Mod from my
queue.
Metal Fantasy00:04:450 (2) - looks like an ugly slider from 2008, I know u can do better than this
00:20:200 (11) - NC
00:22:300 (7,8,9,10) - ugly, no reason for it to get straight
00:26:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - map it as 1/3 instead
00:27:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - weird shape, I suggest that 00:28:450 (9,10,11,12,13) - should be bent in the same angle as 00:27:850 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:36:250 - from here you can hear distinctive drums in the music which you seem to be completely ignoring. Rework the stream shapes so that they express the importance of the drum sounds (maybe space them differently? idk)
00:51:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - flow is weird, spacing is weird, shapes are simple and ugly
01:23:950 (3,4,5,6,1) - only map (3) and (1), I know it may be an undermap but it transitions better from a 1/4 section to a 1/3 section, as it is right now it's unexpected and sudden
01:33:100 (7) - again, things like these are just weird, you change the stream shape without adding a new combo (I'll stop mentioning these now, but they are all over the map)
01:51:850 (1,2,3) - feels too stationary, add some more movement ther
02:02:350 (8,9,10,11,1) - again weird transition, besides the stream should start bending from02:02:350 (8) - , not 02:02:275 (7) -
03:52:450 (6) - NC geez
04:57:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - stream gets straight at the end without any change in the music
05:49:900 (2,5) - stack
08:00:250 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - change in spacing without a reason again
Meh, what can I say. You have some interesting stream shapes but overall this map seems really really simple and geometrical, I just feel like even though the song is interesting the map doesn't portray it, instead gives a feeling of boredom and repetitiveness (also there are some unexpected changes in spacings without a reason which I don't really support)
gl