thanksDoormat wrote:
[Ambivalence]
- 01:25:912 (1,2) - imo it'd make more sense and nicer aesthetics to start the symmetrical shapes here instead of at 01:27:112 (1) - since this is where the music is starting to get louderit's fine imo, it's just the transition between quiet and loud so it has properties from both: more spaced, but not yet simmetric.
- 01:32:362 (2,3,4) - 3->4 should have less spacing than 2->3 imo, since you're going from snare to kick. why not try stacking 01:32:662 (4) - with 01:32:062 (1) - ? changed the lazy way
- 02:35:212 (1,1,2,3) - i'm not normally one to point out blankets too often but holy this is really bad i don't really consider this as something that has to be blanketed. In fact, i don't think it's even possible to blanket them in a decent way without throwing 02:35:212 (1) - off the center. Just try it for yourself, try to blanket 02:35:512 (1) - to 02:35:212 (1) -'s tail and 02:35:812 (3) - to 02:35:212 (1) -'s head, while still looking out for 02:35:662 (2) - and making sure the pattern remains a perfect triangle. In the end you get something like this. I don't know about you but i prefer 02:35:212 (1) - actually beign in the center.
- 05:15:562 (1,1,1,1,1) - sv increases here are pretty drastic; it literally jumps from 0.50x to 1.00x to 1.50x to 2.0x very suddenly. i think it'll help with the buildup if the sv increase was more gradual, e.g. 0.50x to 0.75x to 1.0x to 1.25x to 1.5x or something to that effect sightly decreased, it's 0,5x > 0,9x > 1,3x > 1,7x now. Still keeping 2.0x on 05:16:312 (1) - , though.
- 05:19:312 (1,2,1,2) - should also probably be mirrors of each other, seeing as how you do it with 05:19:912 (1,2,3,1,2,3) and 05:20:512 (1,2,1,2) - - ok but... why exactly? It doesn't necessarily have to be like that just because 05:19:912 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - and 05:20:512 (1,2,1,2) - are similiar, right?
- 05:28:912 (1,2,1,2) - ^read the above, although i guess this one might be a bit more difficult due to the limited mapping space you have same as above, i don't see a reason why they should be like that
https://puu.sh/wAN2F/59be1375f1.osu