Ok so, I have some serious concerns about how its concepts, visuals, patterns and ideas are really similar in their core from mazzerin's map. There are some differences though, as you did map it by yourself and didn't straight out copy/pasted.
Here are some examples (and
mazzerin's map for comparison) :
01:35:071 (1) -
And the stream following it.
01:55:515 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
vs
Not the flow, but the way you completely ignored the blasting 1/4s.
02:10:627 (1) - vs 00:40:435 (1) -
Kinda lazy to screen both entire kiais, but the way the streams are shaped, how they flow and their relative spacing are really similar aswell.
02:53:290 (1) - vs 01:23:101 (1) -
This one is identical but understandable, it really does fit well and no other option I can think of fit as well.
03:32:400 (1) - vs 02:02:212 (1) -
Again, how the relative spacing and shaping is done.
04:18:179 (1) - 02:47:990 (1) -
Uncanny similarities.
Those are only some examples,
it isn't an exhaustive list. Overall, not straight copy/pasting, but it certainly does feel like it's more than simple inspiration. On some parts, the similarities are uncanny. The overall feeling of the flow, concepts, patterns and visuals seem too similar to be only inspiration. You may not realize yourself, but it is how it feels.
You don't necessarily have to make everything different, but there are many more ways to map the song while still following and fitting it in its intensity.