hi, as your request
seems biggest concerns towards similarity are addressed so i'm just throwing mine
Crimson Rebellion
seems biggest concerns towards similarity are addressed so i'm just throwing mine
Crimson Rebellion
- 00:04:709 (1,2,3) - should they be drum sampleset so they are consistent with others?
- 00:21:109 - seems to miss a finish here considering your previous hitsounding
- 00:23:450 (1,3) - clap on head?
- 00:30:182 (4) - ctrl-g the slider so the pattern goes 100% symmetry? plays smooth too
- 01:15:324 (4,1) - spacing bump in stream here might seem minor but it makes little sense to me, comparing it with 01:15:617 (4,1) - where music changes vastly.
- 01:46:715 (1,2) - maybe it's just personal preference but i'd suggest making a little change in rhythm here to follow vocal -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7941342 (also cuz i saw you were mapping similar red tick vocals previously like 01:33:032 (6,1) - )
- 01:51:983 (3,4) - the sudden small spacing looks out of place, i don't see the point in it
- 02:00:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - check your hitsounding in the stream, it sounds to me that some samplesets are wrongly set
- 03:14:812 (1,2) - what about ctrl-g to make 03:14:520 (1,2,1,2) - 03:15:105 (1,2,1,2) - movement & spacing similar?
- 03:23:885 (1,2,1,2) - 03:28:568 (1,2,3,4) - minor one, happened to notice an inconsistency in combo setting
- 03:32:812 (1) - you didn't nc other similar spots so yea
- 04:19:203 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - while the vocal is strong all the way i don't think the pattern requires such a sharp turn here, and i'm a bit doubtful about the playability of this pattern but since it's out of my playing skill if you have some good testplay results and good reasoning that's also okay.