ey im here now yeh
General
- Pay attention to your Kiais, some are really short and we tend to want to avoid that when possible. Try to put it on the long highlights, if it's just a short burst you may want to remove those
- Timing seems fine
- You sure you don't want an Oni for this thing? I know you removed it, but the song really does have potential for an Oni. Overmapping will be required for an Oni to work, but if you're good/experienced enough it should be fine.
Kantan
00:12:772 (4,5) - these are alright, but do be aware that this could throw beginners off. In Kantan we usually place quite little 1/1 notes. We usually go for 2/1 and 4/1.
]01:12:045 (57,58,59,60) - these are also quite the challenge for beginners. Alternatively, you can move 58 to one beat later so that it lines up perfectly on the downbeats.
01:31:681 (74,75,76) - from here, there are lots of kats, you might want to change some to dons
Really good so far, although, I will not point out the same things in other places. If there are other places with the same issues I mentioned, you will have to find them yourself (or this will be a really long mod post).
Futsuu
Not really anything need fixing, it's fine where it is. Although, this isn't quite the map style I like. Still, I won't destroy your map style because of just personal preferences. Just keep it, see what the QA says.
Muzukashii
00:16:954 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42) - The whole thing doesn't fit very well. 00:17:681 (39) in particular, really should not be a kat.
00:19:317 (46,47,48) - be careful with going multicolor triplets in Muzukashii. Unless you're working with slower bpms, I would advise you don't.
00:20:408 (51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - this part could be denser. Don't be afraid of using 1/2s in Muzu, just put it down wherever. (other similar parts too)
00:29:863 (88) - finish? (also applies to others like this)
00:36:590 (113,114,115) - multicolor
00:48:226 (164,165,166) - ^ (find the rest yourself, I won't do it for you)
again, not a fan of this map style but I won't stop you.
In overall, you seem be doing well with no critical errors. The rest are just how the notes sound, which can be subjective depending on who you talk to. I do recommend going back and play them yourself a few times until you're satisfied with the outcome.