Ito Kanako - Uncontrollable (TV Size) · forum

Zel

Joined April 2014

Zel 2017-06-23T20:53:17+00:00

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Title:Uncontrollable
TitleUnicode:Uncontrollable
Artist:Ito Kanako
ArtistUnicode:いとうかなこ
Creator:MadHypnofrog
Version:Zel's Extreme
Source:CHAOS;CHILD
Tags:asuka_- eeezzzeee zel mentai 5pb. nitroplus itou head op opening tv size
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Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-06-23T21:05:31+00:00

@Zel: 00:57:024 (1,2) - (1)'s tail was hitsounded and (2) had no hitsound so I fixed it lol
01:14:595 - and yes this part has drums all over lol fix pls
asuka would reply tomorrow, now let's wait for eze as he logged in a month ago zzzz

Mentai

472 posts

Joined June 2016

Mentai 2017-06-23T21:39:12+00:00

fix for 1/2 spam + minor aesthetic changes

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Glyphic

65 posts

Joined June 2014

Glyphic 2017-06-24T03:38:21+00:00

Light Insane

00:04:738 (1,2,3) - is there any reason that the slider ends are on the intense sounds? feels very lack luster

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Asuka_- 2017-06-24T11:01:01+00:00

ippai

im not good at english
i use google translate

lit120 wrote:
w
[asuka]
00:01:881 (2,3) - i wonder why did you set a drum sampleset here, despite that the beat isn't there for using a hitsound .-.　k
00:02:453 (4) - but the tail is required here .-. k
00:03:881 (2,3,1) - from the first and the second point k
00:12:881 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - hm, are you actually going for an angle slider pattern? just copy paste one of the sliders, then adjust the angle from what you want. then copy paste again, do the same thing little changed
00:26:595 (1,2,3) - you might want to review the hitsounds again by listening at the song again k
00:32:453 (2,4) - blanket them? k
01:07:453 (5,6) - what about the blue tick? i don't think it looks suit for the use since it's an absent note. if you think that you're following for a background music that should supports enough, then it's ok i want keep it,,, sry.
01:24:881 (1) - i'd make it the middle center from 01:24:595 (1,2) - in 421|189 since it's just a weak vocal note that doesn't emphasize any beat there. should be emphasize well with a weak vocal note there instead XD little changed (spacing)
01:25:738 (4) - what about the red tick? why not just a note instead of 1/2 slider here? should be well emphasize enough rather than giving another note to hear on that red tick, since it ends on a white tick instead changed 3/4...
01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - i have provided the mod about this just like the previous diffs keep its fine imo

-LynX- wrote:
Asuka_-'s Insane
00:08:738 (3,4,5,6) - maybe NC 3 and 5? nice
00:28:595 (4) - minor visual suggestion, perhaps use some red anchors for this slider for the distinct sound the nc part is consistent with no anchors
00:37:453 (4) - perhaps NC this, since the spacing from 2->3 and 3->4 is similar but 3->4 is 1/1 ok nice
01:12:881 (3,4,5,1) - maybe this will flow better? https://puu.sh/wiar4/48b97677d1.png flow is already fine imo

Sotarks wrote:
[Azuka's Insane]
00:10:167 (5) - wat, please make this clap clickable here.. and 1/4 is not appropriate here　nice
00:19:453 (2,1) - wat a juge spacing, consider lowering this little changed

Sidetail wrote:
[asuka]
英語のmodの中に現れる日本語...　まじ神
00:06:024 (1) - sliderになるのがいいと思います keepで
00:10:167 (5) - ここにcircleを使ってください。強いbeatがあるから。　ほーい
00:37:453 (1) - NCはどうですか。00:37:024 (2,3,1) - distanceは同じですけと、timeline-dsは違うです。　おーけい
01:26:024 (1) - ここにcircleをつかって、spinnerを01:26:095 - に始まるのがいいです。ここは前のすらいだーの速度下げてそれを強調させたいからkeepで

Yuuki Konno wrote:
Asuka_-'s Insane
Problems
00:26:595 (1) - This spacing is too large, it contradicts previously set patterns. It would follow the patterns and look better blanketing the (2) slider. ok

01:01:881 (1,2,3,4) - You have your primary "clap" beats on the end of the sliders, but there is no loud noise at this part so it simply makes the sliders a bit more

awkward for no reason. little changed

01:06:453 (2,1) - The combo makes it seem like another full beat spacing. just remove the new combo and you're golden. keep

01:20:595 (2,3,4) - Distance is too short. An easy fix would be to make the 3 where the 4 is and have the 4 between the 3 and 2. like this: its fine imo

https://gyazo.com/6d6b15c8bc54cdf3081f5333c79b658e

Opinions
Warning: These could be a bit nit picky
00:09:310 (6,1) - The spacing between 1 and 6 seems too far, I first thought it was the same spacing as between 00:08:881 (4,5) - . That's just my opinion. (This

spacing pattern is shown a few seconds later at 00:10:167 (5,1) - ) little changed

00:18:881 (1,2) - Currently this looks like this: https://gyazo.com/3d70764e2f6cf569b253ccfa8f32d888
When playing through this the flow felt better in this position: https://gyazo.com/3cc5c3f4d68a346bc7f55de97541a6d3 keep

Feb wrote:
Asuka in the main roster insane
we meet again　yey

what's up with your high AR's? 9.3 is way over the top again uhm 9.1 is like the max you should put on this. As on your other diff, no unreadable stuff nor hard
keep for now

rhythm at all.

00:19:310 (1,2,1) - this plays really wanky mainly because it's hard to identify 00:19:453 (2,1) - this as 1/4 rhythm when 00:19:310 (1,2) - this is also 1/4 but
with different spacing. little changed ()
00:10:595 (1) - this entire section plays like 3 star and 00:58:595 (1) - this plays like 5 star. Consider buffing the 3 star section a bit. it is not kiai part. so fine..??
01:07:453 (5,6,1) - the spacing kinda fits an extra, but this is abit over the top spacing little changed
01:09:453 (4) - could be emphasized more as the vocal is stronger than 3 and 1. little changed... (but i couldnt)

good luck

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
[Asuka_-'s Insane]
00:18:024 - slowly decreasing the spacing would express better to the music, like Zel's Extreme i tried
00:37:167 (3,4) - spacing here is too similar with 1/2 gap, make the spacing bigger would give a nice separation nice
G

Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

upd

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Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-06-24T12:39:38+00:00

Glyphic wrote:
Light Insane

00:04:738 (1,2,3) - is there any reason that the slider ends are on the intense sounds? feels very lack luster

those are mapped to vocals, pretty much like the whole diff

Hectic

511 posts

Joined August 2015

Hectic 2017-06-24T21:52:02+00:00

Привет, м4м

Chaos

00:02:453 (1,2) - поровнять мб? или слайдер сделать непрямым
00:08:310 (1) - не очень нравится как этот слайдер повторяет движение предыдущих, мне кажется было бы лучше, если бы он направлялся иначе
00:10:310 (5) - мне кажется такой звук лучше показать слайдером дугой, типа этого
00:16:310 (1) - мне кажется это комбо начинается слишком далеко, может подвинуть паттерн поближе к 00:16:024 (6) - ?
00:23:167 (1) - конец слайдера на у: -1
00:28:024 (3,4) - поровнять у слайдера то, что идет до красного узла по направлению с фолоупоинтом
00:41:167 (1,2) - то же самое
01:11:024 (1,2,3,4) - этот паттерн был бы клевее имо, если сделать так, чтобы 2 и 3 огибали 1 и 4 (если не нравится, то хотя бы покрути 2 и 3 немного по часовой и отодвинь от 1 и 4, типа этого). алсо стакни 1 и 4 получше
01:20:310 (5,1,1,1) - неаккуратно

Zel's Extreme

00:05:024 (2,3) - visually too close (comparing to 00:05:310 (3,4) - for example)
00:20:738 (1,2,3) - consistent visual distance please
00:38:881 (5,1) - align?

Light Insane

00:09:453 (1) - подальше от 00:08:738 (2) -
00:56:738 (3,5) - выровнять бы
01:00:024 (2,3) - ^, и расстояние между 1-2 1-3 чтобы одинаковое визуально

Надеюсь чем-то помог, удачки

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-06-24T23:05:50+00:00

h4d0uk3n1 wrote:
Привет, м4м

Chaos
00:02:453 (1,2) - поровнять мб? или слайдер сделать непрямым не стоит, оно и так вполне нормально играется и смотрится
00:08:310 (1) - не очень нравится как этот слайдер повторяет движение предыдущих, мне кажется было бы лучше, если бы он направлялся иначе как мне кажется, не стоит он того, чтобы на нем флоубрейк делать
00:10:310 (5) - мне кажется такой звук лучше показать слайдером дугой, типа этого а мне нравится
00:16:310 (1) - мне кажется это комбо начинается слишком далеко, может подвинуть паттерн поближе к 00:16:024 (6) - ? +
00:23:167 (1) - конец слайдера на у: -1 бланкет правильный
00:28:024 (3,4) - поровнять у слайдера то, что идет до красного узла по направлению с фолоупоинтом тоже не настолько нужно, но я чутка подкрутил положение тройки
00:41:167 (1,2) - то же самое а вот здесь да, чутка неровно было
01:11:024 (1,2,3,4) - этот паттерн был бы клевее имо, если сделать так, чтобы 2 и 3 огибали 1 и 4 (если не нравится, то хотя бы покрути 2 и 3 немного по часовой и отодвинь от 1 и 4, типа этого). алсо стакни 1 и 4 получше пофиксил стак + чутка подвинул (2) и (3)
01:20:310 (5,1,1,1) - неаккуратно там не в бланкетах фишка, все норм с этим паттерном
Light Insane
00:09:453 (1) - подальше от 00:08:738 (2) - не особо нужно, там и так дс достаточный
00:56:738 (3,5) - выровнять бы там задумка паттерна не в этом была немного, но я его переделал чутка, в частности, из-за оверлапа с двойками предыдущими
01:00:024 (2,3) - ^, и расстояние между 1-2 1-3 чтобы одинаковое визуально спейсинг я там не хочу делать одинаковый, мне кажется, так лучше заходит. повернул 2 чутка, чтобы прямо было
Надеюсь чем-то помог, удачки

спасибо!

Lokidoki

374 posts

Joined June 2015

Lokidoki 2017-06-28T18:26:24+00:00

M4M as promised

[Light Insane]
00:21:167 (2) - even though it is blanketed, the flow is really weird at that part, it'd be better if it was more curved imo
00:55:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the sounds intensify there a lot, so i don't see a point in those doubles

[Asuka's Insane]
00:17:453 - missed an important sound there
00:32:167 (1,2,3) - that is pretty weird considering the flow always being smooth and round. this pattern is too hard and edgy imo
01:05:738 - and 01:06:167 - how about adding a sound clickable, it will be like a cussion without stopping the clicking pattern
01:18:310 (2) - too edgy for flow
01:29:738 - end the spinner here

[eze's Extra]
00:20:310 (4) - the flow is weird, make it a curved slider and blanket it
00:20:738 (2,4) - connect the sliderends?
00:23:738 (4) - imperfect blanket
00:56:738 (1) - delete NC
00:57:024 (2) - add NC
01:00:881 (1) - ugly overlaps with 01:00:024 (2) -

[Zel's Extreme]
00:01:453 (1,2,1,2) - doesn't seem too fitting for vocals, you can just make a circle-slider, rather than 1/4slider-1/2slider (like this: https://puu.sh/wwB3p/46443b0f95.png)
00:50:595 (1,2) - you make this spacing the same as your 1/2 spacing, pls fix
00:58:595 (1,2,1,2) - same as the first suggestion
01:07:738 (1,2,1,2) - ^
01:26:024 (1) - end on the white tick

[Chaos]
00:53:738 (5) - seems unfairly spaced
01:01:024 (2,3) - flows quite strangely, i suggest lowering the spacing to avoid that

that was just a short mod, sry if not enough

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-06-28T21:18:42+00:00

Lokidoki wrote:
M4M as promised
[Light Insane]
00:21:167 (2) - even though it is blanketed, the flow is really weird at that part, it'd be better if it was more curved imo it's fine, just some simple circular flow
00:55:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the sounds intensify there a lot, so i don't see a point in those doubles what's wrong with them? I don't really want them to be jumps cause that's boost the SR a lot, and the music is getting more intense so I switch to circles from sliders

[Chaos]
00:53:738 (5) - seems unfairly spaced tru, reworked the pattern a bit
01:01:024 (2,3) - flows quite strangely, i suggest lowering the spacing to avoid that did smth similar to 00:03:881 (2,3) -
that was just a short mod, sry if not enough

thanks!

Zel

240 posts

Joined April 2014

Zel 2017-06-30T18:06:29+00:00

Update

learned some stuff and applied stuff

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Noffy

Nomination Assessment Team

1,656 posts

Joined April 2012

Noffy 2017-07-02T19:05:36+00:00

Hello, rather delayed mod from my queueueu

[General]
How come there is no video? o:
It feels like a waste to map a tv-size and to not include the video. Unless it has NSFW elements, which I'm pretty sure Chaos;Child's doesn't unless I missed it.
If you need help getting one and making it osu ready, I can try to do so ^^
Despite there being an advanced difficulty, I felt that the jump from advanced > hard was still a bit larger than it should be, playing wise. I think you can afford to buff both normal and advanced at least a small amount.

Pretty sure source should be "ChäoS;Child" as this is how it appears everywhere I've seen it.
+add "chaos" to tags because ChäoS has the funky ä character in it.

[Normal]
Generally, I think having a slider velocity of .6 is a bit rather too low, especially when combined with your rhythm choices.
Overall, it makes things so cramped together that normal can actually be more difficult to read for a beginner than advanced.
Any other problem I have directly relates back to this, so that's all I have to say for Normal.

00:40:310 (1,1) - these sliders are cool as heck tho. Would like to see more cool sliderarts like this.

[Advanced]

00:07:453 (4,1) - This blanket can definitely be improved.
00:10:595 (1,2) - 00:12:881 (1,2) - 00:15:167 (1,2) - 00:16:310 (3,4) - You have these similar patterns of parallel sliders, but the visual spacing in between them is different every time. The result looks rather inconsistent and weakens the impact of the repeated idea.
00:17:453 (1,2,3,4,5) - Possibly changing it like this http://puu.sh/wzQ7R/5c8a19c8aa.jpg could be more natural to play. It's essentially the same pattern, but without forcibly going under 00:16:881 (4) - which made it look rather cluttered.
00:19:738 - to 00:26:310 - it's rather confusing what you are supposed to be following in this section. You skip over strong vocals like 00:20:167 - , map weaker ones like 00:20:310 , put strong drum beats like 00:20:595 as slider ends, and give something like 00:21:738 (6) - a circle even though it's a very soft hi-hat. I'd suggest revising the rhythm in this section from scratch, it's all over the place.
00:28:595 (4) - Have a circle instead? This would help emphasize 00:28:881 (1) - being the start of a new part in the song.
00:45:453 (2,1) - A bad overlap like this can easily be avoided by changing the positioning of (2)
01:07:024 (2,2) - This overlap.. is rather.. very bad looking.
00:59:024 - I suggest finding a way to place another 1/2 reverse slider to be like 00:58:595 (1) - as the song repeats the "nee" twice.
01:08:167 - ^ same here.
01:10:167 (2) - I think this should just be a 1/1 slider like 01:01:024 (2) - was.
01:16:024 (5,6,7) - Maybe make (5) a circle instead, so that (6,7) are more noticably following the louder more continuos synth volume.

Generally, I found throughout the difficulty quite a few patterns would end up rather cramped together, especially during the kiai.

[Mentai's Hard]

00:03:167 (4,1) - The reduced spacing between these two notes makes the player more likely to mistake 00:03:881 (1) - for being at the downbeat of 00:03:738 - instead. I'd suggest increasing the spacing here to the standard 1.0.
00:59:738 (4,5) - This rhythm was rather out of place as where (5) starts isn't terribly strong in the song but 01:00:024 is. Maybe replace this with two 1/2 sliders instead?
01:01:310 (3) - Somewhat similarly, this slider would probably be more fitting starting at 01:01:453 instead.
01:10:453 (3) - ^ but to 01:10:595 -

Really cool difficulty! ^^

[Light Insane]

00:33:881 (2,3,1) - This flows quite a bit more sharply than previous patterns in your map without this part of the song being particularly special to deserve it. Mainly, its arrangment leads to 00:34:310 (3,1) - this jump feeling quite unnatural. I suggest trying to figure out an alternate placement for this bit.
01:12:595 (2,1) - since you've been using stacking throughout the map, these being so close to stacked yet not quite looks really, very odd.

[Asuka_-'s Insane]

00:05:881 (5) - Ehh... there isn't really a sound here to click to. Stacking it on top of the really strong 00:06:024 (1) - weaken's (1)'s impact in the map as well. I'd suggest figuring out a pattern where you can extend 00:05:595 (4) - to be 1/1 instead.
00:33:310 (5) - Again, there isn't really a sound here for clicking to. All of the higher difficulties even have it mapped as a sliderend!
00:45:024 (2) - Not that it makes a difference but why the random white node in the middle? haha
00:56:024 (4,1) - The angle here, in my opinion, is faar smaller than it should be, and as a result makes the entirety of 00:56:310 (1,2,3,4) - more difficult to play than it would have been on its own.
01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - Consider setting the combo color for these to be something else, the light blue blends in with the default spinner.

[eze's Extra]

00:26:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this could benefit from adjustments to make the spacing increase more gradual, as right now it's small spaced notes > big space notes without any real inbetween, taking away from the epic build up effect it could've had.
01:00:024 (2,1) - I didn't really notice any overlaps in the map before now, so this one is just kind of :/
01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - Consider changing the combo color, the light blue blends in with the default spinner.

[Zel's Extreme]

I notice the hitsounding in the beginning of this difficulty is quite louder than the other ones, and mostly it just sounds kind of weird as the hitsounding is so sparse, that the player just ends up hearing a constant sh-sh-sh from the hitnormal.
00:25:310 (1,4) - Sttaackkk is off
00:29:881 (1) - This is actually, like, 1 or 2 pixels offscreen. Raise just a wee bit please.
01:04:167 (1,2,3) - Maybe try to find a way to space this more like 01:13:310 (1,2,3) - . Currently, these objects are unusually close together compared to the rest of the wildly spaced kiai.

[Chaos]

01:18:881 - it's rather unfitting to skip this kick when the kicks are what 01:17:738 (4,5,6) - were all following.
01:20:024 - ^

I was a bit worried after seeing the advanced and normal, which are in my opinion the weakest difficulties here, but overall this is quite a cool set for a good song.
Good luck!
(PM me about the video if interested)

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-07-02T21:10:10+00:00

Noffy wrote:
Hello, rather delayed mod from my queueueu

[General]
How come there is no video? o:
It feels like a waste to map a tv-size and to not include the video. Unless it has NSFW elements, which I'm pretty sure Chaos;Child's doesn't unless I missed it.
If you need help getting one and making it osu ready, I can try to do so ^^ ya would be great if you could find a good quality one! I didn't personally think about adding a video lol
Despite there being an advanced difficulty, I felt that the jump from advanced > hard was still a bit larger than it should be, playing wise. I think you can afford to buff both normal and advanced at least a small amount. I think it's pretty much fine since normal is basically 1/1 with occasional 3/2 repeats and 2/1 (which is a standard for lower diffs imo, I don't want to make the rhythm too complex there) and advanced introduces a good amount of 1/2 gaps without having too many 1/2 jumps (mentai nerfed the jump section in hard, so it shouldn't have a diffspike in terms of rhythm now). I'll keep it for now, though if needed I might buff advanced a bit

Pretty sure source should be "ChäoS;Child" as this is how it appears everywhere I've seen it.
+add "chaos" to tags because ChäoS has the funky ä character in it. that's what I used at first as well, but this meta had been confirmed by kwan, I guess I'll add the screenshot into the description to avoid any misunderstandings lol

[Normal]
Generally, I think having a slider velocity of .6 is a bit rather too low, especially when combined with your rhythm choices.
Overall, it makes things so cramped together that normal can actually be more difficult to read for a beginner than advanced.
Any other problem I have directly relates back to this, so that's all I have to say for Normal. tbh increasing the SV would be a pain in the ass ._. I'll keep it for now, would change to like x0.8 if needed, I think it's not that crucial - the rhythm is pretty much straightforward and repeats itself all over, so it shouldn't be that hard for new players to read it

00:40:310 (1,1) - these sliders are cool as heck tho. Would like to see more cool sliderarts like this. ikr :>

[Advanced]
00:07:453 (4,1) - This blanket can definitely be improved. I swear it was better the last time I checked it LOL
00:10:595 (1,2) - 00:12:881 (1,2) - 00:15:167 (1,2) - 00:16:310 (3,4) - You have these similar patterns of parallel sliders, but the visual spacing in between them is different every time. The result looks rather inconsistent and weakens the impact of the repeated idea. nice catch, changed some of them to be more consistent
00:17:453 (1,2,3,4,5) - Possibly changing it like this http://puu.sh/wzQ7R/5c8a19c8aa.jpg could be more natural to play. It's essentially the same pattern, but without forcibly going under 00:16:881 (4) - which made it look rather cluttered. did smth else
00:19:738 - to 00:26:310 - it's rather confusing what you are supposed to be following in this section. You skip over strong vocals like 00:20:167 - , map weaker ones like 00:20:310 , put strong drum beats like 00:20:595 as slider ends, and give something like 00:21:738 (6) - a circle even though it's a very soft hi-hat. I'd suggest revising the rhythm in this section from scratch, it's all over the place. I just recently remapped this section cause it was literally vocals all over (like most of this diff) and tried to focus more on the beats. did some tweaks here and there, hope it's better now!
00:28:595 (4) - Have a circle instead? This would help emphasize 00:28:881 (1) - being the start of a new part in the song. agree, changed
00:45:453 (2,1) - A bad overlap like this can easily be avoided by changing the positioning of (2) WHOOOPS this shouldn't have happened in the first place, smh I positioned (1) at the wrong angle, fixed!
01:07:024 (2,2) - This overlap.. is rather.. very bad looking. ctrl-h is my best friend (ended up changing like everything after this one LMAO)
00:59:024 - I suggest finding a way to place another 1/2 reverse slider to be like 00:58:595 (1) - as the song repeats the "nee" twice. ye I wanted to simplify the rhythm a bit, applied
01:08:167 - ^ same here. ^
01:10:167 (2) - I think this should just be a 1/1 slider like 01:01:024 (2) - was. there's another vocal syllable on that repeat so I'd rather keep it like this
01:16:024 (5,6,7) - Maybe make (5) a circle instead, so that (6,7) are more noticably following the louder more continuos synth volume. I think that (5) fits in that pattern as well, e.g. in the last diff those three are 1-2-1-2-1-2 jumps that are gettin bigger
Generally, I found throughout the difficulty quite a few patterns would end up rather cramped together, especially during the kiai. yea, ended up redoing some patterns in kiai. actually ended up buffing this diff a bit as you suggested (well, those 1/2 repeats on 'nee, nee' did the thing LOL I had to add some more 1/2 to kiai, and this also allowed me to buff the very first section (00:19:738 - )

[Light Insane]
00:33:881 (2,3,1) - This flows quite a bit more sharply than previous patterns in your map without this part of the song being particularly special to deserve it. Mainly, its arrangment leads to 00:34:310 (3,1) - this jump feeling quite unnatural. I suggest trying to figure out an alternate placement for this bit. for me it's fine tbh, though I still did smth else - 00:35:167 (2,3) - spacing on those was a bit different that I wanted it to be
01:12:595 (2,1) - since you've been using stacking throughout the map, these being so close to stacked yet not quite looks really, very odd. yep, fixed

[Chaos]

01:18:881 - it's rather unfitting to skip this kick when the kicks are what 01:17:738 (4,5,6) - were all following.
01:20:024 - ^ fixed both, I like the idea
I was a bit worried after seeing the advanced and normal, which are in my opinion the weakest difficulties here, but overall this is quite a cool set for a good song. ya true, mapping those lower diffs was hard xdd
Good luck!
(PM me about the video if interested)

wheesh that was a long one, thanks!

Zel

240 posts

Joined April 2014

Zel 2017-07-03T03:25:58+00:00

Noffy

I notice the hitsounding in the beginning of this difficulty is quite louder than the other ones, and mostly it just sounds kind of weird as the hitsounding is so sparse, that the player just ends up hearing a constant sh-sh-sh from the hitnormal. fixed
00:25:310 (1,4) - Sttaackkk is off it isnt, it snaps to this position
00:29:881 (1) - This is actually, like, 1 or 2 pixels offscreen. Raise just a wee bit please. lmfao im a noob. fixed
01:04:167 (1,2,3) - Maybe try to find a way to space this more like 01:13:310 (1,2,3) - . Currently, these objects are unusually close together compared to the rest of the wildly spaced kiai. fixed

Update

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Mentai

472 posts

Joined June 2016

Mentai 2017-07-03T06:55:33+00:00

@noffy if i were to change that reverse arrow section to what you suggest, id have to completely redo how i organized the kiai. so unless it becomes an OMEGA issue, then i can remap the kiai for that. but i definitely see the validity of that point

thank ya noff <3

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172,344,40310,5,2,0:0:0:0:
172,344,40453,2,0,B|160:280|160:280|140:248|140:248|128:176,1,168,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,104,41167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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472,192,43453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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240,108,44310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,52,44595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,132,44881,5,2,0:0:0:0:
64,132,45024,2,0,B|80:212|80:212|52:312,1,168,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,348,45738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,348,45881,2,0,P|196:328|316:348,1,168,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,272,46595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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160,268,55881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,188,56024,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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224,40,57310,2,0,P|273:77|335:77,1,125.999996154785,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,36,57738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,36,58595,6,0,P|476:36|492:32,2,70,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,156,59024,2,0,P|248:156|232:160,2,70,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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234,159,60881,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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120,180,61738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,180,61881,2,0,P|68:188|48:180,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,256,62167,2,0,P|141:281|120:280,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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284,207,62738,2,0,P|349:225|376:288,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,332,63167,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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376,287,63738,2,0,B|368:227|368:227|348:207|348:207|340:151,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,80,64167,2,0,B|223:130|223:130|243:150|243:150|251:210,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,120,64595,2,0,L|120:48,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,192,64881,2,0,L|39:127,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,276,65167,2,0,L|-1:225,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,304,65453,6,0,P|144:356|112:376,2,70,12|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,65881,2,0,P|313:158|336:132,2,70,12|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,360,66310,2,0,L|432:384,1,70,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,220,66595,6,0,P|411:254|388:280,1,70,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,324,66881,2,0,P|241:290|264:264,1,70,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,120,67167,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,120,67310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,68,67453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,68,67595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,220,67738,6,0,L|420:296,2,70,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,160,68167,2,0,L|268:90,2,70,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,12,68595,2,0,P|236:8|224:16,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,112,68881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,112,69024,2,0,P|390:117|422:105,2,70,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,24,69453,2,0,P|516:76|500:164,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,228,70024,5,2,0:0:0:0:
312,228,70167,2,0,L|300:300,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,336,70453,2,0,L|155:266,2,70,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,192,70881,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,192,71024,2,0,P|176:168|124:180,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,132,71310,2,0,P|282:95|229:89,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,112,71595,2,0,P|404:67|357:43,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,168,71881,2,0,P|456:212|380:200,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,132,72310,5,2,0:0:0:0:
104,132,72595,2,0,L|96:52,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,200,72881,2,0,B|180:252|180:252|164:284|164:284|172:344,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,267,73310,2,0,B|303:215|303:215|319:183|319:183|311:131,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,244,73738,2,0,L|422:313,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,164,74024,2,0,L|498:227,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,88,74310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,64,74595,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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176,124,75024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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184,276,75595,2,0,P|248:268|292:208,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,268,76024,2,0,P|368:277|328:333,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,384,76453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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72,140,76881,5,6,0:0:0:0:
72,140,77024,2,0,P|160:176|252:128,1,188.999994232178,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,52,77738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,52,77881,2,0,B|404:128|404:128|420:168|420:168|416:240,1,188.999994232178,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,372,78595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,252,78881,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,88,79167,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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428,364,80024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,88,80881,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,184,81167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,344,81453,6,0,P|276:340|292:348,1,62.9999980773926,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

DeRandom Otaku 2017-07-03T15:34:59+00:00

[Normal]

00:10:595 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - This whole streak is way too long, considering this difficulty as the first of the set its not beginner friendly at all and thus should totally be nerfed And pretty much same for the rest of the difficulty. you may need to nerf rhythm in most sections slightly here or you could simply add an easy difficulty.
However i am still gonna point out some notes that you can delete to simplify the rhythm and it will still sound just as fine as before. 00:12:595 (4) - 00:17:167 (4) - 00:30:595 (3) - (can change to single circle) 00:30:595 (3) - (can change to single circle).
For the kiai, you could follow the same patterning i mentioned above, because the whole two kiais with the section in middle have zero gaps between notes which is just intense for normal difficulties.
00:28:881 (1) - Judging by this whole difficulty, it seems like you are mostly emphasizing vocals, if thats the case then this slider is pretty misleading, since the song is emphasizing 00:29:167 - this beat while you are emphasizing 00:28:881 - this one.

[Advanced]

00:19:738 (1,2) - Having these two sliders next to each other is quite bad for emphasis since the first slider has kicks on both slider start and slider end while the second slider has vocals only without any drums or stuff. You may replace the instrument you want to emphasize (either the drums or vocals) by circles only to distinguish a difference between different instruments properly.
00:20:738 (4) - 00:23:024 (3,4) - These two are pretty much similar in song but mapped with different rhythm thus lacking consistency.
00:29:453 (3,4) - This is really weird because you are starting 4 at 00:30:024 - which supports a drum and then you start 5 at 00:30:453 - which supports vocal, you should stick to a single instrument. If you want to stick to vocals then try this rhythm otherwise you can have this rhythmfor drums.
Same thing goes for 00:31:595 - 00:33:881 -
00:58:310 (1) - hint you dont need nc on this
01:06:595 (1) - Same

[Hard]

00:36:595 (3,1,2) - This whole pattern can be confusing as hell because you have a whooping DS of 3x between 00:36:595 (3,1) - and for the next two objects the DS is back to average even tho they are all the same rhythm, the DS is twice as much between 3 and 1. What makes it even more confusing is the direction of 00:36:881 (1) - towards 00:37:453 (2) - .The reverse arrow of 1 directly points towards 2 which can signal the players about it being a 1/2 rhythm while in reality its 1/1. I hope you understand my point lol
This difficulty has a lot of confusing spacings in most of the parts since the spacing between 1/1 patterns and 1/2 patterns co-exist to each other when the patterns are beside each other which are not suitable for a hard difficulty at all. The 1/2 slider spam part at 00:10:595 - is nicely made so gj on that

[Light Insane]

00:35:738 (1,2) - The flow here is kinda weird and is inconsistent with the patterns before this. The movement in your patterns earlier was circular but here ,suddenly, for an unknown reason, its not circular and its totally opposite of that so yeah ctrl+g'ing 00:36:167 (2) - will help fix that.
00:58:310 (1) - This slider looks so bad aesthetically , The red anchor point is so close to its end that it makes it look kinda cramped. Maybe try moving the red node to left a bit, or maybe even to the middle since thats gonna look even nicer but i dont think you want to do that lol.

well thats all for now. In summary, The difficulties can still take improvements in rhythms,structure and rhythm.
gl

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-07-03T17:33:23+00:00

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
[Normal]
00:10:595 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - This whole streak is way too long, considering this difficulty as the first of the set its not beginner friendly at all and thus should totally be nerfed And pretty much same for the rest of the difficulty. you may need to nerf rhythm in most sections slightly here or you could simply add an easy difficulty. don't really think it's that hard, basically 1/1 slider spam. it's not an easy diff after all, it's normal xd
However i am still gonna point out some notes that you can delete to simplify the rhythm and it will still sound just as fine as before. 00:12:595 (4) - 00:17:167 (4) - 00:30:595 (3) - (can change to single circle) 00:30:595 (3) - (can change to single circle).
For the kiai, you could follow the same patterning i mentioned above, because the whole two kiais with the section in middle have zero gaps between notes which is just intense for normal difficulties. I'll nerf this if needed, cause rn it seems fine for me, e.g. stuff like https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1023840 is ranked and is even more dense than this diff. also I'd say I use many repeating rhythms so it shouldn't be that hard for new players to follow them
00:28:881 (1) - Judging by this whole difficulty, it seems like you are mostly emphasizing vocals, if thats the case then this slider is pretty misleading, since the song is emphasizing 00:29:167 - this beat while you are emphasizing 00:28:881 - this one. tbh I don't want to go full-circles like 00:31:167 (1,2) - immediately, also 00:28:881 - is a start of a new stanza and even deserves to be more emphasized than 00:29:167 - imo
[Advanced]
00:19:738 (1,2) - Having these two sliders next to each other is quite bad for emphasis since the first slider has kicks on both slider start and slider end while the second slider has vocals only without any drums or stuff. You may replace the instrument you want to emphasize (either the drums or vocals) by circles only to distinguish a difference between different instruments properly. yeah true, changed to 1/2 repeat + circle
00:20:738 (4) - 00:23:024 (3,4) - These two are pretty much similar in song but mapped with different rhythm thus lacking consistency. whooOPS tweaked this section slightly to make it more similar to the first one
00:29:453 (3,4) - This is really weird because you are starting 4 at 00:30:024 - which supports a drum and then you start 5 at 00:30:453 - which supports vocal, you should stick to a single instrument. If you want to stick to vocals then try this rhythm otherwise you can have this rhythmfor drums. I agree that it might be a bit strange lol. I want to smh keep both preserved, as sticking just to drums is kinda boring and if I only emphasize vocals it'll sound a bit too empty without drums, so I went with skipping vocal lines such as 00:29:881 - and started the slider 1/2 later, making it follow the drums. I kept the main idea, but adjusted some rhythms to make them more consistent
Same thing goes for 00:31:595 - 00:33:881 -
00:58:310 (1) - hint you dont need nc on this nope, this is intended
01:06:595 (1) - Same uh, this is like the most intense part of kiai and deserves to have a ncs per measure instead of nc per two measures
[Light Insane]
00:35:738 (1,2) - The flow here is kinda weird and is inconsistent with the patterns before this. The movement in your patterns earlier was circular but here ,suddenly, for an unknown reason, its not circular and its totally opposite of that so yeah ctrl+g'ing 00:36:167 (2) - will help fix that. ya for some reason I used the idea from the highest diff (to make the flow more weird in the end of the section) but only applied it here and not 00:26:595 - there. fixed!
00:58:310 (1) - This slider looks so bad aesthetically , The red anchor point is so close to its end that it makes it look kinda cramped. Maybe try moving the red node to left a bit, or maybe even to the middle since thats gonna look even nicer but i dont think you want to do that lol. did smth
well thats all for now. In summary, The difficulties can still take improvements in rhythms,structure and rhythm.
gl

thanks!

alden

206 posts

Joined November 2013

alden 2017-07-05T00:56:07+00:00

hi from #modreqs just a few things on a few diffs

Normal

00:14:024 (3,4,5) - I would make this a long slider like what you do with the rest of these parts considering
00:51:738 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - kinda seems too long of a slider train imo. I'd break it up maybe with some 1/1 sliders and a circle to emphasize the vocals or break it up with some circles

Mentai's Hard

00:03:167 (4) - kinda nazi but this is an ugly blanket

00:04:738 (3) - ^ slightly off too
00:08:310 (1,2) - I dont really like the break of flow here i dont know if it fits or not
00:09:738 (2) - I suggest switching up this slider so that it flows into 00:10:310 (3) -
00:34:738 (5,6) - just a me thing but i'd give the end of the bend some more length
00:42:310 (6) - should be a circle since u do it here 00:37:453 (2,3) -
00:48:881 (3) - another slightly offset blanket
01:19:310 (2) - the bends could be polished a bit

Light Insane

00:07:167 (1,2,3,4) - this seems really cluttered
00:19:738 (1,2) - I think there should be a bit more spacing here
00:36:595 (3) - since you're following vocals here i think this slider should also be a long one. Maybe a 3/4 slider?
01:04:310 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think there's anything in the music to justify a spacing increase
01:07:453 (5,1) - ok not really a problem but 5 doesnt totally line up with 1 which triggered me lol
01:08:738 (1,2) - blanket
01:13:453 (1,2,3,4) - same comment as 01:04:310 (1,2,3,4)
01:22:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it would be better if u used the same rhythm as 01:21:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

Zel's Extreme

00:07:738 (3) - needs more emphasis
00:09:453 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this doesnt fit. I would make 00:09:453 (1,2) - circles and 00:09:881 (3) - a 1/1 slider
00:12:310 (3,4,5,6) - for all the circles like these I would reccomend the first 2 circles to be more spaces than the other 2 to follow the pitch
00:32:881 (4,5) - I'd put a slider here
00:37:595 (2) - the long slider should start here
01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - holy thats one heck of a copypasta even for me
01:30:453 (4) - slider looks kinda ugly to me. Would rather just make them straight

Gl with this set!

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-07-05T09:03:01+00:00

ChronoNig wrote:
hi from #modreqs just a few things on a few diffs
Normal
00:14:024 (3,4,5) - I would make this a long slider like what you do with the rest of these parts considering this one is intended to be a bit more intense, also 00:14:595 (4,5) - emphasize those wubs on the background (like the kicksliders on higher diffs)
00:51:738 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - kinda seems too long of a slider train imo. I'd break it up maybe with some 1/1 sliders and a circle to emphasize the vocals or break it up with some circles agree, this is like one of the longest slider sections in the map, but I'd like to keep it as it is - putting circles there would break the emphasis pattern I'm following and make the section a bit harder. I'll change this if needed lol

Light Insane
00:07:167 (1,2,3,4) - this seems really cluttered intended, I use this pattern many times through the map
00:19:738 (1,2) - I think there should be a bit more spacing here if you meant spacing between the slider bodies - then yes, I increased it a bit
00:36:595 (3) - since you're following vocals here i think this slider should also be a long one. Maybe a 3/4 slider? not really, I switch to drums in the next few objects, it should be fine - I'd even rather say that this kickslider indicates this transition quite well
01:04:310 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think there's anything in the music to justify a spacing increase I think someone mentioned this already, imo those four sliders could be considered as a buildup to the peak of the kiai. again, I'd like to keep this but I'll change it if needed
01:07:453 (5,1) - ok not really a problem but 5 doesnt totally line up with 1 which triggered me lol whooops there was actually another issue with this one that went unnoticed, fixed!
01:08:738 (1,2) - blanket how did THAT happen
01:13:453 (1,2,3,4) - same comment as 01:04:310 (1,2,3,4) same reasoning lo
01:22:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it would be better if u used the same rhythm as 01:21:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - those two sliders follow the vocals nicely and give the player a little break, since I don't want to go with 14 1/2 circles in a row xd

Gl with this set!

thanks!

Mentai

472 posts

Joined June 2016

Mentai 2017-07-09T03:22:57+00:00

@dro tbh i cant believe most people (including me) didnt spot this ctrl+g error. thank you
the ds is this way because its an actual hard, since there is an advamced and more lower diffs

@chrononig keeping flow break, and the pattern here 00:42:310 (6) is mimicking the pattern from earlier, so its fine. also thew bends at the end are fine

fixed the rest ty

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224,40,57310,2,0,P|273:77|335:77,1,125.999996154785,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,36,57738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,36,58595,6,0,P|476:36|492:32,2,70,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,156,59024,2,0,P|248:156|232:160,2,70,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,316,59453,2,0,L|276:240,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,198,59738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,198,59881,2,0,L|424:268,2,70,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,332,60310,2,0,P|424:352|356:320,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,159,60881,5,2,0:0:0:0:
234,159,61024,2,0,L|226:83,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,32,61310,2,0,L|87:101,2,70,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,180,61738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,180,61881,2,0,P|68:188|48:180,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,256,62167,2,0,P|141:281|120:280,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,308,62453,2,0,P|245:347|224:354,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,207,62738,2,0,P|349:225|376:288,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,332,63167,5,2,0:0:0:0:
432,56,63453,2,0,L|444:136,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,287,63738,2,0,B|368:227|368:227|348:207|348:207|340:151,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,80,64167,2,0,B|223:130|223:130|243:150|243:150|251:210,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,120,64595,2,0,L|120:48,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,192,64881,2,0,L|39:127,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,276,65167,2,0,L|-1:225,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,304,65453,6,0,P|144:356|112:376,2,70,12|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,65881,2,0,P|313:158|336:132,2,70,12|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,360,66310,2,0,L|432:384,1,70,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,220,66595,6,0,P|411:254|388:280,1,70,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,324,66881,2,0,P|241:290|264:264,1,70,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,120,67167,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,120,67310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,68,67453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,68,67595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,220,67738,6,0,L|420:296,2,70,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,160,68167,2,0,L|268:90,2,70,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,12,68595,2,0,P|236:8|224:16,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,112,68881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,112,69024,2,0,P|390:117|422:105,2,70,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,24,69453,2,0,P|516:76|500:164,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,228,70024,5,2,0:0:0:0:
312,228,70167,2,0,L|300:300,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,336,70453,2,0,L|155:266,2,70,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,192,70881,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,192,71024,2,0,P|176:168|124:180,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,132,71310,2,0,P|282:95|229:89,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,112,71595,2,0,P|404:67|357:43,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,168,71881,2,0,P|456:212|380:200,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,132,72310,5,2,0:0:0:0:
104,132,72595,2,0,L|96:52,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,200,72881,2,0,B|180:252|180:252|164:284|164:284|172:344,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,267,73310,2,0,B|303:215|303:215|319:183|319:183|311:131,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,244,73738,2,0,L|422:313,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,164,74024,2,0,L|498:227,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,88,74310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,64,74595,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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176,124,75024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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184,276,75595,2,0,P|248:268|292:208,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,268,76024,2,0,P|368:277|328:333,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,384,76453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,332,76595,2,0,L|60:252,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,140,76881,5,6,0:0:0:0:
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408,52,77738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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284,372,78595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,252,78881,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,88,79167,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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428,364,80024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,88,80881,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,184,81167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,344,81453,6,0,P|276:340|292:348,1,62.9999980773926,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,140,86024,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86167,12,2,90024,0:0:0:0:

hlanden

104 posts

Joined September 2014

hlanden 2017-07-21T17:42:25+00:00

Just a random bad #modreq NM, coming because of the nice song

Chaos

00:20:738 (1,2,3) - Maybe you could try doing something like [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8647836] this for better aesthetics and because you used this pattern a few times already?
00:32:595 (2,3) - ^
01:00:024 (3,4) - ^
01:00:595 (5,2) - This also looks better after changing 5 to a straight slider
01:11:310 (2,3) - I suggest higher spacing here.
01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - ^, especially here, these are like the loudest sounds of the whole map yet you have a lot bigger jumps before these.

This is all for this difficulty, not really much to note since I'm not very experienced with modding difficulties of this high SR anyway

Zel's Extreme

00:12:310 (3,4,5,6) and 00:11:167 (3,4,5,6) and all the 4 jumps really - could be a bit better aesthetically if you aligned those a bit but I'd understand if you just want to leave them look a bit messier.
00:22:453 (3,1) - This slider shape usage is not that good because earlier on in the map (00:10:310 (1) ) u used this shape to map quite a different sound than just normal percussion, you should change these to more smooth shapes for better visual consistency.
00:39:738 (3) - ^ . Another fix to this actually would be changing the first slider to a different, unused shape.
01:26:024 (1) - Nice slider shape! Nothing more to say about this diff

eze's Extra

00:47:738 (3,5) - Blanket these
00:49:167 (7,1) - This looks a bit better imo
00:54:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you need bigger spacing here, the music is getting quite intense.
01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - Again, those are the strongest sounds you can hear in the song, bigger spacing would be better.

Nothing more to say, maybe you could make "prettier" sliders on the slow part with the lots of red anchors because it's calm but hey that's just subjective and you still do reverse emphasizing in this case so maybe this is okay.

Asuka_-'s Insane

Favourite difficulty hands down. Nothing much I can say here.

Light Insane

00:20:738 (1,2) - Why not just make them the same shape for better visuals?
00:55:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8 singletaps feels a bit too much for this difficulty and not even in the kiai part.
01:00:738 - See this sound left out here compared to the singletaps I talked about earlier means a big no no in my opinion because of inconsistency in where the actual harder stuff should be, I don't know though.
01:03:310 - ^, no point in pointing out all of those but I think they should be mapped.

Other than that all good

Mentai's Hard

00:35:738 (1,2) - This looks sliiiightly off to me, not sure tho.

Good diff here

And nothing to say about the easier diffs either, that's all I can contribute, hope I was helpful

Good luck with the map

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-07-21T22:51:14+00:00

hlanden wrote:
Just a random bad #modreq NM, coming because of the nice song

Chaos
00:20:738 (1,2,3) - Maybe you could try doing something like [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8647836] this for better aesthetics and because you used this pattern a few times already? would kinda break the flow and I don't want that
00:32:595 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:00:024 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:00:595 (5,2) - This also looks better after changing 5 to a straight slider (5) is not supposed to be straight huh, it's the same pattern I used before (00:02:881 (3,4,5) - and so on)
01:11:310 (2,3) - I suggest higher spacing here. whoosh this wasn't supposed to touch (5), I thought I fixed this
01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - ^, especially here, these are like the loudest sounds of the whole map yet you have a lot bigger jumps before these. not really, this is more of a calm-down after those jumps, especially with the spinner before

This is all for this difficulty, not really much to note since I'm not very experienced with modding difficulties of this high SR anyway
Light Insane
00:20:738 (1,2) - Why not just make them the same shape for better visuals? different sounds first of all, and I want to blanket 00:20:310 (3) - 's body with (2)
00:55:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8 singletaps feels a bit too much for this difficulty and not even in the kiai part. should be fine, this is an intense part
01:00:738 - See this sound left out here compared to the singletaps I talked about earlier means a big no no in my opinion because of inconsistency in where the actual harder stuff should be, I don't know though. this is not even an intense part of kiai, I only skipped red ticks with almost no sounds so it shouldn't be a problem
01:03:310 - ^, no point in pointing out all of those but I think they should be mapped. ^

Other than that all good

Good luck with the map

thanks!

hlanden

104 posts

Joined September 2014

hlanden 2017-07-22T01:29:56+00:00

Jabba wrote:
hlanden wrote:
Just a random bad #modreq NM, coming because of the nice song

Chaos
00:20:738 (1,2,3) - Maybe you could try doing something like [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8647836] this for better aesthetics and because you used this pattern a few times already? would kinda break the flow and I don't want that
00:32:595 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:00:024 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:00:595 (5,2) - This also looks better after changing 5 to a straight slider (5) is not supposed to be straight huh, it's the same pattern I used before (00:02:881 (3,4,5) - and so on)
01:11:310 (2,3) - I suggest higher spacing here. whoosh this wasn't supposed to touch (5), I thought I fixed this
01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - ^, especially here, these are like the loudest sounds of the whole map yet you have a lot bigger jumps before these. not really, this is more of a calm-down after those jumps, especially with the spinner before

This is all for this difficulty, not really much to note since I'm not very experienced with modding difficulties of this high SR anyway
Light Insane
00:20:738 (1,2) - Why not just make them the same shape for better visuals? different sounds first of all, and I want to blanket 00:20:310 (3) - 's body with (2)
00:55:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8 singletaps feels a bit too much for this difficulty and not even in the kiai part. should be fine, this is an intense part
01:00:738 - See this sound left out here compared to the singletaps I talked about earlier means a big no no in my opinion because of inconsistency in where the actual harder stuff should be, I don't know though. this is not even an intense part of kiai, I only skipped red ticks with almost no sounds so it shouldn't be a problem
01:03:310 - ^, no point in pointing out all of those but I think they should be mapped. ^

Other than that all good

Good luck with the map
thanks!

Sorry if it wasn't very useful

Atomosphere

176 posts

Joined November 2014

Atomosphere 2017-07-29T02:27:00+00:00

hi from mod req!
did you ask for a BN yesterday cuz i think i saw that..

Chaos

I have a few problems with this diff:

00:12:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) and 00:15:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - has uncomfortable movement and after this there is an abrupt change in flow at 00:16:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2)
00:19:738 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - The spacing is quite random in this section. There are sounds that are the exact same but have different spacing
00:39:738 (1,2) - More movement then actually needed. (aka. Make this have better flow pls)
00:58:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uncomfortable movement, you could do something similar but change the pattern a bit
01:04:453 (2,3,4,5) - ^^
01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Messy jumps make them flow better
01:07:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uncomfortable Movement
01:13:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^^
01:16:024 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Is this really necessary
01:21:453 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - messy jumble of mess pls remap this entire section, it also changes flow very abruptly

Also i think this BG would be a better choice: http://i.imgur.com/wjEevOq.jpg

It's fun but looking at a modding perspective it does have a few problems. Just fix those up and we'll see how this map goes!

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-07-29T07:12:34+00:00

Atomosphere wrote:
hi from mod req!
did you ask for a BN yesterday cuz i think i saw that..

Chaos

I have a few problems with this diff:

00:12:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) and 00:15:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - has uncomfortable movement and after this there is an abrupt change in flow at 00:16:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) disagree, 00:15:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is basically an up-and-down movement, so is 00:16:310 (1,2,3,4) - . same goes for 00:12:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , but the notes after are a bit more rotated to indicate the end of this section, while still maintaining the flow
00:19:738 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - The spacing is quite random in this section. There are sounds that are the exact same but have different spacing emphasizing the vocals huh, and even with that the changes are still quite minor so it's not even that noticeable. though 00:25:167 (5) - was off so I fixed it
00:39:738 (1,2) - More movement then actually needed. (aka. Make this have better flow pls) uhhh not at all, just a simple back-and-forth movement, since you don't really have to follow the sliders - they're not that curved
00:58:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uncomfortable movement, you could do something similar but change the pattern a bit spin your cursor in circles and you can hit those
01:04:453 (2,3,4,5) - ^^ move your cursor in an arc and you can hit those
01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Messy jumps make them flow better I could explain pretty much eveything about those jumps, but I'll just say that 01:06:453 (2,1,2) - is an intended flow break because the background music changes there. rest follows either the 1-2-3-1-2-3 or 1-2-1-2 patterns in music
01:07:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uncomfortable Movement same
01:13:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^^ same
01:16:024 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Is this really necessary uh, yes? it's another climatic part of kiai, not as strong as 01:05:453 - but still intense enough to have 6 jumps
01:21:453 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - messy jumble of mess pls remap this entire section, it also changes flow very abruptly I'm sorry if you can't do back-and-forth jumps

Also i think this BG would be a better choice: http://i.imgur.com/wjEevOq.jpg nah I'm fine with this one tbh

It's fun but looking at a modding perspective it does have a few problems. Just fix those up and we'll see how this map goes!

no offense dude, but it might be worth learning how to play before modding hard maps!
thanks!

Atomosphere

176 posts

Joined November 2014

Atomosphere 2017-07-29T09:36:03+00:00

Jabba wrote:
Atomosphere wrote:
hi from mod req!
did you ask for a BN yesterday cuz i think i saw that..

Chaos

I have a few problems with this diff:

00:12:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) and 00:15:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - has uncomfortable movement and after this there is an abrupt change in flow at 00:16:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) disagree, 00:15:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is basically an up-and-down movement, so is 00:16:310 (1,2,3,4) - . same goes for 00:12:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , but the notes after are a bit more rotated to indicate the end of this section, while still maintaining the flow
00:19:738 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - The spacing is quite random in this section. There are sounds that are the exact same but have different spacing emphasizing the vocals huh, and even with that the changes are still quite minor so it's not even that noticeable. though 00:25:167 (5) - was off so I fixed it
00:39:738 (1,2) - More movement then actually needed. (aka. Make this have better flow pls) uhhh not at all, just a simple back-and-forth movement, since you don't really have to follow the sliders - they're not that curved
00:58:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uncomfortable movement, you could do something similar but change the pattern a bit spin your cursor in circles and you can hit those
01:04:453 (2,3,4,5) - ^^ move your cursor in an arc and you can hit those
01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Messy jumps make them flow better I could explain pretty much eveything about those jumps, but I'll just say that 01:06:453 (2,1,2) - is an intended flow break because the background music changes there. rest follows either the 1-2-3-1-2-3 or 1-2-1-2 patterns in music
01:07:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uncomfortable Movement same
01:13:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^^ same
01:16:024 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Is this really necessary uh, yes? it's another climatic part of kiai, not as strong as 01:05:453 - but still intense enough to have 6 jumps
01:21:453 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - messy jumble of mess pls remap this entire section, it also changes flow very abruptly I'm sorry if you can't do back-and-forth jumps

Also i think this BG would be a better choice: http://i.imgur.com/wjEevOq.jpg nah I'm fine with this one tbh

It's fun but looking at a modding perspective it does have a few problems. Just fix those up and we'll see how this map goes!
no offense dude, but it might be worth learning how to play before modding hard maps!
thanks!

so all your opinions are based off the skill of the player? OK. I guess i'll shoot kudosu at this, cause' it may actually go somewhere..

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-07-29T09:43:05+00:00

Atomosphere wrote:
so all your opinions are based off the skill of the player? OK. I guess i'll shoot kudosu at this, cause' it may actually go somewhere..

not really, but you're the first person to have problems with the flow there, since all the jumps are arranged in a pretty much simple way and even more low-ranked players were fine with those jumps. no offense, yet again, and thanks for the star!

Atomosphere

176 posts

Joined November 2014

Atomosphere 2017-07-29T11:17:25+00:00

Jabba wrote:
Atomosphere wrote:
so all your opinions are based off the skill of the player? OK. I guess i'll shoot kudosu at this, cause' it may actually go somewhere..
not really, but you're the first person to have problems with the flow there, since all the jumps are arranged in a pretty much simple way and even more low-ranked players were fine with those jumps. no offense, yet again, and thanks for the star!

well people have opinions

Jabba

813 posts

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Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-07-29T13:23:54+00:00

Atomosphere wrote:
well people have opinions

true, but sometimes one's opinion is quite unpopular (considering I got a ton of testplays already), thus I don't really want to change this

pavpab

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pavpab 2018-02-03T22:36:45+00:00

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Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Asuka_- 2018-02-13T13:36:19+00:00

Noffy wrote:
[Asuka_-'s Insane]
00:05:881 (5) - Ehh... there isn't really a sound here to click to. Stacking it on top of the really strong 00:06:024 (1) - weaken's (1)'s impact in the map as well. I'd suggest figuring out a pattern where you can extend 00:05:595 (4) - to be 1/1 instead.
okay made (4) to 1/2 reverse >w<
00:33:310 (5) - Again, there isn't really a sound here for clicking to. All of the higher difficulties even have it mapped as a sliderend!
yea good point, but i want to keep because 00:32:881 (4,5,1) - is following vocal, 00:33:310 (5) - emphasize naxt slidervocal. i added hitsound to (5) instead.!
00:45:024 (2) - Not that it makes a difference but why the random white node in the middle? haha
fixed~
00:56:024 (4,1) - The angle here, in my opinion, is faar smaller than it should be, and as a result makes the entirety of 00:56:310 (1,2,3,4) - more difficult to play than it would have been on its own.
neafed them~
01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - Consider setting the combo color for these to be something else, the light blue blends in with the default spinner.
nice

thanks!!

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Jabba

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Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2018-02-13T17:09:39+00:00

did some changes to zel's and eze's diffs bcs they seem to be a lil bit dead now

Wishkey

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Joined September 2011

Wishkey 2018-03-04T20:57:09+00:00

Heyo! srry for the delay :/

General
Tuning down the volume of the clap.wav file or picking a bit softer clap would be nice, current one overtakes the music way too much instead of supporting it, the snares in the song aren't really that strong either

Chaos

00:14:595 (5,6) - pretty insane jump compared to the rest in this section, would reduce this a bit
00:26:310 (4,1) - bit awkward flow and trasition here, could maybe try something like this so you have the flow break and more impact on (1) instead of breaking earlier
00:28:595 (5) - extending like something you did here 00:10:310 (5) - would give a lot more impact for the change on the next combo then just 1/2 slider spam here
00:57:310 (6) - would really like this see this clickable at the end for that strong vocal and snare and constrast with 00:57:738 (7) - with how differernt these musically are, extended slider+circle could work here
01:17:738 (4) - 2 circles for those drums would be nice for contrast in this combo and it goes well with 01:20:024 (4,5) -
Main gripe with this diff compared to the other extra's is that this really feels like a stretched out insane diff. Except for the huge jumps, the rest feels really easy to play and just a bit too simple for an extra diff with like the long and easy ccw or cw flow even on some parts like 00:17:595 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - where the music is so powerful you can go really all out in terms of emhasizing/patterning/rhythm choiche felt a bit underwhelming for a 7 star diff. This makes the jumps feel really overdone too bc of the constrast unfortunatly. This kinda boils down to mapping styles tho, in terms of rankability there isn't really anyhing major wrong with it but thats mainly due to how 'safe" the mapping style is for lack of a better word and for a 7 star diff I personally felt it could've had a lot more impact/expression at some parts but other bn's might think otherwise so I'd try your luck with others first before making any major changes since its more mapping style related than it being a bad diff

Light Insane

00:09:453 (1) - 1/2 slider + circle would fit a lot better for diff for having all those major vocals clickable and the drum intensity
01:07:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - would change to clockwise flow here since you're coming from a really ccw heavy combo's and to avoid mouse drift, control G 01:07:881 (2,4) - these indiually and place 01:08:595 (5) - on the head of (2) for example
01:16:881 (1,2) - similar to ^ changing movement direction would really benefit playability here, until 01:12:595 (2) - its full ccw until the end atm

Advanced

00:17:453 (1) - would just delete this note for this diff, feels really overmapped with what you're following after. Or you could make 00:16:881 (4,1) - into 2 1/2 sliders like 00:14:595 (4,5) - or return+circle bc 00:17:310 - is a clear finisher of this section
00:31:167 (1,2,3) - would just follow the vocals or drum here and not mix it since its rather odd to follow, mapping the vocals on red seems best compared to the rest of the map imo by moving (2) to 1/2 beat to the left
00:33:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:36:595 (3,1,2) - move all a bit down left with ds on to avoid the overlap at 00:37:453 (2,2) -
00:42:595 (1,1) - would change the first one into a return and next one into 1/2 slider, 00:42:595 (1) - has a lot more audible trip sound with the added bg instrument and stronger snare and 00:42:167 (4,1) - slider into slider is a bit underwhelming where a major shift/speed up is
01:03:167 (1) - Circle would be nice here for a bit of differentiation and to represent the vocal break, kinda like you did at 00:28:881 (1,2) -
01:12:310 (1) - ^
01:19:167 (3,4) - making 3 a return and adding a cirlce + NC at the current end of 4 would better resprent the vocals here, since you got the start of the new vocal stanza at tail atm

Normal

00:17:453 (1,2) - kinda missing the start off the 3/2 section here with the skipped red, I'd to for 2 3/2 sliders instead starting on 00:17:595 - 00:17:595 (5) - so you catch all the most important notes here

Overall a good set! Unfortunatly I'm personally not really a fan of how the top diff is mapped (explainaned in the mod), good luck!

Jabba

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Jabba 2018-03-04T23:44:10+00:00

Wishkey wrote:
Heyo! srry for the delay :/

General
Tuning down the volume of the clap.wav file or picking a bit softer clap would be nice, current one overtakes the music way too much instead of supporting it, the snares in the song aren't really that strong either ya made it a bit quieter

Chaos
00:14:595 (5,6) - pretty insane jump compared to the rest in this section, would reduce this a bit actually stacking (7) with (5) works even better
00:26:310 (4,1) - bit awkward flow and trasition here, could maybe try something like this so you have the flow break and more impact on (1) instead of breaking earlier
intended to be a bit harder in terms of flow, just like 00:35:167 (4,5,1,2) - you can say that's how I emphasize the end of this section. (2)-(3)-(4) is still kind of an up-and-down movement so it shouldn't be that hard imo
00:28:595 (5) - extending like something you did here 00:10:310 (5) - would give a lot more impact for the change on the next combo then just 1/2 slider spam here yea sounds cool. I also fixed some spacing errors right after (e.g. 00:29:167 (2) - was spaced a bit too less)
00:57:310 (6) - would really like this see this clickable at the end for that strong vocal and snare and constrast with 00:57:738 (7) - with how differernt these musically are, extended slider+circle could work here yea idk even why are they the same, did smth
01:17:738 (4) - 2 circles for those drums would be nice for contrast in this combo and it goes well with 01:20:024 (4,5) - yes
Main gripe with this diff compared to the other extra's is that this really feels like a stretched out insane diff. Except for the huge jumps, the rest feels really easy to play and just a bit too simple for an extra diff with like the long and easy ccw or cw flow even on some parts like 00:17:595 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - where the music is so powerful you can go really all out in terms of emhasizing/patterning/rhythm choiche felt a bit underwhelming for a 7 star diff. This makes the jumps feel really overdone too bc of the constrast unfortunatly. This kinda boils down to mapping styles tho, in terms of rankability there isn't really anyhing major wrong with it but thats mainly due to how 'safe" the mapping style is and for a 7 star diff I felt it could've had a lot more impact/expression at some parts personally but other bn's might think otherwise so I'd try your luck with others first before making any major changes if it boils down to mappying styles yea indeed I chose quite a safe style for that diff that mainly expresses the song through spacing and not flow bcs it's almost the same all through the diff. so are the patterns, I just went with a solid structure. though it still represents the song well imo, e.g. the section before kiai is quite intense and so are the jumps, so this is just your ordinary pp map xd
pls give me other bns who would check this ;_;
Light Insane
00:09:453 (1) - 1/2 slider + circle would fit a lot better for diff for having all those major vocals clickable and the drum intensity yes
01:07:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - would change to clockwise flow here since you're coming from a really ccw heavy combo's and to avoid mouse drift, control G 01:07:881 (2,4) - these indiually and place 01:08:595 (5) - on the head of (2) for example did smth
01:16:881 (1,2) - similar to ^ changing movement direction would really benefit playability here, until 01:12:595 (2) - its full ccw until the end atm doesn't really change much imo since there's a calm part, but ctrl-h'd the end anyway
Advanced
00:17:453 (1) - would just delete this note for this diff, feels really overmapped with what you're following after. Or you could make 00:16:881 (4,1) - into 2 1/2 sliders like 00:14:595 (4,5) - or return+circle bc 00:17:310 - is a clear finisher of this section nah this one should be fine, deleting the note won't work imo bcs of 3/2 gap between objects, and given the density of other sections this is not even a diffspike
00:31:167 (1,2,3) - would just follow the vocals or drum here and not mix it since its rather odd to follow, mapping the vocals on red seems best compared to the rest of the map imo by moving (2) to 1/2 beat to the left yea I had too much fun mapping that part xd I guess I could allow myself to make the rhythm a bit more complex here by adding a note at 00:32:024 - as well
00:33:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ same
00:36:595 (3,1,2) - move all a bit down left with ds on to avoid the overlap at 00:37:453 (2,2) - guess it's impossible to fully avoid that overlap without having 00:36:167 (2) - and 00:37:453 (2) - overlapped, but I tried lo
00:42:595 (1,1) - would change the first one into a return and next one into 1/2 slider, 00:42:595 (1) - has a lot more audible trip sound with the added bg instrument and stronger snare and 00:42:167 (4,1) - slider into slider is a bit underwhelming where a major shift/speed up is made the first one into a repeat and second into 1/2 + circle
01:03:167 (1) - Circle would be nice here for a bit of differentiation and to represent the vocal break, kinda like you did at 00:28:881 (1,2) - yea why not
01:12:310 (1) - ^ ^
01:19:167 (3,4) - making 3 a return and adding a cirlce + NC at the current end of 4 would better resprent the vocals here, since you got the start of the new vocal stanza at tail atm did two circles instead

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00:17:453 (1,2) - kinda missing the start off the 3/2 section here with the skipped red, I'd to for 2 3/2 sliders instead starting on 00:17:595 - 00:17:595 (5) - so you catch all the most important notes here that'd be the only 3/2 gap in the map and I don't want that tbh

Overall a good set! Unfortunatly I'm personally not really a fan of how the top diff is mapped (explainaned in the mod), good luck!

top diff went from 7.43 to 7.47 smh
thanks!

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