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Kato Megumi (CV.Yasuno Kiyono) - ETERNAL flat

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 9월 12일 화요일 at 오후 2:37:11

Artist: Kato Megumi (CV.Yasuno Kiyono)
Title: ETERNAL flat
Source: 冴えない彼女の育てかた♭
Tags: Saenai Heroine no Sodatekata Saekano anime
BPM: 70
Filesize: 16796kb
Play Time: 05:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. sharp (3.33 stars, 573 notes)
Download: Kato Megumi (CV.Yasuno Kiyono) - ETERNAL flat
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Banner by Enon
Storyboard by Anonymous and Enon(gfx)
Special Thanks: Dailycare, jieusieu(hitsounding advice), GoldenWolf(timing)

remapping(20201128~)
metameta
official site: https://puu.sh/wGyUg/a2feecc7cc.png

IamKwaN wrote:

okie

Unicode Title: ETERNAL♭
Romanised Title: ETERNAL flat
Unicode Artist: 加藤 恵(CV.安野希世乃)
Romanised Artist: Kato Megumi(CV.Yasuno Kiyono)
Source: 冴えない彼女の育てかた♭

References:
http://www.saenai.tv/bddvd_cd/cd.html
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sUQ9r8WgaeU
http://www.saenai.tv/character/

good luck!
thank you kwan
Enon
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M4M

2

just throw in BPM=70, the difference is barely noticable lol
00:09:316 - you're ignoring a sound here
00:09:530 (2,1) - I know it's only the edges, but they're overlapping, I suggest you just separate them
00:11:245 (1,2) - how about you connect them like a straight line instead?
00:19:386 (2,3,4) - use the same pattern as here: 00:15:957 (2,3,4) - , feels more consistent
00:54:957 (1,2,3,4) - meh, I don't feel like (1) stands out as much so I think it doesn't deserve a change in flow (you could use the concept with 00:55:814 (1) - though)
01:00:100 (3,1) - again, the overlap isn't that big so it becomes kinda unaesthetic
02:07:814 - (SB wise) are you sure Katakana fits here? I feel like this is still japanese and not a foreign word, recheck the lyrics lol
02:25:815 (3,4) - these two have lower emphasis, are you sure you wanna space 02:25:386 (2,3) - the same as 02:24:957 (1,2) - ?
02:51:100 (4,5,6) - straight line instead, purely for aesthetics
03:09:529 (1) - this has the same intensity as 03:12:957 (1) - , yet you don't add a custom hitsound there. Why?
03:36:100 (3,5) - stack these
04:03:315 (2,4) - ehm, not sure about readability here, it's a hard, y'know
04:04:171 (5,2) - stack
04:04:386 (1,2) - the sound isn't as important for you to go for a ballsy jump there, lower it a little. besides reading problems with 04:04:815 (3) -
04:09:315 (3) - either this is overmapped or 04:08:457 - is undermapped
04:17:886 (3,4,1) - you've never used triples before, how about a short slider instead?
04:40:386 (1) - move it like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8556160
04:41:439 (2) - stack with 04:40:386 (1) - 's head
05:29:893 (1) - this sounds cute for some reason lol

good map, gl from me
Down
세상에서제일멋진범산밈화이팅 :) :) :)
_handholding
Solid mapping. I'll just say 2 things

-the spacing in the first kiai seemed really low overall compared to the rest of the map
-patterns like these 02:06:957 (6,7,8) in the second verse don't really fit in with the style of the map imo

well that's it, great stuff! GL ~

no kds if you didn't apply
Shunao
Heyo!

m4m from q

  • General
  1. open aimod for kiai time not aligned
  • 2
  1. nice diff name
  2. 00:34:386 (4,1) - i think it's should be good if you make them similar imo
  3. 01:05:886 (3,1) - spacing should be higher the vocals rise of a tone
  4. 01:33:314 (3,1) - same here ^
  5. 04:02:029 (5,1) - can you make them similar?
  6. 05:02:232 (3,1) - ^

    wtf?? i found only that?
Very good difficulty, awesome!~

Idk if m4m can work with this lol

gl!~
jieusieu
ingame
12:39 Beomsan: 역시 즊쓲님
12:39 jieusieu: 00:52:493 (1) - 이거한칸
12:39 jieusieu: 줄여주실수있음??
12:40 Beomsan: 예?
12:40 Beomsan: 어떡계요
12:40 jieusieu: 1/8로
12:40 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
12:40 jieusieu: 00:54:957 - 그리고 여기 서클하나추가
12:40 Beomsan: 1/16말하시는것?
12:40 jieusieu: https://puu.sh/wFS5r.png
12:40 jieusieu: 이렇게요
12:40 jieusieu: ㄴㄴ 1.8
12:40 jieusieu: 1/8
12:40 Beomsan: 아
12:40 Beomsan: 끝을줄이라구요
12:41 jieusieu: 네
12:41 jieusieu: 그리고 스피너 끝에 클랩
12:41 jieusieu: 1 2 드럼클랩 3 4 드럼피니쉬
12:41 jieusieu: 아 아닌가
12:42 Beomsan: 잘들어맞는거같은대
12:42 jieusieu: 1은 걍클랩
12:42 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
12:43 Beomsan: ㄷㄷ
12:43 Beomsan: 저 괜히 질알하느,ㄴ건 아닌데 진짜 오지내요
12:45 jieusieu: 01:22:171 (2) - 드럼피니쉬
12:45 jieusieu: 01:22:386 (1) - 드럼클랩
12:45 jieusieu: 01:22:386 (1) - 드럼피니쉬
12:46 jieusieu: 01:23:029 (2) - ^
12:46 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
12:46 Beomsan: 님
12:46 Beomsan: 중간에2개 타임스탬프 겹침
12:46 jieusieu: 아
12:46 jieusieu: 01:22:600 -
12:46 jieusieu: ㅈㅅ
12:46 jieusieu: 님
12:47 jieusieu: 다시드릴게요
12:47 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
12:47 Beomsan: 앙기모리
12:47 jieusieu: 복붙이잘못됐네
12:47 jieusieu: 01:22:171 (2) - 드럼피니쉬
12:47 jieusieu: 아니
12:47 jieusieu: ㄱㄷ
12:47 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
12:47 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
12:47 jieusieu: 맞네
12:47 jieusieu: 01:22:386 - 휘슬
12:47 jieusieu: 01:22:600 - 드럼클랩
12:47 jieusieu: 01:22:814 - 드럼피니쉬
12:47 jieusieu: 01:23:029 - ^
12:48 Beomsan: 드럼클랩 뭔가 묘하지않음?
12:48 jieusieu: 원래 좀 더 낮은음인데
12:48 jieusieu: 그샘플이 없어서
12:48 jieusieu: 갖다드릴까요??
12:49 Beomsan: 음
12:49 jieusieu: 아니면01:22:600 - 드럼피니쉬
12:49 jieusieu: 01:22:814 - 휘슬01:23:029 - 휘슬
12:49 Beomsan: 네
12:49 jieusieu: 하셔도뭐
12:49 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
12:49 Beomsan: 그렇게바꿔보는중이엇음
12:50 Beomsan: 그게편하고
12:50 Beomsan: 좋을듯
12:50 jieusieu: ㄱㄷ저누구왔음
12:50 Beomsan: 예
12:50 Beomsan: 저는 그 짬에 담배나사옴
12:51 jieusieu: 아니
12:51 jieusieu: 잘못온사람이었음
12:53 jieusieu: 02:55:386 (3,4) - 이건걍 비우는게어떨까요??
12:53 jieusieu: 02:54:957 (1) - 그리고 이거클랩
12:55 jieusieu: 02:48:100 (7) - 피니쉬빼도좋다고생각함
12:56 jieusieu: 02:48:315 (8) - 드럼클랩
12:56 jieusieu: 02:48:529 (9) - 드럼피니쉬
12:56 jieusieu: 02:48:743 - ^
12:57 jieusieu: 02:53:243 (2) - 클랩
12:57 jieusieu: 02:53:886 (3) - ^
13:01 Beomsan: 02:53:886 (3) - 여기클랩은
13:01 Beomsan: 이상하게들림
13:02 Beomsan: 딴건다수정
13:03 jieusieu: 노래에 있는 박잔데
13:03 jieusieu: 이상하면 보류하셈
13:03 Beomsan: 있는박자긴한데
13:03 jieusieu: 02:54:529 - 드럼피니쉬
13:03 Beomsan: 차라리 휘슬이면
13:04 jieusieu: 아니 드럼클랩
13:04 Beomsan: 좋게들리내요
13:04 jieusieu: 02:55:171 (2) - s5피니쉬?
13:04 Beomsan: 피니쉬좋네요
13:05 jieusieu: 근데 그 바로 다음 피니쉬랑 같은피니쉬라 좀
13:05 Beomsan: 전 이상하진 않음
13:06 Beomsan: 아마 비워놨던 이유가 그런거였던거같은데
13:06 jieusieu: 그 그거
13:06 jieusieu: 제가드렸던샘플 그거 뭘로하셨음?
13:06 Beomsan: 순서대로 6 7
13:06 jieusieu: 그거함넣어보셈 저기에
13:06 jieusieu: 아
13:06 jieusieu: 왜 둘다넣으셨음??
13:07 Beomsan: 예?
13:07 Beomsan: 둘다쓸만하던데
13:07 jieusieu: 6지우센 ㅅㄱ
13:07 Beomsan: ...
13:07 jieusieu: 7을 6으로하시구
13:07 Beomsan: 님 나중에 6쓴부분 함 보삼
13:07 Beomsan: 괜찮은데
13:07 jieusieu: 아니
13:07 jieusieu: 그럼저거고치고
13:07 jieusieu: 주셈
13:07 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
13:08 Beomsan: https://puu.sh/wFT2f/224c36bd87.osz
13:08 Beomsan: 냅
13:08 Beomsan: 아
13:08 Beomsan: 씨발 저장안했나 아까?
13:08 Beomsan: 아니겠지
13:09 jieusieu: 아
13:09 jieusieu: 뭐지? 개꿀잼몰카인가?ㅋㅋ
13:09 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
13:09 Beomsan: 아님
13:09 Beomsan: 있음
13:09 Beomsan: 님 마지막에 찍어준거도
13:09 Beomsan: 6이더어울림
13:09 jieusieu: 아니그럼
13:10 jieusieu: 7은 안쓰셨음?
13:10 Beomsan: ㅆ껏죠
13:10 jieusieu: 아니
13:10 jieusieu: 어떻게둘다씀??
13:10 Beomsan: 묘하게 다르던데
13:10 Beomsan: 못쓸이유있음??
13:10 jieusieu: 그건맞는데
13:10 jieusieu: 굳이쓸필요는없는거같은데
13:10 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
13:11 Beomsan: 음...
13:11 Beomsan: 저는 머 븅쉰이라서
13:11 Beomsan: 잘모르겠지만
13:11 Beomsan: 지금괜찮다고생각함
13:11 jieusieu: 님이 맘에들면되는거죠
13:11 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
13:12 Beomsan: 그건좀..
13:12 jieusieu: 님근데
13:12 jieusieu: 05:04:375 (1) - 이거
13:12 jieusieu: https://puu.sh/wFTbs.png
13:12 jieusieu: 이렇게하면안됨??
13:12 jieusieu: 부탁임.......
13:13 Beomsan: 음
13:13 Beomsan: 했는데
13:14 Beomsan: 2번슬라 머넣죠 힛사
13:14 jieusieu: 아됐다
13:14 jieusieu: 저다운받았음
13:14 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
13:14 jieusieu: ㄱㄷ
13:14 jieusieu: ㅇㄷ였죠??
13:15 Beomsan: 05:04:375 (1) -
13:16 Beomsan: 님
13:16 Beomsan: 근데
13:16 Beomsan: 주신 샘플 끝에 이상한 잡음있지않음?
13:17 jieusieu: 05:04:696 - 클랩
13:17 jieusieu: 05:04:803 - 드럼클랩
13:17 jieusieu: 05:05:018 - ^
13:17 jieusieu: 05:05:232 - 드럼피니쉬
13:17 jieusieu: 05:05:446 - ^
13:17 jieusieu: ㄹㅇ?
13:17 Beomsan: 크게들림
13:17 Beomsan: 뾰록
13:17 jieusieu: 뾰록??
13:17 Beomsan: 인지는모르겠는데
13:17 Beomsan: 뭔가들림
13:17 Beomsan: 잘들어보삼
13:18 jieusieu: 아
13:18 jieusieu: ㄹㅇ네
13:18 jieusieu: https://puu.sh/wFTnM.wav
13:18 jieusieu: 이럼될듯??
13:18 Beomsan: 6도주새요
13:19 jieusieu: 6도그럼??
13:19 Beomsan: 음
13:19 Beomsan: 안그런가
13:19 Beomsan: ㄱㄷ
13:19 Beomsan: 이것도좀있는거같은데
13:19 jieusieu: 6은제가 설정한걸지워서
13:19 jieusieu: 안됨ㅅㄱ
13:19 Beomsan: 있네
13:19 Beomsan: 않이
13:19 Beomsan: 6은 무적권 써야하는데
13:19 Beomsan: 에바참치인부분
13:20 jieusieu: 아니
13:20 jieusieu: 니ㅏㅁ왜 노말피니쉬는안씀??
13:21 Beomsan: 노말피니쉬2요?
13:21 jieusieu: 네
13:21 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
13:21 Beomsan: 어...
13:21 Beomsan: 모르겠음
13:21 Beomsan: ㅎ....
13:21 jieusieu: 그걸 7쓰던것처럼쓰고
13:21 jieusieu: 7을 6쓰던것처럼쓰면되지않을까요??
13:22 jieusieu: 04:07:386 (5,6) - 드럼클랩
13:23 jieusieu: 04:10:172 (2) - 드럼클랩
13:24 jieusieu: 04:11:029 (4) - 휘슬빼샘
13:24 Beomsan: 다했음
13:25 Beomsan: 피니쉬도 교체끝
13:25 jieusieu: 님그럼
13:25 jieusieu: 한번더주시기가능??
13:25 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
13:25 Beomsan: https://puu.sh/wFTDb/fb19895b88.osz
13:26 jieusieu: 04:37:386 (2) - 클랩
13:27 jieusieu: 휘슬피니쉬 둘다빼셈
13:27 jieusieu: 04:37:814 - 드럼클랩
13:27 jieusieu: 04:37:957 - ^
13:27 Beomsan: 피니쉬 뺴면 너무 심심한데
13:27 jieusieu: 04:38:100 - 드럼피니쉬
13:27 jieusieu: 04:38:243 - ^
13:27 jieusieu: 04:38:386 - ^
13:29 jieusieu: ㄹㅇ?
13:29 Beomsan: 넹
13:29 Beomsan: ㅠㅅㅠ
13:31 jieusieu: 저는아닌거같은데
13:31 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
13:31 Beomsan: 저 저것만큼은 의견좀 모아보겠음
13:31 Beomsan: 딴건다수정했어요
13:32 jieusieu: 아진짜 오스
13:32 jieusieu: osz인식을못하네
13:32 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
13:32 jieusieu: 저다시재접좀
13:32 Beomsan: 냬
13:33 jieusieu: 됐다
13:33 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
13:33 Beomsan: 흠
13:33 Beomsan: 힛사 요정도면 된걸까요
13:34 jieusieu: 님근데 피니쉬 67그대론데요??
13:34 Beomsan: 님말한거랑은
13:34 Beomsan: 반대로했음
13:35 Beomsan: 7은 그대로두고 6을 2로해서 애디션 노말로
13:36 jieusieu: ??
13:36 Beomsan: ????????????
13:36 Beomsan: 이상함?
13:36 jieusieu: 그럼 6피니쉬는머임??
13:36 Beomsan: 예?
13:37 jieusieu: 6 피니쉬는 빈거에요??
13:37 Beomsan: 저 이거 하고나선 osz 드린적 없는거같은데 새로받으신건 뭐임
13:37 jieusieu: 머지??
13:37 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
13:37 jieusieu: 그럼 노말 휘슬을 지우신거에요?
13:37 Beomsan: https://puu.sh/wFU4D/30b97deb63.osz
13:37 Beomsan: 휘슬그대로고 말한거만 바뀜
13:37 Beomsan: 6피니시 -> 노말2피니시
13:38 jieusieu: 아 복잡하네
13:38 jieusieu: 일단다운좀
13:38 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
13:38 Beomsan: 쓸데없는 샘플좀 지우면
13:38 Beomsan: 안복잡할텐데
13:38 Beomsan: 귀찬ㅅㅎ아서안했음
13:38 Beomsan: ...
13:38 jieusieu: 02:26:672 (5) - 클랩
13:39 jieusieu: 02:27:529 (6) - 드럼클랩
13:39 jieusieu: 아니
13:39 jieusieu: 02:26:672 (5) - 드럼클랩
13:39 jieusieu: 02:27:529 (6) - 그냥클랩
13:39 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
13:40 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
13:40 Beomsan: 5는
13:40 Beomsan: 헤드말이죠?
13:40 Beomsan: 수정했음
13:40 jieusieu: 02:28:385 (1) - 드럼클랩
13:40 jieusieu: 02:30:956 (4) - 드럼피니쉬
13:40 jieusieu: 아니
13:40 jieusieu: ㅈㅅ 꼬리요
13:40 Beomsan: 않이
13:40 Beomsan: 님
13:40 jieusieu: 02:31:385 (5) - 휘슬
13:40 Beomsan: 02:27:100 - 이꼬리말임?
13:41 jieusieu: 02:34:386 (4) - 드럼피니쉬
13:41 jieusieu: 네
13:41 Beomsan: 원래 뭐였는지 까먹으면 에반데
13:42 jieusieu: 02:32:671 - 드럼클랩
13:42 jieusieu: 원래 드럼휘슬이었음
13:42 Beomsan: 첨부터새로했음
13:42 Beomsan: ㄱㅊ
13:42 jieusieu: 02:36:100 - 드럼클랩
13:43 jieusieu: 02:37:814 (5) - 드럼피니쉬
13:44 jieusieu: 02:39:529 - 드럼클랩
13:44 jieusieu: 02:40:814 - ^
13:44 jieusieu: 02:41:457 (6) - 드럼피니쉬
13:44 jieusieu: 02:41:671 - ^
13:44 jieusieu: 02:47:457 - 휘슬
13:46 jieusieu: 아
13:46 jieusieu: 이게 베이스가 들어가야할 박자에 이미 드럼휘슬이 들어가있어서
13:46 jieusieu: 넣을수가없네요
13:46 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
13:46 Beomsan: 그게모임?
13:47 jieusieu: 그
13:47 jieusieu: 소프트휘슬이요
13:47 jieusieu: 03:22:279 - 클랩
13:47 jieusieu: 03:22:386 - 클랩
13:47 jieusieu: 03:21:743 - 클랩
13:49 jieusieu: 03:21:743 - 아니 드럼클랩
13:49 jieusieu: 03:21:957 - 드럼피니쉬
13:50 jieusieu: 03:50:136 (4,5) - 이거
13:51 jieusieu: 03:50:243 - 그거빼고 여기하나만 놔도 될거같은데
13:51 Beomsan: 03:50:243 - ???
13:51 jieusieu: 네
13:51 jieusieu: 그게맞음
13:52 Beomsan: 박자요?
13:52 jieusieu: 03:49:171 - 클랩
13:52 jieusieu: 네
13:52 Beomsan: 이거
13:52 Beomsan: 보컬따라간건데
13:52 jieusieu: 03:49:386 - 드럼클랩
13:52 jieusieu: 03:49:600 - 드럼피니쉬
13:52 jieusieu: 그럼어떡하지
13:53 Beomsan: 저따가 딱히 드럼힛사 써도 이상하지 않진 않지않음??
13:53 Beomsan: 힛사때문에 저기 정박으로 바꾸는건 에반데
13:54 jieusieu: 정 바꾸기 싫으시면
13:54 jieusieu: 그냥 45에 둘다 드럼피니쉬 넣으삼ㅋㅋ
13:54 Beomsan: 그렇게할게요
13:54 jieusieu: 03:50:671 (1) - 피니쉬
13:54 jieusieu: 그거
13:54 jieusieu: s5
13:55 jieusieu: 03:56:457 - s5
13:56 jieusieu: 03:56:886 - s7
13:56 jieusieu: 04:09:100 - 휘슬
13:56 jieusieu: 04:09:314 - 휘슬
13:57 jieusieu: 04:24:100 - 클랩
13:58 jieusieu: 휘슬피니쉬빼고
13:58 jieusieu: 04:24:314 - 여긴잘모르겠음
13:58 jieusieu: 피니쉬가 있어야될지 아닐지
13:59 Beomsan: 아까 제가 반대한거랑 비슷한경우 아닐가요 이것도
13:59 jieusieu: 04:31:171 - 드럼클랩
13:59 jieusieu: 04:31:386 - 드럼피니쉬
13:59 jieusieu: 04:31:600 - ^
13:59 jieusieu: 흠
14:00 jieusieu: 04:37:814 (1,2) -
14:00 jieusieu: 님이거 안바껴있음??
14:00 Beomsan: 바겨있음
14:01 jieusieu: 드럼뭐시기로??
14:01 Beomsan: 네
14:02 jieusieu: 다행이다
14:02 jieusieu: 제가 기억이안나는데
14:02 Beomsan: 거긴안돼있음?
14:02 jieusieu: 04:43:569 - 이거 s5하라고 했었음??
14:02 jieusieu: 네
14:02 Beomsan: ㄴㄴ
14:03 jieusieu: s5ㄱㄱ
14:03 Beomsan: 했음
14:04 jieusieu: 04:49:803 - 27
14:04 jieusieu: ㄴ7
14:04 jieusieu: s7
14:05 Beomsan: ?
14:05 Beomsan: 님지금보니까 왜케
14:05 Beomsan: 뒤죽박죽이지 파일이
14:05 jieusieu: 04:41:439 - 드럼클랩
14:05 Beomsan: sb바껴있음
14:05 jieusieu: 04:41:653 - 드럼피니쉬
14:05 jieusieu: 04:41:859 - 드럼피니쉬
14:05 jieusieu: ?
14:05 Beomsan: 딴건 다 정상인거같은데
14:05 Beomsan: sb에
14:06 Beomsan: 03:57:529 - 원래 여기 안이랬던거같은데
14:06 Beomsan: 이뒤로
14:06 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
14:06 Beomsan: 이건 바꾸기전 상태로 기억하는데 왜이렇게돼있지
14:06 jieusieu: 저는잘모르겠는데
14:06 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
14:06 Beomsan: 귀신들렸네
14:06 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
14:06 Beomsan: 씨벌
14:07 Beomsan: 나중에 다시 받으면 되겠죠 이건??
14:07 Beomsan: 힛사 마지막줄까지 수정했음
14:07 jieusieu: 04:43:998 - 클랩
14:07 jieusieu: 04:45:080 - 드럼클랩
14:07 jieusieu: 04:45:299 - 드럼피니쉬
14:07 jieusieu: 그렇지않을까요??
14:07 Beomsan: 그렇겟죠
14:07 jieusieu: 04:42:933 - 클랩
14:08 jieusieu: 04:44:643 - 클랩인가?
14:08 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
14:08 jieusieu: 아닌거같음
14:08 jieusieu: 04:50:875 - 클랩
14:08 jieusieu: 04:51:518 - 드럼클랩
14:08 Beomsan: 04:50:875 - 소프트?
14:08 jieusieu: 04:51:732 - ^
14:09 jieusieu: 04:51:946 - 드럼피니쉬
14:09 jieusieu: 04:52:160 - 드럼피니쉬
14:09 Beomsan: 님 이거는
14:09 Beomsan: 지금 4줄이 돼있는거임
14:09 Beomsan: osz또
14:09 Beomsan: 제대로안된듯
14:09 Beomsan: 개판이네
14:09 jieusieu: 아니다04:51:518 - 이거걍클랩
14:09 jieusieu: 아니
14:09 jieusieu: ㄹㅇ??
14:09 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
14:09 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
14:09 jieusieu: 네그거 소프트요
14:10 jieusieu: 05:03:518 - s7
14:11 jieusieu: 일단 끝까지오긴했는데
14:11 jieusieu: 제가 좀 듬성듬성잠아서
14:11 jieusieu: 잡아서 제대로 된진 모르겠음
14:11 Beomsan: 제대로된거같음저는
14:11 Beomsan: 수정하기전보단 훨씬 나은건 확실
14:12 jieusieu: 그뭐냐
14:12 jieusieu: 단풍잎부분
14:12 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
14:12 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
14:12 Beomsan: 저거원래
14:12 Beomsan: 안저랬느,ㄴ데분명
14:12 Beomsan: 개
14:12 jieusieu: 거기는 클랩껴있어서
14:12 Beomsan: 쓉앓
14:12 jieusieu: 일단안잡았음
14:12 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
14:12 Beomsan: 클랩
14:12 Beomsan: 흠
14:12 Beomsan: ㅋ
14:12 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
14:12 Beomsan: 아몰랑
14:12 Beomsan: 님
14:13 Beomsan: 그러고보니깐
14:13 Beomsan: 노이즈 효과 뭐시기하던데
14:13 Beomsan: 그건뭔얘기임??
14:13 Beomsan: sb관련
14:13 jieusieu: 04:03:957 - 휘슬
14:13 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
14:13 jieusieu: 저 뭐 해달라고 얘기는 왔는데
14:13 jieusieu: 뭐해달라고한진모르겠음
14:13 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
14:13 Beomsan: 않이
14:13 Beomsan: 그거 하고있다고 기다리고있다던데
14:13 jieusieu: sb괜찮은거같은데
14:13 Beomsan: ㄹㅇㅋㅋ
14:13 jieusieu: 왜또넣으려고하지??
14:13 Beomsan: 일단
14:13 jieusieu: 아니 저
14:13 jieusieu: ㄱㄷ리랬는데
14:13 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
14:14 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
14:14 Beomsan: 님
14:14 Beomsan: 까먹은거맞음??
14:14 Beomsan: 뭐해야할지
14:14 Beomsan: 맞으면 제가 전달해보겠음
14:14 jieusieu: 04:31:171 - 님여기 드럼클랩돼있음??
14:14 Beomsan: 내
14:14 jieusieu: 아니
14:14 jieusieu: 멀까먹음??
14:14 jieusieu: 다행이네요
14:14 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
14:14 Beomsan: 뭐해달라고한진 모르겠다고
14:14 Beomsan: 하셨잖아오
14:14 Beomsan: 그걸
14:14 jieusieu: 04:31:600 - 여기 드럼피니쉬돼있음??
14:15 Beomsan: 내
14:15 jieusieu: 에논님이 뭐 노이즈처리 해달라고
14:15 jieusieu: sayonara wonder noise처럼
14:15 jieusieu: 그래서 제가 그때 뭘 하면 되냐고 물어봤었는데
14:15 jieusieu: 뭐라고했었지?
14:15 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
14:15 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
14:15 Beomsan: 이건제가
14:15 Beomsan: 전달하는게나을듯
14:16 jieusieu: 기다리라는 식으로 전달받았던걸로 기억함
14:16 Beomsan: 그거머냐
14:16 Beomsan: 님
14:16 Beomsan: 가사같은거 다하면 한다고
14:16 Beomsan: 그랬다던거같은데
14:16 jieusieu: 그래서 그럼 머기하겠삼 하고
14:16 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
14:16 Beomsan: 전 뭔소린지 몰라서 걍 벙찜
14:16 jieusieu: 아
14:16 jieusieu: 그건 뭐 노이즈효과를 주려면
14:16 jieusieu: 가사가 있어야 들어가는게 아닌가 해서 그런건데
14:16 jieusieu: 사실 아직도 정확히 뭘 제가 해야되ㅏ는지는 모르겠음
14:17 Beomsan: 그럼 상의해보실?
14:17 Beomsan: 저 일단 씌바 급똥
14:17 jieusieu: 04:35:457 - 클랩
14:17 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
14:17 Beomsan: 지릴거같음
14:17 jieusieu: 넵
14:17 Beomsan: 클랩
14:17 jieusieu: 님설사함??
14:17 Beomsan: 예스
14:17 Beomsan: 아
14:17 Beomsan: 저원래
14:17 Beomsan: 똥개많있깜
14:17 Beomsan: 악
14:17 Beomsan: ㄱㄷ쒸바
14:17 jieusieu: 04:36:743 - 드럼클랩
14:18 jieusieu: 넵
14:18 jieusieu: 'ㅋㅋ
빨리주삼ㅋㅋ
Topic Starter
Beomsan
I'll reply after the contest
thanks for mods
and thanks for stars kisses <3
Venix
nm from my queue

[2]
  1. Overall I think you've ignored some important strong downbeats like 01:29:886 (3,1) -here or 03:02:672 (1) - here. I think you should improve these places by increasing spacing, like ~1.7, it should works better for look during entire of map. These places areactually emphasised by text particles on storybord which makes them easy to find.
  2. 00:02:670 (2,2) - what are you think about putting 2 circles instead both of sliders, because these sliders are small like it's easily missreadable with triples.
  3. 00:52:493 (1) - I think this spinner is too close with next circle on timeline. prefer make it shorter cuz it's a bit stresfull during gameplay
  4. 01:49:814 (2,3,4) - what are you think about 3xnc here cuz it's other kind of rythm. It'll help with readability.
  5. 01:58:814 (3) - lol why this slider ends on nothing D: It should ends 02:00:100 - here.
Nice map~ Good Luck!
sahuang

Enon wrote:

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lol wtf
Topic Starter
Beomsan
thats bullshit

Enon wrote:

Y^y
Venix
also add to tags "flat" cuz "♭" is flat in translation
I'm blind XD
timemon
M4M

[mod]
I believe the AR is a bit high, there are not many objects present on screen at times

00:09:530 (2) - I think this will look better if you rotate it 90 degree anti clockwise, as right now the angle is a bit awkward plus the slider border touches the other slider.
00:48:957 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - It's better for you to stick with either sliders or circles, the slider used at 00:50:100 (2) - does not have any change in music so it will look inconsistent. just map it as 1-2-3 rhythms in 3 seperate combos
00:55:600 (4) - this circle is given the same spacing emphasis as others but the sound is weaker

02:03:100 (4) - I suggest removing the reverse and add a circle on top of the slider

03:36:100 (3,4) - combine into 1/2 slider maybe? to follow the vocal

04:01:600 (3) - this object is barely supported by anything and it's given the same emphasis as 04:01:814 (4) - . I suggest combining 04:01:386 (2,3) - together as one slider
04:01:814 (4,5) - ctrl+G the objects on the time line as atm it doesn't make sense to have such a strong draggy sound on a circle then nothing strong on a slider
04:03:529 (3,4) - ^ similar issue not to mention the slider end in this case even catch the vocal under it which is not good because its head is really weak in term of sound
04:05:457 (4) - I don't quite like how you map a stronger and noticeable sound with repeat arrow.
04:06:957 (3,4,5,6) - 3-4 and 5-6 are from different pattern in sound and I believe the 5-6 should be spaced or changed in pattern. Right now they all are just uniformly arranged

Yeah that section is probably the only weird part in this mapset and I think it could be improved.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Beomsan

Venix wrote:

also add to tags "flat" cuz "♭" is flat in translation
I'm blind XD
LOL

I'll response soon
this post will be edit
Len
hello!


2:

00:02:670 (2) - 이거 차라리 1슬라 길이를 줄이고 이 슬라에 리버스하나넣어서 이거하나로 띠리링 하는게 더 좋을거같음
00:06:028 (2) -
일단 전체적으로 심벌즈 사운드가 커서 노래랑 안어울림 약간 튀는경향이 없지않아있음 특히 01:47:243 - 여기 챙챙챙은 좀 아니라고 생각해요



gl
Yoges
Delayed M4M cause I'm a lazy bastard

  1. 00:12:889 (2) - Visually that doesn't fit well with the map cause it's very dense, which in most cases would imply speed but this song obviously isn't fast it's more on the gentle and graceful side. It'd be better to passively map the first sound with the slider end from the long slider and the second with a stacked circle. It's looks less dense and avoids the awkward 1/12 rhythm.
  2. 00:48:957 (1,2,3,1) - Even if the song is slow it's still a good idea to switch polarity with passive mapping when changing from 1/4 to 1/3 and vice versa cause it makes the transition in play more natural. Use a slider for the first 2 1/3 rhythms or a repeat.
  3. 00:52:493 (1,1) - Since this map is on the slower side, a small time window between spinner ends and notes like this feel a little weird. Most players will immediately prepare for the note when they see it and ignore a good chunk of the end of the spinner which feels strange in play. It'd probably be better to end the spinner on the 1/2 drum 00:54:529 -
  4. 01:50:136 (3,4) - It's a lot better to just simplify these to 1/3 rather than trying to compensate for the off time singing from the vocalist. Either that or try edit the mp3. do not do this.
  5. 01:51:957 (3) - Maybe replace this with an note and put beginning of the long slider where the end of this one was? The hold feeling of the long slider fits the vocals pretty nicely.
  6. 03:49:815 (3,4,5) -
  7. 03:55:815 (1,2) - I think there is a little too much emphasis on the (2)
Topic Starter
Beomsan
thank you yoges ;;;^;;;
Topic Starter
Beomsan
no reply=fixed

[Nemesis] wrote:

M4M

2

just throw in BPM=70, the difference is barely noticable lol - idk well about this. I'll ask to GoldenWolf later
00:09:316 - you're ignoring a sound here - cuz I don't want too much rhythm.
00:09:530 (2,1) - I know it's only the edges, but they're overlapping, I suggest you just separate them - ok. I'll consider that but it's fine to me
00:11:245 (1,2) - how about you connect them like a straight line instead? - there's no special reason but nope i guess ._.....
00:19:386 (2,3,4) - use the same pattern as here: 00:15:957 (2,3,4) - , feels more consistent - yes
00:54:957 (1,2,3,4) - meh, I don't feel like (1) stands out as much so I think it doesn't deserve a change in flow (you could use the concept with 00:55:814 (1) - though) - umm... I need time to think about this
01:00:100 (3,1) - again, the overlap isn't that big so it becomes kinda unaesthetic - of course, overlap is not for aesthetics.
02:07:814 - (SB wise) are you sure Katakana fits here? I feel like this is still japanese and not a foreign word, recheck the lyrics lol - The official lyrics of this song have not been released yet (sadly)
02:25:815 (3,4) - these two have lower emphasis, are you sure you wanna space 02:25:386 (2,3) - the same as 02:24:957 (1,2) - ? - yeah i guess
02:51:100 (4,5,6) - straight line instead, purely for aesthetics
03:09:529 (1) - this has the same intensity as 03:12:957 (1) - , yet you don't add a custom hitsound there. Why? - Many finishes make people's ears hurt lol
03:36:100 (3,5) - stack these
04:03:315 (2,4) - ehm, not sure about readability here, it's a hard, y'know - yeah it's quite hard to fix
04:04:171 (5,2) - stack
04:04:386 (1,2) - the sound isn't as important for you to go for a ballsy jump there, lower it a little. besides reading problems with 04:04:815 (3) - - 04:04:815 (3) - I wanted to express the weakness of this place even more extreme. idk it works
04:09:315 (3) - either this is overmapped or 04:08:457 - is undermapped - there's no sound
04:17:886 (3,4,1) - you've never used triples before, how about a short slider instead?
04:40:386 (1) - move it like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8556160
04:41:439 (2) - stack with 04:40:386 (1) - 's head - nope
05:29:893 (1) - this sounds cute for some reason lol - W T F

good map, gl from me
thank you so much !!

Kisses wrote:

Solid mapping. I'll just say 2 things

-the spacing in the first kiai seemed really low overall compared to the rest of the map - I think you understood what I intended. This is just matter of degree i guess.
-patterns like these 02:06:957 (6,7,8) in the second verse don't really fit in with the style of the map imo

well that's it, great stuff! GL ~

no kds if you didn't apply
thank youuu

ShogunMoon wrote:

Heyo!

m4m from q

  • General
  1. open aimod for kiai time not aligned
  • 2
  1. nice diff name - sure
  2. 00:34:386 (4,1) - i think it's should be good if you make them similar imo
  3. 01:05:886 (3,1) - spacing should be higher the vocals rise of a tone - I attach more importance to patterns tho
  4. 01:33:314 (3,1) - same here ^
  5. 04:02:029 (5,1) - can you make them similar?
  6. 05:02:232 (3,1) - ^

    wtf?? i found only that?
Very good difficulty, awesome!~

Idk if m4m can work with this lol

gl!~
yeah it works

Venix wrote:

nm from my queue

[2]
  1. Overall I think you've ignored some important strong downbeats like 01:29:886 (3,1) -here or 03:02:672 (1) - here. I think you should improve these places by increasing spacing, like ~1.7, it should works better for look during entire of map. These places areactually emphasised by text particles on storybord which makes them easy to find.
  2. 00:02:670 (2,2) - what are you think about putting 2 circles instead both of sliders, because these sliders are small like it's easily missreadable with triples. - really not. changing this to a triplet will make it harder to play.
  3. 00:52:493 (1) - I think this spinner is too close with next circle on timeline. prefer make it shorter cuz it's a bit stresfull during gameplay - I'll consider that
  4. 01:49:814 (2,3,4) - what are you think about 3xnc here cuz it's other kind of rythm. It'll help with readability. - what's 3xnc? sorry D;
  5. 01:58:814 (3) - lol why this slider ends on nothing D: It should ends 02:00:100 - here.
Nice map~ Good Luck!
thank yuuu

timemon wrote:

M4M

[mod]
I believe the AR is a bit high, there are not many objects present on screen at times - ok

00:09:530 (2) - I think this will look better if you rotate it 90 degree anti clockwise, as right now the angle is a bit awkward plus the slider border touches the other slider. - sorry but it's absolutely fine to me
00:48:957 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - It's better for you to stick with either sliders or circles, the slider used at 00:50:100 (2) - does not have any change in music so it will look inconsistent. just map it as 1-2-3 rhythms in 3 seperate combos - youre right i guess, I'll conisder it
00:55:600 (4) - this circle is given the same spacing emphasis as others but the sound is weaker - I couldn't find a better placement

02:03:100 (4) - I suggest removing the reverse and add a circle on top of the slider - if i change my mind

03:36:100 (3,4) - combine into 1/2 slider maybe? to follow the vocal - I think it is better to have more notes here than your suggest.

04:01:600 (3) - this object is barely supported by anything and it's given the same emphasis as 04:01:814 (4) - . I suggest combining 04:01:386 (2,3) - together as one slider -tbh I do not feel the need to do this.
04:01:814 (4,5) - ctrl+G the objects on the time line as atm it doesn't make sense to have such a strong draggy sound on a circle then nothing strong on a slider - aaaa ok it's really good point but I need time to think about this. I'm sorry for not accepting these good opinions straight away.
04:03:529 (3,4) - ^ similar issue not to mention the slider end in this case even catch the vocal under it which is not good because its head is really weak in term of sound
04:05:457 (4) - I don't quite like how you map a stronger and noticeable sound with repeat arrow.
04:06:957 (3,4,5,6) - 3-4 and 5-6 are from different pattern in sound and I believe the 5-6 should be spaced or changed in pattern. Right now they all are just uniformly arranged

Yeah that section is probably the only weird part in this mapset and I think it could be improved.

Good luck!
I don't think I need to emphasize every single sound. This is all I can say for sure about your opinion.
thank you so much!

Len wrote:

hello!


2:

00:02:670 (2) - 이거 차라리 1슬라 길이를 줄이고 이 슬라에 리버스하나넣어서 이거하나로 띠리링 하는게 더 좋을거같음
00:06:028 (2) - 이거 은근히 귀찮아서 천천히 고치겠음
일단 전체적으로 심벌즈 사운드가 커서 노래랑 안어울림 약간 튀는경향이 없지않아있음 특히 01:47:243 - 여기 챙챙챙은 좀 아니라고 생각해요 - 외않됌?



gl
l o l

Yoges wrote:

Delayed M4M cause I'm a lazy bastard

  1. 00:12:889 (2) - Visually that doesn't fit well with the map cause it's very dense, which in most cases would imply speed but this song obviously isn't fast it's more on the gentle and graceful side. It'd be better to passively map the first sound with the slider end from the long slider and the second with a stacked circle. It's looks less dense and avoids the awkward 1/12 rhythm. - but I think this is quite important sound.
  2. 00:48:957 (1,2,3,1) - Even if the song is slow it's still a good idea to switch polarity with passive mapping when changing from 1/4 to 1/3 and vice versa cause it makes the transition in play more natural. Use a slider for the first 2 1/3 rhythms or a repeat. - this is not "excessive" so it's fine i guess.
  3. 00:52:493 (1,1) - Since this map is on the slower side, a small time window between spinner ends and notes like this feel a little weird. Most players will immediately prepare for the note when they see it and ignore a good chunk of the end of the spinner which feels strange in play. It'd probably be better to end the spinner on the 1/2 drum 00:54:529 - ok
  4. 01:50:136 (3,4) - It's a lot better to just simplify these to 1/3 rather than trying to compensate for the off time singing from the vocalist. Either that or try edit the mp3. do not do this.
  5. 01:51:957 (3) - Maybe replace this with an note and put beginning of the long slider where the end of this one was? The hold feeling of the long slider fits the vocals pretty nicely.
  6. 03:49:815 (3,4,5) -
  7. 03:55:815 (1,2) - I think there is a little too much emphasis on the (2) - yeah, I'm thinking of a better place
Your modding has reminded me a lot of things.
thanks!
Topic Starter
Beomsan
@everyone
I'll change that diffname so don't worry xd
sahuang
?? is it ready for modding
Topic Starter
Beomsan
why
Enon
u should change that fuckin diff name and remove the timing diff wtf
Topic Starter
Beomsan
There is a suspicious part in the current timing IMO so I didn't delete timing-2 diff
about diffname, lemme know your recommendation D;
it's ready for 'modding' but yea, still not sure about somethings
:-(
sahuang
Alright lets see

00:02:670 (2) - i strongly doubt if this slider is snapped correctly, coz i feel the beat occurs between 00:02:598 - and 00:02:670 -
00:09:530 (2) - same for this one, im really bad at timing but judging from 25% it seems to be off?
00:12:889 (2) - same
00:11:245 (1) - no idea why slider end is snapped like this, no sound at 1/12
The first part has so many vague sounds, i really suggest you skip it unless you want a much better and accurate timing. Your drain time is fine without it i guess ( its resonable to start from 00:13:818 - )

00:48:100 (5) - the extension seems weird and unnecessary, making it 1/8 with next circle makes it really hard. Simply ending 00:48:529 - would be a good choice
00:50:100 (2) - why not just use circles? or make 00:49:814 (1,2,1) - consistent?
01:58:386 (2) - slider head is literally not audible lol
02:38:564 (8) - not sure if you should put it here since the sound is vague
02:41:028 (5) - unsnap here, no reverse at all and slider tail isnt snapped

Pattern is generally fine but so many snapping stuff
Topic Starter
Beomsan

sahuang wrote:

Alright lets see

00:02:670 (2) - i strongly doubt if this slider is snapped correctly, coz i feel the beat occurs between 00:02:598 - and 00:02:670 -
00:09:530 (2) - same for this one, im really bad at timing but judging from 25% it seems to be off?
00:12:889 (2) - same
00:11:245 (1) - no idea why slider end is snapped like this, no sound at 1/12
The first part has so many vague sounds, i really suggest you skip it unless you want a much better and accurate timing. Your drain time is fine without it i guess ( its resonable to start from 00:13:818 - ) - I 100% agree with your opinion, deleted first part

00:48:100 (5) - the extension seems weird and unnecessary, making it 1/8 with next circle makes it really hard. Simply ending 00:48:529 - would be a good choice
00:50:100 (2) - why not just use circles? or make 00:49:814 (1,2,1) - consistent?
01:58:386 (2) - slider head is literally not audible lol
02:38:564 (8) - not sure if you should put it here since the sound is vague - Idk well tbh but maybe it is better than nothing?
02:41:028 (5) - unsnap here, no reverse at all and slider tail isnt snapped - I think it's snapped well, isn't it? :P

Pattern is generally fine but so many snapping stuff - I want to know the reason for this seriously :(
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