Hello, M4M from Queue
Per your request, the map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/541555
Nice set, good luck to you (and good to see you again).
Per your request, the map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/541555
Reunion of Goodbye
Just a general thing, but did the top left corner offend you? (Ctrl+A your map to see what i'm talking about)
00:10:849 (3,4) - I don't feel that 00:10:849 (3,5) get enough emphasis the way you have it, so I would recommend reworking spacing here. Ctrl+G would give an idea of what I think needs emphasis, but that would be too much spacing IMO.
00:18:175 (3,4) - I get that you're following the drums here, but I think switching to vocals would work better here: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/jA8BrVt.png
00:25:849 (1,3) - Could you make this overlap similar to the ones you used before? Like the one at 00:25:326 (5,1).
00:26:896 (5,2,7) - Same as above. It's clearly intentional, but using too many different forms of overlaps for the same section of the music doesn't make too much sense to me.
01:25:326 (4,2) - Visual distance is a bit more cramped than it should be IMO.
02:12:593 (3) - It might be an issue with most your wave sliders, but this slider looks pointer than I think it should be. It's noticeable here because of the blanket.
02:53:756 (1) - A 1/2 repeat would probably function better to reflect the vocal here.
Sorry that I couldn't find much, but it's a pretty solid map.
00:10:849 (3,4) - I don't feel that 00:10:849 (3,5) get enough emphasis the way you have it, so I would recommend reworking spacing here. Ctrl+G would give an idea of what I think needs emphasis, but that would be too much spacing IMO.
00:18:175 (3,4) - I get that you're following the drums here, but I think switching to vocals would work better here: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/jA8BrVt.png
00:25:849 (1,3) - Could you make this overlap similar to the ones you used before? Like the one at 00:25:326 (5,1).
00:26:896 (5,2,7) - Same as above. It's clearly intentional, but using too many different forms of overlaps for the same section of the music doesn't make too much sense to me.
01:25:326 (4,2) - Visual distance is a bit more cramped than it should be IMO.
02:12:593 (3) - It might be an issue with most your wave sliders, but this slider looks pointer than I think it should be. It's noticeable here because of the blanket.
02:53:756 (1) - A 1/2 repeat would probably function better to reflect the vocal here.
Sorry that I couldn't find much, but it's a pretty solid map.
Hard
00:01:431 (3) - Not a big fan of the rhythm here because you're trying to follow guitar, but a prominent guitar note ends up on a reverse. Try this rhythm, since you can then follow vocals and guitar better: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/2htgo5D.png
00:05:965 (6) - Why not a 1/2 slider to map the guitar note on 00:06:140?
01:37:012 (4,6) - Could be a blanket.
01:41:896 (2,3,4,5) - Not a fan of the visual distance between 2 and 5, seems a bit cramped.
02:05:268 (7) - You should really map more of the guitar sounds here. Intensity picked up but rhythm calmed down, which isn't good.
02:07:535 - Any reason why this isn't mapped? Similar to the point above this, and it honestly looks like you could stack/overlap a circle here with 02:06:838 (2).
02:41:896 (6,7,1) - This is awesome!
02:56:198 (8,4) - Why not incorporate the partial overlaps you like to use here instead of the stack?
03:34:221 (4,5) - Not a fan of this angle, try rotating this 10 degrees clockwise?
03:44:076 (1) - I think some long sliders would fit this better than a spinner.
00:05:965 (6) - Why not a 1/2 slider to map the guitar note on 00:06:140?
01:37:012 (4,6) - Could be a blanket.
01:41:896 (2,3,4,5) - Not a fan of the visual distance between 2 and 5, seems a bit cramped.
02:05:268 (7) - You should really map more of the guitar sounds here. Intensity picked up but rhythm calmed down, which isn't good.
02:07:535 - Any reason why this isn't mapped? Similar to the point above this, and it honestly looks like you could stack/overlap a circle here with 02:06:838 (2).
02:41:896 (6,7,1) - This is awesome!
02:56:198 (8,4) - Why not incorporate the partial overlaps you like to use here instead of the stack?
03:34:221 (4,5) - Not a fan of this angle, try rotating this 10 degrees clockwise?
03:44:076 (1) - I think some long sliders would fit this better than a spinner.
Nice set, good luck to you (and good to see you again).