hi~
thanks for accepting m4m xD
noob at modding, and include personal feeling, so roughly refer my opinion.
If my modding affect your style, feel free to ignore
[ Kantan ]
00:09:065 (10,11,12,13,14) - little awkward to me, tabun boku ga kantan diff no tsukurikata wo yoku wakaranaikara to omoundesu.
00:50:858 (9,10,11) - dkd? not enough flat sound that use ddd imo.
01:10:720 (25,26,27,28,29,30) - same 00:09:065.
[ Futsuu ]
00:19:203 (19) - k. ddkdk seems little difficult in futsuu, even 1/2.
00:41:756 (24,26) - finish? 1/3 no kawari ni.
01:13:203 (52) - delete? even muzukashii don't have circle in here.
01:22:719 (21,23) - same 00:41:756.
[ Muzukashii ]
00:39:066 (21) - k, so same with 00:39:273 (22,23,24,25) , focusing balanced staccato.
01:08:858 (72) - delete? so pursue more new start kanji that started from 01:09:065 (73).
[ Oni ]
00:00:790 (1) - K. because you used D at 00:01:617 (6). here is more high pitch and summative sound is same against 00:01:617 (6) imo.
00:14:237 (8,9,10,11) - dk kk? fit vocal pitch.
00:15:893 (19,20) - kk? melody is going down from 'sol' to 'fa#', and 00:15:893 (19) here no strong sound like drum bass.
00:16:928 (27) -um....k? even never don't fit in sound.
00:17:962 (34,35,36,37) - same 00:14:237.
01:00:996 - add circle to catch beat little more easily.
01:02:444 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - for more fit with vocal imo, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8160024.
01:25:202 (66,1) - fusion? no new started sound at 01:25:408. same all diff.
so when rank :thinking:
thanks for accepting m4m xD
noob at modding, and include personal feeling, so roughly refer my opinion.
If my modding affect your style, feel free to ignore
[ Kantan ]
00:09:065 (10,11,12,13,14) - little awkward to me, tabun boku ga kantan diff no tsukurikata wo yoku wakaranaikara to omoundesu.
00:50:858 (9,10,11) - dkd? not enough flat sound that use ddd imo.
01:10:720 (25,26,27,28,29,30) - same 00:09:065.
[ Futsuu ]
00:19:203 (19) - k. ddkdk seems little difficult in futsuu, even 1/2.
00:41:756 (24,26) - finish? 1/3 no kawari ni.
01:13:203 (52) - delete? even muzukashii don't have circle in here.
01:22:719 (21,23) - same 00:41:756.
[ Muzukashii ]
00:39:066 (21) - k, so same with 00:39:273 (22,23,24,25) , focusing balanced staccato.
01:08:858 (72) - delete? so pursue more new start kanji that started from 01:09:065 (73).
[ Oni ]
00:00:790 (1) - K. because you used D at 00:01:617 (6). here is more high pitch and summative sound is same against 00:01:617 (6) imo.
00:14:237 (8,9,10,11) - dk kk? fit vocal pitch.
00:15:893 (19,20) - kk? melody is going down from 'sol' to 'fa#', and 00:15:893 (19) here no strong sound like drum bass.
00:16:928 (27) -
00:17:962 (34,35,36,37) - same 00:14:237.
01:00:996 - add circle to catch beat little more easily.
01:02:444 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - for more fit with vocal imo, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8160024.
01:25:202 (66,1) - fusion? no new started sound at 01:25:408. same all diff.
so when rank :thinking: