General:Regarding your metadata:
- Put this as title "ナノサイズミール" (NanosizeMir's name in japanese) it's actually the original name of the artist so it have to be like that
- add "the best" on tags, since it's the name of the album
- Put "/ゲーム ~TV animation ver.~" as name of the song
Put "Philosophyz ~TV animation ver.~" as romanised name of the song
Put "リライト" as Source and add "Rewrite" on tags (since its the original name of the anime)
Add "水谷瑠奈" and "塚越雄一朗" on tags, These are the original name of NanosizeMir members (as i can see you did only put their romanised names)
Add "Shinji Orito" and "折戸伸治" (romanised name and name) since he's the composer of the song
SourceSource 2 - 03:34:932 - Seems that you forgot to enable kiai on the bpm line (enable it on all diffs)
Objects:00:18:057 (2,3) - It would be good if you stack this to 00:16:182 (1,2) - sliderends
hmm so it looks off with stacking turned off• 00:21:432 (1) - I'd suggest you to move it a bit to avoid unnecesary weird overlaps, you could just space it more or move it to somewhere like x:287 y:151
sure• 00:22:088 - Hey! Seems like we're missing a loud and notable sound here!! You shouldn't do that in the top diff
I wanted to emphasize the guitar more• 00:24:244 (3,4,5) - Same than before, stacking it with 00:23:307 (4) - wouldn't we a bad idea
right• 00:41:682 (1) - This circle is clearly overmapped, you dont really need it you can just start the spin there
there is a lil bit of sound and I like double clicking• 01:20:494 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - I would move this a bit up so 01:21:057 (2) - is not that close to 01:20:307 (4) -
sure why not• 01:21:432 (5,2) - Fix this stack
k• 01:24:618 (4,5,6) - This pattern is lack of spacing, the current one is just too low so it could be a problem while playing. I recommend you to raise up the spacing of this jumps in order to satisfy player's desire
scaled up the spacing • 01:34:182 (1) - The rhythm here seems that you're undermapping...
It feels more like this way This is on a conceptual level, doesn't mean your suggestion is bad. But this beatmap is designed around 1/1 sliders in these sections• 01:37:182 (1) - Exactly the same thing here, and this is such more noticeable than the one from before, you MUST change this one
^• 01:42:057 (2,3) - As i said when i started, stacking this would look better
done• 01:43:182 (1) - Same rhythm thing
same• 01:44:494 (5) - I'd suggest you to move this a bit to the left to avoid the overlap with 01:43:182 (1) -
done• 01:55:932 (2,1) - This pattern would look better if it was stacked
kk• 01:57:432 (3) - NC for emphasis?
that will be inconsistent• 01:58:182 (1,2) - I'd rather suggest
this rhythm. It would represent the voice in such a better way
the strong vocal will end on the slider end tho• 02:05:869 (6) - Add NC
nope• 02:31:744 (2,3,1) - I'd move all of this just a bit up in order to make 02:32:119 (1) - stack with 02:30:619 (2) -
I think it's fine as the circle already faded away• 02:36:807 (6) - You should add more spacing to this one since it could be confused with an 1/2 rhythm jump and that wouldn't be good
sure• 03:10:088 (8) - What about adding a kickslider here? (ending it on 03:10:182 - ) so it would fit the fall of volume between these two tics instead of ending the stream in a weird blue tick
sure• 03:19:182 (7) - Add NC
there is no need• 03:39:244 (1) - It feels like the hitsound here is a bit off out context tho
added whistle• 03:48:994 (3) - Shouldn't this be a bit to the left so it fit with 03:48:244 (1,2) - ? It feels off actually,
It should be like this imo Yes it is off because if I did that the sliderend would be out of the playfield• 03:58:932 (1) - Same rhythm thing from before, the long slider just doesn't fit
same• 04:00:244 (1,2,3,4,5) - The stack fucked up here
thanks• 04:01:932 (1) - Same rhythm thing
ye• 04:03:244 (5,6) - As i said before, i'd suggest you to move this a bit to the left to avoid overlap with 04:01:932 (1) - since it feels kinda weird right now
k• 04:03:619 (6,1) - It feels like it would fit better if the circle 1 starts in the same position than circle 6
• 04:04:838 - Missing a sound again huh?
ye• 04:12:244 (3) - I recommend you to move this to x:167 x:86 so it would be exactly between 04:10:932 (1,2) - this two avoiding a weird overlap
sure