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Imperial Circus Dead Decadence - Uta

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Peruro
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, 4 June 2023 at 19:00:40

Artist: Imperial Circus Dead Decadence
Title: Uta
BPM: 140
Filesize: 13617kb
Play Time: 08:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Poetry (4,42 stars, 1505 notes)
Download: Imperial Circus Dead Decadence - Uta
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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UPDATE! 4/6-23
Will remap the parts that i think needs remapping.
and will MAYBE continue to update/ fix if needed.


~
And once again, it ends
Way too soon
However, this painful sorrow comes from their own deed
That's it.
Accept this end, as thee and I together...
~



My other uta map if this one is too easy
https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/940069#osu/1963455 5.58*
Liliosa
Just finished the map, really well mapped for the 8min+ rhythmic slaughter that is Uta. Took a while to adjust to the kicksliders (they end really late) but not what I'm used to, I guess. Good job with the map, GL with getting ranked haha 8-)
vicky5124
Here comes a long looking simple mod (i've changed the AR coz it's way easier for me to analize)

00:30:943 - Insert break time https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8303335
00:35:751 (1,2) - Slider
00:38:385 (2) - Replace with a long slider from there to 00:40:654
00:41:898 (3) - One shorter and add a hit with Finish
00:45:117 (1,2,1,2) - Separated
00:52:873 (2,3,4,5,6) - this looks way better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8303398
00:55:215 (2) - Distance snapping at 1.9x and put it between 1-3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8303421
00:55:361 (3,4) - Just me or it looks weird?
00:55:654 (4,1,2,3,1) - it's easy to miss 1-2, something like this would be better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8303435
00:58:288 (1) - ctrl+h and torn it back where it was
01:04:581 (1) - Make it look more direct to 2
01:05:166 (3) - Between 2-4 with distance snapping of 1.4x
01:05:459 (5) - Too far, put it on top of 4
01:15:995 (2) - Put in on top of 1 and change the shape
01:19:215 (3) - ctrl+h and put it closer to 2
01:19:654 - Hitcircle here
01:19:800 (4) - Looks better with a spike to the left
01:22:288 (5) - Non reverse, and add a long slider on the previous slider end, adn end it 01:22:873
01:24:044 (1) - shorter and add a hit on 01:24:922
01:25:507 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - Make a perfect triange with this
01:25:946 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - "" ↑↑↑ ""
01:27:995 (2) - Litle off distance, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8303563 this is better
01:30:776 (8) - Make it have the same curve as 7 and ctr+j back in to place
01:32:678 - Hit here
01:37:507 - ↑""
01:41:166 (6) - Reverse
01:41:605 (1) - Closer to the new slider end
01:47:166 (4) - Make the end fit the 2
01:49:507 (5) - Start new combo here and put it on top of the "2"
01:50:385 (1,2,3,4) - Make them follow better the 5 curve
01:53:312 (1) - it's one beat longer than what it should
02:02:678 (5) - Make it more like and S form
02:05:459 (2) - Add a hit circle on top of 3
02:11:312 - Hit
02:13:654 - Hit
02:19:068 (1) - Make it longer and non reverse
02:21:117 (1) - add a Hit and start spinn on the blue line
02:23:751 (1) - Not "on beat"
02:27:117 - Hit
02:45:995 (4,5,6) - Don't make it a stack
02:50:678 (7) - one beat longer and put 1 on top of it
02:58:288 (4) - Closer to 3 and add a note on 02:58:142 on top of it
03:00:044 (3) - put 4 Kick sliders from 044 to 922
03:04:142 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - This looks super weird
03:29:898 (3) - 1 reverse less and add a hit at the end
03:36:190 - Hit
04:13:654 - Hit
04:41:898 - Hit
04:45:410 (3,4) - Slider
04:48:922 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Really weird shapes and overlap with low AR (for EZ mod)
05:13:068 - Hit
05:28:727 (1) - Split it in half
05:30:776 (5) - 1 kick less and add a Hit with Finish
05:59:166 (3) - and it at 898 and add a Hit at 044
06:05:312 (2,3,4) - Perfect triangle
06:49:873 - Breake time
06:53:312 (1) - Put it on top of 3
07:46:190 (2,3,4) - Not snaped and add a Hit on 727
08:06:483 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ALL of this looks way too simple for what you are capeable of
08:22:873 (1) - Slpit in 2
08:44:824 (1,2,3) - I think they are starting on teh wrong beat and split 1
08:46:873 (1) - Too slow? or just me?
08:53:605 - End with a spinn taht ends here

- GL with your ranking! -
vicky5124
SPOILER
17:29 nitsuga5124: 00:02:522 (1,3) - can you amke this 2 have teh same angle?
17:30 Peruro: working on it right now :)
17:31 nitsuga5124: 00:53:898 (6,1) - this 2 have more space than 1,2,3
17:32 nitsuga5124: 01:02:678 (3) - Move it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8310626
17:32 nitsuga5124: 01:04:873 (2) - ctrl+shift+r -15
17:33 nitsuga5124: 01:18:483 - Hit
17:33 nitsuga5124: 01:20:605 - Feels empty, and the slow part has already ended
17:34 nitsuga5124: 01:29:459 - Hit
17:34 nitsuga5124: 01:42:337 - ""
17:34 nitsuga5124: 01:52:581 - ""
17:35 nitsuga5124: 02:21:190 (1) - end it at 23:751
17:37 nitsuga5124: 02:24:922 (3) - Give it the same look as 4
17:37 nitsuga5124: 02:31:946 (1,2) - Slider
17:37 nitsuga5124: 02:32:532 - Hit
17:38 nitsuga5124: 02:35:605 - slider and repalce 1 with the slider end
17:39 nitsuga5124: 02:47:751 (3) - Make it fit better the shape of 5 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8310681
17:39 nitsuga5124: 03:00:629 (5) - One shorter and add a hit
17:40 nitsuga5124: 03:07:946 (1) - make it look the same as 2
17:40 nitsuga5124: 03:11:020 - Hit
17:40 nitsuga5124: 03:23:459 (4,1,2,3) - Perfect triangle with teh 4 on the middle
17:41 nitsuga5124: also, make 3 and 2 have the same angle but simetrical
17:41 nitsuga5124: and 1 a straight line
17:41 nitsuga5124: 03:26:971 (4) - this sound starts at 824
17:44 nitsuga5124: 04:05:020 (3) - make this follow the 7 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8310723https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8310739
17:44 nitsuga5124: 04:09:410 (3) - short
17:46 nitsuga5124: 04:28:727 (3) - make it look like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8310755 and fix the spacing on the next notes
17:47 nitsuga5124: 05:25:215 (3,5) - make 5 match the slider end of 3
17:49 nitsuga5124: 05:57:410 (1,2) - Not snaped lol
17:49 nitsuga5124: i knew something didnt sound right
17:49 Peruro: will try to fix these now, have no more for time for today, but if any more needs fixing i gladly apreciate it :)
17:50 nitsuga5124: ok
17:52 nitsuga5124: 07:46:873 (1) - one shorter and ad a hit at the end with Clap
17:53 nitsuga5124: 08:01:800 (7) - sldier till 093 or 166
17:54 nitsuga5124: 08:22:727 - Hit
17:54 nitsuga5124: 08:22:727 - 3long slider
17:54 nitsuga5124: 08:24:922 - ""
17:54 nitsuga5124: 08:39:117 - Hit
17:55 nitsuga5124: 08:44:971 (3) - Split
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Topic Starter
Peruro
[quote="nitsuga5124"]Here comes a long looking simple mod (i've changed the AR coz it's way easier for me to analize)

00:30:943 - Insert break time https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8303335 fixed
00:38:385 (2) - Replace with a long slider from there to 00:40:654 fixed
00:41:898 (3) - One shorter and add a hit with Finish fixed
00:45:117 (1,2,1,2) - Separated fixed?
00:52:873 (2,3,4,5,6) - this looks way better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8303398 fixed
00:55:215 (2) - Distance snapping at 1.9x and put it between 1-3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8303421 fixed
00:55:361 (3,4) - Just me or it looks weird? fixed
00:55:654 (4,1,2,3,1) - it's easy to miss 1-2, something like this would be better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8303435 fixed
00:58:288 (1) - ctrl+h and torn it back where it was fixed
01:04:581 (1) - Make it look more direct to 2 fixed?
01:05:166 (3) - Between 2-4 with distance snapping of 1.4x fixed
01:05:459 (5) - Too far, put it on top of 4 fixed
01:15:995 (2) - Put in on top of 1 and change the shapefixed
01:19:215 (3) - ctrl+h and put it closer to 2 fixed
01:19:654 - Hitcircle here fixed
01:19:800 (4) - Looks better with a spike to the left fixed?
01:22:288 (5) - Non reverse, and add a long slider on the previous slider end, adn end it 01:22:873 fixed?
01:24:044 (1) - shorter and add a hit on 01:24:922 fixed
01:25:507 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - Make a perfect triange with this fixed
01:25:946 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - "" ↑↑↑ "" fixed
01:27:995 (2) - Litle off distance, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8303563 this is better fixed
01:30:776 (8) - Make it have the same curve as 7 and ctr+j back in to place fixed
01:32:678 - Hit here fixed
01:37:507 - ↑"" fixed
01:41:166 (6) - Reverse fixed
01:41:605 (1) - Closer to the new slider end fixed
01:47:166 (4) - Make the end fit the 2 fixed
01:49:507 (5) - Start new combo here and put it on top of the "2" fixed
01:50:385 (1,2,3,4) - Make them follow better the 5 curve fixed
01:53:312 (1) - it's one beat longer than what it should fixed
02:02:678 (5) - Make it more like and S form fixed?
02:05:459 (2) - Add a hit circle on top of 3 fixed
02:11:312 - Hit fixed
02:13:654 - Hit fixed
02:19:068 (1) - Make it longer and non reverse fixed
02:21:117 (1) - add a Hit and start spinn on the blue line fixed
02:23:751 (1) - Not "on beat" fixed?
02:27:117 - Hit fixed
02:45:995 (4,5,6) - Don't make it a stack fixed
02:50:678 (7) - one beat longer and put 1 on top of it fixed
02:58:288 (4) - Closer to 3 and add a note on 02:58:142 on top of it fixed
03:00:044 (3) - put 4 Kick sliders from 044 to 922 put 3 instead of 4
03:04:142 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - This looks super weird fixed?
03:29:898 (3) - 1 reverse less and add a hit at the end fixed
03:36:190 - Hit fixed
04:13:654 - Hit fixed
04:41:898 - Hit fixed
04:45:410 (3,4) - Slider fixed
04:48:922 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Really weird shapes and overlap with low AR (for EZ mod) tried my best too make it look more appealing and less overlapping
05:13:068 - Hit fixed
05:28:727 (1) - Split it in half fixed
05:30:776 (5) - 1 kick less and add a Hit with Finish fixed
05:59:166 (3) - and it at 898 and add a Hit at 044 fixed
06:05:312 (2,3,4) - Perfect triangle fixed
06:49:873 - Breake time fixed
06:53:312 (1) - Put it on top of 3 fixed
07:46:190 (2,3,4) - Not snaped and add a Hit on 727 fixed
08:06:483 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ALL of this looks way too simple for what you are capeable of fixed?
08:22:873 (1) - Slpit in 2 fixed
08:44:824 (1,2,3) - I think they are starting on teh wrong beat and split 1 fixed?
08:46:873 (1) - Too slow? or just me?
08:53:605 - End with a spinn taht ends here fixed
Topic Starter
Peruro

nitsuga5124 wrote:

SPOILER
00:02:522 (1,3) - can you amke this 2 have teh same angle? fixed?
00:53:898 (6,1) - this 2 have more space than 1,2,3 fixed?
01:02:678 (3) - Move it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8310626 fixed
01:04:873 (2) - ctrl+shift+r -15 fixed
01:18:483 - Hit fixed
01:20:605 - Feels empty, and the slow part has already ended fixed?
01:29:459 - Hit fixed
01:42:337 - "" fixed
01:52:581 - "" fixed
02:21:190 (1) - end it at 23:751
02:24:922 (3) - Give it the same look as 4 fixed?
02:31:946 (1,2) - Slider fixed
02:32:532 - Hit fixed
02:35:605 - slider and repalce 1 with the slider end fixed
02:47:751 (3) - Make it fit better the shape of 5 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8310681 fixed
03:00:629 (5) - One shorter and add a hit fixed
03:07:946 (1) - make it look the same as 2 fixed
03:11:020 - Hit fixed
03:23:459 (4,1,2,3) - Perfect triangle with teh 4 on the middle, also, make 3 and 2 have the same angle but simetrical and 1 a straight line fixed
03:26:971 (4) - this sound starts at 824 fixed
04:05:020 (3) - make this follow the 7 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8310723https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8310739 fixed
04:09:410 (3) - short fixed
04:28:727 (3) - make it look like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8310755 and fix the spacing on the next notes fixed
05:25:215 (3,5) - make 5 match the slider end of 3 fixed
05:57:410 (1,2) - Not snaped lol fixed
07:46:873 (1) - one shorter and ad a hit at the end with Clap fixed
08:01:800 (7) - sldier till 093 or 166 fixed
08:22:727 - Hit fixed
08:24:922 - "" fixed
08:39:117 - Hit fixed
08:44:971 (3) - Split fixed
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Aelin
Title Nazi post incoming. The two ranked versions of this song are "Uta" not "uta" just a note, if you want to correct this or something, especially if you end up going towards ranking. Really well mapped, gl with getting loved or ranked!
Aelin
Okay, I actually modded your map.

Mods
00:29:988 (3) - Set the hitsound volume for this slider to 5%, as this will bring out the instrumental. Even with it at 10%, the ending sound of this part of the song feels overpowered.
00:35:751 (1) - Shorten this slider, curve it, and add a reverse arrow. It should end up being a short curve slider, hopefully. As well as this, set your hitsound volume to 50% at 00:35:824, and then back to 100% at 00:35:971
03:11:751 (4) - Move this slide to X: 240, Y: 96, and the second node to X: 208, Y: 48
03:55:654 (2) - Move your second node to X: 256, Y: 128
04:40:142 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - - I feel like these circles move in a steeper incline of sorts, and in general, it does not go very well with the rest of the map. Move note number two directly between 1 and 3 (X: 270, Y: 190), and move 4 and 5 to X: 288, Y: 288, and 5 to X: 312, Y: 328 respectively. Move the following slider to X: 392, Y: 328, or perhaps further along the X line, if you feel it'd fit better than this adjustment.
05:09:995 (1) - Nice slider! However, the velocity on it is low, and does not fit the guitar speed. Set it to 0.85x instead! You will have to make some adjustments though, to make the slider its full length again
05:18:190 (5,1,1,2) - Remove the second 1 combo. 1,1,2 should look like 1,2,3. You should also add some spacing between these. Doesn't have to be much.
08:24:337 (2) - Move to X: 392, Y: 232, and move your second node to X: 420, Y: 272]

That's all I have!
Topic Starter
Peruro

Aelin wrote:

Okay, I actually modded your map.

Mods
00:29:988 (3) - Set the hitsound volume for this slider to 5%, as this will bring out the instrumental. Even with it at 10%, the ending sound of this part of the song feels overpowered. fixed
00:35:751 (1) - Shorten this slider, curve it, and add a reverse arrow. It should end up being a short curve slider, hopefully. As well as this, set your hitsound volume to 50% at 00:35:824, and then back to 100% at 00:35:971 fixed
03:11:751 (4) - Move this slide to X: 240, Y: 96, and the second node to X: 208, Y: 48 fixed
03:55:654 (2) - Move your second node to X: 256, Y: 128 fixed
04:40:142 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - - I feel like these circles move in a steeper incline of sorts, and in general, it does not go very well with the rest of the map. Move note number two directly between 1 and 3 (X: 270, Y: 190), and move 4 and 5 to X: 288, Y: 288, and 5 to X: 312, Y: 328 respectively. Move the following slider to X: 392, Y: 328, or perhaps further along the X line, if you feel it'd fit better than this adjustment. fixed
05:09:995 (1) - Nice slider! However, the velocity on it is low, and does not fit the guitar speed. Set it to 0.85x instead! You will have to make some adjustments though, to make the slider its full length again fixed
05:18:190 (5,1,1,2) - Remove the second 1 combo. 1,1,2 should look like 1,2,3. You should also add some spacing between these. Doesn't have to be much. fixed
08:24:337 (2) - Move to X: 392, Y: 232, and move your second node to X: 420, Y: 272] fixed

That's all I have!
Smradupan
Awesome map! I will try to be as constructive as I can, but I have literally 0 experience with modding, so expect mostly some personal pet peeves :D (Also I apologize in advance for some potential grammar errors :) )

1:53:312 , 1:57:995 Please fix those slider-ends...
02:02:678 Again, if it´s your intention to make it look like that, fine, but if not I would suggest fixing that slider.
02:29:093 Move this note one tick forward, (basically do what you have done with the previous triple) and do the same with the slider. If you remove the note at 02:29:751 it will work just fine.
02:39:995 There is no sound for this note (I don´t mean a hitsound, it´s just that I don´t feel like it´s supposed to be there)
04:58:215 same as ↑ , a double would do just fine here, this occurs several times after this (05:05:239 for example), I am simplay not a fan of those middle blue tick notes
07:11:337 I would strongly prefer if you mapped it all the way to the break and moved the spinner there, it would also make the break feel shorter.
08:29:751 - This spinner feels kinda out of place, since the instrumentals are still going without a change.

That´s about it, I would love to see this ranked some day, good luck getting it there!
Topic Starter
Peruro

sdolnicek wrote:

Awesome map! I will try to be as constructive as I can, but I have literally 0 experience with modding, so expect mostly some personal pet peeves :D (Also I apologize in advance for some potential grammar errors :) )

1:53:312 , 1:57:995 Please fix those slider-ends... fixed
02:02:678 Again, if it´s your intention to make it look like that, fine, but if not I would suggest fixing that slider. fixed?
02:29:093 Move this note one tick forward, (basically do what you have done with the previous triple) and do the same with the slider. If you remove the note at 02:29:751 it will work just fine. fixed?
02:39:995 There is no sound for this note (I don´t mean a hitsound, it´s just that I don´t feel like it´s supposed to be there) fixed
04:58:215 same as ↑ , a double would do just fine here, this occurs several times after this (05:05:239 for example), I am simplay not a fan of those middle blue tick notes remapped the entire part to remove the weird sliders since i now realise they were slitely of beat(i think)
07:11:337 I would strongly prefer if you mapped it all the way to the break and moved the spinner there, it would also make the break feel shorter. fixed
08:29:751 - This spinner feels kinda out of place, since the instrumentals are still going without a change. fixed

That´s about it, I would love to see this ranked some day, good luck getting it there!
thx for the mod, everything helps :)
Smradupan
01:15:995 and 01:17:020 and 01:53:312 and 02:02:678 - Those sliders feel really SLOW while playing....
02:29:239 + 07:32:312 - remove those circles please

Overall I really like how you remapped the parts we discussed earlier.
Topic Starter
Peruro

sdolnicek wrote:

01:15:995 and 01:17:020 and 01:53:312 and 02:02:678 - Those sliders feel really SLOW while playing.... fixed?
02:29:239 + 07:32:312 - remove those circles please fixed
thx again :)
Smradupan
Np, but seriously, you should consider turning this to modding V2, most of mappers don´t mod modding V1 at all...
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