Bakari wrote:

Oh, I feel like there are still a few things I don't agree with.

[Normal]

1. 01:39:008 (1) - if you prioritize drums, than I would really insist on circles rather than a slider. As explained earlier, sliders work better for drumrolls and long vocals/synth notes. The drums here are ust consecutive short sounds. i prefer sliders aa
2. 02:48:658 (1,2,3,4,5) - the problem is that it is very tightly packed and completed with two stacks which add an extra difficulty element to this. well fixed this, changed 3 and 4 into a single 1/1 slider
   
   While I have seen people failing even more simplistic difficulties, I don't think I can personally agree with the idea of having this Normal as the easist difficulty. I do admit that it could be considered as rankable by other BNs, though. rip icon dreams

[Hard]

1. 00:51:385 (4,1) - this could be easily improved by adding a slight difference to the stacks, though. A manual stack, for instance, would not feel too different, yet it'd give a hint that the 3/2 gap here is different from the standard ones. well thats a nice solution but i still think stack is fine, will get more opinions and do something accordingly
2. 01:15:931 (4,5) - I still feel like the thing you refer to as wubs is mapped in a pretty strange way. here The objects highlighted with red are the ones that are repetitive and have an intensity decrease. the first one hl'd wih an arrow is stronger and stands out. So, assuming I got the timestamps from your explanation right, swapping 4 and 5's places would work way better. o shit nice, done
3. 01:39:008 (1) - I can agree with that, the velocity change works as a good way of making things stand out, so it doewsn't feel as forced as in Normal. made 01:36:969 (1) - a bit faster so it feels more forced
4. 03:07:358 - assuming you weanted a harder ending, you could star a gradual difficulty increase here with a few very basic jumps and gradually progressing through difficulty to the point when 03:19:048 (3,4) - this would not cause any confusion and be read as a 1/2 jump easily. didnt want to make the whole section harder just the last pattern of kiai

Hope this explains the ideas I had in a better way!

Electoz wrote:

zzz

[General]

1. Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms: will fix , cant believe i have been playing with this hs in my skin for over 2 years lo
   
   1. normal-hitwhistle.wav

Didn't check with Audacity myself so yeah I just pasted it from MA, also some stuff in all diffs seem to be unsnapped by 1 ms so you might wanna recheck that via MA or sth

[Normal]

1. 00:00:346 (1,2) - Blanket come on lol cool

My opinion on the spread is pretty much same as what Mr.Bakari stated above

[Hard]

1. HP should -1 cuz it's the same as Insane atm oh right
2. 00:19:048 (1,2) - 00:50:996 (3,4) - 00:56:256 (6,1) - What's with these spacings lol they're inconsistent with everything else. let me explain . 00:19:047 (1,2) - this is not different than others even if it has DS increased because of slider leniency. For 00:50:995 (3,4) - i have done that in many Hard difficulties of mine before , its fun to play lol trust me . 00:56:255 (6,1) - This is not inconsistent, There is extra spacing for this sound in all kiais for emphasis purposes
3. 00:48:658 (1,2,3) - I don't see the necessity to force these overlaps lol, you didn't do the same thing at 02:02:684 (1,1,2,3) anyways. its fine tbh it kinda goes fine with the held snares
4. 00:55:282 (3,6) - Stack yes
5. 01:11:645 (4,1) - Not really comfortable to play cuz the slider leniency thing, something like this would flow better. nice, fixed
6. 01:15:931 (4,5) - Ctrl+G rhythm would be better cuz 01:15:930 is not the same sound as 01:16:125 - 01:16:320 . yep fixed from bakari
7. 01:19:048 (4) - 01:22:554 (5) - Could be 2 circles because heads and tails are equally prominent? i did something with 01:22:164 (4,5) - the other one is cool
8. 01:32:685 (2) - 01:36:581 (6) - Unsnapped. ay
9. 02:08:139 (1,2) - The stack kinda kills the emphasis lol and you don't do this with 00:53:334 (1,2) - 02:58:009 (1,2,3) - etc anyways. knew this would be pointed out soon lo fixed
10. 02:46:905 (1,2) - Placements on these could be something more noticeable as a pattern like 02:47:879 (4,5) . What I'm suggesting here is basically what you did in Insane lol i kinda prefer the current pattern cuz it suits vocals better (?)
11. 03:00:931 (6,1) - The spacing is so big that I don't even think this is intentional lol decreased spacing but its still a jump tho because 00:56:449 (1) - 02:11:254 (1) -

[Insane]

1. 00:05:411 (3,5) - Should be overlapped like 00:05:606 (4,6) tbh so the back and forth movement becomes more noticeable and the sole overlap 00:05:605 (4,6) won't look so random lol The pattern is nice this way imo , stacking will also be fine but will feel a bit repetitive
2. 00:30:931 (7,8,9,1) - Could nerf spacings a bit cuz they're in a huge scale compared to other things in that part atm yes i m stupid
3. 00:41:645 (2,3,4) - 01:56:450 (2,3) - Inconsistent rhythm, and it doesn't look like a variation at all cuz 00:41:645 (2,3,4) is the only one with the different rhythm compared to what you did with the others in both verses. well 00:41:645 (2,3,4) - 01:56:450 (2,3) - are the only two places where these vocals are , the third build up is different. And the pattern i used for first case fits as much as second one so its ok i guess
4. 00:46:515 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Placements look rather unorganized compared to 02:01:321 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) where the placements are more noticeable symmetrically. Though it would be a pain to fix this lmao i did symmetry in second part but it wasnt what i was aiming to do in first part tho
5. 01:01:710 (4,5) - Isn't this supposed to be a jump like 02:16:515 (4,5) - 03:06:385 (4,5) ? Nice catch fixed
6. 01:03:658 (5,1) - Could space these bigger considering you spaced other things 01:06:775 (5,1) - 02:18:463 (5,1) - etc in a much larger scale. tbh it seems big enough , will see what others say
7. 01:08:139 (3,4) - Optional but you can stack these like 01:05:022 (3,4) as well so the transition with 01:08:528 (5,6) becomes more obvious. Same applies to 02:22:944 (3,4) - 03:12:814 (3,4) . unstacked is cool . also the song is totally different here from 01:05:022 (3,4) - lol
8. 01:19:827 (1,2,3,4) - 01:20:606 (5,6,7,8) - Rhythms on these places are quite different but the way you mapped these are so similar lol, at least you can do something differently with 01:20:411 (4,5,6,7,8) like what you did in Hard lol in hard its similar rhythm tho but only the first two notes are slider instead of being 2 circles while in insane they are circles to make things harder
9. 01:34:632 (1,2,3,4,5) - Using a bigger spacing doesn't reflect anything from the song tho, if you want to do a variation from 01:33:853 (1,2,3,4,5) then there are better ways to do this like rotating patterns, changing placements, etc. believe me or not the spacing fits properly here , its the most intense "vocal" section of the whole section. i mean its not much loud but the singer is going crazy with the rap
10. 01:58:787 - This measure literally has the flow going counter-clockwise until 02:00:736 (3) but the same flow thing didn't happen with 00:43:982 . I don't know if you intended these flow things or not but the problem is the difference between these measures is too noticeable to be ignored. i dont keep flows consistent from section to section in insane and higher difficulties because consistent rhythm already makes the map somewhat boring
11. 02:04:632 (1,2,3,4) - Any reason for using a slightly different spacing from 00:49:827 (1,2,3,4) - 02:54:502 (1,2,3,4) ? well no real reason just because of the flow which is much sharper in this case
12. 02:56:840 (1,2,3,4) - Uh you don't seem to do jumps with overlaps anywhere else around that part so it looks pretty random lol oh well atleast its jumped out which is good enough lol
13. 03:11:061 (3,5) - Spacing them a bit more would be cleaner I think? Looks a bit inconsistent visually with things like 03:10:866 (2,4) atm Clean
14. 03:19:048 (3,4,1) - Kind of anti-climatic tbh cuz you made a good use on flows from slider leniency in previous choruses 01:14:372 (3,4,1) - 02:29:178 (3,4,1) but you didn't do the same thing here so it plays somewhat easier than the other two. Tried something

Well the set is pretty much fine lol, good luck~

1. I can see your normal-hitwhistle.wav is slightly delayed while you didn't fix it even after several mods. Here is something you probably want: http://puu.sh/w5GCe/2676f4bcf6.wav (no-delay version)
2. The most thing that I concern in this set is about rhythm simplification in the easiest difficulty. The song runs in 154BPM so I just consider it in a normal case. In Normal difficulty, I can see that you follow many 3/4 rhythms with slider reverse, like 00:34:631 (1) - 00:48:657 (5) - 01:17:488 (7) - etc. It is ok in Normal if you also have another Easy difficulty, but it's not actually the case. As a result, I cannot see any intention from you to simplify the 3/4 rhythm in these places for new players in any difficulty. That's not player-friendly. What's more, you follow the vocal so closely that you even don't want to get rid of some secondary vocal sounds like 03:00:735 (5) - . This is not something I'd expect in the simplest difficulty, let alone the vocal is actually pretty complicated. So the most commonsense solution is, adding an Easy difficulty with simpler rhythm.

1. 00:22:943 (2) - I don't agree with this slider. I'd rather not emphasize vocal here at all to use a long slider instead. The reason is, your slider reverse is not on the vocal. The only thing I can hear on the blue tick is 'ssssss' gassing. So using a rather complex rhythm to "partially" (because the snap isn't 100% correct) follow something in the easiest difficulty is not something nice for me.
2. 01:27:034 (5) - You may remove this circle since it's wrongly snapped.
3. The 1/2 rhythm is also something I'm a bit confused about. You sometimes don't follow clap sounds to simply rhythms like 00:54:112 - 00:55:670 - , etc. Meanwhile, you do follow clap sounds on 01:09:696 (2) - 01:12:813 (2) - 02:27:618 (2) - . Same as comparison between 01:15:930 - 01:22:164 - ... These settings seem quite inconsistent without certain reasons for me. I know those missing notes are probably for rhythm simplification, but your designation doesn't sound great to me. Maybe you should just go back to the solution I raised in General section and slightly buff rhythm complexity in this difficulty to make it sound more natural. At least, you may rescan your whole difficulty to make sure that you don't make something unintentionally. Most rhythm things that I feel uncomfortable are about note missing/placing on claps.
4. 01:25:281 - I don't see why this strong clap is missed. I just keep feeling it weird when playing.
5. 01:30:735 (1,2) - Rhythm are just too undermapped when it is compared to other parts. You should at least add a circle at 01:31:904 -
6. 02:17:878 (2) - Because of stack leniency, the distance here is quite unbalanced. Please fix it.

1. 00:48:657 (1,2,3) - This one reads quite weird in Hard from my aspect.
2. 00:32:294 (3,4,5) - I doubt the way you place 1/4 spacing. For triplets like 00:28:008 (4,5,1) - , it's quite ok to use a large space. Because players don't really have to move a lot. But when players meet patterns like 00:34:631 (1,2,3) - , they have to move fast to follow the moving speed, let alone they have to follow the complex rhythm at the same time. So I don't think those 1/2+1/2+1/4 sliders are properly placed with spacing. You should nerf distance between each object in these patterns.
3. 00:41:644 (2) - Make it a circle+slider structure? Because the clap at the sliderhead and the following vocals are two different things and could be seperated.
4. 01:26:449 (2) - NC for reading? A stack under low AR right after a complex placement can be hard to read.
5. 02:50:995 - A really strong clap is missed :c

1. 00:34:632 (1,2,3) - These notes should snap to 1/3 instead of 1/4 ones. I know vocal here is a little bit vague, but 00:34:826 (2) - should be at 00:34:777 - (1/8 tick), and 00:34:923 (3) - should be at 00:34:899 (3) - (1/16 tick) if you want the more accurate data (It's vocal. Off-beat thing is common). If you want a reasonable track that most players can make clear, 1/3 track is the closest one.
2. 00:36:191 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Also off-beat. 00:36:321 (2,5) - should be on the red tick 00:36:384 - and 00:36:774 - instead. And 00:36:450 (3,6) - should snap to 1/4 blue tick 00:36:482 - and 00:36:871 - instead. So the actual rhythm should be:
3. 01:38:528 (1,2) - distance can be switched with 01:38:918 (3,4) - ? The distance decreasing could fit the vocal more imo.
4. 02:13:593 (4,5,6,1) - I don't see any buff here compared to all kiai parts. Maybe you can add some larger distance or anti-flow design here?

F D Flourite wrote:

Mod as requested. Sorry for the delay tho

[General]

1. I can see your normal-hitwhistle.wav is slightly delayed while you didn't fix it even after several mods. Here is something you probably want: http://puu.sh/w5GCe/2676f4bcf6.wav (no-delay version) thanks for the mp3 but i already had it fixed , just didnt update the map
2. The most thing that I concern in this set is about rhythm simplification in the easiest difficulty. The song runs in 154BPM so I just consider it in a normal case. In Normal difficulty, I can see that you follow many 3/4 rhythms with slider reverse, like 00:34:631 (1) - 00:48:657 (5) - 01:17:488 (7) - etc. It is ok in Normal if you also have another Easy difficulty, but it's not actually the case. As a result, I cannot see any intention from you to simplify the 3/4 rhythm in these places for new players in any difficulty. That's not player-friendly. What's more, you follow the vocal so closely that you even don't want to get rid of some secondary vocal sounds like 03:00:735 (5) - . This is not something I'd expect in the simplest difficulty, let alone the vocal is actually pretty complicated. So the most commonsense solution is, adding an Easy difficulty with simpler rhythm. well i do know that rhythm is not that beginner friendly but i m pretty sure its ok as it is as the first difficulty. Since there have been much harder difficulties than this one that got ranked as the first difficulties of those mapsets. i , Myself, ranked a set with a 1.95 difficulty not long ago which was 154 bpm as well and had denser rhythm than this one

[Normal]

1. 00:22:943 (2) - I don't agree with this slider. I'd rather not emphasize vocal here at all to use a long slider instead. The reason is, your slider reverse is not on the vocal. The only thing I can hear on the blue tick is 'ssssss' gassing. So using a rather complex rhythm to "partially" (because the snap isn't 100% correct) follow something in the easiest difficulty is not something nice for me. believe or not the 3/4 sounds the closest to me to the vocals.
   I have already tried using 1/1 and 1/2 rhythm here but they dont fit as much
2. 01:27:034 (5) - You may remove this circle since it's wrongly snapped.
3. The 1/2 rhythm is also something I'm a bit confused about. You sometimes don't follow clap sounds to simply rhythms like 00:54:112 - 00:55:670 - , etc. Meanwhile, you do follow clap sounds on 01:09:696 (2) - 01:12:813 (2) - 02:27:618 (2) - . Same as comparison between 01:15:930 - 01:22:164 - ... These settings seem quite inconsistent without certain reasons for me. I know those missing notes are probably for rhythm simplification, but your designation doesn't sound great to me. Maybe you should just go back to the solution I raised in General section and slightly buff rhythm complexity in this difficulty to make it sound more natural. At least, you may rescan your whole difficulty to make sure that you don't make something unintentionally. Most rhythm things that I feel uncomfortable are about note missing/placing on claps. The rhythms in cases like 00:54:112 - dont support the claps because i m strongly prioritizing the vocals only, i dont care about any drum sounds in the surrounding at all. cases like 01:09:696 (2) - do have vocals but they are rreally faint and pretty hard to listen to but they exist.
4. 01:25:281 - I don't see why this strong clap is missed. I just keep feeling it weird when playing.
5. 01:30:735 (1,2) - Rhythm are just too undermapped when it is compared to other parts. You should at least add a circle at 01:31:904 -
6. 02:17:878 (2) - Because of stack leniency, the distance here is quite unbalanced. Please fix it. well because of stack laniency there are many cases like these, like a lot of cases like this but i m pretty sure players can get used to them during their runs

[Hard]

1. 00:48:657 (1,2,3) - This one reads quite weird in Hard from my aspect. i have seen overlaps like these done in normal but with 2/3 rhythm instead so i guess it should be fine, i will see if others have problem with this, if so i will change it
2. 00:32:294 (3,4,5) - I doubt the way you place 1/4 spacing. For triplets like 00:28:008 (4,5,1) - , it's quite ok to use a large space. Because players don't really have to move a lot. But when players meet patterns like 00:34:631 (1,2,3) - , they have to move fast to follow the moving speed, let alone they have to follow the complex rhythm at the same time. So I don't think those 1/2+1/2+1/4 sliders are properly placed with spacing. You should nerf distance between each object in these patterns. dont really think this is that hard as you think to be honest. Its a hard difficulty after all and rhythms like these are pretty common. i havent reduced spacing for 1/4's in any cases there tho like 00:28:008 (4,5,1) - tho. they are just 0.1 x off spaced because of stack laniency
3. 00:41:644 (2) - Make it a circle+slider structure? Because the clap at the sliderhead and the following vocals are two different things and could be seperated. rhythm sounds good to me but i got your point. i am considering about this. probably gonna do something about it accordingly with other's suggestions
4. 01:26:449 (2) - NC for reading? A stack under low AR right after a complex placement can be hard to read. actually i dont think its necessary, 01:26:060 (1) - already has an NC. NC'ing 2 would be a bit over NC'ing so yeah. i will probably change this one TOO if others say something about it
5. 02:50:995 - A really strong clap is missed :c the reason i stated in normal, i just prioritize vocals :c

[Insane]

1. 00:34:632 (1,2,3) - These notes should snap to 1/3 instead of 1/4 ones. I know vocal here is a little bit vague, but 00:34:826 (2) - should be at 00:34:777 - (1/8 tick), and 00:34:923 (3) - should be at 00:34:899 (3) - (1/16 tick) if you want the more accurate data (It's vocal. Off-beat thing is common). If you want a reasonable track that most players can make clear, 1/3 track is the closest one. o.o i legit dont think 1/3 works here. it doesnt sound like that "at all" to me. 1/4 sounds closest to me and pretty much the perfect rhythm to me. it was never pointed out before tho or otherwise rhythm problems like these are always pointed out in first or second mod of the map.
2. 00:36:191 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Also off-beat. 00:36:321 (2,5) - should be on the red tick 00:36:384 - and 00:36:774 - instead. And 00:36:450 (3,6) - should snap to 1/4 blue tick 00:36:482 - and 00:36:871 - instead. So the actual rhythm should be: i dont really know why but i think my ears are retarded , this has been pointed out by many before so i guess i will just change it.
3. 01:38:528 (1,2) - distance can be switched with 01:38:918 (3,4) - ? The distance decreasing could fit the vocal more imo. right but that also has a downside since the song is gaining intensity
4. 02:13:593 (4,5,6,1) - I don't see any buff here compared to all kiai parts. Maybe you can add some larger distance or anti-flow design here? wait what owo these has almost same spacing as the ones in other kiais. theres no buff. maybe wrong timestamp?

I like the SV changing idea in this mapset. Good luck!

Monstrata wrote:

Insane

00:12:230 (7,8,9) - Jump onto 9 makes the impact on 8 feel eh... I think you should emp[hasize 8 instead, and 1 after.
01:03:269 (3,4,5,1) - Flow between 3>4>4 could really be improved... flowbreak is unnecessary if you're using the same technique for slider 1 again
01:36:970 (1) - The sv change is too drastic for me xP. especially when you continue with jumps right after. oh yep thats intentional actually,i wanted it to be drastic because the transition from vocals to drums in song is pretty drastic as well.
02:47:879 (4) - I could Ctrl+G this, and also Ctrl+G 5. flows a lot better.
03:13:593 (1) - Same, Ctrl+G flows nicer.

Hard

00:18:657 (6,3) - Can they be a bit farther apart? Looks kinda bad seeing them touch like that xp
00:19:047 (1,4) - Same, so close its uncomfortable xP. Generally this pattern is really packed together and the slider-borders make it look really bad imo
00:31:125 (6,1) - Similar idea with the slider-end of 1 and 6.
01:13:592 (1,2,3,4) - Try this for better flow and readability:

~

01:36:969 (1) - Pls xd made this one a bit less drastic because its just a hard. did keep the one in insane still.
Normal

Fine

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Some weird design choices in Hard/Insane and odd flows. thats what i was trying to do tho lol You can call me back, but it's not a guaranteed bubble. I'll maybe help this depending on what you fix.

1. I can barely hear the soft-hitnormal and it makes a lack of feedback when clicking stuff, you have to raise the volume IMO.

1. 00:17:879 (2,3,4) - what are you following here? if the instruments then try a 1/2 slider and circle, if vocals then try a circle and a 1/2 slider, following both sounds confused
2. 00:21:775 (6) - this slider is starting in an almost inaudible beat, tbh I don't agree with this, what you could do is https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8327356 (ignore the beat placement)
3. 00:29:567 (5) - it's super weird that you dediced to map this, when you were following the vocals at the before parts, ex: 00:26:353 (4) - 00:32:587 (4) - etc
4. 00:35:801 (7) - are you sure that this is 1/6? the first vocals sounds like it, but the next one isn't snapped at the blue tick ??, tbh I think the first one is just off as 00:34:827 (2) -, talk with monstrata about this too, before fixing , 00:34:632 (1,2,3) - vs 00:35:801 (7) -
5. 00:43:398 (3,4,5) - why are you using different spacing if the beats has similar sounds
6. 00:48:269 (3,4,1) - actually 1 is the beat that should have more emphasis, why 3 and 4 are bigger than 1?
7. 01:32:294 (1,2) - can you add a silence slider-slide? this sounds so bad

1. 00:21:774 (4) - same issue as the insane diff
2. 00:26:449 (4) - same as insane in 00:29:567 (5) -
3. 00:29:566 (4) - ^
4. this hard feels so weird sometimes, not sure if is the density or the AR being too low for it, tbh I'd use 7,5, since your rhythms, stack leniency, SV and spacing feels too high compared to your ar.
   

1. 00:33:852 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - this patterns feels really dense for the easy diff in the set, tbh you have alternatives to make them less denser and more comfortable to play, for example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8327897 rhythm only
2. mmm a lot of parts are super dense for the easy diff in the set, tbh making an easy don't take much time and allow you to make better spreads, with the above example maybe you can work in other similar places.
   

Natsu wrote:

placeholder xd

General

1. I can barely hear the soft-hitnormal and it makes a lack of feedback when clicking stuff, you have to raise the volume IMO. probably you only? because to me the volume sounds pretty fine already and no one ever had a problem with it, but i still increased ita bit in some sections only.

Insane

1. 00:17:879 (2,3,4) - what are you following here? if the instruments then try a 1/2 slider and circle, if vocals then try a circle and a 1/2 slider, following both sounds confused following vocals and circles are fine here since the snare is really emphasized in the song
2. 00:21:775 (6) - this slider is starting in an almost inaudible beat, tbh I don't agree with this, what you could do is https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8327356 (ignore the beat placement) its for the purpose of rhythm simplification since its an easier kind of an insane i dont want to have much technical of a rhythm and such. i have had same kinds of problems with another one of my old maps that helped me to learn to execute these rhythms like this. you might have a problem with this but me and most other people would suggest the other way around. I am still gonna keep it in mind, i will change it in some way if its pointed out again.
3. 00:29:567 (5) - it's super weird that you dediced to map this, when you were following the vocals at the before parts, ex: 00:26:353 (4) - 00:32:587 (4) - etc yep right,fixed
4. 00:35:801 (7) - are you sure that this is 1/6? the first vocals sounds like it, but the next one isn't snapped at the blue tick ??, tbh I think the first one is just off as 00:34:827 (2) -, talk with monstrata about this too, before fixing , 00:34:632 (1,2,3) - vs 00:35:801 (7) - i heard it many times with 25% playback and i m pretty confused lol since both ways sound almost as close to each other so i guess i will just go with you suggestion and if you are saying that 00:34:632 (1,2,3) - is off too then its not i m pretty sure that this is 1/4 lol
5. 00:43:398 (3,4,5) - why are you using different spacing if the beats has similar sounds well the song is gaining intensity and the vocal at 00:43:788 (5) - is definitely a bit louder
6. 00:48:269 (3,4,1) - actually 1 is the beat that should have more emphasis, why 3 and 4 are bigger than 1? Uh yea but its intentional,
   its the same as 02:03:463 (1) -
7. 01:32:294 (1,2) - can you add a silence slider-slide? this sounds so bad the slider ends are clearly supporting vocals, muting them sounds pretty weird to me tbh

Hard

1. 00:21:774 (4) - same issue as the insane diff in hard i just wanted these to be like these because i didnt want all of them to be as hard as insane because yea its a hard difficulty and thats an insane and hard is ofcourse supposed to be simpler.
2. 00:26:449 (4) - same as insane in 00:29:567 (5) -
3. 00:29:566 (4) - ^ same as before
4. this hard feels so weird sometimes, not sure if is the density or the AR being too low for it, tbh I'd use 7,5, since your rhythms, stack leniency, SV and spacing feels too high compared to your ar. sure then changed to 7.3 for now

Normal

1. 00:33:852 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - this patterns feels really dense for the easy diff in the set, tbh you have alternatives to make them less denser and more comfortable to play, for example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8327897 rhythm only the rhythm is ok. if i change this i would have to make a lot of other rhythms simpler in the whole difficulty to be at same difficulty level overall.
2. mmm a lot of parts are super dense for the easy diff in the set, tbh making an easy don't take much time and allow you to make better spreads, with the above example maybe you can work in other similar places. well i know its pretty hard but i m fine with this and i have already ranked two sets with hard difficulties like this as first difficulty. also some BNs are ok with it so yea also i m too lazy to make easy now lol

you can call monstrata for rebub

1. 2nd Kiai NC is inconsistent with 4th and 6th ones.
   2nd: 01:08:527 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) -
   4th: 02:23:333 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) -
   6th: 03:13:203 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) -
   
2. 01:29:177 (1) - On I.M's rap, he says "던져" (deonjyeo), but this only goes until "던", missing the last syllable, so you could add a circle on 01:29:469 with 40~50% volume. Imo it would flow better. Another option would be add a circle on 01:29:566 since there's a clap on this beat.
   
3. 03:21:190 (3,4) - Sounds better with 30% instead 50%.

1. add Irreversible in tags

1. hello cs7 mapper why it is cs4 looooooool
2. 00:11:255 (1,2) - I nearly can't hear the hs that I think I'm playing double ghost notes loool,how about make 00:11:644 - 's green line more early?
3. 00:16:709 (3,4,5) - ds is a little small,how about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8506260
4. 01:10:475 (7) - 01:12:034 (11) - NC there?
5. 01:29:956 (3,4,5) - use a different style but same rhythm as 01:28:787 (1,2,1) - 01:27:618 (1,2,1) - ,maybe it not fit there...
6. 02:58:982 (4) - NC there?
7. 03:04:047 (3,5) - they are touched and not a perfect blanket ;w;

Pulse wrote:

hey yo
quick stuff

[Irreversible's Insane]

1. 2nd Kiai NC is inconsistent with 4th and 6th ones.
   2nd: 01:08:527 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) -
   4th: 02:23:333 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) -
   6th: 03:13:203 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - fixed!
   
2. 01:29:177 (1) - On I.M's rap, he says "던져" (deonjyeo), but this only goes until "던", missing the last syllable, so you could add a circle on 01:29:469 with 40~50% volume. Imo it would flow better. Another option would be add a circle on 01:29:566 since there's a clap on this beat. I see your point, I've extended this slider by 1/8 instead so it actually hits the last syllable. Having something to click here would be too weird imo
   
3. 03:21:190 (3,4) - Sounds better with 30% instead 50%. fixed!

[Crz]Sword wrote:

[General]

1. add Irreversible in tags

[Irre's Insane]

1. hello cs7 mapper why it is cs4 looooooool Haha, I will release a new CS7 map soon enough
2. 00:11:255 (1,2) - I nearly can't hear the hs that I think I'm playing double ghost notes loool,how about make 00:11:644 - 's green line more early? yess
3. 00:16:709 (3,4,5) - ds is a little small,how about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8506260 yeah, cool
4. 01:10:475 (7) - 01:12:034 (11) - NC there? yep
5. 01:29:956 (3,4,5) - use a different style but same rhythm as 01:28:787 (1,2,1) - 01:27:618 (1,2,1) - ,maybe it not fit there... Hmm, I feel like it is fitting.
6. 02:58:982 (4) - NC there? yes
7. 03:04:047 (3,5) - they are touched and not a perfect blanket ;w; haha nice catch, fixed

GL~


Great set!

Bubblun wrote:

Mod for Irre's diff

00:13:787 (4,4) - Slightly off. fix

01:27:618 (1,2,1) - Supproted by your coloring the first two notes are grouped together, so their pattern should compliment that. I'd put the antijump under the first note instead. what? I'll talk to you about that ingame

02:06:384 (6) - I think you should hitsound this, as it's stressed. fix

02:15:151 (1,2,3,4,5) - The claps are a little obnoxious here. Soft whistles instead? fix

02:27:423 (2) - Note looks a bit random as it could aesthetically compliment the slider for a blanket or line up with 02:26:449 (4) - mhh i see where you're coming from but I'll keep that as it follows the arc from the slider before

02:29:956 (5) - Slightly off from forming the triangle. slightly adjusted

02:56:255 (1) - In every single chorus this note is not hitsounded, yet it's stressed so well. I highly suggest complimenting that. fix

03:05:313 (9) - Although I think the claps are a bit obnoxious, this should be on 5 as there is no strong sound here. The only two fitting notes for claps in this stream are 1 and 5. fix

03:16:709 (6) - Think there should be an nc here. fix


gl

Cryptic wrote:

Here for Irre's diff. Shouldn't it be Irreversible's Insane, btw? Also, don't forget to add him to the tags.

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You told me not to worry about NC's or hitsounds, so I won't. Here goes a quick mod. DM me if you don't understand anything or want me to elaborate more since I was kind of lazy here.

00:43:982 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - With the way you currently have this mapped, 00:44:371 (1) - gets no emphasis at all. While a stream jump isn't necessary, unstacking the two 1,2,3,4's slightly would go a long way to improving this pattern. fixed

00:47:878 (1,2) - I hear the noise you're getting your justification from, but it's not that much more intense than the song. Nerf these a bit (while making sure they still stay larger than the other 1/2 jumps). fixed

00:51:384 (5,6) - Personally, I don't hear any justification for this much movement here. In fact, I think this pattern may be better off stacked! Something like this feels a lot more accurate to the song (and looks pretty cool as well). Mhh, I feel like having the stress here kind of suits the vocals. I'll try out your suggestion but I'm not sure if I can keep it stacked, somehow that'd feel off to me. Will definitely adjust stuff tho! The emphasis might be too high rn.

00:55:086 (5,6) - Why is a strong drum beat (6) getting less emphasis than really light synths? Move that 6 higher man. fixed

01:30:735 (1,2,1,2) - Having all these stacked consecutively takes so much away from your emphasis in my opinion. They just feel... bland and small. This is a pretty different vocal section, so representing it in a different way is good, but at least give the player something more interesting for it. fixed,
that section actually was quite bland lol
01:32:294 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Same thing kind of applies here. Finding a compromise between these would be nice. Hm, I agree that the pattern b4 was bland but I find this one pretty cool to play

01:58:787 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - See previous. fixed

02:01:904 (1,2,1,2) - Having these be a triangular rotation instead of the sort of stacked thing you did earlier feels weird. I prefer 00:47:099 (1,2,1,2) - way more. i'll redo that pattern, it's kinda sucky

02:06:384 (6,7) - 02:10:086 (6) - See previous. alrighto

02:50:800 (6) - Having a held slider over vocals that end on a strong downbeat just feels weird. I get it for the symmetry aspect but, the rhythm feels super off. At the very least, I'd CTRL-G the 6 and stack a note on the head at 02:50:605 -. I'll go with your second suggestion!

02:56:060 (5,1,2) - The movement here works for me due to the held vocal and the final call back to the chorus. Maybe making the spacing smaller could be nice, but I don't think a stack is necessary.

03:13:592 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Feels way worse than the previous sections. I think changing patterns to like 03:13:592 (3,4,5,1) - from being straight sliders will help. Also, unstacking 03:16:320 (5,6) - the 6 from the 5 would help. This section previously had a lot of curving movement (in other parts) and it really feels like you've made it too straight/linear here. Yeah, I'll adjust that.

Len wrote:

hello!


hd:

cs a little big

00:48:657 (1,2,3) - make easier like this? http://puu.sh/wNAFn/138bd9c964.jpg its more readable i actually prefer the current pattern
01:24:891 (2,3,4,5,6) - same http://puu.sh/wNAJL/c43020450d.jpg i dont know how the current pattern is hard to read tho, its pretty casual
03:20:800 (3,4) - i dont think it needs jump http://puu.sh/wNANT/77617914b8.jpg sure,nerfed


ins:

01:27:035 (4) - nc fixed


gl!

Mir wrote:

on request

[General]
- Check for delay: normal-hitwhistle.wav fixed

[Hard]
- 03:00:931 (6,1) - This jump seems a bit sudden considering it wasn't done in previous kiais. 00:56:256 (6,1) - 02:11:061 (6,1) - are quite low compared to 03:01:126 (1) - which is 2.71x lol. i m so sure i fixed this from a previous mod, oh well

[Insane]
- 00:12:619 (9,1) - I feel like emphasis could be a bit more focused on 00:12:814 (1) - since 00:12:619 (9) - isn't very strong. Perhaps something like this? fixed
- 00:13:593 (3) - Kinda sad this sound isn't getting anything special, just a circle. it doesnt deserve anything special tho, nothing special on that beat or something
- 00:23:723 (1,2,3,4) - Not really sure why the vocals are being ignored here, it feels more appropriate to have the jumps start at 00:24:501 - instead since the vocals are still pretty strong and have some nice 3/4 stuff going on that gets ignored. well the downbeat starts with drums and i want to follow the drums from start of the downbeat
- 00:34:826 (2) - Too late, should be on the yellow tick right before it. its werid having a 1/8 just once in a map full of 1/4 or 1/2 ,its gonna play awkwardly so yea, rhythm simplification stuff
- 01:32:295 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like these should be circles only to coincide with 01:30:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - where the sounds in both of these patterns are basically the same, but for some reason you switch the rhythm after the NC on 01:32:294 - which doesn't make sense to me. It would probably fit more if you put the variation in rhythm after 01:33:268 - because that's where the song actually changes. The reason i have sliders for the latter part is that i wanted to give the part a bit variation, I am still focusing on vocals but these pair of circles 01:30:736 (1,2) - are repeated four times already, repeating them more is just gonna make them boring and stuff, thats why sliders came into place
- 01:40:476 (2,3) - No 1/4 sliders for these wub sounds? not actually prioritizing any wub here as obvious, focusing on vocals only

I can't really agree with the rhythm of this diff, it ignores too much of the drums for my liking.
[ ]
Good luck!

Mir wrote:

[Irreversible's Red Rose]
- 00:22:066 - Skipping a possible triple here you could use to actually emphasize the next vocal. I dont' see a reason why this should be emphasized, especially because the blue tick is really quiet here.
- 00:27:716 - Pretty sure there's a vocal here, maybe 1/4 slider? There isn't, at least I don't seem to notice one. If you listen closely, you might be able to agree that 1/2 is the best option.
- 00:30:248 (2,3,4,1) - I don't really understand why 2 is unstacked. To me it seems that 1 actually has the stronger sound so it makes more sense to unstack 4 for that extra movement than 2. Would also prepare the player for the sudden SV increase. That's a good point, I actually didn't like that pattern anyway, haha. Fixed!
- 01:30:735 (1,2,1,2) - Mmh, the rhythm variation thing is similar to the concern I have with the Insane. 01:32:294 (1,2,1,2,1) - Are similar sounds but mapped with circles, but sliders are used before. The intensity doesn't increase until 01:33:268 - where it would make more sense to throw in a variation for me. I disagree, because to me it seems the vocal at first are more silent, which then switch into some more intense vocals which is also emphasized by the spacing increase ultimatively.
- 01:39:599 - Could be a triple to capture more of the drums. Could be, but I don't see the need for it - as you might have already implied beautifully in your concluding sentence, I followed the vocals mainly.

I can't really agree with the rhythm of this diff, it ignores too much of the drums for my liking. If this was the reason why you decided not to push this map forward, then this is really regrettable :/ My maps tend to follow the vocals mostly, that's why statements like this make it incredibly difficult to push maps forward - even though there technically isn't anything wrong with it.
[ ]
Good luck!

1. 00:25:282 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - rhythms get pretty monotonous here even though it isnt much different from 00:12:813 . could probably try have more variation
2. 00:50:996 (2) - the prolonged gap just feels so awkward, especially cos you're moving into a more intense section. why not just cover these gaps with sliders instead https://puu.sh/x2jag/b6b0656fc4.png
3. 01:13:398 (4,5) - should probably overlap these like 01:10:282 (4,5) - instead, to keep things more intuitive. or could stack 01:10:282 (4,5)
4. 01:27:035 (5) - definitely shouldnt be mapped with a circle, the snapping isnt precise enough and normal players dont have the best sense of bpm
5. 03:01:905 (2,3) - spacing seems inconsistent here

1. 00:01:904 - would be cool to use 1/4 repeats for this stuff since theyre really prominent
2. 00:26:061 (3,4) - 00:29:178 (3,4) - snapping is kinda weird with these as they sound like the same vocal rhythms as 00:22:944 (3,4,5) - 00:32:295 (3,4,5) . 00:26:352 - might be slightly off but regardless itd be better to keep it consistent
3. 00:46:905 (3,1) - 02:01:710 (3,1) - should try ctrl g'ing rhythms or something to keep clicking prioritisation on white ticks. having the finish on a slider end is eh
4. 00:51:579 - similar to normal i reckon these rhythms could be filled in, https://puu.sh/x2Li8/b4e2804080.png that follows the synth. the latter rhythms at 00:57:813 - are fine
5. 01:15:151 - the way you handle this section just feels so off.. sv and spacing concepts seem to be the hardest here, but in terms of intensity it doesnt sound like the climax of the song
6. 01:18:658 (2,3,4) - could get pretty ambiguous as to where the player has to move, especially with the lower ar it can get pretty intimidating. if u avoid the stack with 01:18:658 (2,4) - itd be a lot more readable
7. 01:36:970 (1) - drastic single-slider sv changes should be avoided in a hard
8. 01:43:105 - pretty loud triple here

1. 00:15:541 (6,7,8,9,1) - 00:28:009 (6,7,8,9,1) - etc. mapping these as quintuplets doesnt really express how it sounds tbh, kicks on 00:15:736 (8,9) - are much louder and 00:15:541 (6) - is only a vocal. removing 00:15:639 (7) - or making 00:15:541 (6,7) - a slider would work better imo
2. 00:29:567 (5) - same as in hard, snapping would be more appropriate on blue tick 00:29:469
3. 00:36:191 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - higher spacing would make this more intuitive, so that its visually different from ur 1/4 spacing 00:34:243 (5,6,7,8,1)
4. 00:46:905 (3) - similar to in hard, should try mapping the downbeat. or i wouldve expected a slider at 00:47:684 (3,1) - to keep patterns that follow vocals 00:46:515 (1,2,3)
5. 00:49:437 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - sounds a lot more like two sets of triplets, overmapping it makes it boring https://puu.sh/x2O7n/271bce3a64.png
6. 00:51:385 (4) - filler rhythm
7. 01:01:710 (4,5) - what is this spacing
8. 01:13:009 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - the 1/4 track continues until 01:13:982 - so only mapping a small segment of it then switching back to vocals makes your rhythm choice feel so random. you could probably map the vocals 01:13:009 (3,5,7) - while giving attention to the 1/4s by passively mapping them with slider ends

1. 00:26:352 (2) - is this intentionally snapped to the 1/8? the red tick sounds much more accurate 00:26:644 - where the vocal/instrument lands
2. 00:28:105 (4,5) - jump here would be nice, spacing is kinda underwhelming when you had 00:25:086 (1,2) - for the previous downbeat
3. 00:48:268 (1,2) - dont think this is rankable lol, should try show more of the slider bodies
4. 01:01:612 (3) - 02:16:417 (3) - triplets dont seem necessary here as it takes emphasis off the kicks 01:01:514 (2) - which r quite prominent
5. 01:27:618 (1,2) - 01:28:787 (1,2) - 1/4 spacing here seems really overkill, you never had stop-start motion to this extent and itd also be worthwhile to differentiate it from 1/2 spacings 01:28:008 (1,2)
6. 01:42:423 (7) - follows the 1/2 synths while 01:48:657 (1,2,3) - follows the 3/4 sounds. should try keep these consistent

Pentori wrote:

[General]
this seems like another case where bpm should be halved
vocal sequences that extend from 00:12:813 - to 00:15:930 - cover two measures on the current metronome yet musically this is only one measure
also with snares landing on 00:50:995 - 00:52:553 - when theyd be expected to land on the 2nd and 4th beats i will see about this.

it'd also be worthwhile to boost some of the hitsound volumes. 00:11:255 - is really low in comparison to how loud the music is, even 02:42:423 - is louder when its a softer section z ya fixed

add irre to tags

[Normal]

1. 00:25:282 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - rhythms get pretty monotonous here even though it isnt much different from 00:12:813 . could probably try have more variation
2. 00:50:996 (2) - the prolonged gap just feels so awkward, especially cos you're moving into a more intense section. why not just cover these gaps with sliders instead https://puu.sh/x2jag/b6b0656fc4.png its not that awkward, its fine for normal
3. 01:13:398 (4,5) - should probably overlap these like 01:10:282 (4,5) - instead, to keep things more intuitive. or could stack 01:10:282 (4,5) to be honest, Both stacked and unstacked patterns are fine. Vocal intensity is not similar in both cases anyway
4. 01:27:035 (5) - definitely shouldnt be mapped with a circle, the snapping isnt precise enough and normal players dont have the best sense of bpm
5. 03:01:905 (2,3) - spacing seems inconsistent here

[Hard]
aimod

1. 00:01:904 - would be cool to use 1/4 repeats for this stuff since theyre really prominent Theres another case like this in the same section and i didnt do 1/4 on that too because its intentional.
2. 00:26:061 (3,4) - 00:29:178 (3,4) - snapping is kinda weird with these as they sound like the same vocal rhythms as 00:22:944 (3,4,5) - 00:32:295 (3,4,5) . 00:26:352 - might be slightly off but regardless itd be better to keep it consistent
3. 00:46:905 (3,1) - 02:01:710 (3,1) - should try ctrl g'ing rhythms or something to keep clicking prioritisation on white ticks. having the finish on a slider end is eh its on purpose to give most emphasis to vocals
4. 00:51:579 - similar to normal i reckon these rhythms could be filled in, https://puu.sh/x2Li8/b4e2804080.png that follows the synth. the latter rhythms at 00:57:813 - are fine same as normal, i dont really want to fill in that gap ><
5. 01:15:151 - the way you handle this section just feels so off.. sv and spacing concepts seem to be the hardest here, but in terms of intensity it doesnt sound like the climax of the song it is actually on purpose too because the part is wubby and the way i mapped it goes with it imo
6. 01:18:658 (2,3,4) - could get pretty ambiguous as to where the player has to move, especially with the lower ar it can get pretty intimidating. if u avoid the stack with 01:18:658 (2,4) - itd be a lot more readable i will see what others say about it first.
7. 01:36:970 (1) - drastic single-slider sv changes should be avoided in a hard changed sv by .3x
8. 01:43:105 - pretty loud triple here its a kick tho, not vocal :<

stuff like 02:42:423 - having a higher sv than kiais didnt make much sense to me either :'( Kiais pretty much only have low sv because of that bassline and higher spacing to give best emphasis to vocals

[Insane]

1. 00:15:541 (6,7,8,9,1) - 00:28:009 (6,7,8,9,1) - etc. mapping these as quintuplets doesnt really express how it sounds tbh, kicks on 00:15:736 (8,9) - are much louder and 00:15:541 (6) - is only a vocal. removing 00:15:639 (7) - or making 00:15:541 (6,7) - a slider would work better imo
2. 00:29:567 (5) - same as in hard, snapping would be more appropriate on blue tick 00:29:469
3. 00:36:191 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - higher spacing would make this more intuitive, so that its visually different from ur 1/4 spacing 00:34:243 (5,6,7,8,1)
4. 00:46:905 (3) - similar to in hard, should try mapping the downbeat. or i wouldve expected a slider at 00:47:684 (3,1) - to keep patterns that follow vocals 00:46:515 (1,2,3) um yea, same in hard
5. 00:49:437 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - sounds a lot more like two sets of triplets, overmapping it makes it boring https://puu.sh/x2O7n/271bce3a64.png There are hi hats on blue ticks for sure, i can hear them
6. 00:51:385 (4) - filler rhythm d
7. 01:01:710 (4,5) - what is this spacing i fixed this from a mod earlier lol, Anyawy re fixed
8. 01:13:009 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - the 1/4 track continues until 01:13:982 - so only mapping a small segment of it then switching back to vocals makes your rhythm choice feel so random. you could probably map the vocals 01:13:009 (3,5,7) - while giving attention to the 1/4s by passively mapping them with slider ends uh yea. sounds cool but i feel like getting more opinions on this one too

similar concerns repeat throughout other parts

[Irreversible's Red Rose]

1. 00:26:352 (2) - is this intentionally snapped to the 1/8? the red tick sounds much more accurate 00:26:644 - where the vocal/instrument lands
2. 00:28:105 (4,5) - jump here would be nice, spacing is kinda underwhelming when you had 00:25:086 (1,2) - for the previous downbeat
3. 00:48:268 (1,2) - dont think this is rankable lol, should try show more of the slider bodies
4. 01:01:612 (3) - 02:16:417 (3) - triplets dont seem necessary here as it takes emphasis off the kicks 01:01:514 (2) - which r quite prominent
5. 01:27:618 (1,2) - 01:28:787 (1,2) - 1/4 spacing here seems really overkill, you never had stop-start motion to this extent and itd also be worthwhile to differentiate it from 1/2 spacings 01:28:008 (1,2)
6. 01:42:423 (7) - follows the 1/2 synths while 01:48:657 (1,2,3) - follows the 3/4 sounds. should try keep these consistent

gl

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Pentori wrote:

[Irreversible's Red Rose]

1. 00:26:352 (2) - is this intentionally snapped to the 1/8? the red tick sounds much more accurate 00:26:644 - where the vocal/instrument lands it was intentional but i guess this is mor save
2. 00:28:105 (4,5) - jump here would be nice, spacing is kinda underwhelming when you had 00:25:086 (1,2) - for the previous downbeat the vocals call for a completely other pattern here (echo)
3. 00:48:268 (1,2) - dont think this is rankable lol, should try show more of the slider bodies yea
4. 01:01:612 (3) - 02:16:417 (3) - triplets dont seem necessary here as it takes emphasis off the kicks 01:01:514 (2) - which r quite prominent yea
5. 01:27:618 (1,2) - 01:28:787 (1,2) - 1/4 spacing here seems really overkill, you never had stop-start motion to this extent and itd also be worthwhile to differentiate it from 1/2 spacings 01:28:008 (1,2) yea
6. 01:42:423 (7) - follows the 1/2 synths while 01:48:657 (1,2,3) - follows the 3/4 sounds. should try keep these consistent reasoning as above, the vocals aren't the same hence why i don't think it should be consistent

gl

Thank you! really helpful mod

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80,307,135248,1,6,3:0:0:0:
116,332,135346,1,2,3:0:0:0:
159,333,135443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,340,137488,1,2,1:2:0:0:
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1. HP Drain rate -1? This is easiest difficulty on this mapset so it's difficult for beginners.
2. 00:10:670 - I feel kind of empty on here. Because you took the 1/2 sound before 00:07:553 - so try to consider adding a note to here.
3. 00:37:749 (1) - prefer to use unstack on 00:36:191 (4) - end for reading. try to move it right or something
   
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1. HP Drain rate -1? same rate as Insane diff
2. 00:37:748 - I feel it's too hard for reading a slider speed on this difficulty level. (1.20 -> 0.65) perefer to use over 0.8 slider speed
3. 01:05:801 (1) - How about using a curve slider ? it's better for design around here 01:05:411 (5,1,2,3) -
4. 02:11:061 (6) - try to make a square shape on 02:10:671 (4,5,6,1) - like
   
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1. 00:32:879 (5) - change to 1/4 slider instead of a circle? It would be better to follow the vocal
2. 00:36:191 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hmm, it's fine but the spacing is similar previous 1/4 notes at here 00:34:243 (5,6,7,8,1) -. try to make a jump on 1/3 sounds or use more spacing than 1/4 sounds.

1. Cool!

alacat wrote:

hi m4m~

[Normal]

1. HP Drain rate -1? This is easiest difficulty on this mapset so it's difficult for beginners.-0.5 only for now,i will see what others have to say about this
2. 00:10:670 - I feel kind of empty on here. Because you took the 1/2 sound before 00:07:553 - so try to consider adding a note to here. Theres a forced sound at 00:07:748 - that why i used different rhyth m there
3. 00:37:749 (1) - prefer to use unstack on 00:36:191 (4) - end for reading. try to move it right or something changed differently
   
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[Hard]

1. HP Drain rate -1? same rate as Insane diff sure
2. 00:37:748 - I feel it's too hard for reading a slider speed on this difficulty level. (1.20 -> 0.65) perefer to use over 0.8 slider speed it shouldnt be too hard since the sliders are pretty long
3. 01:05:801 (1) - How about using a curve slider ? it's better for design around here 01:05:411 (5,1,2,3) - i made it wavy
4. 02:11:061 (6) - try to make a square shape on 02:10:671 (4,5,6,1) - like i like the current one tho :<
   
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[Insane]

1. 00:32:879 (5) - change to 1/4 slider instead of a circle? It would be better to follow the vocal u might have have noticed later that there is no 1/4 slider after 2 1/2 slider with 1/4 in a row and i dont wanna do that because that might be a bit too hard ig so yea
2. 00:36:191 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hmm, it's fine but the spacing is similar previous 1/4 notes at here 00:34:243 (5,6,7,8,1) -. try to make a jump on 1/3 sounds or use more spacing than 1/4 sounds. i guess you have the older version of map or something because those 1/3 were changed to 1/2 for rhythm simplifation purposes

Good luck~

1. up the ar to 5? you use plenty of higher density patterns, i think it'll improve readability
   
2. 00:14:372 (4) - small stacking error
   
3. 01:06:191 (2) - Feels bad because the start of this strong vocal section is covered under sliderend unlike 01:03:463 (3,4) -. Same goes for 02:20:996 (2) -
   
4. 02:07:749 (5) - double here to make both vocals clickable? seems mapped to nothing atm, making the rhythm unpredictable
   
5. 02:58:204 (1,2) - felt unpredictable too, because you mapped this clap sound many times but it goes ignored here, double?

1. 00:15:541 (4) - 2 notes? 2 strong vocals, it's weird to have this be the same object as 00:15:152 (3) - is, which is mapped to soemething entirely different
   
2. 00:29:178 (3,4) - vs 00:26:061 (3,4) - yea i dont have to explain i guess (map it like you usually did by making both slider follow vocals)
   
3. 00:50:801 (2,3) - stack here feels random - there seems no reason to me that you'd stop the momentum here. Places like 00:57:035 (2,3) - also don't do this
   
4. 01:12:035 (1,2,3,4) - the angle of this entire pattern feels rather unnatural, also because the visual distance between 01:12:035 (1,2) - doesn't really match the rest, making the spacing seem lower. how about something like this? https://voli.s-ul.eu/EwHL2d13.png
   
5. 01:25:574 (5,6) - alright - i like the idea but i think it's slightly too op for a hard and also offthrowing because 01:24:892 (2,3) - in the same combo is also a stack but is a 1/2 instead. i recommend either removing the double and just making it a repeat, or ncing this pattern to separate it from the other stack
   
6. 02:01:320 (1,2,3) - vs 02:02:100 (1,2,3,1) - , the first pattern has the last vocal clickable on a slider, but the second pattern doesn't. I recommend changing the first pattern to 3 notes as well since 02:01:904 - would be nice to click either way (cuz of the finish). Rhythm would be like this https://voli.s-ul.eu/8c5kfThU.png

1. 01:19:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - structure seems rather random and unorganized, the flow direction looks messy - how about something like escalating back and forth jumps? I think it's strange that you didn't map the sounds at 01:20:605 - though, they seem prominent and you mapped them here too 01:17:489 (4,5,6) - 01:23:723 (4,5) -
   
2. map seems p cool

1. 00:24:501 (1,2) - i recommend you change these sliders to a round, bread-like shape (but also a bit like inflated water balloons)
   
2. 00:43:592 (3) - angle of the slider feels a bit strange, perhaps point it downwards like this https://voli.s-ul.eu/1Su0PFM2.png to make it transition well into 00:43:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
   
3. 00:50:995 (3,4,5) - i like the idea of switching instrument lines here but i think the spacing change is too harsh (from super slow sliders to a full screen movement)
   
4. 00:51:384 (5,6) - rhythm seems random because the clickable note at 00:51:579 (6) - is mapped to nothing in the music, also doesn't really warrant a jump like that, maybe make 00:51:384 (5) - a vocal hold slider
   
5. 00:52:748 (3) - wat is that finish hs and what is this whistle 00:53:527 (6) - wtf
   
6. 00:53:527 (6) - would probably work better as a smooth, slow slider rather than a harsh up/down movement listening to this vocal. same goes for 02:08:333 (6) -
   
7. 00:54:307 (1,2,3,4,5) - i find it weird that this suddenly ignores the vocals completely because the ticking noise thing in the background is rly not prominent. To keep your cool shuriken pattern though, how about this rhythm? https://voli.s-ul.eu/Hfw1onUG.png
   
8. 01:39:599 - feels like a note should be here, both drum and vocal have a note here (make it a triple)
   
9. 01:45:540 (1,2,3) - linear movement doesn't feel too well, rather change direction on 01:45:930 (3) - to separate those patterns better. also why are 01:44:761 (1,2,1,2) - separated by ncs and this pattern isnt?
   
10. 02:49:436 (4) - missing hitnormal i guess
    
11. 03:14:566 (4) - would work better as 3 notes cuz 03:13:203 (1,2) - are clickable too
    
12. 03:20:995 (2) - nc?

Voli wrote:

from queue

Hitsound volume feels strangely low outside of the kiais (mostly the 30% sections at the start of the map), perhaps up those by 10 or 15%? Irre's hitsound volume feels better, however he has everything at 70% lol (pls up the kiais and stronger sections irre) it feels fine to me idk, natsu pointed this out as well so i guess i am gonna do something about it. Raised most of the sections by 10 and some by 5.

Normal

1. up the ar to 5? you use plenty of higher density patterns, i think it'll improve readability Map is dense ya but Ar 5 is gonna be too much for first difficulty to be honest.
   
2. 00:14:372 (4) - small stacking error
   
3. 01:06:191 (2) - Feels bad because the start of this strong vocal section is covered under sliderend unlike 01:03:463 (3,4) -. Same goes for 02:20:996 (2) -
   
4. 02:07:749 (5) - double here to make both vocals clickable? seems mapped to nothing atm, making the rhythm unpredictable I would rather keep this one as it is because two reason, Firstly the rhythm is gonna get too dense secondly the vocal is pretty week
   
5. 02:58:204 (1,2) - felt unpredictable too, because you mapped this clap sound many times but it goes ignored here, double? If the clap you are talking about is this one 02:58:787 - then its not followed in other sections like this . e.g 02:08:917 - 00:54:112 - just for great emphasis to vocals

Hard

1. 00:15:541 (4) - 2 notes? 2 strong vocals, it's weird to have this be the same object as 00:15:152 (3) - is, which is mapped to soemething entirely different
   
2. 00:29:178 (3,4) - vs 00:26:061 (3,4) - yea i dont have to explain i guess (map it like you usually did by making both slider follow vocals)
   
3. 00:50:801 (2,3) - stack here feels random - there seems no reason to me that you'd stop the momentum here. Places like 00:57:035 (2,3) - also don't do this
   
4. 01:12:035 (1,2,3,4) - the angle of this entire pattern feels rather unnatural, also because the visual distance between 01:12:035 (1,2) - doesn't really match the rest, making the spacing seem lower. how about something like this? https://voli.s-ul.eu/EwHL2d13.png
   
5. 01:25:574 (5,6) - alright - i like the idea but i think it's slightly too op for a hard and also offthrowing because 01:24:892 (2,3) - in the same combo is also a stack but is a 1/2 instead. i recommend either removing the double and just making it a repeat, or ncing this pattern to separate it from the other stack unstaked the 1/2
   
6. 02:01:320 (1,2,3) - vs 02:02:100 (1,2,3,1) - , the first pattern has the last vocal clickable on a slider, but the second pattern doesn't. I recommend changing the first pattern to 3 notes as well since 02:01:904 - would be nice to click either way (cuz of the finish). Rhythm would be like this https://voli.s-ul.eu/8c5kfThU.png i will keep mine here because i would rather not make the cymbal finish and leave vocal unclickable because when i emphasize vocals, i try to emphasize them hardcore ,if i change the slider to circles its gonna make it too dense so i guess current pattern is the way to go for me

Insane

1. 01:19:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - structure seems rather random and unorganized, the flow direction looks messy - how about something like escalating back and forth jumps? I think it's strange that you didn't map the sounds at 01:20:605 - though, they seem prominent and you mapped them here too 01:17:489 (4,5,6) - 01:23:723 (4,5) - Yeah i know the flow is kinda bad but its organized in a way that i wanted. You see this is like the only part on the whole song where there are those wubs emphasized on every 1/2 tick of the whole downbeat and thats why i wanted to emphasize them in this way, by making the flow kind of weird for it to play unnaturally because 'wubs'
   
2. map seems p cool

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Voli wrote:

Irreversible's Red Rose

1. 00:24:501 (1,2) - i recommend you change these sliders to a round, bread-like shape (but also a bit like inflated water balloons)
   
2. 00:43:592 (3) - angle of the slider feels a bit strange, perhaps point it downwards like this https://voli.s-ul.eu/1Su0PFM2.png to make it transition well into 00:43:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I intendedly made it like this, to give the vocals more emphasis here. They felt like stronger, because they are introducing a change into the more intense section.
   
3. 00:50:995 (3,4,5) - i like the idea of switching instrument lines here but i think the spacing change is too harsh (from super slow sliders to a full screen movement) I felt like the instruments with the strong vocals here justify such a spacing. I tried to keep the instrument as well as the vocal intensity in mind.
   
4. 00:51:384 (5,6) - rhythm seems random because the clickable note at 00:51:579 (6) - is mapped to nothing in the music, also doesn't really warrant a jump like that, maybe make 00:51:384 (5) - a vocal hold slider It actually ends on an instrument - I've mapped it like this because I felt like the change into an only-vocal area would be too sudden in this case.
   
5. 00:52:748 (3) - wat is that finish hs and what is this whistle 00:53:527 (6) - wtf Yeahh.. the finish actually accentuates stuff well, but the whistle was very off. Fixed in other instances too.
   
6. 00:53:527 (6) - would probably work better as a smooth, slow slider rather than a harsh up/down movement listening to this vocal. same goes for 02:08:333 (6) - oh yeah good fix
   
7. 00:54:307 (1,2,3,4,5) - i find it weird that this suddenly ignores the vocals completely because the ticking noise thing in the background is rly not prominent. To keep your cool shuriken pattern though, how about this rhythm? https://voli.s-ul.eu/Hfw1onUG.png Reworked!
   
8. 01:39:599 - feels like a note should be here, both drum and vocal have a note here (make it a triple) From my point of view, the vocals don't reaaally call for it.
   
9. 01:45:540 (1,2,3) - linear movement doesn't feel too well, rather change direction on 01:45:930 (3) - to separate those patterns better. also why are 01:44:761 (1,2,1,2) - separated by ncs and this pattern isnt? Because the vocals are in 12 12 1234 from my point of view - Bomo, soja,
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10. 02:49:436 (4) - missing hitnormal i guess Fixed!
    
11. 03:14:566 (4) - would work better as 3 notes cuz 03:13:203 (1,2) - are clickable too The flow appears to be better with the vocals tho
    
12. 03:20:995 (2) - nc? Yeah :3

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