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HoneyWorks meets TrySail - Senpai. [MOVIE Ver.]

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0109-
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0109-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, August 08, 2017 at 10:01:17 PM

Artist: HoneyWorks meets TrySail
Title: Senpai. [MOVIE Ver.]
Source: 好きになるその瞬間を。～告白実行委員会～
Tags: suki ni naru sono shunkan wo kokuhaku jikkou iinkai natsukawa shiina asakura momo amamiya sora hokichi gaia astarte
BPM: 162
Filesize: 9120kb
Play Time: 01:40
Difficulties Available:
  1. Astarte's Normal (2.19 stars, 181 notes)
  2. Collab Hard (3.31 stars, 271 notes)
  3. Easy (1.55 stars, 102 notes)
  4. Insane (4.44 stars, 332 notes)
  5. Notice me! (4.93 stars, 371 notes)
Download: HoneyWorks meets TrySail - Senpai. [MOVIE Ver.]
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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need mods :)
No pp here, please skip this map if you're looking for some pp xdd

Hokichi's Special Thanks


  1. ezek for editing the bg for me
  2. GhostFY for the help with the wave script
  3. Damnae for storybrew
normal by astarte
hard by hokichi (00:00:000 – 00:48:967) - gaia (00:48:967 – 1:40:835)
sb: Hokichi <3
Thanks yamicchi, gaia for hitsounding things <3
Last edited by 0109- , edited 24 times in total.
Hokichi
825 posts
Joined June 2015
Hokichi

0109- wrote:

GD?
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Hikan
430 posts
Joined February 2016
Hikan
diff
00:03:768 (1,2) - 00:00:805 (1,2) - inconsi-
00:03:768 (1,2,3) - bend lại cho đẹp
00:08:585 (2,3) - symmetri-
00:12:290 (6,7) - thử để 2 cái này nằm ngang để nó comfortable hơn https://puu.sh/wkIfm/8f796c2985.png
00:13:401 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:16:364 (1,2,3,4,5) - inconsist-
00:24:700 (2,1) - blanke-
00:28:961 (3,5,1) - có thể nào làm cho 2 cái blanket này bằng nhau để nó đẹp hơn k
00:36:556 (5) - tại vì kick ở đây, thử cho 00:36:926 (1,2) - cái này kick luôn
00:46:003 (1,2,3,1) - flow ở đây có hơi đơn giản quá, với lại ở đây 00:46:188 - có tiếng nên thử sửa chút
01:00:452 (6) - ctrl g? Để cho nó hợp vs 2 cái slider trước đó 00:59:155 (1,2) - , đồng thời emphasis 1 hơn là linear flow
01:00:823 (1,2) - symmetric
01:18:050 (5) - nc? stream dài
01:21:570 (1,2) - 01:18:606 (1) - inconsistent, để 2 circle sau stream không tạo thêm độ khó gì cả, đã chứng minh qua wata shinose kai
01:29:535 (5,6,7) - stack clearer
01:30:276 (10) - để đâu đó 370 350 để hợp vs slider 1
01:30:461 (1,3) - inconsistent shape man
01:32:684 (1,2) - blan-
01:34:722 (1,2) - blanket
01:38:797 (1,1) - blanket. 01:39:353 (1) - cái này đơn giản quá không đẹp
dif
00:19:884 (3,4) - blanket
00:26:738 (1) - lấy cái này rotate -120 độ rồi để lên 2? như vậy sẽ cân đối hơn
00:28:220 (1) - thử như vầy https://puu.sh/wkJjd/a37135541b.png , 00:28:220 (1,3) - như vậy nó symmetric hơn
00:31:184 (1,2) - ukr
01:39:353 - cho click một cái đi rồi hẵng spin
map dơ vl gl
0109-
337 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
0109-

Hikan wrote:

diff
00:03:768 (1,2) - 00:00:805 (1,2) - inconsi- đoạn này sao phải consistent? vocal không giống nhau đến thế
00:03:768 (1,2,3) - bend lại cho đẹp tức là phải bend ra sao :|
00:08:585 (2,3) - symmetri- dạ
00:12:290 (6,7) - thử để 2 cái này nằm ngang để nó comfortable hơn https://puu.sh/wkIfm/8f796c2985.png đoạn jump build-up này nhạc nó cùng một âm chứ không có biến đối gì khác mà tự nhiên đặt ngang ra như thế ;)
00:13:401 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:16:364 (1,2,3,4,5) - inconsist- tại đoạn này mở đầu nên muốn làm rhythm thoáng ra 1 chút rồi mới dày lên =)), để đợi thêm chút ý kiến xem nhưng khả năng cao phải sửa :)
00:24:700 (2,1) - blanke- để đó cho nó có flow thôi ko định blanket :)
00:28:961 (3,5,1) - có thể nào làm cho 2 cái blanket này bằng nhau để nó đẹp hơn k ok
00:36:556 (5) - tại vì kick ở đây, thử cho 00:36:926 (1,2) - cái này kick luôn vậy trông cũng ngon nhưng cái kick ở đây đang muốn nhấn cái baka, với lại ko biết nên để cái kick nữa ở đâu :|
00:46:003 (1,2,3,1) - flow ở đây có hơi đơn giản quá, với lại ở đây 00:46:188 - có tiếng nên thử sửa chút đã remap lại đoạn này chút
01:00:452 (6) - ctrl g? Để cho nó hợp vs 2 cái slider trước đó 00:59:155 (1,2) - , đồng thời emphasis 1 hơn là linear flow oki trông ổn ạ
01:00:823 (1,2) - symmetric ok
01:18:050 (5) - nc? stream dài không cần thiết lắm vì cũng không ảnh hưởng nhiều
01:21:570 (1,2) - 01:18:606 (1) - inconsistent, để 2 circle sau stream không tạo thêm độ khó gì cả, đã chứng minh qua wata shinose kai dạ
01:29:535 (5,6,7) - stack clearer rõ rồi mà
01:30:276 (10) - để đâu đó 370 350 để hợp vs slider 1 dạ
01:30:461 (1,3) - inconsistent shape man cần j phải consistent
01:32:684 (1,2) - blan- tek
01:34:722 (1,2) - blanket tưởng vậy ổn rồi
01:38:797 (1,1) - blanket. 01:39:353 (1) - cái này đơn giản quá không đẹp fk everything i go generic
dif
00:19:884 (3,4) - blanket dạ
00:26:738 (1) - lấy cái này rotate -120 độ rồi để lên 2? như vậy sẽ cân đối hơn không hiểu lắm @@
00:28:220 (1) - thử như vầy https://puu.sh/wkJjd/a37135541b.png , 00:28:220 (1,3) - như vậy nó symmetric hơn sao cần phải làm cho đối xứng?
00:31:184 (1,2) - ukr dạ :(
01:39:353 - cho click một cái đi rồi hẵng spin không cần thiết lắm, để như vầy cho spin đỡ khó hơn chút
map dơ vl gl speedmap ạ
<3 <3
LMT
535 posts
Joined October 2015
LMT
m4m deal, mod dis https://osu.ppy.sh/s/555454
chọn tầm 2 diff là được, top diff, bouyaaa với another ko cần thiết phải mod nhưng mod được thì tốt


  • [top diff]
  1. 00:03:398 (4) - kiểu đang follow vocals xong rồi tự dưng thêm cái slider này thấy loãng quá. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8387551 . Mấy chỗ sau cũng thế
  2. 00:03:768 (1) - sao k map thành circle + slider luôn? rõ giai điệu hơn.
  3. 00:09:696 (1,2,3,4,5) - cái này đáng ra phải làm nổi bật hơn, thế này chẳng khác gì mấy chỗ khác. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8387696 ví dụ thôi
  4. 00:17:291 (4) - stack chỗ nào khác đẹp hơn đc ko -_-
  5. 00:25:256 (1,2) - sao k theo vocals?
  6. 00:28:961 (3,4,5) - theo gì vậy? guitar thì đánh đều 1/2 rồi k đáng để emphasise.
  7. 00:37:852 (5) - 2 circle? spacing nhỏ thôi để tách biệt với (4)
  8. 01:33:425 (1,2,3,4,5) - hòa âm đặc biệt, flow khác chút đc k ? thử ctrl+g (2)

    :c sao map nhạt thế, kiểu thấy flow êm quá, nên dùng movement để nhấn mạnh các chỗ cần nhấn trong bài nhiều hơn.

    [insnae]
  9. 00:06:362 (4) - uh kiểu giống top diff. Insane thì càng nên để density thấp hơn. Cái đống piano đằng sau đánh đều 1/2 rồi, ko cần phải emphasise.
  10. 00:28:220 (1) - sao chỗ này tự dưng bẻ flow lol, ctrl+g?
  11. 01:23:422 (2,4) - che mất reverse arrow là unrankable nha, 01:23:607 (3,4) - ctrl+g mỗi cái là ok.

    [collab hard]
    idk which part is hoki's and which is gaia's so I hope it's not too inconvenient figuring out which is whose.
  12. 00:16:179 (6,2) - is this supposed to be a blanket? Please fix if that's the case.
  13. 00:21:366 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - note density is too high all of a sudden, (5,6) being a 1/2 slider makes more sense considering the note on (6) is pretty weak.
  14. 00:50:819 (2,3,4) - confusing spacing in a Hard imo and i'm not sure what you're trying to emphasise either.
  15. 01:02:119 (4,5,1) - triple in a calm section is not reflective of the song imo, also the 1/4 note kinda dilutes the emphasis on the vocals that the previous objects have built.
  16. 00:24:330 (4) - yo i think 1/4 kickslider is not allowed for a Hard. Also the violin is actually 1/6 (which is dumb to follow anyway) not 1/4 so i'd rather just map a 1/2 circle here.
  17. 00:43:965 (2,1) - make it more aesthetically consistent with overlaps like 00:36:000 (3,1) - ? That looks awfully odd considering other overlap choices.
  18. 00:51:190 (4,5) - some more equal spacing? spacing looks a little random here.

    [astarte]
  19. 00:12:290 (6,1) - dùng stack cho 2/1 gap rồi thì ở đây không nên dùng stack, đặc biệt là khi người mới chơi read approach circle chưa tốt lắm
  20. 01:21:199 (6) - nên để circle -> 1/1 gap hơn tại vì thế này làm loãng mất emphasis của cái 1/2 slider sau đó cho vocal
    nice diff

    [easy]
  21. cắt bớt rhythm ra, người mới chơi toàn kiểu đứt 1 cái là ko biết theo rhythm sau như thế nào mà ông đánh đều cả dãy thế này. Dùng nhiều 2/1 gap hơn nữa. Với cả slider với người mới chơi thực sự là khó theo nên dùng slider để thay cho gap là không nên.
  22. 01:03:786 (1) - đang sợ hơi ngắn cho Easy, thường là phải 1 measure. Hỏi mấy ông bn xem thế này đủ dài chưa
  23. 01:18:235 (4) - để sang tick đỏ? tick này nghe lệch quá
  24. 01:30:091 (4) - ^

    quan trọng nhất là cắt bớt rhythm, gap 2/1 nhiều hơn thì có nhiều cách để xử lí 3/2 rhythm hơn, mấy cái gap 3/2 xong rồi 1/1 lẫn lộn linh tinh khó bắt cho ng mới chơi lắm.
Hokichi
825 posts
Joined June 2015
Hokichi

LMT wrote:

[collab hard]

  • idk which part is hoki's and which is gaia's so I hope it's not too inconvenient figuring out which is whose.
  1. 00:16:179 (6,2) - is this supposed to be a blanket? Please fix if that's the case. // Yes, sure. At first, I thought it was a good blanket lol
  2. 00:21:366 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - note density is too high all of a sudden, (5,6) being a 1/2 slider makes more sense considering the note on (6) is pretty weak. // Like this perharps?
  3. 00:24:330 (4) - yo i think 1/4 kickslider is not allowed for a Hard. Also the violin is actually 1/6 (which is dumb to follow anyway) not 1/4 so i'd rather just map a 1/2 circle here. // Works for me. Fixed
  4. 00:43:965 (2,1) - make it more aesthetically consistent with overlaps like 00:36:000 (3,1) - ? That looks awfully odd considering other overlap choices. // Ok I tried my best to center 00:43:965 (2) - lul
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TitleUnicode:Senpai. [MOVIE Ver.]
Artist:HoneyWorks meets TrySail
ArtistUnicode:HoneyWorks meets TrySail
Creator:0109-
Version:Collab Hard
Source:好きになるその瞬間を。～告白実行委員会～
Tags:suki ni naru sono shunkan wo kokuhaku jikkou iinkai natsukawa shiina asakura momo amamiya sora
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Hikan
430 posts
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Hikan

LMT wrote:

:c sao map nhạt thế
0109-
337 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
0109-

LMT wrote:

m4m deal, mod dis https://osu.ppy.sh/s/555454
chọn tầm 2 diff là được, top diff, bouyaaa với another ko cần thiết phải mod nhưng mod được thì tốt


  • [top diff]
  1. 00:03:398 (4) - kiểu đang follow vocals xong rồi tự dưng thêm cái slider này thấy loãng quá. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8387551 . Mấy chỗ sau cũng thế Vậy thì có sao, hết vocal rồi có tiếng piano nổi vậy thì map theo thôi, chứ để không đó cảm giác không tốt
  2. 00:03:768 (1) - sao k map thành circle + slider luôn? rõ giai điệu hơn. ok ạ
  3. 00:09:696 (1,2,3,4,5) - cái này đáng ra phải làm nổi bật hơn, thế này chẳng khác gì mấy chỗ khác. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8387696 ví dụ thôi dạ
  4. 00:17:291 (4) - stack chỗ nào khác đẹp hơn đc ko -_- đâu nhất thiết phải stack :) cái tam giác 00:17:291 (4,1,3) - trông cũng đc mà
  5. 00:25:256 (1,2) - sao k theo vocals? ok ạ
  6. 00:28:961 (3,4,5) - theo gì vậy? guitar thì đánh đều 1/2 rồi k đáng để emphasise. đâu phải gọi gì là emphasise, spacing giữa 2 cái 00:28:590 (2,3) - vẫn nhỏ còn đến 00:29:146 (4) - là tiếp tục follow vocal nên để spacing ra hơn chút thôi
  7. 00:37:852 (5) - 2 circle? spacing nhỏ thôi để tách biệt với (4) dạ
  8. 01:33:425 (1,2,3,4,5) - hòa âm đặc biệt, flow khác chút đc k ? thử ctrl+g (2) sửa lại linh tinh chút rồi ạ

    :c sao map nhạt thế, kiểu thấy flow êm quá, nên dùng movement để nhấn mạnh các chỗ cần nhấn trong bài nhiều hơn. dạ :(

    [insnae]
  9. 00:06:362 (4) - uh kiểu giống top diff. Insane thì càng nên để density thấp hơn. Cái đống piano đằng sau đánh đều 1/2 rồi, ko cần phải emphasise. pitch thay đổi, 2 cái 00:05:621 (2,3) - piano nâng lên cao dần, còn cái này 00:06:362 (4) - tiếng piano hạ xuống nên spacing khác chút có sao đâu, ko ảnh hưởng nhiều khi chơi lắm
  10. 00:28:220 (1) - sao chỗ này tự dưng bẻ flow lol, ctrl+g? vocal hạ hẳn xuống nên bẻ xuống chút
  11. 01:23:422 (2,4) - che mất reverse arrow là unrankable nha, 01:23:607 (3,4) - ctrl+g mỗi cái là ok. đã nhích cái 4 ra chút ạ

    [easy]
  12. cắt bớt rhythm ra, người mới chơi toàn kiểu đứt 1 cái là ko biết theo rhythm sau như thế nào mà ông đánh đều cả dãy thế này. Dùng nhiều 2/1 gap hơn nữa. Với cả slider với người mới chơi thực sự là khó theo nên dùng slider để thay cho gap là không nên. đã remap đoạn đầu chút giảm instensity
  13. 01:03:786 (1) - đang sợ hơi ngắn cho Easy, thường là phải 1 measure. Hỏi mấy ông bn xem thế này đủ dài chưa sau break mà nên ổn thôi
  14. 01:18:235 (4) - để sang tick đỏ? tick này nghe lệch quá dạ
  15. 01:30:091 (4) - ^ <^>

    quan trọng nhất là cắt bớt rhythm, gap 2/1 nhiều hơn thì có nhiều cách để xử lí 3/2 rhythm hơn, mấy cái gap 3/2 xong rồi 1/1 lẫn lộn linh tinh khó bắt cho ng mới chơi lắm.
cảm ơn ạ :)
Astarte
303 posts
Joined December 2014
Astarte

LMT wrote:

m4m deal, mod dis https://osu.ppy.sh/s/555454
chọn tầm 2 diff là được, top diff, bouyaaa với another ko cần thiết phải mod nhưng mod được thì tốt
[astarte]
  1. 00:12:290 (6,1) - dùng stack cho 2/1 gap rồi thì ở đây không nên dùng stack, đặc biệt là khi người mới chơi read approach circle chưa tốt lắm ko sao. gap khá xa + ds cao nen chả có chỗ nào để. mà diff nay định là khó hơn normal bình thường cho spread đẹp
  2. 01:21:199 (6) - nên để circle -> 1/1 gap hơn tại vì thế này làm loãng mất emphasis của cái 1/2 slider sau đó cho vocal có tính trước lúc map và cũng thử rồi nhưng thấy ko hợp lắm tại khúc này dense thì hay hơn (khó hơn normal chút). Nếu ko dc thì sẽ consider 2 circle vô cài slider sau. dù gì thì cũng chỉ là normal nên mấy cái này chắc ko quan trọng mấy
nice diff
tks
Seaweed
359 posts
Joined November 2014
Seaweed
hi hokichi
nm

Check with ranking criteria - adding stuff like [Movie Ver.] is not allowed anymore, put it in tags instead

[notice me]
00:24:330 (3) - i would put this at a sharper angle because it's smoother to play. maybe have a blanket with 00:24:700 (2,3,4,5,6) -

[Insane]
00:00:805 (1,2) - make spacing same as 00:01:360 (2,3) -
00:04:509 (3,1) - these two are visibly further apart than 00:03:954 (2,3) - I think it looks nicer if they had same spacing
00:58:229 (3,4) - looks better if you ctrl j + ctrl g 00:57:859 (1,2) - instead
0109-
337 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
0109-

Seaweed wrote:

hi hokichi
nm

Check with ranking criteria - adding stuff like [Movie Ver.] is not allowed anymore, put it in tags instead im not alter-ing the title, as the official CD wrote

[notice me]
00:24:330 (3) - i would put this at a sharper angle because it's smoother to play. maybe have a blanket with 00:24:700 (2,3,4,5,6) - looks good but current pattern is fine

[Insane]
00:00:805 (1,2) - make spacing same as 00:01:360 (2,3) - why?
00:04:509 (3,1) - these two are visibly further apart than 00:03:954 (2,3) - I think it looks nicer if they had same spacing it needs to be emphasized since the pitch went up
00:58:229 (3,4) - looks better if you ctrl j + ctrl g 00:57:859 (1,2) - instead lol it looks worse :(
Thanks for modding :)
-NanoRIPE-
2,018 posts
Joined October 2013
-NanoRIPE-
m4m i guess

easy
nice

normal
01:06:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - at least gave player a space minimum 1/2 rhythm cuz usually player who play normal cant handle a dense rhythm,like this rhythm.my suggestion change 1/2 slider at 01:09:344 (6) - and 01:12:308 - into a circle for give player a space
01:18:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

hard
00:11:549 (2,3) - the flow is kinda rough for me,cuz the movement isnt represent the drum well.im prefer you follow ds here and make a small jump at 00:11:919 (3,4) - cuz i feel the drum and guitar quite strong here.example : https://prnt.sc/fpzpqc
00:21:366 (2) - it looks like you tried emphasised the drum here but at the same it feels odd if you didnt emphasised the guitar here cuz the guitar's sound more stronger here.so my suggestion is put 2 circles here 00:21:366 - and then a 1/1 slider on the white tick 00:21:551 -
00:24:515 (5,6,7,8,9) - the issue same as above,its about the way you emphasis the music.so maybe 1/2 slider here 00:24:515 - for guitar and then 1/4 reverse slider at 00:24:793 - for the drum?
00:46:559 (2,1) - ugly overlap actually :/.the overlap is not structured well.just stack the tail on both of that slider instead
00:48:041 (3) - theres no drum sound that have to emphasis with these 1/4 reverse slider,so just use 1/2 slider instead
00:58:414 - if i were you i'd make clickable here for represent the vocal here and on the next tick
01:16:198 (3) - move this slider a bit down (make the jump more bigger) for represent the drum and vocal better

insane
00:21:366 (8) - same as hard
00:27:108 (2) - make this slider a bit farther and give more space for better pattern
01:05:639 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the jump you used here is quite represent the drum here but the flow is kinda meh for me.especially the linear flow on circle (4,5,6) - is not a bit ugly and rough imo,i feel uncomfortable on gameplay.try my pattern if you dont mind : https://prnt.sc/fq034u
01:22:866 (6,1) - just make it closer a lil bit,cuz these jump more bigger if you compared with 01:18:606 (1,2) - that have strong cymbal and vocal on it
01:34:166 (3,4,5) - i think the flow could be polished more (this flow is kinda old and unattractive imo).try this flow instead : http://prntscr.com/fq06kp

notice meh
00:36:000 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the current pattern is a bit weird for me,i mean why you have to ctrl g this slider 00:36:556 (5) - ? and make a jump on it. i know you tried to emphasised the lyric "baka" with those jump but it makes a big weird jump between (5,6) - if you testplay it,you can feel the awkwardness on those jump.so at first you have to make slider object (5,6) - closer cuz the rhythm is 1/4 rhythm and then make a jump on object (6,1) - for the drum.my suggestion : https://prnt.sc/fq0bze

thats all from me
sorry for my broken english xd (now im in training to mod with explanation)
GL!
if you were not satisfied with my mod you can cancelled my m4m
Astarte
303 posts
Joined December 2014
Astarte

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

m4m i guess

normal
01:06:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - at least gave player a space minimum 1/2 rhythm cuz usually player who play normal cant handle a dense rhythm,like this rhythm.my suggestion change 1/2 slider at 01:09:344 (6) - and 01:12:308 - into a circle for give player a space
01:18:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
no diff is intentionally dense in the kiai. makes a nice contrast between intense kiai and calmer parts. true dat its not easy which is why i mainly use sliders and a rly high ds to get rid of overlaps. the whole point, after all, is to make the spread even, as typical normals only get about 1.9* for this song

if the host want to rename it advanced its up to him, otherwise no changes from me
tks for mod
Underforest
5,895 posts
Joined July 2015
Underforest
completing an m4m req you did time ago, modding back~
short mod

[General]
BPM is not 161.95, correct is 162 plus offset +10

[Easy]
00:10:993 (1) - why map with a reverse? besides drums, there's no notable beat
00:47:300 (1) - there's absolutely no need for NC
01:03:786 (1) - clap?

[Astarte's Normal]
leaving behind the high spacing, the diff is pretty good, good job

[Collab Hard]
00:24:886 (6,7,8,9) - can't you just do a reversing slider? an stream is pretty intense for a hard nor needed
00:31:091 - skipping this beat is not a good idea
01:25:830 (1,3) - 01:26:942 (4,1) - try to avoid overlaps like this

[Insane]
00:13:771 (2,3) - this has no emphasis and its flow is pretty bad

[Notice me!]
00:36:185 (3,5) - no emphasis, might confuse players
01:38:427 - 01:39:353 - between these parts are beats that you can convert them to stream, not mapping them would be a waste

this map still needs stuff to be polished before it can be ranked, but is not that bad
good luck~
0109-
337 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
0109-
holy shit i got the blue screen error after replying to all of these oh gosh :(
im so sorry if you really need my explanation i'll try to do it again :(((

Thanks for modding :)
Affirmation
2,543 posts
Joined March 2015
Affirmation
Q

[Notice me]
00:00:815 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - set consistent DS
00:11:555 (2) - 00:13:037 (3) - I suggest you add NC for divide 00:11:555 (2,3,1,2,1,2) -
00:47:299 (1,2,3,4,5) - why don't you make a star(pentagon) pattern for better structure?
00:51:559 (4) - I don't know why you added SV here, you didn't added at other parts.
01:15:633 (1,2) - because of this pattern, 01:16:188 (1,2) - can be hard to read, my suggestion is adding NC on 01:16:559 (2) -

GL
0109-
337 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
0109-

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[Notice me]
00:00:815 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - set consistent DS they are different
00:11:555 (2) - 00:13:037 (3) - I suggest you add NC for divide 00:11:555 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - ok
00:47:299 (1,2,3,4,5) - why don't you make a star(pentagon) pattern for better structure? adjusted a bit
00:51:559 (4) - I don't know why you added SV here, you didn't added at other parts. removed
01:15:633 (1,2) - because of this pattern, 01:16:188 (1,2) - can be hard to read, my suggestion is adding NC on 01:16:559 (2) - ok

GL
thank you :)
Yamicchi
1,175 posts
Joined May 2015
Yamicchi
Sempoi
[Insane]
• 00:01:370 (2,3,1) - intensity bằng nhau mà, spacing lại khác thì hơi kì nhỉ?
• 00:02:666 (2,3,4) - Pattern hơi dị :)) kiểu piano đang đi ngang ngang như kia, thì 00:03:037 (3,4) - trông đẹp rồi mà tự nhiên 00:02:666 (2) - lại nằm lỗi như thế :v
• 00:05:629 (2,3,4) - đây cũng cần chỉnh nè
• 00:06:740 (1,2) - spacing hơi lỗi tí xíu, cho tụi nó gần lại là đc
• 00:11:000 (1) - fck blanket
• 00:19:151 (8,9,1) - đặt cái 8 đẹp á, nhưng để spacing cho triple thì coi bộ hơi khó nhìn. Stack luôn được không nhỉ?
• 00:21:373 (8,1) - Spacing vầy sợ người ta nhìn lộn là 1/4 gap...
• 00:23:966 (1,2,3) - cái jump pattern cứ mỗi 3 cục là ông đổi chiều 1 lần, mà cái này đi tiếp chiều của 00:23:411 (1,2,3) - à? Kì vậy
• 00:36:559 (5,6,7) - stack luôn nhỉ? 2 cái triple thể hiện cùng loại drum mà khác spacing thì kh ổn
• 00:38:596 (1,2,3) - hmm, vocal đang 1/1, cái cuối cùng cao độ lại đi xuống, mà dùng tới 1 circle ở red tick và 1/2 slider? Thái thấy vậy hợp lý không?
• 00:43:040 (1,2) - spacing hơi nhỏ
• 01:13:225 (1) - không nhất thiết phải NC ở đây đâu
[Noticed]
• 00:11:555 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Jump pattern có vẻ không ổn... Nên dùng cái nào mà thấy rõ được cái intensity đi lên ấy, kiểu tăng spacing chẳng hạn, mà theo 1 concept nhất định, chứ đừng nhảy tròn tròn như này :v 00:12:296 (1) - giống như chỗ này thì spacing tự nhiên nhỏ lại tí này, nó không rõ ràng.
• 01:39:336 (1) - không cần spinner luôn hử

Ok diff cuối ổn, có insane cần chăm chút thêm thôi :3
0109-
337 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
0109-

Yamicchi wrote:

Sempoi
[Insane]
• 00:01:370 (2,3,1) - intensity bằng nhau mà, spacing lại khác thì hơi kì nhỉ? dạ
• 00:02:666 (2,3,4) - Pattern hơi dị :)) kiểu piano đang đi ngang ngang như kia, thì 00:03:037 (3,4) - trông đẹp rồi mà tự nhiên 00:02:666 (2) - lại nằm lỗi như thế :v oki
• 00:05:629 (2,3,4) - đây cũng cần chỉnh nè ^
• 00:06:740 (1,2) - spacing hơi lỗi tí xíu, cho tụi nó gần lại là đc ok
• 00:11:000 (1) - fck blanket ko định đặt blanket lắm nhưng đã fix ạ
• 00:19:151 (8,9,1) - đặt cái 8 đẹp á, nhưng để spacing cho triple thì coi bộ hơi khó nhìn. Stack luôn được không nhỉ? stack nhìn trông tệ lắm, với cả gameplay bấm cái biến mất luôn mà ko ảnh hưởng đâu
• 00:21:373 (8,1) - Spacing vầy sợ người ta nhìn lộn là 1/4 gap... insane ko ai nghĩ 1/4 lại xa thế đâu.. với cả (1) là slider nên dù bấm sớm chút cũng ko ảnh hưởng xd
• 00:23:966 (1,2,3) - cái jump pattern cứ mỗi 3 cục là ông đổi chiều 1 lần, mà cái này đi tiếp chiều của 00:23:411 (1,2,3) - à? Kì vậy jump thuận tay là đc rồi mà, đi xin testplay các thứ xem cũng ko vấn đề gì lắm
• 00:36:559 (5,6,7) - stack luôn nhỉ? 2 cái triple thể hiện cùng loại drum mà khác spacing thì kh ổn 1 cái có vocal 1 cái không có là khác nhau rồi, để 2 cái triple stack chơi cảm giác awkward thế nào ấy
• 00:38:596 (1,2,3) - hmm, vocal đang 1/1, cái cuối cùng cao độ lại đi xuống, mà dùng tới 1 circle ở red tick và 1/2 slider? Thái thấy vậy hợp lý không? tức là đang muốn thế nào :|, vậy trông ổn mà .. ở 00:39:522 (2) - cũng có tiếng drum nhẹ đồng thời emphasize cái (3) có tiếng gõ với vocal
• 00:43:040 (1,2) - spacing hơi nhỏ đã chỉnh lại chút
• 01:13:225 (1) - không nhất thiết phải NC ở đây đâu ây
[Noticed]
• 00:11:555 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Jump pattern có vẻ không ổn... Nên dùng cái nào mà thấy rõ được cái intensity đi lên ấy, kiểu tăng spacing chẳng hạn, mà theo 1 concept nhất định, chứ đừng nhảy tròn tròn như này :v 00:12:296 (1) - giống như chỗ này thì spacing tự nhiên nhỏ lại tí này, nó không rõ ràng. để xem thêm ý kiến đã, vì đoạn này cũng có đặt NC để chia intensity của từng đoạn rồi, với cả có movement cũng ko làm nó nổi bật quá
• 01:39:336 (1) - không cần spinner luôn hử ừ có khi để spinner trông cho đỡ ngu

Ok diff cuối ổn, có insane cần chăm chút thêm thôi :3
Cảm ơn ạ <3
YukiZura-
762 posts
Joined October 2015
YukiZura-
M4M :)

Hi~~ xD

Notice me!

00:02:666 (2,3) - better the blanket please
00:06:000 (3,4) - just a suggestion .. i think better do it like this

-because the map change from voice to intrument .. it fit perfectly in my opinion :)
00:13:037 (3) - idk what this slider represent .. if you follow the voice, you should start from here 00:12:852 - my suggestion i think you should delete that slider .. no need to be there
00:09:333 (4,2,4) - better balnket this all
00:48:410 - nc here?
01:05:077 (1,2) - blanket this would be nice
01:18:040 - nc here

Insane

00:13:037 (1) - same as i mention above
00:40:633 - feel like missing something.. yeah i know there is no voice but consistency must have.. this is just a suggestion .. why dont you turn this slider 00:40:077 (1) - into reverse slider and delete this one 00:40:077 (1) - ..

00:42:670 (4,1) - can be better blanket
00:43:040 (1,2) - same as i mention on this 00:40:077 (1) -
00:48:225 (4,3) - might wanna fix this
00:51:188 (1,2) - move this two a bit up ...
image

my map for m4m : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/627863

that all from me :)
actually what a coincidence .. i also been working on the same song but the longer one :o
this one https://osu.ppy.sh/s/634082 xD bit it still WIP
btw goodluck with your map
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