1. Hard (3.4 stars, 561 notes)
2. Insane (4.66 stars, 808 notes)
3. Normal (1.93 stars, 323 notes)

Manteith wrote:

Mod from #modreqs

00:01:179 (1) - Make a slider to red tick then reverse it. https://luckytowk.s-ul.eu/BGY19C61
00:15:991 (6) - Ctrl+G here
00:19:741 (1) - Why you shaped this slider to up, when next object is lower??? If you want to keep this slider like that just move this 00:20:491 (1) like on screenshot: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8287767
00:21:616 (2,3) - Bigger spacing between these 2 circles?
00:22:179 (1,2) - Surely out of flow.
00:43:929 (1) - Ctrl+G here
00:46:741 (4) - ^
00:49:179 (1) - Again like in 00:19:741 (1)
00:53:866 (1,1,2,1,2,1) - Isn't it a bit too hard pattern? Especially this jump: 00:54:241 (2,1)
01:07:179 (1,2,3,4) - Unnecesary jumps.
01:12:991 (6,1,2) - Make a triangle from this circles.
01:23:491 (1,2) - Ctrl+G here
01:50:866 (5) - ^
02:15:991 (1,1,1) - Why you put these things here? NC on each circle and such a big spacing? I can't understand it.
02:18:616 (6,7) - Ctrl+G here.
02:41:491 (1) - ^
02:43:179 (1) - ^
02:47:679 - Maybe put a spinner here?
03:10:179 - End a stream here. Or put a kickslider and the place of this circle. 03:10:085 (12)
03:39:241 (1) - Ctrl+G here
03:59:491 (2,5) - Make these sliders straight.
04:17:679 - Put a spinner here.

Good Luck!

Manteith wrote:

I am modding that what i can notice on the map.
Idc about any logs earlier tbh. If somebody noticed it earlier, it means that it's surely bad.

Flake wrote:

Hello, I'll be doing a Normal Mod!
I'll be modding Hard for this diff

General

note: All objects mentioned below are from the Hard Difficulty

The timing seems pretty accurate, however, after listening through the track, I had a feeling the timing is slightly off. It seems to be apparent when I was listening to the track and encountered 00:43:900 (3) - 's clap hitsound. If you listen at Playback Rate of 25%, You can hear that the burst of sound is somewhat, earlier.

From my perspective, the offset would be more appropriate to be on 1,150-1,165 or somewhere near that. You can see if these ones (00:43:929 (3) - ) relate to the song in a more sensible way. Changed offset to 1184

Hard

- I've been wondering myself why are there many objects ending on blue ticks, because usually objects would end on white or red ticks. There could be a problem regarding timing, or regarding the offset of the song, as mentioned above.

- the sound on 00:01:737 (2,3) - and 00:03:237 (2) - are the same, but a slider is used on 00:03:237 - instead of a circle. I want to push this one through because 00:01:737 (2,3) - supports the music more than 00:03:237 (2) - does. I have decided to change the sounds to emphasize on the second combo
You could use a design similar to this


There seems to be a lot of things coming up in the start, such as 00:04:929 - and 00:06:429 - Though I don't encourage mapping these because consistency-wise, it's random. If you want to emphasize the sounds, you can emphasize them by adding new combos and other stuff. And 00:05:679 is a pretty long break. You've mapped that part on the Insane so, I think mapping that one on the Hard too is better. I wish to ignore all of this together, maybe I will wait and see.

I would do a pattern like this on 00:06:991 (1,1) - because the instrument changes a note on 00:07:929 - and 00:09:429 -


There are more things that are surrounding 00:09:991 (1) - , so I'd like to cover those. There's the whirring sound (or whatever you call it) on 00:09:991 - , though I don't think you need to do something extraordinary to make it stand out since it also fades after a few seconds, and if mapped could make the same thing that happens on 00:03:991, which seems to be following something else. I also want to point out that 00:10:929 - has a piano sound, and it's the piano sound is mapped on 00:11:491 (2) - , so as a matter of fact you could also map 00:10:929 - to help it compliment the song better.

For the slider on 00:09:991 - , you can try this design


00:15:429 - I don't think this should be left unmapped. 00:16:179 - onwards follow the guitar sound, so mapping the guitar sounds before 00:16:179 - should make it consistent. It's there as a short break for the player.

00:35:679 (3) - doesn't particularily follows the vocals. Suggest that you should place 00:35:304 (2) - 's sliderend on 00:35:679 - . if I put the reverse there it will also change the flow of the section, the circle is there to keep the 1/2 note gap flow

00:43:929 (3) - visually looks like it is sticking to 00:43:554 (2) -. 00:46:554 (2) - doesn't directly seems to be sticking to 00:46:929 (3) - , but it makes it a fact that the spacing is inconsistent with 00:43:554 (2,3) - and 00:46:554 (2,3) -. I also want to mention that 00:49:554 (2,3) - is similar to the two, but visually looks cleaner and same with 00:49:554 (2,3) - . Give 00:43:554 (2,3) - and 00:46:554 (2,3) - similar visual appeal/spacing like 00:49:554 (2,3) - and 00:50:866 (2,3) -

I can see that 00:53:866 (2,3,4,5,6) - is emphasized by the slider velocity, though I do think it's better emphasizing it through spacing. You can emphasize it with both, but I personally believe that people are more accustomed to lower sv short returning sliders. You could change the sv to 1 or 1.25.

not sure what happened but, 01:04:179 - seems no need for the change in sv. If anything, it should be receiving more emphasis than the previous parts since it's entering a kiai time, a part where many things would stand out. I would use 1 sv on 01:04:179 - since it makes it more enticing to the player and it create a visible entrance to the kiai. noticeably slower SV before kiai = more emphasis the on kiai

I don't have any complaints regarding the kiai times since it seems that it's entrance and exit are really consistent. Good job on those!

01:32:491 (3) - looks pretty odd, in my opinion. 01:31:179 (1,2) - are copy-pasted, and 01:32:491 (3) - seems like it's trying to imitate the copy-pasted ones. Maybe make it a red-anchored slider or something less-similar to 01:31:179 (1,2) - . Something like 01:28:179 (1) - would do.

01:39:616 (5,6,7) - overlaps 01:40:741 (2) - in an awkward way. Maybe having the slider end of 01:39:804 (7) - stack onto 01:40:741 (2) - 's slider end?

01:45:147 - you can add a spinner here because you're following the guitar and the guitar has a long sound on 01:45:054 - and if mapped with circles or sliders, would be awkward. Have it end on 01:46:179 - because after the guitars, you start following the vocals. There isn't any particular vocal sounds on 01:46:179 (1) - , so I think it's okay to. Something like this, i'd say: with your suggestion the spinner will end on the first circle of the next combo, which is a very unqiue sound. I prefer it to be circle. the distance on the timeline is too short to add a spinner according to the ranking guildeline.

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02:08:866 (2,3,4,5,6) - I've mentioned about this part already, so I won't go in depth with it for this one. Lower sv, other way of emphasizing it.

02:19:179 - I've mentioned this too so, yeah. Higher sv

02:47:679 - to 02:48:804 - you can insert a slider here

I checked other parts and it didn't seem to have any huge issues, so I guess that'll wrap the Hard difficulty Normal Mod.

Good luck on the map!

thank you for modding no texts = fixed

IceKalt wrote:

Hey~
Coming from my Q

[Insane]
- 00:03:996 (1,2) - idk why you make the DS here bigger than 00:02:496 (1,2) - / 00:11:496 (1,2) -
- 00:09:621 - maybe consider making a triple here (and 00:11:121 - )
- 00:18:715 (5,6) - idk if a double is fitting here because there is only a sound at (6)
- 00:28:746 (2,3,1) - something went wrong with your stacking here~
- 00:31:934 (3,4) - /00:37:934 (3,4) - fix blanket
- 00:43:934 (1,2) - ^
- 00:51:434 (1) - blanket this with 00:51:996 (2) -
- 01:16:184 (1,2,3) - mybe use the same DS as above
- place 01:22:371 (2) - so the flollow lines overlap perfectly
- 01:28:184 (1,2,3,4) - blanket off
- 01:30:434 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
- 01:40:746 (4,5,6) - stay consistent with theese pls~
- (so many blankets in this diff are like so slightly off hat they arent really worth mentioning but you should fix them nontheless (like this:01:56:684 (1,2) - ))
- 02:22:559 (3,4) - idk if this is a mistake but the DS is WAY to low - (i think you can compare 02:22:184 (1,2,3,4) - to 01:07:184 (1,2,3,4) - )
- 02:45:434 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - as above
- overlap 03:10:934 (1,1) - like you did the rest in this section
- 03:15:246 (3,4) - blanket (pls)
- 03:55:184 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - as above
- I would end spinner here 04:15:809 - because you map the e-guitar there and until this poind it is fading away with a huge sound after this the e-guitar isnt there anymore

That was it from me
Gl with you set and have a nice day

Bz EsKa wrote:

Hey I'm really new to modding (2nd only) so please don't mind me if I do huge mistake (and please tell me why, that way I can improve ).
Anyway the song is nice and the mapping too so I want it ranked asap *-* (also, excuse me for my bad english, I try to ba as understandable as possible)


Normal
I think the map is really cool but there's way too much of "waiting for a note" moment, and that break the map :'( When the vocal is inactive,
so is the map. I also use these silence to reset my mapping in case of applying mods so I don't have to remap the entire thing because it's glued together by DS snap. (still by the noob me)

I) 00:41:494 - Put a long slider here instead of the simple circle (maybe we can say the same about 00:29:494 ).That way players won't loose track of the timing imo (and to not stop the player too often)
00:57:057 - Add a circle to fit the song like you did earlier
01:04:182 - I think there is somthing cool to map, I find that sad to break here
II) 01:28:932 - I think the voice is more important than the simple drum song behind, even more for this difficulty, maybe make a slider last at the end of the syllable (01:30:057) and ignore the drum for this one ? :3
III) 01:30:432 + 01:30:807 - put 2 circle to start the map (and once again to not stop the player too long )
01:58:557 - Even if I understand your choice, in view of the difficulty, I would have continue the map here
02:16:744 - I would have add a circle here (dunno, its maybe too difficult for the level? )
02:18:244 - do the slider earlier (and that free 2x 1/2beat right before the break to do whatever you want) because the slider sound weird if we put it after the syllable
02:35:494 - 02:36:057 - same as the I), it'll be smoother that way imo
02:45:432 - 02:45:807 - fill them plz (a little caprice :p)
02:43:932 - same as the II)
02:45:432 + 02:45:807 - same as III)
02:47:494 - same as I)
03:55:182 + 03:55:557 - same as III)
03:57:994 - Start the slider here and end him at the same point he is right now (03:58:369)

After, for the other difficulties, can't point anything that disturb me even a little, except for that : (hard)
00:44:494 (4,5) - Something is odd with the timing of this part, but I can't say anything to help >< sorry seems fine to me

Regarding most of your suggestions on Normal, I would have done them too if not for Normal restrictions and if I did all of you suggested it wouldn't be Normal. There might be too much waiting in the map but it's not like Insane and Hard are any better, they are just masked with spinners. I cannot do that on Normal due to Normal spinner guideline lol

Thank you for modding!

And absolutly nothing to say about insane who feel insanely good to play by me
Sorry to give you such poor advice
Hope this get ranked fast, bye ♥

LimePixel wrote:

NM request from my queue.

[Normal]
General:
-New combos seem non-consistent.

-00:28:182 (3) - Curve (a small amount) clockwise so the curveline from 00:27:807 (2) leading into the slider is better. (10 degrees?) I don't understand what you mean lol
-00:57:244 (4) - Here the overlap with 00:58:932 (2) might be too confusing for a Normal diff. Suggestion: Ctrl+J this object and move above 00:58:182 (1)

Example of what it might look like

I will change this when another person points this out
-02:34:182 (1) - Consistency with slider shapes (02:33:057 (1) ) okay
-03:25:369 (3) - Replace with circle at the position of the slider head? (since these are 3 consecutive sliders with 1/2 gaps between each other. keep newer players in mind) 3 consecutive 1/2 rhythms are fine as long as they are not active
-03:27:432 (3) - Either make this a straight slider or make 03:25:932 (1,2) the same or a similar slider shape as 03:27:432 (3) k

[Insane]
-00:28:744 (2) - Imo this slider is unnecessary and should be a circle. The sound doesn't warrant the extended slider You're right why did I even put the slider there lmao
-00:54:619 (6,7) - Make closer together so they're actually touching. The spacing between them is too big even for an insane. If they're touching, you're removing the chance that the player might sliderbreak I can buffer the slider should the need arise
-01:03:807 (7,8,1) - While this spacing is valid, I'd space 01:03:807 (7,8) a lot less than 01:03:994 (8,1) to emphasize the strong sound at 01:04:182 (1), and the new combo.nerfed 7 a bit
-01:23:869 (2) - I see the intent in these object placements but I suggest Ctrl+G here It's intended and I prefer it this way
-02:18:807 (8,9,1) - Same emphasis thing here. Although you've made a slight difference here, it could be bigger nerf a bit
-02:35:494 (5,1) - Make spacing bigger since while playing it indicates that there's a 1/2 gap changed to stacking instead

Hope this helps Thank you for modding!

ulfanirahmi wrote:

Hello... From FunnyA's Moddin Queue

It's Conclusion what i got

General :
Do not use 1/8 beat snap divisor. I suggest you change to 1/4, because it is used for the experienced mapper (On Normal and Hard diff) The map is mapped with 1/4 divisor, it's just shown as 1/8 because one of the circle is snapped on the 1/8 divisor.

Normal.
02:34:182 (1) - Equate this Pattern with that one 02:33:057 (1) be like this mirror, imo alright
00:19:182 (6) - NC
00:21:432 (1) - Missing NC
00:22:182 (3) - NC
00:27:057 (1) - Missing NC
00:28:182 (3) - NC
02:56:494 (3) - Overlap.. you can change this position by click this object, then you press ctrl + J imo it's better I will consider changing this later.
03:13:932 (6) - NC
03:21:432 (1,1) - Missing NC
03:22:932 (2) - NC
03:24:057 (1) - Missing NC
03:34:557 (2,2) - Overlap It's fine

All NC mods applied, thanks.

Hard
00:43:182 - add one object here Yeah I forgot
03:13:182 (1) - Missing NC
03:13:932 (3) - NC
03:14:682 (1) - Missing NC
03:22:932 (5) - NC imo it's better
03:24:057 - Missing NC

All NC mods applied, thanks.

Overall difficulty should be 6 Reduced the OD a bit but it shouldn't be at 6 due to speed of the song
Approach rate between 6 and 7 IMO it's better you should change it! The song is too fast to have AR7 I will keep it like this

Metadata :
Please Add the Tag in your Song Set Up (eg name or nickname artist, album name, track release year, etc.)
Turn off or remove the checklist on Widescreen Support and Letterbox during Break (Advanced) in Normal and Insane diff. Because it is turned on your map that it has Storyboard. IIRC, you don't add stuff that already appears in other boxes in the tag (artist's names, title, etc) I will add album name later, though I think adding release year is unnecessary.

And don't forget to Try checking again on AiMod if you still repair them... Press (Ctrl + Shift + A)
Lastly.. I'm so sorry if I gave you a little advice (especially insane diff). But, if any of my suggestions that you do not change it, no problem. And it depends on you whether it's good for you or not.

Maybe ... that's all I can modding your map. Hopefully your map can be ranked.
So, Fighting ^^ Thank you for modding!

YashaPlay wrote:

Hello from my Modding Queue!

Normal

Normal really seems good!

Hard

00:28:744 (2,3,4) - Maybe some this https://puu.sh/wHXkS/01a56050f6.png ? I think it's the same thing lol
00:37:932 (3) - Some this need! okay
02:19:182 (1,1) - Need break time! oops I forgot
02:30:994 (7,1) - I don't like it maybe some it If I implemented that it would make inconsistent spacing and that's not good ?
Also looks good!

Insane

wow Insane so nice! thanks!

You need some Easy diff,and this set will be great! too much work xD
Thanks! Thank you for modding!

Naotoshi wrote:

[insane]
00:15:432 (1) - y not triple into 1/8th repeat lo ayy

00:21:057 (3) - if ur gonna switch off of the guitar to emphasize this then make it a jump at least rearranged and removed the triple

00:22:182 (1) - also skipping this now is weird cuz 00:21:432 (1,2,3) - is clearly following it rearranged and removed the triple

00:33:619 (6,1) - seems a bit drastic contrast wise, even though it has a piano buildup oo

01:10:744 (4,5) - ew diagonal sliders that r curved this much look ugly af rip and fixed

00:58:932 (2,3,4) - wrong snap btw this is 1/6th Dumbed down rhythms xd

01:04:744 - wuld b cool to map really minimalistic rhythm here for better contrast - i think a break sucks for that cuz it makes you zone out instead of noticing the lower density it shall be done on 01:04:182 (1) - and 02:19:182 - . I'm not mapping at 03:28:932 - because it's different

01:15:807 (1,2) - these 1s should be lined up with 01:15:057 (3,4) - cuz vocals right I don't understand what you mean, so Im waiting before actually tweaking anything on this lol

01:24:619 (4,5,6,1) - dont rly think 456 is distinguished enough frm the vocals, you could ctrl g it and make smaller spacing remapped

01:34:182 (1) - aaaa aaaa

01:57:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rly big smaller now

02:30:807 (1,2) - same as before Not attempting to fix this yet

02:41:869 (2,3,4) - do u rly need this massive spacing here reduced

03:22:744 (5,6) - also kinda verspaced imo, ctrl g works better done

03:30:733 - same about mapping the break I mapped the other 2 breaks but I skipped this one because it's different and it's near unmappable due to extremely low density compared to other breaks

looks quite rankable ngl Thanks!! w

[hard]
00:20:869 (2) - make this 2 circles, it looks like a 1/2 spacing if everything is sliders I assume you mean the slider before as well? I have changed it to 2 1/1 circle ye

00:28:088 - triple plz done

pixel verlaps are aids raise the ds of this sectin a bit to avoid them plz fixed the overlapped 1/1

01:39:807 (5) - triple here at least plz k

01:39:807 (5,1) - this much undermapping is just tilt gotta sell the Insane somehow

01:42:994 (6,1) - same If I do this it would have 2 consecutive active 1/4 rhythms, that would be quite tough to play, so I'm still considering on this one.
looks like a normal lol

02:42:994 (3,1) - aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa FORGIVE ME

03:00:432 (2,3,1) - should b 3/4 snap imo I changed to 3/4 slider, that's what you meant right? If not RIP

03:13:932 (1,2) - its better t put a 1/1 repeat on this kinda thing cuz the vocal doesnt really change at all mmm that would leave a 1/1 gap after that

03:37:369 (4) - u make this important thing a repeat slider but then 03:40:369 (5,6) - is circles D= just make it all circles Here comes the Concept(tm): During the Kiai, vocal is the focus and mapped through different pairs of patterns. 03:40:369 (5,6,7) - the (5) is not vocal but I decide to make it clickable to keep the momentum and intensity of the Kiai. Your suggestion will also apply to every parts of the Kiais so me changing only on this timeline will only make inconsistency.

I went and tried your suggestion and applied it on every parts, the star rating just went Insane (almost literally). Due to the significant difficulty increase and what I discussed above, I have made the decision to revert it back to what it was.

04:11:494 (2,3,4) - will be misread fr sure Misread no more

[normal]

00:57:244 (4,2) - yea uh dont do this on normal lol ok then

01:34:182 - u should ue a bit more circles in this sectin, with 1/1 or occasional 1/2 gaps; constant sliders is not differentiaated from the rest f the map despite the song being ttally different I just couldn't find the place to put down circles tbh, This could easily be more dense in terms of rhythm density than the Kiai as well. I also try to limit the use of 1/2 rhythm outside of the Kiai. So yeah adding more circles will make some combos simply become
a bit too long and I cannot remove other objects without it affecting the overall quality of the map, I believe.

02:33:057 (1) - remove nc woops

map the guitar more closely in the top diffs in the parts i highlighted, get 1 or 2 mods from decent modders, and call me back Thank you so much for modding!! I will make sure to improve the mapset as best as I can.

JeirYagtama wrote:

boi u can just straight out pm me ingame for a mod~
i Like ur song choices sooo yea XD

Normal

01:27:244 (6) - hmmm this slider kinda ends a bit too early since theres still a vocal sound in the next white tick 01:27:807 -
either extend the slider or add a note whatever suit's your taste XD Too many consecutive 1/2 gap, can't
03:39:994 (6) - ^ This is actually not intended
03:51:994 (6) - ^ Too many consecutive 1/2 gap, can't
02:18:432 (5) - would suggest to move the slider to the last red tick since theres vocal sound that can be mapped and also extend the slider to the white tick if ur going in this route xd limited by 1/2 gap
03:07:275 (1) - would suggest to end this spinner to the last red tick since it the sound ur mapping ends there instead of the blue tick I'm pretty sure it ends on a blue tick

Hard

00:39:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - kind of a nazi mod but can you atleast space the pattern out a littlleee bit more? sure
00:41:682 (6) - hmm also I kinda think you can just remove this since there isnt any sound to supoort it if its for filler rhythm then ok but if its not welllppp theres my suggestion I think it is fine
01:31:557 (2,1) - kind of an ugly overlapI hope no one points any readability issue
03:36:994 (3,1) - nazi mod again srry but fix thy stack thx thanks
boi I like your mapping on this diff gj~

Insane

01:33:432 (5) - NC perhaps? why not I guess the combo is getting long
02:22:932 (3) - ^ seems unnecessary
03:58:182 (5) - ^ why not I guess the combo is getting long
02:26:494 (1,2,3) - kinda would suggest to ctrl g them seperately since 02:26:119 (5,1) - kinda doesnt flow well imo It's a bit harsh but I will leave there
02:53:307 (7,8) - why is the spacing so low all of a sudden? I hope it is better now.
03:00:057 (1) - would suggest to delete this and add 2 circles instead since 03:00:182 - the guitar sound starts here I dumbed down the rhythm
03:16:932 (1) - slider kinds of ends with a clickable note you know what to do when ur goin to accept this mod xd It happens on a low intensity section, making everything completely clickable is not a good idea here

Mutual pls thx sure
gl~ Thank you for modding!

yShadowXOP_ wrote:

Loli's Mod Queue

NM

yShadowXOP_ wrote:

Insane:

1. 00:58:182 (1) - stack the reverse at the end of the slider 00:59:869 (2) - sure
2. 01:09:244 - could be a stream here in my opinion I prioritize vocal
3. 01:15:432 (1) - i think NC here is unnecessary It's a different pattern of sound
4. 01:18:994 - circle ? no vocal
5. 01:30:338 - i think there should be a circle here, because there is sound in the blue tick there is a sound there but I don't want to emphasize it
6. 01:39:525 - circle ? emphasis reasons
7. 02:05:869 (6) - NC? Nope as this section follows 2 downbeat 1 NC rule
8. 02:30:432 (1) - i think NC here is unnecessary same as I stated above it's from a different pattern of sound
9. 02:53:682 (1) - i think this slider should start here 02:53:493 (8) - Then it will extend past the downbeat
10. 03:00:057 (1) - should be a slider here not a reverse because it starts on the 1/3 tick 03:00:182 - I simplified the rhythms as it's actually not 1/3 the guitar is off
11. 03:11:307 (2) - NC
12. 03:12:432 (2) - ^
13. 03:18:432 (5) - ^ I see no need for these
14. 03:20:682 - triple ? Low Intensity in song is reflected with Low Density in mapping
15. 03:54:994 - circle Emphasis reason
16. 03:55:088 - ^ same

I hope my mod has helped you in some way

Good Luck~

Thank you for modding!

1. AR5.4 is a bit too high considering the density and the bpm. a simple 5 will do
2. 00:18:807 (5) - 00:24:807 (5) - delete these and extend 00:18:244 (4) - 00:24:244 (4) - by half a beat. Mapping to the guitar is cool but imo since the rhythm is slightly complex it's better to single-layer map the guitar for better readability
3. 01:36:244 (4,5) - 01:42:244 (4,5) - ^
4. 00:43:182 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this part is the only part that is mapped to the instruments (except for pure instrumental sections ofc). Ideally this should be mapped to the vocals instead for the sake of consistency and stuff but with the music change and stuff this is borderline okayish. However, this tiny part 00:49:932 (2,3,4,5) - being mapped to the vocals is weird af. Map this whole part to the vocals or map the small one to the instruments.
5. 01:12:619 (6) - end this on the white tick instead. The vocal stops there and there's snare on the white tick as well
6. 01:24:619 (6) - ^
7. 01:18:057 (1) - 2 circles. compare this with 01:11:494 (3,4,5) - 01:13:744 (2,3) -
8. 03:42:807 (1) - 02:33:057 (1) - ^
9. 01:25:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 01:13:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why is the rhythm choice inconsistent lmao. just stick with the 01:13:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ; it's better
10. 02:40:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 02:28:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
11. 03:49:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
12. 01:19:182 (1) - 02:34:182 (1) - remove nc. reason: 03:42:807 (1,2,3,4,5) -
13. 02:49:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - when did you start putting nc every 3 measures? just stick with the 2 measures 1 nc thing for consistency and that combo length is a bit too long
14. 03:21:432 (1) - remove nc. Combos on 03:19:932 (1,1,2) - are too short lmao there's no need to nc here
15. 04:00:994 (4,5) - 04:06:994 (6,7) - same

CrystilonZ wrote:

This is gonna be in english so nao can read it

03:10:932 - Add a redline here to reset the measure. not really necessary but eeh idk
Alright

BG height is over limit. The height limit right now is 1080 pixels. Though the RC says this but it's someone being lazy(hi loctav). The actual limit is 1080p


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1. AR5.4 is a bit too high considering the density and the bpm. a simple 5 will do alright
2. 00:18:807 (5) - 00:24:807 (5) - delete these and extend 00:18:244 (4) - 00:24:244 (4) - by half a beat. Mapping to the guitar is cool but imo since the rhythm is slightly complex it's better to single-layer map the guitar for better readability mm
3. 01:36:244 (4,5) - 01:42:244 (4,5) - ^
4. 00:43:182 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this part is the only part that is mapped to the instruments (except for pure instrumental sections ofc). Ideally this should be mapped to the vocals instead for the sake of consistency and stuff but with the music change and stuff this is borderline okayish. However, this tiny part 00:49:932 (2,3,4,5) - being mapped to the vocals is weird af. Map this whole part to the vocals or map the small one to the instruments. made it all instrumental
5. 01:12:619 (6) - end this on the white tick instead. The vocal stops there and there's snare on the white tick as well I switch back to the instrument
6. 01:24:619 (6) - ^
7. 01:18:057 (1) - 2 circles. compare this with 01:11:494 (3,4,5) - 01:13:744 (2,3) - This is slightly different, so you can't really compare them
8. 03:42:807 (1) - 02:33:057 (1) - ^
9. 01:25:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 01:13:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why is the rhythm choice inconsistent lmao. just stick with the 01:13:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ; it's better well that rhythm choice already repeats itself 3 times if I do that again it will b e 6 times, I think a little bit of variety is nice as well, plus I also map these differently on all diffs
10. 02:40:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 02:28:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
11. 03:49:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
12. 01:19:182 (1) - 02:34:182 (1) - remove nc. reason: 03:42:807 (1,2,3,4,5) - k
13. 02:49:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - when did you start putting nc every 3 measures? just stick with the 2 measures 1 nc thing for consistency and that combo length is a bit too long switched back
14. 03:21:432 (1) - remove nc. Combos on 03:19:932 (1,1,2) - are too short lmao there's no need to nc here ok
15. 04:00:994 (4,5) - 04:06:994 (6,7) - same

It's late so this is all
gl~ Thank you for modding!

SrSkyPlayer wrote:

General
can you resize your bg? I mean 1702x1200 isn't a standard aspect ratio, you should have it at least 1280x720 (16:9 ratio)
k it's fine!

Normal
02:55:182 (4,6) - I don't have a good feeling about this because you're just overlapping two distinct sliders and that's what makes this section very messy, maybe consider try another pattern there I don't really understand what you meant here

Hard
02:30:807 (6,7) - maybe ctrl+g? that will cause it to overlap with the 3 circle a bit too fast which will readability issue
02:33:432 (2) - it's touching the hit error, try moving it on a bit k
04:10:182 - I don't feel like ignoring this sound is a good idea because it's a downbeat and very clickable, you should just pull the reverse of this one beat 04:09:807 (1) - and put a circle there 04:10:182 - stacking it with 04:10:369 (2) - done

Insane
00:52:932 (2) - this spacing here is a bit confusing because there's a 1/2 interval between (2) and 00:52:182 (1) - and like before you did a similar spacing 00:50:869 (1,2) - but there's a difference in rhythm. Consider increasing spacing of (2) to make it clear why not I guess
01:07:932 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - maybe replacing 01:08:494 (9,10,1) - with 1/4 slider + circle should be better because it will bring more emphasis to the vocal I prefer with the increasing intensity through clickable objects
01:33:057 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't feel like these drums are covering something properly. Anyways, that's just me but I think you can use your soft-whistle here as well mm that's a good idea for soft whistle, I will wait and see first
01:40:182 (1) - any reason to ignore the guitar here? or even here 01:43:182 (1) - ? I mean if you are able to follow it, I think you should do that until the end, so replacing 01:40:182 (1) - with a 1/2 slider + 2 1/4 notes and 01:43:182 (1) - making it a 1/2 reverse slider would be better in my opinion. It enters the other section which I consistently map for the entire map
02:07:932 (2) - maybe replacing it with a 1/8 reverse slider should be better I prefer vocal

good luck Thank you for modding!