Realazy wrote:

@Euny pls box your code

Ora wrote:

Realazy wrote:

@Euny pls box your code

Realazy wrote:

@Euny pls box your code

m4m!

[EUNY'S AJU EASY]

00:33:519 (5) - it's a nice shape and all but.. maybe you need some simpler sliders to follow since this is an easy?✔fixed
01:28:109 (2) - i don't really get the rhythm change here, a 1/1 repeated slider followed by another 1/1 slider would've made the vocals stand out much more imoi mapped with those 3points(slider start-reverse-end). idk whats problem with it. even there is strong vocal sound at the start

[NATSU & EUNY'S AJU EXTRA]

00:33:642 (2,2,2,2,1) - visual spacing looks pretty off, could you make it more consistent?
00:43:109 - 00:47:044 - i don't understand why here you use more of a circular kind of flow but 00:39:175 - 00:50:978 - are back and forths, would be nice to have a little more consistencyfor Irvin❤
00:48:519 (1,2,3) - fix stacking with 00:47:044 (1,2) - for Irvin❤
00:55:896 (2,1,2,1) - these sound really weird, it seems like you're trying to follow both the vocals and the drum beats at the same time but the vocals alone stand out much more i'd say, i think ctrl+g this rhythm would sound much better
00:59:831 (2,1) - pretty much the same thing, i don't think constant 1/4 sliders fit really well here.. try using a 1/2 slider followed by a circle for this?
01:14:339 (1,2,3,4) - same as insane, why not stack these on the slidertail?for Irvin❤
01:32:536 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - why are these so much smaller than Euny's jumps at 00:33:519 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - lmaofor Irvin❤
02:30:814 (1,2,3) - spacing is very inconsistent within the pattern and much larger than 02:28:847 (1,2) - when the so
03:06:962 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - could've spaced these more because of teh cymbrfor Irvin❤

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good luck!

Tae wrote:

holy this song is so hype
I'm rather new to modding, so I'm afraid I won't be able to point out much. M4M

[NATSU & EUNY'S AJU EXTRA]
03:06:962 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2) - Like top diff for Irvin❤

Ora wrote:

[Natsu/Euny's AJU EXTRA]

00:52:699 - I don't really like how this is ignored but I do see what you're mapping. I also think the sudden slow pattern 00:52:577 (1,2) - is too weird for playing. Rhythm could be: http://puu.sh/wS0BS/62cb904c85.jpg and it includes the strong beat on 00:52:699 - . (same goes for 02:48:642 (1,2) - )for Irvin❤

00:33:642 (2,2) - why are these so close compared to the rest D: I also feel like this might be mapped a bit too intense too soon. The vocals have an increasing tone so maybe do something with that? 00:33:642 (2,1) - these jumps just feel too much so early in the song
you can probably just give similar spacing to 01:32:536 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - because this one seems better/more generous

02:13:847 (1) - I see what you're doing with these 3/4 sliders (which break the vocals) for that one sound in the music, but you do all of them except 02:09:913 - . Or just don't do them at all and stick with the vocals? Idk your choice

02:19:749 - The rhythm here starts to confuse me a bit and you switch between vocals/music a bit too often. also what is 02:22:699 (1,2,3,4) - being mapped to? There's a strong vocal at 02:23:068 - and you mapped music for parts like this with this rhythm: 02:21:716 (1,2) -

The ending is really cool

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Hope I helped out a little!

-GN wrote:

[EUNY'S AJU EASY]
00:39:421 (3) - i actually think these zigzag sliders are pretty funny, nice job lol feels happy to meet who have nice insight ^.~
00:43:355 (3,4,5,6,1) - this is pretty wonky, would be better if (3,4,5,6) had a consistent angle curvechanged a bit but i cant feels much change xD..
01:06:470 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same
01:45:322 (5,6,1) - this is better than 00:43:355 , but i think these three should have a sharper angle to them✔fixed
01:54:175 (1,2,3,4,5) - same curve concerntried but i really cant feels much difference with past one xD..
02:15:814 (3,4,5,6,1) - not a curve, but should probably be one, or make the zigzag consistent✔fixed
02:39:420 (3,4,5,6,1) - okay but seems flat at the middle✔fixed
02:50:240 (2,3,4,5,6) - without the (2) this looks inconsistent... it's not really since (4) is the middle but looks weird when it goes into the next combo✔fixed
02:54:175 (2,3,4) - this is odd since it has a very slight angle into the pentagon. maybe make it linear, or curve it stronger if you cani tried my best.

[NATSU & EUNY'S AJU EXTRA]

Euny:
00:27:617 (1,3) - and 00:27:863 (2,4) - are not aligned, probably should be ✔fixed
00:34:503 (1,2) - would be cooler if mirrored with 00:33:519 (1,2) , 00:34:257 (1,2,1) - is linear and doesn't play too well✔fixed
00:56:634 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - the beat placements of this part feels weird to play, it's done better in the AJU NICE diff✔fixed
01:04:380 - ignoring something here, a circle would be nice✔fixed
01:42:372 (1,1) - this is pretty far✔fixed
01:45:322 (3) - missing normal-hitnormal hitsound?✔fixed
01:50:240 (1) - the bends on this slider are ugly✔fixed
01:52:699 (1) - i suggest a similar shape to 01:50:240 (1) for this, this is pretty badmmm but i love my current one and slider speed for this part isnt that fast. so its available for me. how about your think?
01:53:683 (1) - make this symmetrical and make a better blanket around 01:53:191 (1) - dam am really bad for make that shape. i tried my best ,..
02:09:913 (1) - the section after this (up to 02:17:781 (1) ) seems pretty messy, it's a lot more visible than the section at 00:55:158 (1) - due to having less spacing and nothing really looks structured✔fixed
02:52:208 (1) - this plays like a hold slider and doesn't really fit compared to 03:00:077 (1) -✔fixed
02:56:142 (1) - i think this should be one 1/2 long so it's more consistent with ^ and accentuates 02:56:388✔fixed

liked the diff though, good luck on ranking

Kalibe wrote:

aa sorry for late, i got an error with my internet and my finished mod just got deleted :kms:

[euny aju]

- prefer to use od 2 OR hp 2,5 / be consistent with those uwuill let it to host
- 00:17:781 (4) - move it a bit to up, it's nearly offscreen !✔fixed
- 01:06:470 (1,2) - according to your nc usage, these should be switched!current my choice is better for follow music. and this dont make confuse for play.
- also 01:06:962 (2,3,4) - here i think using ctrl G would follow more vocal, which sounds pretty cute :3thats why i mapped like that. listen more carefully. i believe you can notice what i mean.
- 02:07:945 (5,6) - feels really weird, cause 02:07:945 (5) - sliderend is clearly inaudiable and not feel natural clicking 02:08:929 (6) - tbh. i'd just change 02:07:945 (5) - into 2/1 + circle? better idea imo.✔fixed
- 02:48:273 (4,1) - this is first time you using 1/2 snapping so that would make unnatural for newbies, reconsider changing 02:48:273 (4) - to normal 1/1 :C✔fixed

[aju collab]

- 00:34:995 (3) - 02:25:159 (3) - for euny part, i would nc those to keep 1 2 nc patterning for aesthetic, maybe also to be consistent with natsu diff since he did nc on a slider 01:34:011 (1) - ✔fixed
- 01:15:199 (2,3) - stack kinda offfor Irvin❤

that's all !!!!

Realazy wrote:

[AJU NORMAL]

00:11:142 (4,1) - why use a 1/1 gap here when there's constant 1/2 for 00:07:208 (4,5,1) - ? you could maybe reverse 00:11:142 (4) - or something to keep the rhythm consistent I think it's ok, since I do the break for giving more emphasis to the next object
02:09:913 (1) - i feel like this combo is getting pretty long compared to your other combos in the diff, how about swapping the NCs at 02:13:847 (5,1) - ? this part 02:09:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is divided in 3, but using 3 combos would be to spammy

[AJU HARD]

00:11:634 (1,2) - shouldn't you swap the NCs here? it sounds like the vocals are different on 2 plus there's a pretty strong drum beat on the downbeat it's the same as 00:13:601 (1,2,3,4) -
00:55:158 (1,2,3,4) - can you do something to differentiate the 1/2 stack from the 1/4? it's only a hard diff so i'd suggest not use stuff that could be confusing reading is fun
02:02:781 (3) - this feels really bizarre to play as a 1/2 slider, just having a 1/4 repeat slider would be enough? it doesn't change much playability wise, but follows vocals much better the 1/2 is more consistent with my rhythm there, also if you notice I do a rhythm reduction at each diff

[AJU INSANE]

00:13:601 (1,2) - i know you want to have the same pattern as 00:11:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - but you should consider following the different vocals on the blue ticks here :< it's fine to ignore some sounds
01:14:339 (1,2,3,4,1) - you could stack these on 01:13:724 (3) - 's slidertail since there's no bass here, kinda like 01:17:658 (3,1) - I think the stream plays better without it being stacked, also I'd need to move a lot of stuff for fixing something minor
02:28:847 (1,2,1,2,3) - why use circles here when you use 1/4 sliders for 02:27:126 (1) - and 01:35:978 (1) - ? because the introduction feels better as a slider, if someone else complains I will change it, maybe

[NATSU & EUNY'S AJU EXTRA]

00:43:109 - 00:47:044 - i don't understand why here you use more of a circular kind of flow but 00:39:175 - 00:50:978 - are back and forths, would be nice to have a little more consistency personally I play them like zigzags o.O
00:48:519 (1,2,3) - fix stacking with 00:47:044 (1,2) - Is not visible in game
01:14:339 (1,2,3,4) - same as insane, why not stack these on the slidertail? because is gay to play with hidden
03:06:962 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - could've spaced these more because of teh cymbals getting faster here I think it's fine tbh

[AJU NICE]

00:15:077 (2) - repeat arrow is hidden by the last slider, could you unstack them? it's fine, is hidden by a slider head, so there aren't any hitburst
00:16:798 (1,2,1,2,1) - this plays really awkwardly, the jump on 00:17:044 (1) - is there for a reason but the kick isn't that loud and it makes for really awkward angle jumps between 00:16:921 (2,1,2) - which don't even flow that well (visually) into the next slider, i really think 00:17:044 (1,2) - these could be ctrl+g'd because the main instrument here, the vocals, don't have any change in intensity it does plays well o.O, btw the vocals are divided in pairs, that's why the jump.
02:08:929 (1,2,3,4) - these somewhat fit but they're really prone to sliderbreaking because they're all 1/8 gaps yet they're pretty spaced, maybe just keep 2 sliders or space them less? 1/8s at 125 bpm shouldn't be a problem tbh, I already used them at other maps (even 1/8 circle streams at boombayah)
02:16:798 (1,2,3,4) - i think you could ctrl+g all of these individually to differentiate those from 02:15:814 (1,2,3,4) - since there are synth(?) sounds on those then the movement would be so big
02:40:897 (3,1) - why is this different from 01:45:814 (3,1) - 00:44:831 (3,1) - becausse of the previous patterns didn't leave
03:06:962 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2) -same as extra same, tbh I don't want to make it super high sr

good luck!

Tae wrote:

[AJU NICE]
00:31:060 (1) - Shouldn't this really have the same shape to the sliders that follow it? Same for 01:30:077 (1) - my current way is visually better
03:06:962 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2) - There definitely seems to be an increase in intensity, so these jumps could potentially reflect this? I explained this at the before mods

[NATSU & EUNY'S AJU EXTRA]
03:06:962 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2) - Like top diff same

[AJU INSANE]
00:29:339 (3,6) - This overlap could be improved, I personally feel mmmm in the gameplay this is actually cool to play, so I just sacrifice a bit of visuals for playability
02:13:355 (1,1) - ^ this one is on purpose

Ora wrote:

[AJU HARD]

01:58:109 - just something I noticed in Insane/Extra is you change directions for the second part at 02:00:077 - but in this diff you stay going clockwise. I know it's picky but just something I noticed that could be consistent this diff is more spacing and flow related that's why

02:02:781 (3) - Not too sure this follows the vocals that well like you do through this section of vocals it does covers the full word tho

nice diff ^^

[AJU INSANE]

00:13:601 (1) - could be a 1/4 slider? Different vocals than 00:11:634 (1) - and looks like you're going for vocals that would ruin my pattern and ignoring some beats is fine :l

00:34:503 (1) - why not give this the same directional flow you gave 00:34:011 (1) - ? feels a bit awk but i guess it's more subjective. If you agree I would bring the whole stream pattern down a bit or even rotate it -10 or -15 degrees. idk aaaaa if you agree then there is 01:33:395 (4,1) - and 02:24:544 (4,1) - ah I think the current angle looks better visually

02:02:536 - why is this ignored when the next ones aren't (02:03:519 - / 02:04:503 - etc. ) because the vocals starts again at 02:02:781 (1) -
and I want to have a slider transition to them

02:34:872 (6) - / 02:42:741 (6) - just noting that you start to use curved sliders for this part randomly (I checked all the others in earlier kiais and they are all stright). your decision ! for variation

02:57:618 (2) - could be two circles or two 1/4 sliders (it's the only one with vocals like that) but if you're sticking with the music and the consistent pattern then keep! my current way it's more consistent with the rest

[Natsu/Euny's AJU EXTRA]

00:52:699 - I don't really like how this is ignored but I do see what you're mapping. I also think the sudden slow pattern 00:52:577 (1,2) - is too weird for playing. Rhythm could be: http://puu.sh/wS0BS/62cb904c85.jpg and it includes the strong beat on 00:52:699 - . (same goes for 02:48:642 (1,2) - ) that beat isn't part of the main melody


The ending is really cool

Hope I helped out a little!

-GN wrote:

[AJU NORMAL]
01:57:617 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - i mean it's a normal diff but these stacks seem very boring, could be triangles maybe I don't want to bring movement in the slow part
02:23:683 (1,2,3,4) - make consistent with 00:33:519 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:32:535 (1,2,3,4) ? it's just for variation

[AJU HARD]
00:11:634 (1,2,3) - the spacing variation here looks weird, feels like (2) should be perceived as stronger so maybe just swap the NCs on (1,2) the problem is that the vocals do start at 1
00:26:880 (1,2,3,4,1) - should form a perfect triangle, would look better I'll think about this, tbh i like the current way also
01:08:929 (1) - end this on the white tick maybe the vocal is on blue tho

[AJU INSANE]
00:18:765 (1,2,3,4,1) - this is pretty mean for a low 4* diff, i'd rather you put the last circle at an angle or something. 00:33:520 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - as well as other occurrences it's fine tbh is low bpm and I already used and tested on my other ranked map
00:38:683 (5,6) - feels better to play this as 3 circles like in the higher diffs. considering the hitsound on the sliderend of (6) as well... same elsewhere its' a double whistle sound tho, at the hardest diff I just used a more dense rhythm
01:27:371 (4,2) - the stack feels kinda forced, i think 01:27:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - should form a nicer triangle I really like this pattern and it does plays fine

[NATSU & EUNY'S AJU EXTRA]
Natsu:
00:48:519 (1,2,3) - maybe place these something like [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8682974] to be consistent with 00:48:027 (1,2) - like the first half of the pattern is mirrored of. would require some restructuring after though yeah too much things would need to be move
00:50:978 (1,3) - the overlaps are kinda ugly I like them
01:33:519 (1,2) - same as 00:34:503 (1,2) although this plays better due to not being linear tested with my friend he said was OK to play
03:06:962 (1,2,1,2,1) - i don't think this should be on top of 03:05:979 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - it looks fine in game


[AJU NICE]
00:35:732 (2,1) - 00:36:224 (2,1) - 00:36:716 (2,1) - the spacing/angle between these aren't consistent, they probably should be. same with other choruses (01:37:208 (2,1) - is especially off) weird, because I copy paste them, anyways doesn't looks like a big deal IMO
01:44:092 (1,2,3) - since the back and forths at 01:40:158 (1,2) - don't have angles between the pairs, i feel like the patterns at 02:39:174 (1,2,3) - with their near 0 degree angles would fit better for this chorus (should probably be changed to 0 exact though) it's just for variation
02:45:814 (1) , rest of kiai - pretty obvious copypaste from first chorus, would be cooler with another design here ahhhh this is the real best setup I can think for this part, I tried manny things, but they didn't work that well
02:52:208 (1) - maybe put this at x:161,y:167 to be similar to 02:54:175 (1,1) - I like my current way more
03:03:027 - the part that starts here plays pretty well, but you should spread the patterns out more - they're mostly clustered on the right half of the screen which feels weird to play. especially the patterns that share the same space. (the last one ending where the guy in the BG explodes is nice though). it's done better in the AJU EXTRA diff I really don't want too make the last part harder tho

liked the diff though, good luck on ranking

Kalibe wrote:

[aju normal]

- 00:37:454 (1,1) - hmm.. i think you should switch every nc for 00:40:896 (1,2) - to keep consistency with 00:37:454 (1,1) - ? same to other kiais ! its' only done for the aju nice thing on kiais
- fine

[aju hard]

- 01:21:224 (1) - don't really see the sense of nc'ing that tbh that object isn't part of the previous vocal groups, but neither to the next ones, that's why

[aju insane]

- 02:22:331 (3) - maybe it's just me, but the 1/4 slider isn't fitting with song (i think there's nothing to map lol) / i'd just delete it and add circle on red beat :S
i did this vocals
- cool diff !


[aju NICE]

- 00:14:831 (1,2) - is this safe? i mean overlapping reverse arrow y know ... yes, slider heads don't have hitburst
- 02:25:650 - strange that the whole section is much easier than we have in collab, even in insane diff :c the other diffs has breaks here?

that's all !!!!