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SUPER HYPER AYA
Hi From #Modreq
Sorry if it's small since i'm pretty new to modding but hope it helps
Great Mapset overall !

[Normal]
00:29:453 (2,3,3,1) - Think those sliders needs more soulds, like claps , without it, feels like a break in the rythm
00:58:595 (1,1,2,1,2) - Same

[Advanced]
00:17:453 (1) - I would get this one bit more spaced
00:58:310 (1) - This circle doesnt really match

[Mentai's Hard]
01:06:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I find the pattern not really in synch with the music, the square is fine but i think it would bet better to square 01:07:167 (5,6,7,8) - only and have sliders for the previous ones

[Light insane]
00:06:024 (1,2) - Having a circle and a slider right after for the same sound feels strange to play
00:27:738 (1,2) - Same but it matches 3 sounds , so less important
00:55:738 (5,6) - I would've spaced those two notes bc stacked circle and short reverse slider
00:58:310 (1) - Doesnt feels in synch with the voice
Topic Starter
Jabba

Ayato_k wrote:

Hi From #Modreq
Sorry if it's small since i'm pretty new to modding but hope it helps
Great Mapset overall !

[Normal]
00:29:453 (2,3,3,1) - Think those sliders needs more soulds, like claps , without it, feels like a break in the rythm mapping all white ticks in lowest diff would be kinda boring, and those 3/2 sliders nicely emphasize the vocals, blending both vocals and beats
00:58:595 (1,1,2,1,2) - Same same reasoning

[Advanced]
00:17:453 (1) - I would get this one bit more spaced should be fine, I'm keeping the DS
00:58:310 (1) - This circle doesnt really match uh, it's a new vocal line?

[Light insane]
00:06:024 (1,2) - Having a circle and a slider right after for the same sound feels strange to play they're not really the same, as (2) has the vocal line on it. I think that such patterning nicely emphasizes (1) as a downbeat - it's a strong beat and 00:06:167 - has almost no sound, and not mapping it results in more emphasis on 00:06:024 (1) -
00:27:738 (1,2) - Same but it matches 3 sounds , so less important true, there are 4 claps, but I'm mapping (1) as a slider to match the vocals as well
00:55:738 (5,6) - I would've spaced those two notes bc stacked circle and short reverse slider true, this one was rather strange. changed the pattern a bit
00:58:310 (1) - Doesnt feels in synch with the voice it actually is
thanks!
SnowNiNo_
M4M
  • [Chaos]
  1. 00:15:024 (8) - this kicks is unnecessary since there isnt a cymbol sound, unlike the previous 2 kicks
  2. 00:47:595 - 00:49:881 (4) - triplet here would be much better then kick, since it express better to the music and give a nice emphasis on the sound
  3. 00:56:310 - spacing here is too small, since its still intense, so keep the spacing would be a better choice https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8402141
  4. 01:07:595 (2,1) - should emphasis 1 more since its a intense sound
  5. 01:22:024 (1,2) - spacing increased too much here, reduce a bit https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8402155
  • [Zel's Extreme]
  1. 00:05:738 (4,5,1) - inconsistent spacing, ur using x0.7 b4 but only x1.1 here
  2. 00:07:453 (2,3) - lol why the spacing is fking small here, should be similar with 00:07:738 (3,4) -
  3. 00:20:167 (3,4) - inconsistent spacing, tbh overlap here would be fine
  4. 00:56:738 (4,1) - spacing here is too similar with 1/2 gap, make the spacing bigger would give a nice separation
  5. 01:06:310 (4) - NC for consistent
  • [eze's Extra]
  1. 00:56:738 (1,2) - spacing here is too similar with 1/2 gap, make the spacing bigger would give a nice separation
  2. G
  • [Asuka_-'s Insane]
  1. 00:18:024 - slowly decreasing the spacing would express better to the music, like Zel's Extreme
  2. 00:37:167 (3,4) - spacing here is too similar with 1/2 gap, make the spacing bigger would give a nice separation
  3. G
Topic Starter
Jabba

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

M4M
  • [Chaos]
  1. 00:15:024 (8) - this kicks is unnecessary since there isnt a cymbol sound, unlike the previous 2 kicks there's that high pitched sound on those three ticks, it's fine
  2. 00:47:595 - 00:49:881 (4) - triplet here would be much better then kick, since it express better to the music and give a nice emphasis on the sound this was used before, a long time ago, the thing is that 00:49:953 - actually has no sound and mapping it as a triplet would be overmapping. so I decided to use kicksliders there to maintain the rhythm, also it makes it a bit easier (y'know lots of 210 bpm jumps and triples are stressful for player's hand)
  3. 00:56:310 - spacing here is too small, since its still intense, so keep the spacing would be a better choice https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8402141 more fullscreen jumps yay!! tweaked the pattern a bit
  4. 01:07:595 (2,1) - should emphasis 1 more since its a intense sound increased this jump a bit, I don't really want it to be the same as 01:07:310 (2,1) - for example since it's a different section already
  5. 01:22:024 (1,2) - spacing increased too much here, reduce a bit https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8402155 should be fine imo, 01:22:167 (2,2) - that's where drums appear and I think it should be spaced more than 01:21:595 (2,2) -
thanks!
Keada
Hi M4M


  • General

  1. takuru-and-serika-chaos_child-(993) should be resolution 1366x768 unless they changed the rules.
  2. The combo colours doesnt really fit the background, try to change it

    Zel's Extreme

  3. 00:04:738 (1) - its a strong beat on a sliderend, not good.
  4. 00:05:310 (3) - same in the middle of this slider.
  5. 00:05:953 (5) - overmapped, remove it please.
  6. 00:10:024 (4,5) - overmapped
  7. 00:11:167 (3,4,5,6) - spacing issues
  8. 00:12:738 (6,1) - the jump between those 2 should be higher imo
  9. 00:15:024 (6,1) - ^
  10. 00:16:167 (6,1) - ^
  11. 00:47:453 (2) - ctrl+j then ctrl+g looks much better
  12. 00:56:310 (1,2,3,4) - should all have same spacing
  13. 01:03:310 (2,3) - the jump between this should be larger than the one between 01:03:167 (1,2) -
  14. 01:14:595 (1) - missing a hitsound






    Chaos

  15. 00:04:738 - try to make the timeline look like this http://puu.sh/wqzsS/9a9fbd2e0e.jpg since the strong beats are on 00:04:881 - 00:05:453 -
    00:07:024 (1) - same with this one
  16. 00:08:310 (1,2,3) - would flow much better if you did something simular to http://puu.sh/wqzEJ/8dc3d4104b.jpg
  17. 00:09:453 (1,2,3,4) - those should have the same spacing, since the sound doesnt change too much
  18. 00:11:738 - from this part and forward, im not sure why you increase the spacing all the time :S cause the sound is the same almost all the time on this part.
  19. 00:12:881 (1) - doesnt give much impact even tho this is a big white tick
  20. 00:26:595 (1,2) - move those 2 around x:360 y:188 so 00:26:595 (1) - blankets with 00:25:310 (1) - and the end of 00:27:024 (2) - stacks with 00:25:310 (1) -
  21. 00:17:595 (2,3) - should be the ones that are spaced tbh, just a suggestion, just makes it more flowy since the sliders are really fast. since or else you need to stop right before a fast slider and that makes it really akward to play
  22. 00:24:595 (3) - why doesnt this have the same spacing as 00:24:310 (1,2) -
  23. 00:25:310 (1) - make this also blanket the end of this slider 00:24:738 (4) - like this ish http://puu.sh/wqAlz/51cad9ed52.jpg
  24. 00:27:738 (1,2,3,4) - spacing problems again.
  25. 00:33:453 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  26. 00:38:167 (2) - this slider wasnt really appealing to look at tbh D: if you want have it squary you should do something along these lines http://puu.sh/wqAt0/7c1311315d.jpg
  27. 00:42:738 (2) - try to make an extra white line so it makes it curvy on both sides, makes it look better imo as you did here 00:43:595 (2) -
  28. 00:48:167 (7) - why does this suddenly have alot increase in spacing? as the beat isnt strong
  29. 00:48:738 (3,4,5) - overmapped 00:48:810 (4) - I dont hear any beat here
  30. 01:06:453 (2) - this is completely overmapped, there is noooo music there and that far of a jump?
  31. 01:24:167 (1,2) - ctrl+g would make it more epic, and alot better to read

    Rest of the diffs looks okay so.
    Good luck with the map!
Topic Starter
Jabba

Keada wrote:

Hi M4M


  • General

  1. takuru-and-serika-chaos_child-(993) should be resolution 1366x768 unless they changed the rules. I think they changed it some time ago
  2. The combo colours doesnt really fit the background, try to change it well I set them according to characters' hair xdd



    Chaos

  3. 00:04:738 - try to make the timeline look like this http://puu.sh/wqzsS/9a9fbd2e0e.jpg since the strong beats are on 00:04:881 - 00:05:453 -
    00:07:024 (1) - same with this one both are intended since I map to vocals
  4. 00:08:310 (1,2,3) - would flow much better if you did something simular to http://puu.sh/wqzEJ/8dc3d4104b.jpg
  5. 00:09:453 (1,2,3,4) - those should have the same spacing, since the sound doesnt change too much changed the pattern completely, fixed both of those points
  6. 00:11:738 - from this part and forward, im not sure why you increase the spacing all the time :S cause the sound is the same almost all the time on this part. imo this is some kind of a buildup, thus I slightly increase overall spacing as the song progresses
  7. 00:12:881 (1) - doesnt give much impact even tho this is a big white tick I already hate this pattern tbh. but I think I finally managed to get the flow right. this also fixed the DS
  8. 00:26:595 (1,2) - move those 2 around x:360 y:188 so 00:26:595 (1) - blankets with 00:25:310 (1) - and the end of 00:27:024 (2) - stacks with 00:25:310 (1) - yes
  9. 00:17:595 (2,3) - should be the ones that are spaced tbh, just a suggestion, just makes it more flowy since the sliders are really fast. since or else you need to stop right before a fast slider and that makes it really akward to play intended. imo such stacks nicely emphasize the claps + I stack them cause they're the same, and fast sliders create some kind of a circular flow. I might change this if people complain about it tho, but I like it as it is
  10. 00:24:595 (3) - why doesnt this have the same spacing as 00:24:310 (1,2) - agree, changed the pattern a bit
  11. 00:25:310 (1) - make this also blanket the end of this slider 00:24:738 (4) - like this ish http://puu.sh/wqAlz/51cad9ed52.jpg did smth else instead, your suggestion is good but doing that would require me to break like the whole pattern lol and I spent like 15 mins trying to figure out how to fix the previous point
  12. 00:27:738 (1,2,3,4) - spacing problems again. k those are fine because (3) and (4) have vocals as well, thus I space them more than (2)
  13. 00:33:453 (1,2,3,4) - ^ uh, sure, moved (3) a bit to match 00:24:310 (1,2,3,4) -
  14. 00:38:167 (2) - this slider wasnt really appealing to look at tbh D: if you want have it squary you should do something along these lines http://puu.sh/wqAt0/7c1311315d.jpg did smth else, the word 'square' gave me another idea lol
  15. 00:42:738 (2) - try to make an extra white line so it makes it curvy on both sides, makes it look better imo as you did here 00:43:595 (2) - whOOPS
  16. 00:48:167 (7) - why does this suddenly have alot increase in spacing? as the beat isnt strong imo that kind of 1-2-1-2 patterning (00:47:738 (4,5,6,7) - ) fits even if (7) is not that strong. I might change this if there are complaints about this lol
  17. 00:48:738 (3,4,5) - overmapped 00:48:810 (4) - I dont hear any beat here there actually is a triple, 00:47:667 - those ticks don't have a sound and thus I map them as sliderends cause I want to keep the rhythm
  18. 01:06:453 (2) - this is completely overmapped, there is noooo music there and that far of a jump? I think I explained this already somewhere, I believe that even if this note doesn't have a beat on it, it is the peak in terms of vocal (that 'tro' syllable stands out the most), and according to that I put the most emphasis into it. yet again, I like this idea, but if a bn tells me to change this - I'll have to xd
  19. 01:24:167 (1,2) - ctrl+g would make it more epic, and alot better to read the idea behind those is to both give the player some time to recover their aim cause they don't have to move the cursor for 1/1, and imo it's easier to read cause each jump is 1/2 and each stack is 1/1

    Rest of the diffs looks okay so.
    Good luck with the map!
thanks!
Zel
mod replies
FiddleBlue

I think the AR is a bit too high, perhaps AR 9.5 instead? no
00:10:024 (4,5) - Kinda overmapped don't you think? Why don't you make 00:09:453 (1) - into two circles instead so it'll be a four 1/2 consecutive jumps? i dont agree,
mainly because there is a larger spaced jump section afterwards, and the jumps are rather small in spacing.

00:17:453 (7) - How about ignoring this sound instead as it lacks the strong sound in which 00:16:881 (3,4,5,6) - has? i can get your logic here but I want to accurately reflect the song, and there is a sound here. Its also rather strong.
01:01:167 (3,4) - Weird flow :/ Maybe curve the slider? the flow is fine ._.
01:05:024 (4,5,6) - Perhaps make these the same spacing to emphasize 01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - more as the three circles lack the intense sound in which 01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - has. 5 is a really strong note, no

lit120

00:10:024 (4,5) - what are u trying to map here? i'd suggest this instead for a better rhythm choice (and the example from how i mapped) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8293496 im mapping the guitar
00:36:952 (4,6) - looks like an overmap for me since the notes are absent, despite u're trying to hide it with a stream instead fuck ur right, fixed.
00:46:453 (3) - what a weird start to use a 1/2 slider, despite that there's a vocal starting on a white tick there. would just use 2 notes instead, but having the white tick one should be a lower spacing mapping guitar here
00:50:595 (1) - can u provide me a reason why 1/4 slider? listen to the song, i think it accurately represents it.
00:58:310 (4) - NCing this would be cool before the initial chorus downbeat there good idea
01:00:310 (1,2) - i don't totally get it why with such a low spacing distance due to its downbeat there. i'd just make (2) on 01:00:881 (1) - instead there ya know... and here's an additional placement note change if u agree with this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8294173 its a less intense part of the song
01:14:595 (1) - drum sampleset done
01:26:024 (1) - u sure it's parallel for u? just realized its slightly mishaped at the bottom xd, fixed
01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - the same as i have stated from the highest diff you dont hear notes here? are you deaf?

Sotarks

00:05:310 (3) - you skipping a kick by using 1/1 slider intentional, im mapping vocals here
00:05:953 (5) - there's no sound here deaf
00:57:024 (1) - make that tail clickable good idea
01:11:024 (1) - why using 1/4 slider here? 01:08:167 (1,2,1,2) - to be consistent with the gimmick itself and use it on the same sounding vocals
01:23:738 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - why reducing spacing here, it's literally the same peech volume because the song is "cooling down" and its chill right after.
01:24:881 (1) - remove kiai here true
01:26:024 (1) - ending of the star looks weird xd already fixed

SnowNiNo_

00:05:738 (4,5,1) - inconsistent spacing, ur using x0.7 b4 but only x1.1 here the song is pretty clearly getting more intense lol
00:07:453 (2,3) - lol why the spacing is fking small here, should be similar with 00:07:738 (3,4) - i increased spacing slightly, but the song is clearly getting built up
00:20:167 (3,4) - inconsistent spacing, tbh overlap here would be fine u rite, fix
00:56:738 (4,1) - spacing here is too similar with 1/2 gap, make the spacing bigger would give a nice separation increased spacing
01:06:310 (4) - NC for consistent correct, changed some NCs in this pattern

Keada

00:04:738 (1) - its a strong beat on a sliderend, not good. its easier in the beginning of the map for buildup
00:05:310 (3) - same in the middle of this slider. mapping vocals
00:05:953 (5) - overmapped, remove it please. can no one hear the background orrr
00:10:024 (4,5) - overmapped reduced spacing, but notes are valid. its to the guitar.
00:11:167 (3,4,5,6) - spacing issues i see no issues here
00:12:738 (6,1) - the jump between those 2 should be higher imo increased
00:15:024 (6,1) - ^ this one is fine, the pitch of the sound is lower so i feel like lower spacing represents the song well
00:16:167 (6,1) - ^ increased slightly, but ^
00:47:453 (2) - ctrl+j then ctrl+g looks much better good idea!
00:56:310 (1,2,3,4) - should all have same spacing no they should not, the intensity of the notes ion the song are all different.
01:03:310 (2,3) - the jump between this should be larger than the one between 01:03:167 (1,2) - u rite, fixed
01:14:595 (1) - missing a hitsound fixed

Thanks for the mods boys, sorry for taking so long to get to them.
Zel
UPDATE
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58167
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Uncontrollable
TitleUnicode:Uncontrollable
Artist:Ito Kanako
ArtistUnicode:いとうかなこ
Creator:MadHypnofrog
Version:Zel's Extreme
Source:CHAOS;CHILD
Tags:asuka_- eeezzzeee zel mentai 5pb. nitroplus itou head op opening tv size
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OverallDifficulty:9.1
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Topic Starter
Jabba
@Zel: 00:57:024 (1,2) - (1)'s tail was hitsounded and (2) had no hitsound so I fixed it lol
01:14:595 - and yes this part has drums all over lol fix pls
asuka would reply tomorrow, now let's wait for eze as he logged in a month ago zzzz
Mentai
fix for 1/2 spam + minor aesthetic changes




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Glyphic
Light Insane

00:04:738 (1,2,3) - is there any reason that the slider ends are on the intense sounds? feels very lack luster
Asuka_-
ippai


im not good at english
i use google translate

lit120 wrote:

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[asuka]
  1. 00:01:881 (2,3) - i wonder why did you set a drum sampleset here, despite that the beat isn't there for using a hitsound .-. k
  2. 00:02:453 (4) - but the tail is required here .-. k
  3. 00:03:881 (2,3,1) - from the first and the second point k
  4. 00:12:881 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - hm, are you actually going for an angle slider pattern? just copy paste one of the sliders, then adjust the angle from what you want. then copy paste again, do the same thing little changed
  5. 00:26:595 (1,2,3) - you might want to review the hitsounds again by listening at the song again k
  6. 00:32:453 (2,4) - blanket them? k
  7. 01:07:453 (5,6) - what about the blue tick? i don't think it looks suit for the use since it's an absent note. if you think that you're following for a background music that should supports enough, then it's ok i want keep it,,, sry.
  8. 01:24:881 (1) - i'd make it the middle center from 01:24:595 (1,2) - in 421|189 since it's just a weak vocal note that doesn't emphasize any beat there. should be emphasize well with a weak vocal note there instead XD little changed (spacing)
  9. 01:25:738 (4) - what about the red tick? why not just a note instead of 1/2 slider here? should be well emphasize enough rather than giving another note to hear on that red tick, since it ends on a white tick instead changed 3/4...
  10. 01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - i have provided the mod about this just like the previous diffs keep its fine imo

-LynX- wrote:

Asuka_-'s Insane
  1. 00:08:738 (3,4,5,6) - maybe NC 3 and 5? nice
  2. 00:28:595 (4) - minor visual suggestion, perhaps use some red anchors for this slider for the distinct sound the nc part is consistent with no anchors
  3. 00:37:453 (4) - perhaps NC this, since the spacing from 2->3 and 3->4 is similar but 3->4 is 1/1 ok nice
  4. 01:12:881 (3,4,5,1) - maybe this will flow better? https://puu.sh/wiar4/48b97677d1.png flow is already fine imo

Sotarks wrote:

[Azuka's Insane]
00:10:167 (5) - wat, please make this clap clickable here.. and 1/4 is not appropriate here nice
00:19:453 (2,1) - wat a juge spacing, consider lowering this little changed

Sidetail wrote:

[asuka]
英語のmodの中に現れる日本語... まじ神
00:06:024 (1) - sliderになるのがいいと思います keepで
00:10:167 (5) - ここにcircleを使ってください。強いbeatがあるから。 ほーい
00:37:453 (1) - NCはどうですか。00:37:024 (2,3,1) - distanceは同じですけと、timeline-dsは違うです。 おーけい
01:26:024 (1) - ここにcircleをつかって、spinnerを01:26:095 - に始まるのがいいです。ここは前のすらいだーの速度下げてそれを強調させたいからkeepで

Yuuki Konno wrote:

Asuka_-'s Insane
Problems
00:26:595 (1) - This spacing is too large, it contradicts previously set patterns. It would follow the patterns and look better blanketing the (2) slider. ok

01:01:881 (1,2,3,4) - You have your primary "clap" beats on the end of the sliders, but there is no loud noise at this part so it simply makes the sliders a bit more

awkward for no reason. little changed

01:06:453 (2,1) - The combo makes it seem like another full beat spacing. just remove the new combo and you're golden. keep

01:20:595 (2,3,4) - Distance is too short. An easy fix would be to make the 3 where the 4 is and have the 4 between the 3 and 2. like this: its fine imo

https://gyazo.com/6d6b15c8bc54cdf3081f5333c79b658e

Opinions
Warning: These could be a bit nit picky :P
00:09:310 (6,1) - The spacing between 1 and 6 seems too far, I first thought it was the same spacing as between 00:08:881 (4,5) - . That's just my opinion. (This

spacing pattern is shown a few seconds later at 00:10:167 (5,1) - ) little changed

00:18:881 (1,2) - Currently this looks like this: https://gyazo.com/3d70764e2f6cf569b253ccfa8f32d888
When playing through this the flow felt better in this position: https://gyazo.com/3cc5c3f4d68a346bc7f55de97541a6d3 keep

Feb wrote:

Asuka in the main roster insane
we meet again yey

what's up with your high AR's? 9.3 is way over the top again uhm 9.1 is like the max you should put on this. As on your other diff, no unreadable stuff nor hard
keep for now

rhythm at all.

00:19:310 (1,2,1) - this plays really wanky mainly because it's hard to identify 00:19:453 (2,1) - this as 1/4 rhythm when 00:19:310 (1,2) - this is also 1/4 but
with different spacing. little changed ()
00:10:595 (1) - this entire section plays like 3 star and 00:58:595 (1) - this plays like 5 star. Consider buffing the 3 star section a bit. it is not kiai part. so fine..??
01:07:453 (5,6,1) - the spacing kinda fits an extra, but this is abit over the top spacing little changed
01:09:453 (4) - could be emphasized more as the vocal is stronger than 3 and 1. little changed... (but i couldnt)

good luck

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

  • [Asuka_-'s Insane]
  1. 00:18:024 - slowly decreasing the spacing would express better to the music, like Zel's Extreme i tried
  2. 00:37:167 (3,4) - spacing here is too similar with 1/2 gap, make the spacing bigger would give a nice separation nice
  3. G
Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
upd
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Topic Starter
Jabba

Glyphic wrote:

Light Insane

00:04:738 (1,2,3) - is there any reason that the slider ends are on the intense sounds? feels very lack luster
those are mapped to vocals, pretty much like the whole diff
Hectic
Привет, м4м

Chaos
  1. 00:02:453 (1,2) - поровнять мб? или слайдер сделать непрямым
  2. 00:08:310 (1) - не очень нравится как этот слайдер повторяет движение предыдущих, мне кажется было бы лучше, если бы он направлялся иначе
  3. 00:10:310 (5) - мне кажется такой звук лучше показать слайдером дугой, типа этого
  4. 00:16:310 (1) - мне кажется это комбо начинается слишком далеко, может подвинуть паттерн поближе к 00:16:024 (6) - ?
  5. 00:23:167 (1) - конец слайдера на у: -1
  6. 00:28:024 (3,4) - поровнять у слайдера то, что идет до красного узла по направлению с фолоупоинтом
  7. 00:41:167 (1,2) - то же самое
  8. 01:11:024 (1,2,3,4) - этот паттерн был бы клевее имо, если сделать так, чтобы 2 и 3 огибали 1 и 4 (если не нравится, то хотя бы покрути 2 и 3 немного по часовой и отодвинь от 1 и 4, типа этого). алсо стакни 1 и 4 получше
  9. 01:20:310 (5,1,1,1) - неаккуратно
Zel's Extreme
  1. 00:05:024 (2,3) - visually too close (comparing to 00:05:310 (3,4) - for example)
  2. 00:20:738 (1,2,3) - consistent visual distance please
  3. 00:38:881 (5,1) - align?
Light Insane
  1. 00:09:453 (1) - подальше от 00:08:738 (2) -
  2. 00:56:738 (3,5) - выровнять бы
  3. 01:00:024 (2,3) - ^, и расстояние между 1-2 1-3 чтобы одинаковое визуально
Надеюсь чем-то помог, удачки
Topic Starter
Jabba

h4d0uk3n1 wrote:

Привет, м4м

Chaos
  1. 00:02:453 (1,2) - поровнять мб? или слайдер сделать непрямым не стоит, оно и так вполне нормально играется и смотрится
  2. 00:08:310 (1) - не очень нравится как этот слайдер повторяет движение предыдущих, мне кажется было бы лучше, если бы он направлялся иначе как мне кажется, не стоит он того, чтобы на нем флоубрейк делать
  3. 00:10:310 (5) - мне кажется такой звук лучше показать слайдером дугой, типа этого а мне нравится
  4. 00:16:310 (1) - мне кажется это комбо начинается слишком далеко, может подвинуть паттерн поближе к 00:16:024 (6) - ? +
  5. 00:23:167 (1) - конец слайдера на у: -1 бланкет правильный
  6. 00:28:024 (3,4) - поровнять у слайдера то, что идет до красного узла по направлению с фолоупоинтом тоже не настолько нужно, но я чутка подкрутил положение тройки
  7. 00:41:167 (1,2) - то же самое а вот здесь да, чутка неровно было
  8. 01:11:024 (1,2,3,4) - этот паттерн был бы клевее имо, если сделать так, чтобы 2 и 3 огибали 1 и 4 (если не нравится, то хотя бы покрути 2 и 3 немного по часовой и отодвинь от 1 и 4, типа этого). алсо стакни 1 и 4 получше пофиксил стак + чутка подвинул (2) и (3)
  9. 01:20:310 (5,1,1,1) - неаккуратно там не в бланкетах фишка, все норм с этим паттерном
Light Insane
  1. 00:09:453 (1) - подальше от 00:08:738 (2) - не особо нужно, там и так дс достаточный
  2. 00:56:738 (3,5) - выровнять бы там задумка паттерна не в этом была немного, но я его переделал чутка, в частности, из-за оверлапа с двойками предыдущими
  3. 01:00:024 (2,3) - ^, и расстояние между 1-2 1-3 чтобы одинаковое визуально спейсинг я там не хочу делать одинаковый, мне кажется, так лучше заходит. повернул 2 чутка, чтобы прямо было
Надеюсь чем-то помог, удачки
спасибо!
Lokidoki
M4M as promised
[Light Insane]
00:21:167 (2) - even though it is blanketed, the flow is really weird at that part, it'd be better if it was more curved imo
00:55:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the sounds intensify there a lot, so i don't see a point in those doubles
[Asuka's Insane]
00:17:453 - missed an important sound there
00:32:167 (1,2,3) - that is pretty weird considering the flow always being smooth and round. this pattern is too hard and edgy imo
01:05:738 - and 01:06:167 - how about adding a sound clickable, it will be like a cussion without stopping the clicking pattern
01:18:310 (2) - too edgy for flow
01:29:738 - end the spinner here
[eze's Extra]
00:20:310 (4) - the flow is weird, make it a curved slider and blanket it
00:20:738 (2,4) - connect the sliderends?
00:23:738 (4) - imperfect blanket
00:56:738 (1) - delete NC
00:57:024 (2) - add NC
01:00:881 (1) - ugly overlaps with 01:00:024 (2) -
[Zel's Extreme]
00:01:453 (1,2,1,2) - doesn't seem too fitting for vocals, you can just make a circle-slider, rather than 1/4slider-1/2slider (like this: https://puu.sh/wwB3p/46443b0f95.png)
00:50:595 (1,2) - you make this spacing the same as your 1/2 spacing, pls fix
00:58:595 (1,2,1,2) - same as the first suggestion
01:07:738 (1,2,1,2) - ^
01:26:024 (1) - end on the white tick
[Chaos]
00:53:738 (5) - seems unfairly spaced
01:01:024 (2,3) - flows quite strangely, i suggest lowering the spacing to avoid that
that was just a short mod, sry if not enough
Topic Starter
Jabba

Lokidoki wrote:

M4M as promised
[Light Insane]
00:21:167 (2) - even though it is blanketed, the flow is really weird at that part, it'd be better if it was more curved imo it's fine, just some simple circular flow
00:55:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the sounds intensify there a lot, so i don't see a point in those doubles what's wrong with them? I don't really want them to be jumps cause that's boost the SR a lot, and the music is getting more intense so I switch to circles from sliders

[Chaos]
00:53:738 (5) - seems unfairly spaced tru, reworked the pattern a bit
01:01:024 (2,3) - flows quite strangely, i suggest lowering the spacing to avoid that did smth similar to 00:03:881 (2,3) -
that was just a short mod, sry if not enough
thanks!
Zel
Update
learned some stuff and applied stuff

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Noffy
Hello, rather delayed mod from my queueueu

[General]
How come there is no video? o:
It feels like a waste to map a tv-size and to not include the video. Unless it has NSFW elements, which I'm pretty sure Chaos;Child's doesn't unless I missed it.
If you need help getting one and making it osu ready, I can try to do so ^^
Despite there being an advanced difficulty, I felt that the jump from advanced > hard was still a bit larger than it should be, playing wise. I think you can afford to buff both normal and advanced at least a small amount.

Pretty sure source should be "ChäoS;Child" as this is how it appears everywhere I've seen it.
+add "chaos" to tags because ChäoS has the funky ä character in it.

[Normal]
Generally, I think having a slider velocity of .6 is a bit rather too low, especially when combined with your rhythm choices.
Overall, it makes things so cramped together that normal can actually be more difficult to read for a beginner than advanced.
Any other problem I have directly relates back to this, so that's all I have to say for Normal.

00:40:310 (1,1) - these sliders are cool as heck tho. Would like to see more cool sliderarts like this.

[Advanced]
  1. 00:07:453 (4,1) - This blanket can definitely be improved.
  2. 00:10:595 (1,2) - 00:12:881 (1,2) - 00:15:167 (1,2) - 00:16:310 (3,4) - You have these similar patterns of parallel sliders, but the visual spacing in between them is different every time. The result looks rather inconsistent and weakens the impact of the repeated idea.
  3. 00:17:453 (1,2,3,4,5) - Possibly changing it like this http://puu.sh/wzQ7R/5c8a19c8aa.jpg could be more natural to play. It's essentially the same pattern, but without forcibly going under 00:16:881 (4) - which made it look rather cluttered.
  4. 00:19:738 - to 00:26:310 - it's rather confusing what you are supposed to be following in this section. You skip over strong vocals like 00:20:167 - , map weaker ones like 00:20:310 , put strong drum beats like 00:20:595 as slider ends, and give something like 00:21:738 (6) - a circle even though it's a very soft hi-hat. I'd suggest revising the rhythm in this section from scratch, it's all over the place.
  5. 00:28:595 (4) - Have a circle instead? This would help emphasize 00:28:881 (1) - being the start of a new part in the song.
  6. 00:45:453 (2,1) - A bad overlap like this can easily be avoided by changing the positioning of (2)
  7. 01:07:024 (2,2) - This overlap.. is rather.. very bad looking.
  8. 00:59:024 - I suggest finding a way to place another 1/2 reverse slider to be like 00:58:595 (1) - as the song repeats the "nee" twice.
  9. 01:08:167 - ^ same here.
  10. 01:10:167 (2) - I think this should just be a 1/1 slider like 01:01:024 (2) - was.
  11. 01:16:024 (5,6,7) - Maybe make (5) a circle instead, so that (6,7) are more noticably following the louder more continuos synth volume.
Generally, I found throughout the difficulty quite a few patterns would end up rather cramped together, especially during the kiai.

[Mentai's Hard]
  1. 00:03:167 (4,1) - The reduced spacing between these two notes makes the player more likely to mistake 00:03:881 (1) - for being at the downbeat of 00:03:738 - instead. I'd suggest increasing the spacing here to the standard 1.0.
  2. 00:59:738 (4,5) - This rhythm was rather out of place as where (5) starts isn't terribly strong in the song but 01:00:024 is. Maybe replace this with two 1/2 sliders instead?
  3. 01:01:310 (3) - Somewhat similarly, this slider would probably be more fitting starting at 01:01:453 instead.
  4. 01:10:453 (3) - ^ but to 01:10:595 -
Really cool difficulty! ^^

[Light Insane]
  1. 00:33:881 (2,3,1) - This flows quite a bit more sharply than previous patterns in your map without this part of the song being particularly special to deserve it. Mainly, its arrangment leads to 00:34:310 (3,1) - this jump feeling quite unnatural. I suggest trying to figure out an alternate placement for this bit.
  2. 01:12:595 (2,1) - since you've been using stacking throughout the map, these being so close to stacked yet not quite looks really, very odd.
[Asuka_-'s Insane]
  1. 00:05:881 (5) - Ehh... there isn't really a sound here to click to. Stacking it on top of the really strong 00:06:024 (1) - weaken's (1)'s impact in the map as well. I'd suggest figuring out a pattern where you can extend 00:05:595 (4) - to be 1/1 instead.
  2. 00:33:310 (5) - Again, there isn't really a sound here for clicking to. All of the higher difficulties even have it mapped as a sliderend!
  3. 00:45:024 (2) - Not that it makes a difference but why the random white node in the middle? haha
  4. 00:56:024 (4,1) - The angle here, in my opinion, is faar smaller than it should be, and as a result makes the entirety of 00:56:310 (1,2,3,4) - more difficult to play than it would have been on its own.
  5. 01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - Consider setting the combo color for these to be something else, the light blue blends in with the default spinner.
[eze's Extra]
  1. 00:26:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this could benefit from adjustments to make the spacing increase more gradual, as right now it's small spaced notes > big space notes without any real inbetween, taking away from the epic build up effect it could've had.
  2. 01:00:024 (2,1) - I didn't really notice any overlaps in the map before now, so this one is just kind of :/
  3. 01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - Consider changing the combo color, the light blue blends in with the default spinner.
[Zel's Extreme]
  1. I notice the hitsounding in the beginning of this difficulty is quite louder than the other ones, and mostly it just sounds kind of weird as the hitsounding is so sparse, that the player just ends up hearing a constant sh-sh-sh from the hitnormal.
  2. 00:25:310 (1,4) - Sttaackkk is off
  3. 00:29:881 (1) - This is actually, like, 1 or 2 pixels offscreen. Raise just a wee bit please.
  4. 01:04:167 (1,2,3) - Maybe try to find a way to space this more like 01:13:310 (1,2,3) - . Currently, these objects are unusually close together compared to the rest of the wildly spaced kiai.
[Chaos]

  • 01:18:881 - it's rather unfitting to skip this kick when the kicks are what 01:17:738 (4,5,6) - were all following.
    01:20:024 - ^
I was a bit worried after seeing the advanced and normal, which are in my opinion the weakest difficulties here, but overall this is quite a cool set for a good song.
Good luck!
(PM me about the video if interested)
Topic Starter
Jabba

Noffy wrote:

Hello, rather delayed mod from my queueueu

[General]
How come there is no video? o:
It feels like a waste to map a tv-size and to not include the video. Unless it has NSFW elements, which I'm pretty sure Chaos;Child's doesn't unless I missed it.
If you need help getting one and making it osu ready, I can try to do so ^^ ya would be great if you could find a good quality one! I didn't personally think about adding a video lol
Despite there being an advanced difficulty, I felt that the jump from advanced > hard was still a bit larger than it should be, playing wise. I think you can afford to buff both normal and advanced at least a small amount. I think it's pretty much fine since normal is basically 1/1 with occasional 3/2 repeats and 2/1 (which is a standard for lower diffs imo, I don't want to make the rhythm too complex there) and advanced introduces a good amount of 1/2 gaps without having too many 1/2 jumps (mentai nerfed the jump section in hard, so it shouldn't have a diffspike in terms of rhythm now). I'll keep it for now, though if needed I might buff advanced a bit

Pretty sure source should be "ChäoS;Child" as this is how it appears everywhere I've seen it.
+add "chaos" to tags because ChäoS has the funky ä character in it. that's what I used at first as well, but this meta had been confirmed by kwan, I guess I'll add the screenshot into the description to avoid any misunderstandings lol

[Normal]
Generally, I think having a slider velocity of .6 is a bit rather too low, especially when combined with your rhythm choices.
Overall, it makes things so cramped together that normal can actually be more difficult to read for a beginner than advanced.
Any other problem I have directly relates back to this, so that's all I have to say for Normal. tbh increasing the SV would be a pain in the ass ._. I'll keep it for now, would change to like x0.8 if needed, I think it's not that crucial - the rhythm is pretty much straightforward and repeats itself all over, so it shouldn't be that hard for new players to read it

00:40:310 (1,1) - these sliders are cool as heck tho. Would like to see more cool sliderarts like this. ikr :>

[Advanced]
  1. 00:07:453 (4,1) - This blanket can definitely be improved. I swear it was better the last time I checked it LOL
  2. 00:10:595 (1,2) - 00:12:881 (1,2) - 00:15:167 (1,2) - 00:16:310 (3,4) - You have these similar patterns of parallel sliders, but the visual spacing in between them is different every time. The result looks rather inconsistent and weakens the impact of the repeated idea. nice catch, changed some of them to be more consistent
  3. 00:17:453 (1,2,3,4,5) - Possibly changing it like this http://puu.sh/wzQ7R/5c8a19c8aa.jpg could be more natural to play. It's essentially the same pattern, but without forcibly going under 00:16:881 (4) - which made it look rather cluttered. did smth else
  4. 00:19:738 - to 00:26:310 - it's rather confusing what you are supposed to be following in this section. You skip over strong vocals like 00:20:167 - , map weaker ones like 00:20:310 , put strong drum beats like 00:20:595 as slider ends, and give something like 00:21:738 (6) - a circle even though it's a very soft hi-hat. I'd suggest revising the rhythm in this section from scratch, it's all over the place. I just recently remapped this section cause it was literally vocals all over (like most of this diff) and tried to focus more on the beats. did some tweaks here and there, hope it's better now!
  5. 00:28:595 (4) - Have a circle instead? This would help emphasize 00:28:881 (1) - being the start of a new part in the song. agree, changed
  6. 00:45:453 (2,1) - A bad overlap like this can easily be avoided by changing the positioning of (2) WHOOOPS this shouldn't have happened in the first place, smh I positioned (1) at the wrong angle, fixed!
  7. 01:07:024 (2,2) - This overlap.. is rather.. very bad looking. ctrl-h is my best friend (ended up changing like everything after this one LMAO)
  8. 00:59:024 - I suggest finding a way to place another 1/2 reverse slider to be like 00:58:595 (1) - as the song repeats the "nee" twice. ye I wanted to simplify the rhythm a bit, applied
  9. 01:08:167 - ^ same here. ^
  10. 01:10:167 (2) - I think this should just be a 1/1 slider like 01:01:024 (2) - was. there's another vocal syllable on that repeat so I'd rather keep it like this
  11. 01:16:024 (5,6,7) - Maybe make (5) a circle instead, so that (6,7) are more noticably following the louder more continuos synth volume. I think that (5) fits in that pattern as well, e.g. in the last diff those three are 1-2-1-2-1-2 jumps that are gettin bigger
Generally, I found throughout the difficulty quite a few patterns would end up rather cramped together, especially during the kiai. yea, ended up redoing some patterns in kiai. actually ended up buffing this diff a bit as you suggested (well, those 1/2 repeats on 'nee, nee' did the thing LOL I had to add some more 1/2 to kiai, and this also allowed me to buff the very first section (00:19:738 - )

[Light Insane]
  1. 00:33:881 (2,3,1) - This flows quite a bit more sharply than previous patterns in your map without this part of the song being particularly special to deserve it. Mainly, its arrangment leads to 00:34:310 (3,1) - this jump feeling quite unnatural. I suggest trying to figure out an alternate placement for this bit. for me it's fine tbh, though I still did smth else - 00:35:167 (2,3) - spacing on those was a bit different that I wanted it to be
  2. 01:12:595 (2,1) - since you've been using stacking throughout the map, these being so close to stacked yet not quite looks really, very odd. yep, fixed

[Chaos]

  • 01:18:881 - it's rather unfitting to skip this kick when the kicks are what 01:17:738 (4,5,6) - were all following.
    01:20:024 - ^ fixed both, I like the idea
I was a bit worried after seeing the advanced and normal, which are in my opinion the weakest difficulties here, but overall this is quite a cool set for a good song. ya true, mapping those lower diffs was hard xdd
Good luck!
(PM me about the video if interested)
wheesh that was a long one, thanks!
Zel
Noffy

I notice the hitsounding in the beginning of this difficulty is quite louder than the other ones, and mostly it just sounds kind of weird as the hitsounding is so sparse, that the player just ends up hearing a constant sh-sh-sh from the hitnormal. fixed
00:25:310 (1,4) - Sttaackkk is off it isnt, it snaps to this position
00:29:881 (1) - This is actually, like, 1 or 2 pixels offscreen. Raise just a wee bit please. lmfao im a noob. fixed
01:04:167 (1,2,3) - Maybe try to find a way to space this more like 01:13:310 (1,2,3) - . Currently, these objects are unusually close together compared to the rest of the wildly spaced kiai. fixed

Update
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Mentai
@noffy if i were to change that reverse arrow section to what you suggest, id have to completely redo how i organized the kiai. so unless it becomes an OMEGA issue, then i can remap the kiai for that. but i definitely see the validity of that point

thank ya noff <3

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DeRandom Otaku
[Normal]
  1. 00:10:595 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - This whole streak is way too long, considering this difficulty as the first of the set its not beginner friendly at all and thus should totally be nerfed And pretty much same for the rest of the difficulty. you may need to nerf rhythm in most sections slightly here or you could simply add an easy difficulty.
    However i am still gonna point out some notes that you can delete to simplify the rhythm and it will still sound just as fine as before. 00:12:595 (4) - 00:17:167 (4) - 00:30:595 (3) - (can change to single circle) 00:30:595 (3) - (can change to single circle).
    For the kiai, you could follow the same patterning i mentioned above, because the whole two kiais with the section in middle have zero gaps between notes which is just intense for normal difficulties.
    00:28:881 (1) - Judging by this whole difficulty, it seems like you are mostly emphasizing vocals, if thats the case then this slider is pretty misleading, since the song is emphasizing 00:29:167 - this beat while you are emphasizing 00:28:881 - this one.
[Advanced]
  1. 00:19:738 (1,2) - Having these two sliders next to each other is quite bad for emphasis since the first slider has kicks on both slider start and slider end while the second slider has vocals only without any drums or stuff. You may replace the instrument you want to emphasize (either the drums or vocals) by circles only to distinguish a difference between different instruments properly.
  2. 00:20:738 (4) - 00:23:024 (3,4) - These two are pretty much similar in song but mapped with different rhythm thus lacking consistency.
  3. 00:29:453 (3,4) - This is really weird because you are starting 4 at 00:30:024 - which supports a drum and then you start 5 at 00:30:453 - which supports vocal, you should stick to a single instrument. If you want to stick to vocals then try this rhythm otherwise you can have this rhythmfor drums.
    Same thing goes for 00:31:595 - 00:33:881 -
  4. 00:58:310 (1) - hint you dont need nc on this
  5. 01:06:595 (1) - Same
[Hard]
  1. 00:36:595 (3,1,2) - This whole pattern can be confusing as hell because you have a whooping DS of 3x between 00:36:595 (3,1) - and for the next two objects the DS is back to average even tho they are all the same rhythm, the DS is twice as much between 3 and 1. What makes it even more confusing is the direction of 00:36:881 (1) - towards 00:37:453 (2) - .The reverse arrow of 1 directly points towards 2 which can signal the players about it being a 1/2 rhythm while in reality its 1/1. I hope you understand my point lol
  2. This difficulty has a lot of confusing spacings in most of the parts since the spacing between 1/1 patterns and 1/2 patterns co-exist to each other when the patterns are beside each other which are not suitable for a hard difficulty at all. The 1/2 slider spam part at 00:10:595 - is nicely made so gj on that
[Light Insane]
  1. 00:35:738 (1,2) - The flow here is kinda weird and is inconsistent with the patterns before this. The movement in your patterns earlier was circular but here ,suddenly, for an unknown reason, its not circular and its totally opposite of that so yeah ctrl+g'ing 00:36:167 (2) - will help fix that.
  2. 00:58:310 (1) - This slider looks so bad aesthetically , The red anchor point is so close to its end that it makes it look kinda cramped. Maybe try moving the red node to left a bit, or maybe even to the middle since thats gonna look even nicer but i dont think you want to do that lol.
well thats all for now. In summary, The difficulties can still take improvements in rhythms,structure and rhythm.
gl
Topic Starter
Jabba

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:10:595 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - This whole streak is way too long, considering this difficulty as the first of the set its not beginner friendly at all and thus should totally be nerfed And pretty much same for the rest of the difficulty. you may need to nerf rhythm in most sections slightly here or you could simply add an easy difficulty. don't really think it's that hard, basically 1/1 slider spam. it's not an easy diff after all, it's normal xd
    However i am still gonna point out some notes that you can delete to simplify the rhythm and it will still sound just as fine as before. 00:12:595 (4) - 00:17:167 (4) - 00:30:595 (3) - (can change to single circle) 00:30:595 (3) - (can change to single circle).
    For the kiai, you could follow the same patterning i mentioned above, because the whole two kiais with the section in middle have zero gaps between notes which is just intense for normal difficulties. I'll nerf this if needed, cause rn it seems fine for me, e.g. stuff like https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1023840 is ranked and is even more dense than this diff. also I'd say I use many repeating rhythms so it shouldn't be that hard for new players to follow them
    00:28:881 (1) - Judging by this whole difficulty, it seems like you are mostly emphasizing vocals, if thats the case then this slider is pretty misleading, since the song is emphasizing 00:29:167 - this beat while you are emphasizing 00:28:881 - this one. tbh I don't want to go full-circles like 00:31:167 (1,2) - immediately, also 00:28:881 - is a start of a new stanza and even deserves to be more emphasized than 00:29:167 - imo
[Advanced]
  1. 00:19:738 (1,2) - Having these two sliders next to each other is quite bad for emphasis since the first slider has kicks on both slider start and slider end while the second slider has vocals only without any drums or stuff. You may replace the instrument you want to emphasize (either the drums or vocals) by circles only to distinguish a difference between different instruments properly. yeah true, changed to 1/2 repeat + circle
  2. 00:20:738 (4) - 00:23:024 (3,4) - These two are pretty much similar in song but mapped with different rhythm thus lacking consistency. whooOPS tweaked this section slightly to make it more similar to the first one
  3. 00:29:453 (3,4) - This is really weird because you are starting 4 at 00:30:024 - which supports a drum and then you start 5 at 00:30:453 - which supports vocal, you should stick to a single instrument. If you want to stick to vocals then try this rhythm otherwise you can have this rhythmfor drums. I agree that it might be a bit strange lol. I want to smh keep both preserved, as sticking just to drums is kinda boring and if I only emphasize vocals it'll sound a bit too empty without drums, so I went with skipping vocal lines such as 00:29:881 - and started the slider 1/2 later, making it follow the drums. I kept the main idea, but adjusted some rhythms to make them more consistent
    Same thing goes for 00:31:595 - 00:33:881 -
  4. 00:58:310 (1) - hint you dont need nc on this nope, this is intended
  5. 01:06:595 (1) - Same uh, this is like the most intense part of kiai and deserves to have a ncs per measure instead of nc per two measures
[Light Insane]
  1. 00:35:738 (1,2) - The flow here is kinda weird and is inconsistent with the patterns before this. The movement in your patterns earlier was circular but here ,suddenly, for an unknown reason, its not circular and its totally opposite of that so yeah ctrl+g'ing 00:36:167 (2) - will help fix that. ya for some reason I used the idea from the highest diff (to make the flow more weird in the end of the section) but only applied it here and not 00:26:595 - there. fixed!
  2. 00:58:310 (1) - This slider looks so bad aesthetically , The red anchor point is so close to its end that it makes it look kinda cramped. Maybe try moving the red node to left a bit, or maybe even to the middle since thats gonna look even nicer but i dont think you want to do that lol. did smth
well thats all for now. In summary, The difficulties can still take improvements in rhythms,structure and rhythm.
gl
thanks!
alden
hi from #modreqs just a few things on a few diffs

Normal
  1. 00:14:024 (3,4,5) - I would make this a long slider like what you do with the rest of these parts considering
  2. 00:51:738 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - kinda seems too long of a slider train imo. I'd break it up maybe with some 1/1 sliders and a circle to emphasize the vocals or break it up with some circles

Mentai's Hard
  • 00:03:167 (4) - kinda nazi but this is an ugly blanket
  1. 00:04:738 (3) - ^ slightly off too
  2. 00:08:310 (1,2) - I dont really like the break of flow here i dont know if it fits or not
  3. 00:09:738 (2) - I suggest switching up this slider so that it flows into 00:10:310 (3) -
  4. 00:34:738 (5,6) - just a me thing but i'd give the end of the bend some more length
  5. 00:42:310 (6) - should be a circle since u do it here 00:37:453 (2,3) -
  6. 00:48:881 (3) - another slightly offset blanket
  7. 01:19:310 (2) - the bends could be polished a bit

Light Insane
  1. 00:07:167 (1,2,3,4) - this seems really cluttered
  2. 00:19:738 (1,2) - I think there should be a bit more spacing here
  3. 00:36:595 (3) - since you're following vocals here i think this slider should also be a long one. Maybe a 3/4 slider?
  4. 01:04:310 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think there's anything in the music to justify a spacing increase
  5. 01:07:453 (5,1) - ok not really a problem but 5 doesnt totally line up with 1 which triggered me lol
  6. 01:08:738 (1,2) - blanket
  7. 01:13:453 (1,2,3,4) - same comment as 01:04:310 (1,2,3,4)
  8. 01:22:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it would be better if u used the same rhythm as 01:21:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

Zel's Extreme
  1. 00:07:738 (3) - needs more emphasis
  2. 00:09:453 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this doesnt fit. I would make 00:09:453 (1,2) - circles and 00:09:881 (3) - a 1/1 slider
  3. 00:12:310 (3,4,5,6) - for all the circles like these I would reccomend the first 2 circles to be more spaces than the other 2 to follow the pitch
  4. 00:32:881 (4,5) - I'd put a slider here
  5. 00:37:595 (2) - the long slider should start here
  6. 01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - holy thats one heck of a copypasta even for me
  7. 01:30:453 (4) - slider looks kinda ugly to me. Would rather just make them straight
Gl with this set!
Topic Starter
Jabba

ChronoNig wrote:

hi from #modreqs just a few things on a few diffs

Normal
  1. 00:14:024 (3,4,5) - I would make this a long slider like what you do with the rest of these parts considering this one is intended to be a bit more intense, also 00:14:595 (4,5) - emphasize those wubs on the background (like the kicksliders on higher diffs)
  2. 00:51:738 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - kinda seems too long of a slider train imo. I'd break it up maybe with some 1/1 sliders and a circle to emphasize the vocals or break it up with some circles agree, this is like one of the longest slider sections in the map, but I'd like to keep it as it is - putting circles there would break the emphasis pattern I'm following and make the section a bit harder. I'll change this if needed lol

Light Insane
  1. 00:07:167 (1,2,3,4) - this seems really cluttered intended, I use this pattern many times through the map
  2. 00:19:738 (1,2) - I think there should be a bit more spacing here if you meant spacing between the slider bodies - then yes, I increased it a bit
  3. 00:36:595 (3) - since you're following vocals here i think this slider should also be a long one. Maybe a 3/4 slider? not really, I switch to drums in the next few objects, it should be fine - I'd even rather say that this kickslider indicates this transition quite well
  4. 01:04:310 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think there's anything in the music to justify a spacing increase I think someone mentioned this already, imo those four sliders could be considered as a buildup to the peak of the kiai. again, I'd like to keep this but I'll change it if needed
  5. 01:07:453 (5,1) - ok not really a problem but 5 doesnt totally line up with 1 which triggered me lol whooops there was actually another issue with this one that went unnoticed, fixed!
  6. 01:08:738 (1,2) - blanket how did THAT happen
  7. 01:13:453 (1,2,3,4) - same comment as 01:04:310 (1,2,3,4) same reasoning lo
  8. 01:22:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it would be better if u used the same rhythm as 01:21:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - those two sliders follow the vocals nicely and give the player a little break, since I don't want to go with 14 1/2 circles in a row xd

Gl with this set!
thanks!
Mentai
@dro tbh i cant believe most people (including me) didnt spot this ctrl+g error. thank you
the ds is this way because its an actual hard, since there is an advamced and more lower diffs

@chrononig keeping flow break, and the pattern here 00:42:310 (6) is mimicking the pattern from earlier, so its fine. also thew bends at the end are fine

fixed the rest ty

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hlanden
Just a random bad #modreq NM, coming because of the nice song

Chaos
  1. 00:20:738 (1,2,3) - Maybe you could try doing something like [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8647836] this for better aesthetics and because you used this pattern a few times already?
  2. 00:32:595 (2,3) - ^
  3. 01:00:024 (3,4) - ^
  4. 01:00:595 (5,2) - This also looks better after changing 5 to a straight slider
  5. 01:11:310 (2,3) - I suggest higher spacing here.
  6. 01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - ^, especially here, these are like the loudest sounds of the whole map yet you have a lot bigger jumps before these.

    This is all for this difficulty, not really much to note since I'm not very experienced with modding difficulties of this high SR anyway
Zel's Extreme
  1. 00:12:310 (3,4,5,6) and 00:11:167 (3,4,5,6) and all the 4 jumps really - could be a bit better aesthetically if you aligned those a bit but I'd understand if you just want to leave them look a bit messier.
  2. 00:22:453 (3,1) - This slider shape usage is not that good because earlier on in the map (00:10:310 (1) ) u used this shape to map quite a different sound than just normal percussion, you should change these to more smooth shapes for better visual consistency.
  3. 00:39:738 (3) - ^ . Another fix to this actually would be changing the first slider to a different, unused shape.
  4. 01:26:024 (1) - Nice slider shape! Nothing more to say about this diff :D

eze's Extra
  1. 00:47:738 (3,5) - Blanket these
  2. 00:49:167 (7,1) - This looks a bit better imo
  3. 00:54:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you need bigger spacing here, the music is getting quite intense.
  4. 01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - Again, those are the strongest sounds you can hear in the song, bigger spacing would be better.

    Nothing more to say, maybe you could make "prettier" sliders on the slow part with the lots of red anchors because it's calm but hey that's just subjective and you still do reverse emphasizing in this case so maybe this is okay.
Asuka_-'s Insane

Favourite difficulty hands down. Nothing much I can say here.

Light Insane
  1. 00:20:738 (1,2) - Why not just make them the same shape for better visuals?
  2. 00:55:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8 singletaps feels a bit too much for this difficulty and not even in the kiai part.
  3. 01:00:738 - See this sound left out here compared to the singletaps I talked about earlier means a big no no in my opinion because of inconsistency in where the actual harder stuff should be, I don't know though.
  4. 01:03:310 - ^, no point in pointing out all of those but I think they should be mapped.

    Other than that all good :)
Mentai's Hard
  1. 00:35:738 (1,2) - This looks sliiiightly off to me, not sure tho.

    Good diff here :)
And nothing to say about the easier diffs either, that's all I can contribute, hope I was helpful :)


Good luck with the map :)
Topic Starter
Jabba

hlanden wrote:

Just a random bad #modreq NM, coming because of the nice song

Chaos
  1. 00:20:738 (1,2,3) - Maybe you could try doing something like [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8647836] this for better aesthetics and because you used this pattern a few times already? would kinda break the flow and I don't want that
  2. 00:32:595 (2,3) - ^ ^
  3. 01:00:024 (3,4) - ^ ^
  4. 01:00:595 (5,2) - This also looks better after changing 5 to a straight slider (5) is not supposed to be straight huh, it's the same pattern I used before (00:02:881 (3,4,5) - and so on)
  5. 01:11:310 (2,3) - I suggest higher spacing here. whoosh this wasn't supposed to touch (5), I thought I fixed this
  6. 01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - ^, especially here, these are like the loudest sounds of the whole map yet you have a lot bigger jumps before these. not really, this is more of a calm-down after those jumps, especially with the spinner before

    This is all for this difficulty, not really much to note since I'm not very experienced with modding difficulties of this high SR anyway
Light Insane
  1. 00:20:738 (1,2) - Why not just make them the same shape for better visuals? different sounds first of all, and I want to blanket 00:20:310 (3) - 's body with (2)
  2. 00:55:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8 singletaps feels a bit too much for this difficulty and not even in the kiai part. should be fine, this is an intense part
  3. 01:00:738 - See this sound left out here compared to the singletaps I talked about earlier means a big no no in my opinion because of inconsistency in where the actual harder stuff should be, I don't know though. this is not even an intense part of kiai, I only skipped red ticks with almost no sounds so it shouldn't be a problem
  4. 01:03:310 - ^, no point in pointing out all of those but I think they should be mapped. ^

    Other than that all good :)

Good luck with the map :)
thanks!
hlanden

Jabba wrote:

hlanden wrote:

Just a random bad #modreq NM, coming because of the nice song

Chaos
  1. 00:20:738 (1,2,3) - Maybe you could try doing something like [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8647836] this for better aesthetics and because you used this pattern a few times already? would kinda break the flow and I don't want that
  2. 00:32:595 (2,3) - ^ ^
  3. 01:00:024 (3,4) - ^ ^
  4. 01:00:595 (5,2) - This also looks better after changing 5 to a straight slider (5) is not supposed to be straight huh, it's the same pattern I used before (00:02:881 (3,4,5) - and so on)
  5. 01:11:310 (2,3) - I suggest higher spacing here. whoosh this wasn't supposed to touch (5), I thought I fixed this
  6. 01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - ^, especially here, these are like the loudest sounds of the whole map yet you have a lot bigger jumps before these. not really, this is more of a calm-down after those jumps, especially with the spinner before

    This is all for this difficulty, not really much to note since I'm not very experienced with modding difficulties of this high SR anyway
Light Insane
  1. 00:20:738 (1,2) - Why not just make them the same shape for better visuals? different sounds first of all, and I want to blanket 00:20:310 (3) - 's body with (2)
  2. 00:55:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8 singletaps feels a bit too much for this difficulty and not even in the kiai part. should be fine, this is an intense part
  3. 01:00:738 - See this sound left out here compared to the singletaps I talked about earlier means a big no no in my opinion because of inconsistency in where the actual harder stuff should be, I don't know though. this is not even an intense part of kiai, I only skipped red ticks with almost no sounds so it shouldn't be a problem
  4. 01:03:310 - ^, no point in pointing out all of those but I think they should be mapped. ^

    Other than that all good :)

Good luck with the map :)
thanks!
Sorry if it wasn't very useful :D
Atomosphere
hi from mod req!
did you ask for a BN yesterday cuz i think i saw that..

Chaos

I have a few problems with this diff:

00:12:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) and 00:15:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - has uncomfortable movement and after this there is an abrupt change in flow at 00:16:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2)
00:19:738 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - The spacing is quite random in this section. There are sounds that are the exact same but have different spacing
00:39:738 (1,2) - More movement then actually needed. (aka. Make this have better flow pls)
00:58:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uncomfortable movement, you could do something similar but change the pattern a bit
01:04:453 (2,3,4,5) - ^^
01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Messy jumps make them flow better
01:07:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uncomfortable Movement
01:13:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^^
01:16:024 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Is this really necessary
01:21:453 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - messy jumble of mess pls remap this entire section, it also changes flow very abruptly

Also i think this BG would be a better choice: http://i.imgur.com/wjEevOq.jpg

It's fun but looking at a modding perspective it does have a few problems. Just fix those up and we'll see how this map goes!
Topic Starter
Jabba

Atomosphere wrote:

hi from mod req!
did you ask for a BN yesterday cuz i think i saw that..

Chaos

I have a few problems with this diff:

00:12:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) and 00:15:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - has uncomfortable movement and after this there is an abrupt change in flow at 00:16:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) disagree, 00:15:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is basically an up-and-down movement, so is 00:16:310 (1,2,3,4) - . same goes for 00:12:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , but the notes after are a bit more rotated to indicate the end of this section, while still maintaining the flow
00:19:738 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - The spacing is quite random in this section. There are sounds that are the exact same but have different spacing emphasizing the vocals huh, and even with that the changes are still quite minor so it's not even that noticeable. though 00:25:167 (5) - was off so I fixed it
00:39:738 (1,2) - More movement then actually needed. (aka. Make this have better flow pls) uhhh not at all, just a simple back-and-forth movement, since you don't really have to follow the sliders - they're not that curved
00:58:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uncomfortable movement, you could do something similar but change the pattern a bit spin your cursor in circles and you can hit those
01:04:453 (2,3,4,5) - ^^ move your cursor in an arc and you can hit those
01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Messy jumps make them flow better I could explain pretty much eveything about those jumps, but I'll just say that 01:06:453 (2,1,2) - is an intended flow break because the background music changes there. rest follows either the 1-2-3-1-2-3 or 1-2-1-2 patterns in music
01:07:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uncomfortable Movement same
01:13:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^^ same
01:16:024 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Is this really necessary uh, yes? it's another climatic part of kiai, not as strong as 01:05:453 - but still intense enough to have 6 jumps
01:21:453 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - messy jumble of mess pls remap this entire section, it also changes flow very abruptly I'm sorry if you can't do back-and-forth jumps

Also i think this BG would be a better choice: http://i.imgur.com/wjEevOq.jpg nah I'm fine with this one tbh

It's fun but looking at a modding perspective it does have a few problems. Just fix those up and we'll see how this map goes!
no offense dude, but it might be worth learning how to play before modding hard maps!
thanks!
Atomosphere

Jabba wrote:

Atomosphere wrote:

hi from mod req!
did you ask for a BN yesterday cuz i think i saw that..

Chaos

I have a few problems with this diff:

00:12:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) and 00:15:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - has uncomfortable movement and after this there is an abrupt change in flow at 00:16:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) disagree, 00:15:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is basically an up-and-down movement, so is 00:16:310 (1,2,3,4) - . same goes for 00:12:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , but the notes after are a bit more rotated to indicate the end of this section, while still maintaining the flow
00:19:738 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - The spacing is quite random in this section. There are sounds that are the exact same but have different spacing emphasizing the vocals huh, and even with that the changes are still quite minor so it's not even that noticeable. though 00:25:167 (5) - was off so I fixed it
00:39:738 (1,2) - More movement then actually needed. (aka. Make this have better flow pls) uhhh not at all, just a simple back-and-forth movement, since you don't really have to follow the sliders - they're not that curved
00:58:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uncomfortable movement, you could do something similar but change the pattern a bit spin your cursor in circles and you can hit those
01:04:453 (2,3,4,5) - ^^ move your cursor in an arc and you can hit those
01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Messy jumps make them flow better I could explain pretty much eveything about those jumps, but I'll just say that 01:06:453 (2,1,2) - is an intended flow break because the background music changes there. rest follows either the 1-2-3-1-2-3 or 1-2-1-2 patterns in music
01:07:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uncomfortable Movement same
01:13:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^^ same
01:16:024 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Is this really necessary uh, yes? it's another climatic part of kiai, not as strong as 01:05:453 - but still intense enough to have 6 jumps
01:21:453 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - messy jumble of mess pls remap this entire section, it also changes flow very abruptly I'm sorry if you can't do back-and-forth jumps

Also i think this BG would be a better choice: http://i.imgur.com/wjEevOq.jpg nah I'm fine with this one tbh

It's fun but looking at a modding perspective it does have a few problems. Just fix those up and we'll see how this map goes!
no offense dude, but it might be worth learning how to play before modding hard maps!
thanks!
so all your opinions are based off the skill of the player? OK. I guess i'll shoot kudosu at this, cause' it may actually go somewhere..
Topic Starter
Jabba

Atomosphere wrote:

so all your opinions are based off the skill of the player? OK. I guess i'll shoot kudosu at this, cause' it may actually go somewhere..
not really, but you're the first person to have problems with the flow there, since all the jumps are arranged in a pretty much simple way and even more low-ranked players were fine with those jumps. no offense, yet again, and thanks for the star!
Atomosphere

Jabba wrote:

Atomosphere wrote:

so all your opinions are based off the skill of the player? OK. I guess i'll shoot kudosu at this, cause' it may actually go somewhere..
not really, but you're the first person to have problems with the flow there, since all the jumps are arranged in a pretty much simple way and even more low-ranked players were fine with those jumps. no offense, yet again, and thanks for the star!
well people have opinions
Topic Starter
Jabba

Atomosphere wrote:

well people have opinions
true, but sometimes one's opinion is quite unpopular (considering I got a ton of testplays already), thus I don't really want to change this
pavpab
Updated c:
Asuka_-

Noffy wrote:

[Asuka_-'s Insane]
  1. 00:05:881 (5) - Ehh... there isn't really a sound here to click to. Stacking it on top of the really strong 00:06:024 (1) - weaken's (1)'s impact in the map as well. I'd suggest figuring out a pattern where you can extend 00:05:595 (4) - to be 1/1 instead.
    okay made (4) to 1/2 reverse >w<
  2. 00:33:310 (5) - Again, there isn't really a sound here for clicking to. All of the higher difficulties even have it mapped as a sliderend!
    yea good point, but i want to keep because 00:32:881 (4,5,1) - is following vocal, 00:33:310 (5) - emphasize naxt slidervocal. i added hitsound to (5) instead.!
  3. 00:45:024 (2) - Not that it makes a difference but why the random white node in the middle? haha
    fixed~
  4. 00:56:024 (4,1) - The angle here, in my opinion, is faar smaller than it should be, and as a result makes the entirety of 00:56:310 (1,2,3,4) - more difficult to play than it would have been on its own.
    neafed them~
  5. 01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - Consider setting the combo color for these to be something else, the light blue blends in with the default spinner.
    nice
thanks!!

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Topic Starter
Jabba
did some changes to zel's and eze's diffs bcs they seem to be a lil bit dead now
Wishkey
Heyo! srry for the delay :/

General
Tuning down the volume of the clap.wav file or picking a bit softer clap would be nice, current one overtakes the music way too much instead of supporting it, the snares in the song aren't really that strong either

Chaos
  1. 00:14:595 (5,6) - pretty insane jump compared to the rest in this section, would reduce this a bit
  2. 00:26:310 (4,1) - bit awkward flow and trasition here, could maybe try something like this so you have the flow break and more impact on (1) instead of breaking earlier
  3. 00:28:595 (5) - extending like something you did here 00:10:310 (5) - would give a lot more impact for the change on the next combo then just 1/2 slider spam here
  4. 00:57:310 (6) - would really like this see this clickable at the end for that strong vocal and snare and constrast with 00:57:738 (7) - with how differernt these musically are, extended slider+circle could work here
  5. 01:17:738 (4) - 2 circles for those drums would be nice for contrast in this combo and it goes well with 01:20:024 (4,5) -
  6. Main gripe with this diff compared to the other extra's is that this really feels like a stretched out insane diff. Except for the huge jumps, the rest feels really easy to play and just a bit too simple for an extra diff with like the long and easy ccw or cw flow even on some parts like 00:17:595 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - where the music is so powerful you can go really all out in terms of emhasizing/patterning/rhythm choiche felt a bit underwhelming for a 7 star diff. This makes the jumps feel really overdone too bc of the constrast unfortunatly. This kinda boils down to mapping styles tho, in terms of rankability there isn't really anyhing major wrong with it but thats mainly due to how 'safe" the mapping style is for lack of a better word and for a 7 star diff I personally felt it could've had a lot more impact/expression at some parts but other bn's might think otherwise so I'd try your luck with others first before making any major changes since its more mapping style related than it being a bad diff
Light Insane
  1. 00:09:453 (1) - 1/2 slider + circle would fit a lot better for diff for having all those major vocals clickable and the drum intensity
  2. 01:07:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - would change to clockwise flow here since you're coming from a really ccw heavy combo's and to avoid mouse drift, control G 01:07:881 (2,4) - these indiually and place 01:08:595 (5) - on the head of (2) for example
  3. 01:16:881 (1,2) - similar to ^ changing movement direction would really benefit playability here, until 01:12:595 (2) - its full ccw until the end atm
Advanced
  1. 00:17:453 (1) - would just delete this note for this diff, feels really overmapped with what you're following after. Or you could make 00:16:881 (4,1) - into 2 1/2 sliders like 00:14:595 (4,5) - or return+circle bc 00:17:310 - is a clear finisher of this section
  2. 00:31:167 (1,2,3) - would just follow the vocals or drum here and not mix it since its rather odd to follow, mapping the vocals on red seems best compared to the rest of the map imo by moving (2) to 1/2 beat to the left
  3. 00:33:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
  4. 00:36:595 (3,1,2) - move all a bit down left with ds on to avoid the overlap at 00:37:453 (2,2) -
  5. 00:42:595 (1,1) - would change the first one into a return and next one into 1/2 slider, 00:42:595 (1) - has a lot more audible trip sound with the added bg instrument and stronger snare and 00:42:167 (4,1) - slider into slider is a bit underwhelming where a major shift/speed up is
  6. 01:03:167 (1) - Circle would be nice here for a bit of differentiation and to represent the vocal break, kinda like you did at 00:28:881 (1,2) -
  7. 01:12:310 (1) - ^
  8. 01:19:167 (3,4) - making 3 a return and adding a cirlce + NC at the current end of 4 would better resprent the vocals here, since you got the start of the new vocal stanza at tail atm

Normal
  1. 00:17:453 (1,2) - kinda missing the start off the 3/2 section here with the skipped red, I'd to for 2 3/2 sliders instead starting on 00:17:595 - 00:17:595 (5) - so you catch all the most important notes here
Overall a good set! Unfortunatly I'm personally not really a fan of how the top diff is mapped (explainaned in the mod), good luck!
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