Voltaeyx wrote:
Problem Solution/Alternative CommentSpork Lover's Insane00:00:646 (3,1) - This jump feels too large. I would move the 1 up.
00:14:888 (1,1,1,1) - This pattern looks amazing!
00:17:464 (1,1) - You ignored a sound between these sliders.
00:21:403 (2) - You also ignored this sound.
about 00:00:646 (3,1) - I don't think it's too bad considering that 00:04:434 (1,1) - this is about the same as well (only like 0,07x difference)
I added the two others :3 (Look at the 2nd suggestion especially, looks a lot better now lol)
Lince Cosmico wrote:
Spork Lover's Insane
heya i still have your saradisk - 168 - 401 map :p aaaay, yeah I need to ask oko again or something lol, that set basically died xD
Why not ar9? Both things work, and I like quirky stuff
• 00:00:798 (1,1) - NC spam why lol Consistent NC gimmick, I assume you figured it out later in
• 00:00:949 (1,1) - fix stack Fixed
• 00:01:555 (1,1) - really weird rhythm choice woah, but it looks good Haha, I'm glad you like it? xD
• 00:08:828 (1,1) - the second slider 1 is not visible at all, it could be confusing while playing, maybe you can make it a bit faster so it will be longer and more visible Gave the 3 sliders higher SV, nice idea
• 00:11:403 - why did you skip this sound? That would be asking the same question as why I'm ignoring the triple on 00:11:252 - imo :3
• 00:13:676 (1) - this should be looking to here A little confused, but if you mean in terms of aesthetics, the reverse arrow does a triangle with 00:13:979 (2,3) -
• 00:14:131 (3,2) - blanket correctly i guess fixed slightly
• 00:16:101 (1,1) - really weird rhythm It's no different from the other parts earlier, example being 00:08:828 (1,1) -
• 00:25:797 (2) - why did you use an slider here? you used all circles on the other similar parts I feel like the sound is more dragged out on the sliderstart here, but I'm open to changing it if anyone comes with a solid alternative.
actually pretty good diff ♥ uncommon but nice Uncommon is the exact word I'm looking for ;D thanks buddy!
Skylish wrote:
> 00:05:191 (1,1,2) - I think the flow should be like this: The rotational flow makes more sense to me (especially because the last two sliders in your suggestion don't follow the slider curve, which I feel that they should imo :3
> 00:15:494 (1,1) - the flow is unexpected, and it is quite edgy, not smooth imo. You turn the head of 00:16:101 (1) - to 2 o clock direction, and fix the position of 00:16:404 (1) - so as to make the DS be acceptably challenging. It's a peak section, so making stuff follow DS doesn't help on SV changes, it's an insane after all
> 00:20:949 (1) - It does not make sense at all.... A 1/8 slider does not suit the music. It should be just a simple circle without NC. NC should be used on on-beat or special emphasized note (apparently this one is not in anyway) I do a 1,1 NC gimmick all the way through the map if you've seen it - The 1/8 slider is more distinct than the other sounds and doesn't warrant a single tap only imo (The sliderend is silenced too to make it feel even more sudden)
Thanks guys!fattypikachu wrote:
00:09:131 (1) - Shouldn't the head use the soft sampleset like in 00:01:858 (1) - I'll let squirrel fiddle around with that ;D
00:11:101 (2,3) - Maybe ctrl+J this so it points to 00:11:707 (1) - Nah, the aesthetic lies in the mirror with 00:11:858 (1) - , which I feel is more important, since it doesn't affect flow
00:17:010 (1,2) - Copy and ctrl+H 00:16:404 (1,2) - so that it ends up symmetrical I don't think it changed anything but done xD
00:26:404 (1) - Are the bumps in the loop intentional? It looks a lot better to me without them: https://puu.sh/uVttl/1e44335ef1.png I prefer having that "diamond" shape, makes the hole in the middle of it look a little better imo :3
(Squirrel, there's a soft sampleset thing in fattypikachu's mod on 00:09:131)
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