats while Easy is playable enough for a beginner player. Additionally, the song is just ~30 secoonds long.
Removed the difficulty. The original intent was to make the mapset accessible to a wider audience, but I guess Easy fulfils that already, as you said.

Hard
00:03:509 (5,1) - the jump here is okay, but when comapared with 00:04:909 (5,1) - it feels overdone. Shouldn't the part with vocal support have a bigger jump?
Sort of similar thing would apply to 00:05:709 (2,3) - which seems to be more based on the pattern itself rather than the song as the beat does not stand out much. Probably it'd be a good idea to look through it one more time and define when and why jumps are used.
00:22:709 (4,5,1) - probably could use a stack or higher spacing as the antijump feels out pf context and is hard to read.

A bit of spacing readjustments wouldn't hurt, I believe. Other than that it is a fairly solid mapset. Alright, I've altered the spacing in the points raised, and adjusted a few other things, thanks for your help!

Senery

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Senery 2017-08-25T22:40:02+00:00

Bakari wrote:
yo, as promised.

Senery's Coconut
My main issue is the way you sopace things. For instance, 00:02:509 (2,3,4) - when you compare 3 and 4, (3) stands out more.And you seem to agree with it, as you give it a stronger hitsound. Yet, it is spaced closer to the previous object. So, spacing-wise, (4) gets more emphasis.

It happens a lot more, for example 00:06:109 (3,4,5) - here (5) should be spaced less as it has no vocal support, or you can space (4) closer if you go for the drums. Or 00:15:709 (4,5,6) - where (5) is definitely a lot weaker, yet, spaced equally. Mixing them creates a sort of hard to understand mix of everything and none of the jumps feel meaningful.

Try to get a few mor eopinions on the spacing, see if I am not the only person feeling this way.

i was afraid this point would come up so i looked through the map and fixed the spacing luckely it wasnt a lot, also made some things less spaced, i hope it alright now. Also nice to see that was the only issue

no more 4* FeelsBadMan

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Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2017-08-26T08:45:14+00:00

Bakari wrote:
Xiaolin's Advanced
00:03:709 (1,2,3) - the 1/4 slider ignores a strong beat on 00:03:909 - leaving it unclickable, while highlighting 00:04:109 - a weaker beat here. So, we get a somewhat spammed 1/2 rhythm that feels off. There's a break in the beat and I'd try to highlight that Changed the rhythm here. Changed the reverse into 1/2 clickable objects, and added a 1/2 slider afterwards.
00:10:109 (1,2) - I'd try a reversed 1/2 slider and a 1/2 circle as it seems to match the intensity of the sounds better. See if you like the way it sounds! Added the reverse, and kept (2) as a slider to emphasize the vocals.

Feels quite okay, though I feel like the rhythm at some parts could be a bit better in terms of emphasis.

Thanks for the mod!

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Tae

1,070 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Tae 2017-08-26T12:06:19+00:00

~~Updated all changes so far, minako and firetruck will have a slight delay before submitting their changes so I'm prepared to wait~~
Bringing this back.

Bakari wrote:
Firetruck's Normal
00:02:109 (1,2,3) - the stack overlaps with the previous slider in-game. Try moving things around to prevent that from happening since the majority of the stacks are without any overlaps?
00:27:109 (3,1) - I would probably keep (1) sraight as the overlap is too minor and feels unintentional rather than neat, at least it is so in my eyes.

Pretty good difficulty. Just as always!

Both fixed! Even I'm applying mods for Firetruck, god.

Yauxo

1,622 posts

Joined June 2011

Yauxo 2017-09-28T17:53:46+00:00

the fuck is this

[Senery]
■ 00:03:909 (2,4,5) - Could be more consistent with the blankets, spacing would probably be better if it was spaced like 00:02:909 (3,5) -
■ 00:06:309 (4,1) - I feel like this one should already be a part of the movement that the other jumps have as well. Right now, it might be a tad confusing that the rotation only starts after the third hit.
■ 00:10:109 (1) - I can see why this is at the place it's at, but it'd probably be better if it was somewhere away where it's not touching 00:09:309 (5) - anymore. Makes things more clear and less messy.
■ 00:10:509 (3) - Start and End are both about equally strong, so two Circles instead of one Slider would suit that more.
■ 00:13:909 (4) - Alternatively, you could have a Slider start here (00:14:109 (5) - starts on "nothing", considering that the jumps are based on the vocals). It's kinda how 00:23:509 (3) - is a longer Slider based on vocals and ignores a different beat on the white tick.

[Hard]
■ 00:27:509 (6,1) - Equalize spacing or change the Sliderhead's position. Right now, (5) -> (6) -> (1) has a slowdown from (5) to (6) which looks, and feels weird. You generally want to avoid that. Increased or decreased spacing should only really occour when there's a higher angle with it so that people can snap (even though it's a Hard, yes, it still kind of matters).

[Xiaolin]
■ 00:13:309 (1) - Minor, but you could stack this with 00:12:109 (2) -

[Firetruck]
■ 00:09:909 (4,1) - Move them a bit, automatic stacking makes them touch the previous Slider, as well as the Circle after
■ 00:13:109 (4,1) - Same

Tae

1,070 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Tae 2017-09-28T18:46:06+00:00

Yauxo wrote:
[Hard]
■ 00:27:509 (6,1) - Equalize spacing or change the Sliderhead's position. Right now, (5) -> (6) -> (1) has a slowdown from (5) to (6) which looks, and feels weird. You generally want to avoid that. Increased or decreased spacing should only really occour when there's a higher angle with it so that people can snap (even though it's a Hard, yes, it still kind of matters).

oops, missed that somehow. fixed

fixed firetruck's too as she~~'s too lazy~~ can't apply atm

Senery

698 posts

Joined March 2016

Senery 2017-09-28T19:17:21+00:00

Yauxo wrote:
the fuck is this i dont know either

[Senery]
■ 00:03:909 (2,4,5) - Could be more consistent with the blankets, spacing would probably be better if it was spaced like 00:02:909 (3,5) - ah yea i see fixed
■ 00:06:309 (4,1) - I feel like this one should already be a part of the movement that the other jumps have as well. Right now, it might be a tad confusing that the rotation only starts after the third hit. mmh yea i can see how that would be confusing changed it
■ 00:10:109 (1) - I can see why this is at the place it's at, but it'd probably be better if it was somewhere away where it's not touching 00:09:309 (5) - anymore. Makes things more clear and less messy. changed around some things
■ 00:10:509 (3) - Start and End are both about equally strong, so two Circles instead of one Slider would suit that more. changed
■ 00:13:909 (4) - Alternatively, you could have a Slider start here (00:14:109 (5) - starts on "nothing", considering that the jumps are based on the vocals). It's kinda how 00:23:509 (3) - is a longer Slider based on vocals and ignores a different beat on the white tick. mmh yea true but that would break how i did all the jumps, all of them have a 1/2 slider at the end so putting a 1 beat slider there would be inconsistent with the rest

its been a while

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Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2017-10-01T21:57:18+00:00

Tae fixed it, thank you for looking at my diff!

Ultima Fox

621 posts

Joined August 2013

Ultima Fox 2017-10-26T02:02:19+00:00

lol

[General]

Tags on easy are different than all the other diffs

[Easy]

00:05:309 (1) - Hitsound issue, the whistle noise is all throughout the slider instead of just on the head/tail
00:16:509 (3) - This slider isn't very visually appealing, and doesn't really play too well from (2), I think you should make it something simpler and also easier to play.
00:26:109 (3) - Also doesn't look too good, maybe try something like this

[Firetruck's Normal]

Not much to say about this diff, gj!

[Xiaolin's Advanced]

00:04:109 (3) - I feel like this slider is overmapping a little bit because there is no sound that should be mapped on the head of the slider (00:04:109)
00:11:109 (3,4) - I think this rhythm should be swapped because of the strong sound on the white tick, thus having the sliderhead representing it
00:19:709 (4) - I think there should be a nc here considering 00:22:909 (1) - is pretty much the same thing, plus it starts a new pattern which i think would be good reasons to have a nc
00:26:109 (4) - ^
00:29:309 (1,2,3) - Not really a fan of this straight forward pattern cause its a little awkward to play, so perhaps you could move 3 to the right so its at an angle and its more comfortable

[Hard]

00:02:109 (1,2) - not saying you have to change this, but try not to have a 1/1 stack followed by a 1/2 stack (00:03:709 (1,2) - ) right after cause it could get confusing
00:09:309 (3,4,5) - Weird linear movement here, try to make it a little more angled to be more comfortable to play
00:15:509 (2,3) - I don't really see a reason to stack these, to maybe put 2 at x:166 y:120
00:16:509 (1) - This slider kind of goes offscreen, so move it up a little
00:22:709 (4,5,1,2) - These stacks can be REALLY confusing, so separate 4 and 5 from 1 and 2

[Senery's Basaghae]

00:06:309 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - Theres no reason to have this many back and forths, 2 3 and 4 i understand because of the vocals but I feel like you should put 4 5 and 1 in other places
00:10:109 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is kinda awkward, so perhaps change it to something like this
00:22:509 (7,8) - This is also pretty weird to play, and I think it would be better to continue the pattern you had by putting 7 at x:329 y:242 and 8 at x:233 y:199 (if you were to do this, you would also have to modify the (1) slider)

Good Luck!

Tae

1,070 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Tae 2017-10-26T11:09:40+00:00

Ultima Fox wrote:
lol ikr

[General]

Tags on easy are different than all the other diffs
[Easy]

00:05:309 (1) - Hitsound issue, the whistle noise is all throughout the slider instead of just on the head/tail
00:16:509 (3) - This slider isn't very visually appealing, and doesn't really play too well from (2), I think you should make it something simpler and also easier to play.
00:26:109 (3) - Also doesn't look too good, maybe try something like this
[Hard]

00:02:109 (1,2) - not saying you have to change this, but try not to have a 1/1 stack followed by a 1/2 stack (00:03:709 (1,2) - ) right after cause it could get confusing Explained below
00:09:309 (3,4,5) - Weird linear movement here, try to make it a little more angled to be more comfortable to play
00:15:509 (2,3) - I don't really see a reason to stack these, to maybe put 2 at x:166 y:120 That placing looks incredibly awkward to play and doesn't really work with how the rest of the map flows. There's a slight gap here as well, so again, is rather consistent with how I map such things
00:16:509 (1) - This slider kind of goes offscreen, so move it up a little ...does it?
00:22:709 (4,5,1,2) - These stacks can be REALLY confusing, so separate 4 and 5 from 1 and 2 Potentially, but seeing as there's no reason to put any emphasis on this due to the pause,
and how it's consistent with other parts like this within the difficulty, e.g. 00:02:109 (1,2) - + 00:29:109 (6,1) -

no reply = fixed

Daycore

918 posts

Joined January 2015

Daycore 2017-10-26T12:18:30+00:00

Hello! ~ From my queue / Sorry for short mod, I didn't found more.

Hard

00:23:309 (1,2) - I think player can get confused because of this stack.

Senery's Basaghae

00:03:309 (5,4) - Can you stack this? It would look beautiful.
00:06:309 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - Patterns like this looks strange. Because of such patterns, there is no desire to play this difficulty.
00:08:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:13:309 (1,2,3,4,5) -^^

Good luck with map!

Senery

698 posts

Joined March 2016

Senery 2017-10-26T15:47:06+00:00

Rus_Brony_osu wrote:
Senery's Basaghae
00:03:309 (5,4) - Can you stack this? It would look beautiful. ye
00:06:309 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - Patterns like this looks strange. Because of such patterns, there is no desire to play this difficulty.
00:08:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:13:309 (1,2,3,4,5) -^^ i dont know what is strange about it, its just normal back and forths. And no desire to play?

Good luck with map!

thanks for the mod

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Tae

1,070 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Tae 2017-10-26T18:41:52+00:00

Rus_Brony_osu wrote:
Hello! ~ From my queue / Sorry for short mod, I didn't found more.

Hard
00:23:309 (1,2) - I think player can get confused because of this stack. Previously explained that there isn't any reason to emphasise these notes, so a stack works better.

Senery, did you forget the other mod?

Senery

698 posts

Joined March 2016

Senery 2017-10-26T19:29:19+00:00

oops i didnt see this one

Ultima Fox wrote:
lol

[Senery's Basaghae]

00:06:309 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - Theres no reason to have this many back and forths, 2 3 and 4 i understand because of the vocals but I feel like you should put 4 5 and 1 in other places yea agreed, the were a bit out of place because of the first couple so them around a bit
00:10:109 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is kinda awkward, so perhaps change it to something like this mmh doesnt really feel awkward to me, i can change it if its mentioned again(also in the pic your emphasis on the notes is bad)
00:22:509 (7,8) - This is also pretty weird to play, and I think it would be better to continue the pattern you had by putting 7 at x:329 y:242 and 8 at x:233 y:199 (if you were to do this, you would also have to modify the (1) slider) well the pattern itself does continue, the position isnt really mirrored correctly but i dont really mind that, also how you did it also isnt even something that is in the pattern and i really dislike how it looks because it overlaps a lot with (1) and (2)
Good Luck!

thanks aswell for the mod

nothing went wrong here

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Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2017-11-06T10:49:41+00:00

Ultima Fox wrote:
[Xiaolin's Advanced]

00:04:109 (3) - I feel like this slider is overmapping a little bit because there is no sound that should be mapped on the head of the slider (00:04:109) There's a sound here though..
00:11:109 (3,4) - I think this rhythm should be swapped because of the strong sound on the white tick, thus having the sliderhead representing it Made it a triplet.
00:19:709 (4) - I think there should be a nc here considering 00:22:909 (1) - is pretty much the same thing, plus it starts a new pattern which i think would be good reasons to have a nc Oops, fixed.
00:26:109 (4) - ^ ^
00:29:309 (1,2,3) - Not really a fan of this straight forward pattern cause its a little awkward to play, so perhaps you could move 3 to the right so its at an angle and its more comfortable Sure.

Thanks for modding!

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408,220,20309,2,0,L|420:146,1,75,0|2,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
356,72,20709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,32,20909,2,0,P|220:40|184:36,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,76,21309,6,0,L|112:160,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,212,21709,2,0,L|180:296,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,332,22109,2,0,P|316:345|352:341,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,276,22509,2,0,P|448:275|484:287,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,372,22909,5,2,0:0:0:0:
444,176,23309,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,176,23509,2,0,L|436:88,1,75
256,32,24109,2,0,L|249:106,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,1:2:0:0:
188,184,24509,6,0,P|144:148|56:168,1,150,2|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
172,324,25309,2,0,L|264:316,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,308,25709,1,2,1:2:0:0:
432,136,26109,6,0,L|340:128,1,75,0|2,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
260,120,26509,1,2,0:3:0:0:
260,120,26709,2,0,L|185:126,1,75,0|2,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
136,316,27309,1,2,0:0:0:0:
4,172,27709,6,0,B|-4:120|-4:120|24:16,1,150,2|2,3:2|0:0,3:2:0:0:
185,125,28509,2,0,P|185:173|169:221,1,75,2|2,3:2|0:0,3:2:0:0:
236,276,28909,2,0,P|283:270|333:280,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,324,29309,5,0,0:0:0:0:
456,236,29509,2,0,L|468:144,1,75,2|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
448,64,29909,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,30109,12,0,32509,0:0:0:0:

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