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Omoi - Snow Drive(01.23) [Taiko]

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Raichu69
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, December 25, 2023 at 12:23:02 PM

Artist: Omoi
Title: Snow Drive(01.23)
BPM: 224
Filesize: 8829kb
Play Time: 04:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Consified's Bye Oni (6.68 stars, 2098 notes)
  2. Futsuu (2.14 stars, 576 notes)
  3. Inner Oni (5.16 stars, 1533 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (4.41 stars, 1086 notes)
  5. Sayonara Bye Oni (5.96 stars, 1824 notes)
  6. Taikocracy's Oni (4.51 stars, 1393 notes)
Download: Omoi - Snow Drive(01.23)
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Lumenite-
IRC Mod with Raichu, 6/20/17
09:59 Raichu69: Haaaaai owo
09:59 Raichu69: are you busy? :3
10:00 Taikocracy: who
10:00 Raichu69: you? :o
10:00 Taikocracy: i'm doing an irc mod but what's up
10:01 Raichu69: well ... I was wondering if you could test my map really quick :O
10:01 Raichu69: I only mapped 1 min of it so far... but I need to see if I'm doing it right
10:01 Taikocracy: send
10:01 Raichu69: :D
10:01 *Raichu69 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1319512 Omoi - Snow Drive [Sayonara Bye Oni]]
10:01 Raichu69: thank you so much
10:02 *Taikocracy is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1319512 Omoi - Snow Drive [Sayonara Bye Oni]] <Taiko>
10:02 Taikocracy: zzz
10:02 Raichu69: :o
10:04 Taikocracy: Well first off you need a better mp3
10:04 Raichu69: alright
10:04 Raichu69: on the search now :o
10:05 Taikocracy: 00:10:586 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - this is out of place for an introduction of a long song, it still needs to be simple, especially when the bpm is as high as 224
10:05 Taikocracy: This goes for every similar pattern
10:06 Taikocracy: 00:18:086 (64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - This can be simpified to something more appropriate for the music
10:07 Raichu69: so don't map intro to the vocals
10:07 Taikocracy: In taiko you're not supposed to map vocals most of the time
10:07 Raichu69: got it
10:07 Raichu69: I think I fixed the intro
10:08 Taikocracy: The only exceptions are when either A) the song is completely silent except for vocals or B) the background noise is so quiet that the vocals are the most prominent feature
10:08 Raichu69: and for the 00:18:086 what can I do
10:08 Raichu69: I see
10:09 Taikocracy: https://puu.sh/wppQQ/22d9c30f3c.png
10:10 Taikocracy: 00:19:358 (73) - This can be removed lol
10:10 Taikocracy: Sounds kinda weird when both playing and listening in the editor
10:12 Raichu69: oh :o
10:13 Taikocracy: 00:21:300 (92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133) - I know this is a lot of notes but like
10:13 Taikocracy: I know what sound you're trying to map but it get's really boring when you map it as a triplet each time
10:15 Raichu69: yeah
10:15 Raichu69: how do I make it less boring LI
10:15 Raichu69: :O
10:16 Taikocracy: Variation
10:16 Taikocracy: Who
10:17 Taikocracy: Yo
10:17 Taikocracy: Are you getting these messages XD
10:17 Raichu69: yes
10:17 Taikocracy: Okay sorry
10:17 Raichu69: I logged out of osu and back in
10:17 Taikocracy: It said you were offline
10:17 Taikocracy: Ye
10:17 Raichu69: trying to fix the mp3
10:18 Raichu69: so how do I fix the triples?
10:18 Taikocracy: It's gonna be hard to read
10:19 Taikocracy: But you can do something like this
10:19 Taikocracy: https://puu.sh/wpqtq/9e9d8dfb67.png
10:19 Raichu69: where would this start?
10:19 Taikocracy: 00:19:425
10:19 Raichu69: thanks
10:20 Raichu69: also did I fix the intro?
10:20 Taikocracy: It's definitely better, yes
10:21 Raichu69: not going to lie ... looking at that pic is hard to follow
10:21 Raichu69: you map so tight xD
10:21 Raichu69: thank you
10:21 Taikocracy: Nah, it's just I needed to get all of it in one pic
10:21 Taikocracy: I didn't feel like separating it
10:21 Raichu69: oh :o
10:21 Taikocracy: You can use similar structure throughout the song
10:21 Taikocracy: If you like it
10:21 Raichu69: yeah x3
10:22 Raichu69: that's the plan
10:22 Taikocracy: 00:28:800 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181) -
10:22 Taikocracy: This is actually dkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkd over and over again :^)
10:22 Taikocracy: 00:30:943 (183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - same
10:23 Raichu69: yeah
10:24 Taikocracy: It needs to have more structure than switching between don and kat
10:24 Raichu69: that part is repetitive to begin with? but I understand what you mean
10:25 Raichu69: I'll try to fix
10:26 Taikocracy: https://puu.sh/wpqO6/147b9cf98f.png
10:26 Taikocracy: you could use this
10:31 Taikocracy: 00:40:184 (297,298,299,300,301,302,303) - can be changed to 1/5
10:31 Taikocracy: 1/4*
10:32 Taikocracy: That's really about it
10:32 Taikocracy: You can call me back to check it after you finish more than one difficulty if you want
goheegy
yo
17:51 Raichu69: hey are you busy?
17:51 Raichu69: :o
17:51 goheegy: no
17:51 Raichu69: can you test my map? :o
17:51 goheegy: ok
17:51 Raichu69: :D
17:51 *Raichu69 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1319512 Omoi - Snow Drive]
17:56 goheegy: that hp drain is brutal
17:56 goheegy: usually for maps like that it's 4-5
17:56 Raichu69: sorry ;w;
17:57 Raichu69: got it
17:57 goheegy: a couple things were weird, like the density suddenly drops despite the song not really being less intense
17:57 goheegy: I'd recommend putting the od up a bit
17:57 goheegy: around 6 or 7ish idk
17:57 Raichu69: I need to figure out what to do there
17:58 Raichu69: got it
17:58 goheegy: 02:18:622 (373) - stuff like this seems pretty out of place too
17:59 goheegy: https://puu.sh/wpycH.png maybe change to something like this?
18:01 goheegy: 02:06:032 (276) - also I think this bit should be snapped to 1/3 rather than 1/4
18:01 Raichu69: got it
18:02 Raichu69: sounds way better
18:02 Raichu69: thank you so much
18:02 goheegy: https://puu.sh/wpymZ.png like that pretty much
18:02 goheegy: oh you've already got it nice
18:03 goheegy: in general I'd just say add more notes to some of the less dense areas
18:03 goheegy: because a lot of it seems out of place
18:04 goheegy: 02:51:032 (243) - doesn't sound like that should be a 1/6 either
18:04 Raichu69: yeah
18:07 goheegy: https://puu.sh/wpyAV.png you could make it something like this?
18:07 goheegy: if you really wanted to keep the 1/6
18:08 goheegy: aside from that I'd just say try to polish up the streams
18:08 Raichu69: yeah
18:08 goheegy: they don't play particularly well and some of it just seems a bit random
18:09 Raichu69: I'll try to make them better
18:09 goheegy: maybe try listening to them at 50% playback or 75%
18:09 goheegy: and place kats to the vocals/snares
18:10 Raichu69: that helps :o
18:10 goheegy: the rest of the map plays fairly well though, maybe once your done just try to polish up some of the patterns a bit
18:10 goheegy: you're*
18:11 Raichu69: yes :D
18:11 Raichu69: thank you for the help
18:11 Raichu69: it means a lot
18:11 goheegy: but yeah, definitely change the hp and od, I'd say around 4.5 hp, 6.5 od
18:11 goheegy: np
18:12 goheegy: I have nothing else to do :v)
18:12 goheegy: are you making a full set?
18:12 goheegy: or just this diff
18:26 Raichu69: full set
18:26 Raichu69: going to try to get this ranked
18:26 goheegy: oo, good luck
18:26 Raichu69: I think I made it better :3
18:26 Raichu69: thank you
18:26 Raichu69: :o
18:37 goheegy: 01:31:747 (3) - the only stream that isn't too great now is this, I'd probably change it to something like https://puu.sh/wpAeD.png https://puu.sh/wpAeR.png
18:39 goheegy: 02:51:032 (162) - you could probably add 1/6s here again but just something like this https://puu.sh/wpAqS.png
18:40 goheegy: that's all
18:40 goheegy: gl with ranking

18:47 goheegy: oh, another thing LOL, set a preview point and kiai time
18:48 goheegy: 01:35:764 (54) - maybe set preview point here?
18:48 goheegy: as for kiai, you can probably just put it during chorus
18:48 Raichu69: yeah :D
18:48 goheegy: well
18:48 goheegy: both of the choruses
18:49 Raichu69: all 3 of them
18:49 goheegy: oh are there 3
18:49 goheegy: all 3 of them then
18:49 goheegy: :v)
18:49 Raichu69: xD
snowball112
Did some modding in irc.

IRC Log
17:19 Raichu69: I saw you looking at my map ;3 lol
17:19 Raichu69: xD hello
17:19 snowball112: yes
17:19 snowball112: heya
17:19 Raichu69: x3 how are you <3
17:20 snowball112: fine, thank you
17:20 snowball112: yourself?
17:20 Raichu69: great ;3
17:20 Raichu69: trying my hardest to get my map ranked
17:21 snowball112: i'd advise you complete a full spread first
17:21 snowball112: instead of having 3 extra diffs
17:22 Raichu69: yeah lol x3
17:23 snowball112: alright, you have 5-10 minutes?
17:23 Raichu69: yes
17:23 snowball112: ok
17:23 snowball112: kantan
17:23 Raichu69: I have hours x3
17:23 snowball112: 01:36:032 - this chain is way too long
17:23 Raichu69: oh :o
17:23 Raichu69: one sec
17:23 Raichu69: _Rise is testing my map :o
17:29 Raichu69: fixed it
17:29 snowball112: there are some general things that need fixing
17:29 snowball112: otherwise you're just scraping at the peripherals without ever getting to the major issues
17:30 snowball112: 01:39:247 - cursor, try [https://puu.sh/wsliR/4e43a542aa.jpg this], in kantan
17:30 Raichu69: :o
17:30 snowball112: this diff has too long note chains
17:30 snowball112: with too few breaks
17:30 Raichu69: I never played kantan diffs ... ever ... so I just tried my best ;w;
17:31 snowball112: 01:44:604 - this is too difficult spacing-wise too
17:32 snowball112: and 01:36:032 - should definitely have a finish
17:32 snowball112: and 01:10:318 - is basically a 2/1 chain, you can have some rest moments in there too
17:33 snowball112: if you look at other kantan diffs
17:34 snowball112: also, i'd advise you don't use sliders for this song like 01:31:747 -
17:34 snowball112: because you're asking of the player to hit 1/4 at pretty high speed if they want all the points
17:36 snowball112: 01:33:354 - cursor, you could do something like [https://puu.sh/wslwQ/cf4f0d04e3.jpg this] instead, you have some strong beats in the music
17:36 Raichu69: so make it harder :o
17:36 Raichu69: make the whole song harder but don't add streams?
17:37 snowball112: ?
17:37 Raichu69: you keep saying add notes
17:37 snowball112: if you space things out well enough it will be acceptable, that just now was monotonous 1/1 patterns
17:37 Raichu69: ;w;
17:38 snowball112: you'd remove stuff in other places
17:38 Raichu69: yeah xD
17:38 snowball112: as intensity goes up here, you can represent that
17:39 snowball112: or remove notes like 01:26:925 - and 01:30:139 -
17:40 Raichu69: got it
17:40 Raichu69: let me remake this diff
17:40 Raichu69: and then you can mod :3
17:41 Raichu69: thank you so much snow
17:41 Raichu69: I love you ;w;
17:41 snowball112: or have 4/1 break between 01:32:818 - and 01:33:889 -
17:41 snowball112: as an easier version of the earlier suggested pattern
17:42 Raichu69: omg
17:42 Raichu69: it's a futsuu now
17:42 Raichu69: ;w;
17:42 snowball112: wait what
17:42 Raichu69: can you make a kantan diff for me xD
17:42 snowball112: it's not?
17:42 Raichu69: I'm just mapping a futsuu now lol xD
17:42 snowball112: uhh
17:43 Raichu69: well ... I edited the map and now it's 2.75
17:43 snowball112: how? suggestions just now were for kantan lol
17:43 snowball112: uhm
17:43 snowball112: idk what you did
17:43 Raichu69: darn xD
17:43 snowball112: did you map that stuff in 1/2 instead of 1/1?
17:43 Raichu69: maybe ;3;
17:44 snowball112: send me a screen pls
17:45 Raichu69: ummm
17:45 Raichu69: fixed it
17:45 Raichu69: going to map more simple xD
17:45 Raichu69: I was doing 1/2 xD
17:45 snowball112: alright, now that it's 1/1 as intended
17:45 snowball112: these would be the most intense part of your map
17:46 snowball112: hence the rest has to be toned down
17:46 snowball112: or at least other kiai times adjusted to match
17:46 Raichu69: yeah
17:46 snowball112: eg. 02:33:890 - finish, 02:34:425 (2,1) -
17:46 snowball112: remove
17:47 Raichu69: ;w;
17:47 Raichu69: got it
17:47 snowball112: try to include a few more breaks, i'll give some more examples outside of kiai and then move to the inner
17:47 Raichu69: yeah x3
17:48 Raichu69: You're going to help me mod all diffs? :o
17:48 snowball112: how about you add a note on 01:05:497 - ?
17:49 snowball112: same with 01:09:782 -
17:49 snowball112: as there is more going on with the instruments
17:49 Raichu69: yes
17:50 snowball112: 01:11:926 - remove?
17:50 snowball112: and maybe 01:13:533 - k for the higher pitch
17:52 Raichu69: got them
17:54 Raichu69: 2.74
17:54 Raichu69: is that ok? :o
17:54 snowball112: not for kantan
17:54 Raichu69: omg
17:54 Raichu69: what did I do ;w;
17:55 snowball112: 01:20:497 - cursor, try something like [https://puu.sh/wsmbs/16b9c0edfa.jpg this] maybe?
17:55 snowball112: check that all the stuff lands on white ticks
17:55 snowball112: or set snap to 1/1 for applying stuff right now
17:55 Raichu69: can I use red ticks?
17:55 Raichu69: oh shit :o
17:56 snowball112: if it's 224 bpm you shouln't be using many notes on 1/2 if at all
17:56 Raichu69: fixed it
17:56 Raichu69: still 1.74 :o
17:56 Raichu69: oh man
17:56 Raichu69: but ;w;
17:56 snowball112: but?
17:56 Raichu69: this is so hard
17:57 snowball112: yes, but it's also rewarding
17:57 snowball112: if you havn't seen them, i'd suggest you check out [https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appropriate_gameplay_elements#Example_Taiko_Spreads this] and [https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/152263 this] for further guidance
17:58 Raichu69: not using red ticks is so hard
17:58 snowball112: basically, if you use a majority of 2/1 and few simple 1/1 in kiai you should be able to stay under 2* and make an appropriate diff for beginners
17:58 snowball112: moving on
17:59 snowball112: the big issue with inner
17:59 snowball112: is that you basically have no transition between your patterns
17:59 Raichu69: can I use red ticks if it's well spaced?
17:59 Raichu69: :o
18:00 snowball112: in kantan? i'd suggest you don't
18:00 snowball112: basically, for inner oni
18:00 snowball112: if you look at stuff like 00:17:818 -
18:00 snowball112: it's 1/4 patterns with 1/1 gaps
18:01 snowball112: and imo that plays pretty awkward, because you're continuously making this start-stop mechanic with your fingers
18:02 Raichu69: yeah x3
18:06 snowball112: alright, first i'd suggest you use 1/2 or mainly 1/1 instead of 1/4 for vocal for stuff like 00:10:586 -
18:07 snowball112: as this part is rather calm
18:08 Raichu69: got it :o
18:12 snowball112: i'm just trying around some stuff, sec
18:14 snowball112: 00:20:229 - cursor, try [https://puu.sh/wsmSM/ba36c01db4.jpg this]
18:14 Raichu69: take your time ;3
18:14 Raichu69: I'm glad you're helping me
18:17 snowball112: and use that kind of structure until 00:27:461 - , at this point the pace of the drum changes, so you can reduce density from that point
18:17 snowball112: like you did, but you should increase around 00:30:943 - when the drum picks up again
18:18 Raichu69: got it ;3
18:19 snowball112: after 00:30:943 - you can fill out with drum beats
18:20 Raichu69: updated my maps
18:20 Raichu69: how's this?
18:24 Raichu69: updated a part for kantan
18:25 Raichu69: going to make the intense parts more intense in the kantan one sec
18:26 snowball112: sec
18:27 Raichu69: there
18:27 snowball112: 00:41:122 - maybe something like [https://puu.sh/wsnqK/26db610918.jpg this]? the three notes being k DD
18:28 Raichu69: I like it OwO
18:28 snowball112: or something like [https://puu.sh/wsnvR/686ebc157e.jpg this]
18:28 snowball112: if you want more notes
18:29 snowball112: because that would match better if you want to use notes on 00:43:934 (11,12) - as well
18:29 Raichu69: nah ;3
18:29 Raichu69: oh :o
18:29 snowball112: you have someting similar later
18:30 snowball112: it would just shift focus to the instrument more
18:30 Raichu69: yeah :3
18:30 snowball112: which would be fine if you fill out 00:48:354 - as well to transition better
18:32 Raichu69: this is so much better
18:34 snowball112: 01:03:890 - cursor, how about structure like [https://puu.sh/wsnJr/7aacf02be3.jpg this]?
18:34 snowball112: it's just a slightly more intense repeat of the last section
18:35 snowball112: just for spacing suggestion, disregard the colours
18:36 Raichu69: oh :o
18:36 snowball112: you'd just be adding some more 1/2
18:40 Raichu69: is the section better now?
18:41 snowball112: yes
18:41 Raichu69: thanks :D
18:43 snowball112: sec, phone
18:43 Raichu69: kk
18:48 snowball112: alright, back
18:49 snowball112: kiai has basically similar issues to the beginning, it feels a bit choppy to play
18:49 Raichu69: oh ;w;
18:49 snowball112: how about 01:36:836 - cursor, [https://puu.sh/wsnJr/7aacf02be3.jpg this maybe]?
18:49 snowball112: nvm wrong img
18:49 snowball112: https://puu.sh/wsoq2/17dc23176e.jpg
18:49 Raichu69: okie
18:49 snowball112: this is the right one
18:49 snowball112: cursor on 01:36:836 -
18:51 snowball112: followed by [https://puu.sh/wsov6/91cdf1db96.jpg this], cursor on 01:38:979 - so you have a 1/1 break between 01:37:372 - and 01:37:639 -
18:51 Raichu69: improving one sec
18:52 *Raichu69 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1330716 Omoi - Snow Drive [Inner Oni]]
18:52 Raichu69: woops
18:52 Raichu69: 01:44:604
18:52 Raichu69: for this
18:52 Raichu69: what do I do?
18:56 Raichu69: nvm
18:56 Raichu69: did I make it better?
18:56 Raichu69: updated it
18:56 snowball112: fill out with notes? maybe like [https://puu.sh/wsoK2/14b5269cac.jpg this], cursor on 01:45:943 -
18:57 snowball112: your change has so much k imo
18:57 snowball112: if you use k on the high vocal like in the suggestion it would stand out more
18:57 Raichu69: ;w;
18:57 Raichu69: got it
18:58 snowball112: and why did you turn the previous stuff into streams D:
18:58 snowball112: 01:36:032 -
18:58 Raichu69: fixed it
18:59 snowball112: the whole point of the suggestion is to bring the instruments together with the vocal instead of mapping just one and thereby causing some awkward start-stop mechanism when playing
19:00 snowball112: if you look again at https://puu.sh/wsoq2/17dc23176e.jpg
19:00 Raichu69: alright
19:01 snowball112: the second and third triple should be according to the long high sounds at 01:36:568 -
19:01 snowball112: and the first is for guitar
19:05 snowball112: did my last pm come through? my net just crashed
19:06 Raichu69: and the first is guitar
19:06 Raichu69: also is this better?
19:07 snowball112: it's still the same thing imo
19:07 Raichu69: ;w;
19:08 snowball112: i think mapping vocals to 1/4 isn't the best option, because the instruments don't correlate to that
19:08 Raichu69: yeah ;w;
19:08 snowball112: and if you playtest yourself
19:09 Raichu69: let me remap it
19:10 snowball112: 01:36:032 - this should stand as 1/2 from other notes and have a finish for the strong sound
19:11 snowball112: and try to use some more 1/2 instead of only 1/4
19:12 Raichu69: yeah
19:12 snowball112: 01:36:568 - cursor, like [https://puu.sh/wspqV/000ec304d8.jpg this]
19:12 snowball112: idk how to explain this any better
19:14 snowball112: but your current 1/4 just feels abrupt to play if you don't have any transition using 1/2
19:15 Raichu69: waaaiiiit
19:15 Raichu69: remapping ;w;
19:16 Raichu69: how's this?
19:18 snowball112: better
19:18 Raichu69: thanks x3
19:19 Raichu69: I'm actually learning a lot ;3
19:19 snowball112: but now it's probably too easy if you look at the following part of 01:44:604 - with a lot of 1/4
19:20 Raichu69: I can tone it down
19:20 Raichu69: I think making this into an oni is a good idea
19:21 Raichu69: nerp
19:21 Raichu69: found the solution
19:22 Raichu69: take a look ;3
19:22 snowball112: i think i'll let you sort things out from here, you can apply most of the things to the other parts of the map
19:22 Raichu69: got it :3
19:22 snowball112: looking better as well if you're gonna make this a normal oni
19:23 snowball112: i'll go ahead and post a savelog real quick
Cinnamon_54
free mod ~
P.S :you also need to change if the patterns have the same problem
Inner Oni
00:10:318 - add Finisher
00:13:800 - add Finisher
00:14:068 - add Finisher
00:14:336 - add Finisher
00:17:885 - delete ^
00:18:153 - delete ^
00:18:354 ~ 00:18:889 - maybe change to kkddkdkdk,little bit fit the sound effect
00:19:961 ~ 00:20:630 - change it into 1/2
00:22:104 ~ 00:23:041 - same
00:24:247 ~ 00:24:916 - same
00:25:586 ~ 00:27:461 - same..
00:27:461 - change to d and add finisher
00:27:729 - add d
00:27:997 - change to k
00:28:264 - add k
00:28:800 - add k
00:29:068 - change to k
00:29:336 - change it to d if you want
00:29:872 - add d
00:30:407 - add d
00:31:479 ~ 00:31:747 - change to kkkkd
00:32:818 ~ 00:33:488 - change to 1/2
00:34:961 ~ 00:35:898 - change to 1/2
00:36:032 ~ 00:39:782 - i think it is too empty,you should add some notes there
00:57:461 - the spinner is too long! change it instead of notes except spinner
01:04:626 - move to 01:04:693
01:19:693 - delete and add some notes,two continues slider is weird
01:21:836 - delete,same
01:27:059 - delete
01:29:202 - delete
01:36:032 ~ 01:44:470 - since it is climax,add more notes with 1/4 and 1/2
03:07:104 - delete it and add notes
Topic Starter
Raichu69
Thank you <3
Great Legendre
Cool 8-) :)
Topic Starter
Raichu69
Thanks I need more mods lol xD
JarvisGaming
From my M4M queue
Just mod my maps
[Futsuu]
01:52:104 (53) - What's the point of adding green lines here,unless you're going to put dons on white ticks,or else those lines are useless.
01:53:175 (54,55,56,57,58,59,60) - kdkdkdk
01:56:791 (61,62) - dd
02:23:443 (53) - d
02:32:818 (9) - Might wanna add kats on white ticks to build up tension with slightly increasing SV.
02:51:300 - d
02:51:836 - k
02:59:336 (5) - d for contrast
03:04:961 (1) - ddkkkddkk
03:25:586 - k

MOD MY MAPS SENPAI
will mod oni.maybe.dont count on it.
Topic Starter
Raichu69
I get home either Friday or Saturday so count on a mod probably this Monday :)
JarvisGaming
I'd rather make a GD than mod.
Want me to make Muzu?
Topic Starter
Raichu69
Yeah that would be great and I will mod your maps ;3
JarvisGaming

Raichu69 wrote:

Yeah that would be great and I will mod your maps ;3
We have a deal :)
Also I have an urge to make 5* so...
Topic Starter
Raichu69
I mean I already have an inner oni o3o
Firmatorenio
Asked in-chat, to the extent of my ability multipled by laziness.

[General]
Non-GD background looks too realistic for the quality of vocals, pls

[Futsuu]
03:32:550 (22,23,24,25,26) - I don't particularly like this pattern, it inverts the vocals' pitch, but not perfectly. Consider either making the first note a kat, or invert the rest.
03:49:693 (25,26,27,28,29) - ^
There is a distinct lack of finishers in this diff. A fitting place for one would be, for example, 02:06:032 (8) - here. Less fitting, but interesting, are 02:33:890 (1) - 02:52:104 (7) -
00:35:497 (55) - I think this note would fit a don more, the pattern would be more equal and nice for this diff, ddddkkkkddddkkdd.
00:45:675 (6,7) - Could invert these two, hitting 8 4/1s at the same pattern may already be too boring for this diff, especially given it fits the pitch of the music better.
01:58:532 - If you're mapping to the bass hits on the sections like this, I think 2/1s would fit better to this section. But if you don't want that, 02:03:889 (6,7) - you could invert these again >.>
OD is too high. Try 4 or 3.5 even.

[Taikocracy's Oni]
00:40:318 - This section lacks consistency with similar places in the map. I'd suggest either remove the finishers altogether, or add them in the other sections of the map.
>If you don't remove the finishers..
> 00:40:452 - add one extra here, because it feels weird when you start doubling these from the second downbeat.
> 00:45:675 (198,199) - these should be dons by the music's pitch.
00:48:889 - Just like that, this section doesn't have even the double notes that you just accentuated with finishers which are present in the music, making it better to downgrade them to regular notes.
01:01:747 (287) - finisher where
01:34:961 - Imo this beat should be accentuated with an actual note, the shaker would be finished long before it.
01:47:952 - Putting a note here would make a much nicer feeling while playing. It just feels cut off as of now.
02:40:988 (374,375) - Invert this so the pattern is similar to 02:39:782 (365,366,367) - .
02:52:104 (445) - finisher where
03:40:720 (101,102,103,104) - Imo if you invert this it'll be better. I don't know how to explain.
03:38:309 - Again, feels too cut off, a note would be nice.
03:53:577 - 03:55:184 - More notes could be put here, again I don't know how to explain x.x
04:00:675 (55) - Finisher?
04:18:889 - you put this section by intensity on par with 04:16:747 - this one, although the music is clearly much more intense. Imo this one should either be 1/2 spam or finishers.

[Inner Oni]
I'm not quite up to par with diff, but here are some things I can see from where I am.
00:40:452 - Just like in the diff above, a note is missing here to be consistent with the following finisher doubles. It doesn't necessarily need to be a finisher too, but imo it should be present.
00:45:675 (23,24) - 00:46:747 (28,29) - Again, wrong piitch x.x
02:17:818 (5,6) - No finishers?
03:17:751 - I think I hear a note here in the music, if not two. Could either add it or make the following note a finisher.
03:20:764 - I don't know what you're mapping to here, but if it's any relevant to the vocals, there should be a note here.
03:25:586 (12) - An interesting place for a finisher.
04:10:317 (23,29,36,43) - So are these.
Aaand yeah, OD is waay too OP imo.

Other diffs I'm completely not up to par, sorry >.>
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