o/ sorry for long ass wait lol I was very flojo
- Bright and Brilliant
00:01:558 (4,5,6,7) - not really an issue but this streamshape could look neater https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8218533
00:02:617 (3) - move this closer to prev slider, spacing its a bit too high (a bit too high lmao)
00:07:911 (2,3) - should move the 3 bit closer, spacing in beginning of the map feels unconsistent, 00:04:205 (4,5) - spacing between these shouldnt be as long as 00:07:911 (2,3) - or opposite? w/e, maybe try to be more consistent in which shound you emphasize with more spacing since the map starts to 00:11:793 -
00:18:499 (4,5) - maybe ctrl+g these?
00:20:617 (2) - move to 162/160 for consistency w/ spacing @ 00:21:146 (4,5) -
00:21:676 (1) - should ctrl+g
00:48:323 (1) - remove nc
00:48:852 (2) - move this out from there, maybe place it in the right side of the screen to make a long jump to 00:49:735 (1) - so the start of that section get's more emphasized? and maybe add 2 circles in that gap? something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8218650
00:51:323 (1) - ctrl+g maybe?
00:53:970 (3,5) - move them to the right adding more spacing in these jumps could emphasize vocals better (spacing rn feels too short)
00:55:029 (6) - should change it into 2 circles, vocals has stopped and theres that clap sound
00:56:264 (4) - move this closer to next slider, like this 00:58:205 (1) - 212/348 could work
01:06:323 (4) - saem suggestion of 2 circles
01:14:617 (3,5) - you can't stack these properly so why not stack 01:15:146 (5) - with head of 01:14:264 (2) - instead
01:16:382 (5,1) - spacing tooooo much
01:18:852 (3) - rotate this -24°~
01:22:735 (5,7) - avoid overlap
01:23:793 (1) - move this down to line up with prev slider
01:24:852 (4,3) - avoid overlap
01:24:323 (2,3,4) - reduce spacing
01:28:911 (2,2) - stack and blanket with 01:29:440 (1) -
01:29:970 (2,3) - too much spacing ==
01:31:205 (2,3) - should add more spacing there to emphasize vocals better
01:31:911 (4,1) - shouldreduce spacing too, ehh.. the jump on 01:31:205 (2,3) -should be higher than 01:31:911 (4,1) - vocals feels more calm on 01:31:911 (4,1) -
01:36:323 (4,1) - reduce spacing
01:47:440 (4,5) - why such spacing? Im asking because.. I don't really get what u tried to emphasize here :T shouldnt the jump be on 01:47:617 (5,1) - instead?
01:55:735 (5) - move to the right to line up with 01:55:382 (3,7) -
01:58:735 (8,1) - more spacing needed
02:01:205 (4,5) - why such spacing? asking again for.. same reason, and again, shouldnt the jump be on 02:01:558 (5,1) - instead? and 02:02:970 (5,1) - ?
02:11:264 (4) - circlez?
02:19:205 (3,5) - ugly overlap, nuke this overlap maybe something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8218784
02:27:499 (2,3) - add more spacing here
02:34:205 (6) - 02:34:029 (5,6) - ^
03:07:205 (2,3,4) - add more spacing?
nazi stuff:
00:02:970 (5) - stack with end of 00:03:499 (2) -
00:08:440 (4,2) - bblanket
00:17:970 (3,4) - blanket?
00:30:146 (1) - stack its end with end of 00:29:087 (2) -
00:31:029 (3,2) - stackkk
00:32:087 (3,5) - ^ ? owo
00:50:970 (6,3) - ^
01:06:676 (1) - stack its end with 01:05:617 (2) - end
01:16:205 (4,2) - stack
01:39:676 (1,6) - ^
blanket with end of 01:42:852 (8) -
01:55:205 (2,6) - stack
02:04:382 (4,2) - stack
02:23:970 (4,1) -
02:25:735 (5,2) -
03:02:088 (4,2) -
03:04:382 (2,5,3) - stack these 3
03:20:264 (3,3) -
Map plays well and all but it feels very inconsistent, and sometimes emphasize could be done better, for example.. 03:07:205 (2,3,4) - why you have short spacing here when vocals goes powerful with that EH EH EH!! and then a jump like this 03:09:323 (5,6) - in a part you dont really notice a big change in music, 03:17:793 (3,4) - same here, like.. jumps were done in places of the song that dont deserve any big jump like that, and also try to map more clean, avoid some overlaps and stack circles properly, with blankets, like here 03:11:617 (4,7) - , 03:14:440 (4,7) - stack these, I mentioned some there but I'm sure I skiped some. be clear in what you emphasize according to the music
GL