1. Futsuu (2,18 stars, 266 notes)
2. Inner Oni (4,93 stars, 791 notes)
3. Kantan (1,53 stars, 167 notes)
4. Muzukashii (2,85 stars, 474 notes)
5. Oni (4,06 stars, 677 notes)

1. Tags: rb naoyuki sato plus follow slowly
2. Metadata: KONAMI official youtube (preview)
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1. 00:03:502 (12) - k would be nicer here to be consistent with the other k that express the same ring sound here 00:04:531 (16) -
2. 00:12:588 (61,62) - dd instead? consisency with 00:09:159 (41,42,43) -
3. 00:13:445 (67,68,69) - Feels out of place, i think the triple should have been here 00:13:617 - 00:13:702 - 00:13:788 - and should be ddk
4. 00:54:588 (326) - d instead? other 1/3 patterns were dkkd
5. 01:05:131 - you could map this, 4 note bursts are really common in the map and the sound is really strong
6. 01:10:531 - k instead?
7. 01:15:674 - ehh k here too?
8. 01:21:445 (458,459) - what about k here and d here 01:21:674 (460) -

1. 00:11:559 - k doesnt really fit here imo, considering u use k on strong ring sounds like 00:10:702 (58,62) -
2. 00:21:331 (136) - k here?
3. 00:22:359 (141,143) - It would offer more variation if these were k since on those ticks theres a similar sound with 00:23:045 (145) -
4. 00:26:817 (176,177) - dk would accentuate the ring sound more
5. 00:43:388 (291) - k here
6. 00:54:702 (375,376,377) - ddk?
7. 01:00:245 (409) - k here for consistency
8. 01:21:331 (537,538,539,540) - i would expect dkkd instead for the emphasis on the inside notes
9. 01:49:274 - theres a pretty diverse sound here so maybe k for the emphasis?

1. 00:05:045 (4,5) - do dk instead
2. 00:40:531 - add a d here. It's too empty
3. 00:49:788 (71,72,73,74) - do ddkd here
4. 01:31:959 (133,134,135,136) - dkdk would be better

1. 00:04:531 (8,9,10) - kdk since middle note is the different one
2. 00:13:102 (31,32,33) - dkd then k on 00:13:788 (34) -
3. 00:14:131 (35,36,37) - dkd here again
4. 00:36:759 (87,88,89) - instead of a triple here have it here 00:38:131 (92,93) -
5. 01:32:988 (217,218,219) - ddk

1. 00:25:102 (105,106) - not enough recovery time after this slider
2. 01:00:074 (257,258,259,260) - kkkd
3. 01:23:217 (341,342,343,344,345,346) - isn't this a bit dense for a muzu
4. 01:32:474 (385,386,387,388) - dkdk
5. 01:50:817 (1) - start spinner on 01:50:645 -

Nokashi wrote:

Hello there !

[General]

1. Tags: rb naoyuki sato plus

[Oni]

1. 00:03:502 (12) - k would be nicer here to be consistent with the other k that express the same ring sound here 00:04:531 (16) - 2nd one has a noticably higher pitch
2. 00:12:588 (61,62) - dd instead? consisency with 00:09:159 (41,42,43) - sound is different overall
3. 00:13:445 (67,68,69) - Feels out of place, i think the triple should have been here 00:13:617 - 00:13:702 - 00:13:788 - and should be ddk flows fine as it is to me tbh and adds good variation
4. 00:54:588 (326) - d instead? other 1/3 patterns were dkkd pitch here is different
5. 01:05:131 - you could map this, 4 note bursts are really common in the map and the sound is really strong the note standing by itsself adds better emphasis imo
6. 01:10:531 - k instead? no distinctive sound here
7. 01:15:674 - ehh k here too? wanna add a short break after the SV transition for the oni
8. 01:21:445 (458,459) - what about k here and d here 01:21:674 (460) - pitch on the end is kinda higher

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:11:559 - k doesnt really fit here imo, considering u use k on strong ring sounds like 00:10:702 (58,62) - k here makes the next d a color change adding extra emphasis on it
2. 00:21:331 (136) - k here? no distinctive sound here
3. 00:22:359 (141,143) - It would offer more variation if these were k since on those ticks theres a similar sound with 00:23:045 (145) - did something slightly different instead
4. 00:26:817 (176,177) - dk would accentuate the ring sound more current pattern emphasizes the pitch changes better imo
5. 00:43:388 (291) - k here ^
6. 00:54:702 (375,376,377) - ddk? ^
7. 01:00:245 (409) - k here for consistency don't see with what this would need to be consistent
8. 01:21:331 (537,538,539,540) - i would expect dkkd instead for the emphasis on the inside notes current pattern puts better emphasis on the pitches imo
9. 01:49:274 - theres a pretty diverse sound here so maybe k for the emphasis? doesn't really stand out to me

Good luck!

celerih wrote:

Good job on having a preview point!

[Qanten]

1. 00:05:045 (4,5) - do dk instead pitch is declining here
2. 00:40:531 - add a d here. It's too empty would be too many 4/1 notes in a row imo so a break makes it a bit more fresh
3. 00:49:788 (71,72,73,74) - do ddkd here current pattern emphasizes the pitches better imo
4. 01:31:959 (133,134,135,136) - dkdk would be better ye changed

[Phutsou]

1. 00:04:531 (8,9,10) - kdk since middle note is the different one pitch is declining
2. 00:13:102 (31,32,33) - dkd then k on 00:13:788 (34) - current pattern is more interesting and flows better imo
3. 00:14:131 (35,36,37) - dkd here again ^
4. 00:36:759 (87,88,89) - instead of a triple here have it here 00:38:131 (92,93) - wanna avoid mapping 1/2 above the 1/3 sounds
5. 01:32:988 (217,218,219) - ddk current pattern fits better imo

[Muzuquachy]

1. 00:25:102 (105,106) - not enough recovery time after this slider deleted 00:26:474 (107) -
2. 01:00:074 (257,258,259,260) - kkkd current pattern is more interesting imo
3. 01:23:217 (341,342,343,344,345,346) - isn't this a bit dense for a muzu nah it's fine
4. 01:32:474 (385,386,387,388) - dkdk current pattern is smoother imo
5. 01:50:817 (1) - start spinner on 01:50:645 - wanna start it when the ding dong sounds kick in

Nifty wrote:

helo

- Oni -

00:11:559 (55,56) - ctrl-g, where the k is right now I feel is more of a pickup to the downbeat so a d would be more appropriate. the sound on 00:11:731 - is pretty low so i wanna emphasize it with a d

00:56:988 (341) - you could make this k to emphasize the rise in pitch in the bass, though it is subtle. current pattern is smoother imo

01:04:874 - I don't see why you wouldn't be able to put a ddkkd (or dkkkd, I can hear it both ways) here, it's suitable for an Oni. its a more calm part and i feel like having the d at the end as a single note adds more emphasis

- Muzukashii -

00:10:188 (39) - would make d, sound does not change. theres a snare drum here

00:11:388 (44) - would also make d, pattern doesn't change besides the snare in the middle. current pattern adds more emphasis on 00:11:731 -

00:12:245 (47,48) - ctrl-g as the bass does go up in the middle and comes back down. current pattern adds more emphasis on 00:12:759 -

00:12:759 (49,50,51,52) - invert all of these notes, you mapped the snare earlier as k, and the two middle notes are just filler. You also repeat the pattern 00:14:817 (59,60,61,62) - here its kinda a variety thing since 00:14:817 - has no melody so it's focused more on drums

01:50:902 - delete all greenlines past this point :^) green lines still decrease volume which makes a nice effect for the spinner

If you could find the artist of the bg an credit them that'd be cool, I couldn't tho theres some writing in the BG so that might have something to do with the artist but i took it from the std set so idk where the source is :/

Monstrata wrote:

Inner Oni
00:29:045 - The break feels kinda forced, add k? done
00:32:131 - You could change to k for better emphasis on 00:32:302 - the sound on 00:32:302 - feels kinda different to the other ones i emphasized with k k d, so i think the d is better here
00:37:274 - Try adding a d here, the break feels kinda weird too done

Oni

01:12:245 - Note here? i'm focusing more on the drum sounds in this part to create some spread-wise space to the inner oni
01:33:588 - k here creates a kind of progressive ddk dkk pattern i haven't really used dkk anywhere else in the map so introducing it here would be kinda weird, i changed 01:33:331 - to d though to create the same progressive effect
01:49:274 - And also change this to a d and make 01:49:445 - k k d for better pattern variation. done

Muzukashii

00:18:417 - You could map this and delete the other 2 notes for a slight break type effect sure
01:06:074 - Triplet here to emphasize the 1/4 sounds pls xd done
01:33:331 - ^Same, triplet here? I can understand if you feel like the pattern itself is long enough to warrant not having it though, but still ehh yea, the pattern length itsself kinda compensates for it here imo

Futsuu

00:07:102 - The chain is a bit long considering that this is a very calm part of the song. Delete here? sure
Kiai feels a bit unbalanced. I think you can make some places a bit denser... changed it around a bit, but overall it reflects the main melody pretty well imo

Kantan

00:16:188 - Delete xd. inconsistent with previous pattern. changed it around a bit
00:40:531 - You could try adding a note here. Feels rather empty atm. want to have a slightly bigger break here for better emphasis on 00:41:559 -
00:56:988 - ^Same, add a note here too? Makes it more interesting same

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Futsuu's kiai is my main concern.