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- Consider Changing NC patterning to each 2 downbeats ? your whole difficulty has NC spam after 2 sliders which is not normal for a 1 star difficulty
- 00:54:535 (1,2) - Tbh i am already against the fact that these two are stacked . But i m not gonna complain about it since you used these across your whole diff .. But since its just 1.1 star map , Its very beginner friendly . dont do stuff like 00:54:535 (1,2) - and i mean , Dont just completely hide 00:56:935 (2) - under 00:54:535 (1) - because its gonna be more than a pain for newbies to recognize this as a slider. Reading that slider head would be easy but reading the slider body and slider end wont be
- Well overall this difficulty is just ok . i mean theres no difference between loud and faint parts at all! . Rhythm and structure both are exactly the same in kiai and non-kiai parts . Theres no difference between what you did through this whole difficulty but thats just the map . The song is not like that , there are more and less intense parts in the song. for instance 01:26:695 - this section is two times less intenser than the kiai that ends here but the map is exactly the same , with same 1/2 sliders again. It just gives no emphasis to different sections at all. you can use less complex rhythm in non-kiai parts than the rhythm u use in the kiai's to atleast distinguish between them.
- 00:02:215 (1) - Move it a little bit to the right so it aligns more properly to the previous slider
- 00:32:935 (1,3) - you should really avoid that overlap , Firstly it just doesnt look good and secondly , your notes mostly overlap when they are 1/3 but in this case 00:32:935 (1,2) - is 1/2 so players might have a hard time reading it
- 00:58:855 (2) - the slider currently ends at 00:59:335 - which is pretty bad as the vocal and snare on the slider end are more impactful in the song than the ones at slider start so executing that beat on slider end is pretty bad thats why end 00:58:855 (2) - on 1/3'rd tick and add a another 1/3 from 00:59:335 - that ends at 00:59:655 - and u will have to remove (3) . Or you can just use a circle at 00:59:335 - but that way rhythm would get a bit too complex , but that should be fine as well. upto you. Same for 01:02:695 (2) - and for the ones in the other kiai's
- 01:18:055 (2,3) - Not really a big deal , but you are kinda breaking your aesthetics consistency by not using the same shape for both of these like u did in the other patterns
- 02:51:015 (2) - dont really get the reason why its on 1/3 tick while the sound is on the red 1/4 tick
- 00:18:535 (3,4) - the overlap on these is pretty tiny compared to 00:17:575 (1,2) - . Not that its bad but the tiny overlaps like 00:18:535 (3,4) - are just ehh
- 00:28:135 (1) - Remove NC for consistency
- 00:40:855 - If you listen closely , the vocal is at 00:40:935 - not at the red tick . At the red tick theres the sound of the singer breathing in only , not the vocal. Even if the vocal sounds at 1/2 tick to you i would still prefer you use 1/3 rhythm to stay consistent with the rest and for better playability , since its a 1/3 rhythm ,suddenly switching to 1/2 just for one note is not right for gameplay ~ (thats what i learnt when i was ranking my dope :^))
- 00:54:535 (1,2) - oh god why do you really have to overlap 80% of the slider head with the previous slider's tail? atleast leave it 50% visible , same for 02:03:655 (1,2) -
- 03:50:695 (1,2) - PLS dont overlap their heads . ewwww
- 00:56:935 (3,4) - Same thing about tiny overlaps . overlap it a bit more , thats it
- 01:25:255 (2,3) - those 1/3 melody sounds are building up pretty fast here so simple 2/3 sliders dont really fit . better do 1/3 rhythm instead
- 02:04:615 (2,2) - Stack fail
- 02:50:695 (2) - same as in the above diff . End this on red tick . Doesnt really make much sense right now as theres no actual sound at 1/3 tick
- 03:12:295 (1,2,3,4) - Nah you should'nt end these on 5/6'th tick .. Ending them on 2/3'rd tick would be twice as good as the "lonely" vocals Actually end on the 2/3'rd tick so theres no need to extend the sliders further
- 03:20:935 (4,5) - These two shapes being the same triggers me. I mean you call totally tell the difference between the vocals that both sliders support right now . Theses a huge difference between them .like 03:20:935 (4) - has a normal vocal like its surroundings BUT 03:21:415 (5) - has twice as intense vocal on it where the whole song build ups really fast. thats why having same shapes for 03:20:935 (4,5) - doesnt emphasize the build-up which (5) supports right now , thats why you should try to use a more fancy and unique shape for it