Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hello, I think the overall spread between Muzukashii and Oni could be improved and Muzukashii could have more breaks.

• [Muzukashii]

1. From 00:00:533 to 00:54:533 - patterns are mapped in a continuous manner. I would recommend deleting 00:37:033 (103,104) - and moving 00:38:283 (105) - to 00:37:533 - to give a 2/1 rest. I followed strong beats.Even if I apply that,it would be weird according to the whole concept of the map. Edit:I left 3/2 rest instead because 2/1 rest felt really empty and weird.
2. 00:59:783 - you may add d here for a better spread with Oni. Same for 01:03:783 - 01:15:783 - 01:19:783 - Maybe I could do it but I used this flow on Oni already,so no change for spread .w.
3. 01:36:908 (22,23) - same as 00:37:033 (103,104) - due to the consecutive mapping from 00:56:533 to 01:50:533 - As I said,I followed strong beats when I map this.Also I want to keep the spread between Muzu and Oni.

• [Futsuu]

1. From 00:24:533 to 00:30:533 - consider changing the pattern like this to follow the vocal more appropriately ? (cursor at 00:28:533 - )
2. 00:42:283 (69) - move to 00:43:283 - ; move 00:44:283 (73) - to 00:44:033 - and change to k. In this way the flow would be smoother.
3. 01:39:283 - you may add k here to cohere with the note at 01:37:283 -
4. 01:43:283 and 01:47:283 - adding d here would help balance the overall spread with Muzukashii in this session.

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:09:033 (21,22,24) - delete and move 00:10:283 (25) - to 00:10:033 - for a 2/1 break. In this way the pace difference with the part from 00:16:533 - could be reflected clearly.
2. 00:35:783 (95) - maybe move this note to 00:35:533 - to follow vocal as you did in this session ?
3. 00:54:283 (144) - consider moving this note to 00:53:783 - to make the patterning consistent with Oni ?
4. 01:00:283 - you can add k here to lengthen the 1/2 pattern a bit as Futsuu has quite a number of 1/2 notes in the kiai.
5. 01:16:283 - same as ^
6. 01:32:033 (10) - this note should be removed to leave a 2/1 rest after the dense kiai.
7. 01:36:033 (19) - move to 01:36:908 - and change to k for coherence with ^
8. 01:37:783 and 01:39:783 - you may add d and k respectively for a better spread with Oni.
9. 01:43:783 and 01:47:783 - similar to ^ , you may add k and d respectively.

• [Oni]

1. 01:32:283 (360) - this note could be removed so as to shorten the pattern chain in this relatively calm session.
2. 01:36:283 (375) - same as ^

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Here comes a follow-through mod for all difficulties.

• [Futsuu]

1. From 00:24:533 to 00:30:533 - consider changing the pattern like this to follow the vocal more appropriately ? (cursor at 00:28:533 - ) With your suggestion, it follows vocal better. Applied.
2. 00:42:283 (69) - move to 00:43:283 - ; move 00:44:283 (73) - to 00:44:033 - and change to k. In this way the flow would be smoother. Fixed
3. 01:39:283 - you may add k here to cohere with the note at 01:37:283 - Fixed for better spread.
4. 01:43:283 and 01:47:283 - adding d here would help balance the overall spread with Muzukashii in this session. ^

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:09:033 (21,22,24) - delete and move 00:10:283 (25) - to 00:10:033 - for a 2/1 break. In this way the pace difference with the part from 00:16:533 - could be reflected clearly. Applied due to lower density.
2. 00:35:783 (95) - maybe move this note to 00:35:533 - to follow vocal as you did in this session ? I didn't highlight only vocal, there are some drum emphasizes. So retained current pattern since vocal isn't as strong as 00:36:033 (96) -.
3. 00:54:283 (144) - consider moving this note to 00:53:783 - to make the patterning consistent with Oni ? Consistency between diff. is what makes me mad. Thanks for your helps about that, fixed.
4. 01:00:283 - you can add k here to lengthen the 1/2 pattern a bit as Futsuu has quite a number of 1/2 notes in the kiai. I'll keep my current patterns since I feel like I need to have a break before 3/4.
5. 01:16:283 - same as ^ ^
6. 01:32:033 (10) - this note should be removed to leave a 2/1 rest after the dense kiai. I am not sure if it is good idea but let's try.
7. 01:36:033 (19) - move to 01:36:908 - and change to k for coherence with ^ Fixed.
8. 01:37:783 and 01:39:783 - you may add d and k respectively for a better spread with Oni. 01:37:533 (22) - It represents low pitch sound and 01:39:783 - there is not much strong sound. As if it was the reflection of 01:39:533 (27) -. So no change.
9. 01:43:783 and 01:47:783 - similar to ^ , you may add k and d respectively. As explained above.

• [Oni]

1. 01:32:283 (360) - this note could be removed so as to shorten the pattern chain in this relatively calm session. Fixed
2. 01:36:283 (375) - same as ^ Fixed

You may call me back after that.

• [Futsuu]

1. As mentioned in previous post, maybe move 00:29:533 (49) - to 00:29:283 - and change 00:30:033 (50) - to k for a better flow ?

• [Muzukashii]

1. 01:36:908 (20) - consider changing this to k for the snare as you did in this session ?

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

A quick recheck here. (no kd)

• [Futsuu]

1. As mentioned in previous post, maybe move 00:29:533 (49) - to 00:29:283 - and change 00:30:033 (50) - to k for a better flow ? You're right, 1/1 flow was bad in doublets and 3/4 snaps, my bad. Fixed.

• [Muzukashii]

1. 01:36:908 (20) - consider changing this to k for the snare as you did in this session ? Fixed

Nwolf wrote:

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[Muzukashii]

00:59:283 (153,154) - Maybe swap these to break the d k d k d k d k flow a little bit. I'm totally aware of this d k d k d k.. stuff. 00:59:283 (153) - This isn't as high or strong as 00:59:533 (154) - and 00:59:533 (154,156) - drum sounds are same.
> 01:08:033 (177) - Change to kat for same reason Fixed due to vocal pitch.
> 01:15:283 (198,199) - Same as first No change as explained ;_;
> 01:24:283 (223) - Same as 2nd True, fixed

01:17:533 (205,206,207) - Invert colors to be d k d? For snare and bass emphasis, consistency with other bars in the kiai. Sounds good, applied.



[I'm Yours]

00:04:408 (19) - Would suggest to maybe delete this one to calm down the intro more and give more importance to other 1/4 here (also I can't here a 1/4 sound here). There's 1/4 sound but applied though.
> possibly even 00:04:283 (18) - 00:08:283 (37) - to give the resulting 1/1 notes more impact, but that's more optional. Please don't make it easier .w.

00:20:033 (82) - Later in the map these sounds are often unmapped to map vocal on 00:20:283 - , for example: 00:28:033 - . Maybe change it here for consistency I didn't notice that vocal sound at 00:20:283 - is strong enough, fixed.

00:42:908 - Unmapped 1/4 doublet, all others were mapped. Fixed, my bad :"v

Nwolf wrote:

Hearing way too much radio music with the 08/15 chord progression of western music it's always nice to hear more oriental music.