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-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2017-05-31T12:50:58+00:00

More mod Please.....

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2017-05-31T15:33:19+00:00

reminder to add this into the description

"Underdogs have changed his name to Winter Story, so type out 'Winter Story' if you want to find Underdogs" so that people will have easier time to find who did the hard diff (considering i changed name lo)

increased od and hp as well thanks nextplay

bubble when w

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-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

-NanoRIPE- 2017-06-01T01:25:54+00:00

wihh nggk nyangka sempet bubble xd

well

easy
00:57:182 (1) - kenapa spinner disini? its not make sense at all,karena beatnya naik disini tapi kamu malah gunakan spinner.kan lebih baik taruh circle dan slider disini dulu terus nanti di 01:00:109 - baru spinner.itu lebih make sense

dan di bagian akhir ada green line yg nggk kepake,di hapus aja

normal
00:49:499 (2,3) - nggk usah overlap disini deh,jelek diliatnya

hard
00:28:645 (2,3) - too close xd it looks overlap for me

insane
00:35:231 (1,2) - lebih baik shapenya di samain aja (ctrl D atau copy slider (1) ) biar lebih enak patternya
00:39:621 (1,2,3,4) - jgn ikutin ds disini,kasih jump biar enak ke vocalnya
00:44:743 (5) - dijauhin dikit biar kelihatan kamu sengaja kasih jauh slidernya dari circle (4) - karena suara drumnya
01:00:109 (1) - maaf,bukannya utk ngehancurin sliderart yg sangat nan indah ini tapi slider ini kurang masuk ke musicnya imo.kalau saya sih slidertailnya pas kena vocalnya di 01:03:401 - (kalau mau keep serah aja sih soalnya mubazir kalau di hapus nih slider kwkwkw)

sebenarnya msh banyak yg pingin saya kasih mod tapi karena para bn kayak berpikir nih mapset udh siap hadi saya hanya ksh saran yg bener2 menurutku harus diperbaiki
GL ya~

Last edited by -NanoRIPE- 2017-06-01T05:13:24+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Surono

7,195 posts

Joined November 2013

Surono 2017-06-01T03:31:31+00:00

perjalanan.... masih.... panjang............

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2017-06-01T12:21:17+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
wihh nggk nyangka sempet bubble xd

well

easy
00:57:182 (1) - kenapa spinner disini? its not make sense at all,karena beatnya naik disini tapi kamu malah gunakan spinner.kan lebih baik taruh circle dan slider disini dulu terus nanti di 01:00:109 - baru spinner.itu lebih make sense Fixed!

dan di bagian akhir ada green line yg nggk kepake,di hapus aja Ok !

normal
00:49:499 (2,3) - nggk usah overlap disini deh,jelek diliatnya Fixed!

GL ya~ Thank you very much

MisakiAN

389 posts

Joined November 2015

MisakiAN 2017-06-02T07:09:08+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
insane
00:35:231 (1,2) - lebih baik shapenya di samain aja (ctrl D atau copy slider (1) ) biar lebih enak patternya wokeh
00:39:621 (1,2,3,4) - jgn ikutin ds disini,kasih jump biar enak ke vocalnya okay
00:44:743 (5) - dijauhin dikit biar kelihatan kamu sengaja kasih jauh slidernya dari circle (4) - karena suara drumnya g nyadar x'd FIX
01:00:109 (1) - maaf,bukannya utk ngehancurin sliderart yg sangat nan indah ini tapi slider ini kurang masuk ke musicnya imo.kalau saya sih slidertailnya pas kena vocalnya di 01:03:401 - (kalau mau keep serah aja sih soalnya mubazir kalau di hapus nih slider kwkwkw) kayaknya g usah dihapus deh :'u mubazir.saya emang dari awal udah niat,slider tail pas disini 01:04:133 -

GL ya~

Makasih Modnya~~

OWO

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Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2017-06-03T12:16:19+00:00

For some reasons other diffs aren't colorhaxed apart from Insane

[-Kyu's Advanced]

00:22:243 - boop why did you ignore this
00:14:743 (1,2,3,4) - 00:26:450 (1,2,3,4,5) - Bad rhythm variation, firstly because you mapped 00:14:926 but not 00:26:633 and another thing is that spamming clickable objects 00:26:999 (2,3,4,5) is clearly harder to play than 00:15:109 (2,3,4) . Both of these things are done too differently considering they are mapped on the same rhythm.
00:52:426 - Same variation thing mentioned in Underdogs' diff, 00:52:426 (4,5,6) - are too different from 00:53:889 (1,2,3) - 00:55:353 (4,5,6) and regardless of you want to do a variation or not, it is inconsistently done.

[Underdogs' Hard]

00:22:792 (3,4,5) - Is not spaced in the same way as 00:11:084 (3,4,5) for some reason.
00:36:694 (1,2) - Doesn't flow well cuz slider leniency thing.
00:49:499 (3,4,5,6) - The way whole thing was placed makes 00:49:865 (4) so underemphasized, actually I don't see how the pattern 00:49:865 (4,5,6) reflects anything from the song in the first place so would be nice if you can elaborate.
00:52:060 (3,4) - 00:56:450 (7) - Not a good variation when compared with 00:53:523 (7) - 00:54:987 (3) cuz you're not vary things in a consistent way, also 00:56:633 Should be mapped considering they're the same rhythm and the intensity hasn't changed yet until 00:57:182 .

[MisakiAN's Insane]

Like, you need to be more consistent with your emphasises in the diff, for instance stuff like 00:14:194 (4,5) got a low spacing despite emphasizing vocals with bigger spacings on other places so better going through your diff again.
00:12:913 (6) - Why these aren't circles for obvious vocal reasons and it’s inconsistent with everything else.
00:27:182 (1,2,3,4) - So this thing has a rotation movement but then you did a different idea on 00:15:474 (1,2,3,4) . Not that they have to be the same, but not to the point where they are so different that they show different ideas/interpretations.
00:30:657 (4,1) - And then you broke the idea of circular flow here which is inconsistent with what you did in the rest of the map, actually the whole thing 00:32:121 (4,1,2,1) has very uncomfortable angles in gameplay which could be polished more.
00:46:572 (4) - You also used 3 sliders in other places like 00:33:767 (1,2,3) - 00:48:401 (1,2,3) - etc so and now you're breaking the consistency.
00:59:011 - The drum thing started here so this should be clickable by making 00:58:645 (1) an extended slider or something.
01:00:109 (1) - Most epic beat of the song and it got a super duper low spacing.
The flow in kiai is pretty much unpolished. Like, all the first kiai has is a clockwise flow and then flows in second kiai is kinda this and there everywhere with no clear intention of it (which is what you should pay extremely attention considering you used so much circular flow) . Apart from SV, kiai isn't really that much different from the verse regarding the intensity, like you could do something more significant with changing your flow styles, using bigger spacings or something to make the way both kiai and non-kiai parts are more different.
Aesthetics also kinda rankable but could be polished in many places like 00:18:401 (2,4,1) - 00:26:450 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:32:121 (4,2,1) - etc come on you gotta make visual spacings more consistent.

Tbh Easy and Normal needs improvement too but not major as other diffs so I'll leave it at that, good luck~

MisakiAN

389 posts

Joined November 2015

MisakiAN 2017-06-04T06:57:19+00:00

Electoz wrote:
[MisakiAN's Insane]

Like, you need to be more consistent with your emphasises in the diff, for instance stuff like 00:14:194 (4,5) got a low spacing despite emphasizing vocals with bigger spacings on other places so better going through your diff again. okay,fixed
00:12:913 (6) - Why these aren't circles for obvious vocal reasons and it’s inconsistent with everything else. change it into circle
00:27:182 (1,2,3,4) - So this thing has a rotation movement but then you did a different idea on 00:15:474 (1,2,3,4) . Not that they have to be the same, but not to the point where they are so different that they show different ideas/interpretations. i try to make the jumps same
00:30:657 (4,1) - And then you broke the idea of circular flow here which is inconsistent with what you did in the rest of the map, actually the whole thing 00:32:121 (4,1,2,1) has very uncomfortable angles in gameplay which could be polished more. i try to change and fix it
00:46:572 (4) - You also used 3 sliders in other places like 00:33:767 (1,2,3) - 00:48:401 (1,2,3) - etc so and now you're breaking the consistency. okay,i change this 00:46:572 (4) - into circle
00:59:011 - The drum thing started here so this should be clickable by making 00:58:645 (1) an extended slider or something. Fixed
01:00:109 (1) - Most epic beat of the song and it got a super duper low spacing. i try to increase the spacing
The flow in kiai is pretty much unpolished. Like, all the first kiai has is a clockwise flow and then flows in second kiai is kinda this and there everywhere with no clear intention of it (which is what you should pay extremely attention considering you used so much circular flow) . Apart from SV, kiai isn't really that much different from the verse regarding the intensity, like you could do something more significant with changing your flow styles, using bigger spacings or something to make the way both kiai and non-kiai parts are more different. aye sirthank you for your advice
Aesthetics also kinda rankable but could be polished in many places like 00:18:401 (2,4,1) - 00:26:450 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:32:121 (4,2,1) - etc come on you gotta make visual spacings more consistent. okay i try

Thanks for your mod~~

NYAN

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Spayyce

693 posts

Joined December 2013

Spayyce 2017-06-06T03:36:13+00:00

Hi! I've followed this map for a bit and think it would be good to give a few final thoughts on this map.

MisakiAN's Insane

00:22:426 (2,1) - Stack these properly

00:22:426 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You're in the same place for so long here, almost 4 seconds. I don't see why you're not branching out, to make it more obvious too most notes here are stacked, they're just different jump ideas on the same location each time, but the music has the exact same variation it has had through the whole song, I wouldn't restrict yourself to this area so much, it feels claustrophobic XD

00:49:865 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue here? Don't see any reason they just change randomly.

01:00:109 (1) - I hate to mention this too, but with my suggestions in the other diffs about where their spinners end I am sure it'd apply to this, as lovely as it is </3

Underdog's Hard

00:11:084 (3) - Distance between the beginning and end aren't the same. I can't explain this too well so I will use pictures instead ^^

Your Slider

Potentially Improved Slider

I hope you can see that in the slider I edited the distance is consistent throughout the whole slider and it looks aesthetically pleasing.

00:35:231 (4) - Same idea as first suggestion, moving the red anchor to x: 324 y:88 will make the point on which the slider curves better match the center.

00:44:011 (5,9) - Small stacking issue here!

-Kyu's Advanced

00:13:096 (2) - Since I am super nazi, move this down to: X:184 Y:352 for better blanket. XD

00:16:023 (4,5) - When you use more than one white anchor in a slider it won't retain the newer algorithm that's used for making sliders. It'll use a pre-2013 way of determining shape. With this we need to use more white ticks in order to make a curve mimic the look of a modern slider - because they're undeniably better in 99% of cases.

Slider Art

With this picture, we can see how I used two white anchors on the first curve so that the blanket remains consistent, but the slider itself has a curve that has its apex in the correct location.

01:00:200 (1) - Same spinner suggestion as normal and easy.

Normal

00:18:401 (4,1,2,3) - Similar to when I pointed out in your easy. There is inconsistency in what type of flow you want. For the 00:18:401 (4,1) - You've went against the slider end's natural flow, but then 00:19:133 (1,2) - you've reintroduced it. Doesn't necessarily play much worse, it's just confusing how you are interacting with the music in terms of flow.

00:27:182 (4,5,1) - The sliders interaction again, the curve makes no sense to be placed there with the motion the cursor will be following prior to the buildup. I made a picture to try and explain it better:

Flow

In the picture you can see that the green line would dictate a steady curve with no deviation, with the red line you're forced to deviate into the slider making the curve pointless, because the cursor is not going to follow the curvature of the slider.

00:30:840 (1) - Move this to X:192 Y:352 just so its parallel with the slider before

00:35:231 (3,4) - For this combination I think a nicer looking slider can be used prior whilst keeping a blanket effect.

Slider

Slider Anchors

Something like that would work really well because the flow in this wave slider is the same throughout.

00:42:548 (1) - Use the same concept as I shown above here.

00:45:474 (1,3) - Maybe use the same slider type here for a better aesthetic look (preferably slider 3 because it has the red anchor on the tick which compliments the music more)

00:51:328 (1) - The second white anchor is way too far out in comparison to the others, it makes the wave looks disproportional and stretched, move the second white anchor to: X:384 Y:60 for a result like this:

Slider Wave

00:52:792 (1) - See 00:35:231 (3).

01:00:109 (1) - Same as easy for spinner length.

Easy

00:14:377 (1) - This note feels unneeded because the vocal sound is exactly the same at 00:11:450 and 00:12:913 , but you haven't put a note there. I would remove it for consistency.

00:19:865 (2) - X:288 Y:36 so the cursor is following a smooth curve between the trio of notes instead.

00:38:523 - There isn't a note here, but there is one at 00:35:596. Same as the first suggestion the songs vocals have the same intensity, but you've only mapped one part on which it occurs, which is quite inconsistent.

00:52:792 (3,4) - Circular slider indicates the next note placement, I see the triangle done, but wouldn't it be better to give the sliderend some purpose here?

01:03:401 - Spinners should end here, it does in both taiko diffs and the hard. It is the point on which the vocals are re-introduced. Stopping the slider after the first vocal makes no sense and you might as well continue it through every other vocal.

MisakiAN

389 posts

Joined November 2015

MisakiAN 2017-06-06T06:51:57+00:00

-Space- wrote:
MisakiAN's Insane

00:22:426 (2,1) - Stack these properly okay

00:22:426 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You're in the same place for so long here, almost 4 seconds. I don't see why you're not branching out, to make it more obvious too most notes here are stacked, they're just different jump ideas on the same location each time, but the music has the exact same variation it has had through the whole song, I wouldn't restrict yourself to this area so much, it feels claustrophobic XD i try to fix it..but i dont see anythings wrong with it (sorry,im bad at explaining in english :") )

00:49:865 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue here? Don't see any reason they just change randomly. Fixed

01:00:109 (1) - I hate to mention this too, but with my suggestions in the other diffs about where their spinners end I am sure it'd apply to this, as lovely as it is </3 :o i dont wanna change this ;;..but the slider like the spinner,in here 01:04:133 - so i dont wanna change it ;;

Thanks for your mod~

FREEDOM

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-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2017-06-06T12:12:16+00:00

-Space- wrote:
Hi! I've followed this map for a bit and think it would be good to give a few final thoughts on this map.

Normal

00:18:401 (4,1,2,3) - Similar to when I pointed out in your easy. There is inconsistency in what type of flow you want. For the 00:18:401 (4,1) - You've went against the slider end's natural flow, but then 00:19:133 (1,2) - you've reintroduced it. Doesn't necessarily play much worse, it's just confusing how you are interacting with the music in terms of flow. Fixed it !!!.... for a better flow

00:27:182 (4,5,1) - The sliders interaction again, the curve makes no sense to be placed there with the motion the cursor will be following prior to the buildup. I made a picture to try and explain it better:

Flow

In the picture you can see that the green line would dictate a steady curve with no deviation, with the red line you're forced to deviate into the slider making the curve pointless, because the cursor is not going to follow the curvature of the slider. Fixed it for a better flow too

00:30:840 (1) - Move this to X:192 Y:352 just so its parallel with the slider before Fixed

00:35:231 (3,4) - For this combination I think a nicer looking slider can be used prior whilst keeping a blanket effect.

Slider

Slider Anchors

Something like that would work really well because the flow in this wave slider is the same throughout. Sure Thanks

00:42:548 (1) - Use the same concept as I shown above here. Okay

00:45:474 (1,3) - Maybe use the same slider type here for a better aesthetic look (preferably slider 3 because it has the red anchor on the tick which compliments the music more) Yes

00:51:328 (1) - The second white anchor is way too far out in comparison to the others, it makes the wave looks disproportional and stretched, move the second white anchor to: X:384 Y:60 for a result like this:

Slider Wave

00:52:792 (1) - See 00:35:231 (3). Okay

01:00:109 (1) - Same as easy for spinner length. Fixed

Easy

00:14:377 (1) - This note feels unneeded because the vocal sound is exactly the same at 00:11:450 and 00:12:913 , but you haven't put a note there. I would remove it for consistency. Fixed

00:19:865 (2) - X:288 Y:36 so the cursor is following a smooth curve between the trio of notes instead. Fixed

00:38:523 - There isn't a note here, but there is one at 00:35:596. Same as the first suggestion the songs vocals have the same intensity, but you've only mapped one part on which it occurs, which is quite inconsistent. Fixed

00:52:792 (3,4) - Circular slider indicates the next note placement, I see the triangle done, but wouldn't it be better to give the sliderend some purpose here? Changed

01:03:401 - Spinners should end here, it does in both taiko diffs and the hard. It is the point on which the vocals are re-introduced. Stopping the slider after the first vocal makes no sense and you might as well continue it through every other vocal. Fixed

Thanks for the Mod

Last edited by -Aerith- 2017-06-07T09:13:27+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

-Kyu

487 posts

Joined October 2015

-Kyu 2017-06-07T08:47:11+00:00

Electoz wrote:
For some reasons other diffs aren't colorhaxed apart from Insane

[-Kyu's Advanced]

00:22:243 - boop why did you ignore this
00:14:743 (1,2,3,4) - 00:26:450 (1,2,3,4,5) - Bad rhythm variation, firstly because you mapped 00:14:926 but not 00:26:633 and another thing is that spamming clickable objects 00:26:999 (2,3,4,5) is clearly harder to play than 00:15:109 (2,3,4) . Both of these things are done too differently considering they are mapped on the same rhythm.
00:52:426 - Same variation thing mentioned in Underdogs' diff, 00:52:426 (4,5,6) - are too different from 00:53:889 (1,2,3) - 00:55:353 (4,5,6) and regardless of you want to do a variation or not, it is inconsistently done.

reverting the variations i did that look inconsistent,and made it similar instead

-Space- wrote:
Hi! I've followed this map for a bit and think it would be good to give a few final thoughts on this map.

-Kyu's Advanced

00:13:096 (2) - Since I am super nazi, move this down to: X:184 Y:352 for better blanket. XD thank you for that

00:16:023 (4,5) - When you use more than one white anchor in a slider it won't retain the newer algorithm that's used for making sliders. It'll use a pre-2013 way of determining shape. With this we need to use more white ticks in order to make a curve mimic the look of a modern slider - because they're undeniably better in 99% of cases.

Slider Art

With this picture, we can see how I used two white anchors on the first curve so that the blanket remains consistent, but the slider itself has a curve that has its apex in the correct location. good idea,will apply this and remember this tip for further mapping

01:00:200 (1) - Same spinner suggestion as normal and easy.kinda agree with this so fixed

thank you for the mod!
now i just need to adjust these hitsounds,sounds kinda messy

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Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2017-06-07T16:47:57+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
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hard
00:28:645 (2,3) - too close xd it looks overlap for me blankets anyway so meh

Electoz wrote:
For some reasons other diffs aren't colorhaxed apart from Insane

[Underdogs' Hard]

00:22:792 (3,4,5) - Is not spaced in the same way as 00:11:084 (3,4,5) for some reason. As starter, 00:11:816 (5) - suddenly changed flow for no apparent reason. And for that it might be a bit harder for people to hit notes. 00:22:792 (3,4,5) - On the other flows on one direction and at which, is slightly easier so increased spacing to add a spice of challenge
00:36:694 (1,2) - Doesn't flow well cuz slider leniency thing.
Just me trying to emphasize 00:36:694 (1) - since im not that creative. Will still revise should it get pointed out
00:49:499 (3,4,5,6) - The way whole thing was placed makes 00:49:865 (4) so underemphasized, actually I don't see how the pattern 00:49:865 (4,5,6) reflects anything from the song in the first place so would be nice if you can elaborate. As the outro of the vocal section. I figured that adding rhythm here would help the transition out after vocal. It should be a diff spike compared to advanced as adding 1/1 is a bit too bland for me
00:52:060 (3,4) - 00:56:450 (7) - Not a good variation when compared with 00:53:523 (7) - 00:54:987 (3) cuz you're not vary things in a consistent way, also 00:56:633 Should be mapped considering they're the same rhythm and the intensity hasn't changed yet until 00:57:182. Unless it is advanced, I don't think it's much of a problem to add variation inconsistently. Maybe it's my style. But whatever

-Space- wrote:
Hi! I've followed this map for a bit and think it would be good to give a few final thoughts on this map.

Underdog's Hard

00:11:084 (3) - Distance between the beginning and end aren't the same. I can't explain this too well so I will use pictures instead ^^

Your Slider

Potentially Improved Slider

I hope you can see that in the slider I edited the distance is consistent throughout the whole slider and it looks aesthetically pleasing. I got the image. But the gameplay doesn't affect much, this is subjective, and should it be objective modding, then I would change it ASAP

00:35:231 (4) - Same idea as first suggestion, moving the red anchor to x: 324 y:88 will make the point on which the slider curves better match the center. Like I said, it doesn't affect gameplay much until i need to change it

00:44:011 (5,9) - Small stacking issue here! fixed. thanks for pointing it out

thanks for mod anyways w

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-Aerith-

843 posts

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-Aerith- 2017-06-24T03:12:16+00:00

uuhhhh.........Guys ?

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2017-06-24T09:55:17+00:00

I'm interested in modding this after the BN results come out. So placeholder.

-Aerith-

843 posts

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-Aerith- 2017-06-24T12:46:50+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
I'm interested in modding this after the BN results come out. So placeholder.

BN Results what do you mean

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2017-06-24T13:50:58+00:00

He took a test to see if he got what it takes to be a nominator. Looks like -Nya- passed and is interested with the map,and want it to be pushed forward.
(Pls check me set as well ty)

-Aerith-

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-Aerith- 2017-06-24T15:46:33+00:00

Winter Story wrote:
He took a test to see if he got what it takes to be a nominator. Looks like -Nya- passed and is interested with the map,and want it to be pushed forward.
(Pls check me set as well ty)

Oh i see. I didnt know that lol.
Well i wish you for the best good luck -Nya- !!

-Nya-

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Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2017-06-24T17:34:14+00:00

Winter Story wrote:
He took a test to see if he got what it takes to be a nominator. Looks like -Nya- passed and is interested with the map,and want it to be pushed forward.
(Pls check me set as well ty)

Firstly I'm a "she" lol and the results aren't out yet so I don't know if I passed. Please don't get your hopes up >.< I'm interested in the map cause I like the song.

-Aerith-

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-Aerith- 2017-06-28T08:39:39+00:00

........

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-Aerith-

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-Aerith- 2017-07-02T14:27:18+00:00

REMAPPED Easy and Normal diff ~

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Awlex

67 posts

Joined December 2014

Awlex 2017-07-11T05:32:51+00:00

It might be me, but I think everything misakiAN's Freedom should be moved about 15ms to the left

Bz EsKa

9 posts

Joined December 2015

Bz EsKa 2017-07-13T18:17:11+00:00

Hey

new modder, if you may excuse me for my mistake

Easy

00:39:987 - We go through 2 "fast" slider after that, it might be a bit difficult
00:45:840 / 00:55:353 - same opinion here, it can be good for learn higher difficulty, it's true. After, you're the boss

other are fine because of the "long" slider coming after by me.
(and be careful to the double note, this map is for newbie, they prolly can't read that yet

)

Normal
Seem really good by me (maybe there's still some "fast slider" (00:38:889) or double note but I think it's good for the diff and fit it)

-Kyu's Advanced
00:13:096 - Put 2 circle here instead of a slider can be cool to follow the next patern (or make the next with a slider, or leave it as it right now, all will fit anyway).
00:39:255 - the slider is a bit too much, maybe just a circle here - 00:39:438 is better ? (to separate the combo for each other as a comma, even if I admit that the slider fit best)
Thats all

Underdog's Hard the name is Underdog's or Underdogs' ?
00:25:535 (2,3) - Try to converse these two (put the slider at - 00:25:535 - and the circle - 00:26:084 and change the map to fit the jump space) and say me what you think about it :3
00:37:792 (3,4) - these two aren't parallel ;p
I'm done here too

MisakiAN's Freedom
Nothing in particular to say, I'll prolly miss my beloved triplet on this one but it's really cool to play, so I'll forgive you

Maybe some SV change in the first part (before the first kiai) who fit with the music can be cool

Because 1,5x is fine but I think it can be even better with some change !

Sorry I'm not such a pro as taiko to be of any help ><

Sur's Oni
00:14:560 - this one might be a bit too much (don't ask me why this one disturb me since this one - 00:26:267 - didn't)
The other taiko's one have nothing that I noticed.

Good job all of you ! This mapset is really clean and complete by me, I think it can already be ranked ^^ at least, I want it to too.
Sorry for my english, have a good day you all :*

-Aerith-

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-Aerith- 2017-07-14T02:05:16+00:00

Bz EsKa wrote:
Hey new modder, if you may excuse me for my mistake

Easy

00:39:987 - We go through 2 "fast" slider after that, it might be a bit difficult its part of the kiai anyway :3
00:45:840 / 00:55:353 - same opinion here, it can be good for learn higher difficulty, it's true. After, you're the boss
other are fine because of the "long" slider coming after by me.
(and be careful to the double note, this map is for newbie, they prolly can't read that yet ) I think that will be okay :3

Normal
Seem really good by me (maybe there's still some "fast slider" (00:38:889) or double note but I think it's good for the diff and fit it) Okay

Good job all of you ! This mapset is really clean and complete by me, I think it can already be ranked ^^ at least, I want it to too. I will ranked this map no matter what ;w;
Sorry for my english, have a good day you all :*

Thank you ~

Hytex

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558 posts

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Hytex 2017-07-16T07:37:14+00:00

re mod lol

[misakian]
difficulty needs some polishing in quality
by quality i mean sliders, jumps, flow etc. but flow is alright i guess
00:12:182 (4) - slider tail has higher beat than the head, so try to figure out how to fix this
00:13:096 (7,1) - in my screen they both have the same combo colours, huh
00:13:828 (2,5) - blanket, it looks "bad" when its not blanketed i guess
00:16:755 (2,3) - for me this flow so bad, because you have to rise your cursor when reaching (3)
00:22:426 (2,3) - blanket
00:32:304 (1,2) - should have the same pattern as 00:30:840 (1) - imo
00:37:060 (2,3) - blanket
00:38:157 (1,2) - ^
00:44:011 (3) - maybe try to fix this slider in a proper way
00:45:474 (1,2) - blanket
00:47:304 (3,5) - ^ you should try and look out for the blanket errors and stuff before submitting/update the gd

difficulty is still bad in terms of quality since it lacks of polishing
i just pointed out the obvious mistakes

[winter story]
uhh you should try and use the default skin
those follow points bug me

still great diff tho

its blanket dude btw
00:38:706 (5,1) - blanket properly
00:33:767 (1) - 00:36:694 (1) - 00:45:474 (1) - 00:48:401 (1) - you used reverses there but not here 00:39:621 (1) - :thinking:
thats all

[normel]
ok

[easy]
00:18:401 (2) - i dont know if large beats on tail in easy is allowed or not
00:39:987 (3,4) - stacking isnt allowed
same applies with all the other stacked objects ^
also boring, just slider on the sides and some literally have no shape
almost all of the sections of the songs are filled with sliders
each slider also have a 2 1/1 gap in double bpm, which makes it more boring
and most patterns are just repeated from the previous sections, be more creative.

kd pls bye

-Aerith-

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-Aerith- 2017-07-16T09:57:14+00:00

Hytex wrote:
re mod lol

[normel]
ok

[easy]
00:18:401 (2) - i dont know if large beats on tail in easy is allowed or not
00:39:987 (3,4) - stacking isnt allowed Fixed
same applies with all the other stacked objects ^
also boring, just slider on the sides and some literally have no shape
almost all of the sections of the songs are filled with sliders
each slider also have a 2 1/1 gap in double bpm, which makes it more boring
and most patterns are just repeated from the previous sections, be more creative. lol ok i'll try

kd pls bye

Thanks ~

-Aerith-

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-Aerith- 2017-07-21T09:54:00+00:00

popped bubble already expired since Yuii- is quit being a BN or just taking a break

. i need to find another person to icon this map again or should i just talk to Koiyuki again im not sure im confused

Hytex

Beatmap Nominator

558 posts

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Hytex 2017-07-21T14:12:18+00:00

first let the gd'ers apply the mods then ur probs ready

-Aerith-

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-Aerith- 2017-07-21T14:25:22+00:00

Hytex wrote:
first let the gd'ers apply the mods then ur probs ready

Yea i already tell them :3 , they will answer your mod

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Koiyuki

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2017-07-23T18:00:34+00:00

please make sure that all mods got checked and replied

Easy
00:31:572 (1) - unnecessary nc imo
00:24:792 (4,5) - well forum pmed

insane still looks messy... especially these slider patterns in kiai plays like hard
for a new mapper it's just a ok diff but far from an enough quality diff, i'd like to give it a pass but you may not get a pass again from another bn
seriously

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2017-07-23T22:48:53+00:00

Bz EsKa wrote:
Underdog's Hard the name is Underdog's or Underdogs' ? it's the latter
00:25:535 (2,3) - Try to converse these two (put the slider at - 00:25:535 - and the circle - 00:26:084 and change the map to fit the jump space) and say me what you think about it :3 it works the same either way
00:37:792 (3,4) - these two aren't parallel ;p fix
I'm done here too

Hytex wrote:
re mod lol

[winter story]
uhh you should try and use the default skin
those follow points bug me
still great diff tho
its blanket dude btw ye i know
00:38:706 (5,1) - blanket properly was reluctant but ok
00:33:767 (1) - 00:36:694 (1) - 00:45:474 (1) - 00:48:401 (1) - you used reverses there but not here 00:39:621 (1) - :thinking: there was a slight change on the singing so i made a slight pause to indicate the difference.

kd pls bye u fILtHY kDs faRmEr XdddddddddddddddddddDdDdDD

-Aerith- wrote:
Yea i already tell them :3 , they will answer your mod .... jeez relax kid

aerith you better not be cocky and be grateful for the bubble

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-Aerith-

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-Aerith- 2017-07-24T08:35:21+00:00

Koiyuki wrote:
please make sure that all mods got checked and replied Okay

Easy
00:31:572 (1) - unnecessary nc imo Fixed ~
00:24:792 (4,5) - well forum pmed uh im sorry what do you mean i dont get it ;w;

insane still looks messy... especially these slider patterns in kiai plays like hard
for a new mapper it's just a ok diff but far from an enough quality diff, i'd like to give it a pass but you may not get a pass again from another bn
seriously yeah you're right lol , but dont worry we will try to fix that

Thank you very much ~

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-Aerith- 2017-07-24T08:43:27+00:00

So sorry for the late reply mod by -Kyu and MisakiAN ;w;

well Kyu has his own reason why he cant reply to some of your mod , wanna know why this is the reason :

No internet at my house,so I can't be online anymore,I'll try to find a way to connect to bancho

and as for MisakiAN , i think i heard my friend said that she's in hospital for 1 week and thats why she cant reply to your mod guys
(i feel bad for her xd i hope she get better soon

)

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-Aerith- 2017-07-24T08:52:03+00:00

I will be in charge for replying on -Kyu's mod for awhile since i feel bad for him that he dont have a internet on his house ;w;

Bz EsKa wrote:
Hey new modder, if you may excuse me for my mistake

-Kyu's Advanced
00:13:096 - Put 2 circle here instead of a slider can be cool to follow the next patern (or make the next with a slider, or leave it as it right now, all will fit anyway).
i think its fine just like that so... no change ~

00:39:255 - the slider is a bit too much, maybe just a circle here - 00:39:438 is better ? (to separate the combo for each other as a comma, even if I admit that the slider fit best) same
Thats all

Good job all of you ! This mapset is really clean and complete by me, I think it can already be ranked ^^ at least, I want it to too.
Sorry for my english, have a good day you all :*

Thanks for the Mod Bz Eska ~

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-Aerith- 2017-07-26T14:05:53+00:00

Bz EsKa wrote:
Hey new modder, if you may excuse me for my mistake

MisakiAN's Freedom
Nothing in particular to say, I'll prolly miss my beloved triplet on this one but it's really cool to play, so I'll forgive you
Maybe some SV change in the first part (before the first kiai) who fit with the music can be cool Because 1,5x is fine but I think it can be even better with some change !

Good job all of you ! This mapset is really clean and complete by me, I think it can already be ranked ^^ at least, I want it to too.
Sorry for my english, have a good day you all :*

Hytex wrote:
re mod lol

[misakian]
difficulty needs some polishing in quality
by quality i mean sliders, jumps, flow etc. but flow is alright i guess
00:12:182 (4) - slider tail has higher beat than the head, so try to figure out how to fix this
00:13:096 (7,1) - in my screen they both have the same combo colours, huh
00:13:828 (2,5) - blanket, it looks "bad" when its not blanketed i guess
00:16:755 (2,3) - for me this flow so bad, because you have to rise your cursor when reaching (3)
00:22:426 (2,3) - blanket
00:32:304 (1,2) - should have the same pattern as 00:30:840 (1) - imo
00:37:060 (2,3) - blanket
00:38:157 (1,2) - ^
00:44:011 (3) - maybe try to fix this slider in a proper way
00:45:474 (1,2) - blanket
00:47:304 (3,5) - ^ you should try and look out for the blanket errors and stuff before submitting/update the gd
difficulty is still bad in terms of quality since it lacks of polishing
i just pointed out the obvious mistakes

kd pls bye

MisakiAN said she's kinda busy these days and doesnt have time to reply the mod ,
but she said all mods already Fix , so Thank you very much
(just let you guys know)

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2017-07-29T06:57:45+00:00

reb
good luck

-Aerith-

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-Aerith- 2017-07-29T10:08:33+00:00

Koiyuki wrote:
reb
good luck

Thank you very much

Surono

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Surono 2017-07-31T17:26:33+00:00

wehhhhh balik <3

ayoo~

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-Aerith- 2017-08-01T14:09:36+00:00

wew

-Kyu

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-Kyu 2017-08-05T13:32:08+00:00

I am a bit concerned about the storyboard

00:48:401 - the background for this part has no relation to AoT at all,while the rest of the images of the storyboard is AoT related,maybe it can be changed to synchronize it?

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