1. Easy - 7Key (1.33 stars, 300 notes)
2. Hard - 7Key (3.21 stars, 981 notes)
3. Insane - 7Key (4.67 stars, 1273 notes)
4. Normal - 7Key (2 stars, 567 notes)

MrDorian wrote:

hi len

General

Holy macaroni that spread is horrible, I hope you will add more difficulties and maybe custom hitsounds D: ok so for the hs,
i actually have custom but forgot to change the green line sampleset. In any case, antalf got it covered cause the hs are getting replaced and stuff.ok, so here's the thing. What makes this a bad spread? Is it that i do not cater to as much people as possible? Adding an easy diff is not necessary, and filling in another H diff is just overkill. The gap between NM, HD, and IN are actually quite consistent without SR in mind considering the level of LN difficulty HD possesses. I would like to see concrete examples on how this is a bad spread than just this being only 3 diffs as a line of reasoning.
check aimod btw this alone is deserving of kds.

Normal

00:14:606 (14606|3) - don't you think this should be 2 notes? The sound is like 00:14:927 (14927|6,15249|4) - so you could just do 37 26 15 or 17 26 35, it would be pitch correct and stuff this is reflective of the so-called "symmetrical patterning" where any single note at col 4 is the equivalent of double notes in any other column
00:21:035 (21035|3) - I see no reason for this to be one note, could you explain? actually follows the same logic as above but yeah, these do deserve to be doubles. Anyway, im buffing NM.
00:30:249 (30249|3,30677|5) - 00:33:677 (33677|3,34106|2) - these would be nicer if they were in one column to represent the pitch (look for more ofc) im bad w/ pr, ill need a pr mod on this D:
00:53:177 (53177|1) - ahh there's so long ghost hold part, could you shorten it to the red line? 00:56:392 (56392|2) - this as well good but for lns with 1/4 empty space, i kept them for simplicity
01:10:535 (70535|0,70963|2,71392|0) - instead of this make 1 2 3 perhaps to represent the pitch good did the same for another section
01:17:177 - oh pls, you could vary it somehow, it's sooo boring even though I know what effect you want to get yeah sure

you need some serious nuking here fam D::::

Hard

00:28:427 (28427|3,28535|2,28642|1,28749|0,28856|5,28963|4,29070|3) - holy shit this looks so stupid, I know that you want to map under these wubwubs, but it looks so ghosty, so lns would be better to be honest i wouldn't say theyre stupid it's just that it is not very proper to introduce an ln usage this early.
01:17:177 - vary this part more pls, add some more notes or something copied alterations to normal
01:36:892 (96892|1,96999|2,97106|3,97213|4) - would be nicer if was 1 3 5 7 instead of that, but it's up to you I guess went for 2356 instead

Insane

01:01:749 (61749|6,61749|4,61749|5,61856|1,61963|2,62070|3,62177|4,62285|0,62392|1,62499|2,62606|3,62713|4,62820|5,62927|6,63035|3,63142|2,63249|1,63356|0) - this MUSN'T be here according to RC :VC boots up ai-mod no 7kro violation? we good.
01:08:499 - this little part here as well ^
01:15:624 (75624|1,75677|5,75731|4,75785|3,75838|2,75892|1,75945|2,75999|3,76052|4,76106|5,76160|4,76213|3,76267|2,76320|5,76320|1,76320|4) - this looks dumb and spy-ish, change it pls ;w; spy-ish wouldnt be the proper analogy. This is 5k zigzagging. Something that is actually rather manageable and it also works as a peek on the 1/8 spam on the kiai section. I'd say some 1/8s in the kiai are actually harder to pull off than this one.
nice semidump

Mentholzzz wrote:

too short for kds i think D:

Normal

00:02:177 - single here

Hard

00:26:177 - Double youre good
00:51:892 - Single ^
00:53:177 - remove the one at column 5 ^
01:28:749 - Triple ^
01:15:517 - delete this timing point that's a volume line you dingdong
01:33:892 - that part is too hard lol https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8450844 simplified further

Minseo2000 wrote:

Mod requested from RRM discord

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

Will be a terribad mod since I haven't modded properly in ages
And no I definitely did not just advertise the RRM discord server

Hard

00:04:856 - I think you're missing a note here. Although a bit tiny, there seems to be a synth sound here like the other 1/4s. just a soft hi-hat, im not adding that. all charted 1/4ths are intended to only follow the drum thing

After listening a while i think there are notes for all 1/4s from 00:01:749 - all the way to 00:13:749 -
The 1/4 synths alternate from loud - quiet, with the first of the quiet sequence being the smallest. read above

00:38:927 (38927|2,39035|6,39035|4,39142|2,39249|4) - Might be a bit too sudden. Your map has been mostly simple LNs and short bursts of 1/4 streams and this is a tiny trill mixed with LNs that connect to pretty long LNs. ok ok

00:39:463 - 00:42:463 - This section feels really empty imo. It's supposed to be the height of intensity of the first half of the song but there's only just a few long LNs and a few SNs. Perhaps you can add some nice single note trilly streams here and make the part before 00:38:927 (38927|2,39035|6,39035|4,39142|2,39249|4) - a bit more anchored to make a more natural progression. it has been consistent throughout the whole mapset that this section is underdone. I would say that the LN overlaps can be indicative of complex LNs in the later sections.
but seriously i just dont like more SR

00:53:927 (53927|1,54035|3,54142|0,54249|2,54463|1,54677|3) - Perhaps you can try moving these notes around to make the LNs go 1->2->3->4 to have better pitch relevancy? [url=Something like this I guess]http://i.imgur.com/d9sMAe6.png[/url] did not follow the ss but did something that has a similar motion

00:55:749 - Same goes for the notes around here. Perhaps you can try making the LNs go 1->3->5->7? followed the lns, rice are different

01:03:463 - ~ 01:06:892 - It might be a nice idea to make the notes here different from the notes at 01:01:749 - ~ 01:03:463 - as they clearly have different sounds. Maybe you can make this part harder to help let the difficulty progress better into the slightly harder section that starts at 01:06:892 - . not really sure how to pull that off

01:15:463 - ~ 01:23:606 - This feels really underwhelming as the difficulty drops from what a normal 4~5* players would play (yes your map is underrated af) to a completely beginner pattern. did something that is quite difficult but not SR inflating >:D

01:42:892 - ~ 01:44:606 - Maybe you can put a little emphasis on each of the last notes of the 4-note sequence as they are clearly louder and higher pitched? did something cool

Insane

SR jumps from 3.19* to 4.69* wew h e h

00:01:749 - ~ 00:13:749 - The same thing I mentioned in Hard. There are tiny synth sounds at the 1/4s you missed. same as hard

Note that the jacks are pretty heavy on the left index finger as well.
00:01:749 (1749|2,1856|2,2177|2,2392|2,2499|2,2820|2,2927|2,3249|2,3677|2,3785|2,4320|2,4427|2) -
00:06:035 (6035|2,6142|2,6356|2,6677|2,6785|2,7106|2,7213|2) -
It's like half the jacks are on the left index finger 13 left vs 10 right index jacks is not a long stretch. + this section would be super ass to remake :< those jacks are already perfect from a playability standpoint

00:27:463 - ~ 00:29:177 - Feels a bit underwhelming here as there's only some simple LNs and short 1/8 bursts despite the chaotic synths. I think it's fine to add a few more LNs. tried something though idk how to ready express this section better

00:29:606 - ~ 00:37:749 - No problem with the SVs here but it feels quite right hand heavy. You put like 90% of the anchored notes on the right hand.
00:30:035 (30035|6,30249|6,30249|5,30463|5,30463|6) - 00:31:749 (31749|6,31963|6,32177|6) - 00:33:035 (33035|5,33249|5,33463|4,33677|4,33677|5,33892|5,33999|4,34213|4) - 00:34:749 (34749|6,34963|6,35177|4,35392|4) - 00:36:463 (36463|5,36677|5,36892|6,37106|6,37106|5,37320|5,37535|6,37749|6) -
All on right hand >:(

00:38:177 - ~ 00:39:463 - just saying but the pattern here on this diff is easier than Hard's in case you left this part untouched in Hard. lemme buff that real quick

00:39:463 - ~ 00:42:463 - And again it really feels underwhelming here as it switched from pretty nice SVs and chords to just a few LNs. sharing the same sentiments here like Hard

Not sure if you want to emphasize PR more on 00:49:749 - ~ 01:01:749 - this section anymore as it looks a bit more dense than Hard. idk how to pr i need help

01:16:052 (76052|4,76160|4,76320|4) - I kinda struggled a lot more than I should have to hit this. oh

01:17:177 - ~ 01:23:606 - This part still feels a bit underwhelming as it's really just simple SNs when you just had a nice noodle section just before it. Maybe you can make it a bit jack-based like the intro, but a bit less intense? section is too broken (not broken bad but broken non consistent 1/4ths)
to add some jacks that transition well than something just isolated

01:33:677 (93677|1,93892|1,94106|1,94320|1,94535|1) - 01:37:320 (97320|5,97535|5,97749|5,97963|5,98177|5) - Well I didn't see 5 note anchors in this map until now. now just 4
The latter is almost a 7 note anchor tho 01:36:838 (96838|5,97052|5,97320|5,97535|5,97749|5,97963|5,98177|5) - while this is anchored quite heavily this might just be much easier to play than most alternatives.

01:39:624 (99624|4,99731|4) - idk why but I had to struggle a bit to hit this. play more delays >:D

Please add more SVs

Gotta love some noodle and SVs.
Good luck on ranking (if it's for rank.)

JztCallMeRon wrote:

Haiiii m4m mod inc o/

[General]
Would suggest to untick widescreen support unless you have a storyboard wtf how does only easy diff have this

le mod

[Easy]

• 00:54:249 - missing note? or intentional? intentional cause a chain of 1/2 notes that long would be baaaaad
  01:13:749 (73749|6,73749|3) - pattern suggestion: http://puu.sh/wCbtW/70fefe19c8.png idk feels about right for me in transitioning for the next section. up to you to apply xd o shit fuk me yeah this is good

[Normal]

• 
  Would suggest to increase the HP to 7.5 for an even spread bet diffs ya sur
  00:27:035 - would suggest to put a LN here for the synth like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8515736 sound is a bit too problematic to just be covered with an ln. I think just leaving it would be better.
  01:15:463 (75463|0) - would suggest cutting this LN at 01:16:320 and add another LN, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8515764 looking good

[Hard]

• 
  00:28:749 (28749|0,29070|3) - ghost notes? nah weird just a weird transision between synths but there's actually a sound
  01:10:320 to 01:15:463 - i would suggest toning down the use of triple to doubles only since the kicks on parts like 01:10:320 (70320|4,70320|5,70320|6) is not strong enough as the ones in the earlier parts like 00:29:177 (29177|0,29177|2,29177|6) idk just a suggestion, still up to you to apply direction switching should be enough

okay i got nothing to say about insane diff LOL comfy patterns UwU hope my mod helped. Good luck!!

Mentholzzz wrote:

Some more random suggestion on Easy
00:21:892 (21892|4,22106|3) - I suggest to change them to double like what you do at 01:37:320 - difficulty progression mah boi
00:22:749 - it shouldn't be double since the same sound (like 00:23:606 - and 00:25:320 - ) you dont use Double on them. -1 move to 2
00:36:892 (36892|3,37320|3) - what's the point for having this minijack? it's a 1/1, the stack doesnt make it any harder

eyes wrote:

M4M, my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/619531
|1-7|

[Easy]
00:01:320 (1320|3) - hitsounding looks weird, place 1 hitsound on 1 note, not 2 hitsound on 1 note but why
00:01:320 - I guess symmetric double will look more opportunely but it's subjective thing agreed
00:04:535 (4535|2,5177|2) - avoid but why. looks rather simple to play
00:13:320 (13320|5,13749|5) - ^ 1/1 gap don't see a reason to avoid this
00:15:463 - alternate jacks between hands, like right-left-reght-left, not left-left-left-right-right-right ok
00:25:749 (25749|4,26606|4) - avoid 1/1 gap is nothing too bad
00:26:606 (26606|4,26606|6,27463|4,27463|6) - sounds are different so I think it will be better if you place these chords on different columns inclusion of 4 would be awkward and other combinations arent as comfy to play
00:36:892 (36892|3,37320|3) - avoid balanced
01:01:749 (61749|3) - move to another column since these 01:00:035 (60035|3,61749|3) - are different sounds will be resolved in poly's pitch mod
01:37:320 (97320|2,97320|0,97535|0,97535|2) - looks too hard for easy diff maybe ill need a raised alternative tho
01:41:177 (101177|1,102035|1) - avoid 1/1 gap
01:44:177 (104177|3) - end it here 01:44:499 simplified for ez and that means ill have to shorten a lot of other lns

[Normal]
00:09:035 (9035|4,9249|2,9463|4,9677|2,9892|4) - is this intended
00:10:749 (10749|2,11177|2,12035|2,12463|2) - ^ 1/1 index stacks are easy
00:22:320 (22320|5,22749|5,23392|5,23820|5) - avoid 1/1 stack is fine
00:37:320 (37320|3,37427|4,37535|5,37642|6) - maybe reverse because it sounds like opposite to previous stair 00:35:606 yeah sure(35606|2,35713|3,35820|4,35927|5,36035|6)
00:37:749 (37749|0,38177|0) - avoid
00:51:035 (51035|0,51463|0) - ^
00:52:749 (52749|2,53177|2) - ^ 1/1 stacks. It is as if youre against trilling in normals :<
00:57:892 (57892|1,58749|1,59606|4,60035|4) - ^ 1/1 gap
01:06:892 - looks too hard for normal diff that's the idea. To have a linear but underrated SR spread

PublicCNW wrote:

Requested PR mod

I'll try my best to clarify whatever's sensitive to me in the beatmap, but mostly wont touch playability stuff cos i succ at 7k

Column 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

General opinion for the song

personally there's a 'egyptian' feel to the melody so the some note can be moved a col to the left to replicate the skipping of semitones in the melodic line. So in the case when the melody comes out (eg 00:13:749), I prefer to map the 3rd note a column apart (eg [4][3][1], not [4][3][2]). holy crap that's so technical. Though most of the placements have pattern practice in mind in this diff
sometimes it goes the other way around, moving the 2nd/3rd note one column up because the melodic scale is weird :"D

Easy

00:13:749 (13749|3) - suggest move to col 2 weird, the note in already in 2
00:22:106 (22106|4) - move col 5 to replicate the drum sound yeah, im deliberately trying to avoid 1/2 jacks in this diff
00:40:320 (40320|5,40749|2) - swap both columns swap but spreaded out for anatomical reasons
00:51:463 (51463|2) - move to col 5 did some stuff from ^ somehow ended at 5
00:52:963 (52963|5) - move to col 6 kept for simplicity
00:53:177 (53177|2) - move col 5 to replicate same note in melody fair point, + changed the three notes
00:56:177 (56177|6,56392|5) - swap columns! no swap but follows similar flow
00:57:463 (57463|3,57892|1) - swap too did a bunch of stuff
01:01:749 (61749|4,62606|1) - personally would like for them to be switched to col 7 and 6 respectively to fit melody. if that doesnt work too well cos the note before is also in col 7, another method would be to put into col 6 and 5 went for 73 and mixed up a lot of lns prior
01:23:606 (83606|5,83820|3) - both in col 5 to replicate drum sound avoiding 1/2 jacks
01:30:892 (90892|1) - move col 2 more playable like this

note: anything in the next few diff maps which are similar to this can be applied with the same method

Normal

00:14:606 (14606|3,14606|5) - Move to col 1 and 7 respectively to fit the melodic interval (on the right few columns) and to match the symmetrical pattern did a bunch of stuff to make this work
00:14:927 (14927|1,14927|7) - Instead, move this to col 3 and 5 ^ well this is on 26 now because of ^
00:15:249 (15249|5,15249|3) - move to col 2 and 6, this leads up to the next double which will end the melody as close to the center column as possible. and this is now a 4
00:15:463 (15463|2,15463|6) - move to col 3 and 5 respectively, what i said above^ this i did
00:37:320 (37320|4,37427|5,37535|6,37642|7) - arrange them to col [7][6][5][4] instead, the melody isnt clear but the chord pitch is lower so by default I visualize the stair as going to the left when you're right handed! probably altered to your suggestion by the previous mod
00:40:320 (40320|4,40749|1) - as implied in the Easy diff yep
00:51:463 (51463|1) - ref. Easy diff
00:54:035 (54035|5,54035|7) - move to col 1 and 3, the melodic pitch is increasing so the chord goes to the right instead, leading up to the next double:
00:54:463 (54463|3,54463|1) - move to col 5 and 7 ^
00:55:749 (55749|7,55749|2) - shift to col 1 and 6, same as above case
00:56:177 (56177|1,56177|6) - shift to col 2 and 7
00:57:463 (57463|5,57892|2) - swap column ref. Easy diff
00:58:320 (58320|4) - move to col 6, led up by the increasing melodic pitch in the prev 2 notes
01:01:749 (61749|4,62606|1) - ref. Easy diff up to this point, i followed the lns in easy to some extent.

note: will try to explain next 2 parts with image
. The pitches actually get lower and lower for every 8 note group, so I recommend the first and last 8-note group to be swapped so it becomes:

. not sure if you want the stairs to be symmetrical, but if you want to prioritize PR you can make the stairs go from right to left instead yeah ill have to pass this out for dual motions

01:30:356 (90356|4,90677|5,90677|3) - maybe make the double go first so it becomes 01:30:356 (90356|3,90356|5,90677|4), where the doubles go first and leads up to the lowest pitch note in the center column made it that like so that the transition will work for any-handed player
01:39:463 (99463|4,99570|3,99677|2,99785|1) - make the stairs go from left to right instead cos the chord pitches are increasing pattern practice

i'll get this done by tmr i guess, parents asking me to sleep at 10:30pm jeez it's an hour early >:c
will post separately for hard and insane

Mage wrote:

why this did't win xd great map

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

Insane:
check aimod well that's kinda sad
00:11:177 (11177|1,11285|1,11392|2,11499|2) - looks weird, 00:11:177 (11177|1,11285|1) - replace to 1 this plays fine no worries
00:14:820 - sound ends here, so end LNs here sv section will cause some weird stuff
00:15:142 - same ^
00:18:035 (18035|4) - it's should be 1/4 LN, but better to replace it to simple note hey, i like the idea of 1/4 note usages
00:19:749 (19749|6) - 00:24:892 (24892|5) - 00:26:606 (26606|5) - same ^
00:28:320 (28320|0,28374|1,28427|2,28481|5,28535|4,28588|3,28642|2,28695|1,28749|0) - looks like overmapped i don't hear 1/8 sounds 1/8. play on %25
00:28:856 - but it's ok
00:42:249 - why didn't you finish LNs here for that nice 1/4 gap reverse shield
01:16:749 - add note? cant do that, sv section
01:20:606 (80606|3,80606|6,81035|6,81035|3,81463|6,81463|3) - why this chord repeats 3 times, but before only 2 :thinking: good catch

Hard:
nope

Normal:
00:42:249 - finish LN here and add double 1|7 yeah sure but moved the doubles after to 35

Easy:
00:42:249 - same as in Normal rather difficult this early into the diff
00:54:249 - add note for main melody ^

omg it's so hard to mod this map because of mapping style, sorry uwu

PublicCNW wrote:

okkk so part 2 of post cos I didnt manage to finish up ytd D: modding Hard and Insane in 15 mins challenge

Column 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

And as usual, the previous edits made in easier diffs can still apply if they're suitable for the treatment ^^

Hard

00:34:106 (34106|7) - Possible to move to col 5? The pitches are increasing so it can be applied to fit the pitch not much pitch here this is patterning at this point
00:34:320 (34320|3,34320|1,34320|5) - Personally would move to col 3, 5, 7 to fit the chord pitch increase ^
00:38:927 (38927|7,39249|5) - Swap columns to fit the pitch more, leading up to change in next LN would result in an overly difficult pattern and i cant come up with something that works
00:39:463 (39463|7) - This could then go to col 6 yeah, that cant happen because of ^
00:52:535 (52535|6) - Move to col 3 or any other column to the left
00:54:035 (54035|4,54249|6,54463|2) - change to col 2-5 stairs going from left to right, fits the pitch change better?
00:57:892 (57892|3) - change to col 5
01:00:035 (60035|1) - this could go col 6 up to here, section is altered to liking in reference to Easy

Overall: wew thats some dANK LN

Insane

00:38:927 (38927|6,39249|2) - Suggest to swap both column LN cos the lower pitch goes first. In this case the left column will start holding first this i managed to work with
00:52:535 (52535|6,52749|4) - swap columns
00:54:035 (54035|6,54463|2) - swap too
00:57:892 (57892|3) - move to col 5! same as hard

Note: personally I dont have much to mod out of PR cos in this diff and Hard diff, playability is also important so that the map is comfortable enough, but I haven't played enough 7k to know if this is comfortable. Also, good shet there

yay no need kds for this ^^ gl to ranc

No_sync wrote:

hi!

From my NM/M4M queue.

Columns 7K 0|1|2| 3 |4|5|6

General

MP3: PASS
BG: PASS
Video: SKIP

1. Not needed.

BPM & Offset: PASS
Diff.Spread: PASS
Diff.Name: PASS
HP & OD: MISS

1. Two suggestions...(OD=7 is intended?)
   
   1. Hard: OD=7 -> OD=7.5
   2. Insane: OD=7 -> OD=8

consider that both hard and insane has some pretty difficult lns. The OD should stay.
Hitsound: PASS
Hitsound Volume: PASS
Kiai Time: MISS

1. In Easy, finish the kiai time at 01:42:892 - like all the difficulties.

ok
Metadata: PASS
Widescreen Support: PASS
Preview Point: PASS
AiMod Things: MISS

1. From Insane, Why two? https://puu.sh/wJ7kr.png Erase one, AiMod shows the error too.

covered in a previous mod

Mod!

[Easy]

00:14:606 (14606|4,14927|3,15249|2) - I rather try this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8597745 <- Fits better in my opinion. the lack of a spacebar usage kinda bothers me

00:21:892 (21892|4,22106|3,22320|2) - I think this also like above, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8597777 did a 354 instead because of the ln

00:45:892 - I rather add a longnote here for that synth? sound, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8597818 <- Also, for evade the rest. did stuff

01:37:320 (97320|0,97535|0) - I rather move these two notes one column to right (to |1|) I think is better use middle+index finger instead of ring+index. would be more impactful if the finger usage was more spread out. Will be willing to hear second opinions on this

Great difficulty! :3

[Normal]

00:13:320 (13320|4) - No chord here? Before was mapped with chords every 1/1 beat. odd

00:42:892 - I rather do this instead, so it will be different to the Easy difficulty: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8597905 did stuff similar to higher diffs

00:52:320 - I think will be good to add a note more here for kick, also because is the Longnote end. oo good one

01:06:035 (66035|6,66249|2,66463|0,66677|5) - T think these notes can be arranged like this instead, for symmetry: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8597953 ok

01:37:320 (97320|2,97320|0,97535|2,97535|0) - To be different of all the chords there: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8597985 nah that's for impact

Another great one, i like the consistency on the symmetry.

[Hard]

00:01:963 (1963|3,1963|0) - Intended chord? I don't see this later. I think that the chords are for the kicks, 1/1 beat right?

00:02:392 (2392|6,2392|4) - ^Also here.

00:15:892 (15892|4,15892|6,16320|6,16320|4,16749|5) - No chord in the last one? for all things here an above, i did some personal checking so i wont look at these mods. probably fixed

00:21:463 (21463|0,21463|6,21463|4) - Isn't a chord like before. did a jack on one column

00:21:892 (21892|1,21892|3,21892|0,22106|2,22106|4,22106|6) - I think will look better in this way: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8598041 read above. i didn't do full chord jacking to transition better into the ln placements

00:22:963 (22963|0,22963|2,22963|3) - There is an extra note in |2| ? very strong sound. This is ok

00:42:892 (42892|3) - Well... is different here, lol. Up to you then. LOL

01:06:892 (66892|6,67320|5,67749|4,68177|3) - The Last one of those for symmetry, Isn't a Longnote? so i did the extra long notes to compensate for the lack of on ln in col 4. If i pulled off an ln there, it would end up having a very awkward look because of the reverse shielding

From 01:17:177 to 01:23:177 - I think this part is pretty similar to Easy and Normal. I rather use chords here. did a bunch of stuff

01:31:535 (91535|0,93677|5,93677|3) - This look inconsistent in my opinion, i don't know what trying to do here. For me 01:33:677 (93677|5) - is an extra note if i compare with the rest. removed extra note instead

01:34:963 (94963|4,95392|4,95820|4,95820|6) - Another example of above, skipping from now on.

01:37:749 (97749|1) - I rather move this note to |0| for symmetry. this is done for chord expression with 1/2 jacking

The rest is great, i like those Longnote variations.

[Insane]

00:01:749 (1749|2,1856|2,2392|2,2499|2,2820|2,2927|2) - Too much jacks here? I rather do some variations like you did in the other hand: 00:02:070 (2070|4,2177|4,2606|6,2713|6,3249|4,3356|4,3463|6,3570|6). So, suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8598206 Skipping from now on. jacks have been playtested to death. This example right here looks too monodirectional

...and nothing more, great! Those Longnote walls :3

...7K hype?

Good Luck!

Fresh Chicken wrote:

I like it

Insane

00:01:374 - I'd like to make this SV to 0.85 or 0.87, actually this space is pretty huge so nothing will gonna make big difference even if this SV get calculated.
0.85 is not calculated, but this SV will make more good an effect what you want to express. teleports dont really need calculations, this looks good

00:02:499 (2499|2,2499|4) - Maybe remove one, due to of consistent with 00:04:213 - 00:05:927 - 00:07:642 - 00:09:356 - and more
bunch of other fixes i did
00:02:499 (2499|2) - remove
00:03:249 (3249|2) - remove

00:21:677 - What about add a one more LN for here, 00:21:570 - ~ 00:21:892 - this space gives pretty empty feeling. instead of adding an ln, i moved one of the lns to col 3

00:21:892 - 00:22:106 - Maybe gonna add a more note each others, pitch of bigger sound is not so big problem but I even felt this while playing, it should be pretty personal but hmm...I just personally want this. loudness isnt that very distinct so im ok with the current setup however the previous suggestion might have switch up some of the chord columns into something better. right now there's a col 4 stack

00:27:892 - Wrong snap. wait you want me to use 1/12? i seriously think the sound in on 1/8 even checked it on %25

Right snap

00:38:927 - What about this? looks overly biased against the right hard, went for https://puu.sh/xMwsU/ee3bb2dc59.png instead

This

00:39:463 (39463|6,41177|3,41177|0) - 00:42:249 - Much better to finish in here, because 1/8 sounds also finished on here and 00:42:249 (42249|2,42249|4) - this one also exist, so for playable too. ok then

01:15:892 - Try to make 65-23-65-23-456 this, doesn't mean 1234543212345 is bad but we can improve more. really wanted to do something rigid, current suggestion has a trilly nature. dont really want to introduce those. Went with this instead https://puu.sh/xMwCh/f9f02c8135.png

01:22:963 - Double here due to of 01:22:535 - for consistent, seems you were trying to emphasis synth with double. ye

01:30:892 - For 1/8s,
Generally 1/8 with dubstep is unrankable stuffs due to uncertain sounds, (ya I also don't like this one)
so for keep these 1/8s, we need a permission of QAT.