Pennek wrote:

hi from modqueue o/

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[7 Godesses]

00:06:505 (2) - The flow to this slider can be better by ctrl+h'ing it and replacing it nah. i redo this slider instead 00:05:605 (1) -
00:07:405 (1,2) - Ugly unintentional stack
00:09:805 (1) - Inconsistent NC - this needs to be NC'ed to follow the 6-measure
00:11:605 (6) - Inconsistent NC's in the next section aswell. You can fix this easily by following a concept of NC'ing every downbeat or every second downbeat. You currently do both. You do this really well in later sections: 00:40:405 (1,1) -
I won't mention this issue again.
00:09:205 (4,5) - Awkward rhythm as you emphasise the red tick, when you've followed the white ticks (vocals) all the way before. Doing this is more suitable https://puu.sh/vZeGF/5696d3d939.jpg
00:22:405 (1) - Inconsistent flow, as rotationchanges seem random. This is a good example of how to change rotation correctly. Eg. inconsistency: Here you follow the rotation and don't follow the distance-emphasis you set up for yourself before 00:24:805 (1) -
00:27:205 (1) - Again oneway flow. This creates a lot of mousedrag for players that play with mouse. Again, decide on a flow-concept for a section in a song and stick to it. Eg. this can be switching rotation on every downbeat, every second downbeat, or whatever you feel like as long as you do it consistently.
00:27:655 (2,3) - rotation-change? huh
00:34:405 (1) - This can be emphasised a lot more to follow the distance consistency with earlier sections eg. 00:34:405 (1,1) -
00:39:205 (1) - ^
00:56:905 (1) - This can be emphasised a lot more to follow the distance consistency with 00:56:005 (1) - and 00:56:455 (1) - I suggest moving this down more, and not following the blanket. You do this really well in later sections 01:03:205 (1,6) -
00:58:405 (1,6) - ^

I hope this was useful in some way. Good luck with your map!

all fixed/applied

thanks a lot!

M4M from Queue


GL

Hello,

I'm relatively new, so please bear with me.

LeQuack wrote:

M4M from Queue

7 Goddesses

1. 00:00:805 - I think the SV should be reduced to something like 0.65x better match the intensity of this part of the song (Up until 00:08:005 - okay
2. 00:30:055 (2,3) - I would move to x:285 y:196 so the flow continues in the direction of the 00:29:605 (1) - slider okay
3. 00:43:855 (5,1) - I don't think a stack is suited here as the vocals increase in pitch (i think its better suited at 00:47:905 (2,3) - where the vocals are going down in pitch) okay
4. 00:50:455 (3,4) - ctrl-g these seperately to continue circular flow
5. 00:55:105 (2,3) - Don't think a stack is good here (tail of 00:55:255 (3) - could overlap the start of 00:54:805 (1) - stacked this note 00:55:105 (2) - on 00:55:555 (4) - head
6. 01:11:155 (1,2) - This threw me off when playing as you've only had stacks represent 1/1 gaps in this section but then change it here without real justification, i would remove the stack to keep consistent with the rest of this section done
7. 01:38:455 (1) - I don't think NC is necessary here
8. 01:48:355 - Add a note here to keep flow done xd
9. 02:01:705 (4,5,6,7,1) - I woulod curve this slightly so it's easier to follow after coming off the jump from 02:01:405 (1) - done. feel more comfortable with that
10. 02:23:605 (6,1) - Decide if stacks are going to be for 1/1 or 1/2 note gaps in this section as right now they are both and are super hard for players to read dunno what to change here
11. 02:25:855 (4,5) - Reduce distance as this is the least intense part of this combo yet has the highest distance done
12. 02:34:405 (1,2) - Remove stack for reasons stated above done
13. 02:56:005 - Either remove kiai from this section or add it to the section at 01:23:605 - as they are the same thing yet only one is kiai made a short kiai on 01:23:605 (1) -
14. 03:12:205 (3) - I would move this to x:426 y:73 as the most comfortable movement to this note is up from the (2) slider it's fine. i'll keep it like that.
15. 03:12:655 (6) - To compensate for the previous change i would overlap this with 03:11:305 (5) - head
16. 03:13:555 (2) - Moving to this note is also uncomfortable as circular flow would dictate that this note is above and to the left of 03:13:405 (1) - this change would also impact the rest of these jumps which would need to be re-done to fit with this movement remapped that part and the streams and looks better now
17. 03:21:505 (3) - Ctrl-g would make movement more comfortable (fits better with circular flow) fixed
18. 03:29:605 (1) - I would also ctrl-g here i rotate this slider instead 03:29:305 (7) -
19. 03:49:405 (4,7) - Ctrl-g
20. 03:49:555 (5,7) - Ctrl-g (After you ctrl-g previous one I mentioned)
21. 03:49:705 (6,7) - ^
22. 03:49:855 (7) - After all of the above have been done move this to x:293 y:366 i don't think it will fit in the next pattern. no changes
23. 03:56:005 (1,2) - I would just have this as a repeat slider to better follow guitar done
24. 04:13:255 (1,1) - Swap these two on the timeline so the sliders flow to the next ones better i don't feel swapping that is a good idea ;w;
25. 04:45:955 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Move up so the (6) overlaps with 04:45:655 (4)- fixed

The only thing i think you need to focus on is when to change flow, your maps flow is mainly circular and this should only change direction on a significant sound (usually a downbeat) right now it changes in the middle of combos and can be really jarring for players to account for, other than that the map will do well with some polish

GL

timemon wrote:

Hello,

I'm relatively new, so please bear with me.

7 Goddesses
OD9 for Extra difficulty is fine. The BPM is quite high.

01:48:055 (2,3) - You don't leave gap like this one in other kiais. It also feels awkward to stop in the middle of a climax of the song. The red tick is not completely silent but I would put a circle there for sake of gameplay. already added. forgot to place one and update it. lol
01:50:455 (2,3) - you can change this into a triplet with the final note being a slider to emphasize the vocal. there is no noticable sound on 01:50:530
03:00:805 (1) - stack? intended
03:58:705 (2,3) - You can change this slider and the circle to a triplet and followed by jumps to emphasize the intensity. same reason
03:59:305 (5) - change it to circles to emphasize the sounds? i feel more comfortable with slider than circles
04:00:355 (4) - the circle touches the slider body, maybe move it away a little? okay
04:08:905 (5,1) - audible blue tick i'll just stick in simple style rather than mapping confusing sound
04:43:405 (1,2,3) - this is cool, but the slider is skipping a pretty audible white tick. you can just make a triplet there. okay

thanks guys!

Hi, from queue

Map looks ok from first glance and plays well. monstrata-ish

1. 00:33:205 (1) - ctrl+g this? feels pretty weak from 4 to 1.
   Also I feel like this measure 00:33:205 - can use bigger spacing since vocal is going up
2. 00:41:905 (2,3,4) - The only group of 3 notes that uses wide angle here, I felt uncomfortable with this movement abit, you may want to change it? So it would look like the rest of this section
3. I feel like this section is unconsistently mapped, you are following vocal here, the fact that you start some sliders on red tick suggests that 00:43:255 (3,4) -
   So something like these 00:41:455 (5,1) - & 00:46:255 (5,1) - can be 1/1 slider for vocal. Yea, I feel like this section can be done better with correct vocal emphasis.
   00:47:905 (2,3) - the only stack in this part, what's special about this makes you want to create a stack here?
4. 00:59:155 (4) - Place this closer to 00:59:305 (5) - something like this. Just an example because : 00:58:705 (2,3) - these go as a pair also same for these 00:59:155 (4,5) - make better emphasis on vocal.
5. 01:00:805 (1,2,3,4) - Jump here is overdone for the music imo. How about rhythm like this ? It captures both vocal and instrument
6. 01:03:505 (2,3,4,5) - Pair thing mentioned
7. 01:05:605 (1,2,3,4) - No reason for a jump here, music doesn't change nor goes hyper
8. 01:08:305 (2,3,1) - They sound like they have the same vocal strength. So I think distance from 3 to 1 is too low here for the music, consider make it bigger.
9. 01:10:405 (1,2) - Better make this 1/2 slider for vocal, jump here is weird
10. 01:11:155 (1,2) - Ctrl+g for rhythm. Slider 2 starts on a not prominent sound at all.
11. 01:13:405 (4,5) - spacing is big for what? There's nothing to be emphasized
12. 01:15:205 (1) - Why 1/1? If you are trying to create a momentrum could be better if sticking with 1/2 sliders here
13. 01:28:105 (5) - Can be directly overlapped with this slider 01:28:855 (2) - 's body. To 01:27:205 (4,5) - make the time gap between these more noticeable and also keeps the flow good.
14. 01:28:855 (2,3) - A little bit bigger spacing would be neat

Good luck o

Asaiga wrote:

Hi, from queue

Map looks ok from first glance and plays well. monstrata-ish

1. 00:33:205 (1) - ctrl+g this? feels pretty weak from 4 to 1.
   Also I feel like this measure 00:33:205 - can use bigger spacing since vocal is going up fixed the spacing but didn't ctrl+g that slider.
2. 00:41:905 (2,3,4) - The only group of 3 notes that uses wide angle here, I felt uncomfortable with this movement abit, you may want to change it? So it would look like the rest of this section fixed DS
3. I feel like this section is unconsistently mapped, you are following vocal here, the fact that you start some sliders on red tick suggests that 00:43:255 (3,4) -
   So something like these 00:41:455 (5,1) - & 00:46:255 (5,1) - can be 1/1 slider for vocal. Yea, I feel like this section can be done better with correct vocal emphasis. yea. but i think there's no need to change it to 1/1 slider because it follows the music as well.
   00:47:905 (2,3) - the only stack in this part, what's special about this makes you want to create a stack here? nothing. lol. fixed
4. 00:59:155 (4) - Place this closer to 00:59:305 (5) - something like this. Just an example because : 00:58:705 (2,3) - these go as a pair also same for these 00:59:155 (4,5) - make better emphasis on vocal. done
5. 01:00:805 (1,2,3,4) - Jump here is overdone for the music imo. How about rhythm like this ? It captures both vocal and instrument
6. 01:03:505 (2,3,4,5) - Pair thing mentioned both fixed
7. 01:05:605 (1,2,3,4) - No reason for a jump here, music doesn't change nor goes hyper fixed
8. 01:08:305 (2,3,1) - They sound like they have the same vocal strength. So I think distance from 3 to 1 is too low here for the music, consider make it bigger. okay
9. 01:10:405 (1,2) - Better make this 1/2 slider for vocal, jump here is weird okay
10. 01:11:155 (1,2) - Ctrl+g for rhythm. Slider 2 starts on a not prominent sound at all. okay
11. 01:13:405 (4,5) - spacing is big for what? There's nothing to be emphasized fixed
12. 01:15:205 (1) - Why 1/1? If you are trying to create a momentrum could be better if sticking with 1/2 sliders here because of vocals?
    and feel more comfortable here with 1/1
13. 01:28:105 (5) - Can be directly overlapped with this slider 01:28:855 (2) - 's body. To 01:27:205 (4,5) - make the time gap between these more noticeable and also keeps the flow good. fixed. i guess
14. 01:28:855 (2,3) - A little bit bigger spacing would be neat done

Good luck o

thanks a lot!

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00:14:605 (4,5,6,1) - https://puu.sh/w0IqF/38b4abbb75.png?
00:29:455 (4) - ilagay mo ng onti sa kaliwa x281 y 105
00:54:205 (3,4) - ctrl+ g?
01:04:405 (1) - ilayo mo ng onti sa (5)?
01:16:405 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - lagyan mo ng finish yung head?
01:42:355 (2) - x189 y286?
02:48:805 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - lagyan mo ng finish yung head?
lagyan ko kaya ng piano part toh? 02:53:605 (1,2,1,2) -
03:22:105 (5) - gawin mo na lang siguro tong circles?
05:14:905 (2) - gawin mo na lang tong circle tapos start mo yung spinner dito ? 05:14:980
yun lang
pm mo lang ako kung gusto mo pa ng star
good luck
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Shishou wrote:

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00:14:605 (4,5,6,1) - https://puu.sh/w0IqF/38b4abbb75.png?
00:29:455 (4) - ilagay mo ng onti sa kaliwa x281 y 105 eh.. nakatutok kasi ung slidertail nung 00:29:155 (3) - sa (4)
00:54:205 (3,4) - ctrl+ g? matagal ko na din pinag iisipan yan. done
01:04:405 (1) - ilayo mo ng onti sa (5)?
01:16:405 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - lagyan mo ng finish yung head? 01:16:855 (2,1,3,2,1,3) - eto lang siguro. yan lang kasi rinig sa music
01:42:355 (2) - x189 y286? 01:42:205 (1,2,3) - triangle
02:48:805 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - lagyan mo ng finish yung head? same reason
lagyan ko kaya ng piano part toh? 02:53:605 (1,2,1,2) - pwede xd. pero okay na rin baka lumaki pa lalo file size. karamihan ng naglalaro naka disable hitsounds eh :'(
03:22:105 (5) - gawin mo na lang siguro tong circles? mas prefer ko ung ganito at madali laruin
05:14:905 (2) - gawin mo na lang tong circle tapos start mo yung spinner dito ? 05:14:980 pwede rin pero ung spinner dun maririnig ung umpisa ng guitar e. tsaka dun sa slider naman parang sa vocals naka focus eh.
yun lang
pm mo lang ako kung gusto mo pa ng star
good luck
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mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na mahal na kita <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

i rab u 2.tnx

o/

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  7 Goddesses
  00:17:605 - 00:20:005 - add more spacing in this section, I don't really feel that anything changes while playing, from here 00:20:005 - song it's more quiet/calm, but the maps keep doing the same. adding more spacing in the previous section will fix it
  00:24:655 (5,1) - 00:22:255 (4,1) - 00:27:055 (4,1) - 00:29:455 (4,1) - spacing changes a lot for the same kind of sounds, 00:22:255 (4,1) - spacing like this goes well, emphasizes the piano sound pretty well, but 00:24:655 (5,1) - 00:29:455 (4,1) - these two doesn't, keep consistency, add more spacing there, 00:29:605 (1) - even more in this one since there's a finish sound on it
  00:36:805 (1) - cltr+g? will make flow more interesting and emphazise that sound better
  00:38:155 (1) - ^
  00:39:205 - 00:58:405 - this section its more intense than 00:20:005 - 00:36:805 - but mapping feels like the same, just a bit faster sv but thats all, its a bit boring tbh adding more spacing to that section will be purfect (or reducing the spacing in the section before :thinking:) w/e should do something about that
  01:12:805 - 01:16:405 - < add bit more spacing in this section too, to this point, all map feels the same, I didnt even felt the sv change
  01:32:905 (6) - drum-hitclap?
  01:37:405 - ^
  01:38:455 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - tbh I don't really liked how this play because wide angles, no change needed at all, but I just wanted to say it
  02:21:955 (4) - make this into circles? will fit music better
  02:44:905 (6) - stack this to 02:44:005 (1) - ? will fit music better imo
  03:00:205 (1,2) - add triplet here?
  03:09:805 (4) - ^
  03:12:805 (1) - try making this 03:12:805 (1) - a 1/1 slider and 03:13:705 (3) - into circles, fits music better imo
  03:15:655 (2) - move this up :d?
  03:21:505 (3) - maybe change this into circles? so the next sliders, 03:21:805 (4,5) - enphasizes the vocals better
  03:49:105 (2,4,6) - add more spacing on these? hmm probably will ruin the start pattern, or add more spacing to all the star, spacing it's too short.. song's really high at this point
  03:50:305 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  04:17:605 (1) - Ohhh this slider is k_hand::skin-tone-5: purfect, great
  04:33:205 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same as """ 01:38:455 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - """
  04:44:605 (3) - stack it's end with 04:43:855 (8) - (secm that will ruin some stack later, so.. why not stack 04:43:855 (8) - with sliderend and move 04:43:555 (5,6,7) - to the buttom (wtf Im hittler)
  
  nazi stuff:
  00:14:305 (2,4) - blanket
  00:17:155 (3,1) -
  00:39:505 (2,4) -
  02:17:005 (2,3) -
  02:17:605 (1,2) -
  03:07:105 (2,4) -
  03:11:155 (4,1) -
  03:12:505 (5,1) -
  03:35:005 (3,4) -
  03:36:505 (5) -
  03:37:255 (3) -
  03:39:955 (3,1) -
  03:40:705 (2,5) -
  05:09:505 (2,4) -
  05:12:355 (7,1) -

gl

Finshie wrote:

hi from r/osumapping !

[7 Goddess]

1. remap tnx
2. 00:10:405 (1) - bingi na ba aq. remove whistle naayos ko na ung soft-finish kaya okay na.
3. 00:26:455 (2) - stack uu
4. 00:58:405 (1,2,3,4,5) - pwede https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8159641 ok lang kung ayaw mo pero maganda sana dahil sa vocal. pag apply ilayo lang 00:59:605 (6,1) - okay na siguro to
5. 02:32:005 (1,2) - paglayuin mo kunti ang lapit masyado para sa 1/1 uu
6. 02:41:005 (4,5) - change to notes? bilis vocal iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii nop
7. 02:41:605 (1,2) - paglayuin try ko mamaya isip bagong pattern dyan
8. 02:48:805 (1) - di bagay para 02:49:255 (2,3) - ih uu
9. ops tapucn ko nalang bukas ops
   

gl!~ ah

tnx mapper-san

Itasha_S13 wrote:

o/

• 
  7 Goddesses
  00:17:605 - 00:20:005 - add more spacing in this section, I don't really feel that anything changes while playing, from here 00:20:005 - song it's more quiet/calm, but the maps keep doing the same. adding more spacing in the previous section will fix it
  00:24:655 (5,1) - 00:22:255 (4,1) - 00:27:055 (4,1) - 00:29:455 (4,1) - spacing changes a lot for the same kind of sounds, 00:22:255 (4,1) - spacing like this goes well, emphasizes the piano sound pretty well, but 00:24:655 (5,1) - 00:29:455 (4,1) - these two doesn't, keep consistency, add more spacing there, 00:29:605 (1) - even more in this one since there's a finish sound on it
  00:36:805 (1) - cltr+g? will make flow more interesting and emphazise that sound better
  00:38:155 (1) - ^ fixed and made some reshape
  00:39:205 - 00:58:405 - this section its more intense than 00:20:005 - 00:36:805 - but mapping feels like the same, just a bit faster sv but thats all, its a bit boring tbh adding more spacing to that section will be purfect (or reducing the spacing in the section before :thinking:) w/e should do something about that
  01:12:805 - 01:16:405 - < add bit more spacing in this section too, to this point, all map feels the same, I didnt even felt the sv change
  01:32:905 (6) - drum-hitclap?
  01:37:405 - ^
  01:38:455 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - tbh I don't really liked how this play because wide angles, no change needed at all, but I just wanted to say it
  02:21:955 (4) - make this into circles? will fit music better
  02:44:905 (6) - stack this to 02:44:005 (1) - ? will fit music better imo but it's kinda weird to play
  03:00:205 (1,2) - add triplet here? nah
  03:09:805 (4) - ^ ^
  03:12:805 (1) - try making this 03:12:805 (1) - a 1/1 slider and 03:13:705 (3) - into circles, fits music better imo
  03:15:655 (2) - move this up :d?
  03:21:505 (3) - maybe change this into circles? so the next sliders, 03:21:805 (4,5) - enphasizes the vocals better
  03:49:105 (2,4,6) - add more spacing on these? hmm probably will ruin the start pattern, or add more spacing to all the star, spacing it's too short.. song's really high at this point
  03:50:305 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  04:17:605 (1) - Ohhh this slider is k_hand::skin-tone-5: purfect, great xd
  04:33:205 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same as """ 01:38:455 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - """ feels more comfortable with this pattern
  04:44:605 (3) - stack it's end with 04:43:855 (8) - (secm that will ruin some stack later, so.. why not stack 04:43:855 (8) - with sliderend and move 04:43:555 (5,6,7) - to the buttom (wtf Im hittler)
  
  nazi stuff:
  00:14:305 (2,4) - blanket
  00:17:155 (3,1) -
  00:39:505 (2,4) -
  02:17:005 (2,3) -
  02:17:605 (1,2) -
  03:07:105 (2,4) -
  03:11:155 (4,1) -
  03:12:505 (5,1) -
  03:35:005 (3,4) -
  03:36:505 (5) -
  03:37:255 (3) -
  03:39:955 (3,1) -
  03:40:705 (2,5) -
  05:09:505 (2,4) -
  05:12:355 (7,1) - all fixed

gl

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thanks a lot!

hello so I only played ur map and since I liked it only wanna point out some things

01:51:955 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this stream feels awkard to hit considering it's structureand that comes from a weird angle of jumps .I would like to suggest to move 01:51:805 (1) - (this one feels out of space) a bit down and/or make this transition 01:51:805 (1) - smoother from the triple->stream. like unstacking it or something like that

you do something similar 02:00:805 (1) - here but this one is a lot better built

in the kiais i don't see why you wouldn't increase spacings a bit, it's okay on the song for example
03:03:655 (2,3) -
03:04:555 (2,3) -
03:15:655 (2,3) -
03:57:505 (2,3,4) - 3 could go down and 4 up
03:58:705 (2,3,4) - make these angles sharper ?xd

^I know that some of these also affect other structures but maybe you could work smth out

Move this 03:52:705 (2) - one the stream start or under 03:53:005 (1) - ?


I liked your map tho and goodluck with it xd

--edit didn't notice you made 2 updates while I was modding (literally 8 minutes ) so a few things here changed lol ur 2 fast on it

rakuenslove wrote:

hello so I only played ur map and since I liked it only wanna point out some things

01:51:955 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this stream feels awkard to hit considering it's structureand that comes from a weird angle of jumps .I would like to suggest to move 01:51:805 (1) - (this one feels out of space) a bit down and/or make this transition 01:51:805 (1) - smoother from the triple->stream. like unstacking it or something like that

you do something similar 02:00:805 (1) - here but this one is a lot better built

in the kiais i don't see why you wouldn't increase spacings a bit, it's okay on the song for example
03:03:655 (2,3) -
03:04:555 (2,3) - looks fine to me
03:15:655 (2,3) -
03:57:505 (2,3,4) - 3 could go down and 4 up
03:58:705 (2,3,4) - make these angles sharper ?xd

^I know that some of these also affect other structures but maybe you could work smth out

Move this 03:52:705 (2) - one the stream start or under 03:53:005 (1) - ?


I liked your map tho and goodluck with it xd

--edit didn't notice you made 2 updates while I was modding (literally 8 minutes ) so a few things here changed lol ur 2 fast on it forgot smth lol

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thanks for random mod!

Hi, mod from my queue. Hope it helps

00:59:605 (1,2) - If you set these up like this, the next pattern that appears might throw off players : 01:01:105 (2,3).
I suggest moving 1 further from 2 in the first pattern or change the second pattern.

01:23:605 (1) - Ok, starting from this slider up to 01:36:805 (1) there isn't a single hitcircle. Add a few as a replacement for some sliders for variety.

01:38:455 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Circular flow that changes to a triangle pattern at 01:40:405 (1) without any big change in music.

01:51:955 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - After some looking around I realized you're mapping the drums in the background here, but they're far too quiet compared to the voice and I didn't realize that there were any sounds until I slowed down the track.

It's a bit silly but, join these together? 04:16:405 (1,2) So they form a whole heart with the next sliderhead in the middle (04:17:605 (1) )

Sorry for the short mod but everything else is looking fine. Ignore this if it's unhelpful

LimePixel wrote:

Hi, mod from my queue. Hope it helps

00:59:605 (1,2) - If you set these up like this, the next pattern that appears might throw off players : 01:01:105 (2,3).
I suggest moving 1 further from 2 in the first pattern or change the second pattern. changed all the patterns

01:23:605 (1) - Ok, starting from this slider up to 01:36:805 (1) there isn't a single hitcircle. Add a few as a replacement for some sliders for variety. there's no any sound that need single notes

01:38:455 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Circular flow that changes to a triangle pattern at 01:40:405 (1) without any big change in music. i just cant really explain it but i feel confident about this one. no changes

01:51:955 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - After some looking around I realized you're mapping the drums in the background here, but they're far too quiet compared to the voice and I didn't realize that there were any sounds until I slowed down the track. yeah. but still noticable

It's a bit silly but, join these together? 04:16:405 (1,2) So they form a whole heart with the next sliderhead in the middle (04:17:605 (1) ) sure

Sorry for the short mod but everything else is looking fine. Ignore this if it's unhelpful nah. really appreciated your help

thanks for mod!

NM from queue
that's all from me, good luck

-LynX- wrote:

NM from queue

7 Goddesses

1. Personally, i think the NC colours are slightly too similar, i'm almost unable to tell the difference between the 2 colours during gameplay, just pointing it out xd will change this if i can find new bg
2. 00:04:105 (2) - minor aesthetic issue, but if you could copy this slider 00:03:205 (1) - and rotate 180 degrees for this, i think it'd look nicer, personal opinion
3. 00:10:405 (1) - i think if you ctrl+g this there will be more emphasis on the downbeat by breaking flow and having a sharper angle the previous note is rotating clockwise so 00:10:405 (1) - can follow
4. 00:10:705 (2) - if you did this ^ you can maybe ctrl+g this also, but it's fine either way i think
5. 00:12:055 (2) - rotate this anti-clockwise by a bit so that it won't overlap with 00:11:455 (5) - would be nice too
6. 00:14:905 (5) - just a suggestion, but maybe something like this would fit better https://puu.sh/w3tTE/d4cf2f5247.png the sharper angle from 5 to the next downbeat 1 makes for nice emphasis too i think didn't change it but made some adjustments on 00:14:305 (2,3,4) - to make it look better
7. 00:26:005 (1) - i think you shortened this slider accidentally when you were fixing your blankets xd
8. 00:31:855 (4,1) - minor, but personally i wouldn't stack these 2 as 1 is the downbeat, maybe place 4 somewhere around x:169 y:319 or even on the slider-tail of 00:31:255 (2) -
9. 00:41:605 (1) - maybe ctrl+g for emphasis too hard to aim
10. 00:59:305 (5) - maybe a slider of similar shape as 00:58:855 (3) - will look nicer, gives a more symmetrical feel
11. 01:03:205 (1) - ctrl+g for emphasis on downbeat same reason
12. 01:14:905 (4,1) - blanket
13. 01:23:605 (1) - is this kiai intentional? i don't think it's needed yes. i think it fits well here
14. 01:32:905 (6,1) - maybe space these 2 further apart as there's a strong sound on 1
15. 01:33:505 (2,3,4) - these are similar sounds but 3->4 is way further than 2->3, may wanna decrease spacing for 3->4
16. 01:38:455 (2) - personally i would use a lower hitsound volume at this point of time, then gradually increase it from here
17. 01:46:405 (1,2,3) - is this back and forth necessary? feels a bit off with respect to the music
18. 01:56:305 (3,4,5) - i dont hear a 1/4 rhythm in the music, and this is not repeated in the front half of the second kiai so may want to make it consistent maybe that sound doesn't stand out that much. but still want to it like that
19. 02:25:855 (4,5) - i think you can afford to increase spacing here to emphasize the downbeat
20. 02:42:655 (3,2,6) - maybe make 6 stack with 2 and blanket 3 at the same time
21. 03:00:505 (3,1) - i get what you're doing here, but stacking has been quite prevalent in this map and not doing so here seems off as there's nothing really worth the emphasis here to go against the convention yeah but since its a new combo, i would like to add more spacing
22. 03:04:405 (1,2,3) - back and forth ^
23. 03:41:905 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - when i was testplaying i legit LOL-ed here cos i heard "dont disturb my friend" lol
24. 03:44:905 (4,1) - can afford to increase spacing here, seems a bit too low
25. 04:03:805 (3,4,5) - 04:05:005 (3,4,5) - these 2 back and forths are well done, this 04:08:605 (3,4,5) - however, not so much imo
26. 04:10:405 (1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,2) - it's nice as it is, but if you followed the guitar i think it'd be even more epic though, personal opinion the drums are more loud than guitar. even i would like to map the guitar, i can't. :c
27. 04:42:805 (1,2,3) - ^ wat
28. 04:48:805 (1) - it's the last kiai, feels a bit undermapped
29. last part is copy pasted so whatever i said previously applies

that's all from me, good luck

no reply=applied/fixed
dont mind my english :>
and thanks for modding!

From my modding queue :3

Good luck getting this ranked!

YokesPai wrote:

From my modding queue :3

Mod

• Fragile Heart

1. Just copy 00:00:805 (1) - to 00:01:705 (2) - so the sliders are the same they're the same. just ctrl+h and ctrl+j
2. ^ But with 00:03:205 (1) - and 00:04:105 (2) - same here. but made some rotation
3. 00:12:055 (2) - Blanket is slightly off
4. 00:16:405 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:26:005 (1) - ^
6. 00:32:605 (3) - ^
7. Move 00:39:655 (3) - to x:337 y:168 for better triangle.
8. 01:01:105 (2,3) - Don't have the same spacing as 01:01:555 (4,5) -
9. 01:08:605 (4,5) - You used a lot of 1/2 stacks already, so 1/1 stacks are harder to read. This is also the only 1/1 stack in this part.
10. 01:12:205 (3,4,5,6) - I suggest moving 3 to make a better looking rectangle. Like this.
11. 01:16:405 (1,2,3) - I think you should make the sliderheads of 1, 2, and 3 a triangle. You can take 1, copy it, paste, and rotate by 120, and move it over the other sliders so the sliders look more like a triangle. Like this. thanks for that but changed it because it so hard to make a next slider/pattern
12. 01:18:805 (1,2,3) - ^ But I'll let you try this one yourself. Copy+Paste and rotate (Ctrl+Shift+R) are your friends. ^
13. 01:17:755 (1,2,3) - Explain these placements please. yeah. same reason
14. 01:20:155 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
15. 02:41:605 (1,2) - This part has 1/1 stacks when a 1/1 beat is there, but not here?
16. 02:43:705 (6) - Isn't this supposed to overlap 02:42:955 (2) - ?
17. 03:00:805 (1) - Increase the spacing here, you can barely tell this is a strong sound by spacing.
18. 04:35:005 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This looks messy. but i love that part :'c
19. Most problems I found with this map were aesthetic ones, there's a lot more I found (similar to the ones above), but it would be better to let you find them on your own . okay
20. Also, if you didn't find out how to do the triangles you should watch this.

sure

Good luck getting this ranked!

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thanks for modding!

from q

[ fragile heart]

1. generally (especially noticable in the first verse and chorus) you stick to only using almost only one direction of flow for entire sections before changing, making movement uncomfortable. change flow direction more often.
2. for example:
3. 00:19:705 - starting around here the flow is generally only counterclockwise, making this part really uncomfortable. vary flow direction in this section a bit more so it won't be as uncomfortable.
4. 00:56:005 (1,1,1,1) - i think you could make these extended sliders, though your idea works as well
5. 01:51:955 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why doesnt this have a sharp bend in it like the other accelerating streams in the choruses?
6. 02:28:405 (1,1,1,1) - extended sliders here too maybe
7. 02:35:605 (1,2) - ctrlg for rhythm? that way both of them can prioritize vocals
8. 02:41:605 (1,2) - maybe stack, this looks a lot like a 1/2 jump
9. 03:14:605 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe don't overlap this with 6, players could notelock on 6 if their aim strays a bit to the left
10. 04:23:605 - maybe add another bend to 04:22:405 (1) - that lands on here
11. 04:39:205 (1,3) - fix sliderbody blanket
12. 04:44:605 (3) - ctrlg for comfortbale flow? the kind of flow where you move in 2 wide angles between (1,2,3) is less comfortable than one big fluid movement between (1,2,3) imo

good luck!

newton- wrote:

from q

[ fragile heart]

1. generally (especially noticable in the first verse and chorus) you stick to only using almost only one direction of flow for entire sections before changing, making movement uncomfortable. change flow direction more often.
2. for example:
3. 00:19:705 - starting around here the flow is generally only counterclockwise, making this part really uncomfortable. vary flow direction in this section a bit more so it won't be as uncomfortable.
4. 00:56:005 (1,1,1,1) - i think you could make these extended sliders, though your idea works as well wanna make it simple
5. 01:51:955 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why doesnt this have a sharp bend in it like the other accelerating streams in the choruses?
6. 02:28:405 (1,1,1,1) - extended sliders here too maybe same
7. 02:35:605 (1,2) - ctrlg for rhythm? that way both of them can prioritize vocals
8. 02:41:605 (1,2) - maybe stack, this looks a lot like a 1/2 jump
9. 03:14:605 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe don't overlap this with 6, players could notelock on 6 if their aim strays a bit to the left
10. 04:23:605 - maybe add another bend to 04:22:405 (1) - that lands on here
11. 04:39:205 (1,3) - fix sliderbody blanket
12. 04:44:605 (3) - ctrlg for comfortbale flow? the kind of flow where you move in 2 wide angles between (1,2,3) is less comfortable than one big fluid movement between (1,2,3) imo replaced with circles

good luck!

no reply=fixed/applied
thanks for modding

From my queue

All suggestions are subjective. You are free to deny these suggestions. But, Please keep in mind that you should giving feedback with a proper reason for my suggestions.

[General]

1. I am not sure about this. but, the modding assistant tool is saying that: "soft-hitwhistle15.wav" have over 5ms delay. According to the Ranking Criteria, which is the RULE, is mentioned at below, You must to fix it.
   

   RC Audio wrote:

   Hitsounds must have an acceptable range of delay under 5ms. Every hitsound file should start in time, preferrably at 0ms. This is to ensure that every map doesn't sound mistimed, and therefore could provide acceptably synchronized rhythm feedback to players.

[Fragile Heart]

1. 00:12:655 - This NC isn't necessary. Since, You are putting NC at each big whiteline(downbeat) and didn't put a NC at here 00:13:855 -. Put NC at 00:12:805 - here instead.
2. 00:16:405 - I think it need to be emphasized such as making a jump. You could be listening the worthy sound to do it at here.
3. 01:51:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think it's overmapped, since it seems there isn't proper reason to add circle at 01:52:030 - 01:52:180 -. Play the music here as 25% and listen those mentioned points.
4. 03:24:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ It's applied as exactly same above.
5. 04:45:955 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
6. 03:14:680 - ^ It also seems doesn't need to make it clickable.
7. 03:33:880 - ^
8. 04:43:630 - ^
9. 03:28:930 - ^ Try listening 03:28:855 - 03:28:930 - 03:29:005 - each and you will get what I meaning is.
10. To be honest, I am not sure regarding the overmapped stuffs. My earphones might be bad to get it. I hope you will getting more opinions about this.

That's all! It was quite neat map.

I hope my suggestions would help the mapset

Enon wrote:

From my queue

All suggestions are subjective. You are free to deny these suggestions. But, Please keep in mind that you should giving feedback with a proper reason for my suggestions.

[General]

1. I am not sure about this. but, the modding assistant tool is saying that: "soft-hitwhistle15.wav" have over 5ms delay. According to the Ranking Criteria, which is the RULE, is mentioned at below, You must to fix it. just gonna delete this hitsound. i don't know how to fix it either.
   

   RC Audio wrote:

   Hitsounds must have an acceptable range of delay under 5ms. Every hitsound file should start in time, preferrably at 0ms. This is to ensure that every map doesn't sound mistimed, and therefore could provide acceptably synchronized rhythm feedback to players.

[Fragile Heart]

1. 00:12:655 - This NC isn't necessary. Since, You are putting NC at each big whiteline(downbeat) and didn't put a NC at here 00:13:855 -. Put NC at 00:12:805 - here instead.
2. 00:16:405 - I think it need to be emphasized such as making a jump. You could be listening the worthy sound to do it at here.
3. 01:51:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think it's overmapped, since it seems there isn't proper reason to add circle at 01:52:030 - 01:52:180 -. Play the music here as 25% and listen those mentioned points.
4. 03:24:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ It's applied as exactly same above.
5. 04:45:955 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
6. 03:14:680 - ^ It also seems doesn't need to make it clickable.
7. 03:33:880 - ^
8. 04:43:630 - ^
9. 03:28:930 - ^ Try listening 03:28:855 - 03:28:930 - 03:29:005 - each and you will get what I meaning is.
10. To be honest, I am not sure regarding the overmapped stuffs. My earphones might be bad to get it. I hope you will getting more opinions about this.

That's all! It was quite neat map.

I hope my suggestions would help the mapset

changed most of stuff.
no rejected suggestions
thanks for modding!

BN Mod

1. call me back

Finshie wrote:

BN Mod

1. call me back

bakit ka ganyan

Hello, from metadata help queue.

Artist and title is fine, but in tags no need to list the names of the characters, you only need vocalists.
I completely redid the tags: Mayu Yoshioka 吉岡茉祐 Airi Eino 永野愛理 Minami Tanaka 田中美海 Yoshino Aoyama 青山吉能 Nanami Yamashita 山下七海 Kaya Okuno 奥野香耶 Miyu Takagi 高木美佑 Hidekazu Tanaka MONACA Bon Karaya wug

all sources:
1)Vocal
2)Staff
3)Artist and Title

Lama Poluna wrote:

Hello, from metadata help queue.

Artist and title is fine, but in tags no need to list the names of the characters, you only need vocalists.
I completely redid the tags: Mayu Yoshioka 吉岡茉祐 Airi Eino 永野愛理 Minami Tanaka 田中美海 Yoshino Aoyama 青山吉能 Nanami Yamashita 山下七海 Kaya Okuno 奥野香耶 Miyu Takagi 高木美佑 Hidekazu Tanaka MONACA Bon Karaya wug

all sources:
1)vocal
2)staf
3)artist and title

thanks <3

Hello there, O/
NM from my q

[General]

1. Might be song needs to be a bit edited, because drum beats sounds random, perhaps You need opinion someone who's really experienced in stuff like this. (All about 1/4s)
   wanna kill this drumer
2. hitclap-15 looks unused

[Fragile Heart]

1. 01:04:405 (1,2,3,4) - i think 01:04:555 - should be clicable since You follow vocals here. this rhythm https://puu.sh/wvDEs.jpg would be more correct, or more tense variation -> https://puu.sh/wvDA3.jpg . 01:04:555 - Also there pretty strong stretched sound which might be emphasis by slider.
2. 01:25:705 (4) - this high ds for emphasis clap i guess? So, what's with 01:35:305 (4) - this one? Are these different?
3. 01:28:105 (5,2) - stack a bit off
4. 01:31:255 (2,3) - hmm, questionable ds, i don't really see any reason for decreasing it here since vocals on same level and it supported by music too.
   01:31:705 (3,4) - Also, visual connection by flow might be cleaner, minor stuff, but it's trigger me too much .
5. 01:32:605 (5,6,1) - it's cool pattern, but 01:33:205 (1) - very strong and usually You buff ds on down beats, but this one uses different spacing concept which make inconsistency in your structure. It's especially weird because You place similar patterns one after another but with different spacing concepts (buy musically these are similar).
6. 01:38:455 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Some thoughts about this part... Hmm, to be honest, it's not really good when rhythm make extra fast changes with clicability. Like... before this You made mainly slider's based section which i feel pretty calm and player no needed to show smthing extraordinary stamina and ability of fast clicking, just good calm section. But from 01:38:005 - song is starting to give more hype and include more often strong beats, it happens сonsistently. Louder, stronger etc... But in map You just propose to player start clicking 2 times faster (01:38:455 - ) ... Smooth transition, what i wonder here ... I recommend to rebuild rhythm 01:38:605 - 01:40:405 - . Make it more smoothly gaining momentum. I suggest smthing like https://puu.sh/wvFJH.jpg or https://puu.sh/wvGhb.jpg with 01:39:205 - a bit nerfed jumps like 01:40:405 (1,2,3,4) - (Hope You understoond, i'm terrible in explaining whatever.)
   And yeah anyway agree You or disagree with above stuff, 01:38:455 - beat is almost silence, it's not part of next (01:38:605 -) section. I suggest make it unclickable or skip it at all.
7. 01:43:105 (1,2,3) - supose to be uneven?
8. 01:52:030 - i pretty sure there is no beat, someone mention it before me already. Even if You want to overmap echo, so add 01:52:180 - beat too, for avoid a torn transition between triples like You did 02:01:780 (5) -
9. 02:11:005 - it's super minor thing but pls snap breakend on white tick i'm retarded
10. 02:28:405 (1,1) - fix blnket?
11. 02:23:155 (4,5,6) -imo flow here not enough sharp which make less emphasis on 02:23:605 (6) - , before You used only sharp angles for strong vocals, I suggest make same here (also maybe buff ds a bit)
12. 02:32:005 (1) - buff ds. Imo, it feels insufficiently emphasized. Only 2.0 (if count slider mechanic 1,8) hmmm Btw, why did You so undermapped this part? it sounds like 02:36:805 (1,2,3,4) -
13. 03:24:430 - heh same thing as before, no beat
14. 03:34:030 - and i hear beat here Orz.
15. 03:26:605 (3,4) - it's kind a wierd breaking flow, tbh don't see idea for it. if You want emphasize 03:26:905 (5) - like 03:29:305 (6) - so perhaps You need more ds on 1st example. 03:26:605 (3,4) - but i think will be better to continue movement or change to more sharp angle. Stacks feels really bad on wide angles imo.
16. 04:50:605 (3,4,5) - same^ but here much better, so not a big deal

[]
That's it. I have really big worries about 1/4 in this song but overall pretty cool map.
Hope You'll find smthing usefull.
GL~

Mitkoff wrote:

Hello there, O/
NM from my q

[General]

1. Might be song needs to be a bit edited, because drum beats sounds random, perhaps You need opinion someone who's really experienced in stuff like this. (All about 1/4s)
   wanna kill this drumer
2. hitclap-15 looks unused

[Fragile Heart]

1. 01:04:405 (1,2,3,4) - i think 01:04:555 - should be clicable since You follow vocals here. this rhythm https://puu.sh/wvDEs.jpg would be more correct, or more tense variation -> https://puu.sh/wvDA3.jpg . 01:04:555 - Also there pretty strong stretched sound which might be emphasis by slider. changed most of patterns here
2. 01:25:705 (4) - this high ds for emphasis clap i guess? So, what's with 01:35:305 (4) - this one? Are these different? fixed ds here 01:25:705 (4) -
3. 01:28:105 (5,2) - stack a bit off
4. 01:31:255 (2,3) - hmm, questionable ds, i don't really see any reason for decreasing it here since vocals on same level and it supported by music too.
   01:31:705 (3,4) - Also, visual connection by flow might be cleaner, minor stuff, but it's trigger me too much .
5. 01:32:605 (5,6,1) - it's cool pattern, but 01:33:205 (1) - very strong and usually You buff ds on down beats, but this one uses different spacing concept which make inconsistency in your structure. It's especially weird because You place similar patterns one after another but with different spacing concepts (buy musically these are similar).
6. 01:38:455 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Some thoughts about this part... Hmm, to be honest, it's not really good when rhythm make extra fast changes with clicability. Like... before this You made mainly slider's based section which i feel pretty calm and player no needed to show smthing extraordinary stamina and ability of fast clicking, just good calm section. But from 01:38:005 - song is starting to give more hype and include more often strong beats, it happens сonsistently. Louder, stronger etc... But in map You just propose to player start clicking 2 times faster (01:38:455 - ) ... Smooth transition, what i wonder here ... I recommend to rebuild rhythm 01:38:605 - 01:40:405 - . Make it more smoothly gaining momentum. I suggest smthing like https://puu.sh/wvFJH.jpg or https://puu.sh/wvGhb.jpg with 01:39:205 - a bit nerfed jumps like 01:40:405 (1,2,3,4) - (Hope You understoond, i'm terrible in explaining whatever.) appreciated your suggestion. i just did remap on this section and applied some of your suggestions. wanna keep those continuous single notes starting on 01:39:205
   And yeah anyway agree You or disagree with above stuff, 01:38:455 - beat is almost silence, it's not part of next (01:38:605 -) section. I suggest make it unclickable or skip it at all.
7. 01:43:105 (1,2,3) - supose to be uneven? nvm that. changed 01:43:705 (3) - to straight slider
8. 01:52:030 - i pretty sure there is no beat, someone mention it before me already. Even if You want to overmap echo, so add 01:52:180 - beat too, for avoid a torn transition between triples like You did 02:01:780 (5) -
9. 02:11:005 - it's super minor thing but pls snap breakend on white tick i'm retarded lol fixed
10. 02:28:405 (1,1) - fix blnket? done
11. 02:23:155 (4,5,6) -imo flow here not enough sharp which make less emphasis on 02:23:605 (6) - , before You used only sharp angles for strong vocals, I suggest make same here (also maybe buff ds a bit) dunno if i fixed this pattern but it shouldn't be a problem rn coz its a lot better now
12. 02:32:005 (1) - buff ds. Imo, it feels insufficiently emphasized. Only 2.0 (if count slider mechanic 1,8) hmmm Btw, why did You so undermapped this part? it sounds like 02:36:805 (1,2,3,4) -
13. 03:24:430 - heh same thing as before, no beat
14. 03:34:030 - and i hear beat here Orz.
15. 03:26:605 (3,4) - it's kind a wierd breaking flow, tbh don't see idea for it. if You want emphasize 03:26:905 (5) - like 03:29:305 (6) - so perhaps You need more ds on 1st example. 03:26:605 (3,4) - but i think will be better to continue movement or change to more sharp angle. Stacks feels really bad on wide angles imo.
16. 04:50:605 (3,4,5) - same^ but here much better, so not a big deal

[]
That's it. I have really big worries about 1/4 in this song but overall pretty cool map.
Hope You'll find smthing usefull.
GL~

might edit this tomorrow or weekends to respond other mods. too busy right now
thanks for modding!

[hm]

1. uh, check your hitsounds again pls, as i won't point all of them out
2. 00:00:805 - uh, isn't this way too soft for the intro? would increase the volume a bit to 50% or sth
3. 00:12:655 (4) - why not whistle as you were following a heart beat (?) sound there
4. 00:14:905 (5) - the tail too
5. 00:16:405 (1) - could do a bit of gap here since the vocal's pitch is higher here
6. 00:17:605 (1) - i wonder why finish hitsound here, despite for not having an emphasize beat here from a music
7. 00:31:855 (4) - whistle
8. 00:33:205 (1,2,3,4,5) - i see that you were following a vocal here like the others, but this feels like you weren't following a vocal well from 00:33:955 (4,5) - . try to ctrl+g it (not a note placement suggestion here) and see if you can get what i mean
9. 00:38:605 (3) - kick drums, or default whistle? totally different from 00:38:905 (4) -
10. 00:56:005 (1) - 00:56:905 (1) - what's the reason having a finish here, since there are no emphasize cymbals here
11. 00:58:705 (2) - remove whistle, as it has no kicks here
12. 01:07:405 (4,5,6,7) - i feel like this one is a triplet beat here for those 2 starting on a white tick
13. 01:18:805 (1,2) - this is pretty unnecessary overlap for no reason. i'd stack it, or blanket it instead if i were you
14. 01:23:005 (2,1) - fix both blankets there. would make the visual more better in aesthetics
15. 01:23:605 (1,2) - i see no reason having a jump gap there while the song is that calm here. should've map it like 01:23:905 (2,3,4) - for 4 sliders like that would be better to follow. 01:33:205 (1,2,3,4) - and others like this should do that too
16. 01:36:055 (2) - why not try to stack both from 01:35:005 (3,4) - ? well you need to adjust the angle again after u do those stacks from 01:35:005 (3,4) - with an angle change too from 01:34:705 (2) -
17. 01:37:705 (3) - uh, i don't think having a tail is non clickable suit so well since it emphasize the start of the vocal well there. would've make it clickable there instead of using a slider ending there
18. 01:42:355 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - just use a same spacing of stream here rather than a current one. after all, the stream is just a snare beat only
19. 01:42:805 (8) - you would NC this like the others that u did, but u didn't NC this one
20. 02:00:805 (1,2,3) - would be better to have 1/2 slider + note or 1/1 slider rather than having (2) as a note, since it's a blank note from the music
21. 02:01:555 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - just make a normal same spacing and yes, it's a snare beat. if u want to make it hard, 1/4 slider jumps then
22. 02:04:405 - why not map this rather than having a break? it's like u were mapping the whole song there on calm parts tbh
23. 02:18:355 (3) - weird to have a reverse here, despite the end is a vocal that should be clickable there
24. 02:18:355 (3,1) - this overlap seems being used for no reason here. would've avoid that there if i were you
25. 02:36:055 (3) - why not 1/2 slider as u have done it like 02:33:505 (2,3) - 02:31:105 (2,3) - ? 02:38:455 (3) - too
26. 02:41:605 (1,2,3) - how about 4 1/2 sliders for vocal?
27. 02:48:805 (1,2,3,1) - 02:51:205 (1,2,3,1) - i'll be honest here. this part is an emphasize beat that builds up the song too well here, but this feel like in a lack of emphasize that builds up the song. would suggest like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8524160 for a better emphasize look for example by using 1/1 slider jumps. oh, 02:50:605 (2,3) - and the rests like this should be 1/2 slider jumps too for a build up part like this
28. 03:53:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - the hitsounds + streams are weird for the start. plus. 03:53:155 (3) - is where the snare beat starts. why not try to use this better? http://puu.sh/wD4G8/277cb64a74.jpg
29. 03:56:005 (1) - how about note + 1/2 slider to follow the guitar well?
30. 04:02:005 (1,2,3,4,5) - so that's why i heard sth misleading based on the hitsounds, while the hitsound set isn't blending with the music at all. how about this rhythm, since this follows way better? http://puu.sh/wD4WV/b1ac124117.jpg
31. 04:11:305 (1,1) - this is pretty unnecessary overlap here
32. 04:16:405 (1,2) - uh, creative, but... how about stacking both head and tail together, then 04:17:005 (2) - should ctrl+g would emphasize the vocal better?
33. 04:36:355 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - again, about the streams and the NC from (8)

the rhythm choice on some parts are weird tbh

gl

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