1. 00:01:255 (1,2) - this needs more volume is almost inaudible.
2. 00:54:535 (1) - same, I can't hear it (barely)
3. 01:10:855 (6,1) - blanket can still be improved a lot
4. 01:56:455 (3,4,1) - ^
5. 02:03:655 (1) - same as 00:54:535 (1) -
6. 02:04:615 (2) - missing NC, since the previous same part has a NC.
7. 02:51:175 (1) - why the break is delayed??
8. 00:36:295 (5) - 01:12:935 (5) - 02:33:095 (4) - unsnapped tails

1. with all the slider chains your current AR feels too slow, AR 5 plays a lot better.
2. 00:01:255 (1,2) - same as the hard diff
3. 00:54:535 (1) - ^
4. 00:58:855 (2) - use a single circle instead? to make the diff less dense and also bring more emphasis to the next vocals? same for 01:02:695 (2) - 02:07:975 (2) - 02:11:815 (2) -
5. 03:23:815 (1) - same a single circle here would bring more emphasis to the next vocals and also would bring a break from holding sliders. same here 03:27:175 (4) -
6. 03:28:135 (2,3) - if you did the previous, the add a slider here to avoid such dense rhythm.
7. 02:03:655 (1) - same as the hard diff
8. 02:49:255 (1) - this is touching the HP bar, according to the guidelines you should avoid doing such things.
9. 03:59:815 (3,1) - a little spacing error
   

1. AR 3 feels better when playing tbh
2. 00:01:255 (1) - same as the other diffs
3. 00:15:975 - why the delayed break?
4. 00:47:335 (4) - a 1/1 slider and circle would represent the music better
5. 00:53:015 - why the break is delayed?
6. 00:54:535 (1) - same as the other diffs
7. 01:34:375 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - combos are wrong, aren't they supposed to be every 2 stanzas like the rest of the map?
8. 01:56:455 (4) - same as 00:47:335 (4) -
9. 02:03:655 (1) - same as the other diffs
10. 03:05:575 (1) - why the break is delayed?

Natsu wrote:

Hard

1. 00:01:255 (1,2) - this needs more volume is almost inaudible. Made it 40%,should be fine now.
2. 00:54:535 (1) - same, I can't hear it (barely) Increased it here too.
3. 01:10:855 (6,1) - blanket can still be improved a lot
4. 01:56:455 (3,4,1) - ^
5. 02:03:655 (1) - same as 00:54:535 (1) -
6. 02:04:615 (2) - missing NC, since the previous same part has a NC. But the previous part doesn't have NC..?
7. 02:51:175 (1) - why the break is delayed?? Because he starts rapping at 02:51:415
8. 00:36:295 (5) - 01:12:935 (5) - 02:33:095 (4) - unsnapped tails

Normal

1. with all the slider chains your current AR feels too slow, AR 5 plays a lot better.
2. 00:01:255 (1,2) - same as the hard diff
3. 00:54:535 (1) - ^
4. 00:58:855 (2) - use a single circle instead? to make the diff less dense and also bring more emphasis to the next vocals? same for 01:02:695 (2) - 02:07:975 (2) - 02:11:815 (2) -
5. 03:23:815 (1) - same a single circle here would bring more emphasis to the next vocals and also would bring a break from holding sliders. same here 03:27:175 (4) -
6. 03:28:135 (2,3) - if you did the previous, the add a slider here to avoid such dense rhythm.
7. 02:03:655 (1) - same as the hard diff
8. 02:49:255 (1) - this is touching the HP bar, according to the guidelines you should avoid doing such things.
9. 03:59:815 (3,1) - a little spacing error

Easy

1. AR 3 feels better when playing tbh
2. 00:01:255 (1) - same as the other diffs
3. 00:15:975 - why the delayed break? Oh, removed it.
4. 00:47:335 (4) - a 1/1 slider and circle would represent the music better IMO I think it's fine like this. The woosh sounds here becomes more intense, so I feel like using a slider like this would emphasise it better.
5. 00:53:015 - why the break is delayed? -
6. 00:54:535 (1) - same as the other diffs
7. 01:34:375 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - combos are wrong, aren't they supposed to be every 2 stanzas like the rest of the map? Fixed the combos here.
8. 01:56:455 (4) - same as 00:47:335 (4) - Same reason.
9. 02:03:655 (1) - same as the other diffs
10. 03:05:575 (1) - why the break is delayed?

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