Hi, from queue
Map looks ok from first glance and plays well. monstrata-ish
Map looks ok from first glance and plays well. monstrata-ish
- 00:33:205 (1) - ctrl+g this? feels pretty weak from 4 to 1.
Also I feel like this measure 00:33:205 - can use bigger spacing since vocal is going up - 00:41:905 (2,3,4) - The only group of 3 notes that uses wide angle here, I felt uncomfortable with this movement abit, you may want to change it? So it would look like the rest of this section
- I feel like this section is unconsistently mapped, you are following vocal here, the fact that you start some sliders on red tick suggests that 00:43:255 (3,4) -
So something like these 00:41:455 (5,1) - & 00:46:255 (5,1) - can be 1/1 slider for vocal. Yea, I feel like this section can be done better with correct vocal emphasis.
00:47:905 (2,3) - the only stack in this part, what's special about this makes you want to create a stack here? - 00:59:155 (4) - Place this closer to 00:59:305 (5) - something like this. Just an example because : 00:58:705 (2,3) - these go as a pair also same for these 00:59:155 (4,5) - make better emphasis on vocal.
- 01:00:805 (1,2,3,4) - Jump here is overdone for the music imo. How about rhythm like this ? It captures both vocal and instrument
- 01:03:505 (2,3,4,5) - Pair thing mentioned
- 01:05:605 (1,2,3,4) - No reason for a jump here, music doesn't change nor goes hyper
- 01:08:305 (2,3,1) - They sound like they have the same vocal strength. So I think distance from 3 to 1 is too low here for the music, consider make it bigger.
- 01:10:405 (1,2) - Better make this 1/2 slider for vocal, jump here is weird
- 01:11:155 (1,2) - Ctrl+g for rhythm. Slider 2 starts on a not prominent sound at all.
- 01:13:405 (4,5) - spacing is big for what? There's nothing to be emphasized
- 01:15:205 (1) - Why 1/1? If you are trying to create a momentrum could be better if sticking with 1/2 sliders here
- 01:28:105 (5) - Can be directly overlapped with this slider 01:28:855 (2) - 's body. To 01:27:205 (4,5) - make the time gap between these more noticeable and also keeps the flow good.
- 01:28:855 (2,3) - A little bit bigger spacing would be neat