Ok, so I've been trying to mod your map, and I must say, you have chose a nightmare of a song to map.
First off, all of your timing points are way off. Not that I blame you, the song is hard to time, but it doesn't even seem like you tried to properly time the map, like, the bpm is around 160 in some areas where you have the bpm set to 210.
I took a shot at timing it, and I did some timing points in the beginning, as well as some timing points in the middle, this whole song is just awkwardly timed in general, so you chose a really hard song to map.
Here are the new timing points that I've placed for you (Keep in mind that I didn't time a few things and that the beginning is most likely wrong.
I did this after I attempted to mod your map.
Here is the actual mod.
00:00:310 Snap this note to white line. Also, I understand your mapping intent, but I'm letting you know it feels weird to play.
00:33:418 this sounds just like the other single, so this should be a single as well. Hit, bass, bass hit
00:34:559 same thing here, I get that it's fun to play, but still. It feels like you are mapping and ignoring the percussion at the same time.
There are a lot of those, and I'm not gonna do this for a full 9 minutes, sorry xD
Although I can't let some things slide.
00:47:107 why are the bass noes triples, while the snares are doubles? the bass is quieter, meaning LESS emphasis. Please fix this.
(And yes, I"m talking about multiple sections like this, please listen to the drum sounds)
00:50:529 at the very least, make this one a double, that's justifiable.
00:52:810 this double confuses me, there isn't even drums here, why is this a double, stick with your swing style.
01:00:971 this whole LN section is very awkward and weird, I think it just needs to be remapped, although I can see why it's hard to map. I've played it and honestly, it doesn't play very well for me. But hey, that's my personal opinion, it's up to you.
01:44:211 again, listen to the drums, the song will tell you what to accent. (I did say I was going to stop pointing these out, but I feel like it's necesarry.)
02:04:886 this shouldn't be a double note.
02:09:307 what happened to the swing style here? You keep changing mapping styles a lot (And I'm only 2 minutes in)
(So I'm just letting you know that this map needs a LOT of work. If I was you, I'd get someone to time it first. that's always a priority.)
I feel bad for being so strict so immediately, but I do honest work, I try not to sugar coat things, and as it is right now, I can't see it being ranked.
Also, about that M4M, I'll just go ahead and call this a NM, you don't need to mod my map, you have a lot of work on your own stuff to get done. Don't worry about my stuff!
First off, all of your timing points are way off. Not that I blame you, the song is hard to time, but it doesn't even seem like you tried to properly time the map, like, the bpm is around 160 in some areas where you have the bpm set to 210.
I took a shot at timing it, and I did some timing points in the beginning, as well as some timing points in the middle, this whole song is just awkwardly timed in general, so you chose a really hard song to map.
Here are the new timing points that I've placed for you (Keep in mind that I didn't time a few things and that the beginning is most likely wrong.
Osu. Notepad
Timing Points
284,214.285714285714,4,2,0,5,1,0
4427,214.285714285714,4,2,0,5,1,0
8169,214.285714285714,4,2,0,5,1,0
11069,214.285714285714,4,2,0,5,1,0
15168,328.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
59725,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
104212,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
148128,377.358490566038,4,2,0,5,1,0
172296,365.853658536585,4,2,0,5,1,0
184059,345.821325648415,4,2,0,5,1,0
206300,349.55034965035,4,2,0,5,1,0
251002,355.436363636362,4,2,0,5,1,0
262345,343.441102661602,4,2,0,5,1,0
284303,324.851102661596,4,2,0,5,1,0
297278,324.871102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
338912,323.471102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
349285,320.771102661599,4,2,0,5,1,0
379584,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
472264,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
486451,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
490978,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
496075,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
501172,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
504576,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
507980,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
511384,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
514788,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
518192,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
521596,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
523289,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
525000,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
526693,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
528404,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
530097,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
533500,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
534765,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
536885,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
540309,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
541574,285.171102661597,4,2,0,5,1,0
I did this after I attempted to mod your map.
Here is the actual mod.
00:00:310 Snap this note to white line. Also, I understand your mapping intent, but I'm letting you know it feels weird to play.
00:33:418 this sounds just like the other single, so this should be a single as well. Hit, bass, bass hit
00:34:559 same thing here, I get that it's fun to play, but still. It feels like you are mapping and ignoring the percussion at the same time.
There are a lot of those, and I'm not gonna do this for a full 9 minutes, sorry xD
Although I can't let some things slide.
00:47:107 why are the bass noes triples, while the snares are doubles? the bass is quieter, meaning LESS emphasis. Please fix this.
(And yes, I"m talking about multiple sections like this, please listen to the drum sounds)
00:50:529 at the very least, make this one a double, that's justifiable.
00:52:810 this double confuses me, there isn't even drums here, why is this a double, stick with your swing style.
01:00:971 this whole LN section is very awkward and weird, I think it just needs to be remapped, although I can see why it's hard to map. I've played it and honestly, it doesn't play very well for me. But hey, that's my personal opinion, it's up to you.
01:44:211 again, listen to the drums, the song will tell you what to accent. (I did say I was going to stop pointing these out, but I feel like it's necesarry.)
02:04:886 this shouldn't be a double note.
02:09:307 what happened to the swing style here? You keep changing mapping styles a lot (And I'm only 2 minutes in)
(So I'm just letting you know that this map needs a LOT of work. If I was you, I'd get someone to time it first. that's always a priority.)
I feel bad for being so strict so immediately, but I do honest work, I try not to sugar coat things, and as it is right now, I can't see it being ranked.
Also, about that M4M, I'll just go ahead and call this a NM, you don't need to mod my map, you have a lot of work on your own stuff to get done. Don't worry about my stuff!