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Yamicchi

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2017-03-08T12:39:27+00:00

Lasse wrote:
yamicchi
maybe rename to expert instead of extra to have some more "progression" in the names? I'll let you decide this for me 0109- :3
00:06:242 - add a green line with ~25% volume here I think. repeats sound a bit too loud for the piano // 00:20:867 (1) - here too and for others
00:17:117 - see extra
00:34:034 (6) - think it would be nice to have this a 1/2 slider since your whole pattern focuses on the guitar sound and then suddenly (7) is on drums, even if it's only a stack. this way you would also get a short break in tapping, which would make 00:34:367 - where guitar is back feel more important

kinda similar issue with parts feeling a bit too "same", though here at least different sv was used for different parts I couldn't really express anything back then because I was new to those kind of music, but look at a fact that the song is a bit the same itself so...

All fixed :3 Thanks Lasse

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Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-03-10T08:57:30+00:00

Q

[Jewel]
00:14:034 (2) - kickslider for add a beat 00:14:117 - , this part has a weak beat,
00:26:534 (1,2,3) - weird flow
00:39:034 (1,2) - make similar pattern with 00:28:367 (1,2) -
01:02:034 (2,1) - I suggest you stacking this since you stacked in 1/1 parts. 01:01:034 (2,1) -
01:43:034 - add a beat here?
01:48:200 (2) - ctrl G looks better flow
01:58:284 - Is this part has a beat?

GL

Dstorv

247 posts

Joined November 2013

Dstorv 2017-03-26T07:50:40+00:00

Random mod, cause I love ~~eroge~~ the song

Jewel

00:11:367 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - It would be great, if both of these are like moving horizontally, since they are both equally (similiar) sound, but one mapped by moving vertically, and the other horizontally
00:20:867 (4,5,6,7,1) - its personal preference I guess, but I never really like when curved stream is done in small ds, cause sometime it kinda mess up when you're trying to tap it
00:33:867 (3,4,5) - shouldnt this have the same spacing?
00:36:534 (3,4) - copy-paste (4) from (3), cause its weird for me that both of this is different .-.
00:39:700 (1,2) - You're breaking the flow a lot on this
00:54:200 (5) - I would suggest to make the slider like this , so that it flow much better
00:55:034 (2,3,4,5) - I'm a bit baffled here, cos neither the vocal nor the drum support this jump (especially the jump on (2,3)), I would suggest to change 00:55:034 (2,3) - to slider, to show that the jump on (4,5) - is definitely mapped to the drum.
01:09:200 (1) - Why is this slider so weird.. .-.
01:22:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I feel like the build-up for the massive jump on (4,5,6) is not enough
01:57:367 (1,2) - Why are the movement here is different from the rest 01:55:867 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ?

Hopefully, this got ranked~

0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

0109- 2017-03-26T13:49:48+00:00

sullywally wrote:
Random mod, cause I love ~~eroge~~ the song

Jewel
00:11:367 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - It would be great, if both of these are like moving horizontally, since they are both equally (similiar) sound, but one mapped by moving vertically, and the other horizontally it's fine since the ds stayed the same
00:20:867 (4,5,6,7,1) - its personal preference I guess, but I never really like when curved stream is done in small ds, cause sometime it kinda mess up when you're trying to tap it it's actually 1/8 rhythm here but using a small ds stream may be an alternate way to reflect the sound imo
00:33:867 (3,4,5) - shouldnt this have the same spacing? why lol
00:36:534 (3,4) - copy-paste (4) from (3), cause its weird for me that both of this is different .-. okay
00:39:700 (1,2) - You're breaking the flow a lot on this adjusted the slider a bit
00:54:200 (5) - I would suggest to make the slider like this , so that it flow much better agreed
00:55:034 (2,3,4,5) - I'm a bit baffled here, cos neither the vocal nor the drum support this jump (especially the jump on (2,3)), I would suggest to change 00:55:034 (2,3) - to slider, to show that the jump on (4,5) - is definitely mapped to the drum. all those notes supported the drum lol
01:09:200 (1) - Why is this slider so weird.. .-. adjusted a bit
01:22:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I feel like the build-up for the massive jump on (4,5,6) is not enough fixed
01:57:367 (1,2) - Why are the movement here is different from the rest 01:55:867 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ? it's not really a problem tbh, the flow was fine

Hopefully, this got ranked~

Thanks for modding

lit120

3,250 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2017-03-27T19:36:57+00:00

[jewel]

00:06:534 (1) - add finish
01:00:867 (1) - clap
01:21:867 (3,4,1) - clap
01:24:867 (5) - would be better for the flow if u ctrl+g this
01:55:784 - u missed a note here

[yamicchi]

01:02:034 (5) - it'd be confusing where u have to hit a note on 01:02:367 (6) - . since it's a pause part, u should stack it instead .-.
01:43:700 (4,5) - was expecting to have this a higher spacing due to its downbeat, but u didn't

[asaiga]

00:49:867 (3) - nice error stack :^)
01:18:367 (1,2,3) - what a weird start to NC it .-. would NC at 01:18:534 (3) - instead though

[hard]

00:22:367 (1,2) - not so neat blanket here
00:41:117 - a good way to do a triplet here for a better emphasize
00:43:534 (3,1) - not so neat blanket

looks like u need to do something with the hitsounds by rechecking them .-.

GL!

0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

0109- 2017-03-28T08:49:15+00:00

lit120 wrote:
[jewel]
00:06:534 (1) - add finish ok
01:00:867 (1) - clap okay
01:21:867 (3,4,1) - clap whistle fits the sound better
01:24:867 (5) - would be better for the flow if u ctrl+g this i prefer mine
01:55:784 - u missed a note here ??

[hard]
00:22:367 (1,2) - not so neat blanket here i wasn't tend to make a blanket
00:41:117 - a good way to do a triplet here for a better emphasize added
00:43:534 (3,1) - not so neat blanket that looks fine
looks like u need to do something with the hitsounds by rechecking them .-. yeah

GL!

Thanks for modding

edit: fixed for asaiga

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2017-04-01T15:14:53+00:00

did a quick scan through the whole set. disagreed with a certain number of ideas, generally found Extras sort of unpolished.

IRC log

19:15 0109-: hi, um... can i have a quick check on my map please :( ?
19:16 Bakari: I guess, a quick check never hurts 
19:16 Bakari: link me the set :) 
19:17 *0109- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1048502 Duca - Jewel Days]
19:17 0109-: i asked 4 bns and they ignored because of generic style :|
19:22 *Bakari is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1048502 Duca - Jewel Days [Jewel]]
19:22 0109-: <3
19:23 Bakari: 00:34:367 (1) - considering that (1) has a finish hitsound and a new combo it probably should've been spaced further? 
19:23 Bakari: 00:45:200 (1) - I don't really get the reason to curve this slider in such a way
19:24 Bakari: 00:46:534 (1) - the first/last parts of the slider aren't parallel. they also seem to be different in length
19:24 0109-: yeah ...
19:24 Bakari: don't know if this matters to you
19:24 Bakari: 00:49:200 (1,2) - probably these were meant to be a blanketed pattern 
19:25 Bakari: is it this way on purpose? 
19:25 0109-: yeah
19:25 Bakari: can you explain why then? 
19:26 Bakari: I don't really know the lyrics/meaning of the song, so it seems to me that these are just untidy :p
19:26 Bakari: 00:50:700 (6,7) - compare this with 00:50:534 (5,6) - 
19:26 0109-: hmm...
19:27 Bakari: (6) has a stronger beat, so it should be spaced further, I suppose. (7) actually doesn't really have anything to justify the jump
19:27 0109-: ok
19:28 Bakari: 00:54:867 - probably could use a circle here, leaving strong drum beat and vocals unclickable doesn't feel like the right thing to do 
19:28 Bakari: 00:57:200 (1) - can you explain why it is curved this way? 
19:28 0109-: i just randomly make it different from others lol :|
19:29 Bakari: what makes you think that random sliders are acceptable, though? 
19:29 Bakari: mapping is all about the song, use the rhythm and ideas the song has to offer 
19:29 Bakari: I'm pretty sure there is a plenty of things you could do instead of random sliders :p
19:30 0109-: yeah, i'll fix that
19:30 Bakari: 01:03:534 (7) - is objectively stronger as a beat. it has a clap sound on it as well. 
19:30 Bakari: the question is: why 5-6-7 spaced the same? 
19:32 Bakari: 01:39:700 (7) - I don't feel like it is strong enough to keep the spacing high, are you sure of this pattern? 
19:34 Bakari: 01:52:867 (2,3) - a plain triplet would fit better both in termns of rhythm (01:53:117 - there's nothing there) 
19:34 Bakari: and in terms of consistency with the map, since there were no similar patterns before
19:34 Bakari: In general, it could use more work with the jumps, as a number of those feel quite random 
19:35 Bakari: and it does feel a bit unpolished visually as well. you said it was intended, but you never came up with a reason why
19:35 0109-: yeah..
19:35 0109-: okay <(")
19:36 Bakari: Well, since you asked for a quick check I'll comment on the guest difficulties as well 
19:36 Bakari: not to point out any specific flaws (if there are any) but just to give a general idea 
19:36 *Bakari is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1101027 Duca - Jewel Days [Yamicchi's Extra]]
19:37 0109-: gosh, thanks
19:37 Bakari: 00:16:534 (1,2,3,4) - these jumps feel overdone, the guitar is sort of faded and there are no other instruments. some lower spacing figures would've worked better, I suppose 
19:39 Bakari: 00:34:034 (6,1) - should've been spaced higher, if I got the mapper's idea right
19:39 Bakari: it seems like they went for the drums in this part and the spacing would increase with every strong drum hit 
19:39 Bakari: (1) doesn't do this, for some reason, though
19:40 Bakari: again, more of a subjective thing, 00:45:867 (1,2,3) - but I disagree with the spacing here
19:41 Bakari: 00:47:034 (2) - does (2) really provide enough strength for this jump? 
19:41 Bakari: 00:47:700 (1,2) - 00:48:367 (3,4) - they are mapped in a similar way, shouldn't they represent the same idea? 
19:41 Bakari: if that's so, either 1-2 should've been unstacked, or 3-4 stacked. 
19:42 0109-: hmm...
19:42 Bakari: I see that the mapper is going for the vocals but I still feel quite confused about 00:51:200 - being unclickable
19:43 Bakari: 01:27:200 (3,4,6) - not sure if this kind of stacks is readable/comfortable enough for a player
19:44 0109-: yeah..
19:44 Bakari: 01:43:200 - assuming that (3) represents the highly pitched sound 
19:45 Bakari: it's quite odd that 01:42:867 - is unclickable
19:45 Bakari: 01:43:867 - this is also unclickable, and this one is even stronger, it has some kind of drum support there
19:46 Bakari: 01:46:367 (1) - more of a subjective thing, but I don't understand a reason for this curve. It's not unrabkable, nor is it really wrong 
19:46 Bakari: It's just something I dislike personally :p
19:47 0109-: do that kind of curved sliders really a problem?
19:47 Bakari: 01:55:867 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I really don't feel like this is the right way to map it. 01:56:534 (2,3) - 01:57:534 (2,3) - are so much weaker, yet spaced in the same way
19:48 Bakari: it's not a problem, it's just something I disagree with 
19:48 *Bakari is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1074492 Duca - Jewel Days [Asaiga's Insane]]
19:48 Bakari: 00:07:700 (1) - I just don't see why
19:50 Bakari: 01:13:200 (1) - I really fail to understand this kind of slidercurves 
19:51 Bakari: 01:16:367 - 01:16:700 - these beats are pretty much equal. same pitch of the vocals and drums 
19:51 Bakari: same intensity
19:51 Bakari: yet one of them is clickable, the other isn't. why? 
19:52 0109-: :|
19:52 Bakari: the Insane in generalfeels a bit too slow to me, not sure if that's an actual issue 
19:53 Bakari: I feel like for a song this energetic a higher velocity would work better, though 
19:54 0109-: i'll consider to adjust it
19:55 *Bakari is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1047631 Duca - Jewel Days [Hard]]
19:55 Bakari: 00:16:034 (2,1) - this is kind of a jump pattern, any reasons to start using higher spacing specifically here? 
19:56 0109-: the pitch kinda raised here so ...
19:56 Bakari: it did sort of similar thing with 00:15:367 (4,1) -  
19:57 Bakari: 00:37:700 (2,1) - blanketing :p 
19:57 Bakari: 00:40:700 - the actual 1/4 sound starts here, and not on 00:40:867 (4) - 
19:57 Bakari: you're just a bit late with the triplet 
19:59 Bakari: 01:37:034 (5,1) - no x1.4 spacing / 01:34:200 (3,1) - x1.4 spacing 
19:59 Bakari: why? aren't these two pretty much identical?
20:00 Bakari: I mean, I could be missing something in the lyrics that explains this, it might be justified with the piano tones of some sort. It isn't necessarily wrong, I  just want you to explain it
20:01 Bakari: 01:42:200 (3,1) - wouldn't it make more sense to place it in a way that would make the second reverse on (3) more obvious? I'd read it better this way http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/gdpAXplp.jpg 
20:01 0109-: yeah i missed that
20:01 Bakari: that was good, though 
20:02 *Bakari is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1047632 Duca - Jewel Days [Normal]]
20:03 Bakari: 00:29:534 - 00:29:867 - 00:30:200 - I feel like these are three equally strong beats, why not just map them by placing three circles? 
20:03 Bakari: or 3 short 1/2 sliders, kind of like 01:01:534 (4,5) - 
20:05 Bakari: 01:07:034 (4) - this could follow vocals slightly better, so that when there is no vocals, there'd be no sliderslide effect [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7711502 try this rhythm?]
20:06 Bakari: it's not bad at all, could use a bit more work here and there, but hey, it's already pretty promising
20:06 *Bakari is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1052500 Duca - Jewel Days [Easy]]
20:06 0109-: lol
20:07 Bakari: 00:34:700 (3,4) - blanketing :p
20:07 0109-: ._.
20:08 Bakari:  01:21:200 (1) - again, I don't really see why 
20:09 0109-: those are counted as overmapped?
20:09 Bakari: nope
20:09 Bakari: they just feel random to me. there is no rule to disallow them, and I can't stop you from using these sliders 
20:10 Bakari: anyways, the Easy-Normal-Hard part of the set is pretty good 
20:10 Bakari: Insane feels sort of slow, but it's okay 
20:10 0109-: yeah, i'll try to get those higher diffs polished, thanks for checking <3
20:11 Bakari: Extras could be imporved 
20:11 Bakari: anytime 
20:11 Bakari: do you want the log posted?

Hope this helped!

Eir_DELETED

Eir_DELETED 2017-04-06T03:32:54+00:00

from my queue
remove "game" from tags? overlapped with genre when the map is ranked.
Additionally add "ensemble"(file's name) into tags?

Easy

00:46:200 (3,1) - can you blanket properly?
00:51:200 - missing finish? should be better to add it in order to your finish pattern

Normal

00:24:034 - i suggest to pick up this sound differently Easy diff. can you try to use 1/1 slider + circle instead? 00:35:034 (3) - same. you add finish on 00:35:367 - at other diffs. then should be better imo.

Hard

1. HP6 is kinda high on hard. just a my preference.
2. 01:58:534 (5) - add NC like Normal?

Asaiga's Insane

00:17:034 (4,1,2) - i think the placements is not comfortable in term of playable. can you edge from 00:17:200 (1) - ?

Yamicchi's Extra

01:34:534 (1,2) - there are close a bit i think in term of should be better to emphasize upbeat sound like 01:37:200 (1,2) -
01:58:617 (1) - can you unify spinner end with others?

Jewel

nothing to say. nice work!

i cant mod anymore cuz of nice qualities and already gathered mod quantities.
sure, I love Duca's song. Good Luck!

Asaiga

848 posts

Joined July 2013

Asaiga 2017-04-06T07:16:37+00:00

Fixed everything from Bakari's and joker-'s mod

sao ko ai bảo remap hết vậy lol

osu file format v14

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0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

0109- 2017-04-07T01:29:11+00:00

All fixed thanks for modding

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2017-04-07T12:14:26+00:00

lit120 wrote:
[yamicchi]
01:02:034 (5) - it'd be confusing where u have to hit a note on 01:02:367 (6) - . since it's a pause part, u should stack it instead .-. it's just to make the objects easier to read. Nothing changed
01:43:700 (4,5) - was expecting to have this a higher spacing due to its downbeat, but u didn't 01:43:700 (4,5) - those slider starts all have drum sounds, so I made them spacing due to aesthetics and drums too. It'd be fine

@joker- first one fixed. Next one not.

Thanks for mod

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Jewel Days
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:0109-
Version:Yamicchi's Extra
Source:Golden Marriage -Jewel Days-
Tags:visual novel eroge  lotta ensemble ゴールデンマリッジ ジュエルデイズ asaiga yamicchi
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Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2017-04-16T05:17:06+00:00

Easy

00:45:200 (1) - nc is not needed here based on your general nc logic?
01:14:367 (1,3) - same, swap nc and de;ete this one 01:17:034 (1) - too
01:25:200 (1,3) - ^

Normal

00:51:867 (1,3) - blanket better if thats intended
01:08:367 - thought most vocals are somehow followed well, it feels weird to me that you suddenly ignore this one, I would suggest https://puu.sh/vlENY/8e32436763.png rhythm pattern instead. yea i changed 01:07:034 (4) - to circles too i think its nice to have some rhythm variation from 01:04:367 (2,4) - etc.
01:29:700 - ^

Hard

00:27:867 (1) - 00:29:867 (3) - 00:30:534 (1) - should be 1.4x spacing considering how you generally dealt with those finish emphasizes
00:51:200 (5,6) - visually too close, chekc how it looks with stacking on
01:22:367 (3) - vocal at the reverse sounds weird to me, what about turning 01:22:200 (2,3) - into 2 stacked circles + 1/2slider
01:23:534 (6,7,8) - change to a reversed slider so 01:23:617 - sound isn't missed? like 01:42:200 (3) -

Asaiga's Insane

00:13:700 - 00:19:867 (1) - 00:29:867 (4) - 00:30:534 (1) - 00:41:200 - 00:55:700 - 01:49:034 - finish i supposed, considering how ur general hitsounding was done
00:21:700 (4,5) - i'd go with simple 1/2 here cuz extended sliders are never used again to emphasize similar vocals
00:46:200 (4,1) - minor one, u can make the visual spacing between sliders a bit larger, based on the general visual distances in this diff
hmm maybe just different aesthetic preferences your slider curve usage loks really random to me..

Yamicchi's Extra

00:06:534 - 00:39:700 - finish?
the difficulty sounds a bit underhitsounded here and there but that might be your hitsounding style ;?

Jewel

00:11:450 (6) - the uneven spacing in the triplet triggers me a bit lol
00:35:367 - consider making the finish at tail clickable, it sounds a bit misleading in gameplay.. or deleting the finish can work too
00:57:200 - finish sounds better here
01:11:867 (1,3,1) - 01:33:200 (1,3,5) - consider whistle, fits music well imo
01:12:534 (1,2) - 01:33:867 (5,6) - different nc pattern/?
01:42:534 - imo 0.9x slowdown isnt significant enough while playing, i'd suggest around 0.8x
01:57:367 (1,2) - consider rearranging the placement of the two objects so movement will be consistent with 01:55:867 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - the rest
00:49:200 - to 00:51:867 - slowdown a bit like 01:42:534 - ?

0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

0109- 2017-04-16T09:47:19+00:00

Garden wrote:
Easy
00:45:200 (1) - nc is not needed here based on your general nc logic? the pitch of the sound was kinda change like 00:43:867 (1) - , 00:46:534 (1) - has expressed
01:14:367 (1,3) - same, swap nc and de;ete this one 01:17:034 (1) - too ok
01:25:200 (1,3) - ^ ok
Normal
00:51:867 (1,3) - blanket better if thats intended ok
01:08:367 - thought most vocals are somehow followed well, it feels weird to me that you suddenly ignore this one, I would suggest https://puu.sh/vlENY/8e32436763.png rhythm pattern instead. yea i changed 01:07:034 (4) - to circles too i think its nice to have some rhythm variation from 01:04:367 (2,4) - etc. it's not a big problem imo, since the concept of the map not really follow the vocal, like 00:39:034 (2) - as an example, furthermore, putting notes in red ticks somehow feels awkward since i mapped mainly on white ticks which comfortable for new players.
01:29:700 - ^ ^
Hard
00:27:867 (1) - 00:29:867 (3) - 00:30:534 (1) - should be 1.4x spacing considering how you generally dealt with those finish emphasizes yeah
00:51:200 (5,6) - visually too close, chekc how it looks with stacking on changed it to 0.2 spacing instead
01:22:367 (3) - vocal at the reverse sounds weird to me, what about turning 01:22:200 (2,3) - into 2 stacked circles + 1/2slider i intendid to follow the drum sound here as the overall concept does as well
01:23:534 (6,7,8) - change to a reversed slider so 01:23:617 - sound isn't missed? like 01:42:200 (3) - cool
Jewel
00:11:450 (6) - the uneven spacing in the triplet triggers me a bit lol
00:35:367 - consider making the finish at tail clickable, it sounds a bit misleading in gameplay.. or deleting the finish can work too
00:57:200 - finish sounds better here
01:11:867 (1,3,1) - 01:33:200 (1,3,5) - consider whistle, fits music well imo
01:12:534 (1,2) - 01:33:867 (5,6) - different nc pattern/?
01:42:534 - imo 0.9x slowdown isnt significant enough while playing, i'd suggest around 0.8x
01:57:367 (1,2) - consider rearranging the placement of the two objects so movement will be consistent with 01:55:867 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - the rest
00:49:200 - to 00:51:867 - slowdown a bit like 01:42:534 - ?
all fixed

Thanks for modding

Edit: fixed for yamicchi

Last edited by 0109- 2017-04-22T10:16:41+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Asaiga

848 posts

Joined July 2013

Asaiga 2017-04-16T12:37:10+00:00

Garden wrote:
Asaiga's Insane
00:13:700 - 00:19:867 (1) - 00:29:867 (4) - 00:30:534 (1) - 00:41:200 - 00:55:700 - 01:49:034 - finish i supposed, considering how ur general hitsounding was done all added! Thanks for pointing these out
00:21:700 (4,5) - i'd go with simple 1/2 here cuz extended sliders are never used again to emphasize similar vocals changed this pattern
00:46:200 (4,1) - minor one, u can make the visual spacing between sliders a bit larger, based on the general visual distances in this diff adjusted
hmm maybe just different aesthetic preferences your slider curve usage loks really random to me.. I mapped this when I was still noob at mapping, I understand.

Thanks for star, hype!

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Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

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Garden 2017-04-22T10:16:30+00:00

sweet song

I Must Decrease

908 posts

Joined June 2013

I Must Decrease 2017-05-02T23:31:08+00:00

Easy:
01:01:200 - and 00:13:200 - are unrankable because you cannot silence both slider tick and slider slide.
00:48:534 (3) - unrankable because its not synced to any music
01:18:534 (1,2,3) - angles look bad
01:09:200 (3) - missing hitsound?
01:58:700 (1) - spinner should probably go on for another 2/1

Normal:
00:30:534 (1) - uhh i wouldnt do this slider shape.
01:29:034 - why is this a slider end? rly awkward

Fix the unrankables. I would also recommend spending some more time on the set overall. If you have questions about how to improve your mapset you can message me ingame, I'm short on time since its still finals week but I wanted to at least make sure this wasn't pushed with these unrankable elements. GL!

0109-

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Topic Starter

0109- 2017-05-03T09:16:38+00:00

Xexxar wrote:
Easy:
01:01:200 - and 00:13:200 - are unrankable because you cannot silence both slider tick and slider slide.
00:48:534 (3) - unrankable because its not synced to any music
01:18:534 (1,2,3) - angles look bad
01:09:200 (3) - missing hitsound? that was my intention, not really necessary to put something there imo..
01:58:700 (1) - spinner should probably go on for another 2/1 I just want all the difficulty have the same length. Adding another 2/1 seems kinda hard for HR players at the last diff

Normal:
00:30:534 (1) - uhh i wouldnt do this slider shape. im not sure if i did it right
01:29:034 - why is this a slider end? rly awkward i want to avoid red ticks as much as possible in order to make the map looks not so complicated. If it that noticeable, maybe i'll do some remap at the kiai

Fix the unrankables. I would also recommend spending some more time on the set overall. If you have questions about how to improve your mapset you can message me ingame, I'm short on time since its still finals week but I wanted to at least make sure this wasn't pushed with these unrankable elements. GL!

Thanks you

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depzdai

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depzdai 2017-05-22T11:47:28+00:00

Ex diff mod delivered.
Nếu anh chịu M4M thì giúp em mod cái này luôn (tối thiểu là chỉ mod phụ em diff cuối thôi): https://osu.ppy.sh/s/595566. Cảm ơn anh nhiều! XD
À mà nếu mod này cùi bắp quá thì anh khỏi mod cái của em nữa cũng được. Xd

[Ex]

Đầu tiên là cái buildup từ 00:19:867 trở đi. Một số đoạn jump góc hẹp quá mặc dù chẳng cần thiết phải làm thế: 00:25:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 00:33:534 (2,3,4,5) - 00:36:534 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - 00:51:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - .
00:12:534 (3) - Đổi thành 2 circles đi anh. Guitar nó chơi cả đầu với đuôi của slider đó và tone đang tăng nên cần jump.
00:24:867 (4,5,6,7,1) - Rotate cái slider hoặc chỉnh cái slider bớt cong để flow mượt hơn.
00:32:700 (2,2) - Blanket.
00:35:034 (1,2) - Lạ vì cái circle 2 không cần nhấn vì không có drum, chỉ có vocal, làm vậy thì không phù hợp với 00:34:367 (1) - trước đó. Mà 00:35:200 - có drum nè anh?
00:42:200 (4) - Kéo tới x:270 y:80 cho blanket đẹp hơn.
00:48:867 (2,3,4,5,1) - Blanket đống curve stream với 00:48:367 (1) - nhé anh.
00:49:200 (1,2,3) - Em thích chuyển về thế này: https://puu.sh/vXTQm/91bc1ba218.png. Slider 1 thay đổi cấu trúc đường đi của curve stream trước đó để nhấn mạnh (khúc đó rhythm chậm hẳn), và flow đẹp chơi sẽ sướng hơn (snap DS luôn càng tốt).
00:51:200 (8,9,10,11,12,1) - Blanket.
00:57:200 (1) - Gam trưởng tăng lên nên đảo flow hợp hơn nhiều. Mặc dù nếu làm vậy thì phải chỉnh thêm đống blanket phía sau nữa. https://puu.sh/vXUhT/b7157f0246.png
00:54:534 (1,2,3,4) - Đang map theo vocal mà đột nhiên chuyển sang drum nên kì. https://puu.sh/vXUDA/4689b56ee2.png
01:02:367 (3,1) - Nhạc dừng thì nên map stack, muốn jump để nhấn thì sử dụng kickslider. https://puu.sh/vXUH6/15173a16b0.png
01:04:367 (2,3,1) - 01:07:034 (2,3,1) - 01:09:700 (2,3,1) - Đống này lộn xộn, overlap không có qui tắc nên xấu map. (Khúc sau cấu trúc là stack sliders nên khá thích)
01:13:700 (2,3,1) - 01:16:367 (2,3,1) - Hai cái này đừng có overlap để nó giống khúc sau 01:35:034 (2,3,1) - 01:37:700 (2,3,1) - , với lại để nhấn mạnh so với 3 cái patterns bên trên cũng tốt.
01:51:200 (3) - Đổi thành 2 circles. Lí do như một ý nào đó ở trên.
01:52:867 (1,2,3,1) - Em nghĩ cần bỏ thêm 1 cái circle ở 01:53:117 - (làm thành cái penta luôn) để nhấn càng mạnh giọng hát (giọng hét) càng tốt. Vả lại triplet để không đó rồi jump sang nốt khác thì đống jump đằng sau (âm guitar) bị giảm hẳn stress trong bài hát. (Hình như em có nghe cả tiếng drum nữa, nhưng âm lượng drum giảm dần đều nên không rõ nữa)
Hình như còn vài cái blankets nữa mà em không nhớ. Với lại còn flow ở một số chỗ khác không mượt mà như diff Jewel (chắc tại speedmap).

Chúc anh may mắn.

0109-

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Topic Starter

0109- 2017-05-22T14:44:31+00:00

depzdai wrote:
Ex diff mod delivered.
Nếu anh chịu M4M thì giúp em mod cái này luôn (tối thiểu là chỉ mod phụ em diff cuối thôi): https://osu.ppy.sh/s/595566. Cảm ơn anh nhiều! XD
À mà nếu mod này cùi bắp quá thì anh khỏi mod cái của em nữa cũng được. Xd

[Ex]
Đầu tiên là cái buildup từ 00:19:867 trở đi. Một số đoạn jump góc hẹp quá mặc dù chẳng cần thiết phải làm thế: 00:25:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 00:33:534 (2,3,4,5) - 00:36:534 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - 00:51:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - . hẹp thì sao ?
00:12:534 (3) - Đổi thành 2 circles đi anh. Guitar nó chơi cả đầu với đuôi của slider đó và tone đang tăng nên cần jump. oki
00:24:867 (4,5,6,7,1) - Rotate cái slider hoặc chỉnh cái slider bớt cong để flow mượt hơn. ok
00:32:700 (2,2) - Blanket. lol xa quá rồi ko cần thiết đến mức vậy đâu
00:35:034 (1,2) - Lạ vì cái circle 2 không cần nhấn vì không có drum, chỉ có vocal, làm vậy thì không phù hợp với 00:34:367 (1) - trước đó. Mà 00:35:200 - có drum nè anh? à ko biết là đã update hs chưa nhưng ở đây có finish, để ở đuôi nhìn tù lắm
00:42:200 (4) - Kéo tới x:270 y:80 cho blanket đẹp hơn. ok
00:48:867 (2,3,4,5,1) - Blanket đống curve stream với 00:48:367 (1) - nhé anh. nó đang như thế rồi mà
00:49:200 (1,2,3) - Em thích chuyển về thế này: https://puu.sh/vXTQm/91bc1ba218.png. Slider 1 thay đổi cấu trúc đường đi của curve stream trước đó để nhấn mạnh (khúc đó rhythm chậm hẳn), và flow đẹp chơi sẽ sướng hơn (snap DS luôn càng tốt). Nhìn không quen lắm, nó cũng ko đến mức cần thiết vậy
00:51:200 (8,9,10,11,12,1) - Blanket. ok
00:57:200 (1) - Gam trưởng tăng lên nên đảo flow hợp hơn nhiều. Mặc dù nếu làm vậy thì phải chỉnh thêm đống blanket phía sau nữa. https://puu.sh/vXUhT/b7157f0246.png flow vậy sao gọi là hợp
00:54:534 (1,2,3,4) - Đang map theo vocal mà đột nhiên chuyển sang drum nên kì. https://puu.sh/vXUDA/4689b56ee2.png vẫn theo vocal mà, nhưng chỗ 00:55:034 cảm thấy không mạnh đến mức để cần nhấn quá
01:02:367 (3,1) - Nhạc dừng thì nên map stack, muốn jump để nhấn thì sử dụng kickslider. https://puu.sh/vXUH6/15173a16b0.png sao phải stack, quãng 1/1 cũng đủ để recover, stack sau 1 đoạn jump lớn cảm giác cũng khá là hững
01:04:367 (2,3,1) - 01:07:034 (2,3,1) - 01:09:700 (2,3,1) - Đống này lộn xộn, overlap không có qui tắc nên xấu map. (Khúc sau cấu trúc là stack sliders nên khá thích) không lộn xộn đến mức đấy đâu
01:13:700 (2,3,1) - 01:16:367 (2,3,1) - Hai cái này đừng có overlap để nó giống khúc sau 01:35:034 (2,3,1) - 01:37:700 (2,3,1) - , với lại để nhấn mạnh so với 3 cái patterns bên trên cũng tốt. đã sửa lại trông cho ổn hơn chút
01:51:200 (3) - Đổi thành 2 circles. Lí do như một ý nào đó ở trên. ok
01:52:867 (1,2,3,1) - Em nghĩ cần bỏ thêm 1 cái circle ở 01:53:117 - (làm thành cái penta luôn) để nhấn càng mạnh giọng hát (giọng hét) càng tốt. Vả lại triplet để không đó rồi jump sang nốt khác thì đống jump đằng sau (âm guitar) bị giảm hẳn stress trong bài hát. (Hình như em có nghe cả tiếng drum nữa, nhưng âm lượng drum giảm dần đều nên không rõ nữa) đã sửa thành 1 cái 1/4 slider và 1 circle
Hình như còn vài cái blankets nữa mà em không nhớ. Với lại còn flow ở một số chỗ khác không mượt mà như diff Jewel (chắc tại speedmap).
Chúc anh may mắn.

<3

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2017-08-04T20:17:52+00:00

saw this bubbled, why u ask me mod?
k w/e some stuff could be adjusted before rank

illumination
00:06:200 (1) - mute slider end; no sound on the end
00:06:867 (2) - ^ try doing this for every one on your map won't notice them now anymore, it's just that faving a kick sound on a blue tic where's there's nothing on it feels weird.
00:13:034 (1) - place the 2nd anchor like that
00:21:367 - pls map that sound there's a clap
00:31:867 (1) - ^ same here
00:22:867 (2) - overlap feels horrible xd
00:40:534 (4,5) - flow is not smooth here, curve the stream counter clockwise to make it better
00:49:700 - map smth here (also this section hitsounding missing some claps dude)
01:22:367 (4) - clap pls 01:22:534 (1) - same on the ending
01:31:034 (2,3) - like i said before you are suposed to mute those slider ends sionce there are no sounds on those endings pls.
01:40:867 (3) - make this curve better pls

yamicchi
00:11:200 (5) - clap pls
00:22:867 (3,4,5) - clap
ok lots of hitsounds missing on this diff pls

eh idk why this got bubbled xD lots of stuff missing and unpolished
i really do think top diff could have more polishment
gl guys

btw look at kibb's ver https://osu.ppy.sh/s/605719
inspire yourself on rhythm and hitsounding

0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

0109- 2017-08-05T03:18:18+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
saw this bubbled, why u ask me mod? i've just remapped lol
k w/e some stuff could be adjusted before rank

illumination
00:06:200 (1) - mute slider end; no sound on the end
00:06:867 (2) - ^ try doing this for everyone on your map won't notice them now anymore, it's just that faving a kick sound on a blue tic where's there's nothing on it feels weird.
00:13:034 (1) - place the 2nd anchor like that
00:21:367 - pls map that sound there's a clap
00:31:867 (1) - ^ same here
00:22:867 (2) - overlap feels horrible xd
00:40:534 (4,5) - flow is not smooth here, curve the stream counter clockwise to make it better
00:49:700 - map smth here (also this section hitsounding missing some claps dude) i just want to lower the intensity in the calm parts
01:22:367 (4) - clap pls 01:22:534 (1) - same on the ending
01:31:034 (2,3) - like i said before you are suposed to mute those slider ends sionce there are no sounds on those endings pls.
01:40:867 (3) - make this curve better pls

eh idk why this got bubbled xD lots of stuff missing and unpolished
i really do think top diff could have more polishment
gl guys

btw look at kibb's ver https://osu.ppy.sh/s/605719
inspire yourself on rhythm and hitsounding cool

no reply = fixed
Thx for modding

LMT

535 posts

Joined October 2015

LMT 2017-08-06T04:05:41+00:00

vài thứ

00:21:700 (3,4) - NC (3) được không? dễ đọc nhầm thành 1/2 slider quá.
00:55:367 (4) - đây theo vocals thì 00:55:034 - theo đây luôn nhỉ, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8774594 như này này
00:59:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - sắp xếp gọn hơn được không, nhìn hơn random. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8774657 chẳng hạn thôi.
01:08:867 (5) - kéo sang phải chút cho khoảng cách 3->4 với 3->5 giống nhau.
01:38:367 (1) - shape khác 1 tí tại vì vocal đang ngân cao được không?
01:51:700 (1,2) - sao đây đuôi slider chĩa vào circle mà 01:52:367 (4,5) - đây thì lại ko ? xd
00:37:200 (6) - slider hướng nghiêng quá so với các slider khác.
00:48:367 (4) - sao không để 3/4 + circle như mấy chỗ khác?
01:00:534 (5,1) - blanket? owo
01:18:450 (6) - kéo cái này lên trên chút, hiện giờ 6->1 hơi gãy.
01:36:867 (5,2) - overlap xíu
01:05:034 (1) - hiện giờ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8774722 ko được đều nhau lắm, mang 1 sang bên trái tí thì đẹp.

cũng ok đó =)) gl

0109-

337 posts

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Topic Starter

0109- 2017-08-06T16:47:07+00:00

LMT wrote:
vài thứ

00:21:700 (3,4) - NC (3) được không? dễ đọc nhầm thành 1/2 slider quá.
00:55:367 (4) - đây theo vocals thì 00:55:034 - theo đây luôn nhỉ, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8774594 như này này hợp lý nhưng ko hiểu sao cứ thích cái rhythm này hơn sẽ xem thêm ý kiến ạ
00:59:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - sắp xếp gọn hơn được không, nhìn hơn random. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8774657 chẳng hạn thôi. đã chỉnh lại 1 chút cho spacing đống bên đó = nhau
01:08:867 (5) - kéo sang phải chút cho khoảng cách 3->4 với 3->5 giống nhau.
01:38:367 (1) - shape khác 1 tí tại vì vocal đang ngân cao được không? thấy không quan trọng lắm, đặt ở trên cao một phần thể hiện đc rồi chắc vậy
01:51:700 (1,2) - sao đây đuôi slider chĩa vào circle mà 01:52:367 (4,5) - đây thì lại ko ? xd
00:37:200 (6) - slider hướng nghiêng quá so với các slider khác. chưa thấy nỏ làm sao lắm
00:48:367 (4) - sao không để 3/4 + circle như mấy chỗ khác?
01:00:534 (5,1) - blanket? owo
01:18:450 (6) - kéo cái này lên trên chút, hiện giờ 6->1 hơi gãy. emphasize cái 1
01:36:867 (5,2) - overlap xíu
01:05:034 (1) - hiện giờ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8774722 ko được đều nhau lắm, mang 1 sang bên trái tí thì đẹp.
cũng ok đó =)) gl

no replay= fixed
cảm ơn ạ

A r M i N

1,298 posts

Joined October 2014

A r M i N 2017-08-08T15:16:25+00:00

m4m

[topdiff]

00:06:200 (1) - like this ? http://puu.sh/x4MKi/20e7db1dc8.jpg
00:07:700 (1) - http://puu.sh/x4MNw/c9e6d76096.jpg
00:10:367 (1) - blanket
00:13:034 (1) - maybe use same shape as 00:13:700 (4) -
00:22:867 (2) - http://puu.sh/x4MU7/0d7f3502e5.jpg
00:49:200 (1) - spacing a bit low on this one
00:50:534 (4) - nc
00:51:034 (5,6,7,8) - crappy flow
01:29:867 (4) - copy it and CTRL+H ,then put in on the spot of (5) dont forget to add back the hitsounds.. this is so it looks more symmetric you know xd
I would say that working on some slidershapes could be a good idea (especially those red point 1/1 sliders)

[Extra]

00:41:867 (3) - that would look better imo ^^ http://puu.sh/x4Nn0/4f1bf04fe0.jpg
00:57:200 (1) - i feel like at this part there are some claps missing
01:03:867 (6) - nc
01:27:700 (6) - like this? http://puu.sh/x4Nur/05e2e8e535.jpg

[Insane]

put OD8?

[Hard]

00:07:700 (1) - blanket
00:27:867 (1) - strange flow, http://puu.sh/x4PIA/4c99f38232.jpg
01:22:367 (3) - nc

Good luck :3
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/646741

0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

0109- 2017-08-09T05:59:36+00:00

A r M i N wrote:
m4m

[topdiff]

00:06:200 (1) - like this ? http://puu.sh/x4MKi/20e7db1dc8.jpg i want to emphasize 00:06:534 (1) -
00:07:700 (1) - http://puu.sh/x4MNw/c9e6d76096.jpg looks nice but like there's no reason to make a shape like that
00:10:367 (1) - blanket
00:13:034 (1) - maybe use same shape as 00:13:700 (4) - they express different sounds
00:22:867 (2) - http://puu.sh/x4MU7/0d7f3502e5.jpg nice
00:49:200 (1) - spacing a bit low on this one
00:50:534 (4) - nc
00:51:034 (5,6,7,8) - crappy flow for the sake of build-up
01:29:867 (4) - copy it and CTRL+H ,then put in on the spot of (5) dont forget to add back the hitsounds.. this is so it looks more symmetric you know xd i wasn't intend to make a symmetric here
I would say that working on some slidershapes could be a good idea (especially those red point 1/1 sliders) yeah i'll try working on those

[Hard]

00:07:700 (1) - blanket
00:27:867 (1) - strange flow, http://puu.sh/x4PIA/4c99f38232.jpg
01:22:367 (3) - nc not really necessary

Good luck :3
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/646741

no reply=fixed thanks for modding, will try to get ur map modded soon

edit: updated for yami

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2017-08-16T10:18:20+00:00

general:
end yami's diff at 02:01:200 - like every other diffs?

hard:
00:40:534 (3,4,5,6) - https://puu.sh/xbnlu/12fc4352fc.png maybe
01:23:534 (6) - one more reverse

yami:
00:06:534 - 00:59:867 - finish

illumination:
00:06:200 (1) - maybe subjective, ctrl-g looks more natural to play.. or you can move the slider up that works too
00:40:700 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - try curve the stream less, would improve aesthetic/playability imo
01:01:534 (3,4) - i suggest decreasing some spacing here (around 2.8~2.9x maybe?), so you can make 01:01:867 (1,2) - stand out more
01:04:367 (2) - etc. nc all the slowdown?

0109-

337 posts

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Topic Starter

0109- 2017-08-16T10:42:38+00:00

Garden wrote:
general:
end yami's diff at 02:01:200 - like every other diffs? ok

hard:
00:40:534 (3,4,5,6) - https://puu.sh/xbnlu/12fc4352fc.png maybe nice
01:23:534 (6) - one more reverse ok

yami:
00:06:534 - 00:59:867 - finish

illumination:
00:06:200 (1) - maybe subjective, ctrl-g looks more natural to play.. or you can move the slider up that works too adjusted a bit
00:40:700 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - try curve the stream less, would improve aesthetic/playability imo ok
01:01:534 (3,4) - i suggest decreasing some spacing here (around 2.8~2.9x maybe?), so you can make 01:01:867 (1,2) - stand out more adjusted a bit (3.5x)
01:04:367 (2) - etc. nc all the slowdown? not sure if it counted as unnecessary nc spam but yeah fixed

also fixed for yami

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined June 2013

Garden 2017-08-16T10:54:26+00:00

gansta

gansta 2017-08-22T05:58:43+00:00

I'm still waiting for the approval

0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

0109- 2017-08-22T10:50:32+00:00

Im bad at finding t2 bn

edit: self popped (27/8)

Last edited by 0109- 2017-08-29T08:25:16+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

gansta

gansta 2017-08-28T15:57:12+00:00

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pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,802 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2017-09-03T02:23:21+00:00

the 3/4 sliders are good now. should have a clap on the second slider's tail though (like 01:04:700 (2) - 01:07:367 (3) - etc)
generally sucks that u skip out on claps for all 1/4 rhythms covering snare drums -- like 00:09:034 (6,7) - 00:30:200 (5,6,7,8,1) - etc. would make more sense to have claps since music supports them g
also sounds like you've got a lot of drum hitsounds used mistakenly -- like 00:39:367 (4) - 00:55:367 (4) - 00:52:867 (3) - 00:56:867 (5) - etc. should have soft additions since they're still covering snares
alsooooooo every diff is missing stuff so if you copied hitsounds maybe recopy them.

super extra
00:19:534 (2) - should use a 1/4 repeating slider like 01:58:200 (2) - . consistency and musical support
00:20:867 (4,5,6,7,1) - minor thing: using a proper curve like 00:31:534 (4,5,6,7,1) - might be better. looks like a mistake right now
01:04:367 (1,2) - not being parallel seems like another mistake lol
01:06:534 (1) - tail clap
01:19:034 (2,3) - 01:20:367 (2,3) - should move these down a bit. spacing between 01:19:867 (1,2) - is abnormally low compared to rest of map
01:23:784 (8,1) - 01:42:450 (6,1) - keep in mind how sv changes affect distance snap. try to make these spaced visually the same as the rest of their streams

yam
00:51:034 (6) - rhythm kinda contradicts song

important thing is on the tail of 6. can do this so pattern isnt fucked
gonna assume the missing hitsounds everywhere will be fixed after 0109 copies things

asi
00:09:034 (1,2,3) - 00:11:534 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:47:700 (1,2,3) - 01:50:367 (1,2,3) - not the best comboing habit to develop lol. ideally ncs indicate the starts of phrases, so comboing like 00:31:534 (4,5,6,7,1) - is more appropriate
01:17:034 (1,1) - and uh shouldnt need to use a double new combo
man if you were a bit more organized with object placements and a bit clearer with differences between 1/1 and 1/2 spacing youd have a solid map. this is like baseline level stuff though

i expect hitsounds to still be messed up when i recheck lol
call me back!!

0109-

337 posts

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Topic Starter

0109- 2017-09-03T07:18:13+00:00

~~Gonna back from vacation asap uwu~~

all fixed

Last edited by 0109- 2017-09-04T08:29:26+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2017-09-03T13:16:48+00:00

Thanks @pishi fixed your suggestion :3

I used my hitsound don't copy yours thanks

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Asaiga

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Joined July 2013

Asaiga 2017-09-03T16:10:55+00:00

pishifat wrote:
asi
00:09:034 (1,2,3) - 00:11:534 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:47:700 (1,2,3) - 01:50:367 (1,2,3) - not the best comboing habit to develop lol. ideally ncs indicate the starts of phrases, so comboing like 00:31:534 (4,5,6,7,1) - is more appropriate fixed
01:17:034 (1,1) - and uh shouldnt need to use a double new combo fixed
man if you were a bit more organized with object placements and a bit clearer with differences between 1/1 and 1/2 spacing youd have a solid map. this is like baseline level stuff though tried to clean up the map. I mapped this when I was pretty new so. . . happens :'D

~~will upload remapped my diff later~~ sorry i didn't get to finish my remap. I did it halfway but . . . excuses

fixed nc in this diff

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pishifat

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pishifat 2017-09-08T20:58:53+00:00

Yamicchi wrote:
I used my hitsound don't copy yours

oh
well then

00:28:367 (2,3) - 00:39:034 (4,5) - do something about consistency
00:19:200 (1,2) - 01:57:867 (1,2) - same

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0109- 2017-09-09T01:19:11+00:00

seems that minor so i'll fix for yami then, got the permission

pishifat

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pishifat 2017-09-09T19:29:16+00:00

ok

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0109- 2017-09-09T23:54:41+00:00

<3 <3

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Eir_DELETED 2017-09-10T00:14:49+00:00

oh you did it!
Gratz!

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