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M2U - Marigold (feat. Guriri) [CatchTheBeat]

posted 2017-04-28T06:25:28+00:00

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Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,780 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-04-28T06:25:28+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 12월 19일 화요일 at 오전 10:53:15

Artist: M2U
Title: Marigold (feat. Guriri)
Source: Deemo
Tags: Ascendance Sinnoh グリリ NICODE Rayark SQUAR SQUARE MUSIQ Narae Hans Diversity.
BPM: 160
Filesize: 8817kb
Play Time: 02:26
Difficulties Available:

Alice (5.48 stars, 528 notes)
Ascendance's Salad (2.22 stars, 235 notes)
Cup (1.51 stars, 208 notes)
Overdose (4.94 stars, 486 notes)
Platter (3.04 stars, 359 notes)
Sinnoh's Rain (4.01 stars, 422 notes)

Download: M2U - Marigold (feat. Guriri)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ranked #09
✦
M2U
✦
Marigold (feat. Guriri)

Love you always deeply
Genuinely, immensely, steadily with all my heart

☄ Storyboard by Spectator

● Alice by Spectator
● Overdose by Spectator
● Rain by Sinnoh
● Platter by Spectator
● Salad by Ascendance
● Cup by Spectator

♥ Nominated by autofanboy and MBomb

Last edited by Spectator 2021-07-27T12:54:43+00:00, edited 59 times in total.

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2017-05-16T04:55:01+00:00

Cool storyboard tbh

Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,780 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-05-16T05:05:53+00:00

CLSW wrote:
Cool storyboard tbh

thank you!
I'll finish it someday

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-07-09T22:54:31+00:00

Spectator wrote:
someday

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-07-11T10:58:40+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
Spectator wrote:
someday

itsu no hi ka

Hareimu

611 posts

Joined March 2014

Hareimu 2017-07-22T04:02:30+00:00

[General]

A modding assistant detected that the file Border Mask.png isn't used at all on the storyboard. Either consider deleting it or just ignore this if you're gonna use it later on
Epilepsy warning is not activated in Salad, Platter, Rain and Alice. Consider activating it due to the storyboard's moderately quick strobing at the kiai section.

[Ascendance's Salad]

Your Salad doesn't have "Ascendance" at the beginning of it's tags like all other diffs. Please fix this ASAP.
01:20:446 (6) - Maybe curve this slider a bit to the right? Y'know, for a more "flowy" feeling or something idk
01:24:196 (2) - Maybe turn this repeat into a 1/2 repeat slider instead? So to lower the note density a bit.
01:24:852 (4) - This note is over no audible sound whatsoever. Consider deleting it.
01:27:664 (7) - Maybe delete this note? Same as the previous point, the trumpet-ish 1/4 sounds do not extend onto 01:27:665 - here, having the stream to be 5 notes (01:26:446 (2) - as this repeat, f.e) fits better imo. Perhaps you could also make a dash between 01:27:571 (6,8) - these two to emphasize (8) more as well.
01:42:009 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:43:509 - here, since the most prominent sound (and more fitting to place the ending of the spinner at) is there.
01:56:259 (2) - Extend this slider to the red tick 01:56:821 - here to follow the lyrical line instead? Plays better, since Guriri's voice starts to sound stronger here.
01:57:009 (3) - Same as before :>

[Platter]

00:09:384 (6,7,8) - Move these to x:107 to make the curve smoother
01:00:009 (1) - I think this slider is lacking of proper emphasis. Modify 00:59:259 (6) - the curve of this slider and move 01:00:009 (1) - this one a bunch more to the left so that an hyperdash is triggered between the two and that should do.
01:23:259 (1,2,1) - According to the rules of the ranking criteria, "Basic hyperdashes (1/1, 1/2) may begin to appear, but must not be used in conjunction with each other.", so... 3 hyperdashes in a row seems kinda too much? Even though the sounds they're placed at are reasonably strong, consider nerfing these for the sake of meeting the rules :>
01:39:571 (3,4,1) - Same as before here.
01:54:009 (6) - Maybe move to x:203 to make it more of a progressively increasing distance curve?
02:20:821 (4) - Move this note so that the distance from the previous one is 0,40x, then move 02:20:446 (2,3,4) - all these to x:152? Makes the curve less edgy/sharp and flows better to me.
02:22:134 (1) - I think starting this spinner from 02:21:946 - here instead can still fit nicely, since this is a platter and having 1/2 of a beat of spacing between an object and a spinner is ok.

[Sinnoh's Rain]

00:58:509 (1) - Maybe move this slider to x:111 to emphasize the sound of the cymbal better? Still plays ok to me c:
01:18:009 (1,1) - I don't think these should be 1/4 sliders, since no beats can be heard at either of the slider's blue ticks they're finished at. To furthermore justify the inconsistency, you decided to use a 1/2 slider 01:19:509 (1) - here.
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - These three objects try and introduce the left-left stationary hyperdash movement concept all of a sudden, and while that's a neat thing to do, I believe you could at least 01:26:633 (3) - tilt this slider to the left instead of to the right to make it more lenient.
02:21:946 (1) - I think this spinner could finish 02:25:509 - here rather than at that red tick in which it finishes as of right now.

[Overdose]

00:04:884 (3) - Move this note to x:43 instead? Feels less sharp of a curve to me.
02:01:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - These sliders are not snapped correctly, please resnap.
01:09:009 (1,2) - The lack of movement between these objects feels a bit awkward. I've been testing around some stuff and I think that by ctrl+h'ing them and then moving them to x:322 solves the issue rather neatly.
01:26:634 (3) - Tilt this slider a bit more vertically for better flow, like this: http://puu.sh/wSh9V/ec2e72d08c.jpg
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - Move the whole to x:273 or so, right now the first slider is easily overdashable and has been causing me unnecessary shitmisses :>
02:16:321 - Maybe place a note here as well? at x:106 fits nicely to me.

[Alice]

00:17:013 (1) - I'm pretty sure I can hear 4 piano notes here, so I'd recommend to change this repeat to 1/12 instead of 1/4.
00:42:946 (3) - I suggest to move this note to x:208 so that the curve isn't that edgy/sharp.
00:54:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Uh... I think these notes are too much time over the left side of the playfield? Try to spread them a bit more to the right side as well to cover all places equally (or at least so that I don't get my OCD triggered, whichever comes first )
01:03:759 (3) - Move to x:96 for better emphasis to the cymbal sound? Also for consistency with hyperdashes.
01:09:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Me thinks these look all similar to the way you've mapped them in the overdose difficulty (assuming this diff was just intended to be a carbon copy of the overdose diff but with harder patterns on the kiai, it's only natural, but still). Consider rearranging them in different positions so that they're not so reminiscent of the previous diff?

That's it now. Best of lucks with this mapset!
(also beautiful storyboard)

Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,780 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-07-26T10:44:35+00:00

Hareimu wrote:
[General]
A modding assistant detected that the file Border Mask.png isn't used at all on the storyboard. Either consider deleting it or just ignore this if you're gonna use it later on
Epilepsy warning is not activated in Salad, Platter, Rain and Alice. Consider activating it due to the storyboard's moderately quick strobing at the kiai section.

[Ascendance's Salad]
Your Salad doesn't have "Ascendance" at the beginning of it's tags like all other diffs. Please fix this ASAP.
01:20:446 (6) - Maybe curve this slider a bit to the right? Y'know, for a more "flowy" feeling or something idk
01:24:196 (2) - Maybe turn this repeat into a 1/2 repeat slider instead? So to lower the note density a bit.
01:24:852 (4) - This note is over no audible sound whatsoever. Consider deleting it.
01:27:664 (7) - Maybe delete this note? Same as the previous point, the trumpet-ish 1/4 sounds do not extend onto 01:27:665 - here, having the stream to be 5 notes (01:26:446 (2) - as this repeat, f.e) fits better imo. Perhaps you could also make a dash between 01:27:571 (6,8) - these two to emphasize (8) more as well.
01:42:009 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:43:509 - here, since the most prominent sound (and more fitting to place the ending of the spinner at) is there.
01:56:259 (2) - Extend this slider to the red tick 01:56:821 - here to follow the lyrical line instead? Plays better, since Guriri's voice starts to sound stronger here.
01:57:009 (3) - Same as before :>

[Platter]
00:09:384 (6,7,8) - Move these to x:107 to make the curve smoother
01:00:009 (1) - I think this slider is lacking of proper emphasis. Modify 00:59:259 (6) - the curve of this slider and move 01:00:009 (1) - this one a bunch more to the left so that an hyperdash is triggered between the two and that should do. rearranged a pattern a bit to emphasize it more as I personally prefer how the current slider works
01:23:259 (1,2,1) - According to the rules of the ranking criteria, "Basic hyperdashes (1/1, 1/2) may begin to appear, but must not be used in conjunction with each other.", so... 3 hyperdashes in a row seems kinda too much? Even though the sounds they're placed at are reasonably strong, consider nerfing these for the sake of meeting the rules :>
01:39:571 (3,4,1) - Same as before here.
01:54:009 (6) - Maybe move to x:203 to make it more of a progressively increasing distance curve?
02:20:821 (4) - Move this note so that the distance from the previous one is 0,40x, then move 02:20:446 (2,3,4) - all these to x:152? Makes the curve less edgy/sharp and flows better to me.
02:22:134 (1) - I think starting this spinner from 02:21:946 - here instead can still fit nicely, since this is a platter and having 1/2 of a beat of spacing between an object and a spinner is ok.

[Sinnoh's Rain]
00:58:509 (1) - Maybe move this slider to x:111 to emphasize the sound of the cymbal better? Still plays ok to me c:
01:18:009 (1,1) - I don't think these should be 1/4 sliders, since no beats can be heard at either of the slider's blue ticks they're finished at. To furthermore justify the inconsistency, you decided to use a 1/2 slider 01:19:509 (1) - here.
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - These three objects try and introduce the left-left stationary hyperdash movement concept all of a sudden, and while that's a neat thing to do, I believe you could at least 01:26:633 (3) - tilt this slider to the left instead of to the right to make it more lenient.
02:21:946 (1) - I think this spinner could finish 02:25:509 - here rather than at that red tick in which it finishes as of right now.

[Overdose]
00:04:884 (3) - Move this note to x:43 instead? Feels less sharp of a curve to me.
02:01:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - These sliders are not snapped correctly, please resnap.
01:09:009 (1,2) - The lack of movement between these objects feels a bit awkward. I've been testing around some stuff and I think that by ctrl+h'ing them and then moving them to x:322 solves the issue rather neatly. I don't get it lol I've done what you said and it plays awkward
01:26:634 (3) - Tilt this slider a bit more vertically for better flow, like this: http://puu.sh/wSh9V/ec2e72d08c.jpg I want to keep it challenging as now.
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - Move the whole to x:273 or so, right now the first slider is easily overdashable and has been causing me unnecessary shitmisses :>as it's middle of kiai part and considering player would keep dashing, moving it closer to the previous note can also cause a shitmisses imo
02:16:321 - Maybe place a note here as well? at x:106 fits nicely to me.

[Alice]
00:17:013 (1) - I'm pretty sure I can hear 4 piano notes here, so I'd recommend to change this repeat to 1/12 instead of 1/4. It's not 1/12 imo
00:42:946 (3) - I suggest to move this note to x:208 so that the curve isn't that edgy/sharp. It's intentional choice to make the part play better
00:54:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Uh... I think these notes are too much time over the left side of the playfield? Try to spread them a bit more to the right side as well to cover all places equally (or at least so that I don't get my OCD triggered, whichever comes first )
01:03:759 (3) - Move to x:96 for better emphasis to the cymbal sound? Also for consistency with hyperdashes.
01:09:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Me thinks these look all similar to the way you've mapped them in the overdose difficulty (assuming this diff was just intended to be a carbon copy of the overdose diff but with harder patterns on the kiai, it's only natural, but still). Consider rearranging them in different positions so that they're not so reminiscent of the previous diff? ikr but I'd love to keep it as it's simply a good pattern for me. Just some parts are the similar so I'm pretty sure they wouldn't be that problematic

That's it now. Best of lucks with this mapset!
(also beautiful storyboard)

Thank you for the mod!
(also thanks

)

Lirai

1,514 posts

Joined December 2013

Lirai 2017-07-26T12:16:21+00:00

wow spec map marigold too. w

gl gl

Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,780 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-07-27T15:22:56+00:00

DE-CADE wrote:
wow spec map marigold too. w

gl gl

thank you!

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-07-27T16:37:01+00:00

spec please move the preview point back a 1/1 it hurts to listen to sometimes

Hareimu wrote:
[Sinnoh's Rain]
00:58:509 (1) - Maybe move this slider to x:111 to emphasize the sound of the cymbal better? Still plays ok to me c: ya
01:18:009 (1,1) - I don't think these should be 1/4 sliders, since no beats can be heard at either of the slider's blue ticks they're finished at. To furthermore justify the inconsistency, you decided to use a 1/2 slider 01:19:509 (1) - here. ya
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - These three objects try and introduce the left-left stationary hyperdash movement concept all of a sudden, and while that's a neat thing to do, I believe you could at least 01:26:633 (3) - tilt this slider to the left instead of to the right to make it more lenient. ya
02:21:946 (1) - I think this spinner could finish 02:25:509 - here rather than at that red tick in which it finishes as of right now. wrong timestamp but ya

hey i can add my 1/6 hyper back bc of the new rule

box

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 78009
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
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TitleUnicode:Marigold ft. Guriri
Artist:M2U
ArtistUnicode:M2U
Creator:Spectator
Version:Sinnoh's Rain
Source:Deemo
Tags:Ascendance NICODE SQUAR SQUARE MUSIQ Guriri Narae Alice Hans
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Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,780 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-07-30T07:46:31+00:00

Sinnoh wrote:

spec please move the preview point back a 1/1 it hurts to listen to sometimes done w

Hareimu wrote:
[Sinnoh's Rain]
00:58:509 (1) - Maybe move this slider to x:111 to emphasize the sound of the cymbal better? Still plays ok to me c: ya
01:18:009 (1,1) - I don't think these should be 1/4 sliders, since no beats can be heard at either of the slider's blue ticks they're finished at. To furthermore justify the inconsistency, you decided to use a 1/2 slider 01:19:509 (1) - here. ya
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - These three objects try and introduce the left-left stationary hyperdash movement concept all of a sudden, and while that's a neat thing to do, I believe you could at least 01:26:633 (3) - tilt this slider to the left instead of to the right to make it more lenient. ya
02:21:946 (1) - I think this spinner could finish 02:25:509 - here rather than at that red tick in which it finishes as of right now. wrong timestamp but ya

hey i can add my 1/6 hyper back bc of the new rule

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CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2017-08-07T10:13:23+00:00

[Storyboard]
01:12:009 에서 01:14:821 까지 배경 페이드아웃 시켰다가 01:14:821 부터 다시 원래대로 돌아오게 하는게 어떨까요
02:26:821 에 등장하는 마지막 노트에 특수한 이펙트가 있으면 좀 더 분위기를 살릴 수 있을 것 같습니다

[Rain]
00:46:509 (1) - I think it shall be better if (1) is placed on right side of 00:46:134 (4) - , so here is my suggestion with flow change of 00:47:071 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784334
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - whoa, vertical double hyperdashes in rain difficulty? pretty good try but I'm afraid if BNs accept it (well my answer is going to be YES)
however to get the consistency of HDash usage I think 01:26:820 (4) - should be HDashed so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784356 this shall be work better imo

[Overdose]
01:41:634 (7) - 이 부분이 오히려 01:41:259 (5,6) - 와 같은 방향성으로 연속하이퍼대시가 나와야 했지 않았나 싶네요, 바이올린 피치가 워낙에 커서 끝끝점프로 넣는것도 고려해보셔도 될것같습니다

[Alice]
00:05:634 (2) - 00:05:259 (1) 은 하이퍼대시인데 이건 아니라서 이질감이 듭니다. 여기도 하이퍼대시가 있었으면 좋겠네요
01:09:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ~~엌ㅋㅋㅋㅋ오버도즈랑 똑같음ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ~~
01:27:759 (4) - 이거 ctrl + g 해서 안티플로로 만들면 바이올린 피치를 제대로 살릴 수 있을것같네요
01:38:071 (3,4,5,6) - 이 부분만큼은 와리가리가 아닌 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784494 이런식으로 쭉 직진하는 형태로 바꾸시는것도?
01:41:634 (7) - 오버도즈와 동일

Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,780 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-08-07T10:23:00+00:00

Minato Yukina wrote:
[Storyboard]
01:12:009 에서 01:14:821 까지 배경 페이드아웃 시켰다가 01:14:821 부터 다시 원래대로 돌아오게 하는게 어떨까요
02:26:821 에 등장하는 마지막 노트에 특수한 이펙트가 있으면 좀 더 분위기를 살릴 수 있을 것 같습니다 원래 있었는데 문구 넣으면서 삭제했어용

[Rain]
00:46:509 (1) - I think it shall be better if (1) is placed on right side of 00:46:134 (4) - , so here is my suggestion with flow change of 00:47:071 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784334
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - whoa, vertical double hyperdashes in rain difficulty? pretty good try but I'm afraid if BNs accept it (well my answer is going to be YES)
however to get the consistency of HDash usage I think 01:26:820 (4) - should be HDashed so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784356 this shall be work better imo

[Overdose]
01:41:634 (7) - 이 부분이 오히려 01:41:259 (5,6) - 와 같은 방향성으로 연속하이퍼대시가 나와야 했지 않았나 싶네요, 바이올린 피치가 워낙에 커서 끝끝점프로 넣는것도 고려해보셔도 될것같습니다 음은 높은데 소리의 힘은 약해지는 부분이라 일단은 지금 패턴 유지할게요

[Alice]
00:05:634 (2) - 00:05:259 (1) 은 하이퍼대시인데 이건 아니라서 이질감이 듭니다. 여기도 하이퍼대시가 있었으면 좋겠네요
01:09:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ~~엌ㅋㅋㅋㅋ오버도즈랑 똑같음ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ~~
01:27:759 (4) - 이거 ctrl + g 해서 안티플로로 만들면 바이올린 피치를 제대로 살릴 수 있을것같네요
01:38:071 (3,4,5,6) - 이 부분만큼은 와리가리가 아닌 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784494 이런식으로 쭉 직진하는 형태로 바꾸시는것도? 맵
전반적으로 잘 안쓰이는 패턴이라 일단 정방향으로 바꿔두었습니다.
01:41:634 (7) - 오버도즈와 동일

모딩 감사합니다~

Xinnoh

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Xinnoh 2017-08-07T14:10:12+00:00

Minato Yukina wrote:
[Rain]
00:46:509 (1) - I think it shall be better if (1) is placed on right side of 00:46:134 (4) - , so here is my suggestion with flow change of 00:47:071 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784334 breaking expected flow = emphasis, just preference
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - whoa, vertical double hyperdashes in rain difficulty? pretty good try but I'm afraid if BNs accept it (well my answer is going to be YES) nerfed this section a lot
however to get the consistency of HDash usage I think 01:26:820 (4) - should be HDashed so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784356 this shall be work better imo I'd prefer to keep similar sounds on the reverse slider, doesn't fit to have new sounds start in middle of the slider.

uwu

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Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-08-12T05:00:59+00:00

Hareimu wrote:
[Ascendance's Salad]
Your Salad doesn't have "Ascendance" at the beginning of it's tags like all other diffs. Please fix this ASAP. Ok
01:20:446 (6) - Maybe curve this slider a bit to the right? Y'know, for a more "flowy" feeling or something idk gave it a slight curve but I think the sharp dash is more impactful for that noise
01:24:196 (2) - Maybe turn this repeat into a 1/2 repeat slider instead? So to lower the note density a bit. Ok
01:24:852 (4) - This note is over no audible sound whatsoever. Consider deleting it. The piano?
01:27:664 (7) - Maybe delete this note? Same as the previous point, the trumpet-ish 1/4 sounds do not extend onto 01:27:665 - here, having the stream to be 5 notes (01:26:446 (2) - as this repeat, f.e) fits better imo. Perhaps you could also make a dash between 01:27:571 (6,8) - these two to emphasize (8) more as well. I think they're okaaaay, the section is the most intense so I think the extra density is warranted
01:42:009 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:43:509 - here, since the most prominent sound (and more fitting to place the ending of the spinner at) is there. Ok
01:56:259 (2) - Extend this slider to the red tick 01:56:821 - here to follow the lyrical line instead? Plays better, since Guriri's voice starts to sound stronger here. Sure
01:57:009 (3) - Same as before :> b

That's it now. Best of lucks with this mapset!
(also beautiful storyboard)

Sorry Spec, I ruined your N icon ;w;

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Sorceress

332 posts

Joined September 2012

Sorceress 2017-09-28T23:47:29+00:00

Happy Friday! Here is a mod for you to celebrate with

Didn't have anything significant to say about the cup so either you're an amazing mapper or I'm a terrible modder or both

[

General]

Difficulty Spread: The Rain feels like quite a big step up from the Platter though the Rain > Overdose > Alice spread seems quite well done. It could be worth it to get an easier Rain for the spread but probably best to get some more opinions on that first.

[

Ascendance's Salad]

01:03:759 (1,2) - Timeline choice is a little odd here. Tail on 01:03:759 (1) - covers strong sounds on 01:04:509 -. Vocal also starting on 01:04:509 - isn't covered either. 01:04:884 (2) - ends on a far stronger beat than it begins on, no movement on this slider doesn't help to represent 01:05:259 - either. I think the timeline you used for 01:01:509 (1,2,3) - would fit perfectly here. Strong sounds are represented, sliders cover noticeable vocals and sliders no longer end on stronger sounds than they started on.
01:18:009 (1) - High SV here requires some rather precise walking or use of the dash mid slider which is a bit demanding for a Salad and only amplified by Tick Rate 2. Rather than adjusting SV here because that's such a pain, I'd recommend tilting out sliders like this one in the Kiai a little more so their effective length is reduced. Nothing too drastic but just a little nerf to save the suffering of hundreds of Salad players
01:19:321 (3) - Near enough the same point as above, SV feels just a bit too high on these repeaters. Tilting these a bit more would be so rad
01:25:134 (6,1,2) - Possibly too tricky for a Salad here? The immediate direction change after the dash followed by having to stop for the stack requires some good catcher control that I'm not certain players at this level have. I think this would be best without the direction change after the dash. Finding a way to make 01:25:696 (2) - fit at about 38 would be dank
02:02:259 (2,3) - Perhaps add a dash here? Feels like a good fit to go with the vocals here

[

Platter]

01:16:321 (4,5) - "Antiflow" hypers are unrankable in a Platter and whilst antiflow is not defined in the Ranking Criteria I think sliders like 01:16:509 (5) - would certainly qualify as antiflow. Should be easy enough to rework this pattern without the "antiflow"
01:26:259 (5,6) - This is a really strong hyper, I think it would be worthwhile to nerf this
01:41:446 (6,7) - Another "antiflow" hyper, please spare the poor Platter players from the evil monstrosity that is "antiflow"
02:00:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This combo comes out at 13 which is just above the Ranking Criteria Guideline's maximum of 12. Nothing major but also an easy fix by throwing a new combo in there somewhere like at 02:01:509 -
02:03:759 (1,1) - Weird to have so little movement between these. Ctrl+H on 02:04:509 (1,2) - fits rather well but then obviously you'd need to rework the rest of the pattern to fit. Or you could just Ctrl+H the rest of the map from this point on
02:05:821 (2,1) - Antiflow hyper
02:07:134 (4,1) - This hyper feels a little too strong, would suggest to nerf it a bit

[

Sinnoh's Rain]

00:22:415 (4,1) - Pretty strong distance for 1/4, would be nice if you could make this a little easier and move 00:22:509 (1) - to around x:208
00:28:321 (9,1) - Very strong 1/4 again, 00:28:509 (1) - at about x:184 would be super rad
00:39:009 (1,2,3) - The distance between 00:39:009 (1,2) - is currently larger than the distance between 00:39:571 (2,3) - but (3) is the stronger note here. I'd move 00:39:571 (2) - to around x:328
00:57:759 (2,3) - Dash distance is quite weak here and 00:58:134 (3) - is certainly worth of some emphasis, try 00:58:134 (3) - around x:480
00:58:884 (2,3,4,5,6) - Movement on this pattern feels a little shallow, possible to curve it out some more?
01:02:259 (3,4,1) - Possible to move this a couple of grid spaces right just to get 01:02:259 (3) - a bit further away from the wall?
01:33:384 (2,3,1,2) - I think a slight distance nerf here would make these a lot more comfortable to play. Try 01:33:571 (3,2) - at x:394
02:03:384 (2,3,4,5) - Little more curve on this would look and play better

[

Overdose]

00:11:071 (2) - This is about equal distance between 00:10:509 (1,3) - yet sounds like 00:11:259 (3) - is worth more emphasis here and the current spacing is a little awkward with dash usage. I'd suggest moving this to around x:264
00:11:821 (4) - Pretty much the same point as above, see how you find x:256
00:50:634 (6,1) - Most of the movement around this part is quite calm and I think it would fit well with that to nerf the hyper strength here, same with 00:51:571 (2,3) -. Moving 00:51:009 (1,2) - to x:314 or so should do the trick
00:58:884 (2,3,4,5,6) - Movement is a little shallow here, possible to add a little more curve to this curve?
01:07:321 (4,1) - Pretty low distance for a strong sound here, especially when it's followed by 01:08:071 (2,3) - just after which is an antiflow hyper for a weaker sound. Possible to atleast buff this in to a strong dash?
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - Staggered spacing on this makes this quite a tricky wiggle to do. It's not particularly comfortable to hold dash down because of the low distance between slider heads and tails but it's uncomfortable to not use dash because of the increased distances between the sliders. Would be great if you could nerf the distances between the notes here a little
01:32:196 (6,1) - That's pretty harsh antiflow for a 1/6 hyper of this distance, possible to nerf the intensity of this a bit?
01:41:634 (7,1) - Hyper here seems a little overkill. The intense Kiai has just come to a fairly abrupt end and I think that would be best represented without using a hyper here, I'd recommend a normal dash at most
01:56:071 (2,3) - Quite a strong hyper in another rather calm part of the song, I'd nerf the intensity on this so it doesn't stick out as much
02:11:071 (2) - Pretty much the same point from the start of the mod. Try putting this at x:240
02:26:821 (1) - Troll note! Are you sure you want to put players through such suffering?

[

Alice]

00:13:509 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Movement is really similar on these. You could tilt both 00:14:259 (1) - 00:15:009 (1) - more so the movement is more shallow on each, I think such movement compliments the song here as it winds down a bit
00:26:259 (1,2) - I think this hyper is a bit too strong, I'd try at least to bring it down under 6.0x DS
00:43:884 (2,1) - Same here, the hyper is already snappy and the extra distance just feels too intense. Again I think around 6.0x DS would be best
00:59:571 (6,7) - I feel this hyper here takes away from the hyper at 00:59:946 (12,1) -. The distance is noticeable larger on 00:59:571 (6,7) -, I understand the spacing on the playfield is quite awkward here but if you could find a way to at least buff 00:59:946 (12,1) - that would be great
01:07:321 (4,1) - Deja vu! Same point as in the Overdose here as this is pretty much identical
01:22:509 (1,2,3,4) - So my general opinion on the Kiai is that it's a nice step up from the Overdose building on the same ideas but harder and more intense. Really this is the only pattern I could point out as maybe worth reworking. It's rather fast and very unexpected, it can be all too easy to not read this well and misunderstand what movement is required. I'd certainly get more opinions than just mine on this but my personal thoughts would be to rework this pattern to something more similar to those you've used throughout the Kiai.

One quick minor suggestion would be to make 01:22:321 (6) - nearer vertical so it's a little easier to transition in to this pattern, less speed carried in and it's all visually closer on the screen so it's easier to read.
01:41:634 (7,1) - Same point as in the Overdose really, this being as intense as 01:41:446 (6,7) - just doesn't seem right
01:43:509 (1) - I'd use a weaker hyper here, x:368 or so
02:26:821 (1) - The thought of someone full comboing the map up to this point and then missing this note keeps me up at night.

Good luck with your map!

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-09-29T02:09:02+00:00

Sorcerer wrote:
[ Sinnoh's Rain]
01:33:384 (2,3,1,2) - I think a slight distance nerf here would make these a lot more comfortable to play. Try 01:33:571 (3,2) - at x:394 was making these a bit edge dashy, moved to x400 still

Rest fixed, good mod

sorcerer 4 bn

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Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,780 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-09-29T02:16:43+00:00

Sorcerer wrote:
Happy Friday! Here is a mod for you to celebrate with

Didn't have anything significant to say about the cup so either you're an amazing mapper or I'm a terrible modder or both

[ General]
Difficulty Spread: The Rain feels like quite a big step up from the Platter though the Rain > Overdose > Alice spread seems quite well done. It could be worth it to get an easier Rain for the spread but probably best to get some more opinions on that first.
[ Ascendance's Salad]
01:03:759 (1,2) - Timeline choice is a little odd here. Tail on 01:03:759 (1) - covers strong sounds on 01:04:509 -. Vocal also starting on 01:04:509 - isn't covered either. 01:04:884 (2) - ends on a far stronger beat than it begins on, no movement on this slider doesn't help to represent 01:05:259 - either. I think the timeline you used for 01:01:509 (1,2,3) - would fit perfectly here. Strong sounds are represented, sliders cover noticeable vocals and sliders no longer end on stronger sounds than they started on.
01:18:009 (1) - High SV here requires some rather precise walking or use of the dash mid slider which is a bit demanding for a Salad and only amplified by Tick Rate 2. Rather than adjusting SV here because that's such a pain, I'd recommend tilting out sliders like this one in the Kiai a little more so their effective length is reduced. Nothing too drastic but just a little nerf to save the suffering of hundreds of Salad players
01:19:321 (3) - Near enough the same point as above, SV feels just a bit too high on these repeaters. Tilting these a bit more would be so rad
01:25:134 (6,1,2) - Possibly too tricky for a Salad here? The immediate direction change after the dash followed by having to stop for the stack requires some good catcher control that I'm not certain players at this level have. I think this would be best without the direction change after the dash. Finding a way to make 01:25:696 (2) - fit at about 38 would be dank
02:02:259 (2,3) - Perhaps add a dash here? Feels like a good fit to go with the vocals here
[ Platter]
01:16:321 (4,5) - "Antiflow" hypers are unrankable in a Platter and whilst antiflow is not defined in the Ranking Criteria I think sliders like 01:16:509 (5) - would certainly qualify as antiflow. Should be easy enough to rework this pattern without the "antiflow"
01:26:259 (5,6) - This is a really strong hyper, I think it would be worthwhile to nerf this
01:41:446 (6,7) - Another "antiflow" hyper, please spare the poor Platter players from the evil monstrosity that is "antiflow"
02:00:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This combo comes out at 13 which is just above the Ranking Criteria Guideline's maximum of 12. Nothing major but also an easy fix by throwing a new combo in there somewhere like at 02:01:509 -
02:03:759 (1,1) - Weird to have so little movement between these. Ctrl+H on 02:04:509 (1,2) - fits rather well but then obviously you'd need to rework the rest of the pattern to fit. Or you could just Ctrl+H the rest of the map from this point on
02:05:821 (2,1) - Antiflow hyper
02:07:134 (4,1) - This hyper feels a little too strong, would suggest to nerf it a bit
[ Sinnoh's Rain]
00:22:415 (4,1) - Pretty strong distance for 1/4, would be nice if you could make this a little easier and move 00:22:509 (1) - to around x:208
00:28:321 (9,1) - Very strong 1/4 again, 00:28:509 (1) - at about x:184 would be super rad
00:39:009 (1,2,3) - The distance between 00:39:009 (1,2) - is currently larger than the distance between 00:39:571 (2,3) - but (3) is the stronger note here. I'd move 00:39:571 (2) - to around x:328
00:57:759 (2,3) - Dash distance is quite weak here and 00:58:134 (3) - is certainly worth of some emphasis, try 00:58:134 (3) - around x:480
00:58:884 (2,3,4,5,6) - Movement on this pattern feels a little shallow, possible to curve it out some more?
01:02:259 (3,4,1) - Possible to move this a couple of grid spaces right just to get 01:02:259 (3) - a bit further away from the wall?
01:33:384 (2,3,1,2) - I think a slight distance nerf here would make these a lot more comfortable to play. Try 01:33:571 (3,2) - at x:394
02:03:384 (2,3,4,5) - Little more curve on this would look and play better
[ Overdose]
00:11:071 (2) - This is about equal distance between 00:10:509 (1,3) - yet sounds like 00:11:259 (3) - is worth more emphasis here and the current spacing is a little awkward with dash usage. I'd suggest moving this to around x:264
00:11:821 (4) - Pretty much the same point as above, see how you find x:256
00:50:634 (6,1) - Most of the movement around this part is quite calm and I think it would fit well with that to nerf the hyper strength here, same with 00:51:571 (2,3) -. Moving 00:51:009 (1,2) - to x:314 or so should do the trick I want to keep the symmetrical pattern here

00:58:884 (2,3,4,5,6) - Movement is a little shallow here, possible to add a little more curve to this curve?
01:07:321 (4,1) - Pretty low distance for a strong sound here, especially when it's followed by 01:08:071 (2,3) - just after which is an antiflow hyper for a weaker sound. Possible to atleast buff this in to a strong dash?
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - Staggered spacing on this makes this quite a tricky wiggle to do. It's not particularly comfortable to hold dash down because of the low distance between slider heads and tails but it's uncomfortable to not use dash because of the increased distances between the sliders. Would be great if you could nerf the distances between the notes here a little
01:32:196 (6,1) - That's pretty harsh antiflow for a 1/6 hyper of this distance, possible to nerf the intensity of this a bit?
01:41:634 (7,1) - Hyper here seems a little overkill. The intense Kiai has just come to a fairly abrupt end and I think that would be best represented without using a hyper here, I'd recommend a normal dash at most I still think it's fine and fit with the intensity of the song. Maybe gonna keep this for now
01:56:071 (2,3) - Quite a strong hyper in another rather calm part of the song, I'd nerf the intensity on this so it doesn't stick out as much
02:11:071 (2) - Pretty much the same point from the start of the mod. Try putting this at x:240
02:26:821 (1) - Troll note! Are you sure you want to put players through such suffering? but it's still in the middle and I'm pretty sure no one misses it since it comes after the spinner
[ Alice]
00:13:509 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Movement is really similar on these. You could tilt both 00:14:259 (1) - 00:15:009 (1) - more so the movement is more shallow on each, I think such movement compliments the song here as it winds down a bit
00:26:259 (1,2) - I think this hyper is a bit too strong, I'd try at least to bring it down under 6.0x DS
00:43:884 (2,1) - Same here, the hyper is already snappy and the extra distance just feels too intense. Again I think around 6.0x DS would be best
00:59:571 (6,7) - I feel this hyper here takes away from the hyper at 00:59:946 (12,1) -. The distance is noticeable larger on 00:59:571 (6,7) -, I understand the spacing on the playfield is quite awkward here but if you could find a way to at least buff 00:59:946 (12,1) - that would be great
01:07:321 (4,1) - Deja vu! Same point as in the Overdose here as this is pretty much identical
01:22:509 (1,2,3,4) - So my general opinion on the Kiai is that it's a nice step up from the Overdose building on the same ideas but harder and more intense. Really this is the only pattern I could point out as maybe worth reworking. It's rather fast and very unexpected, it can be all too easy to not read this well and misunderstand what movement is required. I'd certainly get more opinions than just mine on this but my personal thoughts would be to rework this pattern to something more similar to those you've used throughout the Kiai.

One quick minor suggestion would be to make 01:22:321 (6) - nearer vertical so it's a little easier to transition in to this pattern, less speed carried in and it's all visually closer on the screen so it's easier to read.
01:41:634 (7,1) - Same point as in the Overdose really, this being as intense as 01:41:446 (6,7) - just doesn't seem right same as overdose
01:43:509 (1) - I'd use a weaker hyper here, x:368 or so
02:26:821 (1) - The thought of someone full comboing the map up to this point and then missing this note keeps me up at night. That's pleasure to the mapper since he will going to play my map once more

Good luck with your map!

Thanks for the mod, was really helpful!

JierYagtama

716 posts

Joined November 2015

JierYagtama 2017-10-01T03:10:42+00:00

I wonder if peeps will check out the remix of this lo but e I see M2U free mod uwu

Platter

00:25:884 (2) - would be better if you let this be a c-shaped stream instead of a stacked one imo
01:43:509 (1) - personally since this is a strong sound and yet its stacked i think a h-dash would fit better here
02:21:759 (5) - ^

Welp yea dont really have that much to say since its pretty gud already XD

Sino rain

00:59:259 (6) - hmm while playing it doesnt really give that much movement maybe curve the slider a bit more?
01:39:759 (4) - imo i think this should have more movement than emphasizing that instense sound with a stacked stream. maybe copy paste 01:40:134 (8,9,10,11) - and move it x:245?
01:43:509 (1) - I think this is kinda worthy to put a h-dash here

Dont really have much to say in ur diff also xd Flow is pretty nice but my only issue about the map is the consistency on the h-dashes between 01:00:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - and
02:04:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -

Hope the mod helps! gl

Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,780 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-10-02T00:45:58+00:00

JeirYagtama wrote:
I wonder if peeps will check out the remix of this lo but e I see M2U free mod uwu
Platter
00:25:884 (2) - would be better if you let this be a c-shaped stream instead of a stacked one imo
01:43:509 (1) - personally since this is a strong sound and yet its stacked i think a h-dash would fit better here i think it's fine
02:21:759 (5) - ^ ^

Welp yea dont really have that much to say since its pretty gud already XD

Sino rain
00:59:259 (6) - hmm while playing it doesnt really give that much movement maybe curve the slider a bit more?
01:39:759 (4) - imo i think this should have more movement than emphasizing that instense sound with a stacked stream. maybe copy paste 01:40:134 (8,9,10,11) - and move it x:245?
01:43:509 (1) - I think this is kinda worthy to put a h-dash here

Dont really have much to say in ur diff also xd Flow is pretty nice but my only issue about the map is the consistency on the h-dashes between 01:00:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - and
02:04:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -

Hope the mod helps! gl

Thanks for the mod! rest are fixed!

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-10-02T02:55:13+00:00

JeirYagtama wrote:
Sino rain
00:59:259 (6) - hmm while playing it doesnt really give that much movement maybe curve the slider a bit more? intentionally low movement for a pause, but added a little
01:39:759 (4) - imo i think this should have more movement than emphasising that intense sound with a stacked stream. maybe copy paste 01:40:134 (8,9,10,11) - and move it x:245? there's different sounds on each beat here, first is a trill so using 4x slider works for me
01:43:509 (1) - I think this is kinda worthy to put a h-dash here emphasised with lower spacing instead

Dont really have much to say in ur diff also xd Flow is pretty nice but my only issue about the map is the consistency on the h-dashes between 01:00:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - and
02:04:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - imo they are similar, but sound quite different. Used same patterns but different spacing

Hope the mod helps! gl

add sinnoh to the tags thanks

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Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-10-05T03:06:45+00:00

fixed everything except the first one. i really like the simplistic nature of it here, dunno why. thanks!

osu file format v14

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Tags:Ascendance Sinnoh NICODE SQUAR SQUARE MUSIQ Guriri Narae Alice Hans
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autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,576 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2017-10-30T15:39:54+00:00

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General]

Metadata

Can you find references to show the metadatas are correct?
Pretty sure グリリ is the official name of Guriri. Maybe you have to confirm the remaining metadatas with proof.

Tags
Remove: Guriri , Alice (Repeated)
Add: Diversity. (Album involving this song)
Also check for other suitable tags, not going to list them here.

Storyboard
Remember to enable Epilepsy Warning throughout all the difficulties! There are some flashes in the climax part.
Not a storyboarding expert, cannot really check them by myself. Probably you can find someone good at checking them and approve them, then I can work on.

AIMod Issues
Check them by yourself, there are a few issues for every difficulties.

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Cup]

Redundant Inherited Sections

01:32:259 -
01:57:009 -

Combos
Separate the notes into more combos (most likely every 4 white ticks) as no more than 8 objects should be included per combo in accordance to the Ranking Criteria.

Gameplay
00:29:259 (4,1) - The transition may be too difficult for beginners, as the end of (4) points to the right but the coming note (1) is at the left, which may distract beginners.
01:06:009 (1,2,3,4) - Not consistent with 01:00:009 (1,2,3,4) - in terms of timeline patterning.
01:11:259 (4,1,2) - Same as 00:29:259 (4,1) - , I suggest reducing the distance of (4,1) here.
01:34:509 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 7 circles consecutively may be too dense for beginners... I think 5 is already the maximum for a Cup. Maybe you can replace (4,5) with a 1/1 slider, like 01:28:509 (1,2,3,4) - .
01:38:634 (4,1) - Try to change the shape of the slider (1) here, so the start of (1) points towards (4) for better flow. Players may find it difficult to follow the flow here. Also, for 01:39:009 (1,2) - you can remove the anti-flow movement by the same change.
01:41:071 (2,3,4) - Feels a bit dense here with 2 1/2 jumps. How about changing this to a nice circle curve? Something like 01:34:884 (5,6,7,8) - would be fit.
02:04:509 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Again, not consistent with 02:10:509 (1,2,3,4) - in terms of timeline patterning. Also it doesn't feel to match vocals by the former patterning, try applying the latter.
02:15:759 (5,1,2) - A bit far for (5,1). In addition, this can be rather harsh for beginners if they missed the jump at (5,1), they will miss (2) as well. Consider reducing both distances. I think you can reduce (1,2) a bit more too because the song is going to be calm thereafter.

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Ascendance's Salad]

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01:32:259 -
01:57:009 -

Gameplay
00:04:134 (4,1) - Ambiguous distance, consider reducing it by moving 00:01:509 (1,2,3,4) - altogether to the left.
00:08:259 (2,3,4,1) - ^ All with the same issue, and every jumps can be reached without dashing. Please reduce the distances of (2,3) and (3,4), and enlarge (4,1) to guarantee a dash.
00:10:509 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think you can increase the gaps between 00:10:509 (1,2) - , (2,3), (3,4) and 00:12:759 (4,1) - here, feels a bit close to each other.
00:18:009 (1) - Consider reducing the volume of this part, because the background music remains total silent here.
00:19:884 (2,3,4,1) - Firstly, it feels a bit strange at (4) because it doesn't match the strong beat at 00:20:634 - . Secondly, the distance of (3,4) is unclear. Here would be my solution: Change (4) to a 1/1 horizontal slider beginning at 00:20:259 - ; then reduce the distance between it and 00:20:071 (3) - and add a dash at (4,1). Note that you can move 00:19:509 (1,2,3,4) - altogether to the left so it won't limit you in amending this.
00:23:071 (4,5,1) - Not so good to have 2 dashes happening here... Would be better if you remove the dash at (5,1). In addition, it doesn't match the song well by using vertical slider (5) at 00:23:259 - , because both sounds are prominent (head and tail of the slider), it seems more appropriate to use horizontal slider / 2 circles.
00:24:290 (2) - Really necessary to use 1/4? It is quite peculiar in my opinion.
00:25:509 (4,5,1) - Why not have a dash at (5,1) and omit the others at (4,5)? It doesn't emphasize the most prominent beat at (1).
00:28:790 (4) - Same as 00:24:290 (2) - .
00:29:259 (6,7,1) - Very ambiguous.
00:46:509 (1,2,3,1) - Strange emphasis there. Why not place a dash at either 00:46:884 (2,3) - or at 00:47:259 (3,1) - ? 00:46:884 (2) - is not really a strong beat so it has no point to stress it.
00:58:134 (2,1,2) - I understand you are putting a dash at 00:58:134 (2,1) - but how about reducing the distance of 00:58:509 (1,2) - more further? Feels a bit far away after the dash and it requires some momentum from the dash.

01:18:009 - 01:41:634 - The SV in this part should be slightly lower. There are so many horizontal sliders that look really unclear to players. I found myself getting the mind of dashing during the testplay. Followings are some that I find necessary to fix:
01:18:009 (1) - This needs full holding of the left-moving key. And with the dash transition at 01:17:259 (4,1) - , this is really tricky to beginners.
01:19:321 (3) - Incline it slightly.
01:21:009 (1) - ^
01:23:259 (3,4) - Ambiguous distance.
01:24:196 (2) - Same as 01:19:321 (3) - .
01:25:696 (2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - So many 1/4 streams, highly recommend to reduce the amount. Especially for 01:27:196 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , it is regarded unrankable according to the Ranking Criteria.
Ranking Criteria
01:28:134 (9,1) - Ambiguous distance.
01:28:884 (2,3) - This is pretty tricky, because (3) is with a very high SV and players need the momentum provided by the dash to catch (3).
01:33:759 (5) - Incline this please.
01:35:071 (4,5,6,7) - Ambiguous distance at (6,7) and more importantly, the anti-flow jump is too hard for beginners.
01:38:071 (3) - Again, this require full holding of the right-moving key. Please reduce the SV or incline this slider more to fix it.
01:39:009 (1,2) - Due to the high SV, too many movements here as well. How about inclining both sliders?
02:04:509 - 02:21:759 - This entire ending part doesn't contain any dashes, which seem too plain for the gameplay. How about adding some?

I think the difficulty will be much improved if the SV multiplier is reduced and 1/4 stream usage is cut down.

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Platter]

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01:57:009 -

Gameplay
00:10:134 (9,1) - How about adding a dash here?
00:12:009 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1) - Ambiguous distances... i.e. 00:12:009 (1,2,3,1) - , 00:14:821 (8,1,2,1) - .
00:59:259 (6,1) - Why not have a dash, or optimally a hyperdash here?
01:18:009 - 01:43:509 - I don't really agree with the high SV multiplier here, I would say reducing them slightly, say 1.3x would be enough already, since this part contains dense dashes and advanced patterns.
01:31:509 (5,6,7,8) - Not consistent with the patterning at 01:19:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - . Maybe you can change the pattern at the former part to make it looks different but the timing for hyperdashes is the same.
01:54:759 (8) - How about flipping this horizontally and place at original position - x:213? No point to apply anti-flow movement here too considering that this part is the calmest part of the song.

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Sinnoh's Rain]

Redundant Inherited Sections

01:31:509 - to 01:32:196

Gameplay
00:23:071 (3,4,5,1) - Reduce the distance of (4,5) please, because most players will get distracted by the 1/4 hyperdash at (3,4), it will be quite difficult for them to recover.
01:20:196 (8,1,2) - 1/6 hyperdash is unrankable as stated in the Ranking Criteria. Note that the song is at 160 BPM and the rule stated that 1/6 hyperdashes are accepted UNDER 160 BPM. If you wish to use hyperdash here, consider grouping 01:19:884 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - as a nice 1/6 curve stream, then add a hyperdash between 01:20:259 (1,2) - .
Ranking Criteria
01:20:821 (3,1) - Honestly I don't agree using anti-flow despite being the climax part. But I think you can make it easier to catch by inclining (3).
01:25:884 (3) - Ctrl+G? It flows better in my opinion.
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - Considering this is still a Rain, maybe use horizontal slider for (3) instead. The current one produces sudden stops at (3) which can be so tricky to most players. Or in a better way, for 01:26:633 (3,4,1) - , group (3,4) together and only add hyperdash to (4,1).
01:32:134 (11,1,2) - Same problem.

[

Overdose]

Gameplay

00:21:009 (1,2,3) - Maybe reduce the distances of (1,2) and (2,3) by moving (2) to the left slightly?
00:52:321 (4,1) - AAAAAAAA Such distance

Nice overdose. Good work!

[

Alice]

Gameplay

00:19:884 (2,3,1) - The pattern of (2,3) really trips me off and misses (1) eventually. Consider using other patterns to replace the current one at (2,3).
01:15:384 (2,3) - Maybe you can add a hyperdash here to show difference with the Overdose difficulty?
01:22:602 (2,3) - The gap here is quite big, reduce it slightly please.
01:24:196 (2,3,4,5,6) - Isn't that sound strange and not matching with the song? I think the beats are at 01:24:384 - (prominent) and 01:24:571 - . Maybe you can change a bit here to fit that rhythm while keeping the intensity you developed in the climax part.
01:24:946 (2,3,4,5,6) - This looks really bizarre in gameplay despite I know you want to showcase dash-holding movements. Maybe you can just map this like 01:21:759 (1,2,3,4,5) - . This one is really difficult to follow and read.
01:28:040 - How about having a note here? Try putting it at x:135, then move 01:28:321 (9) - to the right slightly to make it easier.
01:38:352 (5,6,7) - See if you can allocate a hyperdash at (6,7). The current one is really harsh because players who missed the hyperdash at (5,6) will miss the rest. It is in fact possible to do so, but I will leave that to you: *Screenshot

Good luck!

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